Kimagure Orange Road"Love in a Video!"Volume 10, Story 6WB Volume 6, Story 6Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose                                 Craig Nishida                                 Thomas Wyatt                                 Jerry LeeLast revision : 08-18-95Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.eduNOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few      extras to those of you not having them.      Example: The subtitles on page 107 (107) are only in the WBs!---------------------------------------------------p 107 (107)--TITLE PAGE[Madoka stands in a long black dress, black nylons and black flats.  Hands on her knees, she crouches down slightly and looks off to the side.]MAIN TITLE (at top)               _____  Love in a Video!                bideo de  #LOVE#!                                  in-videoSUB-TITLE (at bottom)  I Know You Have Your            JIJOU                 ga   aru no wa  Reasons, But You Still Want     circumstances/reasons (S)  having (T)  to Fool Around with Fire.*                                  SHItte-ru    keredo                                  are-knowing  but                                  ikenai       HIASObi shite-mitai                                  bad/naughty  want-to-play-with-fire-(love)                                               and-find-out<*Commentary:  The word <hiasobi> = "playing (fooling around) with fire" has the additional meaning of "playing with love".>---------------------------------------------------p 108 (108)1[Hikaru, in school uniform, looks off-panel in surprise.]2[Kyousuke portrait--he looks off to the side.]3Hikaru:  So you were here after all.     yappari...  koko datta no ne                                  after all   here were     (rhet)4Kyousuke:                         ____  You...                          kimi wa......5[View pans way back to show the two on a pedestrian overpass.  Hikaru throws herself at him.]Hikaru:  I wanted to see you!            Aitakatta!---------------------------------------------------p 109 (109)1Komatsu: [through a megaphone]    __________  CU-U-UT!!                       ka----ttoo!!2Komatsu:                                                           _______  Oh, Hikaru-chan!  Your          iya--  hikaru-chan  nakanaka     riariti  performance was simply                              quite/highly reality  overflowing with realism!                                  afureru   ENGI         datta  yo!                                  overflow  performance  was  Magnificent!                    subarashii                                  magnificent/wonderfulKomatsu FX:                       __________  <clap clap>                     pachipachiHikaru: [smiling]                                         ___  Really...?  Eh-heh              ..........so-- kashira  ufu <heart-symbol>  <heart-symbol>.3Komatsu:  On the other hand, Kasuga's     sore ni hikikae  KASUGA no HOU       wa  performance...  What can        on-the-contrary         's direction (T)  I say?  It's sorta...                                  nante  yu-- no     ka naa                                  what!  say  (nom)  I-wonder  A bit more in this scene...     mo-- chotto  koko n tokoro  3-NEN -buri  You're finally meeting after    a-bit-more   here's-place   after-3-years  3 years...                                  no     DEAi     na   n da      kara...                                  (nom)  meeting  are  (explan)  that's-why  So...  Maybe more moving...     so--     motto      KANDOU-TEKI ni...                                  like-so  much-more  moving/touching[Kyousuke closes his eyes and sweats.]narration:  Eh?!  What am I doing, you      e_  nani  o   yatte-ru  ka  tte?  ask?                             !  what (O)  am-doing  (?) (quote)Kyousuke:  ..........                      ..........4[Profile shot of Akane, operating a movie camera.]narration:  Basically, 2 or 3 days ago,     jitsu wa  KOMATSU ga   AKI    no  Komatsu started talking         actually          (S)  autumn 's  about making a video drama                   _____   _________  and entering it in the local    CHOUNAI      bideo - konku--ru ni  Autumn Video Contest...         in-the-town  video   <concours, Fr.>                                               in-video-contest                                  _____   ______                                  bideo - dorama o   TSUKUtte    OUBO suru to                                  video-drama   (O)  make-(and)  if-enter-for                                  2 ~~ 3 HI MAE ni      i--dashite...                                  from-2-to-3-days-ago  beginning-to-speak5[Exterior shot of ABCB.]narration:                                              _________  Komatsu's goal is first         KOMATSU no meate wa   konku--ru no  prize in the contest--a                 's aim   (T)  contest   's  video camera!                                            _____   ______                                  ITTOUSHOU   -HIN         bideo - kamera!                                  first-prize  an-article  video-camera                                                         ______  So he borrowed a camera         sono tame  HATTA kara  kamera o karite...  from Hatta, and...              therefore  from-Hatta  borrow-camera-(and)Komatsu: [off]  Everyone, I need your           minna     KYOURYOKU shite-kure  cooperation.                    everyone  work-together-(with-me)                                  ___  I'm making a cool "seishun"     ore wa   kakko ii  SEISHUN  drama.*                         I   (T)  cool      springtime-of-youth                                  ______                                  dorama o   tsukuru  n da                                  drama (O)  make     (explan)<*Translation note:  <seishun> = "springtime of life/youth," "salad days," etc...>6[Komatsu crosses his arms and closes his eyes.  Kyousuke and Hikaru watch him in puzzlement.]narration:  But...                          shikashi...                                               _______  Casting was a problem...        MONDAI  wa   kyasuto...                                  problem (T)  cast  Komatsu, who likes to           medachi -tagari   -YA         no  stand out...                    want-to-stand-out  person-who (nom)                                  KOMATSU no koto...                                  about-KomatsuKomatsu: (What shall I do?                (do-- shiyou?                                  ___  I want to play the leading      ore  SHUEN shitai                   kedo  role, but there's no way I      I    want-to-play-the-leading-part  but  can appear on film at the                 ______  same time I'm operating the     JIBUN de  kamera  o   mawashi-nagara  camera...)                      by-self   camera (O)  while-turning                                  DOUJI ni          JIBUN ga   DEreru                                  at-the-same-time  self  (S)  can-appear                                  wake wa nai        shi...)                                  there's-no-reason  consider---------------------------------------------------p 110 (110)1[Komatsu stares at the camera in his hands.]narration:  ...reluctantly resigned         yamunaku    SHUTSUEN     o  DANNEN!  himself to his fate!            reluctantly performance (O) resign-oneself-                                  unwillingly                 to-one's-fateKomatsu:                                            ___  _____   ______  But still, I don't know how     sore ni shite mo  ore  bideo - kamera  to operate a video camera...    but/still         I    video-camera                                  TSUKAiKATA  wakanne--                                  how-to-use  not-knowAkane: [brightly]  Oh, I know how.                 a atashi wakaru wa yo                                    I      know2Akane: [smiling]                                    _________  Then I'll be your               ja    atashi ga   kameraman  yattageru  yo  cameraman.                      then  I      (S)  cameraman  do-(for-you)  It sounds like fun.             omoshiro -so-- da      kara                                  fun       looks-as-if  that's-whyKomatsu:                                ___  Then I'll be the, uhh,          ja    ore wa...to   KANTOKU   o   yaru  yo  director.                       then  I   (T)  uh   director (O)  do3Komatsu:  And so the question is,         de           MONDAI wa    DARE ga  who will play the leading       and-so/then  problem (T)  who  (S)  roles...?                                  SHUYAKU      ka......                                  leading-role (musing-to-self)Hikaru: [raising her hand]  ME-E-EE!!                       ha----i!!4[She reads from the prepared script...]Hikaru: [excited]  And the two gazed at each       soshite   futari   wa   mitsume ai...  other with love...              and/then  2-people (T)  gaze    love                                       ____ ______  Ohh, and there's even a         maa  rabu shi--n  made  aru       no ne!  love scene!                          love-scene   even  there-is[Kyousuke recoils.]Kyousuke FX:                      _____  <urkk!>                         giku_5[Hikaru clings to Kyousuke's upper arm.]Hikaru:  Don't you think these roles     kono YAKU               atashi to SEMPAI ni  are just perfect for Sempai     these-characters/roles  by-Sempai-and-me  and me?                                  pittari    da    to OMOimasen?                                  perfectly  are   not-think-thatHikaru FX:                        ________  <smile>                         nikonikoKomatsu and Akane FX:             __________  <clap clap>                     pachipachiAkane:  Yes!  The two of you--it's      hai  o-futari-san ni          KETTEI!!  settled!!                            by-(hon)-2-people-(hon)  decision6[Exterior shot of some buildings.]narration:  And so, right now, we're        so-- yu-- wake de  KOMATSU no  kaita  in the middle of filming--      for-that-reason    Komatsu (S) wrote  acting out the scenario         ________  that Komatsu wrote.             shinario  ni sotte    tada IMA                                  scenario  satisfying  just-now/at-present                                  SATSUEI-CHUU    na   no desu                                  during-filming  are  (explan)Komatsu: [off]                                                     ______  So-o-o, that only leaves        saate  ato      nokosu       wa  shi--n 10  scene 10--in other words,              the-rest leave-behind (T) scene-10  the love scene!                                 ____ ______                                  tsumari         rabu shi--n  nomi!                                  that-is-to-say  love-scene   only/merely                                                _________  The deadline for the contest    ashita   ga   kontesuto no SHIMEKIri  is tomorrow, so let's do our    tomorrow (S)  contest   's closing  best to finish this.                                  da  shi                                  is  consider                                  gambatte  KANSEI sasemasho--                                  do-best   shall-make-completedsign:  Lily of the Valley              suzuran---------------------------------------------------p 111 (111)1[Exterior shot of ABCB.]Madoka: [off]  Oh, tonight!                    a  KON'YA!2[Madoka takes a break, reading the newspaper behind the counter.  Kyousuke looks on.]Madoka:                           ______                     ___________  TV's Movie Playhouse            terebi no EIGA GEKIJOU de "kasaburanka  is running "East of             on-TV's-movie-theater      Casablanca  Casablanca."                                  no HIGASHI"  yaru  n da                                  's the-east  do    (explan)Kyousuke:  Is that right?                  HONTOU?                                  ___  I really like that movie...     ore  sono EIGA   SUki na  n da...                                  I    that-movie  liking   (explan)3Madoka: [smiling]  Me too!                         atashi mo!  It starts just when the         cho--do    HOUEI    JIKAN wa   o-MISE ga  shop closes.                    precisely  telecast hour  (T)  store  (S)                                  Owaru  koro  ne                                  close  when  (rhet)4[She turns about to face the TV screen set on the wall behind the counter.]Madoka:  Maybe I'll stay and watch it    koko de        mite-iko--      ka na  here.                           in-this-place  shall-go-watch  I-wondernarration:                        ___  I'll be filming all evening     ore wa   KOMBAN zutto  KOMATSU-tachi to  with Komatsu and the others.    I   (T)  all-evening   with-Komatsu-(and                                                         assoc)                                  SATSUEI  da  mon     naa                                  filming  am  reason5Madoka: [brightly]  Hey, if you like, let's         nee  yokattara  ISSHO ni  miyo--      yo  watch it together.              say  if-okay    together  shall-watchKyousuke:  EH?!                            e?!6[His pov.  She touches index finger to her chin, and gives him a small smile.]Madoka:  I'll close the store, turn      o-MISE o   shimete      DENKI        o  down the lights, and with       store (O)  close-(and)  electricity (O)  a glass in one hand...                          ______                                  KURAkushite     gurasu  KATATE ni...                                  make-dim-(and)  glass   in-one-hand  That's not bad, is it?          nante  WARUkunai  yo ne                                  how!   not-badnarration:  "Not bad" is hardly the         WARUkunai  dokoro ja nai!!  phrase!!                        not-bad    is-not-the-word7[Exterior night shot of ABCB.]Kyousuke: [off] (Just the two of us alone,       (AKI no YONAGA ni        futari kkiri de...  on a long autumn night...        on-autumn's-long-night  by-just-2-people  How nice...)                    i-- naa)---------------------------------------------------p 112 (112)1Kyousuke:                                ___ (But I'll be with Komatsu        (demo  ore  KOMATSU-tachi no TOKORO ni...  and the others...                but   I    at-Komatsu-(and-assoc)'s-place  Grr...  Who cares!!)            e--i  maa ii ka!!)Kyousuke:                          ___               _chikara_ (I have the Power in me!)        (ore ni wa          NOURYOKU ga  aru  n da!)                                   in-me  (contrast)  Power    (S) have (expl)2[Panels 2 and 3 show the Komatsu residence.]narration:  And so, after a long while,     to yu-- wake de  hisabisa ni  here I am cheating on them      for-that-reason  after-a-long-interval  again!                                  kakemochi                   desu!                                  being-in-2-or-more-places-  am                                  (connotes 'cheating')3narration:                               ____ ______  We decided to shoot *the*       REI no rabu shi--n         wa  love scene at Komatsu's         the-love-scene-in-question (T)  house...                                  KOMATSU no IE de    toru  koto ni nari...                                  at-Komatsu's-house  take  it-has-been-                                                            decided-tosign:  Komatsu                         KOMATSU4[Profile shot of Komatsu and Akane as they watch the scene off-panel.  Akane works the camera.]Komatsu:                                                         ________  All right, and...  Action!!     hai  HOMBAN                    suta--to!!                                       acting-before-the-camera  start5[Pov shifts to show all four.  Hikaru faces Kyousuke.]Hikaru:  Tonight, come to my room        KON'YA   atashi no HEYA ni  kite...  <please>...                     tonight  to-my-room         coming6[He stares back...]Kyousuke:  ..........                      ..........7[...and pulls out a copy of the script.]Kyousuke:  Let's see...  What was it?      e--tto     nan  da kke?                                  let's-see  what is (?)Komatsu and Akane:  Hey hey hey!                    kora kora kora---------------------------------------------------p 113 (113)1[Angrily, Akane hauls Kyousuke off to the side.]Akane:  You goof!                       darashinai                naa------_                                  untidy/slovenly/slipshod  (rhet)   !  Come here a sec!                chotto kinasai yo_2Akane:  You're with Hikaru-chan,        hikaru-chan ga   AITE     na   n da  so come out looking more                    (S)  partner  are  (explan)  determined!!                                  kara        motto      SEKKYOKU-TEKI ni                                  that's-why  much-more  aggressive/positive                                  DEnasai          yo_!!                                  go-out-(command)  Got it?!                        i-- koto[He sweats.]3Akane:  Although it's just acting,      tatoe    ENGI de           atte-mo  it's a love scene.  A love      even-if  in-a-performance  even-tho-being  scene!                          ____ ______      ____ ______                                  rabu shi--n  yo  rabu shi--n!                                  love-scene4Akane:                                            ______  Isn't this is your chance?      kore       wa   chansu  ja nai?                                  this-(one) (T)  chance  is-notKyousuke:  Eh?!                            e?!5[Isolated shot of a corner of the room.]Akane: [off]  Take advantage of the           dosakusa ni magirete    yatchai na yo  situation and do it already.    take-advantage-of-the-  do-(finality)                                  confusion-of-the-situation-(and)Kyousuke: [off]  Wha!?!                          na_?!6[His pov of a wide-eyed Akane.]Akane:                                             ______  Then, a torrid scene is         so-- surya       dorama de wa  set down in the drama, so       if-do-like-that  in-drama  (contrast)  you, you and Hikaru-chan...                                  HAKUNETSU                no ENGI   tte                                  white-heat/incandescence 's acting (T)                                  koto ni mo naru         shi                                  it's-also-been-decided  and-besides                                  anta wa   anta de                                  you  (T)  on-account-of-you                                  hikaru-chan to......                                  with-Hikaru                                  _____  <eh heh heh>                    ufufu  What a deal!                    mo--ke mono             ja nai!                                  good-bargain/a-godsend  is-not---------------------------------------------------p 114 (114)1Hikaru: [gaze downcast]  I'll definitely be              atashi  kitto   matte-ru    kara...  waiting...                      I       surely  be-waiting  that's-why2[He can't meet her eyes.]Kyousuke:                               ___  But I...                        demo  ore ni wa...                                  but   to-me  (contrast)3Hikaru: [turning aside]  I know!                         SHItte-ru  wa!                                  am-knowing                                                          _hito_  You have someone else...        anata ni wa          ano ONNA    ga...                                  for-you  (contrast)  that-person (S)Kyousuke FX:                      _____  <urkk!>                         giku_4Hikaru: [sadly]                                   _hito_  Even tonight, you intend to     KON'YA  mo   ano ONNA no tokoro ni  go to her place, right?         tonight too  to-that-person's-place                                  iku  tsumori    na  no     ne?                                  go   intention  are (nom)  (rhet)Kyousuke FX:                      _____  <URKK!>                         giku_5[Kyousuke bows his head toward Hikaru in shame, clapping a hand to the back of his head.  Hikaru is surprised.]Kyousuke:  N-no...  Th-that's...           i iya  so sonna  uwa--_!!  Oo-wahhh!!  I-I'm sorry!!                   go gomennasai!!Kyousuke FX:  <head-bob>                      pekon6Kyousuke: [nervous smile]  B-but we're only watching       de demo  tada    EIGA   ISSHO ni  a movie together, and              but   merely  movie  together  that...                                  miru   dake  na  n da      shi                                  watch  only  are (explan)  and-besides                                  sonna......                                  that-kind-ofHikaru:  Huh?                            e?[Komatsu and Akane also look at him blankly.]---------------------------------------------------p 115 (115)1Kyousuke: [opening the script again]  Ah!  Oops.                      a ikeneKomatsu:  What are you doing?             nani  yatte  n da      omae wa...                                  what  doing  (explan)  you  (T)script:                           ___________  "East of Casablanca" SCRIPT     kasaburanka no HIGASHI   DAIHON                                  Casablanca  's the-east  script2Komatsu:  Can't be helped, can it.        sho-- ga nai  naa  Then, let's take a short        ja    chotto    kyu--kei  shimasu  break.                          then  a-little  break     do[Kyousuke exits, smiling nervously and holding up the script book.]Kyousuke:                           ___  Oh!  I'll go and memorize       a ore  chotto  DAIHON  oboete-kuru    ne!  the script for a bit, okay?!      I    a-bit   script  go-and-memorize3[Surrounded by crackling energy, he rematerializes outside ABCB.]Kyousuke teleport FX:             ____  <swish!>                        shu_4[He and Madoka sit side-by-side at the counter, watching TV.  They chat.]5[Tight shot of the TV.]actress:  I'll definitely be              atashi  kitto   matte-ru    kara...  waiting...                      I       surely  be-waiting  that's-why6actor                                   ___  But I have...                   demo  ore ni wa...                                  but   to-me  (contrast)---------------------------------------------------p 116 (116)1[Kyousuke looks at the TV in surprise...]2[...and recites the actress's lines.  Madoka turns to him in surprise.]Kyousuke/actress:  I know!                         SHItte-ru  wa!                                  am-knowing                                                          _hito_  You have someone else...        anata ni wa          ano ONNA    ga...                                  to-me    (contrast)  that-person (S)3[He opens up the script book.]narration:  Huh?  It's the same as          are?  KOMATSU no DAIHON to  ONAji  da!  Komatsu's script!                     as-Komatsu's-script   same   isscript book FX:                   _____  <flip page!>                    pera_Kyousuke: (That Komatsu...                 (KOMATSU n yatsu...                                              ____  Ripping off this movie.)        kono EIGA   pakutta       na)                                  this-movie  steal/rip-offscript:                           ___________  "East of Casablanca" SCRIPT     kasaburanka no HIGASHI   DAIHON                                  Casablanca  's the-east  script4Madoka: [picking up the script]  What's that?                    nani sore?Kyousuke:  Ah, no, nothing really.         a  iya  chotto5Madoka: [reading]  But...  I'll be waiting.        demo...  atashi  matte-ru   wa                                  but      I       be-waiting6[View looking up at the ceiling.]Kyousuke: [off] (Yikes, I have to go now.)       (ikene   sorosoro  ikanakutcha)                                   oh-no   now       must-go7[He exits with a forced smile.  Madoka still holds the script.]Kyousuke:  Excuse me for a bit!            chotto SHITSUREI!---------------------------------------------------p 117 (117)1[Overhead view.  Hikaru lies on a bed.  The other three stand nearby.]narration:                                           ______  Finally, the scene in           iyoiyo   MONDAI no shi--n...  question...                     finally  problematic-scene                                  ______  The hero sneaks into the        hiroin  ga   nete-iru     HEYA  room where the heroine is       heroine (S)  is-sleeping  room  sleeping.                                  soko ni   SHUJINKOU ga   shinobikomu                                  in-there  hero      (S)  steal-(slip)-into                                  ______  She wakes up.                   hiroin   ME o samasu                                  heroine  awake/wake-up  And then the two of them...     soshite   futari   wa......                                  and/then  2-people (T)Komatsu:  Okay, let's get rolling.        hai  HOMBAN                ikima--su                                       acting-before-camera  go2[Akane turns to Kyousuke and winks.]Akane: [winking]                        ______  Got it?!  This is your          ii?!  chansu  na  n da      kara       ne  chance, okay?!                  okay  chance  is  (explan)  that's-why (rhet)                                  _maji_  Go for it!                      HONKI de              iku no  yo!                                  seriously/in-earnest  going3Kyousuke:  B-but...  Something like        de demo...  aitsura no MAE de  that.  In front of them...         but      in-front-of-those-guys                                  nante         sonna...                                  the-likes-of  that-kind-ofAkane: [concerned]  True...                         so-- nee  With your personality, it'll    anta no SEIKAKU             ja nee  be tough.                       your-character/personality  is-not4[With a smile, Akane hustles Komatsu out of the room...]Akane:  Could you leave us alone for    chotto  SEKI hazushite-kurenai?  a sec?                          a-bit   not-leave-(us)-alone  Kyousuke says he's              KYOUSUKE  hazukashii  tte!  embarrassed!                              embarrassed (quote)5[...and shuts the door, leaving him in the hall.]door FX:                          _____  <slam>                          batanAkane: [off]  Don't come in for about         5-FUN hodo       haitcha dame  yo!  5 minutes!                      about-5-minutes  mustn't-enter6[Hikaru lies back in bed, looking up at the ceiling with a small smile.  She rests the back of a hand on her forehead.]Hikaru:  ..........                      ..........---------------------------------------------------p 118 (118)1[She closes her eyes.]Hikaru heartbeat FX:              ________  <thump thump>                   dokidokiHikaru:                                            ____ ______ (A love scene with Sempai,       (SEMPAI to   no  rabu shi--n  kaa  hmm...                           with-Sempai 's  love-scene   (muse-to-self)                                                  ______  Here's my chance.               kore       wa   chansu  da  wa                                  this-(one) (T)  chance  is                                                                   _____  I'll take advantage of          dosakusa ni magirete  atashi...  ufufu)  the situation...                taking-advantage-of-confusion  <eh heh heh>)                                         I2[Isolated shot of the camera.]Akane:                                ________  And...  Action!!                hai suta--to!!narration:  In the script, it's roughly     DAIHON de wa          koko kara  2 minutes from this point       in-script (contrast)  from-here  to when the heroine wakes       ______  up...                           hiroin  ga   ME o samasu    made                                  heroine (S)  awake/wake-up  until                                  YAKU   2-FUN......                                  about  2-minutes3[Kyousuke stands at bedside...]Kyousuke:  Let's see...                    etto...4Kyousuke:                                  ______ (Oh no!  I forgot my line!)      (ikene!  serifu WASUrechatta!)                                           forgot-one's-lines-(regret)5Kyousuke:  Akane, do you have the          akane  DAIHON  motte-nai?  script?                                script  not-havingAkane:  What are you talking            nani itte   n no  about?                          what saying   (?)  You're holding the only one     anta ga   motte-ru  yatsu   shika nai  yo  we have.                        you  (S)  holding   fellow  only-have6[He looks about the room.]Kyousuke:                         ___  My script...                    ore no DAIHON......Kyousuke FX:                      __________  <scan scan>                     kyorokyoro7[He visualizes leaving it with Madoka.]narration:  Ah!  That's right!!             ha_  so-- da!!  I left it behind with           AYUKAWA no tokoro ni WASUrete-kita    n da!!  Ayukawa!!                       at-Ayukawa's-spot    went-and-forgot/ (expl)                                                       left-behind---------------------------------------------------p 119 (119)1Kyousuke: [teleporting out]  Wait a sec.  I'll go get        chotto  totte-kuru  it.                             a-bit   go-and-fetchKyousuke teleport FX:             ____  <swish!>                        shu_Akane:                                        ______  Ah!  There's not much tape      a_  mou     te--pu no NOKOri SUKUnai  no yo  left!                            !  already tape   's not-much-left   It's no good doing it over      yarinaoshi    wa   kikanai  again.                          do-over-again (T)  not-be-good-(for)                                  ________  We've cut it too close.         girigiri          na  n da      kara                                  the-(very)-limit  is  (explan)  that's-why2Madoka:  Oh!  Where'd you come from?     ara  itsu no MA ni?                                       before-one-knows/unawaresKyousuke:  Hello...                        do--mo......3Madoka: [smiling]  Look, you came at just the      mite    cho--do   ii   tokoro yo  right moment.                   look    perfectly good moment4[On the TV, the actor bends over the sleeping woman, preparing to kiss her.]narration:                                        ______  Wahhh!  It's the same           uwa--_  onnaji  shi--n  da!!  scene!!                              !  same    scene   is5[He sees the script, in front of Madoka.]Kyousuke: (Oh, there it is!)               (a atta!)6[Tight shot of the script.]script:                           ___________  "East of Casablanca" SCRIPT     kasaburanka no HIGASHI   DAIHON                                  Casablanca  's the-east  script  Komatsu Seiji                   KOMATSU SEIJI7[Glancing from the script to his watch, he reaches over to grab the script.]Kyousuke arm FX:                  ___  <fwippp!>                       sa_Kyousuke: (Oh no!  If I don't get          (ikene!  HAYAku  modoranai to......)  back soon...)                            soon    if-not-return---------------------------------------------------p 120 (120)1[He misses the script and his hand comes to rest on Madoka's.]2[She looks at him.  He blushes back.]Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            _____  <thump!>                        doki_3[Madoka smiles.]narration:  Wh-what'll I do?                do do-- shiyou?  This is great, but...           ureshi-- kedo...  If this keeps up,               kono mama ja      hikaru-chan ga  Hikaru-chan will wake up!!      if-this-keeps-up              (S)                                  ME o samashichau!!                                  awaken-(finality)4Kyousuke: (Wahhh!  I'm already too         (wa----_  moo      maniawanai_!!)  late!!)                                !  already  be-too-late5[Hikaru sits up and looks around.]---------------------------------------------------p 121 (121)1[Kyousuke stands there...]2[...and takes her by the hand.]@Kyousuke:                        ___             ____  You're the one I...             ore  yappari    kimi no koto ga...                                  I    after-all  about-you    (S)3[He embraces her tightly.]@Kyousuke:  ...love, after all!             SUki na  n da!                                  liking   (explan)@Kyousuke/Hikaru FX:  <HUG!>                          hishi_4Hikaru: [blushing]  Oh my!                          maa_5[Exterior night shot of ABCB.]---------------------------------------------------p 122 (122)1[Kyousuke laughs at something Madoka said.  Both hold glasses in their hands. Food sits on plates before them.]2[Kyousuke laughs...]narration:  Ha ha...  Surely by now...      haha...  kitto   IMAgoro wa...                                           surely  by-now  (T)3[...and his expression turns to nervous sweating.]narration:  The lead actor turning up       SHUYAKU        ga   inaku      natte...  missing...                      the-lead-actor (S)  not-there  becoming                                            ______  I bet they're all pissed        minna     kankan    daro--   naa  off.                            everyone  blow-up/  poss-be  (rhet)                                            throw-a-fit4[Exterior shot of the Komatsu residence.]sign:  Komatsu                         KOMATSU5[Kyousuke nervously sticks his head in the door.]door FX:                          _____  <clack>                         kacha6[Akane and Hikaru turn to look.  Hikaru smiles.  Kyousuke's face goes into shock.]Hikaru:  Oh!                             ara_---------------------------------------------------p 123 (123)1[Her look turns dark.]Hikaru:  SEMPAI!!                        sempai!!2[Kyousuke flinches back against the wall.]Kyousuke FX:                      ___  <THUD>                          don3Hikaru:  Really Sempai, back then!!      ano TOKI  no SEMPAI ttara!!                                  that-time 's        (I-tell-you)4[She claps her hands to her cheeks and smiles.  Komatsu looks on.  Akane crosses her arms and watches.]Hikaru:                                   ________  My heart was beating            atashi  dokidoki shichaimashita!  wildly!                         I       was-throbbing-(finality)  Hugging me with such            anna ni  DAITAN ni  boldness...                     so-much  boldly/daringly                                  dakishimete-kuru  nante...                                  start-hugging     the-likes-ofKyousuke pratfall FX:             __  <slip...>                       zu...---------------------------------------------------p 124 (124)1[Kyousuke stares back at Hikaru, wide-eyed and nervous.]2[He glances at Akane.]Kyousuke FX:                      ______  <peek!>                         chira_3Akane FX:                         ______  <wink!>                         pachi_4[She lifts a forefinger.]Akane:  I don't know where you          doko ni        itte-ta    ka  went, but...                    to-what-place  were-going (?)                                  SHIranai  kedo...                                  not-know  but  It's gonna cost you big         atashi no KAshi wa   o--kii  zo--  time!!                          my-bill         (T)  huge    !!5Kyousuke: (Oh!  That's it!!                (a_  so-- ka!!                                                 ___  So Akane disguised              ja  akane ga   ore ni  HENSHIN shite  herself as me and played        so        (S)  by-me   disguising-(as)  my part...!!)                                  DAIYAKU   o......!!)                                  stand-in (O)6[Exterior night shot of the Komatsu residence.]narration:  I-I'm glad...                   yo yokattaa...---------------------------------------------------p 125 (125)1[View of the sky.]narration:  And the next day...             soshite YOKUJITSU...2[Shot of a building.]narration:                        _________  At the contest meeting          konku--ru  KAIJOU        de wa...  hall...                         contest    meeting-hall  at (T)3[The judges and audience cringe in horror at what they view off-panel.]narration:                                     ____ ______  The problematic love            MONDAI no    rabu shi--n ga......  scene...                        problematic  love-scene  (S)judges:  OHHHHHH!!                       o~~~~~~_!!4[On the big screen, Akane and Hikaru embrace.]narration:  Was the big topic of            OOkina      WADAI                  o  conversation!                   huge/great  topic-of-conversation (O)                                  yonda!                                  named/brandednarration:  The conclusion is...            KETSURON------                                  a-conclusion                                  ______  The camera never lies!          kamera wa   SHOUJIKI MONO     de aru!                                  camera (T)  an-honest-person  is---------------------------------------------------