Kimagure Orange Road"The Terrifying Legend of Winter Mountain"Volume 11, Story 6WB Volume 6, Story 15Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation by : Hitoshi Doi (15 Oct 1989)Additional translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Dan Root Thomas Wyatt Scott HenryLast revision : 08-19-95Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.eduNOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 287 (107) are only in the WBs!---------------------------------------------------p 287 (107)--TITLE PAGE[Half-portrait of an elegant-looking Madoka. She stands in a black bra, or low-cut slip, with hair done up. Back-lit, her hair shimmers like a halo.]MAIN TITLE (at top) The Terrifying Legend of FUYU YAMA KYOUFU Winter Mountain winter mountain fear/dread/terror DENSETSU legend/tradition/folkloreSUB-TITLE (at bottom) If This Is a Wonderful SUTEKI na YUME nara Dream, Don't Awaken Me... wonderful dream if-it-is SAmenai de not-waking-up If This Is a Bitter Lie, TSURAi USO nara Don't Tell Me... hard/painful/bitter lie if-it-is HAkanai de... not-speaking-out/uttering---------------------------------------------------p 288 (108)1[Madoka and Hikaru bathe in the altogether in a very large tub. Hikaru stands, clutching a towel to her chest, and gazes up at the ceiling. Madoka sits at the edge, dangling her legs in the water, and looks back at us.]Madoka and Hikaru FX: ______ chapun2[Madoka enters the water. She notices that Hikaru is staring at her chest.]Hikaru FX: ji~~3[Hikaru's pov. Madoka blushes a bit and wipes her cheek with a towel.]Madoka: What's with you, Hikaru? nani yo hikaru what ________ Staring at someone like HITO no koto jirojiro mite that. about-person staringMadoka/towel FX: _____ jabu_4Hikaru: [staring in wonderment] Madoka-san, you're the type madoka-san tte kiyase suru that looks slimmer when (T) slimmer-in-clothes do wearing clothes, aren't you. _____ taipu na n desu nee type are (explan) (rhet)Madoka: Huh?! e_?!---------------------------------------------------p 289 (109)1[Shot of the sliding door to the furo (washroom). It slowly slides open a bit.]Hikaru: [off] I wonder if I can be atashi mo KOUKOUSEI ni nattara well-built like you when I too when-become-high-school-student *I'm* a high-school student. ________ madoka-san mitai ni gurama-- ni like-Madoka "glamour-girl" nareru ka naa able-to-become I-wonderMadoka: [off] Don't say brazen stuff maseta koto iwanai no! like that! forward/pert thing not-saydoor FX: _____ su--_2[An eye appears at the gap in the door.]Grandpa FX: ji--3[Looking over his shoulder we can see Hikaru emerge from the water.]Hikaru: ________ Ohh?! I wonder where the are~~_ shampu-- doko kashira shampoo is. ! shampoo where I-wonderHikaru FX: ___ za_4[Hikaru looks up with a smile to find a hand enter through the crack in the door. It holds a bottle of shampoo.]Hikaru: Oh. Thanks! a do--moo_hand FX: ____ hyoishampoo: _______ ________ Loofa Shampoo hechima shampu-- loofa-sponge shampoo5[Holding the shampoo in her hand, Hikaru's expression turns to a skeptical glare. Madoka stares at the shampoo in surprise.]Hikaru: HM?! n?!6[Grandpa beats a hasty retreat. Looking both ways, he pauses at the hallway door to the changing room. Kyousuke ambles down the hall towards him.]Grandpa FX: _____ sasa_7[Kyousuke stops in puzzlement to watch Grandpa scurry down the hall, turn right and continue on his way.]Grandpa FX: ____ ___ ________ byu_ ku_ sutasuta 8[Looking inside the open door to the changing room, he sees a stricken Hikaru (wearing a towel) and Madoka (in panties, just putting on her bra).]Hikaru/Kyousuke: AHH!?! a~~_?!---------------------------------------------------p 290 (110)1[Exterior night view of the grandparents' home. Snow blankets the ground, trees and roof; the skies are clear. It is a tranquil scene...]Hikaru: [off] __________ Kyaaaa! Sempai, you kyaa~~_ sempai no etchii~~~~!! perve-e-ert!! ! 'H' = 2[Grandpa, Hikaru, Madoka, Yuusaku and Kyousuke sit around the open fire pit in the living room. A pot hangs over the fire, suspended from a long wooden pole hanging down from the ceiling. Grandma arrives with a tray of food.]narration: _chi_ ______ Right now, we're here at IMA oji--chan IE ni suki-- ni ojiichan's place to ski. now at-ojiichan's-place to-ski kite-imasu are-coming3[Hikaru casually slips the sweater she is wearing down off her left shoulder. Kyousuke and Yuusaku stare across at that bared shoulder and blush.]Hikaru: That was a nice hot bath. i-- o-YU deshita nice hot-bath was __________ Look! My skin's so smooth! hora o-hada mo tsurutsuru! look! the-skin too smoothHikaru sweater FX: _____ pero_Kyousuke/Yuusaku heartbeat FX: ______ dokkin4[Puffing on his pipe, Grandpa turns to Hikaru.]Grandpa: _uchi_ We get the water from a IE wa CHIKAku kara nearby hot spring... household (T) from-nearby ONSEN hi--te-ru kara nee hot-spring are-drawing that's-why (rhet)Hikaru: Really?! No wonder I hee--_ do--ri de yoku attamaru thought the water was ! no-wonder-that nicely warm delightfully warm! to OMOtta! thought-that5Grandpa: [smiling] But... shikashi... I'm really glad you all HONTOU ni yoku kite-kureta_!! came!! really well came-(for-me)Hikaru: [cheerfully] Again, thank you for your tabitabi o-SEWA ni narima--su_! hospitality! many-times/ much-obliged-to-you repeatedly[Kyousuke and Yuusaku, sitting side-by-side, pause in drinking tea to squint at one another.]Kyousuke/Yuusaku: (But... (shikashi...... Wherever I go, this guy's doko-ka iku to koitsu always there...) when-go-somewhere this-guy kanarazu iru naa) always is-there (rhet)---------------------------------------------------p 291 (111)1Hikaru: [stretching her arms] Well, tomorrow I'm gonna saate ashita wa omoikkiri ski all-out!! well tomorrow (T) as-much-as-I-please/ to-my-heart's-content suberu soo--_!! ski look-like[Hand to chin, Yuusaku ponders...]Yuusaku: ______ ______ But this ski slope doesn't shikashi koko no suki--JOU rifuto ga have a lift, so it's going but this-place 's ski-place lift (S) to be very tiring... nai kara shindo -so-- da naa not-have that's-why tiring look-as-if2Grandpa: ______ Lift?! rifuto?! You don't need anything sonna mon iran ja nai ka! like that! that-kind-of-thing not-needKyousuke FX: _____ giku_3Grandpa: _chikara_ Kyousuke! Use the Power KYOUSUKE omae NOURYOKU de mina-san o to carry everyone... you by-Power everyone (O) hakonde... carrying/transporting Mmph. uguugu[Kyousuke claps his hand over Grandpa's mouth.]Kyousuke hand FX: ___ ba_4[Madoka and Yuusaku watch in blank puzzlement. Hikaru pooh-poohs it with the palm of one hand. Grandpa struggles under Kyousuke's hand, while Kyousuke smiles nervously at his friends.]Madoka: _chikara_ The Power? NOURYOKU tte?Hikaru: Oh, c'mon...! ya da--_ Even considering that it's ikura SEMPAI demo NINGEN no Sempai, that's not humanly for-all-that-it's-Sempai even human 's possible, right! CHIKARA ja muri desu yo ne~~_ strength impossible is (rhet)Grandpa FX: ________ mogomogo5[With a single upraised finger, Grandpa levitates Kyousuke.]Grandpa: ___ There! hoi!Kyousuke FX: _____ fuwa_Kyousuke: AH! a6[Tight shot of Kyousuke's hand as it grasps the wooden pole that hangs from the ceiling.]Kyousuke hand FX: ___ ga_7[Kyousuke, with body extending perpendicular to the pole, seemingly slides himself up and down the pole by his hands. Hikaru stares up in unadulterated hero-worship. Grandpa smiles. Yuusaku studies this act with some skepticism. Madoka looks on with wide-eyed concern.]Kyousuke FX: ____________ surusurusuruKyousuke: Oo-wah! Ah ah ah. uwa_ tatataHikaru: _____ ______ Oh, my! Amazing, Sempai!! n maa sugoi!! sempai---------------------------------------------------p 292 (112)1[Isolated shot of the open fire-pit. A kettle of tea hangs above the fire.]Hikaru: [off] ______ ______ But even though this is a demo kekko-- suteki na suki--JOU pretty fantastic ski slope, but quite wonderful ski-course it looked like no one was skiing at all... na no ni HITO zenzen is even-tho people -at-all subette-nakatta mitai desu ne-- were-not-skiing seems (rhet)Grandpa: [off] None of the locals will JIMOTO no MONO wa dare-mo ever ski there... local people (T) nobody suberyasen yo asoko de wa... -ski at-that-place (T)2[Grandpa's pov of Hikaru, Madoka and Yuusaku. He has their attention.]3Grandpa: Especially... TOKU ni...... Young folks. WAKAiSHUU wa na young-persons (T)4Grandpa: [with a serious expression] That's right. so-- da Just a quick word before ano YAMA de suberu MAE ni you go skiing on that on-that-mountain before-ski mountain. hitokoto dake itte-oku a-single-word just tell-(for-future-sake) koto ga aru there-is-something5Grandpa: [sternly] KYOUSUKE!! KYOUSUKE_!!Kyousuke: Y-YES! ha hai!6Grandpa: [pointing] Which one is your dotchi ga KANOJO na n ja?! girlfriend?! which (S) girlfriend is (explan)[Kyousuke does a pratfall. Hikaru goes wide-eyed with embarrassment. Madoka looks surprised.]7[With a smile Hikaru slaps Grandpa in the back. Grandpa reels.]Hikaru: C'mon-n-n! ya da~~~~_ Really, ojiisama! oji--sama ttaraaHikaru backslap FX: ___ don---------------------------------------------------p 293 (113)1Kyousuke: [nervous smile] ______ That has nothing to do suki-- to wa KANKEI nai desho! with skiing! with-skiing (contrast) poss-have-no-relationGrandpa: [solemnly] Oh, but it does so... tokoro ga OOini Very much! but very-(much)/greatly aru n ja! there-is (explan)2Grandpa: If either one is your moshi dochira-ka ga KOIBITO dattara sweetheart, you must never if either-one (S) sweetheart if-is be together with her on ______ the ski slope! suki--JOU de wa ZETTAI on-ski-course (contrast) absoluteness kuttsuite-ite wa ikan! must-not-be-adhering-to3[The four youngsters stare back in surprise. Hikaru looks stricken as well.]4Grandpa: Especially since it looks TOKU ni KYOUSUKE omae wa as if you can't ski, especially you (T) Kyousuke... suberen -so-- ja kara... can't-ski look-as-if since _____ gohoncrows-in-background FX: kaa_5[Grandpa leans over towards a surprised Kyousuke. Grandpa's face is becoming flushed.]Grandpa: That is... sono-- na n jaa that is (explan) You'll somehow tell her to TEtoriASHItori oshiete-ageru coach you, by hand and by by-hand-and-foot coach-(you) foot...! to ka ittari shite--_ say-somehow-(and)Grandpa FX: ____ zui_6[Grandpa goes highly-theatrical, raising both fists up near his face and glaring up at the ceiling.]Grandpa: ...and then just kinda koronda hyo--shi ni "happen" to fall down, and fell-down at-the-moment-of just "happen" to kiss... ___ omowazu SEPpun involuntarily/in-spite-of-oneself kiss What am I saying?! nanchatte_! ________ Oh, how shameless... oo nantaru harenchi na... how-to-put-it shameless kuu~~~~Yuusaku: [nervously] Mister. Mister... ossan ossan...7[Grandpa wipes his brow with a towel and holds out his tea cup. Hikaru pours.]Grandpa: Oh, thank you. ya katajikenai haa fuu haa fuu---------------------------------------------------p 294 (114)1[Grandpa addresses Kyousuke solemnly, and rests a hand on his shoulder. Kyousuke gets angry.]Grandpa: ...shouldn't do such a to yu-- yo-- na WAKAsa ni makaseta youthfully reckless thing! like-that youthfully left-to BOUSOU dake wa ikan zo_! reckless-run just must-not !!Grandpa hand-on-shoulder FX: ___ ponKyousuke: I WON'T! shimasen yo_!2Hikaru: [wide-eyed] But why can't two lovers demo do--shite KOIBITO-DOUSHI ski together? but why couple-of-lovers subetcha ikenai n desu kaa? must-not-ski (explan) (?)3Grandpa: [dropping his gaze] Kyousuke. You know, right. KYOUSUKE omae wa SHItte-orou you (T) shall-be-knowingKyousuke: Eh?! e?!4Grandpa: The "Stark Naked" legend uchi no MURA ni tsutawaru supponpon handed down in our in-our-village handed-down stark-naked village... DENSETSU o...... legend (O)5[Kyousuke portrait--he studies his Grandpa.]6Kyousuke: Isn't that... are wa... Just a superstition? tada no MEISHIN desho? merely superstition poss-beGrandpa: [rising to his feet] If you value your life... INOCHI ga oshikattara... life (S) if-was-precious7[Grandpa exits the room.]Grandpa: Listen a little to what chitto wa TOSHIYORI no yu-- koto mo old people have to say!! a-little (T) the-old (S) say (nom) too kiku mon ja zo listen things is !!---------------------------------------------------p 295 (115)1[Kyousuke's attention is turned to Yuusaku. Meanwhile, Grandma has entered.]Grandma: Well, well. Your beds have saa sa TOKO no YOUI ga been made. bed 's preparation (S) dekimashita yo completedYuusaku: [to Kyousuke] What is it? The nan da yo-- MEISHIN tte? superstition? what is superstition (quote)2Kyousuke: [small smile] It's nothing, it's nothing. nan demo nai nan demo nai3[Kyousuke turns and discovers how the beds have been made... The futons have been laid out flush up against each other on the floor, and the pillows are set side-by-side. Kyousuke blushes and staggers back.]dramatic FX: do~~nKyousuke FX: gyo_4[The two girls' eyes grow large. Hikaru covers her open mouth with the palm of one hand.]Madoka/Hikaru heartbeat FX: _____ doki_5[Grandma shoves Madoka forward, into Kyousuke. Both are surprised.]Grandma: Now, now. Please rest easy. saa sa yukkuri yasunde-kudasare at-ease go-to-bed/rest-(please)Grandma shove FX: ___ donMadoka/Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____ doki_6Kyousuke: [wincing] H-hold on, obaachan! chi chotto oba--chanGrandma: [pushing a surprised Hikaru forward] Oh? Then you want this ara ja kotchi no HITO ka no~~ one...? oh then this-way 's person (?)7[Exterior night shot of the home and surrounding trees.]Kyousuke: [off] Th-that's not it!! so so-- ja naku tte ne!! like-so is-not (quote) (rhet)Grandma: [off] Then you want to make it a ja 3-NIN ISSHO kae? threesome? then 3-people together (?) ______ You lech! kono sukebe!---------------------------------------------------p 296 (116)1[Full-portrait of Hikaru as she gleefully skis through the powder.]narration: And then, the next day... soshite YOKUJITSU...Hikaru skiing FX: ___ za_2[From high overhead, we look down upon a building (ski lodge?) and tiny people as they go about their skiing.]Hikaru: [off] What the heck is it? nan na n desu kaa what is (explan) (?) The "Stark Naked" legend...? supponpon DENSETSU tte......? stark-naked legend (quote)Kyousuke: [off] ___ I don't know it well either, ore mo yoku wa SHIranai kedo... but... I too well (T) not-know but It's said that if two lovers kono YAMA de wa flirt together on this on-this-mountain (contrast) mountain, they always lose their way. KOIBITO-DOUSHI ga ichatsuku to couple-of-lovers (S) if-flirt-with-a-girl kanarazu SOUNAN suru always get-stranded/meet-with-an-accident tte iwarete-ru n da is-said-that (explan)3Hikaru: [stricken] WHAAAT?!! e~~~~_!!Kyousuke: Also, for some reason, shikamo naze-ka HAKKEN sareta when their bodies were moreover somehow were-discovered discovered, they were naked, even in the dead of a cold TOKI ni wa MAFUYU no winter... at-time (contrast) depth-of-winter 's SAMUi no ni HADAKA de cold even-though in-bare-skin SHInjatte-ru n da...... are-dead-(finality) (explan) They wore expressions of marude ONRYOU ni demo terror, just as if they'd just-as-if by-a- or-something met a vengeful ghost... revengeful-ghost DEatta you na KYOUFU no HYOUJOU de... met looks-like terror 's facial- being expression4[His pov of Madoka and Yuusaku. Madoka looks apprehensive.]Madoka: .......... ..........Yuusaku: C-can't be. ma masakaa---------------------------------------------------p 297 (117)1[Yuusaku smiles at Madoka, who turns to look.]Yuusaku: Then, Madoka-san, let's ja madoka-san ISSHO ni suberimasho ski together. then together shall-ski __ __ __ Ha ha ha! It'll be safe ha ha ha kore nara DAIJOUBU! this way! this-(one) if-it-is all-rightHikaru: [angrily] What are you thinking? anta nani kanchigai shite n no you what mistaking2Hikaru: It's a shame, but if ZANNEN da kedo Sempai and I are together, it's-a-shame but something bad will happen... atashi to SEMPAI ga ISSHO ni iru to I and (S) together if-be yokunai koto ga okoru kara... not-good thing (S) happen that's-why So in this case... kono BA-AI3Hikaru: ...the solution is this! ko-- suru no ga SEIKAI desu! do-like-this (nom) (S) solution is I'm with Yuusaku. atashi wa YUUSAKU to I (T) with-Yuusaku Sempai, please ski with SEMPAI wa madoka-san to ISSHO ni Madoka-san. (T) with-Madoka together subette-kudasai ski-(please)Yuusaku: [nervously] Wh-why is it like this?! na nande ko-- naru no?! why like-this become[Kyousuke and Madoka look at each other blankly.]4[Hikaru and Yuusaku ski off.]Hikaru: Let's go, Yuusaku. ikimasho YUUSAKUHikaru/Yuusaku skiing FX: _____ zaza_5[Kyousuke smiles in nervousness and embarrassment. Madoka stares at him blankly.]Kyousuke: __ __ __ __ __ Ha... Ha ha ha ha! ha... ha ha ha haMadoka: .......... ..........---------------------------------------------------p 298 (118)1[Kyousuke, a little wobbly, leans toward Madoka. She crosses her arms over her chest and flinches away.]Kyousuke: Well, sh-shall we ski? saa su subero-- kaaMadoka: H-hey! Don't come near chi chotto kotchi ni konai de yo! me! this-way not-come2Kyousuke: [wide-eyed] Huh? Why not? e do--shite?3Madoka: [slight blush] Huh? e4[Madoka portrait--her eyes go a bit glassy.]5[A bit miffed, she starts to ski off. Coming near Kyousuke, she causes him to stumble.]Madoka: Then look! Here I go! ja hora iku wa yo! then look! goKyousuke: Oh, I forgot to tell you. a sou da _ ___ I-I can't sk... o ore suberena...Madoka skiing FX: ___ za_Kyousuke FX: ______ tsuru_6[He lands on her back and they hit the snow.]Madoka: KYA! kya_---------------------------------------------------p 299 (119)1[View looking up at the clear skies.]Kyousuke/Madoka FX: _____ dosa_2[Madoka lies on her back with Kyousuke sprawled on top of her. Both are wide-eyed with surprise.]3[As they stare into each other's eyes, an image of Grandpa appears.]narration: Two lovers should never be KOIBITO-DOUSHI dattara together on the ski slope! couple-of-lover if-is ______ suki--JOU de wa ZETTAI on-ski-course (contrast) absoluteness kuttsuite-ite wa ikan! must-not-be-adhering-to/ must-not-become-intimate-with4[Split panel. Kyousuke, in the top half, stares nervously off to one side. In the bottom half, Madoka stares up at him.]Kyousuke: _____ gokun5[He stares at her.]FX: [off] __ __ __ do do do...6[View pulls back somewhat. The two still stare raptly into each other's eyes.]FX: ______________ dododododododo---------------------------------------------------p 300-301 (120-121)1[This panel is spread across the tops of two pages. The two look up to see an avalanche approaching. Between the wall of snow and themselves lies the opening to a cave.]avalanche FX: ____________ dodododododo2[He looks up in horror.]Kyousuke: LOOK OUT!! abunai!!3[He sees the cave mouth.]Kyousuke: ___ AH! ha_4[The wall of snow hits.]avalanche FX: ___ do_---------------------------------------------------p 302 (122)1[Arms around Madoka, he propels her into the cave. Behind them, snow completely blocks the entrance.]avalanche FX: ___ do_2[Panels 2-4 depict the dark interior of the cave.]Kyousuke: [off] Phew... fuu...3Kyousuke: [off] W-we're saved. ta...tasukatta4Madoka: [off] But... da kedo... We're snowed in. tojikomerarechatta wa snowed-in-(finality/regret)5[Overhead, in the darkness, a bat flies.]bat FX: _____ basa_6Madoka: S-something's here! na nani-ka iru wa! something there-is7bats FX: ____ ____ basa basaMadoka: KYA! kya_[She dives into his arms.]---------------------------------------------------p 303 (123)1[Both look up to see the bats.]Kyousuke: Th-they're only bats. ta...tada no koumori da yo merely 's bat arebats FX: ____ ____ basa basa2[Madoka portrait--she looks a bit unsettled.]3[Kneeling at the wall of snow, Kyousuke examines it.]Kyousuke: I-it's no good! da dame da! This wall of snow is pretty kono YUKI no KABE so--to-- ATSUi yo thick. this-snow 's wall rather-thick It doesn't look as if we totemo dokase -so-- ni nai... could possibly move it... cannot- can-move-aside doesn't-look- possibly as-if ___ ___ haa haa4narration: Shit...! kuso--_ _chikara_ If I use the Power, it's NOURYOKU o TSUKAeba wake nai n da kedo... no problem... if-use-Power simple (explan) but But not right in front of AYUKAWA no ME no MAE ja na... Ayukawa... 's eyes in-front-of5Madoka: Say... nee... This cave... kono DOUkutsu..........6Madoka: Somehow, it's strange. nan-da-ka HEN yo[Kyousuke stares at her back.]---------------------------------------------------p 304 (124)1[Pov shifts. Madoka still has her back turned towards him.]2[He reaches out a hand in apprehension.]Kyousuke: Ayu... AYU...3[Isolated shot of the top of the blocked entrance.]Madoka: [off] It's hot. atsui4[Kyousuke facial portrait--he stares back at us.]Kyousuke FX: _______ ji----_5[Pov shifts. Madoka begins to take off her jumpsuit. Behind her, Kyousuke stares and blushes.]Madoka remove-jumpsuit FX: ___ ba_Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____ doki_---------------------------------------------------p 305 (125)1[A sudden thought hits him.]narration: When their bodies were HAKKEN sareta toki ni wa discovered, they were naked, were-discovered at-time (contrast) even in the dead of a cold winter... MAFUYU no SAMUi no ni depth-of-winter 's cold even-though HADAKA de SHInjatte-ru n da...... in-bare-skin are-dead-(finality) (explan) They wore expressions of marude ONRYOU ni demo terror, just as if they'd just-as-if by-a- or-something met a vengeful ghost... revengeful-ghost DEatta you na KYOUFU no HYOUJOU de... met looks-like terror 's facial- being expression2Kyousuke: [aghast] A...Ayukawa... a...AYUKAWA...3[Tight shot of her jumpsuit as it hits the ground.]jumpsuit FX: _____ pasa_4[His pov of Madoka, a half-portrait, standing in her bra, and wearing a sultry look.]Madoka: You too, Kasuga-kun... KASUGA-kun mo.......... Take off your clothes. nugi na yo---------------------------------------------------