Kimagure Orange Road"The Shape-Up with Tears!"Volume 11, Story 8WB Volume 7, Story 1Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose                                 Craig Nishida                                 Thomas Wyatt                                 Dan RootLast revision : 08-19-95Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.eduNOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few      extras to those of you not having them.      Example: The subtitles on page 7 (149) are only in the WBs!---------------------------------------------------p 7 (149)--TITLE PAGE[Hikaru in a leotard and leg-warmers lies back on her shoulders, raises her torso and legs high in the air and pedals her feet.]MAIN TITLE (at top)                                 _sheipu appu_  The Shape-Up with Tears!        NAMIDA  namida no #S - U# !                                  a-tear  a-tear 's shape-up<Commentary (PH):  Usually, when said like this (i.e., <namida namida no shape-up!>), the <namida> means very sad, or very trying, or truly difficult; a heart-rending type of experience.  Whatever the "shape-up" might be, it must be pretty serious.>SUB-TITLE (at bottom)  If You Are a Chrysalis          MUSHIN ni     YUME miru  sanagi  That Dreams in Innocence,       in-innocence  to-dream   chrysalis/pupa  Then You Should Be Able to  Turn into a Magnificent         nara      KAREI na  Butterfly.                      if-it-is  splendid/magnificent/gorgeous                                  CHOU ni         nareru         hazu                                  into-butterfly  can-turn-into  likelihood---------------------------------------------------p 8 (150)1[Exterior shot of a school building.]sensei: [off]  It's like this.                 kono  yo-- ni                                  this  as2[The teacher reads out from a textbook.]sensei:  When boys and girls enter       SHISHUNKI ni naru to  puberty, their bodies...        when-turn-into-adolescence/puberty                                  DANJO         no KARADA  to yu-- mono wa...                                  man-and-woman 's body    which-meanstextbook:  Health and Physical             HOKEN TAI-IKU  Education3Komatsu FX:                       ____ ____  <snigger>                       kusu kusuHatta FX:                         ___ ___ ___  <heh! heh! heh!>                ku_ ku_ ku_books:  1st Year High School--          KOU 1     HOKEN TAI-IKU  Health and Physical             high-1    health-and-physical-education  Education4[The two exchange smirks.]Hatta:  I wish he'd teach us in a       mo-- chotto  GUTAI-TEKI ni  oshiete  little more detail...           a-bit-more   concretely     teaching                                  hoshi--  yo naa                                  wantKomatsu:  All right.  Leave that to       yoshi  makasetoki_!  me!5[Still seated at his desk, Komatsu assumes a lecturing stance.  Hatta and another boy crack up.]Komatsu:  When a girl is having a         ONNA no KO wa   AKA-chan ga   dekiru to  baby, her breasts get           girl       (T)  baby     (S)  when-be-formed  large, her tastes in food  suddenly change into wanting    oppai  ga   OOkiku   nattari  something sour, and she'll      breast (S)  greatly  become-(and)  often feel ill with morning  sickness.                       TAbeMONO no KONOmi     ga   KYUU ni                                  food     's preference (S)  suddenly                                  kawari  suppai mono ga   HOshiku nattari                                  change  sour-things (S)  want    become-(and)                                  tsuwari           to itte      tokidoki                                  morning-sickness  saying-that  often                                  KIMOchi WARUku natchattari suru  mono   desu                                  feeling badly  become-(and)      reason isHatta:  You know quite a lot.           omae  nakanaka  kuwashi--      jan                                  you   quite     well-informed  are-not6[Kyousuke turns to look at the commotion.]boy 1:  Komatsu, have you given         KOMATSU  omae  KODOMO demo  birth to a child or                      you   child  or-something  something?!                                  Unda koto aru     n ja nai     no?!                                  have-given-birth  (explan/neg)boys FX:                          ____ ____  ___  ___ ___  <guffaw>  <heh!>  <ha! ha!>     gera gera  ku_  ha_ ha_boy 2:  Yah, he recently had a          hai  kono MAE     KOINU  o  IPPIKI!  puppy!                               before-this  puppy (O) one-(animal)---------------------------------------------------p 9 (151)1[A full-portrait of Hikaru is splashed across the entire page.  Panels 1-4 lie beneath her image.  Here, she ice-skates in sweater and miniskirt, looking back over her shoulder at us with a smile.]2[Tight shot of her right skate as she turns.]narration:  And then, the next day...       soshite      YOKUJITSU...                                  and-so/then  the-next-day                                                  ________  I went skating with             hikaru-chan to  suke--to e...  Hikaru-chan...                  with-Hikaru     to-skateskate FX:                         ___  <whish!>                        za_3[She waves over at Kyousuke, who nervously hugs the railing.]Hikaru:  Yoo-hoo, Sempai!  Over          ya_ho--  sempai  kotchi kotchi!!  here, over here!!4[He waves back.]narration:  Hmm...  Hikaru-chan is          u~~~~mu    sasuga         hikaru-chan  truly an outstanding                       indeed/really  athlete, whereas I, Kasuga                   ________  Kyousuke, really suck.          UNDOUSHINKEI batsugun     sore ni hikikae  Ahem!!                          athletic     outstanding  on-the-contrary                                  sasuga         KASUGA KYOUSUKE                                  indeed/really                                                               _____                                  UNDOUSHINKEI SAITEI          e_hen!!                                  athletic     the-worst/pits5narration:  Which...  Isn't something       to......  ibareru  I can really brag about...                able-to-swagger/brag/be-proud                                  mon demo nai    yo na...                                  isn't-something6[He heads off on the ice, but a girl collides into him, sending him flying.]girl 1:  Oh, I'm sorry!                  a gomennasai!collision FX:                     ___  <thud>                          donKyousuke:  Wah!                            wa_---------------------------------------------------p 10 (152)1[A bit wobbly and nervous, he glides on the ice, swinging his arms to and fro.]Kyousuke:  Uh!  Uh!  Uh!  Uh!              to_ to_ to_ toKyousuke arms FX:                 ___ ___ _______  <swish swish swish>             tsu tsu tsu~~~~2Hikaru: [waving]  Sempai, over here, over         SEMPAI kotchi kotchi  here.Kyousuke FX:                      _____  <whish>                         sha--[He waves back.  Hikaru is directly in his path.]3[Shooting stars adorn this panel.]narration:  Bu...  But!                     shi... shikashi!Kyousuke:  WAH!                            wa_collision FX:                     ______  <CRASH!>                        doshin!4[Hikaru is on her back and looks up at him through one eye, a bit woozily. He's perched over her.]Kyousuke:  I-I'm sorry.                    go gomenHikaru:  Th-that's okay.                 i ie...5[View looking up at the ceiling and 2nd-floor observation deck.]Hikaru: [off]                     ____  Are you hurt?                   kega    nai       desu  kaa?                                  injury  not-have  are   (?)Kyousuke: [off]  No.  Thanks to you.             ie  okage-sama denarration:                                                   _______  After all, I had the perfect    nantatte   ZEKKOU       no kusshon ga  cushion, right?                 after-all  best/perfect 's cushion (S)                                  atta       kara        ne                                  there-was  that's-why  (rhet)6[He stares at her chest, blushing.  Hikaru looks back, surprised.]Kyousuke:                                                 _______  But, your cushion had this      da kedo  hikaru-chan no kusshon  much volume, Hikaru-chan?          but               's cushion                                             _________                                  konna ni   boryu--mu  atta       kke?                                  this-much  volume     there-was  (?)7[She sits up and looks blankly at him.  He gives an embarrassed smile.]Hikaru:                              ______  Huh?  "Cushion?"                e  kushon tte?narration:  She's nearly in her 3rd         mo-- sugu         CHUUGAKU 3-NEN  year of junior high.            soon/before-long  3rd-year-jr-high                                  da  mon    na                                  is  reason  She sure is developing          SEICHOU  ichijirushii  n da      kitto  rapidly.                        growth   striking/     (explan)  surely                                           noteworthy/remarkableKyousuke:  Ah.  No, it's noth...           a  iya  nan demo...---------------------------------------------------p 11 (153)1[She tries to get up, but clutches her left ankle in pain.]Hikaru:  Ah-ow-ouch!                     a itata!2[Exterior view of a small building.]doctor: [off]  This...  Is a sprained          korya...    nenza           da  ne  ankle.                          this-(one)  sprain-(ankle)  is3[Inside the examination room, a doctor addresses Hikaru.]doctor:  Well, it's nothing serious,     maa   taishita koto wa nai  kedo.....  but...                          well  nothing-serious       but  For this week, stay away        koko        ISSHUUKAN wa   hageshii UNDOU  from vigorous activity and      this-place  a-week    (T)  violent  movement  behave yourself.                                  hikaete        otonashiku shitenasai                                  abstain-(and)  keep-quiet/behave-oneselfHikaru:  Okay...                         ......hai4[Kyousuke carries Hikaru home on his back.]Kyousuke:  I'm sorry.                      gomen neHikaru:  No, it's no big deal.           ie  taishita koto nai n desu5[Kyousuke becomes aware of two pleasant pressure points on his back.  He looks surprised and blushes.  Hikaru has her eyes closed and appears to be resting.]Hikaru breasts FX:                ______  <squiiish!>                     gyu--_Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            _____  <thump!>                        doki_6narration:  Hikaru-chan seems to have       yappari      hikaru-chan  MAE yori  gotten more busty after         after-all                 than-before  all...                          ________                                  gurama-- ni natta            mitai...                                  turned-into-"glamour-girl"/  seems                                  got-busty  But it must be difficult        demo  ONNA no KO tte  TAIHEN da  na  for girls.                      but   girl       (T)  is-serious/difficult  Carrying two of those on        konna     no futatsu  mo  their chests...                 like-this 's two      too                                  MUNE ni   kakaete...                                  on-chest  carrying  I wonder if they aren't         OMOkunai   no  ka na?  heavy...?                       not-heavy      I-wonder---------------------------------------------------p 12 (154)1[View looking up at buildings, telephone lines and street signs.]Hikaru: [off]  Umm...  Too heavy?              ano...  OMOkunai   desu   kaa?                                  uhh     not-heavy  am/is  (?)Kyousuke: [off]  Yeah.  Heavy...                 un  OMOi...2[Hikaru goes wide-eyed.  Kyousuke blushes in embarrassment.]Hikaru:  Huh?!                           e?!narration:  Oops.                           ikene  What am I saying?               nani itte n daKyousuke FX:  <blush!>                        po_3[He smiles nervously back over his shoulder at her.  She stares at him blankly.]Kyousuke:  No, I didn't mean anything      iya--    HEN na  IMI      ja nai  n da  weird.                                   weird   meaning  is-not  (explan)  Uhh...                          sono...  Like about your weight being    so--       TAIJUU no koto  very heavy.                     like-that  about-one's-weight                                                          _o--mo_                                  hikaru-chan te   kekko-- OMOi    n da   ne                                              (T)  quite   heavy   (explan)                                  _ __ __ __  Ah ha ha ha!                    a ha ha ha4[Hikaru's eyes grow large.]Hikaru realization FX:            _____  <CLANNNG>                       ga~~n5[Madoka appears.  Kyousuke and Hikaru turn toward her.]Madoka:  Hikaru!                         hikaru!6Hikaru: [smiling]  Oh, Madoka-san.                 a madoka-sanKyousuke: [nervously smiling]  Ah...  H-hi.                    a... ya yaa7Madoka:  Hikaru, wanna go to the         hikaru  RAISHUU   no NICHIYOUBI  pool next Sunday?                       next-week 's Sunday                                  ______                                  pu--ru ni  ikanai?                                  to-pool    not-goHikaru:  Huh?                            e?---------------------------------------------------p 13 (155)1[With a grin, Kyousuke points to his face.  Madoka finally looks at him.]Kyousuke:                           ___  Oh, I'll go.                    a ore ikuMadoka:  Oh...                           ara...  Now that I stop to think        DARE  ka to OMOttara      KASUGA-kun  about who's here, it's          who   if-now-thought-that  you, Kasuga-kun.                                  ita      no                                  was-here2[He looks off to the left.  Madoka solemnly drops her gaze.  Hikaru is oblivious and smiles at Madoka from her position on Kyousuke's back.]Kyousuke: (This is why...)                 (kore da mon...)Madoka primness FX:  <hmmph>                         tsu----n3[Hikaru's pov of Madoka as Madoka looks up and smiles.]Madoka:  Oh, that's right.               a sou sou  Hikaru, a heated swimming       ne hikaru    RAISHUU    kono MACHI ni  pool will be opening next                    next-week  in-this-city  week in town.  Wanna check            ______            ______  it out?                         ONSUI pu--ru       ga   o--pun suru                                  warm-swimming-pool (S)  be-opening                                  n da      tte      itte-minai?                                  (explan)  (quote)  not-go-and-see4[Madoka loses the smile and stares at Kyousuke.]Madoka:  Oh, by the way, you too,        a  tsuide ni   yokattara  KASUGA-kun mo  if you like, Kasuga-kun.           by-the-way  if-okay               too[Hikaru, now standing, looks back at Kyousuke a bit puzzled.  Kyousuke is wincing.]narration:  "By the way..."  Right!         tsuide ni...  ne!5[Hikaru beams and whacks him one on the back, sending him flying.]Hikaru:  Ohh, wonderful!                 ma suteki_!  Let's go, Sempai!!              ikimasho sempai!!Hikaru backslap FX:               ___  <whump>                         don6[Ah, that was just a hypothetical situation.  Hikaru actually stands unsmiling and looks a bit worried.]narration:  Usually, that would make for    to       itsu-mo nara  an extremely high-spirited      (quote)  always  if-it-is  Hikaru-chan, but...                                  tobikiri    GENKI no ii                                  super-fine  cheerful/high-spirited/lively                                  hikaru-chan  na  no da  ga......                                               is         butHikaru:  Well...                         so-- desu nee7[View across the street at some buildings.]Madoka: [off]  What's the matter?              do--shita no?  Don't you want to go,           ikitakunai      no   hikaru  Hikaru?                         not-want-to-go  (?)Hikaru: [off]  N-no.  I'll go!!                i ie ikimasu_!!---------------------------------------------------p 14 (156)1[Kyousuke looks down at her ankle with concern.  Hikaru lets out an embarrassed laugh.]Kyousuke:  But...  Is your ankle all       demo...  ASHI  DAIJOUBU?  right?                          but      foot  all-rightHikaru:  Oh, this is fine.               a kore        nara      HEIKI      desu                                    this-(one)  if-it-is  unconcern  is  It doesn't hurt a bit any       mo--      nan tomo nai       n desu  more.                           any-more  not-hurt-me-a-bit  (explan)2[She stomps down hard on the injured ankle.]Hikaru:  See?!                           hora ne_!Hikaru foot FX:                   ___  <stomp>                         don3Hikaru: [tears in her eyes] (urggg!!)                        (gu_!!)  See?!  Doesn't hurt a bit.      ne_  nan tomo naiKyousuke and Madoka FX:  <stare>                         ji~~~~n4[Hikaru stands facing us in bra and panties.  She touches her right breast.]Hikaru:  Oh no...!                       ya da...!5[She squeezes on both sides.]Hikaru:                                         ____ (Sure enough, my bra is          (yappari      bura  kitsui...  tight...                         sure-enough  bra   tight  I wonder if I've gotten         futotchatta            no ka na----_  fat!                            grown-fat/gained-weight   I-wonder  Oh no-o-o...)                   ya da naa)6[She visualizes an extremely squat and dumpy version of herself, dressed in swimsuit, chasing Kyousuke at poolside.  Kyousuke flees for his life.]narration:  If this keeps up...             kono mama ja...fat Hikaru:  Sempa-a-ai!                     sempa--ifat Hikaru FX:                    ____ ____  <stomp stomp>                   dosu dosu7[Exterior evening shot of the Hiyama residence.]Hikaru: [off]  All right.  From today, it's    yoshi  KYOU kara   ISSHUUKAN  a week of shape-up until the           from-today  a-week  day I go to the pool!!          ______                    ______ ____                                  pu--ru ni iku  HI made    sheipu appu da_!!                                  go-to-pool     until-day  shape-up    is---------------------------------------------------p 15 (157)1[Exterior shot of ABCB.]Madoka: [off]  Huh?  Aren't you going to       ara  tabenai no?  eat?                            oh   not-eat (?)2[Hikaru, nervous and face flushed, stares down at the plate before her.]Madoka:                                                          ______  Isn't it your favorite?         anta no KOUBUU        desho    ke--ki  Cake?                           your-favorite-(dish)  poss-be  cakeHikaru FX:                        _____  <gulp>                          gokun3[She puts on a happy face and eats a tangerine.]Hikaru:  No!  My tastes in food have     ie_!  atashi  TAbeMONO no KONOmi     ga  changed!!                             I       food     's preference (S)                                  kawatta  n desu_!!                                  changed  (explan)                                           _________  I only like eating fruits,      sou      furu--tsu  shika tabetakunai  like this.                      like-so  fruits     only-want-to-eat                                  n desu                                  (explan)  Ahh, this tangerine is sour     a--  kono mikan      suppakutte  and delicious!!                      this-tangerine  sour-(and)                                  oishii!!                                  tasty4[Kyousuke watches silently.]Madoka: [off]  Hmm...  You didn't use to       he--  hikaru  suppai mono  like sour things, Hikaru...                   sour-things                                  KIRAi datta no ni  ne--                                  used-to-dislike    (rhet)5[Madoka works behind the counter, turning to grab things off the shelf. Hikaru, sitting at the counter, studies Madoka's backside.]Hikaru: (Madoka-san.  How lucky she      (madoka-san wa   i-- naa  is.                                         (T)  how-nice                                              _______  As usual, her figure is         aikawarazu  sutairu       batsugun  awesome...)                     as-usual    "style"/      outstanding/                                              one's-figure  unsurpassed                                  da  shi......)                                  is  and-besides6[Pov shifts.  Hikaru still stares at Madoka's backside.  Kyousuke, sitting beside Hikaru, looks at Hikaru through the corner of his eye.]Hikaru:                               ____ (About 43 kilos (94.6 lbs),      (43 kiro  tte  dokoro  ka na  I'd say...                       43-kilos (T)  about   I-wonder  But if you look at her, she     mite-ru to     kekko--      tabete-ru  eats well enough.               if-are-seeing  well-enough  be-eating                                  no ni                                  even-though  Why doesn't she get fat?)       nande  futonnai      n darou)                                  why    not-grow-fat  (poss-explan)Hikaru contemplation FX:  <stare!>                        ji~~~~~~_7[Hikaru leans over and examines the goods.]Hikaru: (But, her rear end is            (demo  oshiri   wa   kekko--  aru  superb...)                       but   rear-end (T)  superb   have                                  n da      na...)                                  (explan)Hikaru pat-rear FX:               _____  <feelie!>                       sawa_Madoka FX:                        _____  <eep>                           bikun8[Exterior shot of ABCB.  Facial portraits appear in the speech bubbles. Madoka is indignant.  Kyousuke is emphatic.]Madoka:  KASUGA-KUN?!                    KASUGA-kun?!Kyousuke:  Not me!!                        chigau mon!!---------------------------------------------------p 16 (158)1[Kyousuke's mind wanders...]narration:  She likes sour things, hmm?     suppai mono ga   SUki...ka                                  sour-thing  (S)  liking  Maybe Hikaru-chan...            hyottoshite  hikaru-chan......                                  __ __                                 ___  Ha ha...  What am I             ha ha... nani KANGAete       n da     ore!  thinking?!                               what thinking-about (explan) I2[Exterior shot of a building.]narration:  Then, one week later...         sore kara  ISSHUUKAN ga   sugi...                                  then       a-week    (S)  aftersign on building:                 _________ _____  Aerobic Dance                   earobikku dansuaerobics instructor: [off]        ___ _____  ___ _____  One, two.  One, two.            wan tsu--  wan tsu--3[Hikaru, looking great in leotard, headband and legwarmers, runs through her workout.  Three other girls in her class are seen behind her.]4[She wipes her brow and lets out a puff of air.]narration:                                          ________  Ahh.  Grr.  I'm starving        a--  mo--  o-naka pekopeko  and on top of that, my ankle               be-awfully-hungry  is sore...                                  omake ni  ASHI mo  itai  shi...                                  moreover  foot too sore  and-besides  But maybe I lost a little       demo  sukoshi  wa   yaseta        ka na...  weight...                       but   a-little (T)  became-thin/  I-wonder                                                      lost-weight  Now, if I can only be           kore de        KYOU ICHINICHI  careful about food all          with-this/now  all-day-today  day today, I'll be okay!!                                  TAbeMONO ni   KI o tsukereba...  #OK#!!                                  food    (IO)  if-look-out-(for)Hikaru:                           ___ ___  <puff>  <puff>                  haa haa---------------------------------------------------p 17 (159)1[As Hikaru exits down the stairs, she comes upon Kyousuke, walking down the sidewalk.  Hikaru is now dressed in skirt, sweater and jacket.]Hikaru footstep FX:               _____ _____  <tap tap>                       kotsu kotsu2Kyousuke:  Huh?  Hikaru-chan.              are  hikaru-chan3Hikaru:  Ah, Sempai...                   a SEMPAI...4[View looking up at the sign on the building.  The top sign is the aerobics sign, but that's partially cut off in this panel.]sign 1:                              ___ _____  ...ic Dance                     ...kku dansusign 2:  Hagiwara Obstetrics             HAGIWARA    SAMPU   -NIN    -KA                                  <name>      woman-   person  department                                              in-childbirth5[Kyousuke looks up at the sign in bewilderment.]6[He turns to Hikaru with a smile.]Kyousuke:  Oh yeah.                        a so-- da  Hikaru-chan, aren't you         hikaru-chan  o-naka hette-nai?  hungry?Hikaru:  Eh?!                            e_Hikaru FX:                        _____  <URKK!>                         giku_7[Exterior shot of a corner restaurant.  A few other buildings are also visible.]sign 3:  Fire-Fighting                   SHOUKAKyousuke: [off]  Huhhh?!                         are~~~~_  Aren't you eating,              hikaru-chan  tabenai no?  Hikaru-chan?---------------------------------------------------p 18 (160)1[Her body stiff with tension, she stares at the food laid out before her. Kyousuke looks across the table at her with concern.]Hikaru:                                               ________ (Jeez...  I'm so starved I       (sorya...    o-naka pekopeko  could pounce*, but if I eat                  awfully-hungry  here my special diet will  be...)                          nodo kara   TE   ga  DEru   hodo                                  from-throat hand (S) emerge extent                                  /---like-jumping-at-(a-thing)---/                                  tabetai      kedo  koko de       tabecha                                  want-to-eat  but   in-this-place eating-(T)                                              _______                                  sekkaku no  daietto ga...)                                  special 's  diet    (S)<*Commentary:  The metaphor that Hikaru uses is literally, "I'm so starved, a hand could come out of my throat (and grab the food)...">2[She pops a morsel in her mouth...]Hikaru: (Sempai went to the trouble      (sekkaku             SEMPAI ga  of treating me, so...            taking-the-trouble         (S)                                  ogotte-kureru  n da      shi...                                  treat-(me)     (explan)  and-besides  Just one bite...)               hitoKUCHI dake...)                                  a-bite    justHikaru FX:                        _____  <chomp!>                        paku_3[...and another...]Hikaru: (..........                      (..........  One more bite.)                 mo-- hitoKUCHI)Hikaru FX:                        ____ ____  <chomp chomp>                   paku paku4[Face looking flushed and a bit delirious, she lifts the plate to her face and eats more.  Kyousuke watches.]Hikaru: (One more bite!)                 (mo-- hitoKUCHI!)Hikaru FX:                        ____ ____  <chomp chomp>                   paku paku5[Three waiters also stop and stare.  Kyousuke starts to sweat.  Hikaru has gone berserk.  Empty plates are stacked high beside her.]Hikaru FX:                        _____ _____ _____  <shovel shovel shovel>          gatsu gatsu gatsu                                  _____ _____  <scarf scarf>                   musha musha6[She claps a hand over her mouth...]Hikaru:                           __  Ooo!                            u_7[...and runs off to the ladies room.  Kyousuke is speechless.]Hikaru:  I-I feel awful!                 ki KIMOchi WARUi!                                  ___  <bleargh!>                      oe_Hikaru FX:                        ____ ____  <hurry scurry>                  bata batasign:  Restrooms ===>                  KESHOU-SHITSU ===>Kyousuke FX:  <yow!>                          gyo_---------------------------------------------------p 19 (161)1[He visualizes the sign he saw earlier.]sign 1:                              ___ _____  ...ic Dance                     ...kku dansusign 2:  Hagiwara Obstetrics             HAGIWARA    SAMPU   -NIN    -KA                                  <name>      woman-   person  department                                              in-childbirth2[Three flashback scenes.  Komatsu lectures from his textbook.  Kyousuke carries Hikaru on his back.  Hikaru eats a tangerine with a smile.]narration: [Komatsu flashback]  When a girl is having a baby    ONNA no KO wa   AKA-chan ga   dekiru to  her breasts get large, she      girl       (T)  baby     (S)  when-be-formed  starts wanting sour things,  and she'll often feel ill.      oppai  ga   OOkiku   nattari                                  breast (S)  greatly  become-(and)                                  suppai mono ga   HOshiku nattari                                  sour-things (S)  want    become-(and)                                  tokidoki  KIMOchi WARUku nattari suru                                  often     feeling badly  become-(and)                                  mono   desu                                  reason isHikaru breasts FX: [flashback]    ______  <squiiish!>                     gyu--_Hikaru: [flashback]  Sour and delicious.             suppakutte oishii                                  sour-(and) delicious3narration:  M-maybe Hikaru-chan...?!        mo moshi ka suru to  hikaru-chan?!4[Hikaru leans over the bathroom sink and stares in the mirror.]Hikaru: (If you suddenly stuff food      (sukippara de         KYUU ni   TAbeMONO  into an empty stomach,           on-an-empty-stomach  suddenly  food  you're gonna feel awful,  won't you.)                     tsumekomu to    KIMOchi WARUku                                  if-stuff/gorge  feel    badly                                  natchau            no yo ne--)                                  become-(finality)        (rhet)                                  ____  <urp>                           uppuwater FX:                         _______  <spray!>                        ja----_5[Stunned by his thought, Kyousuke drops his fork, which lands on his plate.]dropped fork FX:                  _____  <rattle>                        karan6[Hikaru looks mournfully into the mirror.]Hikaru: (Saying this and that, I         (nanda kanda   itte    ZEMBU  ate it all, didn't I...!)        this-or-that  saying  all/entire                                  tabechatta      mon na~~~~_)                                  ate-(finality)narration:                                         ______  Ahhhh...  I don't want to       aa...  ashita    pu--ru  ikitakunai  yo~~~~  go to the pool tomorrow...             tomorrow  pool    not-want-to-go---------------------------------------------------p 20 (162)1[Exterior shot of the building housing the indoor pool.]narration:  And then, it's Sunday!          soshite      NICHIYOUBI  desu!                                  and-so/then  Sunday      is2[In the locker room, several girls change into their swimsuits.  Madoka stands in a bikini, watching Hikaru, who stands blushing in her one-piece swimsuit.]Hikaru FX:                        ________  <fidget fidget>                 mojimoji3[Hikaru looks over her shoulder, and is surprised to find Madoka staring at her.]Madoka:  Hmm...                          fu--nHikaru heartbeat FX:              _____  <thump!>                        doki_Hikaru:  Huh?!                           e?!4Hikaru: [blushing]  Wh-what is it?                  na nan desu kaaMadoka: [smiling, exiting]  Nothing really.                 i--e  betsu ni5[Hikaru looks unhappily back at us.]Hikaru: (Oh, no...                       (ya da na--  Even Madoka-san is staring      madoka-san made  atashi no koto  at me.                          even-Madoka      about-me                                  ________                                  jirojiro mite                                  staring  I got fat, after all.           yappari    atashi  futotchatta                                  after-all  I       got-fat-(finality/regret)                                  n da                                  (explan)  I shouldn't have come...        konakya yokatta...   SAIAKU!)  This is the pits!)              shouldn't-have-come  worst---------------------------------------------------p 21 (163)1[Wide view of the pool and several young and fit people.]FX:                               _______ _______  _____ _____  <kyaa kyaa>  <splash splash>    kya--no kya--no  pasha basha2[Panels 2-3 are side-by-side portraits of Kyousuke and Hikaru.  Here, Kyousuke looks over at Hikaru's panel with a blush and a look of nervousness.]3[Hikaru is blushing and lost in her own thoughts.]4[View pans back.  The two are seated on the edge of the pool, dangling their legs into it.  They sit about 5 feet apart.  Hikaru is wearing a T-shirt over her swimsuit.]Kyousuke:  U-uhh...  Aren't you going      a ano  oyoganai no?  to swim?5Hikaru:  Y-yeah.  What about you,        ha haa  SEMPAI wa......  Sempai?Kyousuke: [embarrassed]             ___                         __________  Oh, I can't swim.  Ha ha ha     a ore  oyogenai    kara       hahahahaha  ha ha!                            I    can't-swim  that's-why6Kyousuke: [VERY worried] (Somehow, Hikaru-chan's          (hikaru-chan  nan-da-ka  HYOUJOU    ga  face looks so gloomy...                       somehow    expression (S)                                  KURAi...                                  gloomy  Sh-she's having a baby,         ko kore       wa  yappari   AKA-chan ga...)  after all...)                      this-(one) (T) after-all baby     (S)7[Hikaru looks down sadly.  Her eyes look a bit damp.]Hikaru: (Sempai's so distant.            (SEMPAI  yosoyososhii                                           cold/distant  He doesn't like me...!!)        atashi  KIRAwarete-ru      n da...!!)                                  I       am-being-disliked  (explan)---------------------------------------------------p 22 (164)1[Hikaru turns to Madoka, who is climbing the ladder out of the pool.]Madoka:  Why so depressed?               GENKI nai no ne--2[Madoka takes a seat next to Hikaru, who leans over with a stricken look.]Hikaru:  Madoka-san...                   madoka-san...                                                           _______  My figure's getting worse,      atashi tte  SAIKIN       sutairu  isn't it.                       I      (T)  most-recent  figure                                  WARUi  desu  yo ne                                  bad    is       (rhet)Madoka: [amused]  Not really.                     betsu ni--                                                          ________  If anything, you've gotten      shi--te ieba  choppiri  gurama-- ni  a bit more well-developed,      if-anything   a-bit     curvaceous  don't you think?!                                  natta   n ja nai?!                                  became  (neg/explan)3[Isolated shot of one end of the pool.  Two girls splash water at each other.]Hikaru: [off]  No way...  Please tell it       sonna--    hakkiri itte-kudasai  to me straight--I've gotten                clearly say-(please)  fat!!                                  futotta   tte!!                                  grown-fat (quote)4Madoka:                                                     ______  Then, Hikaru, take off your     jaa   chotto  hikaru  #T# shatsu  T-shirt for a bit!              then  a-bit            T-shirt                                  nuide-mite!                                  take-off-and-see5Madoka:  See?  Together with me.         hora   atashi to  ISSHO     da  yo                                  look!  with-me    together  is[The two stand side-by-side.  Madoka in her bikini, and Hikaru in her one- piece.  Madoka looks over at Hikaru, who stares down at her own figure.]---------------------------------------------------p 23 (165)1[Hikaru closes her eyes in misery.]Hikaru:  But Sempai told me...           demo  SEMPAI  atashi no koto...                                  but           about-me2[Madoka pauses in surprise...]3[...then turns and yells.]Madoka:  Kasuga-kun!!                    KASUGA-kun!![He comes running.]Kyousuke:  Y-yes!                          ha hai_4[Madoka smiles at Kyousuke, who blushes.  Hikaru looks a bit embarrassed.]Madoka:                                          _______  Hey, what do you think of       nee  hikaru no sutairu  dou  OMOu?  Hikaru's figure?                say         's figure   what thinkKyousuke:  Eh?!                            e?!5[A better view of Hikaru, who blushes and still looks sad.]Hikaru heartbeat FX:              ____ ____  <thump thump>                   doki dokiKyousuke: "Wh-what do I..."                do doo tte...Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            ____ ____  <thump thump>                   doki doki6Madoka:                                   _______  Don't you think Hikaru's        hikaru  sutairu  yoku  natta  figure is great?!                       figure   nice  became                                  to OMOwanai?!                                  not-think-that  She's been putting up with      ASHI no itai no   koraete  her sore ankle and going to     foot 's pain (S)  endure-(and)  the shape-up gym near the                          ______ ____   ____  station; giving up sweets       EKIMAE          no sheipu appu - jimu ni  and only eating fruits!         next-to-station 's in-shape-up-gym                                  kayottari    amai mono    gaman shite                                  go-to-(and)  sweet-thing  putting-up-with                                           _________   ______                                  SHOKUJI  furu--tsu - onri-- ni                                  meal     fruits-only                                  shita dake no koto wa aru  yo ne!                                  has-only-doneHikaru: [waving her hands]  Wah!  Wait, Madoka-san!!        wa chotto madoka-san!!7Kyousuke: [surprised]  Eh?  Th-then...                 e ji ja...---------------------------------------------------p 24 (166)1[Madoka aims a smile at Kyousuke who blushes and looks guilty.]Madoka:  Thanks to you, Kasuga-kun       okage de   KASUGA-kun  sakki kara  has had trouble for a while     thanks-to              for-some-time  now, deciding which way to  look.                           ME no yariBA ni       komatte-ru    yo                                  in-which-way-to-look  is-at-a-loss2[Hikaru crosses her arms over her chest and blushes down at her own bustline.]Hikaru:  Huh?!                           e?!3Madoka:  I wouldn't say you've           ko-- yu--    no     futotta  grown fat.  Instead...          this-kind-of (nom)  grown-fat                                  tte iwanai    wa yo  kore       tte...                                  not-say-that         this-(one) (quote)4Madoka: [off]                     ________  I'd say you've gotten           gurama-- ni  natta   tte yu--  no yo!!  well-developed!!                curvaceous   became  say-that[Hikaru takes a good hard look at herself...  So do we.]Hikaru FX:                        ___  <blush!>                        po_5[...and hurls herself into the pool.  A couple scrambles out of the way. Madoka and Kyousuke stagger back in surprise.]Hikaru:  Kyaaaaaa!!                      kya~~~~~~_!!  I'm so embarrassed!             hazukashii!Hikaru FX:                        _____  <KER-SPLASH>                    dobon---------------------------------------------------p 25 (167)1Kyousuke: [nervous smile]  O-ohh...                        na nan da...                                            ___  I thought for sure that         tekkiri   ore  hikaru-chan ga  AKA...  Hikaru-chan was having a        for-sure  I                (S) <akachan>  ba...                                                           baby2Madoka:  What?  A "ba..."?               nani?  AKA tteKyousuke:                               __ __ __  Eh?  I mean...  Ha ha ha.       e iya ha ha ha3[She leans in and taps him on the nose.]Madoka:  Again...                        mata...  You were thinking about         HEN na koto  KANGAete-ta  something weird, weren't        weird-thing  were-thinking-about  you.                                  n desho                                  (poss-explan)4[A grey panel with stars.]Madoka: [off]  YOU PERVERT!!                   kono #H#_!!Madoka FX: [off]                  ____  <WHUMP!>                        don_5[Madoka gleefully shoves Kyousuke into the pool.  He's airborne and headed directly for Hikaru, who looks up at him with a smile.]narration:  And so, as Hikaru-chan          to yu-- wake de         masumasu  became more and more            for-that-reason/and-so  more-and-more  attractive, I, Kasuga  Kyousuke, began jumping         MIRYOKU-TEKI ni natta  more and more to hasty          became-attractive/fascinating  conclusions!                                  hikaru-chan to  masumasu                                  with-Hikaru     more-and-more                                  HAYAtochiri        no  watakushi                                  a-hasty-conclusion 's  I                                  KASUGA KYOUSUKE......deshita!                                                       was---------------------------------------------------