Kimagure Orange Road"Slapstick Mushroom Hunt!"Volume 10, Story 9WB Volume 6, Story 9Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Thomas Wyatt Jerry LeeLast revision : 08-18-95Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.eduNOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 167 (167) are only in the WBs!---------------------------------------------------p 167 (167)--TITLE PAGE[We sneak a look at Madoka, dressed only in shorts with a towel draped around her neck. She brushes her teeth, a cup in her other hand, and looks at us a little nervously.]MAIN TITLE (at top) ______________ Slapstick Mushroom Hunt! surappusutikku kinoko -GAri! slapstick mushroom gatheringSUB-TITLE (at bottom) It's Supposed to Be "Keep TAchi-Iri KINSHI no hazu na Out!", But I Feel Your Eyes Keep-Out (nom) likelihood on Me. no ni even-though anata no SHISEN o KANjite-ru your-eye/look/glance (O) am-feeling My Secret Bare Skin Blushes HIMITSU no SUHADA mo honnori to Slightly on a Virgin secret bare-skin too faintly/slightly Morning... _________ HAjirau OTOME no mo--ningu... blush maiden/virgin 's morning---------------------------------------------------p 168 (168)1[View of mountain peaks overlooking a forest.]narration: Autumn... AKI...2[A view of some trees.]narration: Autumn, the season for an SHOKUYOKU no AKI... appetite... an-appetite (nom) autumn _______ For the first time in a abakabu wa hisabisa no while, ABCB is closed for ABCB (T) after-a-long-time 's a holiday. KYUUJITSU HEITEN holiday closing-shop3[A view of a trail that curves past a cabin and a parked car. Arrowed signs point in two directions.]narration: ________ Master brought us to a masuta-- ga atashi-tachi o really nice place. (S) us (O) tottemo i-- tokoro ni to-immensely-nice-place tsurete-kite-kuremashita brought-us-alongsign 1: [pointing right] Garbage Dump gomisuteBAsign 2: [pointing left] Administrative Office KANRI JIMUSHO managing/administration office4[Hikaru holds up a mushroom and smiles brightly.]narration: Sempai and me, Madoka-san SEMPAI to atashi madoka-san to and Akane-san, and also and I and Master, are all gathering ________ mushrooms!! akane-san soshite masuta-- de and/then by-Master kinoko -GAri desu!! mushroom gathering areHikaru: [brightly] Found one!! atta--_!!5Hikaru: ________ Say, Master. Can you eat nee masuta-- kore wa TAberareru? this? this-(one) (T) can-eat[Master looks up from a large basket full of a variety of mushrooms.]---------------------------------------------------p 169 (169)1[He studies it.]Master: _________ Oho, it's a matsutake. hoo matsutake ja nai ka oh Akane: That's amazing, Hikaru-chan. sugoi ja nai hikaru-chan amazing is-not2Akane: [looking at it closely] Where was it? kore doko ni atta no this-(one) at-where was (?)3Hikaru: [pointing] They were selling them at muko-- no o-MISE de utte-mashita--_ the stand over there! over-there at-store was-selling !sign: Matsutake matsutake SANCHI SOU/OKU(RU)!! producing-area send[Akane and Kyousuke do pratfalls.]4Master: [nervous smile] ______ Hey... We made a special ano ne... sekkaku kinoko GAri ni effort to come out here especially to-gather-mushrooms just to gather mushrooms! kite n no ni coming even-though What are you doing KAtte do-- sun no......?! buying them...?! buying what doing5Kyousuke: [worried look] But, if we aren't careful demo heta ni shiro-- to ga enough, and come down with but if-not-careful-enough and food poisoning from bad ______ mushrooms... wake no wakaranai kinoko totte with-unreasonable-mushrooms SHOKUCHUUDOKU ni demo kakattara... by-food- or- if-come-down-with poisoning something6[With a merry smile, Akane whacks Kyousuke on the back. Kyousuke goes flying.]Akane: It's fine!! daijo--bu_!! Though I might not look atashi ko-- miete-mo the type, I'm actually very I tho-I-don't-look-it picky about mushrooms!! ______ kinoko ni wa chotto by-mushrooms (contrast) a-bit urusai n da kara!! fastidious (explan) that's-whyAkane backslap FX: ___ donHikaru: All right! yatta-----------------------------------------------------p 170 (170)1[Akane holds up a mushroom...]Akane: See! mite-nasai! ________ This one's a shiitake! kore wa shiitake! this-(one) (T) The kind everyone's always itsu-mo minna ga TAbete-ru yatsu yo!! eating!! always everyone (S) be-eating thing2[...and tosses it into her mouth.]Akane FX: _____ paku_3Akane: [smiling] See? It's fine! ne daijo--bu desho_!Akane FX: ________ mogumoguHikaru: I see... naruhodo...4Akane: Ah ha... a ha...5Akane: Ah! ha! ha! ha! ha! ha! ha! a_ ha_ ha_ ha_ ha_ ha_ ha_ ha_ ha_ ha_ ha! ha! ha! ha! ha! ha! ha! ha! ha! ha! ha! ha! ha! ha_ ha_ ha_ ha_ ha_ ha_ ha_ ha_ ha_ ha6[With nervous concern, Master studies a similar-looking mushroom.]Master: _________ This is a waraitake... kore wa waraitake da... are mushroom> = laughing7[View of a far-off mountain.]narration: I wonder if she's really HONTOU ni daijoubu na no ka na... all right... really all-right is (nom) I-wonderAkane: [off] __ ___ __ Ah! ha! ha! Hee! ha! ha! a_ ha_ ha hi--_ ha_ ha_---------------------------------------------------p 171 (171)1[Kyousuke kneels and picks mushrooms.]2[Something catches his eye off-panel.]bush FX: _____ gasa_3[He flinches away from a hissing snake.]snake FX: _____ gaza_Kyousuke: Oo-wah! u uwa_4[He breathes a sigh of relief as the snake slithers off.]narration: Despite being close to MACHI kara CHIKAi to ittatte town, still, we're in the from-town close-by even-tho-say-that woods. yappari MORI no NAKA still woods 's inside You never know what will nani ga DEru ka wakannai na-- emerge. what (S) emerge (?) not-know (rhet) It isn't safe. bussou da na unsafe/dangerous issnake FX: ______ zazaza...5[Two paws reach around and cover his eyes.]bear paws FX: ___ nu_voice: [off] Gue-e-ess who? daa~~~re da? = who is6[He recoils in horror.]Kyousuke: Wh-whuzzat! de detaa----_ emerged/came-outKyousuke FX: ___ ba_---------------------------------------------------p 172 (172)1[Hikaru smiles merrily and holds up two fake bear paws on sticks.]Hikaru: It's me, Sempai. atashi desu sempai I am2narration: O-ohh... It's Hikaru-chan, na nan da... hikaru-chan kaa huh.Kyousuke: (What has she got there? (nani o motte-ru What?!!) what (O) is-possessing/holding n da nani o_!!) (explan)3[She takes him by the arm.]Hikaru: ______ Let's pick mushrooms ISSHO ni kinoko torimasho_!! together!! together mushrooms shall-get/pick4[Isolated shot of two baskets on a table, both full of various types of mushrooms.]5[Madoka stands before the baskets, holding a mushroom in each hand. Akane approaches in the background.]Madoka: I wonder... ittai... in-the-world Which of these are dore ga TAberareru no yara... edible...? which-(one) (S) can-eat (nom) I-wonder6[With a wide smile, Akane ushers Madoka off.]Akane: Leave the choosing to erabu no wa atashi ni maakasenasai_ me-e-e! choosing (T) to-me leave-it-(to-me) Go call Kyousuke and the madoka-chan wa KYOUSUKE-tachi o others, Madoka-chan! (T) (and-assoc) (O) yonde-kite! go-call/summonMadoka: S-sure... ha haa...---------------------------------------------------p 173 (173)1[Akane crosses her arms and studies the two baskets.]Akane: Hmm... u~~mu2[Isolated shot of the two baskets.]Akane: [off] ______ Usually, they say that it's futsuu UTSUKUshii kinoko ni wa the pretty mushrooms that usually by-beautiful-mushrooms (contrast) are the harmful ones... DOKU ga aru tte yu-- kara...... are-harmful say-that that's-why ______ So these are all harmful kore wa minna DOKU kinoko ne mushrooms. this-(one) (T) all harmful-mushrooms3[She pours one of the baskets into a boiling pot.]Akane: It looks like we can eat kotchi wa TAberare -sou these. this-way (T) can-eat looks-as-ifmushrooms FX: __ za!4[Hikaru is startled to see a large spider drop down on a silk strand. Kyousuke's open collar lies just below it.]spider FX: ______ su----5Hikaru: ____ Kya!! Sempai, a sp-spider!! kya_!! sempai ku kumo ga!! ! spider (S)Kyousuke: Eh?! e?!6Kyousuke: D-down my back?!! se...senaka ni!![In a frenzy, he starts peeling off his sweater...]7[...and starts hopping out of his pants. Wide-eyed and blushing, Hikaru looks on.]Hikaru: W-wait a minute! chi chottoo_!Kyousuke pants FX: _____ zuru_---------------------------------------------------p 174 (174)1[Hikaru's pov of the snake as it raises its head at her.]snake FX: ______ zazaza2[Both Hikaru and Kyousuke are startled.]3Madoka: [searching] Hikaru. Hika... hikaru hika...4[Madoka facial portrait--she sees something off-panel that makes her blush.]5[It's Kyousuke, pants partway down, sprawled over Hikaru, who lies on her back.]6[While rising to his hands and knees he spies Madoka.]Kyousuke: AH! a---------------------------------------------------p 175 (175)1[She crosses her arms and glares off to one side.]Madoka: It's just about lunchtime... sorosoro o-HIRU yo soon lunchtime2Kyousuke: [nervously pointing] ____ Uh-uhhh... There was a a ano IMA soko ni hebi ga... snake over there just now... now at-that-place snake (S)3[Madoka lifts up a belt--his--and eyes it skeptically.]Madoka: ____ You mean, this "snake"? hebi tte kore no koto? snake (quote) about-this-(one)4[Kyousuke facial portrait--goggle-eyed and speechless.]5[View of the mushroom feast laid out on the picnic table.]bottles: Bitter Orange Juice ponzu---------------------------------------------------p 176 (176)1Akane: Oka-a-ay, please dig in! saate o-TAbe kudasai! eat please2Akane: [smiling] These are mushrooms I atashi ga JISHIN o motte selected with confidence, I (S) have-self-confidence-(and) so it's all right! ______ eranda kinoko da kara daijoubu yo! chose mushrooms and-so all-right[Kyousuke forces a nervous smile.]narration: And that's why... da kara... I'm worried. SHIMPAI na n da yo worry am (explan)3[Tight shot of some mushrooms on her plate.]Akane: [off] ______ See, I carefully separated hora chanto DOKU kinoko wa out the harmful mushrooms... look! precisely harmful-mushrooms (T) yoriwaketa n da kara sorted-out/separated (explan) that's-why Look! The colors of these mite kotchi wa ikani mo are truly flashy! look! these (T) truly/indeed ____ IRO ga hade ja nai! color (S) gaudy/flashy (is-not)4Akane: On the other hand, these are sore ni hikikae kotchi only the rather plain ones, on-the-contrary these so I'm sure they're good!! no HOU wa kekkou JIMI na mono comparative rather-subdued things bakari de kitto oishi-- yo_!! only being surely tastyHikaru: Oh! They really are ara HONTOU oishi-- delicious.5[Madoka notices that Kyousuke is watching her with apprehension.]Madoka FX: jiro_6[She pointedly turns away.]Madoka FX: tsu~~n7[He forces another nervous smile.]narration: Ahhh... a--n...---------------------------------------------------p 177 (177)1Hikaru: What's the matter? do-- shita n desu kaa Aren't you eating? TAbenai n desu ka? not-eat (explan) (?) It tastes so delicious! konna ni oishi-- no ni... this-(much) tasty even-thoughKyousuke: I-I don't have much of an chi chotto SHOKUYOKU nai n da... appetite... a-bit appetite not-have (explan)2narration: I have to somehow cure nantoka AYUKAWA no go-KIGEN o Ayukawa's mood. somehow 's (hon)-mood (O) naosaneba... if-can-fix/cure/mend/restorefork FX: _____ kacha3[Akane smiles over at Hikaru and continues to eat.]Akane: Yup! Not bad, not bad. un! ikeru ikeru nice/good/not-bad4[Madoka starts to eat.]Madoka FX: _____ paku_5narration: And then, in the soshite GOGO... afternoon... and/then afternoon ______ Everyone went off by minna sorezore kinoko tori ni themselves to gather everyone respectively to-pick-mushrooms mushrooms... CHItte-itta... went-and-scattered/dispersed[Kyousuke spies a strolling Madoka.]Kyousuke: ! !6[Her attention is caught by a noise off-panel.]FX: [off] _____ gasa_---------------------------------------------------p 178 (178)1[Kyousuke in shock.]2[He zips behind a tree to avoid being seen by her. But her attention is caught by something on the ground near her.]narration: Ayukawa...! AYUKAWA...!Kyousuke FX: _____ sasa_Madoka: AH! a3narration: Somehow, I feel awkward... nanka KI mazui yo~~~~ somehow awkward/embarrassed After all, she's still yappari mada okotte-ru yo naa...... mad... after-all still is-mad (rhet)4Madoka: KYA!! kya_!!5[She lies on the ground holding her calf, and watches the snake slither away.]Madoka: Ouch... itata...snake FX: ______ zazasa6[He rushes out.]narration: __ ____ I-it's a snake! he hebi da! Ayukawa was bitten by a AYUKAWA ga hebi ni kamareta!! snake!! (S) by-snake was-bittenKyousuke: AYUKAWA!! AYUKAWA!!---------------------------------------------------p 179 (179)1narration: This is no time to be mo-- kakurete-ru BA-AI hiding!! now be-hiding occasion/circumstance ja nai zo!! is-not !!2[He reaches her side.]Kyousuke: Lemme see the bite!! KIZUGUCHI misete!! a-wound show/displaynarration: ____ It would be serious if DOKU hebi dattara TAIHEN da that was a poisonous snake. poisonous-snake if-was serious is If we don't hurry... HAYAku shinai to... soon if-not-do3Kyousuke: C'mon, we have to suck out saa DOKU o SUidasanakya!! the poison!! poison (O) must-suck/draw-out4[Madoka smiles a tenderly amused smile...]5[...and wraps her arms around his neck. Kyousuke is stunned.]Madoka arms FX: ___ su_---------------------------------------------------p 180 (180)1[Isolated shot of some trees.]Madoka: [off] Thank you... arigatou... I'm all right now. mou DAIJOUBU ____ That wasn't a poisonous are wa DOKU hebi ja nai yo snake. that-(one) (T) poisonous-snake is-not2[His pov of her.]Madoka: Say... Instead of the nee... sore yori KIZUGUCHI snakebite... say than-that-(one) a-wound ja nakute...... being-not You could suck at another hoka no toko SUtte-mo spot. another-place even-tho-suck/draw-out ii no yo okay3[His face flushes.]Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____ dokin4[Another view of trees.]narration: What does she mean by that?! do-- yu-- tsumori na n da what-kind-of-intention is (explan) I thought she was mad until sakki made okotte-ta just a little while ago. until-a-little-while-ago was-being-angry to OMOttara... when-think-that B-but this is a one in a de demo kore wa metta ni nai million chance!! but this-(one) (T) rarely ______ chansu da!! chance is5[View pans way back to show them in a meadow--Madoka still on her back with Kyousuke perched over her.]Madoka: Hey... nee...narration: Okay!! I'm a man!! yoshi!! ore mo OTOKO da!! all-right I too man am---------------------------------------------------p 181 (181)1[Hikaru and Akane come upon the two.]2Hikaru: [surprised, blushing] S-Sempai!! se sempai!!Akane: Ky-Kyousuke... ki KYOUSUKE...3Kyousuke: Hikaru-chan!! hikaru-chan!!4[Hikaru portrait--shell-shocked realization...]5[Tears begin to pool in her eyes.]6[She runs off. Kyousuke can only watch helplessly, since he's got a smiling Madoka locked around his neck.]Kyousuke: H-Hikaru-chan!! hi hikaru-chan!!Hikaru FX: ___ da_---------------------------------------------------p 182 (182)1[He reaches out a hand in the direction of Hikaru. Electricity crackles around him.]Kyousuke: (N-now I'm ruined!!) (mo moo HAMETSU daa--_!!) now ruin/destruction am2Akane: [angrily] KYOUSUKE!! SOMEONE LIKE YOU KYOUSUKE!! anta tte yu-- HITO wa... IS... you (called) person (T)3[She tries to stifle a giggle.]Akane: ___ pu_4Akane: Ah... Ah ha ha ha ha ha ha a... a ha ha ha ha ha ha ha... ha... Ah ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! a ha ha ha ha ha ha ha[Kyousuke can only watch wide-eyed.]5[Akane blushes and turns a cute face towards him.]Akane: What a funny face you're nante omoshiroi KAO making! what! amusing/funny-expression shite-ru no yo are-making Ah ha ha ha ha ha ha! a ha ha ha ha ha ha __ __ ha ha6[Isolated view of a van parked next to a cabin.]Akane: [off] Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! Ahh, my stomach hurts. a-- o-naka itai stomach sore---------------------------------------------------p 183 (183)1Akane FX: a_ ha_ ha ha_ ha_ hi--_ ha_ ha_ Master: Kasuga-kun... KASUGA-kun...2[Kyousuke turns to look.]3Master: [holding up a book] Kasuga-kun... Those KASUGA-kun... sakki no mushrooms back then... a-little-while-ago's ______ kinoko... mushrooms They're described in this kono HON ni kaite-atta n da kedo... book... in-this-book was-written (explan) butbook: Mushrooms kinoko Now you too can be a kore de anata mo kinoko Mushroom Ph.D.!! with-this/now you too mushrooms HAKASE!! Ph.D.4[Master faces us, opens the book and points out an item . His expression is dark...]Master: What we threw away and what suteta yatsu mo TAbeta yatsu mo we ate--it seems they were thrown-away thing and ate thing and all harmful mushrooms... minna DOKU kinoko datta mitai da... all harmful-mushrooms were seems5[Kyousuke facial portrait.]6[Pov shifts to show that Master is actually showing the open book to a nearby tree. Kyousuke points to himself.]Kyousuke: U-uhh... I'm over here... a ano... boku wa kotchi desu kedo... I (T) this-way am butMaster: [to tree] Take a look. These are the mita mae kore ga harmful mushrooms... saw before this-(one) (S) ______ sono DOKU kinoko...... those-harmful-mushrooms---------------------------------------------------p 184 (184)1narration: So... When Hikaru-chan ja... sakki hikaru-chan ga cried back then... so a-little-while-ago (S) naita no wa... cried (nom) (T)2Hikaru: [embarrassed look] Oh, Sempai. I'm sorry a SEMPAI sakki wa about just now. a-little-while-ago (T) suimasen deshita was-sorry Even though I always become SEMPAI no KAO mitara itsu-mo wa happy when I see your face, your-face when-saw always (T) suddenly, for some reason... TANOshiku naru no ni become-joyful/happy even-though naze-ka TOTSUZEN... without-knowing-why/somehow suddenly3Hikaru: I cried. nakechatta n desu was-able-to-cry (explan)narration: ______ It was because of the yappari DOKU kinoko no sei?! harmful mushrooms, after after-all harmful-mushrooms 's fault all?!Kyousuke pratfall FX: ___ zu_4[Kyousuke comes up smiling.]narration: I-I'm glad...!! yo yokatta...!! Th-then she didn't see!! ji ja mirarete-nakatta n da!! then hadn't-seen (explan)5[Still smiling, Akane addresses Kyousuke.]Akane: Ah ha ha! Ah ha... a ha ha a ha... Huh? Why am I laughing? are? atashi nande WARAtte n no? I why laughing ___ ha_narration: ______ A harmful mushroom caused kore mo DOKU kinoko ga...... this, too... this-(one) too harmful-mushroom (S)6[Wide-eyed, he visualizes Madoka wrapping her arms around his neck.]narration: That means... to yu-- koto wa...... Even Ayukawa's suggestive ano AYUKAWA no CHOUHATSU-TEKI na behavior... that 's suggestive/provocative KOUDOU mo...... behavior too---------------------------------------------------p 185 (185)1[View looking up at the treetops and sky.]narration: ______ Everything, EVERYTHING was minna minna kinoko no se-- due to the mushrooms!! all mushroom's-fault datta n da!! was (explan)Madoka: [off] Huhhh? What was I doing are~~ atashi IMA made till now? I till-now nani shite-ta n darou? what was-doing (poss-explan)Akane: [off] Huh? Me too! are atashi mo!2narration: But... shikashi... If I think it over very yoku yoku KANGAete-mireba... hard... thoroughly if-try-to-think-overKyousuke: Akane! akane_3Kyousuke: You were a pretty impressive nakanaka taishita mushroom expert, weren't quite grand/considerable you!! ______ kinoko HAKASE datta ne_!! mushroom Ph.D. were (rhet) We owe this all to you... kochitora okage de... thanks-to/due-to this-way4[He smiles a nervous smile at Madoka, who looks back blankly. Master, Hikaru, and Akane study a posted sign.]Kyousuke: (On second thought... (KANGAete-mireba Well... It's okay since I maa...... choppiri toku shichatta benefited a bit from it.) a-bit benefited/gained kara i-- kaa) since okay (talk-to-self)Madoka: ? ?Master: But this mountain... What shikashi nan chu-- is this place called? but what (to iu) = called YAMA da... koko wa? mountain is this-place (T)narration: You could say I narrowly ayauku HAMETSU escaped ruin, but it was very-nearly/barely/narrowly ruin all resolved thanks to the glorious harmful effects to yu-- koto datta kedo of bad mushrooms! it-was-said-that but ____ ______ kega no KOUMYOU DOKU kinoko injury 's glorious-deed harmful-mushroom's no okage de nakanaori! due-to/thanks-to a-reconciliationsign: CAUTION CHUUI ______ Only harmful mushrooms kono YAMA wa DOKU kinoko grow on this mountain. this-mountain (T) harmful-mushrooms shika haemasen. only-grow Do not eat under any ZETTAI taberu na! circumstances! absoluteness don't-eat---------------------------------------------------