Kimagure Orange Road"First Love"Volume 12, Story 3WB Volume 7, Story 5Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Thomas WyattLast revision : 08-20-95Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.eduNOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 87 (47) are only in the WBs!---------------------------------------------------p 87 (47)1[Exterior view of a school building.]2[A soccer ball flies overhead.]ball FX: _____ po--n3[A group of girls smile and wave.]title: First Love HATSU KOI first lovegirl 1: Kyaa! kya--_ _____ _______ Nice shot, Hayami-san! HAYAMI-san naisu shu--to!girl 2: ______ How wonderful!! suteki ne~~~~_!!4[Hayami stares off-panel.]5[View shifts to show Kurumi standing at a tree, watching.]6[A closer view of Kurumi.]girls: [off] ______ Kyaa! kya------------------------------------------------------p 88 (48)--TITLE PAGE[Hayami runs with the ball, turning his head to the side. Behind him is the tree and Kurumi, who watches him.]MAIN TITLE (at top) First Love HATSU KOI first loveSUB-TITLE (at bottom) Heart-Ache and Distress, MUNE no ITAmi mo SETSUnasa mo Watching You from a a-pain-in-the-chest and distressing/ and Distance... heart-rending anato o TOOku de mite-ru kara...... you (O) far-off/ are-watching that's-why in-the-distance---------------------------------------------------p 89 (49)1[Hikaru walks by and spots Kurumi.]2[Smiling, she leans in over Kurumi's shoulder.]Hikaru: What are you looking at? nani MIte n no? what watching3[Hikaru turns to see what Kurumi has been looking at.]Hikaru: Hm? n?4[Kurumi spins about and marches off.]Kurumi: Nothing... nan demo nai...5Hikaru: ? ?6[The soccer ball scores a direct hit against Hikaru's cheek.]ball/Hikaru's face FX: _____ zuban7[Grabbing the ball with one hand, she cocks it back in rage. The soccer boys flee for their lives.]Hikaru: Y-YOU DIPSHITS!! ba bakkyaro------_!!soccer player 1: Oh no-o-o! It's yabe----_ hikaru da----_!! Hikaru-u-u!!soccer player 2: Ru-u-un! nigero----_soccer player 3: Kyaa! kya~~_---------------------------------------------------p 90 (50)1[Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]Kurumi: [off] I'm ho-o-ome! tadaima~~~~~~_2[Manami turns to greet her sister with a merry smile.]Manami: ___ ___ ___ Tee! hee! hee! fu_ fu_ fu_ Good news, Kurumi-i-i!! kurumi~~~~ yorokobe--_!! rejoice/be-glad3[She lifts up a large cake topped with icing and strawberries.]Manami: Look! It's your favorite!! hora_! anta no DAIKOUBUTSU!! look! your favorite-(dish)4Kurumi: [looking unperturbed] .......... ..........5[She drops her gaze.]Kurumi: I... Don't want any. atashi... iranai I not-need6[Kyousuke and Manami stare back in nervous shock.]7Manami: I-is something wrong a anta doko-ka WARUi ja nai_?! with you?! you somewhere bad/sick[Kyousuke glares into the palms of his hands.]Kyousuke: J-just as I thought, is ya yahari SEIKI MATSU wa it nearing the end of the as-I-thought end-of-the century (T) century-y-y?! CHIKAkatta ka~~~~~~_?! was-soon/near (?)---------------------------------------------------p 91 (51)1[The portents are there. Manami and Kyousuke stare as a pack of rats scurry by their feet.]plague of rats FX: ____ ____ __ __ __ __ 2[They stare up through the window at a sky filled with birds.]flock of ravens FX: ____ ____ ____ basa basa basa3Kyousuke: [grimly] P-perhaps something... na nani-ka... Extremely evil is about to totetsumonaku WARUi koto ga happen... absurdly/extravagantly bad-thing (S) okoru no de wa... happening/occurring isKyousuke FX: _____ gokun4[Both smiling in mischief, Manami leans in towards her brother and taps his nose with her fingertip.]Manami: _______ Such exaggeration. o--ba-- nee "over"/exaggerate (rhet) Really, oniichan. oni--chan ttara (I-tell-you)Kyousuke: __ __ __ W-well... Wah ha ha! so so-- da ne wa ha ha5[Kyousuke stops to ponder.]narration: In that case... to yu-- koto wa......6[Smiling to mask his embarrassment, he bursts out...]Kyousuke: _ __ __ __ __ __ Ohhh, I see. Ah ha ha ha na--n da a so-- ka a ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! I-see I see. I'm being pretty so-- ka oni--chan DONKAN thick, aren't I! insensible/thick-skinned Wah! ha! ha! ___ ___ __ da kara naa----_ wa_ ha_ ha is that's-why (rhet) !Kyousuke backslap FX: ___ don[Kurumi is startled.]7[He shouts in merriment.]Kyousuke: ______ So you've also become a omae mo to--to-- redi-- ni woman at last? you too at-last/in-the-end into-lady natta ka turned-into (?) Oh, what joy! iya-- medetai! happy/joyous/lucky/auspicious Manami, tonight it's rice manami KON'YA wa SEKIHAN da_!! with red beans!! tonight (T) rice-boiled- is with-red-beansKurumi: [irked] ____ ___ ____ You idiot! suka pon tan_! flop/loser/dupe = nitwit---------------------------------------------------p 92 (52)1[Kurumi marches out of the apartment, casting a final glance over her shoulder.]Kurumi: ______ You're wrong. Stupid. chigau mon baka-- sukebe_!! Lech!! wrong thing/reason idiot lechKurumi FX: ________ sutasuta2[Manami and Kyousuke stare at her back, dumbfounded.]3Kyousuke: Wh-what's with her...? na nan da aitsu...Manami: Dunno... saa...4[Exterior shot of ABCB.]5[Madoka looks up from preparing coffee to find Kurumi at the door.]Madoka: Oh. ara6[She comes over to Kurumi's table to take an order and bring a glass of water.]Madoka: [smiling] How unusual. mezurashi-- wa ne Kurumi-chan coming alone kurumi-chan hitori de kuru nante like this. by-oneself come the-likes-ofKurumi: [tersely] ________ _______ Coffee... Black! ko--hi--... burakku de!7[Madoka is taken aback.]---------------------------------------------------p 93 (53)1[Master and Madoka watch from the counter.]2[Kurumi sips at her coffee, eyes vacant.]3[Kurumi looks out the window to see Hayami walk by.]Hayami footsteps FX: ___ ___ ko_ ko_4[Kurumi's pov of Hayami.]5[Kurumi watches...]6[...and when he's out of sight, drops her eyes and stares across the table.]7Kurumi: [looking at ceiling] fuu_8[Madoka and Master look startled.]---------------------------------------------------p 94 (54)1[Kurumi walks down the sidewalk.]sign 1: Ootomo... OOTOMO...sign 2: Takahashi's Oyster Place o-kaki -KA TAKAHASHI (hon)-oyster place 2[She spies something off-panel.]3[It's Hayami, exiting from a restaurant.]sign 3: ...Restaurant ...[CHIN] -HAN -MISE rare meal shop/store4[Her pov of him. He glances at her.]5[His pov of her. She looks apprehensively at him.]6[Isolated shot of the tree branches overhead.]breeze through branches FX: ______ zazaza...---------------------------------------------------p 95 (55)1[Kurumi blushes.]2[View from behind Hayami as he walks in the direction of Kurumi.]3[He passes her by.]4[She turns to watch him walk away.]5[Overhead view as Hayami walks away from the watching Kurumi.]---------------------------------------------------p 96 (56)1[Exterior view of ABCB.]Madoka: [off] Kurumi-chan? kurumi-chan nara...... She was here until a little sakki made while ago... until-a-little-while-ago kite-ta n da kedo...... was-coming (explan) but2[Overhead view looking down on the counter area. Kyousuke and Hikaru sit there. Madoka wipes dishes behind the counter. Kyousuke looks aghast.]Kyousuke: ________ Eh!?! She had coffee, e_?! aitsu ga ko--hi-- o black?! that-girl (S) coffee (O) _______ burakku dee~~_?! black beingMadoka: Come to think of it, so-- ieba chotto HEN datta she did seem a little come-to-think-of-it a-bit was-strange strange...! na----_3Master: Maybe she's lovesick, or... hyottoshite KOIwazurai dattari shite... maybe lovesickness is-(or)4Kyousuke: [looking ill] LOVE...?! KOI...?!Kyousuke: ...SICK?! wazurai?!5Kyousuke: Th-that Kurumi, a...ano kurumi ga KOIwazurai......?! lovesick...?! that (S) lovesicknessKyousuke FX: __ __ ___ pu pu pu_6[Exterior shot of ABCB. A chortling Kyousuke's face is drawn on his speech bubble.]Kyousuke: Wah ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha wa ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! ha ha ha ha ha---------------------------------------------------p 97 (57)1[His pov of Madoka, who holds up an index finger to him.]Madoka: But... Kurumi-chan will demo... kurumi-chan datte mo--sugu soon be in her 3rd year but even soon/before-long of junior high, just like Hikaru, so what's so strange hikaru to ONAji CHUUGAKU 3-NENSEI about her falling in love? with-Hikaru same jr-high 3rd-year KOI o shitatte okashikunai ja nai? even-tho-fall-in-love not-strange is-not2Kyousuke: _____ B-but, that kid, whose de...demo KUiMONO to manga ni only interests are food but food and manga and manga, in love...! shika KYOUMI no nai only-interests-are ________ ano gakincho ga KOI nante nee~~~~_ that-kid (S) love the-likes-of In the first place, with daiichi AITE ga...... who? the-first companion (S)3Hikaru: Come to think of it, it so-- ieba KYOU GAKKOU de looked like Kurumi-chan come-to-think-of-it today at-school was staring at a boy today at school... kurumi-chan aru OTOKO no KO o a-boy (O) jitto MItsumete-ita yo-- na... was-staring-at look-like4Madoka: Even here... koko demo... When a boy passed by mado no SOTO o aru outside the window, she window 's outside (O) a-(certain) watched him intently and heaved a sigh... OTOKO no KO ga to--risugita TOKI boy (S) went-past/passed-by when jitto MIte-te tameiki tsuite-ta kke is-looking-intently was-heaving-a-sigh (?)5Hikaru: I bet it's that Hayami kitto HAYAMI tte KO desu yo! guy! surely boy-called-Hayami is _______ ________ He's handsome and will be sakka-- -BU no JIKI kyaputen de the captain of the soccer soccer club 's next-term captain be-(and) team next term... _______ rukkusu mo i-- shi looks too good and-besides He seems pretty popular ONNA no KO ni wa kekko-- with girls. to-girls (contrast) quite NINKI ga aru mitai be-popular-(with)/ seems a-favorite-(with)Madoka: Well... so-- ne Come to think of it, he so-- ieba yasashi-so-- de did seem sweet. come-to-think-of-it looking-as-if-gentle I had the feeling he was nakanaka no KOU -SEINEN tte kanji a very nice guy... quite (nom) liking youth feel-that datta na...... was6Kyousuke: [looking worried] .......... ..........narration: C-can't be. ma masaka That Kurumi has an interest kurumi no yatsu ga OTOKO nanzo ni in guys?! that-Kurumi (S) guy ????? (IO) KYOUMI o?! interest (O)---------------------------------------------------p 98 (58)1Madoka: She's also a fine lady now!! KANOJO datte mou rippa na even-she now fine/splendid ______ redi-- yo_!! lady If you treat her like a itsu made mo KODOMO atsukai shite-ru to child forever, she might forever if-are-treating-like-a-child go astray and end up doing ____ something terrible. gurete tondemonai koto go-astray-(and) outrageous-thing shichau ka mo yo do-(finality/regret) it-may-be2Kyousuke: [horrified] EH!?! e_?!3[Kyousuke looks shell-shocked.]Madoka: [off] ____ Girls develop faster, so... ONNA no KO tte susunde-ru girl (T) is-going-forward n da kara... (explan) that's-why4[Madoka and Hikaru are stunned to see him suddenly get to his feet.]Kyousuke stand-up FX: _____ gatan5[Outside, he runs.]narration: I still thought of her as madamada KODOMO da a kid, but... still-(much)-more is-child to OMOtte-ita no ni... was-thinking-that even-though What the heck sort of guy ittai donna OTOKO da!! is he?!! in-the-world what-kind-of guy is---------------------------------------------------p 99 (59)1[Kurumi walks down the sidewalk.]2[She stops, surprised, to see Hayami exit another restaurant.]door FX: _____ karansign: _______ ___ _______ San Darjan --French furansu RYOURI san - darujan cuisine France cuisine3[Kurumi's face takes on an expression of resolve.]Kurumi FX: _____ ki_ gokun4Kurumi: [meekly] E-excuse me... a ano...[Hayami turns.]5[Kyousuke races down the street...]Kyousuke FX: ___ ___ ___ ta_ ta_ ta_6[...and stops when he sees the two talking ahead.]Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____ dokin---------------------------------------------------p 100 (60)1[He quickly hides himself around the corner of a building.]Kyousuke FX: _____ sasa_narration: S-sure enough, that ya yappari kurumi no yatsu...?! Kurumi...?! sure-enough that-Kurumi2[His pov. Hayami says something and Kurumi looks aside, a bit sadly.]3[Kyousuke looks on.]narration: I see... naruhodo... He's a pretty handsome kekkou ii OTOKO ja nai ka... guy... quite handsome-guynarration: If she likes him that sonna ni SUki na no nara... much... that-much liking (nom) if-it-is As her older brother, ANI to shite wa I should give her my as-elder-brother (T) blessing... SHUKUFUKU shite-yaru-beki da yo na... should-give-(her)-my-blessing is4[Hayami blurts out something.]5[Kurumi looks up at Hayami, hands clasped before her, blushing and beseeching.]6[Hayami shakes his head and holds up a hand.]7[Kurumi is shattered.]---------------------------------------------------p 101 (61)1[In anguish, she turns and runs away, startling Hayami.]Kurumi FX: ___ da_2[Kyousuke grows angry...]narration: Th-that jerk!! a ano yaro--!!3[...and crackles with the Power.]narration: Rejecting my cute kid kawaii IMOUTO o furu sister--I can't forgive pretty-younger-sister (O) reject that!! nante yurusen_!! the-likes-of can't-forgive4[In surprise, Hayami finds himself floating in the air.]Hayami: Huh? Huh? Huh? n? n? n?Hayami levitation FX: _____ fuwa_5[Raised high, Hayami is hung by his jacket collar near the top of a telephone pole.]Hayami: Oh oh oh! ottottotto!Hayami legs FX: _____ _____ buran buran6[Kyousuke surveys the scene with grim satisfaction. Behind him, Kurumi stops and looks back, wide-eyed.]narration: Serves you right!! zamaa miro_!!sign: Azuma Store AZUMA-YAKurumi: AH! a---------------------------------------------------p 102 (62)1[Arms outflung, she races towards him, crying.]Kurumi footsteps FX: ___ ___ ___ ___ ta_ ta_ ta_ ta_2[Kyousuke smiles at her.]Kyousuke: (My hurt kid sister!! (kizutsuita IMOUTO yo_!! was-injured younger-sister Rush into my arms!!) ore no MUNE ni tobikonde-koi_!!) to-my-heart/chest come-rushing/dashing3[He throws his arms wide, but Kurumi runs right past him...]4[...and into the arms of her father, who was standing about 3 meters behind Kyousuke.]Kurumi: He said that shop was no ano o-MISE zenzen oishikunai n da good at all!! that-shop totally untasty (explan) ttee!! (quote)Takashi: I see. Then it can't be so-- ka ja shikata ga nai helped. I-see then can't-be-helped We'll go for yakiniku...! YAKINIKU ni suru kaa--_! do-"yakiniku" (?)5Takashi: Ohh, were you here, nan da KYOUSUKE ita no ka... Kyousuke...? was-here (?)Kurumi: Huh-h-h? are~~~~ What are you doing, oni--chan nani yatte n no?! oniichan?!Kyousuke: .......... ..........---------------------------------------------------p 103 (63)1[Exterior evening shot of a restaurant.]narration: Today is March 3rd--Girls' KYOU wa 3-GATSU 3-KA hinamatsuri... Day... today (T) March-3rd Girls'-Day Dad and Kurumi exchanged oyaji to kurumi wa MITSUYAKU o secret promises... dad and (T) secret-promise (O) kawashite-ita n desu... was-exchanging (explan)Takashi: [off] Since you've found us out, barete-shimatta kara ni wa it can't be helped... now-that-discovered-(finality) shikata ga nai... can't-be-helpedsign: Yakiniku Ryuuge YAKINIKU RYUUGE roast-meat 2[The four Kasugas sit around the grill at their table, all wearing aprons/ bibs.]Takashi: Kurumi had been asking me MAE kara kurumi ni do--shite mo from before to take her from-before by-Kurumi by-all-means out to eat. tabe ni tsurete-ke tte to-eat take-with-me (quote) tanomarete-ta kara ne was-asking that's-whyManami: [elbowing her sister] No fair-r-r. I won't zuru--i nukegake wa forgive you for trying unfair steal-a-march (T) to steal a step on me!! yurusanai zo~~~~_!! not-forgive !!yakiniku FX: _____ _____ ju~~~ ju~~~3[Kyousuke leans in and stares hard at Kurumi.]Kyousuke: Umm... ano...... _______ That guy at the school GAKKOU no KOUTEI ya abakabu de playground and at ABCB... school 's playground and at-ABCB aitsu no koto... about-that-guy I heard that you were omae jitto MItsumete-ita tte ki--ta staring at him... you were-staring-at heard-that kedo... but But what the heck were you ittai do-- yu-- tsumori trying to do? in-the-world what-kind-of-intention na n da? is (explan)Kurumi: [mouth full] Me-e-e?! Who are you atahi ga~~?! DARE aitsu tte? talking about? (S) who that-person (quote)Kurumi FX: ________ mogumogu4Kyousuke: [wide-eyed] Wh-what do you mean, "who?" da DARE tte ano OTOKO to wa That guy you were with... who (quote) with-that-guy (T) omae... you5Kurumi: "That guy?" ano OTOKO tte?Kurumi blow-on-hot-food FX: fu--_6Kurumi: Ohh, maybe you mean the boy a-- moshi-ka-shite o-MISE kara who came out of the shop? it-is-possible from-shop DEte-kita KO? came-out-of boy I met him accidentally, are wa tamatama since he came out of that that-(one) (T) accidentally/by-chance shop that I was aiming for. I only asked him if the o-MEate no MISE kara DEte-kita food was good! aim (nom) from-shop came-out-of n de oishikatta ka 'cause was-tasty (?) do--ka ki--te-ta dake yo! if-you-please was-asking only[Kyousuke does a spectacular header.]Kyousuke FX: ___ ____ ______ don gara gashan---------------------------------------------------p 104 (64)1Kurumi: Today I wavered back and KYOU wa ICHINICHIJUU iroiro forth all day long... today (T) all-day-long various/several mayotte-ta no yo ne-- was-hesitating/wavering (rhet) Whether to do Chinese or CHUUKA RYOURI suru ka soretomo French cuisine... Chinese-cuisine do or-else furansu RYOURI ni suru ka...to French-cuisine to do or Asking someone who truly JISSAI ni ate there is the best way truly/as-a-matter-of-fact to find out if that place is good or not. tabeta HITO ni kiku no ga ICHIBAN to-person-who-ate asking (S) best ja nai sono MISE ga oishi-- no ka mazui no ka that-shop (S) tasty-one or untasty-one2Kyousuke: O-ohh... na...nan da Then that means it was only ja tamatama sono OTOKO ga by accident that that guy then accidentally that-guy (S) came out of the same shop... gu--zen ONAji MISE kara DEte-kita chance from-same-shop came-out-of dake tte koto ka... only it-means3narration: Somehow, I feel like I nan da ka damasareta yo-- na was suckered... somehow was-taken-in it-looks-like KIMOchi... feelingKurumi FX: ________ ________ pakupaku mogumoguKurumi: Oh, how I longed for this atashi wa donna ni kono HI o day! I (T) how-much this-day (O) TANOshimi ni shite-ta koto ka_! was-taking-pleasure case4[Overhead view of the family at their table. Kyousuke sits across from his two sisters. Takashi sits at an end.]Kurumi: [merrily] And so... da kara... ______ I controlled myself over SUki na ke--ki mo gaman shite... my favorite cake... favorite-cake too enduring/putting-up-with And I drank black coffee omake ni onaka ga suku yo-- ni so that I'd get hungry... moreover get-hungry so-that ________ _______ ko--hi-- mo burakku de nonde...... coffee too in-black drinkingnarration: Still, she really knows sore ni shite mo mattaku how to cause trouble! but/still really HITOsawagase na yatsu! cry-wolf/false-alarmist fellow---------------------------------------------------p 105 (65)1Kurumi: Hm? What's the matter, n? do-- shita no oni--chan oniichan? Don't you want it? tabenai no? not-eat (?)[She leans over the grill and snatches a morsel with her chopsticks.]yakiniku FX: _____ ju~~_2Kyousuke: Hey! That's my meat!! kore_! ore no NIKU!! my meatKurumi FX: ____ _____ hyoi paku_Kurumi: I'll take it!! itadaki_!!3[With a soft smile, he studies his two sisters, who share a laugh.]narration: But... Sooner or later, demo... itsu-ka there will surely come a but sometime/someday day when wonderful guys will appear before my sisters... IMOUTO-tachi no MAE ni mo in-front-of-sisters too ______ suteki na DANSEI ga arawareru wonderful-man (S) appear/turn-up TOKI ga kitto kuru darou... time (S) surely come poss-be4[Another exterior view of the restaurant. In an inset, Hayami still hangs from the telephone pole.]Hayami: .......... ..........sign: Yakiniku Ryuuge YAKINIKU RYUUGE roast-meat narration: But, for now, they're demo IMA wa madamada still more like DUMPLINGS but now (T) still-(much)-more INSTEAD OF BLOSSOMS! _____ HANA yori dango! flower than dumpling = "dango instead of flowers" is a saying somewhat akin to the archaic saying "pudding before praise". is a sort of dumpling. The point being that you can eat or pudding, but (flowers) or praise doesn't fill your stomach. BTW, the meaning of the saying has no bearing on Kyousuke's line above. I just point it out to show why he chose those two seemingly incongruous items.>---------------------------------------------------