Kimagure Orange Road"Heart Jack War!"Volume 11, Story 2WB Volume 6, Story 11Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose                                 Craig Nishida                                 Thomas Wyatt                                 Jerry LeeLast revision : 08-19-95Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.eduNOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few      extras to those of you not having them.      Example: The subtitles on page 207 (27) are only in the WBs!---------------------------------------------------p 207 (27)--TITLE PAGE[Madoka stands, feet planted apart, in nearly full-portrait wearing a swimsuit with T-shirt on top.  She also wears a headband, and gazes off to her right.]MAIN TITLE (at top)               _ha--to_  _____  _uo--_  Heart Jack War!                 KOKORO    jakku  #WAR#!SUB-TITLE (at bottom)  Charm or Uneasiness--A          MIWAKU                             soretomo  Sexy Pose, Just for You...      charm/fascinate/captivate/enchant  or                                  MUNAsawagi                                  uneasiness/a-presentiment                                  _________   ______                                  sekushi-- - po--zu wa   anata  dake...                                  sexy-pose          (T)  you    only/just---------------------------------------------------p 208 (28)1[A book is open to an entry.  A photo of a surprised Kyousuke, a katsu-sand stuffed in his face, is visible.]Sayuri's Little Black Book:  Kasuga Kyousuke                 KASUGA KYOUSUKE  Kouryou High School,            KOURYOU GAKUEN KOUTOU-BU       1-NEN  First Year                      <name>  school sr-high-section first-year                                  _______  Degree of Handsomeness:         hansamu  -DO      NAMI  Average                         handsome  degree  average                                  ______  Degree of Intelligence:         interi       -DO      NAMI  Average                         intelligence  degree  average  Athletic Ability:  Average      UNDOUSHINKEI  NAMI  Special Abilities:  None        TOKUGI                           nashi                                  special-ability/skill/specialty  without2[Sayuri stares down at her open book.]Sayuri:                                               _hansamu_ ______ (A boy of this caliber isn't     (kono TEIDO  no KO   BIDANSHI risuto ni  good enough to be placed on      this-degree 's boy  on-handsome-man-list  the handsome guy list...                                  noseru  hodo demo nai   n da      kedo...                                  record  not-so-much-as  (explan)  but  But...)                         shikashi...)3[Sayuri facial portrait.]narration:  Ayukawa Madoka...!!             AYUKAWA madoka...!!                                             _______  The evil one who trampled       watashi no puraido o   fuminijitta  on my pride.                    my-pride          (O)  trampled-underfoot                                  nikkuki               yatsu                                  <nikui> = detestable  person  I'll snatch this guy away       kono OTOKO o   UBAtte  from her and knock her nose     this-guy  (O)  snatch-away-(and)  out of joint.                   ____                                  hana o akashite-yaru                                  foiling/putting-someone's-nose-out-of-joint  And then...                     soshite......narration:                                                         ______  That should prove that I'm      atashi no  HOU       ga   DANZEN kawaii  the cutest by far!!             my         direction (S)  by-far-the-cutest                                  to yu-- koto o  SHOUMEI shite-yaru!!                                  that-(in-gist)  prove/verify-(to-them)4[View pans back.  Sayuri sits at her desk.]sensei: [off]  HIROSE!!                        HIROSE_!!Sayuri:  Y-yes!                          ha hai![She slams down her textbook--inside which she had hidden her little black book--and looks up nervously.  Next to her, a guy is busy reading a book hidden within his own textbook.]book FX:                          ___  <fwip!>                         ba_5sensei: [pointing to the chalkboard]  So, this problem...             de  kono MONDAI   da  ka...                                  so  this-problem  is  (?)  Let's see you solve it.         toite-miro                                  shall-try-to-solveSayuri: [standing, grimacing at her text]  U-uhh...                        ha haa... (O-oh no!  What is it...?)       (i ikene!  nan da kke...)textbook pages FX:                ________  <flip flip>                     perapera---------------------------------------------------p 209 (29)1[She turns to the side and drops her gaze.  Tears pool in her eyes.  She puts a hand to her mouth and shuts her eyes.]Sayuri:  <sniff>                         kusun  I wasn't listening to what      o-HANASHI          ki--te-masen  deshita...  you were saying...                what-(one)-says  not-listening was[Blushing, the sensei gets up and starts writing on the chalkboard...]sensei:  Oh!  That's okay!               a_  i-- n da yo                                                         __ __ __  That's okay, sit down.          i-- n da  suwarinasai  ha ha ha  <ha ha ha>  It's such a boring lesson,      tsumaran  JUGYOU  da  mon     na--  isn't it.                       boring    lesson  is  reason  (rhet)  All right.  Sensei will         yo--shi    SENSEI  kawari ni    toichau  solve it for you.               all-right          in-place-of  solve-                                                                  (finality)chalk FX:                         ___ ___  <scritch! scritch!>             ka_ ka_2[A tilted view of Madoka against the partly-cloudy skies.  She wears a coat over her school uniform.]Madoka:                           ______  Ah-choo!                        kushon3[View pans back.  Kyousuke walks beside her.]Kyousuke:                         ____  A cold?                         kaze?Madoka:  It's nothing major.             taishita koto nai yo4[He places his hand on the goddess' forehead.  She blushes and looks surprised.]Kyousuke:  It's hot.                       atsui yo  You're getting feverish.        NETSU ga DEte-ru       ja nai ka                                  are-becoming-feverish5[View looking up at a school building.]Kyousuke: [off]                                _______  Aren't you going to ABCB        kore kara    abakabu  desho  now?                            from-now-on  ABCB     poss-be  You should take today off,      KYOU  wa   YASUnde  and go home and sleep.          today (T)  rest/take-a-break-(and)                                  KAEtte             neta   ho-- ga ii  yo                                  return-home-(and)  slept  betterMadoka: [off]  I'm fine.  It's nothing.        HEIKI yo  kono kurai                                            this-extent                                                      ________  And besides, Master won't be    sore ni  KYOU  wa   masuta-- ga  there today, so it's only       besides  today (T)  Master   (S)  me.                                  inakute  atashi  hitori    da  shi                                  not-be-  I       1-person  is  consider                                  there-(and)6Kyousuke: [merrily]                      ___  Then...  I'll help!             ja...  ore  tetsudaa-- ka!                                  then   I    assist---------------------------------------------------p 210 (30)1Kyousuke: [smiling]                        ___  Because I can't be              datte    ore  BYOUNIN wa  neglecting a patient.           because  I    patient (T)                                  hottokenai               tachi  na n da                                  not-able-to-leave-alone  type   is (explan)2Kyousuke: [waving]  So I'll come to the             ja  ato de    o-MISE ni  iku  yo_  store later on!                 so  later-on  to-store   go     ![Madoka smiles.]3[Hiding around the corner of the school's front gate, Sayuri writes in her book.  Madoka approaches the gate, alone.]Sayuri:  Hmm...  Can't be neglecting     fumu...  BYOUNIN wa   hottokenai tachi...to  a patient...hmm?                hmm      patient (T)4Madoka:                           ______  Ah-choo!                        kushon5[Sayuri leans casually back against one pillar of the school gate.  Madoka, walking toward the gate, doesn't notice her...]6[...and in fact, walks right past Sayuri.  Sayuri's gaze is downcast, arms crossed.]7Sayuri: [small smile]  You two are...  Friendly,       NAKA...       ii   no ne  aren't you.                     relationship  good    (rhet)[Madoka stops in her tracks...]---------------------------------------------------p 211 (31)1[...and looks back.]2[Sayuri meets her gaze.]Sayuri:                           ____  Was that your boyfriend?        kare          anata  no     nan   na  no?                                  he/boyfriend  you    (nom)  what  is  (?)3[Sayuri's pov of Madoka.  Expressionless.]4Madoka:  What are you talking about?     nani tte?                                  what (quote)5[Madoka's pov of Sayuri.  Small knowing smile.]6[Sayuri turns away, closing her eyes and still smiling.]Sayuri:  Oh well, that's okay...         maa ii ka...7Sayuri: [walking back towards school]  It isn't good to ignore...      kojiraseru to         yoku nai  wa yo                                  if-neglect/aggravate  not-good                                  ____  That cold...                    kaze wa...---------------------------------------------------p 212 (32)1[Madoka watches the back of Sayuri as she walks toward the school.]Sayuri:                                    ____  Besides, your boyfriend         sore ni  kare       KON'YA  wa   moo  won't be coming over to         besides  boyfriend  tonight (T)  any-more  see you tonight any more...                                  anata no tokoro ni wa                                  to-your-place      (contrast)                                  konai     hazu   da  kara...                                  not-come  ought  is  that's-why2[Madoka portrait.]3[Reaching the building, Sayuri quickly hides herself around a corner.]Sayuri FX:  <zip>                           sasa4Sayuri: [wiping her brow]  Whew.  Ahh, that was scary!     fu--  a-- kowakatta!  I was prepared to be            2 ~ 3 PATSU          hippatakareru  slapped 2 or 3 times...         2-or-3-rounds/shots  be-slapping/beating/                                                       striking/knocking                                  KAKUGO shite-ta                 kedo                                  was-resigning-to/was-ready-for  but5Sayuri:  All right.  Now the             yoshi      kore de  declaration of war is           all-right  with-this/now  done!                                  SENSENFUKOKU       wa   KANRYOU!                                  declaration-of-war (T)  complete  Now...  Where's that guy,       saate  ano OTOKO wa...to  hmm...6[A few meters away, Hikaru lands in an ecstatic flying tackle around the neck of Kyousuke.]Hikaru:                           _______  Darling!                        da--rin!Sayuri pratfall FX:               _____  <slip!>                         zuri_7[Sayuri stares wide-eyed as Hikaru clings to the arm of an overwhelmed Kyousuke.]narration:  Wh-what's this?!                na nan daa~~_?!  Th-that guy is all over         a ano OTOKO  hoka no ONNA tomo  another girl...                   that-guy   another-girl including                                             ________                                  anna ni    betabeta shite...                                  that-much  falling-all-over-each-other  What the hell is this?!         kore       wa   ittai                                  this-(one) (T)  in-the-world                                  do-- yu-- koto?!                                  what-kind-of-thing---------------------------------------------------p 213 (33)1[Hiromi smiles and playfully elbows Kyousuke in the arm.]narration:  That guy...                     ano OTOKO...2[Manami and Kurumi chat with Kyousuke on the street.]3[He shares a laugh with Akane.]narration:  Maybe...                        moshi-ka-shite...4[Sayuri portrait--wide-eyed.]Sayuri:                                          __________ (He's an outrageous              (tonde-mo-nai  pureibo--i  na no de wa...?!)  playboy...?!)                    outrageous    playboy     is5[She stares up at the sky, pondering.]narration:  So...  That Ayukawa             ja...  ano AYUKAWA tte KO       dake ga  girl wasn't his only            so     that-girl-called-Ayukawa only (S)  girlfriend...                                  KANOJO      ja nakatta  n da...                                  girlfriend  was-not     (explan)Sayuri: (I see.                          (so-- ka  So maybe that's why I wasn't    sore de      sakki              wa  slapped back then...)           and-so/then  a-little-while-ago (T)                                  hippatakarenakatta  no    ka mo...)                                  wasn't-slapped      (nom) it-may-be6[Sayuri looks back at us with a happy look.]narration:  In that case, it's not          to yu-- koto wa  watashi ga  because I had less charm        in-that-case     I       (S)  than that girl...                                  ano KO     yori  MIRYOKU ga   nakatta                                  that-girl  than  charm   (S)  not-had                                  wake    de wa naku...                                  reason  is-not-without  It's just that that guy         ano OTOKO  no HOU ga ICHIMAI UWATE no  was a more adept playboy.       that-guy   smarter/a-cut-above                                  __________                                  pureibo--i  datta  dake                                  playboy     was    justSayuri hand FX:                   ___  <clap>                          pan7[Sayuri profile--she casts a determined look into the distance.  Bolts of light crackle in the blackness of the background.]Sayuri: (All right!!                     (yoshi!!  In that case, more than ever    so-- nara     so-- de  I'm filled with a fighting      if-that's-so  looking-as-if  spirit.                                   _____                                  yokei     faito ga   wakutte-mo      no yo                                  too-much  fight (S)  even-tho-seething                                  _hansamu_     _______  On my honor as a hunter         BIDANSHI      hanta-- no MEIYO ni kakete...  of handsome guys...             handsome-guy  hunter  's make-it-a-point-                                                           of-honor  I will definitely catch         ano OTOKO  kanarazu     atashi no TE de  that guy by my very own         that-guy   not-fail-to  by-my-hand  hands!!)                                  otoshite            miseru!!)                                  take/capture-(and)  show/exhibit---------------------------------------------------p 214 (34)1[Standing on the sidewalk in town, she glares back over her shoulder, straight at us.]Sayuri: (But...                          (shikashi...  A true playboy like that        ano OTOKO  mitai na  SUJIGANEIrino  guy won't fall to a simple      that-guy   seems     staunch/to-the-core  trick...                        __________                                  pureibo--i  namaji no koto ja                                  playboy     by-halves/half-heartedly                                  ochinai       wa...                                  not-fall/fail  In this case...                 kore wa...  I may have to be prepared       atashi mo   KARADA o   haru  to give up my body, too...      I      too  body  (O)  stretch/throw-out  Right?!)                                  KAKUGO      ga   HITSUYOU  ka mo...  ne!)                                  resignation (S)  necessary it-may-be (rhet)2[Exterior shot of ABCB.]3[Madoka brings a cup of coffee to a guy sitting at a table.]Madoka:                           ______  Ah-choo!                        kushon4[Looking down at the cup she just sneezed into.]Madoka:  Oh, I'm sorry.                  a suimasenguy 1: [smiling]  Oh, that's fine, that's         a  i-- no i-- no  fine.                           ____                      ____  If it's a cold from a beauty    kimi mitai na  BIJIN no   kaze nara  like you, I'd be delighted      you  seem      a-beauty's cold if-it-is  to catch it.                    ___                                  ore  yorokonde  utsutchau  kara                                  I    be-delighted-to-be-infected-(finality)                                                             that's-why5[Looking indignant, Madoka walks back, taking the coffee with her.  The guy smiles at her back with a goofy look.]Madoka:  I'll take it back!              torikaemasu_!guy 1:  But it's okay, really!          HONTOU ni  i--   no ni...                                  really     okay  even-tho6[Tight shot of the faucet.  Water fills the sink of dirty dishes.]water FX:                         _____  <splash!>                       ja--_7[Madoka, visibly ill, pauses to wipe her brow.]Madoka:  <huff huff>                     haa haa8[She opens her eyes.  There is a look of worry on her face.]narration: [flashback]            ____  Your boyfriend won't be         kare       KON'YA  wa   moo  coming over to see you          boyfriend  tonight (T)  any-more  tonight any more...                                  anata no tokoro ni wa                                  to-your-place      (contrast)                                  konai     hazu   da  kara...                                  not-come  ought  is  that's-why---------------------------------------------------p 215 (35)1Sayuri: [off]  Excuse me...                    ano...[Kyousuke turns to look...]2[Full-portrait of Sayuri, who leans back against the security gate of a closed shop.  She's dressed very nicely, and feigns illness.]Sayuri:  Is there a hospital or          kono atari ni         BYOUIN    ka  pharmacy somewhere around       somewhere-about-here  hospital  or  here?                                  YAKKYOKU  arimasen     ka?                                  pharmacy  isn't-there  (?)Sayuri/metal grating door FX:     ______  <clatter!>                      gasha_3[She collapses against his chest.]Sayuri:  Help...  Me...                  TASUke...te...Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            _____  <thump!>                        doki_Sayuri/Kyousuke FX:               ___  <whump!>                        do_narration:  This girl...                    kono KO...  It's the girl who repaired      kono MAE     sode    o  tsukurotte-kureta  my sleeve the last time.        before-this  sleeve (O) repaired-(for-me)                                  KO    da                                  girl  is4[Ayukawa turns at the sound of...]phone FX:  <rrring>                        #RRR#5[Her eyes pop wide.]phone:  Hello.  I...                    moshimoshi  ore...  Sorry.                          gomen  A little emergency came         chotto    KYUUYOU         ga  up...                           a-little  urgent-business (S)                                  dekichatte...                                  coming-into-being-(finality/regret)  I can't be there right away.    sugu ni wa          ikenai    n da                                  soon    (contrast)  can't-go  (explan)Madoka:  Kasuga-kun.                     KASUGA-kun---------------------------------------------------p 216 (36)1[Sayuri clings to his arm, looking ill.]Sayuri:  OHH, HURRY-Y-Y.                 nee  HAYAkuu  SAYURI IS FEELING AWFUL.        sayuri  moo      damee                                          already  no-good<Commentary:  Sayuri is talking "little kid cutesy" by using her given name rather than <atashi> = "I".  Of course, it also serves the purpose of having Madoka hear her name.>[Kyousuke, still holding the phone, looks at Sayuri goggle-eyed.]Sayuri FX:  <CLING!>                        beta_Kyousuke FX:  <yikes!>                        gyo_2[Madoka holds the phone.  Worry and sadness cross her face.]3[He pulls away from Sayuri, and eyes her nervously.]Kyousuke:  Well, so that's the way it      a  ja  so-- yu-- koto de  is.                                so  for-that-kind-of-matter  But I'll certainly be           demo  kitto   iku  kara_!!  there!!                         but   surely  go   that's-why4[He hangs up and stares up at the sky.]narration:  Ahh, Ayukawa was surprised.     a-- bikkuri shita  AYUKAWA  I hope there wasn't a           myo-- na     kanchigai shinakatta ro--  naa  strange misunderstanding...     strange/odd  poss-wasn't-misunderstandingSayuri: [clinging to his arm]  Please take me to a doctor      HAYAku   o-ISHA ni  tsurete ttee  quickly.                        quickly  to-doctor  <tsurete-itte-kudasai>                                                       go-and-take-(please)5Madoka: [visualizing Sayuri] (That girl's voice?!             (ano KO no KOE?!  She's with Kasuga-kun?!)        KASUGA-kun to  ISSHO     na  no?!)                                  with-Kasuga    together  is6Kyousuke:                                    ____  Let's see.  For a cold...       e--to      kaze wa...                                  let's-see  cold (T)  That's internal medicine,       NAIKA              da  yo ne  right?                          internal-medicine  isSayuri: [collapsing to the ground]  Sayuri can't walk any           sayuri mo--     arukenaai  mo-o-ore.                              no-more  <arukenai> = can't-walk7[Kyousuke carries her on his back and looks back at her with wide-eyed nervousness.  Sayuri smiles.]narration:  Well.  It can't be helped,      maa  shikata nai yo na  can it.                                  ____  It's a cold.                    kaze da mon...  Besides, I owe this girl...     sore ni  kono KO ni   wa                                  besides  to-this-girl (contrast)                                  KAri ga aru  shi...                                  owe          and-besides---------------------------------------------------p 217 (37)1[She closes her eyes...]Sayuri:  <puff!> <puff!>                 haa_ haa_narration:  Still...                        sore ni shite mo......Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            ____ ____  <thump thump>                   doki doki2[Kyousuke feels pressure on his back.]Sayuri breasts FX:  <squish>                        gu'nyocrows-in-background FX:  <kaa>                           kaa3[He drops down in a squat to rest for a bit.]Sayuri:  Oh...  Maybe I'm too heavy.     ara...  atashi tte  OMOi   kashira                                          I      (T)  heavy  I-wonderKyousuke:  H-hold on for a minute,         shi shibaraku o-machi kudasai......  please...Kyousuke FX:                      ________  <hesitate>                      mojimoji4[They come to a doctor's office.]narration:  But...!                         tokoro ga...  de aru!sign:  <a name?> Internal Medicine     <a-kanji> FU                RAKU/GAKU                                            sign/mark/amulet  comfort/pleasure                                  TAI/TA/FUTO       NAIKA                                  get-fat/gain/big  internal-medicine  <something>                     <4-kanji>Sayuri:                                        ____                    ___  No!  This doctor's a quack!     kono o-ISHA  yabu     da kara        iya!                                  this doctor  a-quack  is that's-why  no[Kyousuke looks back over his shoulder in exhaustion and exasperation.]5[They come to a pharmacy.]sign: [top]  <a name?> Pharmacy              <2-kanji>  YAKKYOKU                                             pharmacysign: [bottom]                    ________  Toiletries...  Big              toiretto...    DAI/OO TOKU...  Special...                      toiletries     great  specialbanner:                           ______  Horror Toiletries...            hora--  KESHOUHIN...                                  horror  toilet-articles  Horror Facial Sal...            #HORROR FACIAL SAL...#Sayuri:  It looks like the medicine      koko no o-KUSURI  mazu         sou!  here's no good!                 here 's medicine  unadvisable  looks-like[He looks back over his shoulder as before.]6[View looking up at the partly cloudy sky from a downtown street.]---------------------------------------------------p 218 (38)1[He continues to carry her on his back, down the street.]narration:  She's a rather spoiled girl,    kekko--  wagamama na      KO    da  naa  isn't she.                      quite    selfish/spoiled  girl  is  (rhet)  This makes the 6th hospital     kore de        BYOUIN  -  YAKKYOKU  or pharmacy we've passed        with-this/now  hospital   pharmacy  without a rest...               ____                                  pasu shi  tsuzukete     6-KEN me  da yo...                                  pass      continuously  6th-door  isSayuri:  Ohhhh, hurry-y-y.               u~~~~n  HAYAkuu2[She points up at a building.  Looks like a cafe.]Sayuri:  Oh, wait!  Over there's         a  matte    asoko      ga   ii   waa!!  fine!!                             wait     that-place (S)  goodKyousuke: [off]  Eh?!                            e?!3[She tilts back her glass.]Sayuri FX:  <guzzle!>                       gubi~~_4[View pans back.  They sit at a table.]Sayuri:  Whew.                           fuuKyousuke:                                ____  ____  Uhhhh, you're coming down       ano~~  kimi  kaze hi--te-ru       n ja...  with a cold, aren't you...             you   are-catching-a-cold  explan/neg5[She pours him a glass.]Sayuri:                                 ____  Huhhh?  But liquor is good      araa  kaze ni wa         o-SAKE   tte  medicine for a cold.                  to-cold (contrast)   liquor (T)                                                           _                                  i--   KUSURI    na  no yoo                                  good  medicine  is  Your body gets warmed up,       KARADA mo   attamaru    shi...  too, and...                     body   too  <atatamaru> and-besides                                               get-warmpouring FX:                       ____ ____  <glub glub>                     toku tokuKyousuke:  Y-yes...                        ha haa...6[Tight shot of their glasses raised in a toast.]Sayuri/Kyousuke:                  ________  KAMPA-A-AI.  <i.e.,             kampa--i  "cheers">narration:  O-oh well, it's okay...         ma maa ii ka...glasses FX:                       ______  <clink>                         chi--n7[Split panel.  Kyousuke on top and Sayuri on bottom.  They smile or laugh.]8[Exterior night shot of buildings in town.]Sayuri: [off]  Sayuri can't drink any          sayuri  moo      nomenaai  mo-o-ore.                               no-more  can't-drinkFX:                               ___ ___ ___ ___  <wah! ha! ha! ha!>              wa_ ha_ ha_ ha_Kyousuke: [off]                   ___ ___ ___  Wah! ha! ha!                    wa_ ha_ ha_  Oh come on.  Sure you can.      matamataa  ikeru      kuse ni                                             can-drink  though/although---------------------------------------------------p 219 (39)1[They sit on a park bench.]Kyousuke:  Phew.                           fuu2Sayuri:                                        ______  The night is so wonderful...    KON'YA  wa   suteki...                                  tonight (T)  wonderful3[She turns to lock eyes with him, giving him a meaningful look.]Sayuri:  I'd like to become...           anata to wa...                                  with-you (contrast)  Much, much better friends       motto motto     nakayoku  with you.                       much-much-more  on-good-terms                                  naritai        waa                                  want-to-become4[Master passes nearby, and casts a casual glance their way.]Master FX:                        ___ ___  <step! step!>                   ko_ ko_5[A dish hits the floor and shatters.]dish FX:                          ________  <CRAAASH>                       gacha--n6[View pans back.  Madoka sits on the floor, hand to her brow.  The dish lies in pieces before her.]Madoka:  <puff puff>                     haa haa---------------------------------------------------p 220 (40)1[Master walks in as she starts to get up.]Master:  Ayukawa-kun...                  AYUKAWA-kun...door FX:                          _____  <rattle>                        karan2Master:  What's the matter?              do-- shita n da  You look pale.                  KAOIRO      WARUi yo                                  complexion  badMadoka:                           ________  Master.                         masuta--3Master:  My wife seemed to be fine       uchi no yatsu  IGAI NA to    HAYAku  and was getting over the        my-fellow      unexpectedly  early  cold unexpectedly early.        ____                                  kaze  yoku  natte     HEIKI so-- datta                                  cold  well  becoming  looked-as-if-fine                                  kara                                  that's-why                                  ____     ____  You caught a cold, too?         kimi mo  kaze kai                                  you  too cold (?)  You'd better go home and        KAEtte         yasunda  HOU ga ii yo  rest.                           go-home-(and)  rested   betterMadoka:  No, I'm fine.                   ie  HEIKI desu  It's only this.                 kore gurai4[Madoka stops to visualize a smiling Kyousuke.]narration:  Besides...                      sore ni......Kyousuke: [flashback]  But I'll certainly be           demo  kitto   iku  kara...  there...                        but   surely  go   that's-why5Master: [merrily]  But...                          shikashi...  There are healthy people        GENKI na yatsura mo   iru    mon     da  na  around, too.                    lively-fellows   too  exist  person  is  Even in this chill, there's     kono SAMUi       NAKA    soko       no  a love scene going on in        this-cold/chill  within  that-place 's  the park over there, hmm.                    __________                                  KOUEN de     rabushi--n  da  mon     naa                                  in-the-park  love-scene  is  reason  (rhet)  A girl who wears her hair       ONNA no KO  nante         RYOU osage de  in two pigtails would still     girl        the-likes-of  by-2-pigtails  be around high school age...                                  mada   KOUKOUSEI            kurai                                  still  high-school-student  extent                                  da yo na                                  is  I mean, really!                 arya                                  I-never!6[Madoka's eyes grow large.]Master: [off]  I couldn't see the guy too      OTOKO no HOU    wa   yoku mienakatta  clearly, but...                 guy's-direction (T)  wasn't-able-to-see-well                                  kedo...                                  but  He sorta looked like            nanka     KASUGA-kun ni NIte-ta  naa  Kasuga-kun...                   somewhat  was-resembling-Kasuga  (rhet)7Master: [merrily]  Well...  Kasuga-kun wouldn't    maa...  KASUGA-kun ga   anna koto  be doing such a thing.  Wah     well               (S)  that-kind-of-thing  ha ha!                                                             ______                                  yatte-ru  wake nai  ka             wahaha                                  be-doing  no-reason (talk-to-self)                                  ___ ___ ___  <wah! ha! ha!>                  wa_ ha_ ha_8[He suddenly scans the room.]Master:  Hm?!  Ayukawa-kun...            n_?  AYUKAWA-kun...---------------------------------------------------p 221 (41)1[A view from behind the park bench as Sayuri moves in on Kyousuke.]Sayuri:  Say...  It's chilly...          nee...  SAMUi wa...2Sayuri:                                                       ____  But...  Thanks to you, it       demo...  anata no okage de  kaze mo  looks like I'm cured of my      but      thanks-to-you      cold too  cold...                                  naotchatta        mitai...                                  cured-(finality)  seems3[Sayuri closes her eyes, inviting a kiss.]4[Kyousuke stares hard.]5[View from behind Madoka.]Madoka footsteps FX:              ___ ___  <tap! tap!>                     ko_ ko_6[Madoka looks over some bushes to see Sayuri offering her lips to Kyousuke.]Madoka FX:                        _____  <rustle!>                       gasa_---------------------------------------------------p 222 (42)1[He stands and smiles.]Kyousuke:                               ___  Then, you'll be fine            ja    ore ga   tsuite-nakute-mo  without me, right?!             then  I   (S)  even-tho-not-being-with-(you)                                  HEIKI      da  ne!                                  unconcern  is  (rhet)  You're in such high spirits.    konna ni     GENKI i--                                  this-(much)  lively/good-spirits                                  n da mon                                  (is-the-reason)  Now you're all right!           moo DAIJOUBU da!2Sayuri: [incredulous]  Huh?!                           he_?3Kyousuke: [happily]               ___  I'm keeping someone waiting,    ore  HITO o matasete-ru           kara  so now, if you'll excuse        I    am-keeping-a-person-waiting  that's-why  me...                                  kore de        SHITSUREI suru      yo                                  now/with-this  excuse-me/pardon-me4Kyousuke: [waving]  Bye.  Take care, 'kay?          ja  KI o tsukete  ne                                      careful       (rhet)Sayuri:  Ah...!                          a_...5[Madoka watches all this.]6[Smiling softly, she sinks back on her heels, leaning against a telephone booth and closing her eyes.]---------------------------------------------------p 223 (43)1Sayuri: (Wh-what's with that             (na nani yoo  aitsuu  guy-y-y?  Just a bit longer!!)            mo-- chotto  datta  no ni----_!!)                                  a-bit-more   was    even-though2Sayuri:  <Ah...  Ah...>                  ha... ha... (I-I wonder if I don't have      (a atashi tte  yappari    MIRYOKU  any charm, after all...)           I      (T)  after-all  charm                                  nai       no ka na...)                                  not-have     I-wonder3[View of some trees and the night sky.]Sayuri: [off]  AH-CHOO!                        kushon4[Kyousuke comes upon a girl collapsed on the ground next to a phone booth.]Kyousuke:  !                               !5[He holds her gently.]Kyousuke:  Why are you here?!              do--shite  konna TOKORO ni?!                                  why        at-this-kind-of-place  Ayukawa!                        AYUKAWA!6[He looks very worried.]Kyousuke:  Ayukawa...  Ayukawa!!           AYUKAWA...  AYUKAWA!!Madoka:  ...Kasuga-kun...                ...KASUGA-kun...7[To check her fever he rests his forehead against hers.  Her eyes pop open.]Kyousuke:  A-AN AWFUL FEVER!!              su sugoi NETSU!!foreheads FX:                     _____  <plop!>                         pito_---------------------------------------------------p 224 (44)1[He carries Madoka on his back through the park.]2Kyousuke: [a bit angrily]  That's no good!                 dame da yo  Traipsing around outside        konna KARADA de         HOKA  when you're feeling like        in-this-kind-of-health  outside  this...                                  DEaruicha...                                  go-out/gad-about-(finality/regret)  I said that I'd definitely      kitto   iku  tte itte-oita  hazu  da yo!  come!                           surely  go   said-that-     likelihood                                               (for-future-sake)3[Madoka portrait--she smiles...]4[...and drops her gaze.]Madoka:  You're right...                 so-- ne..........  I'm sorry.                      gomennasai5Madoka:  ..........  I couldn't          ..........  machi -kirenakatta        no  wait.                                       wait   wasn't-able-to-(do)[Kyousuke's eyes grow large.]---------------------------------------------------p 225 (45)1[Kyousuke portrait.]2Kyousuke: [smiling]  You have such a fever.          konna ni     NETSU  aru   n ja                                  this-(much)  fever  have  Tonight, I'll take you          KON'YA  wa   kono mama  nonstop over to your place,     tonight (T)  this-situation  just like this.                                  o-uchi ni  CHOKKOU      da  ne                                  to-place   go-non-stop  is  (rhet)3[Pov from behind them as he carries her away.]Madoka:  That's a long way.              tooi wa yo  To carry someone on your        obutte-ku         no    wa...  back...                         go-and-piggyback  (nom) (T)Kyousuke:  It's okay!                      i-- yo!4[Same pov, they're farther away.]Madoka:                           ____  My cold...                      kaze...  You'll catch it.                utsuru wa yoKyousuke:  It's okay!!                     i-- yo!!narration:                                   ____  If it's Ayukawa's cold...       AYUKAWA no kaze  nara...   ne!  Right?!                                 's cold  if-it-is  right?!4 (inset)Sayuri: [huddling from the cold]  How vexing!                     kuyashi~~~~                                             ____  I really have caught a cold.    HONTOU ni  kaze  hi--chatta                                  really     cold  caught-(finality/regret)  <ah-choo!>                      kushon---------------------------------------------------