Kimagure Orange Road"Don't Hypnotize Me!"Volume 11, Story 4WB Volume 6, Story 13Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose                                 Craig Nishida                                 Thomas Wyatt                                 Dan Root                                 Scott HenryLast revision : 08-19-95Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.eduNOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few      extras to those of you not having them.      Example: The subtitles on page 247 (67) are only in the WBs!---------------------------------------------------p 247 (67)--TITLE PAGE[Half-portrait of Madoka.  She faces us, lying on her side in bed, dressed in a slip with one strap down off her shoulder.]MAIN TITLE (at top)  Don't Hypnotize Me!             SAIMINJUTSU o kakenai de!                                  don't-hypnotizeSUB-TITLE (at bottom)  The Mysterious Fountain of      setsunaku                  hisoka ni  Your Breast, That I, with       painfully/heart-rendingly  secretly  Heart-Rending Pain, Secretly  Want to Gaze at...              mitsumete-itai                                  want-to-be-gazing-(at)                                  anata no  MUNE    no SHIMPI no   IZUMI...                                  your      breast/ 's mysterious  fountain/                                            heart                  spring---------------------------------------------------p 248 (68)1[Overhead view looking down on the Kasuga household.  Kurumi happily skips over to Manami, who's dutifully washing dishes.  Takashi is on the phone.]narration:  New Year's Eve, 1985...         1985 NEN   OUmisoka----                                       year  New-Year's-EveKurumi:  Hey, hey, Manami-chan.          ne-- ne--  manami-chan  Do you have a minute?           chotto de i-- karaManami:  Grrrr!  I'm busy now.           moo--_  IMA  isogashi--  kara                                       !  now  busy        that's-why  Later, later.                   ato de  ato de2Kurumi:  Then, otousan.                  ja oto--sanTakashi:  Later, later.                   ato de  ato de3[Kurumi looks over at her brother, who looks up from a book he's reading.]Kurumi:  Then...  All that's left        ja...  nokoru wa...  is...<Commentary:  Kyousuke is reading a horror novel, "The Keep" by some British writer whose name I've forgotten...  Grr...  Anyway, it's about Nazi zombies in some old European castle.  Incredibly stupid story with a lame romantic subplot.  Highly UNrecommended.>4[She smiles and raises a hand.]Kurumi:                                  ____  Yo!  Idle person.               iyo_!  himaJINKyousuke: [walking away]  Well, well...  Ahh,             sate to  a-- isogashi isogashi  busy, busy.5Kurumi:  I'm, like, really interested    atashi ne--_   IMA  SAIMINJUTSU ni  in hypnotism now.               I      (rhet)  now  in-hypnotism                                  kotte               n da--                                  being-engrossed-in  (explan)  Oniichan, you look like         oni--chan tte  kekko--  you're rather easy to put                 (T)  quite  under, huh?!                                  kakari -yasu -so--             ne--_                                  look-as-if-easy-to-fall-into  (rhet)Kyousuke: [wincing]  No way your hypnotism           omae no  SAIMINJUTSU  nanka  stuff would work...             your     hypnotism    the-likes-of                                  kiku  hazu ga na...                                  work  cannot/ought-not6[With a smile, Kurumi taps her left forefinger against the center of Kyousuke's forehead.  He freezes, eyes gone wide.]forehead FX:                      ____  <clap>                          chon---------------------------------------------------p 249 (69)1[Kurumi's expression grows dark.  With forefinger raised, she crackles with the Power.]Kurumi:  I touched the secret spot       DAI   -MIN    to yu--  SAIMINJUTSU ni  called "Daimin" <lit.,          great  sleep  called   by-hypnotism  "great sleep"> that  causes one to easily be         kakari-yasui       HIKOU        o  hypnotized...                   easy-to-fall-into  secret-spot (O)                                  tsuita...                                  touched  Now, you're a dog!!             omae wa   sude ni  INU ni  natte-iru!!                                  you  (T)  already  dog     are-becoming2[Kyousuke facial portrait--wide-eyed blank look.]3[He drops to the ground and gazes up at Kurumi.]Kyousuke:                         _____ ____  Woo...  Woof!                   u~~~~ wan_!Kurumi:  Hooray-y-y!!                    yatta----_!![Surprised, Manami turns to look.]4Kurumi:  Next, Matsumoto Noriko!!        tsugi wa   MATSUMOTO NORIKO!!                                  next  (T)  <name>[Under falling streamers and confetti, Kyousuke sings into his fist.]Kyousuke: [singing]  Frie-e-ends...                  toomodachi no~~5Kurumi:                           ____  An idiot!                       aho_![He does a striking imitation of a congenital idiot.]Kyousuke:  ..........                      ..........6Kurumi:  All right, that's it.           yoshi      koko made                                  all-right  up-to-here/thus-farKurumi handclap FX:               ___  <clap>                          panKyousuke:                         ___  Ah?!                            ha_?!7Kurumi:  Pretty much like this!          zatto    konna mon          yo!                                  roughly  this-kind-of-thingKyousuke: [staring at his hands]  C-can't be...?!                 ma masaka...?!8[Kurumi stares in worry into the face of a wincing Kyousuke.]Kurumi:  Huh?  Oh, no!                   ara  ikenai!                                  ___  The idiot part wasn't           aho   ga   tokete-nai  erased.                         idiot (S)  not-be-dispelling/clearingKyousuke:  Oh shuddup!!                    jaka--shi--!!                                  <yakamashii>---------------------------------------------------p 250 (70)1Kyousuke:  Hmm...  So I really was         u~~mu  HONTOU ni kakerareru  nante...  hypnotized...                          am-hypnotized         the-likes-of  And on top of that, by the      shikamo   konna yatsu ni  likes of her.                   moreover  by-this-kind-of-fellowKurumi:                           _____  <ahem!>                         e_hen!Manami:                                            _chikara_  We have the Power, so maybe     atashi-tachi tte  NOURYOKU ga aru  kara  that's why it's so easy to      we           (T)  have-the-Power   that's-why  hypnotize someone.                                  SAIMINJUTSU tte kake-yasui no ka mo ne                                  easy-to-hypnotize             maybe (rhet)2Kyousuke:                         ___  I'll try it, too.               ore mo   yatte-miyo--                                  I   too  shall-try-to-do                                  ____  Turn into a cat!!               neko ni nare!![Kyousuke touches Kurumi on her forehead.]forehead FX:                      ____  <clap>                          chon3Kurumi: [staring at the ceiling]  ..........                      ..........Manami:  Looks like it didn't work.      ki--te-nai     mitai ne                                  not-effective  seemsKyousuke:  Huh?                            are?4[He pokes her in the forehead again and again.  Kurumi shows amusement.]Kyousuke:                         _____  Turn into a koala!              koara ni nare_!  Into Kouchi Rie!                KOUCHI rie ni_!fingertip FX:  <touch touch>                   tsun tsunKurumi FX:                        ____ ____  <guffaw>                        kara karaKurumi:  No way.  No way.                nan no  nan no5Kurumi: [smiling]  Well, maybe this sort of        maa  oni--chan ni wa  highbrow trick is a little           by-oniichan  (contrast)  too much for oniichan,                        _________  hmm?                            ko-- yu--     haiburo-- na  WAZA   wa                                  this-kind-of  highbrow      trick/ (T)                                                              performance                                          ____                                  chotto  muri        ka mo      ne                                  a-bit   impossible  it-may-be  (rhet)Manami:  Oniichan, phone call from       oni--chan  hikaru-san kara  DENWA     yo  Hikaru-san.                                from-Hikaru      phone-call6[While Kyousuke talks on the phone, the other three Kasugas talk in the background.  Manami and Kurumi prance with joy.]Kyousuke: [brightly]  Eh?!  To Hatsumoude*?!          e_    HATSUmoude ni?!  Yeah, I see.                    un  wakatta  I'll go!!                       iku yo!!                                  ___  Coming to meet me here?         ore no tokoro ni  mukae ni?                                  at-my-place       to-meet  Sure.  Then, I'll be            un  ja    matte-ru   yo  waiting.                            then  be-waiting<*Commentary:  <hatsumoude> is the first visit to a shrine in the New Year.>Takashi:  Oh yeah.  That's right.         a sou sou  I got a phone call from         sakki               oji--chan kara  ojiichan a little while         a-little-while-ago  from-ojiichan  ago.                                  DENWA ga atte     na                                  having-phone-call  How's this sound?               do-- da  Shall we go there now?          IMA kara    itte-miyo--      ka                                  after-this  shall-go-and-see (?)Manami and Kurumi:  HOORAY-Y-Y!!                    yatta~~!!---------------------------------------------------p 251 (71)1Kyousuke:                                     _chi_  Eh?  To ojiichan's place?!      e  oji--chan IE ni?!Kurumi:  Yippee!  A trip, a trip!        wa--i  o-dekake o-dekake2[Kyousuke turns to look at the telephone.]narration:  I can't very well turn          sekkaku no  hikaru-chan no sasoi       o  down Hikaru's special           especially              's invitation (O)  invitation...                                  kotowaru   wake ni wa ikanai  shi...                                  turn-down  can't-very-well    consider                                                         ___  But, if I don't, then           demo  so-- suru to     ore  mata  I'll be alone again on          but   if-do-like-that  I    again  New Year's Day...*                                  SHOUGATSU              hitoribotchi kaa...*                                  the-New-Year-('s-day)  solitary3[He crosses his arms, closes his eyes and drops his head.  His sisters stop to watch him.  Kurumi rolls her eyes.]Kyousuke:  Hmm...                          u~~~mu...  Which should I choose...?       ittai         dotchi     o   toreba...                                  in-the-world  which-way (O)  if-chooseKyousuke FX:                      _____ _____  <mutter mutter>                 butsu butsuManami and Kurumi FX:  <stare>                         jito~~~~4[Kurumi leans over and touches his "Daimin" spot again.]Kurumi:  Now you're asleep.              omae wa   sude ni  nemutte-iru                                  you  (T)  already  are-sleepingfingertip FX:                     ____  <touch>                         tsun5[Kyousuke lies on his back on the living room floor, sound asleep.  From behind a closed door, we hear voices.]Kyousuke:                         _____  <snore>                         gua~~Takashi: [off]  Let's go.                       ikimasho  If we wait for him to           aitsu    ga   KImen no  decide, the New Year will       that-guy (S)  deciding  arrive.                                  matte-tara        TOSHI ga akechau   yo                                  when-are-waiting  the-year-begins-(finality)Manami: [off]  That's true.                    sore mo so-- nedoor FX:                          _____  <slam>                          batan6[Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment complex.]7[Kyousuke sits up in the darkened living room.]doorbell FX:                         _____  ___ _____  <...dong> <ding dong>           ...po--n  pin po--nKyousuke:                         ___  Oh!                             ha_note at bottom of page:                                    _______  *You need to read "A Swinging   *DAI-3   -KAN    "yurete rarabai"   o  Lullaby" in Volume 3!            the-3rd  volume  Swinging-Lullaby (O)                                  YOnde    hoshi--!                                  reading  need/desire<Commentary:  *Wideban* volume 3, that is.  "A Swinging Lullaby" is chapter 5.8, so consult volume 5 in the regular manga.>---------------------------------------------------p 252 (72)1note:  When you've decided, come.      KESSHIN tsuitara  oide                                  when-decided      come  We're going on ahead.           SAKI ni     Itte-ru                                  beforehand  are-going2[He pads over to the front door.]Kyousuke: (Left me behind, huh...          (oite kibori ni shi-yagatta      na                                   left-a-person-behind-(contempt)  Those cold-hearted              hakujo-- na        RENCHUU    -me...)  buggers...)                     cruel/coldhearted  set/troupe (derogatory)doorbell FX:                      ___ _____  <ding dong>                     pin po--n3[A beautiful girl in miniskirt, sweater and open jacket stands at the door.]Madoka:  Good evening.                   komban wa4narration:  AYUKAWA!                        AYUKAWA!5[Kyousuke's face takes on a slightly silly grin.]6[He takes her hand and drags her in, startling her.]Kyousuke: [smiling]  Well, come in, come in!         ma--  do--zo do--zo  haitte yo  Wasn't it cold!!                SAMUkatta  desho_!!                                  was-cold   poss-benarration:  I'm glad I didn't go along      yappari    tsuite-kanakute       yokatta!!  with them, after all!!          after-all  not-going-along-with  was-good---------------------------------------------------p 253 (73)1[Madoka tries to stifle a giggle with her hand.]Madoka:                           ___  TEE!                            pu_2Madoka:  Oh, I'm sorry.                  a gomen  It's no laughing matter!        WARAi goto ja nai ka!3Madoka:  You were left behind again,     mata   oitekebori kutchatta     no ne  hmm...                          again  were-left-behind-(finality/regret)[He forces a smile.]narration:  But, that's okay.               demo  i--   n da                                  but   fine  (explan)  Tomorrow I'll be doing          ashita   wa   hikaru-chan to  Hatsumoude with Hikaru-chan     tomorrow (T)  with-Hikaru  and...                                  HATSUmoude          da  shi...                                  first-temple-visit  is  and-besides  Ayukawa's come over and...      ko-- yatte       AYUKAWA wa                                  doing-like-this          (T)                                  kite-kureru   shi...                                  come-(to-me)  and-besides4[View pans back to show the two seated at the kotatsu, and watching TV.  An idol singer does her thing.  Must be the annual "Red and White Songfest."]narration:  Still, why did Ayukawa          sore ni shite mo  AYUKAWA  come by?                        but/still                                  nani  shi ni kita  n darou                                  what  came-to-do   (poss-explan)  Maybe...                        hyottoshite...5narration:  Well, whatever it is...         maa   nan ni se      yo                                  well  no-matter-what  It's just the two of us on      OOmisoka ni        futari kkiri...  New Year's Eve...               on-New-Year's-Eve  just-2-people6[His pov of Madoka, her beautiful face lit warmly by the glow from the TV.]narration:  Unlike always, I somehow        itsu-mo to           chigatte  feel tense...                   from-usually/always  unlike                                  nanka     ko--       kincho-- shichau na...                                  somewhat  like-this  am-tense-(finality)---------------------------------------------------p 254 (74)1[It's later, and they're still watching TV.]TV:                                                      _______  This year's 10 Biggest          KOTOSHI   no 10 DAI-   nyu--su...  News...                         this-year 's    great  news2narration:  Isn't there anything to         nani-ka    WADAI wa  nai         mono  ka  talk about?                     something  topic-of-conversation thing (?)                                                   (T) not-have  I shouldn't keep silent...      damatte-ru        nante                                  remaining-silent  the-likes-of                                  yoku nai   yo na...                                  not-good3Kyousuke: [face flushed, wide-eyed]  S-say!                          ne nee_!  Do you believe in hypnosis?     SAIMINJUTSU tte  SHINjiru?                                  hypnotism   (T)  believe-in4Madoka:  What?  Hypnosis?                e?  SAIMINJUTSUKyousuke:  Right...                        sou...  When you're hypnotized,         kakattara        nan demo yu-- koto  anything that's said is         when-hypnotized  anything/whatever-say  obeyed.                                  kiku  yo-- ni naru           n da    yo ne                                  obey  reach-the-point-where  (explan)5Madoka:  For example...                  tatoeba......  In what way?                    donna fuu ni?6Kyousuke:  Let's see, let's see.           etto etto7[His eye comes to rest on the TV screen...]TV screen:                                 ______  Serial Drama:  LOVE SLAVE       RENZOKU  dorama    AI   no DOREI                                  serial   drama     love 's slave---------------------------------------------------p 255 (75)1[He touches her forehead.  Sparks seem to fly in the background.]Kyousuke:  You're now my slave.            omae wa   sude ni                                  you  (T)  already                                  ore no dorei ni  natte-iru                                  into-my-slave    are-turning-into2[Madoka's eyes grow large and a bit glassy.]3[He falls back in embarrassment and mirth.]Kyousuke:                                       ________  I wish-h-h!  Ha ha ha ha!       nua--nchatte  hahahahanarration:                                    ______  I-I wonder if that was going    chi chotto  kageki    datta  ka na?!  a bit too far?!                     a-bit   excessive was    I-wonder4narration:  But...                          demo...                                  ___  Maybe it worked...?!            uketa     ka na...?!                                  received  I-wonderKyousuke:  You can't be hypnotized         konna        no     kakaru     hazu nai  like this, can you.             this-kind-of (nom)  hypnotize  not-likely  Ha ha ha!                                __ __ __                                  yo ne--  ha ha ha[Madoka remains seated on the floor, merely watching him.]---------------------------------------------------p 256 (76)1[She kneels, her heels under her, and bows to him.]Madoka:  Yes...                          hai...  Anything you command...         nan narito  MEIREI   o...                                  anything    command (O)  Master.                         go-SHUJIN-sama                                  (hon)-master-(high-hon)[Kyousuke's eyes bug out...]2[...and he stares at his forefinger.]Kyousuke:  Eh?  Eh?                        e? e?3Kyousuke: [embarrassed]  Ohh, you surprised me again.    a--  bikkuri shita  mataa                                       surprised      again  Will you quit joking around,    jo--dan wa   yameyo--   yo    AYUKAWA!  Ayukawa!                        joking  (T)  shall-quit4[Madoka facial portrait--a smoldering gaze.]Madoka:  Please call me, "Madoka"...     ...madoka to      o-yobi  kudasai                                            (quote)   call  please5[Kyousuke portrait--he throws up his hands and flinches back.]---------------------------------------------------p 257 (77)1[Madoka portrait.]narration:  It...  It really worked?!       ho... HONTOU ni  kakatchatta  no?!                                        really     hypnotized2[She stands demurely and bows her head.  He ponders the ceiling and then turns to stare at her.]Kyousuke:                                 ___  B-but I've...                   de demo ore...  Never kept a slave like         sonna dorei      nanka  that...                         slave-like-that  somewhat                                  TSUKAtta       koto      nai      shi                                  employed/kept  occasion  not-have and-besides  What'll I do?                   do-- shiyo  I'd better bring her back.      moto ni    modosanakya                                  to-origin  if-not-returnMadoka:  If there is no use for          go-YOU                 ga   nai  me...                           (hon)-business/service (S)  not-have                                  no nara...                                     if-it-is3Madoka:  I'm leaving.                    KAErimasu[She turns to leave and he chases after her.]Kyousuke:  Oh, wait!                       a matte  You came all the way over       sekkaku     kita  n da      shi...  here...                         especially  came  (explan)  and-besides  And it's so cold outside!       HOKA    wa   SAMUi  yo_                                  outside (T)  coldMadoka brisk walk FX:             ____ ____  <stride stride>                 suta suta4Kyousuke:  Oh, that's right.               a so-- da  So, Ayukawa--I mean,            ja  AYUKAWA  ja nakatta  madoka!  Madoka!                         so           was-not[She turns and smiles.]Madoka:  Yes?                            hai5Kyousuke:                         _____  Make me dinner.                 meshi demo          tsukutte                                  meal  or-something  making  Oh yeah, and also heat up       so-- da  tsuide ni  the bath for me!!                        by-the-way/in-this-connection                                  ____                                  furo  o   wakashite-kure_!!                                  bath (O)  heat-(for-me)-(command)  I mean, "please"...  Sorry.     iya  kudasai...    sumimasennarration:  If this isn't real,             HONTOU  ja nakattara  ato   ga   kowai...  things'll get scary later...    true    if-is-not     later (S)  frightful6Madoka: [brightly]  YES!                            hai!7[He sits at the kotatsu and eats noodles from a bowl.  Madoka arrives with a tray of tea.]Kyousuke FX:                      ____ ____  <slurp slurp>                   zuru zurunarration:  Gee...  This is heaven.         iya--   gokuraku gokuraku  Heaven!                                _chikara_  My Power isn't something        ore no NOURYOKU mo   suteta  to be cast aside...             my-Power        too  cast-away/gave-up                                  mon    ja nai  na...                                  thing  is-not---------------------------------------------------p 258 (78)1[He stares at her as she pours.]narration:  She's hypnotized.               SAIMINJUTSU ni kakatte-ru                                  is-being-hypnotized  That means...                   tte yu-- koto wa...                                  in-that-case/that-meanstea kettle FX:                    ____ ____  <glub glub>                     toku toku2[Tight shot of his hand as he reaches out to her.]narration:  For example...                  tatoeba...3[He pulls the startled Madoka down into his lap.]Kyousuke FX:  <yank!>                         gui_Madoka:  Ah!                             a_4[He leans against her back and embraces a shoulder.]narration:  Even if I do something like     konna koto          o   shite-mo...  this...                         this-kind-of-thing (O)  even-tho-doKyousuke/Madoka heartbeat FX:     ____ ____ ____  <thump thump thump>             doki doki doki5[His hand starts to drift down from her shoulder to her...]narration:  When I...                       konna...Kyousuke hand FX:                 ___ ___  <edge edge...>                  tsu tsu...6narration:  ...do something like this,      ...koto   shitara  hippatakare sou...  I'll get slapped...                thing  when-do  be-slapped  look-as-if[Back to reality!  He tosses his cup of tea in the air.]Kyousuke:  Yee-ow-ow-ow...                 achachachacha~~~~---------------------------------------------------p 259 (79)1[She leans in close.  He freezes and stares into her eyes.]Madoka:                           ______  Hop into...  The bath.          o-furo...  waite-masu                                  bath       are-springing-forthKyousuke:  Ye...  Yes...                   ha...  hai...2[Tight shot of his shirt as it lands on a clothes tray.]clothes FX:                       _____  <flutter!>                      pasa_3[Kyousuke looks up as he begins to remove his pants.  Madoka has entered the bathroom and begins to remove her sweater.]Kyousuke:                         ___  Ah!                             ha_4[Half-portrait of Madoka as she lifts up her sweater, baring her midriff.]5[Kyousuke's face flushes and he stares wide-eyed.]Kyousuke FX:                      _____  <gulp>                          gokun6[With an embarrassed smile he hustles a reluctant Madoka down the hall, away from the bathroom.]Madoka:  I thought I'd wash your         atashi  o-SENAKA nagaso--      to...  back...                         I       shall-wash-(hon)-back  <to omotta>                                                                  thought-thatKyousuke:                                                    __ __ __  I...  I can do that myself.     ji...JIBUN de    yaru  yo  ha ha ha  Ha ha ha!                            by-oneself  do                                               ____  Oh, if you like, you can        a yokattara  kimi mo   ato de  bathe afterwards!                 if-good    you  too  afterwards                                  haitte     i--   yo!                                  coming-in  okay---------------------------------------------------p 260 (80)1[He sits in the tub.]narration:  Ohhhh...  She surprised me.     a~~~~  bikkuri shita  But...  I also feel like        demo...  ISSHO ni  haitte-mitai  bathing with her...             but      together  want-to-try-to-come-in                                  KI mo suru        kedo...                                  think/feel-(too)  butKyousuke heartbeat FX:            ____ ____  <thump thump>                   doki dokiKyousuke FX:                      ______  <splish>                        chapun2[He soaks up to his neck, staring up at the ceiling in thought.]narration:  If it's hypnotism of this       konna SAIMINJUTSU       dattara  sort, it'd be great even        this-kind-of-hypnotism  if-it-is  if it wasn't undone for a  while.                          zutto         tokenai                                  all-the-time  not-be-cleared/dispelled                                  mama demo          i--   naa                                  even-if-like-this  good  (rhet)  If only this could last         semete     o-SHOUGATSU   ippai......  through New Year's...           if...only  the-New-Year  all-ofKyousuke:                                     ____ (Maybe it won't, after           (yappa      dame     ka na...)  all...)                          after-all  no-good  I-wonder3Kyousuke:                         ________  <Yaw-w-wn!>                     fua~~~~_  Maybe I'll go to bed now.       sorosoro  neyo--       ka naa                                  soon/now  shall-sleep  I-wondernarration:  When I took a bath, I got       o-FURO ni haittara  nemuku  natchatta...  sleepy...                       when-take-a-bath    sleepy  became-(finality)4[He stands in his darkened bedroom, wrapped only in a towel.   Madoka, wearing just a towel herself, comes up close behind him.]Madoka:  Yes.                            haiKyousuke heartbeat FX:            _____  <thump>                         dokin5[His pov of her.  That towel doesn't appear to be on too tight.]Madoka:  With me...                      atashi de......  If you'd like, Master...        yokattara  go-SHUJIN-sama...                                  if-okay    (hon)-master-(high-hon)---------------------------------------------------p 261 (81)1[His face flushes and goes into overload.]Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            _____  <thump>                         dokin2[Tight shot of his hand on his door.  He opens it...]door FX:                          ______  <clack>                         gachan3[...exits, and shuts it behind him.  He leans back against the door, clutching a shirt to his bare chest.]TV: [off]  The old year's making way       yuku TOSHI    kuru TOSHI   mamonaku  for the new and it'll soon      old-year-out  new-year-in  soon  be 1986.                                  1986-NEN   desu                                      -year  isnarration:  I-is she talking about          ne neru  tte     AYUKAWA...?!  going to bed...?!                  sleep (quote)door FX:                          _____  <slam>                          batan4[Inside, Madoka tosses her hair back.]Madoka hair FX:                   ___  <fwipp!>                        ba_5[He remains leaning back against the closed door.]narration:                        ___  I'm...                          ore tte...  Always indecisive and           itsu-mo  YUUJUUFUDAN     de  just hesitating, but...         always   indecisiveness  am-(and)                                  mayotte     bakari  da  kedo...                                  hesitating  only    am  butTV countdown FX: [off]            _____  <peep>                          pippoKyousuke heartbeat FX:            ____ ____  <thump thump>                   doki doki6[Blushing and staring up at the ceiling, he tosses the shirt to the floor.]narration:  On second thought, under        KANGAete-mirya            kono JOUKYOU  these circumstances just        if-try-to-think-about-it  this-circumstance  now, I don't really need  to...                           KONDO bakari   wa          BETSU ni                                  only-this-time (contrast)  particularly                                  mayou     koto...                                  hesitate  <koto nai> = there's-no-needshirt FX:                         ____  <toss!>                         poi_TV countdown FX: [off]            _____  <peep>                          pippo7[He reaches for the doorknob to his bedroom door.]narration:  Hesitate!!                      nai ka!!TV countdown FX: [off]            _____  <PING>                          pi--n---------------------------------------------------p 262 (82)1TV: [off]  Happy New Year, 1986...         omedeto-- gozaimasu 1986-NEN...doorbell FX: [off]                ___ _____  <ding dong>                     pin po--n[Kyousuke pauses and turns to look off-panel.]2[A voice calls out from behind the closed front door.]Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            _____  <thump>                         dokinHikaru: [off]  Sempa-a-ai!                     sempa--i!3[Kyousuke's face becomes a mask of pure horror.]narration:  H-Hikaru-chan?!                 hi hikaru-chan?!4[He hops about trying to get his pants on.]narration:  Wh-why right now...?!           do do--shite  imagoro...?!                                     why        now  I thought she'd be coming       TASHIka      kuru no  wa   akete  on New Year's morn.             as-I-recall  coming   (T)  opening                                  ASA     no     hazu  ja                                  morning (nom)  oughtHikaru: [off]  Can I come in?                  haitte i-- desu kaKyousuke:  Huh?  Ahh...  W-well...         e  a...  so so-- ne...Kyousuke FX:  <in a flurry>                   atafuta5Kyousuke: (O-oh no!!                       (ma mazui!!  Ayukawa's in my room...)        HEYA ni wa          AYUKAWA ga...)                                  in-room (contrast)          (S)6[Shot of a lovely pair of bare legs.  A towel has come to rest on the floor at her feet.]Madoka towel FX:                  _____  <flutter!>                      pasa_---------------------------------------------------p 263 (83)1[Hikaru bursts through the front door, smiling.]Hikaru:  Happy New Year!!                akemashite  omedeto-- gozaimasu!!                                  opening     congratulationsdoor FX:                          ______  <clack!>                        gacha_2[He flinches back, terrified.]Kyousuke:  Ai-i-ee-ee-ee!!                 wahi~~~~~~!!narration:  Jeez...  This is terrible!!     korya...  mo-- akan!!3[He pauses, wide-eyed, as a hand taps him on the shoulder.]Madoka:  Well, shall we go?              sa ikimasho-- kaMadoka hand-on-shoulder FX:       ___  <bop>                           pon4[He turns to find Madoka standing fully dressed behind him.  She smiles.]5[View pans back.]Madoka:  To Hatsumoude!                  HATSUmoude ni!---------------------------------------------------p 264 (84)1Madoka: [smiling]  Happy New Year, Hikaru.         omedeto-- hikaruHikaru: [gaily]  Happy New Year, Madoka-san.     omedeto-- gozaimasu madoka-san2[Kyousuke--a portrait in confusion.]3Madoka:                                      _____  Kasuga-kun, aren't your         KASUGA-kun zubon ga  GYAKU        ja nai?  pants on backwards?                        pants (S) the-opposite are-not[Kyousuke twists around to look at his rear.  Yup, there's the zipper.]Kyousuke:  Ah!  Oh no!                     a_ ikene4[Isolated night shot of the gate to a temple.]Hikaru: [off]  What kinda strange face are     nani  o   FUSHIGI so-- na KAO   shite-ru  you making?                     what (O)  strange-seeming-face  are-making                                  n desu   ka?                                  (explan) (?)Kyousuke: [off]  N-nothing.                      i iya  Can't be...                     masaka...  Hatsumoude at night...          HATSUmoude         ga   YACHUU    to wa...                                  first-temple-visit (S)  at-night  (define)5[Madoka walks on a bit ahead, her back to the other two.]Hikaru: [merrily]  Oh, come on...  Really,         matamata~~~~  SEMPAI ttara  Sempai!                                              (I-tell-you)  You heard it from               madoka-san ni ki--te-ru  kuse ni  Madoka-san!                     are-hearing-from-Madoka  although  I forgot to tell you it         atashi ga   KOMBAN tte      TSUTAewasureta  was tonight, so I had           I      (S)  night  (quote)  forgot-to-tell  Madoka-san go over to  your place.                     n de   madoka-san ni  SEMPAI no IE ni                                  since  by-Madoka      to-Sempai's-place                                  itte-moratta   n ja nai     desu ka~~                                  had-(her)-go   (explan/neg)Kyousuke: [stunned]  EH!?!                           e_?!---------------------------------------------------p 265 (85)1[Madoka turns to look back at him.]narration:  Although knowing that           hikaru-chan ga   kuru  to yu--  no    mo  Hikaru-chan would be                        (S)  come  say-that (nom) too  coming...                                  SHOUCHI no ue de...                                  being-aware-of  Then that means, that           to yu-- koto wa  hypnosis a little while         that-means  ago was...                                  sakki              no SAIMINJUTSU wa......                                  a-little-while-ago 's hypnosis    (T)Kyousuke: [sweaty, nervous]  Eh?!  S-so...                   e_  ji ja...2narration:  That was all...                 ZEMBU......                                  the-whole-time[His pov of Madoka.  Smiling, she pulls down an eyelid and sticks out her tongue.]narration:  An act...                       ENGI    datta  n da...                                  acting  was    (explan)3[Madoka breaks out in a merry smile.  Overlaid on this is Kyousuke's speech bubble, with his anguished face adorning it.]Kyousuke:  H-hey-y-y!!                     a ano ne~~_!!narration:  Sure enough, she's an           yappari      ICHI-MAI UWATE...na  extraordinary...                sure-enough  a-cut-above                                  _enjeru_  Angel!                          TENSHI!---------------------------------------------------