Kimagure Orange Road"White Christmas"Volume 11, Story 3WB Volume 6, Story 12Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Thomas Wyatt Dan Root Jerry LeeLast revision : 08-19-95Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.eduNOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 227 (47) are only in the WBs!---------------------------------------------------p 227 (47)--TITLE PAGE[A lovely half-portrait of Madoka. She smiles softly at us, wearing a strapless black dress, both hands raised, palms towards us. Reflected in each of her luminous eyes is an image of Kyousuke's face.]MAIN TITLE (at top) _______ __________ White Christmas howaito - kurisumasuSUB-TITLE (at bottom) Reflected in My Eyes Is HITOMI ni utsuru wa My Catch! in-(pupil-of)-eye be-reflected-in (T) atashi no EMONO! my catch/take/capture/booty/prize---------------------------------------------------p 228 (48)1[Exterior shot of the school.]narration: This year has gone by so HAYAi mono de KOTOSHI mo quickly, and not much quick inasmuch-as this-year too remains... ato wazuka... the-rest only/merely/just/barely2[Shot of a school building.]Hikaru: [off] And so... to yu-- wake denarration: __________ ___ Tomorrow is Christmas Eve. ashita wa kurisumasu - ibu tomorrow (T) Christmas-Eve3Hikaru: I'm throwing a Christmas KOTOSHI wa atashi no IE de party at my place this this-year (T) at-my-place year!! __________ ________ kurisumasu - pa--ti-- o yarimasu_!! Christmas-party (O) do By all means, please come!! zehi kite-kudasai_!! by-all-means come-(please)4[She clasps her hands before her, and smiles up at him.]Hikaru: Especially you, Sempai! TOKU ni SEMPAI! Because, just for you, SEMPAI no tame ni Sempai, I'm going all out for-the-sake-of to make lots of treats! UDE ni yori o kakete exerting-one's-utmost-skill gochiso-- ippai tsukutchaimasu kara ne! treat full-of make-(finality) that's-whyKyousuke: [forced smile] S-sure... ha haa...5[Hikaru smiles over at Madoka, who sits at her desk, smiling.]Hikaru: You, too, Madoka-san!! madoka-san mo zehi_!! By all means!! too without-fail/by-all-meansMadoka: I see... so-- ne6[Hiromi adjusts her glasses and approaches Kyousuke from behind. Kyousuke turns to look.]Hiromi: Hmm? If Kasuga-kun is he-- KASUGA-kun ga iku no nara going, maybe I'll go, too. (S) going if-it-is atashi mo iko-- ka naa I too shall-go I-wonder---------------------------------------------------p 229 (49)1[She points at Kyousuke and turns to everyone present.]Hiromi: This guy's a mean drinker!! koitsu SHURAN desho--_!! this-guy vicious-drinker poss-be He was famous even at our MAE no GAKKOU demo YUUMEI last school, y'know! previous-school even famous/well-known datta n da yo ne--_ was (explan) (rhet)2[She gazes off into the distance, pondering.]Hiromi: When was that? itsu datta ka when was (?) __________ Carrying off the dummy of kontakki-- ojisan no NINGYOU kakaete Colonel Sanders and Kentucky man 's dummy carry-(and) jumping into the pool... IKE no NAKA ni tobikondari shite... into-pool/pond jump-(and)Kyousuke: [shouting, wincing] ____ Wasn't it you who pushed me ano TOKI wa kimi ga tsukiotoshita that time! that-time (T) you (S) pushed-(me) n desho (poss-explan)3[Hikaru clings to Kyousuke's arm. Hiromi, arms crossed, and another girl look on.]Kyousuke: [embarrassed] __ ___ ___ a_ ha_ ha_Hikaru: [merrily] ________ Ohh, Sempai. Unique! ma-- sempai yuni--ku![Hatta studies this scene from his desk.]4Hatta: [turning to Komatsu] Somehow... nanka yo-- ___ I wonder if Kasuga is better KASUGA tte ore yori i-- OTOKO looking than me? (T) I than good-looking-guy na no ka naa is (nom) I-wonderKomatsu: Aren't you similar? NIta yo-- na mon ja nai? similar appear person is-not5Hatta: Then why this difference...? ja kono chigai wa na n daro... then this-difference (T) is (poss-explan)[View pans back to show Kyousuke surrounded by Hikaru, Hiromi and 4 other female classmates.]6Komatsu and Hatta: (Hmmmm!!) (u~~~mu_!)7[Madoka also watches this scene.]Kyousuke/Hikaru/Hiromi/girl: ___ ___ ___ __ wa_ ha_ ha_ ha...---------------------------------------------------p 230 (50)1[Exterior evening shot of ABCB.]2[Kyousuke rests his cheek in a hand and smiles contentedly.]Kyousuke FX: ________ nikoniko3[Madoka brings him a cup of coffee.]Madoka: Lately... SAIKIN... You seem to be happy at GAKKOU de wa TANOshi so-- ne school, hmm. at-school (contrast) look-as-if-happyKyousuke: Eh?! Really? e_ sou4[He stops to smile up at the ceiling. Splashed into his narration are facial portraits of Sayuri, Hiromi and Hikaru.]narration: Come to think of it, the so-- ieba kono MAE no last one , and the one who transferred to ii Hiromi>, and then ... TENKOU shite-kita came-and-transferred soshite... and/then Somehow, I've been fairly naze-ka SAIKIN wa kekko-- well-surrounded by girls somehow lately (T) fairly-well lately... ONNA no KO ni kakomarete... by-girls being-surrounded5[Madoka watches him as a slack expression comes over his face. He still ponders up at the ceiling.]narration: ___ ____ I wonder if girls think I'm ore tte moshiya moteru no hot... I (T) if being-popular-with-girls de wa...... amMadoka: .......... ..........6[He still stares at the ceiling.]Madoka: [off] able-to-carry and the verb is a homonym that can either mean "popular with girls" or "can carry". Thus, when Kyousuke thinks she's saying, "You're quite popular with girls, aren't you," she's REALLY saying, "I can carry quite a lot, can't I.">7[He blushes, and with an embarrassed yet pleased smile, raises a hand in modest denial.]Kyousuke: Nahhh! C'mon, it's nothing iya~~~~_ sonna koto nai sa~~~_!! like that!! ! thing-like-that not-have ___ ___ ___ ___ wa_ ha_ ha_ ha_ __ __ __ ha ha ha C'mon. ya da na Quit teasing, Ayukawa... AYUKAWA karakatte...---------------------------------------------------p 231 (51)1[He opens his eyes and sees that Madoka is struggling to carry a large tray laden with drinks. Master looks at her with concern.]Master: _____ This tray is pretty large, kono torei kekko-- OOkii kara ne so watch out. this-tray quite large/bulky that's-why But it's better not to carry demo ICHIDO ni so much all at once. but at-the-same-time/together anmari motanai ho-- ga ii yo not-so-much -carry betterMadoka: Hey, this is a little heavy. chotto OMOi na a-bit heavy (rhet)2Kyousuke: ___ Oh! I'll carry that for a_ ore ga hakonde-ageru yo you. ! I (S) carry-(for-you) It's too heavy for a girl! ONNA no KO ni wa OMOi desho_! to-girl (contrast) heavy poss-beMadoka: Huh? e3[He walks away with the tray. Madoka stares wide-eyed at his back.]Kyousuke: Madoka: .......... ..........4Kyousuke: Let's see... etto...Kyousuke FX: ______ chira_5[His attention is caught by two young women seated at a table. The blonde is smiling and raising her arm in greeting. The brunette also smiles.]girl 1: _____ __ Oh! Cool-looking oniisan a soko no kakko ii oni--san over there! Come here, that-place 's cool come here! kotchi kotchi this-waynarration: __ _____ __ C-cool?! ka kakko ii?!6[He closes his eyes and tosses his hair back in a smug pose. Of course, this means he must be carrying the tray with one hand.]Kyousuke: (G-girls think I'm hot, (ya yappari ore tte after all?!) after-all I (T) moteru no de wa?!) being-popular-with-girls7collision FX: ____ ______ don_ gachan---------------------------------------------------p 232 (52)1[The tray lies upside-down on the floor at his feet. He's splashed drinks over the skirt and leg of a woman.]Kyousuke: Ahhhh, I-I'm sorry. a~~~~ su suimasenwoman: Ohh. n ma--2woman: Grrrr. This dress was moo~~~~~~ kono FUKU TAKAkatta expensive! this-dress was-expensive no yo~~~~~~[Over the angry woman's shoulder we can see the 2 young women whooping it up.]girl 2: [to girl 1] ______ Really, Eri! Getting drunk ERI ttara sonna bo--ya and teasing a kid like (I-tell-you) that-kind-of-kid/boy that... yopparatte karakau get-drunk-(and) tease/play-a-joke-on kara yo~~~~ that's-why3Madoka: [to the angry woman] I'm sorry... sumimasen...4[He looks up with a doleful expression.]Kyousuke: .......... ..........Kyousuke FX: shun5[Madoka drops her gaze and glares at the ground.]Madoka: [angrily] Hey... chotto... It's nice that you're TETSUDA tte kureru no wa i-- kedo... offering to help... help (T) giving (T) nice but6Madoka: But aren't you kind of SAIKIN chotto ukarete n ja nai?! bubbly these days?! lately a-bit being-in-high-spiritsKyousuke FX: _____ giku_7[The blonde smiles over from her table and addresses Kyousuke as though he were a little kid.]Eri: ____ Little boy-y-y. You should boku~~ mo-- KAEtte netaraa go home now and get some "I" now go-home-(and) if-sleep sle-e-eep.8[Madoka finally looks up and meets his eye. She has a bit of a mischievous look.]Madoka: ____ Little boy-y-y. You should boku~~ mo-- KAEtte netaraa go home now and get some "I" now go-home-(and) if-sleep sle-e-eep.[Kyousuke's eyes grow large and he blushes and sweats.]Kyousuke FX: _____ ga~~n---------------------------------------------------p 233 (53)1Kyousuke: [exiting meekly] S-sorry... go gomen... ________ tobotobodoor FX: _____ karan2[Master and Madoka stare off-panel. Madoka still looks a bit angry.]door FX: [off] _____ karan3Master: [smiling] Hey... chotto...... Wasn't that too harsh? kitsukatta n ja nai? was-severe (explan/neg)running water FX: ____ ja--Madoka: [angrily] ________ Master, you've left the masuta-- o-MIZU DAshippanashi! water running! water leave-flowing4[Master looks at her a little nervously, but Madoka is staring the other way.]Master: R-right... ha hai...faucet FX: ____ ____ kyu_ kyu_Madoka: ____ That... Idiot! ano... aho_!5[He walks home, staring at the sidewalk.]Kyousuke: ___ Hmmph. Bully. fun ijimekKOnarration: Th-that was too much. a anmari ja nai ka She didn't have to do that nani-mo HITOMAE de anna koto... in public... everything in-public that-kind-of-thing Ayukawa's so cold... AYUKAWA tte tsumetai naa (T) cold/cold-hearted (rhet)6[Exterior shot of the Hiyama residence.]narration: And then... soshite... The following evening... YOKUJITSU no YORU next-day 's evening/nightHikaru: [off] ______ MERRY... meri--...---------------------------------------------------p 234 (54)1Hikaru: __________ CHRISTMAS!! kurisumasu!![Manami and Hikaru set off their party poppers as Hiromi and Kurumi applaud.]party poppers FX: ___ _____ pan papan2[Komatsu, Hatta and Yuusaku check out the depressed Kyousuke.]narration: .......... .......... Here are shrewd ones... chakkari kite-yagaru... shrewd/clever/calculating come-(contempt)Yuusaku: Ohhhh... You were here? nan da...... o-MAE kite-ta no ka you were-coming (?)3narration: But... shikashi...Kyousuke: [looking up with surprise] Huh? Where's Ayukawa? are? AYUKAWA wa...4[Kyousuke overhears...]Hikaru: [to Hiromi] Oh yeah, that's right. a so-- so-- Madoka-san called a little madoka-san nara sakki while ago and said she if-it-is a-little-while-ago couldn't come! DENWA de korenai tte! phone-call-(and) can't-come (quote) __________ I bet she's at kitto ko--taro-- -kun no tokoro da na-- Koutarou-kun's place... surely 's place is (rhet) Tonight... KON'YA wa tonight (T)Hiromi: [showing a thumbs-up] ____ Ohh? Maybe doing this? he-- hyottoshite kore? maybe/possibly this-(one)Kyousuke drinking FX: _____ bufu_5[Kyousuke stares in shock.]narration: __________ "Koutarou-kun"... ko--taro-- -kun tte... Wh-what? na nan da Wh-who's that? da DARE da Who's that guy?! sono OTOKO wa?!---------------------------------------------------p 235 (55)1[He visualizes Madoka, irritated with him at ABCB the other day.]narration: Ah! If... ha_ moshiya...Madoka: [flashback] But aren't you kind of SAIKIN chotto ukarete n ja nai?! bubbly these days?! lately a-bit being-in-high-spirits2[His expression turns serious.]narration: ___ ...... Does she hate me ......ore kinou no koto de because of what happened I about-yesterday on-account-of yesterday?! KIRAwareta n de wa...?! was-disliked 'cause (T) C-can't be... so sonna... B-but... de demo... No. Wait, wait. iya mate mate3narration: Ayukawa would never spend masaka AYUKAWA ga sonna Christmas with some other can't-be (S) that-kind-of guy... __________ hoka no OTOKO to kurisumasu o with-another-guy Christmas (O) sugosu nante pass/spend the-likes-of I'm sure this is some sort kitto mata nani-ka no machigai ni of mistake again!! surely again something (nom) by-mistake KImatte-ru sa!! be-sure-to-be[Komatsu laughs and fills Kyousuke's glass.]Komatsu: What's the matter with you? do-- shita omae You look so pale... KAO-IRO WARUi na-- Not enough to drink yet? mada nomi -tarinai n ja nai? yet drink not-enoughpouring FX: ____ ____ toku toku4[Hikaru and Kyousuke turn at the sound of...]phone FX: #RRR#5[Kyousuke listens in from nearby.]Hikaru: [on phone] Hello? Oh, Madoka-san. hai a madoka-san Really? so-- desu ka You're going now? IMA kara iku n desu ka from-now go (explan) (?)Kyousuke FX: _____ giku_6[Kyousuke stares at Hikaru, who's off-panel.]Hikaru: [off] Then you should take along ja attakai gochiso-- motte-iku to some warm treats. then warm treats take/carry if i-- desu yo good is __________ Koutarou-kun will be ko--taro--kun yorokobimasu yo! delighted!7[Kyousuke glares down at his drink. In the background, Kurumi and Hikaru chat, and Komatsu helps himself to some cake.]narration: Wha-a-at?! nan daa~~~~ ___ Was that call just now a IMA no DENWA ore ni TAIsuru poke at me...?! now 's phone-call toward-me atetsuke na no ka...?! insinuating-(remark) is (?)---------------------------------------------------p 236 (56)1[Komatsu refills Kyousuke's glass. Kyousuke is looking a bit blasted here.]2[Hikaru laughs and leans up against him.]3[He visualizes Madoka leaning up against a faceless guy.]4[In his daydream, Madoka, in the arms of the guy, casts a sly glance Kyousuke's way.]5[Kyousuke flushes angrily.]glass FX: _____ _____ gachi gachinarration: Arrggg! Really!! e~~~~i moo!!6[Exterior shot of the Hiyama residence.]everyone: [off] ___ ___ ___ Wah! ha! ha! wa_ ha_ ha_party noise FX: _______ _______ donchan donchan7[Hikaru, looking a bit plastered, searches about the room.]Hikaru: [slurring] Huh? Sempai...? hare? SEMPAI...? When did he disappear? itsu no mani doko e unnoticed/before-one-knows to-whereHikaru FX: _____ _____ kyoro kyoroKomatsu: [pointing upstairs] _____ ____ To the bathroom to puke toire de gero demo... or something... in-toilet puke or-somethingHatta: [clapping a hand over Komatsu's mouth] Stop it! That's nasty! yoshinasai kitanai! stop-(command) nasty/filthy/mean---------------------------------------------------p 237 (57)1[Exterior shot of the Ayukawa residence. It is raining.]rain FX: _____ za--_sign: Ayukawa AYUKAWA2[Kyousuke rematerializes in the rain. In one hand he holds a slice of cake on a plate.]Kyousuke teleport FX: ____ shu_3Kyousuke: ______ Shoot! I brought a cake! ikene! ke--ki motte-kichatta cake brought-(finality/regret)4[He shivers and sneezes. Nearby, the front gate opens.]Kyousuke: ______ Ah-choo! It's so cold! kushon! tsumetee! = cold/chillygate FX: _____ gacha5[He peeks around the corner to see Madoka exit her front gate.]Madoka footstep FX: ___ ko_6[She opens an umbrella.]narration: Ayukawa...!! AYUKAWA...!!---------------------------------------------------p 238 (58)1[She looks to one side...]2[...and walks in the opposite direction. In addition to the open umbrella, she carries a basket.]Madoka footsteps FX; ___ ___ ___ ko_ ko_ ko_3[Kyousuke portrait.]narration: Where in the world is she ittai doko ni iku n da? going to? in-the-world to-where go (explan) __________ To that guy's--that yappari ko--taro--kun toka yu-- Koutarou-kun or whoever's after-all so-called --place, after all?! OTOKO no tokoro e?! to-guy's-place4[He's distracted by something brushing up against the back of his leg.]cat: _____ Meo-ow. nya~~cat's collar FX: ______ chirin5[He kneels down. The cat investigates the cake in his hand.]narration: ____ O-ohh, a cat, huh... na nan da neko ka...cat FX: ___ ___ kun kun6[He lifts the cat up and does a quick examination.]Kyousuke: ____ It's... A girl, hmm. mesu... da na female is7Kyousuke: Are you all alone in such omae mo konna SAMUi NAKA cold weather, too? you too in-this-kind-of-cold/chill hitoribotchi ka solitary/left-alone (?)Kyousuke FX: gussun---------------------------------------------------p 239 (59)1[He sets the cat down in front of the cake.]Kyousuke: Hungry? onaka hette n no ka ______ Want some cake? ke--ki taberu ka? cake eat (?)cat: __________ pechapecha2[He walks off but the cat follows.]cat: _____ Meo-ow. nya~~Kyousuke: ______ I don't have any more cake! moo ke--ki wa nai yo! any-more cake (T) not-have3[He stops, and the cat rubs up against his calf.]cat: ____ ____ goro goroKyousuke: You've become attached to natsuichatta me.4[He pops the cat into his sweater. She peeks out from his collar.]Kyousuke: [smiling] (So warm!) (attakai!)5[Panoramic night view of the city. It continues to rain.]cat: [off] _____ Meo-ow. nya~~---------------------------------------------------p 240 (60)1[View of a church. People arrive for Mass.]2[Madoka arrives at the church but doesn't enter. She looks to one side.]3Kyousuke: [peeking from behind a corner.] (Meeting someone here, (konna TOKORO de machiawase ka...) hmm...) at-this-kind-of-place wait-for/meet/ date-(a-person)cat: _____ Meo-ow. nya~~4[Split panel. Various views of solitary young men arriving at the church.]5[Kyousuke looks worried. The cat studies the scene as well.]narration: One of them is Ayukawa's ano NAKA ni AYUKAWA no OTOKO ga...?! guy...?! in-that-within 's guy (S)---------------------------------------------------p 241 (61)1[He looks around a corner of the church to see Madoka heading off to the side of the church. No one's around out here...]narration: To a deserted place like anna HITOKE no nai tokoro e... that... that-kind-of empty/deserted to-place Perhaps it's a secret moshiya kossori aibiki nado rendezvous... if/by- in-private a-date/ the-likes-of any-chance secret-rendezvous2[He overhears...]Madoka: [off] I'm sorry. Did you wait gomen ne matte-te-kureta? long? sorry did-wait-(for-me) I made you lots of treats. gochiso-- ippai tsukutte-kita no yo treats full-of went-and-madeKyousuke heartbeat FX: _____ dokin3Madoka: [off] We'll be together all KON'YA wa zutto ISSHO ni night long. tonight (T) throughout together ite-ageru wa be-(with-you)[Kyousuke's eyes bug out. The cat seems unfazed.]narration: Wh-what is she saying?! na nan da ttee~~~~~~?!4Madoka: [off] When I look at you like this, ko-- shite-miru to you're pretty handsome, when-try-to-do-like-this aren't you! _______ anta tte nakanaka hansamu ne! you (T) quite handsome (rhet) You're a much better-looking KASUGA-kun yori yoppodo i-- OTOKO yo! guy than Kasuga-kun! than-Kasuga very/much good-looking-guynarration: T-taking shots at me... a atetsuke ni shicha... insinuating = make-(finality)5Madoka: [off] ____ Ooo!! Not there... You an_!! sonna toko... dame yo! mustn't! place-like-that no-good[Kyousuke is aghast.]narration: Hey... That's going too chotto... yarisugi na n ja nai ka far! overdo/go-too-far is6[With a look of horror, he visualizes a nude Madoka, about to be embraced by an anonymous man.]narration: Ayukawa...?! AYUKAWA...?! Don't... Don't be too ha... hayamatcha dame da...!! hasty...!! mustn't-be-too-rash be---------------------------------------------------p 242 (62)1[The cat jumps out of Kyousuke's sweater.]Kyousuke: Oh! Hey, wait! a_ kora mate!cat FX: ____ pyon2[Chasing after the cat, Kyousuke runs into Madoka and her friend. It's another cat.]3Madoka: [wide-eyed] Kasuga-ku...n... KASUGA-ku...n...4Kyousuke: [surprised] Ah... a...5[In front of the kneeling Madoka, the two cats make nice-nice.]Koutarou-kun: _____ Meo-ow. nya~~girl cat: ___ Mew! mi_---------------------------------------------------p 243 (63)1[The two help themselves to Madoka's treats.]Madoka: [off] __________ Oh! Koutarou-kun is ara ko--taro--kun tabete-ru!! eating!! oh is-eating2Madoka: [happily] I'm glad. Until now, he yokatta IMA made nani o yatte-mo wasn't looking too well, was-good till-now what (O) even-tho-do and would scarcely eat no matter what I did. hotondo tabenakute hardly not-eat-(and) GENKI ga nakatta no yo wasn't-lively3Kyousuke: __________ "Koutarou-kun"... ko--taro--kun tte...Madoka: [smiling] Yup. Hikaru named him. so-- hikaru ga tsuketa no like-so (S) attached (nom) It's a nice name, isn't i-- NAMAE desho! it! nice-name poss-be4[She lifts up Koutarou-kun and looks in his eyes.]Madoka: How sad. To be left alone kawaisou ni DARE-ka-san to all the time--unlike a pitiable from-Mr.-Somebody certain someone we know, huh? chigatte zutto hitoribotchi differing all-the-time left-alone datta n da yo ne-- was (explan) (rhet)Kyousuke FX: _____ zuki_5[View up at the arch and the rainy skies beyond.]Madoka: [off] A short time ago, Hikaru chotto MAE ni hikaru to mitsuketa no and I found him near this at-a-bit-before with-Hikaru found (nom) church--injured and unable ____ to move... kono KYOUKAI CHIKAku de kega o shite this-church nearby get-injured-(and) UGOkenakunatte-te... wasn't-being-able-to-move-(and) And he has a collar, so I KUBIWA o shite-ru kara thought for sure his owner collar (O) is-making that's-why would come looking for him soon, so I was keeping him kitto sono uchi KAiNUSHI ga here... surely before-long owner (S) sagashi ni kuru to OMOtte come-to-look-for think-that-(and) koko de KAtte-ta n da kedo... at-this-place was-keeping (explan) but6[Madoka playfully touches Koutarou-kun on his nose. The other cat drapes herself over the side of the basket.]Madoka: ___ But he could hardly eat esa mo hotondo taberenakutte any food, and was only food too scarcely not-able-to-eat-(and) growing weak. yowatte-ku bakkari datta n da go-and-grow-weak just was (explan) I'm really glad... HONTOU ni yokatta... really was-goodKoutarou-kun: ___ Mew. mii---------------------------------------------------p 244 (64)1[Kyousuke smiles at the scene before him.]2[He kneels and smiles at the cats.]Kyousuke: They're wearing the same onaji SUZU o tsukete-ru bell. same-bell (O) are-wearing ___ ____ Boy and girl... osu to mesu... male and female I bet they're a couple. kitto KOIBITOdoushi na n da ne surely a-couple-of-lovers are (explan)Madoka: [smiling] He's gotten livelier... konna ni GENKI ni natte... this-much becoming-peppy He's better than when he koitsu atashi to iru yori was just with me. this-guy be-with-me than i-- n daro-- good (poss-explan)3Madoka: I was so worried. SHIMPAI datta n desho worry was (poss-explan)Kyousuke: Naturally... sorya moo...narration: ____ Even cats like these will konna neko de sae KOIBITO ga wither away this much if even-cats-like-these sweetheart (S) they're not with their sweetheart... inaku nareba not-have if-become yatsurete-shimau hodo... become-thin/worn-out-(finality) extent4[Madoka suddenly turns towards him.]Madoka: How did you know? do--shite wakaru no why know (?)Kyousuke: Eh?! e?!5[He stands in embarrassment.]narration: My feelings were blind, AITE no koto OMOu KIMOchi wa thinking only of her! about-companion think mood/feeling (T) ichizu na no ni... with-all-one's-heart/ is even-though intently/blindly ___ So lately, have I been... to sureba SAIKIN no ore tte... and-so/then latest/most-recent me (T) ____ Less than a cat...?! neko IKA...?! cat less-than/below Now there's a thought... HANSEI HANSEI reflection/introspectionKyousuke: ____ __ __ __ Ahh... This cat...right? a... kono neko...ne ha ha ha Ha ha ha.---------------------------------------------------p 245 (65)1Madoka: [soft smile] Well, I'm... kotchi wa2[She clings to his arm. Kyousuke is surprised.]Madoka: ____ ...puzzled, Mr. Cat! komatta neko-san ne! was-perplexed Mr.-Cat (rhet)narration: But what a discovery! da kedo HAKKEN! but discovery ____ Ayukawa is like a cat. AYUKAWA tte neko ni nite-ru (T) cat (IO) is-resembling3[He gazes down at the contented girl on his arm.]narration: She appears to be heartless IKKEN tsumeta -so-- de and seemingly cold... apparently cold looking-as-if sokkenai kedo... curt/blunt/cold-attitude but4narration: But if you touch her, she fureru to tottemo attakakute KOKORO wa shows the incredibly warm if-touch utterly warm heart (T) heart that is sweeter than anyone's... DARE yori mo yasashii n da... than-anyone sweet/gentle (explan)[A falling snowflake catches Madoka's attention...]Madoka: Ah... a......5[...and the two stop and smile up at the sky.]narration: _ibu_ A Christmas Eve night for futari dake no SEIYA...... just the two of us... 2-people only 's the-holy-night/Eve ______ __________ Merry Christmas! meri-- - kurisumasu!---------------------------------------------------