Kimagure Orange Road"The Secret Snapshot"Volume 10, Story 7WB Volume 6, Story 7Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation by : Hitoshi Doi (29 January 1992)Additional translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose                                 Craig Nishida                                 Thomas Wyatt                                 Jerry LeeLast revision : 08-18-95Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.eduNOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few      extras to those of you not having them.      Example: The subtitles on page 127 (127) are only in the WBs!---------------------------------------------------p 127 (127)--TITLE PAGE[Matsumoto Izumi's pov as he sketches Madoka singing onstage.]MAIN TITLE (at top)                          _______  The Secret Snapshot             HIMITSU no sunappu                                  secret     snapshotSUB-TITLE (at bottom)             ________   ___  _madoka_  The Making of Pretty Girl       meikingu - obu - BISHOUJO!  Madoka!                         making     of    pretty-girl---------------------------------------------------p 128 (128)1[Kurumi gapes at a picture in the photo album.  Manami sits nearby.]Kurumi:  Manami-chan!  Your face is      manami-chan ttara         HEN na KAO--_!!  so strange!!                                (I-tell-you)  strange-face!Manami:  Isn't that you!                 kore       wa   anta  desho!                                  this-(one) (T)  you   poss-be2[Kyousuke moves in between them and stares at the pictures.]Kyousuke:                                          _______  Oh, an old album, hmm...        he--  MUKASHI no arubamu  kaa                                        old-album           (musing)                                                 _______  Who wet the bed?                dare daa  kono o-nesho                                  who  is   this bedwetter3Takashi: [reading a newspaper]  That's you, Kyousuke.           omae da  yo  KYOUSUKE                                  you  are[Kyousuke blushes.]crows-in-background FX:  <kaa!>                          kaa_4Kurumi:  Wowww!                          doe----_                                  <doerai> = astounding  Oniichan was a bedwetter!       oni--chan no oshikko    -tare--_                                            's pee/piddle  (derogatory)narration:  Old pictures are so             MUKASHI no SHASHIN tte  hazukashii  embarrassing...                 old-photos         (T)  embarrassing                                  naa......                                  (rhet)5Kyousuke:  But...                          demo...                                  ___  It looks like there are         ore no SHASHIN tte  hotondo  nai  hardly any pictures of          my-photos      (T)  hardly   there-aren't  me...                                  yo-- na        KI ga suru  ga...                                  it-looks-like  think/feel  and6[Exterior view of the balcony of the Kasuga residence.]Manami: [off]  Well, after all, we're          sorya  nantatte   atashi-tachi  cuter.  Right, otousan?         that   after-all  we                                  no HOU ga kawaii  mon     ne--    oto--san                                  cuter             people  (rhet)  fatherKurumi:  Oniichan was a snotty-nosed     oni--chan  hanattarashite  brat.  So uncute!!                         being-snotty-nosed-kid                                  kawaikunai--_!!                                  not-cuteKyousuke: [off]                            ___  Yah, so what?!  Hmmph.          do--se!  fun---------------------------------------------------p 129 (129)1[Exterior shot of the school.  Students arrive.]2[Kyousuke walks into class to find a crowd around Hiromi's desk.  She sits there holding an open book.]Kyousuke:  What are you looking at?        nani  mite-ru         no?                                  what  are-looking-at  (?)class FX:  <buzz buzz>                     zawazawaHiromi:  Ah, Kasuga-kun!                 a KASUGA-kun!3Hiromi: [smiling]  Look!  This is a picture of     mite!  kono SHASHIN  MAE no GAKKOU ni  you when you were at our old    look   this-photo    at-previous-school  school!                                  ita        TOKI  no    KASUGA-kun  da  yo!                                  was-there  time  (nom)             is4Kyousuke: [blushing, horrified]  EHHHH!?!                        ee_?!Komatsu: [grinning]  Now.  At last..                 tsui ni  IMA...                                  at-last  now  Your past is revealed!!         tokiakasareru           KASUGA no KAKO!!                                  is-explained/made-clear        's past5[She holds up 2 photos.  Both are of a short-haired, Yuusaku-like kid.  In one, Kyousuke stands outside in the hall, holding 2 buckets labeled "1-D". In the other, he picks his nose.]Hiromi:  HERE!!                          hora_!6[Kyousuke blushes fiercely.]class:  OHHHHHH!                        o~~~~_  He's amazing!                   koitsu   wa   sugee ya                                  this-guy (T)  extremely                                  ____________  <wah ha ha ha ha ha>            wahahahahaha---------------------------------------------------p 130 (130)1[Kyousuke grabs Hiromi by the wrist.]narration:  Wh-what is she doing,           ko koitsu     nante mono  bringing something like            this-girl  what! thing  this in?!                                  mottekuru  n da_                                  bring      (explan)Kyousuke:  St-stop!!                       yo yose_!!Hiromi:  It's okay.                      i-- ja nai  Nothing's being lost by         misete   heru      mon demo na  shi  showing it.*                    showing  diminish  nothing      consider<*Translation note (CN):  This is a cliche.  It is also a popular line used by guys to get girls to show more of their bodies...  "It won't go away if you show it."  That a girl (Hiromi) is saying it, makes it amusing.>2Kyousuke:                               ___  You want to humiliate me?!!     omae  ore ni  HAJI o kakaseru                                  you   by-me   shame-(a-person)                                  tsumori    ka_!!                                  intention  (?)Hiromi:  Oh, doesn't everyone know?      ara  mina-san  shiranai  no?                                       everyone  not-know  (?)narration:                        _______  ____  My image will come crashing     ime--ji  daun  mo   hanahadashii!!  down!!                          image    down  too  excessive/extreme3Kyousuke:  You can't be showing stuff      konna mon              miserareru  ka_!!  like this!!                     these-kinds-of-things  be-showing  (?)4[Madoka enters the classroom.]narration:  Especially to Ayukawa...        TOKU ni     AYUKAWA ni wa...                                  especially  to-Ayukawa (contrast)5[He releases Hiromi's wrist and the pictures go flying.]Kyousuke:  AH!                             a_!Hiromi hand FX:                   ___  <fwip!>                         ba_6[One lands on Madoka's desk.]photo FX:                         ____ _____  <flutter flutter!>              hira hira_---------------------------------------------------p 131 (131)1Kyousuke: [aghast]  AAH!                            aa_2[It lands face up.  It is the photo of 7th-grade Kyousuke, picking his nose.]3[Madoka looks down at the picture before her.  Kyousuke comes racing over.]Kyousuke:  Th-that's!!                     so sore wa_!!4[Madoka portrait--surprise.]5[Madoka portrait--laughter.]Madoka:                           ___  <tee!>                          pu_6Madoka FX:                        ________  <giggle>                        kusukusunarration:  Ahhhh...                        a--a...7[He retrieves the photo, still blushing fiercely, and looks at Hiromi. Meanwhile, Madoka has turned away to hide her laughter.  Komatsu and Hatta watch her in disbelief.]narration:  This jerk...!                   koitsu...!  Bringing in something           yoke-- na mono      motte-kite  totally uncalled-for, and       uncalled-for-thing  bring-(and)  making a complete fool  out of me...!                   tonda       HAJI o kakasarechatta...!                                  outrageous  made-shamedMadoka FX:                        ________  <giggle>                        kusukusuKomatsu:  Hey, Ayukawa's laughing!        oi  AYUKAWA ga   WARAtte-ru  ze                                              (S)  is-laughing !  Come to think of it, she        so-- iya             aitsu  hardly ever laughs at           come-to-think-of-it  that-person  anything.                                  metta ni  WARAtta  koto  nai      no ni na                                  seldom    laughed  thing not-have even-tho---------------------------------------------------p 132 (132)1[Exterior night shot of the Ayukawa residence.]2[Isolated shot of a lamp on a dresser, and a stereo system.]3[Madoka sits on her bed, looking at a photo album.  Also on her bed are two records.]LP 1:                             _______  <something> Overture            vanshia  JOKYOKU                                  ???????  prelude/overture                                  __________  _________   Brahms <something> Overture     bura--musu  devanshia JOKYOKU                                  Brahms      ????????? prelude/overtureLP 2: [partial view]                     ________       __________  ...& Capricci                   ...#&# kapurisu    ...rodakushon  ...Production                          capricci    (p)roduction4[Two photos of a young Madoka.  In one, she sits and plays in an inner tube. In the other she stands in formal kimono.]5page FX:                          _____  <flip!>                         pera_6[Madoka portrait.]doorbell FX: [off]                ___ _____  <ding dong>                     pin po--n---------------------------------------------------p 133 (133)1[Kyousuke appears at the door with two books tucked under his arm.]Kyousuke:  Good evening...!                ..........komban wa!2Madoka:  Kasuga-kun...                   KASUGA-kun...3Kyousuke:                                 ___  Uhh...  It's my turn to do      ano...  ore  SUUGAKU      ashita  the math tomorrow, so...        uhh     I    mathematics  tomorrow                                  atatte-ru   n de...                                  being-hit  ('cause)                                  ______  Would you show me your          no--to  torasete-kurenai?  notes?                          notes   not-let-(me)-take4Madoka:  Ohh.  Sure!                     nan da    do--zo!Madoka FX:                        _____  <smile!>                        niko_5Madoka: [with a smile]  It's like I'm your private      marude  atashi  KASUGA-kun no  tutor, hmm?                     as-if   I                  's                                  KATEI KYOUSHI  mitai  ne                                  private-tutor  seems  (rhet)Kyousuke: [smiling]  Thank you for everything.       osewa ni narimasunarration:  This was just an excuse...      to yu-- no wa   KOUJITSU  de...                                  this-case  (T)  excuse---------------------------------------------------p 134 (134)1[Madoka sits on the edge of her bed.  Kyousuke sits on the floor and watches her.]narration:  I was really concerned          KYOU   ano SHASHIN   mirarechatta  over her having seen those      today  those-photos  had-seen-(finality)  pictures today...                                  koto  ga   KI ni natte  KI ni natte...                                  (nom) (S)  weighing-on-the-mindMadoka:  Huh?!  The picture?             e_  SHASHIN?2Madoka: [beaming]  Ohh...  That?                   aa...  are?                                            _______  You were pretty handsome.       nakanaka  hansamu   datta  ja nai                                  quite     handsome  were3Kyousuke:  R-really...?!                   so soo...?!narration:                                                  _______ ____  Great.  It looks like I         yokatta   do--yara        ime--ji daun wa  avoided any harm to my          was-good  it-looks-as-if  image   down (T)  image!                                  sakerareta!                                  avoided/dodged4[Looking off to the side, Kyousuke spies the open photo album.]5Kyousuke:  Oh.  Is this you, Ayukawa?      are  kore AYUKAWA?Madoka:  Please don't look too           anmari      minai de            yo  closely.                        too-(much)  don't-look-(please)  It's embarrassing.              hazukashii    kara                                  embarrassing  that's-why6[He smiles at 3 pictures of a 5-year-old Madoka.]narration:                                            ______  Wowww!  Ayukawa's so cute!!     hee----_    AYUKAWA kawaii!!---------------------------------------------------p 135 (135)1[A photo of a 15- or 16-year-old Madoka.]Kyousuke:  This one's pretty recent.       kore       wa   SAIKIN  da  na                                  this-(one) (T)  newest  is2Kyousuke:  This is...                      kore wa...[She grabs the album from out of his hands.]Madoka FX:                        ___  <fwip!>                         pa_Madoka:                                   ______  Oh, not this page!!             a  kono pe--ji wa   dame_!!                                     this-page   (T)  no-good3[She snatches up a picture and puts it behind her back.]Kyousuke:  Eh?                             e?Madoka FX:                        ___  <fwippp!>                       sa_4Madoka:  This is...                      kore wa...  A little...                     chotto...Kyousuke:  How come?                       do--shite?5Madoka: [nervous smile]           ________  Shall I get you coffee or       ko--hi-- demo          ireyo--     ka?  anything?                       coffee   or-something  shall-pour  (?)  Aren't you hungry?              onaka suite-nai?6[Kyousuke portrait.]7[Isolated shot of an open textbook, a cup of coffee and a slice of cake.]Madoka: [off]  So...  This is...               de...  koko ga...                                                     ______  In a graph of a quadratic       NIJI      KANSUU   gurafu ni...  equation...                     secondary function graph  in---------------------------------------------------p 136 (136)1[While she explains, Kyousuke studies her.]narration:  I wonder if Ayukawa also        AYUKAWA ni mo   HITO ni    mirarecha  has embarrassing photos         to-Ayukawa too  by-people  mustn't-be-seen  that she doesn't want  others to see?                  hazukashii SHASHIN  ga   aru no ka naa?                                  embarrassing-photos (S)  have   I-wonder2narration:  Come to think of it...          so-- ieba...                                  _______  The album only has her          arubamu ni wa          KODOMO no koro  childhood and present...        in-album   (contrast)  childhood                                  to   GENZAI      no     dake...                                  and  at-present  (nom)  only  In other words, there's a       tsumari         nukete-ru  section of her life that's      in-other-words  is-missing  missing.                        _toki_                                  JIDAI        ga   aru       wake    da                                  a-period/age (S)  there-is  reason  is3diagram:  Childhood / X / the Present     KODOMO  #X#  GENZAI  pre-            high-           SHOUGAKUSEI              IZEN  school          school          elementary-school-pupil  before                                  KOUKOUSEI                                  high-school-studentnarration:  So...  What in the world is     to kurya...  #X# wa ittai?  "X"?4Kyousuke: [off] (There weren't any photos of     (CHUUGAKUSEI     no TOKI no SHASHIN tte  her junior high days!!)          jr-high-student 's time 's photo   (T)                                  yatsu  ga   nai!!)                                  fellow (S)  there-isn'tnarration:  Perhaps that means...           to yu-- koto wa  moshiya...                                  that-means       possibly                                                       ___  Ayukawa's hidden photos         kakushita no    wa   ore ga  were taken just before I        hidden    (nom) (T)  I   (S)  transferred in...  In other  words...                        TENKOU shite-kuru  chotto  MAE no                                  come-to-transfer   a-bit   before                                  AYUKAWA no SHASHIN...  tsumari                                          's photo       in-other-words5narration:  To me...                        ore ni totte...                                      _toki_  That's the only period for      sono JIDAI dake  ga   KUUHAKU          no  which I have a blank image      only-that-period (S)  void/blank-space 's  of Ayukawa...?!                                  AYUKAWA ZOU...?!                                          image/picture6Madoka: [looking up]                                         _______  So...  This answer is X         de...  kono KOTAE  wa  #X# iko--ru...  equals...                       so     this-answer (T)     equalsKyousuke:  That picture...                 ano SHASHIN...narration:  If I'm told not to look,        miru na   to iwarerya         naosara  then I'll want to see it        not-look  if-be-telling-that  all-the-more  all the more.                                  SHIritaku     naru                                  want-to-know  become---------------------------------------------------p 137 (137)1[Madoka stops short.]2[He laughs in embarrassment...]Kyousuke:  Maybe it's a picture of you     OTOKO to  ISSHO    no SHASHIN  with a guy...                   with-man  together 's photo                                  dattari shite...                                  are-(or)Kyousuke:  What am I saying!               naanchatte!3[She closes her eyes and smiles.]Madoka:  Well, yes...!                   maa ne..!Kyousuke FX:                      __________ _____  <ah! ha! ha! ha! ha! ha!>       a_ha_ha_ha ha_haKyousuke:  Oh, I thought so.               a yappari4[He does a horrified double-take.]Kyousuke:                         ___  AH!                             ha_5[She gazes dreamily off to the side.]narration:  *A* *GUY*?!                     o - to - ko?!Madoka:  Yeah.                           so-- yo  I'm meeting him tomorrow.       ashita    Au no                                  tomorrow  meeting  I was just thinking that        sorosoro  Aitai na--    tte OMOtte-ta  I'd like to see him!            soon      want-to-meet  was-thinking-that                                  tokoro    na n da!                                  occasion  is (explan)6Kyousuke:  Tomorrow...?!                   ashita......?!narration:  Th-then, sure enough...         ji jaa  yappari...  It's one of her delinquent      CHUUGAKU       JIDAI  no  pals from her junior high       jr-high-school period 's  days or something...                                  FURYOU      NAKAMA     ka  nani-ka                                  delinquent  associates or  something                                  tte      tokoro ka                                  (quote)  case   (talk-to-self)7[A fractured panel of a profile of Kyousuke.]narration:  What the hell sorta guy is      ittai         donna         yatsu?!  he?!                            in-the-world  what-kind-of  fellow  What...                         ittai...---------------------------------------------------p 138 (138)1narration:  What the hell...  Sorta         ttai...  donna yatsu?  guy is he?!Kyousuke FX:                      _______ _______  <nodding off>                   kokkuri kokkuri2[Full-length portrait of Madoka in the shower.]shower FX:                        _____  <splashhh!>                     za--_3Kyousuke: [opening his eyes]  Hm?                             n?4[He looks around.]Kyousuke:  Ayukawa...                      AYUKAWA...---------------------------------------------------p 139 (139)1[She towels herself dry.]2[Walking past the washroom, Kyousuke hears the shower running.]narration:  Oh, bathing, huh?               nan da  o-FURO ka?shower FX:                        _____  <splashhh!>                     za--_3[He spies something off-panel.]Kyousuke:  !                               !4[It's the photo, lying face-down on a dresser..]5[He stands in front of it.]Kyousuke FX:                      _____  <gulp!>                         goku_narration:  What the hell sorta guy is      ittai         donna        yatsu  ga...  he...?                          in-the-world  what-kind-of fellow (S)6[Tight shot of his hand reaching out to touch the photo.]---------------------------------------------------p 140 (140)1[Madoka exits the washroom, wrapped in a towel.  She's just in time to see him reaching for the photo.]door FX:                          _____  <clack>                         kacha2[She blushes.]3[He blushes.]4Kyousuke:  Oh...  No...  Uhh...            a...  iya...  ano......  sono...  Umm...crows-in-background FX:  <kaa!>                          kaa_5[Wide-eyed and blushing, he raises a hand in greeting.]Kyousuke:  How was the bath?               yukagen do-- desu ka?narration:  What am I saying?               nani itte n da                                  what say (explan)6Madoka: [seductively]  It was just fine...             cho--do  i--  wa yo..                                  just     fine  Did you want to take one        ISSHO ni  hairu?  with me?                        together  enter---------------------------------------------------p 141 (141)1[Hiding the photo behind him, he backs away from her.]Kyousuke:  W-well...                       so soo ne...                                           ___  B-but I took one at home,       de demo  ore  IE de    haitte-kichatta  so...                              but   I    at-home  went-and-entered                                  kara...                                  that's-why2[He backpedals quickly, all the while smiling.  Madoka glances off-panel.]Kyousuke:  Well, we have to study.         saate     BENKYOU  BENKYOU                                  well/now  studyKyousuke move-away FX:  <slide slide slide>             tsu tsu tsu3Madoka: [blushing, wide-eyed]  Oh!  The picture...             an!  SHASHIN ga4[Kyousuke goes into Madoka's bedroom and shuts the door behind him.]door FX:                          _____  <slam>                          batanKyousuke:  <phew>                          fuu5[He's just about to look at it when...]Kyousuke:  What the heck is this           ittai         kono SHASHIN wa...  picture...?                     in-the-world  this-photo   (T)Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            ____ ____ ____ ____  <thump thump thump thump>       doki doki doki doki6[...Madoka bursts into the room.]Madoka:  Don't look!!                    micha dame--_!!door FX:                          _____  <clack>                         gacha7[The photo flies out the window.]Madoka:  Ah!                             a_picture FX:                       ____  <whoosh!>                       hyu_---------------------------------------------------p 142 (142)1[She lunges for it and nearly pitches out the window.]Madoka:  Kya!!                           kya_!!Kyousuke:  Watch out!!                     abunai!!2[Kyousuke must grab her around the waist to save her.]3Kyousuke FX:  <PULL!>                         gui_4[She's pulled back in, ending up on the floor against a wall.]Madoka:                           ___  <thud>                          don5[But throwing her in has sent Kyousuke himself flying out the window.  The photo floats in the air above him.]Kyousuke:  Wah!!                           wa_!!6[He stares at the photo above him...]---------------------------------------------------p 143 (143)1[...and snares it in his left hand.]Kyousuke FX:                      ___  <nab!>                          ba_2[He stares at it wide-eyed...]Kyousuke:  TH-THIS IS...!!                 ko kore wa!!3[...all the way...]narration:  No doubt about it...            TASHIka ni...  She's with a man.               OTOKO to ISSHO da  And...                          shikamo...  Ayukawa is...                   AYUKAWA wa4[...down...]Kyousuke:                                          _____ ______ (Stark naked!  Completely        (ISSHI matowanu  o--ru nu--do!)  nude!)                           stark-naked     all   nude5[...to the...]Kyousuke: (But...)                         (demo...)6[...ground!]bush FX:                          _____  <rustle!>                       basa_Kyousuke FX:                      ______  <crash>                         doshinnarration:  It's...  It's great!!           yo...  yokatta!!---------------------------------------------------p 144 (144)1[He lies back on her bed, grasping his back in pain.  She sits on the edge of the bed.]Kyousuke:  Ow-ow-ouch...                   atetete...Madoka:  Are you all right?              daijo--bu?2Madoka: [looking at him unhappily]  Really now!  It serves you      moo  JIGOUJITOKU yo!!  right!!3[She's startled to see a smile on his face.]Kyousuke:                         ________  <smile>                         nikoniko4[He sits up, photo in hand, and gives her a wink.]Madoka:  What are you laughing for?      nani  o   WARAtte-ru   no?                                  what (O)  are-laughing (?)  Maybe you got hit in the        uchi dokoro demo warukatta  wrong spot...                   hit-in-a-vital-spot-or-something                                  no kashira...                                      I-wonderKyousuke:  This...                         kore...5Madoka: [blushing and anguished]  Ah!!                            a_!!Kyousuke:  How great.                      yokatta ne  He's coming back tomorrow.      ashita...  KAEtte-kuru  n da      ne                                  tomorrow   come-home    (explan)6Madoka: [small smile]  Yeah, it's been a while!        soo  hisashiburi ni  ne!narration:  Ayukawa's secret...             AYUKAWA no HIMITSU...  I feel like I've learned a      mata   choppiri  SHIru  koto ga dekita  little bit more about her...    again  a-bit     know   was-able-to-(do)                                  yo-- na        KI ga shite...                                  it-looks-like  thinking/feeling                                                    ___  For some reason, I'm happy!     naze-ka  ureshii  ore!                                  somehow  happy    I---------------------------------------------------p 145 (145)1Madoka:  But still...                    sore ni shite mo2Madoka:  PERVERT!!  Give it back!        #H#_!!  kaeshite!narration:  But...  She's so                shikashi...  konna ni  embarrassed...                  but          so-much                                  hazukashi-garu              nante...                                  come-to-appear-embarrassed  the-likes-of  Ayukawa's so cute.              AYUKAWA  kawaii  toko      aru    n da na                                           cute    occasion  exist (explan)3[Closeup of the picture.  A 3-year-old Madoka plays in a bubble bath with her father.]narration:  To be sure...                   TASHIka ni...                                  _____ ______  Ayukawa's completely nude,      o--ru nu--do no     AYUKAWA da  kedo  but, if it's with her           all-nude     (nom)          is  but  father...                       _____                                  oyaji-san to  nara...                                  with-father   if-it-is  I'll forgive her!!              yurushichau yo ne!!---------------------------------------------------