Kimagure Orange Road"The Kiss in the First Dream of the New Year!"Volume 11, Story 5WB Volume 6, Story 14Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Dan Root Thomas WyattLast revision : 08-19-95Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.eduNOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 267 (87) are only in the WBs!---------------------------------------------------p 267 (87)--TITLE PAGE[Hikaru smiles gently at us from her perch atop a railing.]MAIN TITLE (at top) The Kiss in the First Dream HATSUYUME #KISS#! of the New Year! first-dream-of-the-New-YearSUB-TITLE (at bottom) Longing for a Dream-Tinged YUME IRO MIRAI ni akogarete... Future... in-dream-colored-future longing-for---------------------------------------------------p 268 (88)1[Kyousuke lies asleep underwater. Bubbles rise to the surface.]narration: As I was slowly rising from KOKOCHI yoi madoromi no NAKA kara the depths of a pleasant pleasant from-within-nap/doze nap... yukkuri to FUJOU shite-kuru to... slowly/leisurely when-start-to-rise-to- the-surface2Kyousuke stomach FX: [off] ____ guu_3[He sits up in bed, groggy. He's dressed in pajamas.]narration: I was awakened by the sound o-naka no OTO de ME ga sameta... of my stomach... by-sound-of-stomach was-awakened 1986--the New Year... 1986-NEN SHOUGATSU------4[Tight shot of his feet as he walks down the hallway.]narration: I didn't have my first HATSUYUME ga minakatta dream of the New Year... first-dream-of-New-Year (S) not-dreamed/sawKyousuke: It's once a year... ICHINEN ni ICHIDO da mon naa in-one-year once is reason (rhet) I kinda feel cheated. nanka SON shita KIBUN somewhat lost/suffered-a-loss feeling5[He pushes open the door to the kitchen and sticks his sleepy face in. He smells something nice.]narration: _____ _chi_ Dad and the others have gone oyaji-tachi wa oji--chan IE e to ojiichan's place... dad (and-assoc) (T) to-ojiichan's-place itte-ru shi... are-going and-besides So once again I'm all alone matamata SHOUGATSU hitoribotchi on New Year's. again New-Year solitaryKyousuke: Hm? n?FX: _____ pu~~n---------------------------------------------------p 269 (89)1[Full-portrait of Madoka, decked out in Playboy bunny outfit--shoulderless and backless outfit, white cuffs at her wrists, white collar and black bowtie around her neck, dark nylons, bunny ears and cottontail. She holds a saucepan in one hand, stirring the contents with a spoon in the other. She smiles at us over her shoulder.]2Madoka: _______ Happy New Year, Darling! akemashite omedetou da--rin! opening congratulations[Kyousuke staggers back against the wall, stunned.]Kyousuke FX: ___ don3[His pov. Smiling, she bows slightly, presenting a tray to us. On the tray is a bowl and pair of chopsticks, a bottle of sake and a cup. But your attention is probably riveted to her impressive cleavage.]Madoka: Will it be o-zouni or o-zouni tabemasu soretomo o-toso? o-toso?* eat or-else is rice cakes in a vegetable soup; is spiced sake.>---------------------------------------------------p 270 (90)1[View shifts. From behind her we see that Kyousuke has collapsed to the floor, back against the wall. He stares up at her with jaw dropped.]narration: Wh-what kind of get-up is na nan no mane da AYUKAWA?! this, Ayukawa?! what-kind-of pretend isKyousuke heartbeat FX: ____ ____ ____ ____ ____ 2narration: _______ Oh. Aha! I see! a haha--n so-- ka_!! ___ I bet I'm still... kitto ore mada... surely I still Asleep!! nete-ru n da_!! am-sleeping (explan)3[Seated at the kotatsu, he holds out his cup. Madoka kneels at his side and pours sake.]Madoka: Here you go, kind Sir. do--zo o-hitotsu if-you-please (hon)-oneKyousuke: Oh! Oh! ottottotto_narration: Then... This is my first jaa kore wa HATSUYUME da!! dream of the New Year!! then this-(one) (T) 1st-dream is4[With a somewhat goofy smile, he eats his o-zouni. Madoka kneels at his side, looking a bit sadly at him.]Kyousuke: Wowww... Although it's iya~~~~_ YUME to wa ie a dream, this is good no ! dream nevertheless fortune at the start of the New Year. SHINNEN so-- so-- at-the-beginning-of-the-New-Year korya ENGI ga ii this luck/omen (S) goodKyousuke FX: hagu haguMadoka: Huh? This isn't a dream. ara YUME ja nai wa yo dream is-not5[Her pov as he turns and eyes her skeptically.]Kyousuke: Oh, come on...! mata mataa!!_ ___ You're saying that just to so-- yatte ore o odokaso-- to shitee try and scare me. doing-like-that me (O) trying-to-scare Ayukawa wouldn't be doing AYUKAWA ga konna koto something like this for me. (S) this-kind-of-thing shite-kureru hazu nai ja nai do-(for-me) not-likely is-not6Kyousuke: Don't be silly! amai ne! ___ You won't fool me with this konna koto de ore wa sorta thing! by-this-kind-of-thing I (T) damasarenai zee not-be-deceived ! See-ee? This doesn't hurt. ho~~ra itakunai[With a wide grin he brings the sake bottle down on his head. Madoka watches with surprise.]sake bottle on head FX: ____ gon_7[Tight shot of Kyousuke as he staggers under the blow.]8[He hits the floor and stares up goofily at the ceiling. Madoka kneels over him with surprise and concern.]narration: I-it hurts...!! i itai...!!Kyousuke FX: ___ do_---------------------------------------------------p 271 (91)1[@Madoka transforms herself back into Akane, who remains in a bunny outfit. She looks down at the unconscious Kyousuke with a look of chagrin.]Akane transformation FX: ___ fu_Akane: Carefree fellow... omedetai yatsu......2[He awakes and lifts his head up sleepily.]Kyousuke: (Is it so sweet?) (sonna ni amai?) 3[This and the next 5 panels are black-bordered, denoting a dream. Here, we have Kyousuke's pov of a receptive Madoka.]4[Kyousuke leans over and prepares to kiss his lady love. Both have their eyes closed.]5[A white panel.]kiss FX: ____ chu_6[Smiling, Hikaru sticks her head in through the door. Kyousuke looks up in surprise from his position above Madoka who's lying on the floor under him.]Hikaru: Sempai! sempaiKyousuke FX: ____ gyo_---------------------------------------------------p 272 (92)1Kyousuke: [horrified] H-Hikaru-chan!! hi hikaru-chan_!!2[Enraged, Hikaru belts him one on the cheek.]Hikaru: What are you doing?!! nani sun no yo!!Hikaru FX: ______ patsu_3[End of dream. Kyousuke, lying on the floor, groggily comes to. @Hikaru in a bunny outfit is gently shaking him awake.]@Hikaru: Pull yourself--pull yourself shikkari shikkari shite sempai!! together, Sempai!!Kyousuke: ___ Ah! ha_4[He slams himself back away from her and against a wall. @Hikaru smiles in merriment.]Kyousuke: H-Hikaru-chan!! hi hikaru-chan!!Kyousuke FX: _____ suza_5[Akane transforms back to herself, dressed in blouse, jacket, skirt and socks. She stands and smiles down at him.]Akane: See?! It isn't a dream! ne_ YUME ja nai desho_! ! dream is-not poss-beAkane transformation FX: ___ fu_6[Kyousuke looks up befuddled and wide-eyed.]7[Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]Kyousuke: [off] AKANE-E-E!! akane~~_!!---------------------------------------------------p 273 (93)1[He gets to his feet, fists clenched and angry.]Kyousuke: What the heck are you ittai do-- yu-- tsumori trying to pull?! in-the-world what-kind-of-intention na n da! are (explan)Akane: I'd heard you were alone, hitori da tte ki--te-ta kara so I came by. 1-person are was-hearing-that that's-why kite-ageta no yo came-(for-you) Anyhow, I figured you do--se roku na mon wouldn't have eaten anything anyhow nothing-decent decent, right? tabete-nai daro-- to OMOtte ne poss--have-eaten thinking-that (rhet)2[Smiling, she raises an index finger.]Akane: Well? It was a pretty doo? sabishii anta ni wa considerate production for how lonely/sad to-you (contrast) a lonely person like you, wasn't it? nakanaka KI no ki--ta ENSHUTSU quite considerate production datta desho poss-wasKyousuke: [calmly] ___ Aren't you just making fun ore o ochokutte-ru dake of me? me (O) are-making-fun-of only na n ja nai no~~ are (explan/neg) (?)3[Akane gazes down, looking a bit miffed. Kyousuke looks over at her with a soft smile.]narration: Well... With Akane here, maa... TASHIka ni akane ga I've certainly avoided to-be-sure (S) being alone on the New Year... kite-kurete hitori kkiri no coming-(for-me) 1-person just 's SHOUGATSU dake wa manugareta... the-New-Year only (T) avoided4[He stops and reflects, touching two fingers to his lips.]Kyousuke: But... shikashi...... _____ That felt real... ano riaru na KANSHOKU... that-realistic feeling What I saw when I fainted IMA KIZETSU shita toki ni mita no wa just now was no doubt a now fainted at-time saw (nom) (T) premonition dream!! magiremonaku YOCHIMU da!! evidently/no-doubt premonition-dream is5Kyousuke: (And on top of that, *in* (shikamo NAIYOU ga...... that dream... moreover contents (S) ____ I *KISSED* Ayukawa!!) AYUKAWA to no kisu!!) with-Ayukawa (nom) kissKyousuke heartbeat FX: ____ ____ ____ ____ ____ Kyousuke FX: _____ gokun6[Looking back over her shoulder, Akane heads out the door.]Akane: Then, now I'll... ja atashi wa kore de... then I (T) now/with-thisKyousuke: Ehh?! You're going already? e~~~~_ mo-- itchau no ! already go-(finality)---------------------------------------------------p 274 (94)1[Smiling, she takes him by the arm.]Akane: That was a joke. to yu-- no wa jo--dan yo say-that (nom) (T) joking C'mon, let's go! saa ikimasho_!Kyousuke: Huh?! Where to? he_ doko e?2Akane: _chi_ A New Year's party at hikaru-chan IE de SHINNENKAI!! Hikaru-chan's place!! at-Hikaru's-place New-Year's-party I heard Madoka-chan will madoka-chan mo kite n da tte_! also be there! too coming (explan) (quote)Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____ dokin3[Exterior view of some houses, including the Hiyama residence.]4[His pov. Hikaru kneels in the foreground; Madoka kneels in the background near the kotatsu. Both turn to smile at him.]Hikaru: Sempai, welcome!! sempai yo--koso_!!5[He stops and stares at the vision before him. Akane smiles and chats with Hikaru and Madoka.]narration: Oh my God... korya odoroita... It seems that--only here-- koko dake mo-- HARU ni natta spring has already arrived... only-here already became-spring mitai da na... seemsAkane: Happy New Year, madoka-cha~~n omedeto_ Madoka-cha-a-an!---------------------------------------------------p 275 (95)1[Kyousuke continues to stand and watch in silence. Akane playfully takes Madoka's hand. Madoka smiles nervously.]Kyousuke FX: ji--_2[His pov. Madoka notices he's staring at her.]3Akane: Hey-y-y! Sit down, hora-- KYOUSUKE suwannasai yo Kyousuke!Kyousuke: _____ gohon4[Seated now, he has his cup filled by Hikaru.]Hikaru: [slurring] Here y'go, kind Sir. doozon o-hitotsuKyousuke: Ah, thank you. a korya do--monarration: Hikaru-chan's drunk... hikaru-chan yotte-ru...5[Hikaru suddenly turns to Madoka, who looks up with surprise.]Hikaru: By the way, Madoka-san!! tokoro de madoka-san_!!Madoka: Yes? hai6[Madoka's pov. Hikaru gives her a knowing smile.]Hikaru: Madoka-san, what do you madoka-san SEMPAI no koto think of Sempa-a-ai? about-Sempai do-- OMOimasuu? what think7[Split panel. On top, Kyousuke snorts out the sake he's drinking. Below is Hikaru's pov of Madoka, who looks back without expression, but with a slight blush.]---------------------------------------------------p 276 (96)1[With a smile, Hikaru clings to Kyousuke's arm. Kyousuke flinches slightly away.]Hikaru: ______ Isn't Sempai wonderful! SEMPAI tte suteki desho~~~~_! (T) wonderful poss-beAkane: Hikaru-chan's pretty drunk, hikaru-chan zuibun yotte-ru isn't she. quite is-getting-drunk no ne~~ (rhet)2[With face flushed and beaming, she lifts up an index finger.]Hikaru: All right. Today is New yoshi KYOU wa o-SHOUGATSU da shi Year's, so I'll loan all-right today (T) New-Year's is and Sempai especially to you, Madoka-san! TOKUBETSU ni madoka-san ni SEMPAI o especially to-Madoka (O) kashite-agemasu! loaning/renting-(to-her)3[Madoka facial portrait--a gentle smile.]4[Kyousuke facial portrait--wide-eyed surprise.]5Madoka: [getting up, eyes closed] Thank you, Hikaru. arigatou hikaruMadoka stand up FX: ___ su_[Kyousuke staggers back, face in shock.]Kyousuke FX: _____ giku_6[Pausing at the door, Madoka looks back at him over her shoulder. Kyousuke pivots his head from one girl to the other. Hikaru beams encouragement.]Madoka: C'mon. Let's go, saa ikimashou KASUGA-kun Kasuga-kun. well shall-goHikaru: So long. Do your best, itte-rassha~~i gambatte ne! 'kay!---------------------------------------------------p 277 (97)1[He visualizes his dream--his lips scant millimeters away from Madoka's.]narration: S-so it's this a-after ya...yappari ko kore wa... all... after-all this-(one) (T)2[Smiling merrily, Madoka hands him a mixing bowl.]Madoka: Here. Hold this. hai kore motte this-(one) holding/takingKyousuke: Eh? e3[Holding vegetables against her chest, she talks to herself. Kyousuke watches her.]Madoka: ______ ________ A carrot, onion... ninjin hitotsu tamanegi ga...... carrot one onion (S)Kyousuke: O-ohh... na nan da... It's this sorta thing, hm... ko-- yu-- koto ka...4[Wearing an unintentionally sultry look, she leans her face towards his. He flinches, eyes wide.]Madoka: Huh? What do you mean, e? nani ko-- yu-- koto tte "this sorta thing?" what this-kind-of-thing (quote)narration: Even Ayukawa's... AYUKAWA mo... Drunk! yotte-ru!Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____ dokin5Kyousuke FX: _____ gokunKyousuke: (Sheesh... Maybe, just (korya... moshika shite moshika suru to maybe... Like this...) it's-possible maybe kono mama......) this-unchanged-state6[Madoka brings a tiny bowl to her lips and licks the rim.]Madoka FX: _____ pero_---------------------------------------------------p 278 (98)1[View pulls back. She stands at the kitchen counter, tasting something in a pot. He stands about 2 meters away and watches her.]Madoka: Maybe... A bit sweet. chotto... amai ka na a-bit sweet I wonder2[Closeup of Madoka, her eyes closed, tiny bowl raised near her lips.]3[Kyousuke blushes and involuntarily extends out his tongue.]Kyousuke FX: _____ gokunKyousuke: Looks sweet... amasou...4[She looks at him with a soft smile.]Madoka: Would you like a taste? AJIMI shite-miru? sampling try-to-doKyousuke heartbeat FX: _____ dokinKyousuke: [embarrassed] __ __ __ Eh? N-no. Don't be absurd! e i iya messo-- mo nai ha ha ha Ha ha ha.5[Isolated shot of dishes stacked on a high shelf behind sliding glass panels.]Madoka: [off] Oh yeah, that's right. a so-- so-- Could you get the plates TANA no UE no o-SARA totte-kureru? from the shelf up there? shelf 's above plates get-(for-me)Kyousuke: [off] S-sure. h hai6[He extends his arms up. Madoka is busy chopping vegetables.]Kyousuke: Urg... yotto to... Can't reach... todokanai...---------------------------------------------------p 279 (99)1[He crackles with the Power.]Kyousuke: (All right... Now's the (yoshi konna toki koso time to use the Power...) all-right this-kind-of-time indeed _chikara_ NOURYOKU o TSUKAeba...) if-use-the-Power2[Madoka's skirt blows up high, revealing her panties.]Madoka: KYAA! kyaa_Madoka skirt FX: ___ ba_3[Kyousuke looks back over his shoulder at her, face flushed and nervous.]narration: H-huh!?! e ee_?!Kyousuke FX: ji~~~~_4[Unlike the premonition dream, it is an angry Madoka who belts him on the cheek.]Madoka: What are you doing?!! nani sun no yo!!Madoka FX: ______ patsu_narration: N-no. I didn't mean to do chi chigau sonna tsumori ja...... that... mistaken in-that-kind-of-intention---------------------------------------------------p 280 (100)1[Hand to injured cheek, he stares up at the shelf of plates.]narration: _chikara_ Th-the Power... chi NOURYOKU ga...Kyousuke FX: ________ tsu----n2[Once again, he crackles with the Power.]Kyousuke: ___________ (Strange. Isn't my control (okashii kontoro--ru ga kikanai no ka?!) working?!) strange control (S) isn't-effective3[The plates start shaking against the closed glass panel.]plates FX: ____ ____ ____ gata gata gata4[The glass panel shatters and plates come flying out at them.]flying plates FX: ____ ___ ____ shu_ shu shu_---------------------------------------------------p 281 (101)1[He tackles Madoka to the floor. The plates sail over their heads and shatter against the wall.]shattered plates FX: gachan parin parin gacha_ Kyousuke: LOOK OUT!! abunai!!Kyousuke/Madoka FX: ___ do_2[Madoka ends up on her back. His chin comes to rest on her right breast.]Kyousuke: [eyes wide] ___ Ah! ha_3[He looks up at the devastation.]Madoka: Wh-what's... This? na nani... IMA no? what now 'snarration: Ahh, I was surprised. a-- bikkuri shita _chikara_ It looks like I can't NOURYOKU ga ZENZEN control my Power at all... Power (S) -at-all ___________ kontoro--ru dekinai mitai... can't-control seemsMadoka: W-was it an earthquake or ji...JISHIN demo atta something? earthquake or-something there-was n ja nai no~~~~ (explan) (?)---------------------------------------------------p 282 (102)1[Pov looking up at him. His face flushes and he stares down at her.]2[She looks up at him with eyes grown wide.]3[Her face grows a soft and a little inviting.]4Kyousuke: Is it so... Sweet? sonna ni... amai? so-much sweet5[Lying on top of her, he gazes into her eyes.]Madoka: Huh?! e_---------------------------------------------------p 283 (103)1[Overhead view looking down on the two. Madoka lies on her back, surrounded by shattered dishes. Kyousuke is perched over her.]narration: J-just as in that a...ano YOCHI-MU no toori... premonition dream... that premonition-dream just-as2[They stare into each other's eyes. His lips get closer to their long-cherished goal.]narration: Finally, with Ayukawa... tsui ni AYUKAWA to...... finally with-Ayukawa3[They close their eyes just before their lips are about to meet.]---------------------------------------------------p 284 (104)1[With a smile, Hikaru sticks her head in the kitchen. Kyousuke does a rapid roll to the side as Madoka sits up abruptly, her back to Hikaru. Both blush deeply.]Hikaru: SEMPAI!! sempai!!Madoka FX: pyonKyousuke FX: ________ gorogoro2[Hikaru enters the kitchen, smiling at Madoka. Madoka nervously smiles back. Kyousuke remains lying on his back on the floor. I think his heart stopped.]Hikaru: Madoka-saaan... Finished madoka-saan o-RYOURI dekimashitaa~~_?! cooking?!Kyousuke: ____ __ ____ ha-- ha zeii3[Hikaru slips on a broken plate...]Hikaru: Ah! aHikaru FX: ______ tsuru_4[...and pitches forward. Kyousuke is on his side, on the spot where she's about to hit.]Hikaru: ___ ___ to_ to_5[He turns to look back at Hikaru, just as she's about to land on him.]6[Her forehead comes to rest against his lips. Both pairs of eyes go wide with surprise.]Kyousuke/Hikaru FX: ____ chu_narration: Th-this is... That ko...kore wa ano YOCHI-MU... premonition dream... this-(one) (T) that-premonition-dream It seems that Ayukawa and AYUKAWA to hikaru-chan GYAKU Hikaru-chan were reversed! and opposite datta mitai! were seems---------------------------------------------------p 285 (105)1[Hikaru sits up and stares in wonder up at the ceiling. She touches a hand to her forehead.]Hikaru: Oh my! maa_ 2[Akane, face flushed, walks into the kitchen. Hikaru turns and smiles at her in embarrassment. Kyousuke's busy contemplating events.]Akane: Ohh... otto~~~~ You show-offs! misetsukete-kureru ja nai! showing-off-(to-me) is-notAkane FX: _____ fura_narration: _chikara_ Come to think of it, there so-- ieba NOURYOKU no CHOUSHI was something strange about come-to-think-of-it Power 's condition the Power... okashikatta mon na... was-strange thingHikaru: __ __ __ Oh no... Ha ha ha. iya~~ ha ha haKyousuke: (..........) (..........)3[Exterior shot of the Hiyama residence. A pair of kites fly overhead.]Hikaru: [off] Kyaaaa! kya~~~~_ ____ Sempai made the first kiss SEMPAI ni SHINSHUN HATSU kisu of the New Year!! by-Sempai the-New-Year first-kiss sarechatta~~~~~~_!! was-done/made-(finality) ____ ____ kya_ kya_narration: 1986... 1986 NEN---- At the beginning of the SHINSHUN so--so-- nogashita New Year, I let an enormous start-of-the-New-Year failed-to-catch/ fish get away. allowed-to-escape --Kyousuke SAKANA wa OOkii desu KYOUSUKE fish (T) huge is3 (inset 1)[In the kitchen with Madoka again, Kyousuke steals and samples some food off a plate. Blushing, he eyes her backside. Madoka is busy at the counter, chopping food.]Kyousuke: D-delicious! o...oishii_! Sure enough, Ayukawa, your yappari AYUKAWA no RYOURI wa cooking is awesome... sure-enough 's cooking (T) SAIKOU da ne~~~~ awesome is (rhet)Kyousuke FX: _____ hyoi paku_Madoka: .......... ..........Madoka FX: ___ ___ ton ton3 (inset 2)[Turning, kitchen knife raised high, Madoka addresses him as though he was a child. He flinches away.]Madoka: _________ We... bokuu~~~~Madoka: ...don't sneak bites when no tsumamigui shinai desho_ one's looking now, do we! poss-not-eat-when-no-one's-about---------------------------------------------------