Kimagure Orange Road"The Autumn Feeling of Love"Volume 10, Story 4WB Volume 6, Story 4Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose                                 Craig Nishida                                 Thomas Wyatt                                 Jerry LeeLast revision : 08-17-95Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.eduNOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few      extras to those of you not having them.      Example: The subtitles on page 67 (67) are only in the WBs!---------------------------------------------------p 67 (67)--TITLE PAGE[An elegantly dressed Hikaru sits and leans slightly back, in a black, strapless gown.]MAIN TITLE (at top)  The Autumn Feeling of Love      KOI  no SHI             SHUUKI                                  love 's think/believe/  autumn                                          feel-like/desire/yearn-afterSUB-TITLE (at bottom)                               ________   ______  Silk Gloves, a Party Dress,     KINU no TEBUKURO  pa--ti-- - doresu  a Mysterious Hikaru...          silk 's gloves    party-dress                                  AYAshiku               hikaru                                  mysterious/suspicious  Where Is the Knight to          KIFUJIN  o   KAREI      ni   sarau  Carry off This Lady in          a-lady/ (O)  splendid/ (IO)  snatch-away/  Magnificence?                   noblewoman   magnificent     carry-off                                  _naito_                                  KISHI  wa   izuko?                                  knight (T)  where---------------------------------------------------p 68 (68)1[View of some school buildings and a walkway.]narration:  Lately, even high school        ima ya       KOUTOU-BU        demo  has what's become an            of-late/now  sr-high-section  even  indispensable and  distinctive event--             nakute wa naranai                                  is-indispensable                                  MEIBUTSU to      nari-tsutsu      aru...                                  with-specialty/  although-become  be/have                                  noted-product2[Hikaru happily feeds Kyousuke from her box lunch.  They sit in his classroom. Kyousuke sweats and forces a smile.]Hikaru:  Say "ahh" <heart-symbol>.       a--n <heart-symbol>narration:  --this familiar scene...        itsu-mo no      kono FUUKEI...                                  usual/habitual  this-scenery/view3[She stops to rummage in her bag.  Komatsu and Hatta stand by and watch, smiling.]Hikaru:  Oh yeah, that's right.          a sou souHikaru FX:                        ________  <rustle rustle>                 gosogoso4[Beaming a gigawatt smile, she presents an exchange diary to him.  Komatsu and Hatta recoil in horror.  Kyousuke looks ill.]Hikaru:  Here!  Today it's your turn,    hai  KYOU  wa   SEMPAI no BAN   desu yo!  Sempai!                              today (T)         's turn  isKomatsu and Hatta:  OHHH!                           o~~~~_Komatsu and Hatta FX:  <bustle and confusion>          doyo doyobook:                             _____         _____  Jump-kun and Ribbon-chan's      jampu-kun to  ribon-chan  no                                  Jump-kun  and Ribbon-chan 's  EXCHANGE DIARY                  KOUKAN    NIKKI                                  exchange  diary<Commentary:  This is the same exchange diary which was presented to Hikaru by Shin'ichi in chapter 8.9, "S.H. Are the Initials of Love.">5Komatsu: [fist clenched]  This is indeed a true           kore       koso    AI   no akashi  demonstration of love.          this-(one) indeed  love 's demonstration/                                                             proof  Ahh, I bet you two--as          aa  masa ni  kimi-tachi  a married couple--are about         surely   you-(and-assoc)  to enter the mature stage!                          _______                                  FUUFU          wa   kappuru to shite                                  married-couple (T)  in-capacity-of-couple                                  ENJUKU-KI ni     hairo-- to shite-iru!                                  in-mature-stage  is-about-to-enterKyousuke: [wincing, clutching book] (How embarrassing.)              (hazukashi-- naa)---------------------------------------------------p 69 (69)1[Exterior night shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]2[Kyousuke sits and nervously reads Hikaru's entries in the exchange diary.]Kyousuke:  But...                          shikashi...3diary entry:  October 16.                     10-GATSU 16-NICHI                                             _____  Today, I'm writing this         KYOU  wa   beddo no NAKA de  in bed.                         today (T)  in-bed                                  kono NIKKI          o   KAite-imasu                                  this-diary-(entry) (O)  am-writing  Right now I'm thinking          IMA  sempai ni  motte-Iku  ashita no  about the menu for              now  to-Sempai  take       tomorrow's  tomorrow's box lunch that         _______  I'm going to take for           o-bento-- no menyu-- o   KANGAete-imasu  Sempai.                         box-lunch 's menu   (O)  am-thinking-about  I wonder what sort of box       donna         o-bento--  ni  lunch I should make...?         what-kind-of  box-lunch (IO)                                  shiyou      ka na...?                                  shall-make  I-wonder                                  _________  ___ _____  Hamburgers, fried shrimp,       hamba--gu  ebi furai     soretomo  or fried fish...                hamburger  fried-shrimp  or                                              _____                                  o-SAKANA no furai...                                  fish     's fry  I've gotten sleepy while        KANGAete-iru       uchi ni  thinking about all this,        am-thinking-about  within  so I'll stop here for  tonight.                        nemuku natta   no de                                  became-sleepy  since                                  KON'YA  wa   kore de  yamemasu                                  tonight (T)  here     stop4diary entry: [continued, partial view]  October 17.                     10-GATSU 17-NICHI                                          __________  ...I took a bath with           ...wa   kumagoro--chan to  Kumagorou-chan.                    (T)  with-Kumagorou-chan                                  o-FURO ni HAIrimashita                                  took-a-bath                                                       __________  ...my stuffed bear              ...nuigurumi      no kumagoro--chan  Kumagorou-chan doesn't mind        stuffed-animal 's  getting wet!                                  ...MIZU ni   nurete-mo         he--ki                                     in-water  even-tho-get-wet  unconcerned                                  na  n desu   yo!                                  is  (explan)  ...looks like you, Sempai,      ...mpai ni nite    tottemo kawaii no <heart>  and is awfully cute <heart-     resembling-Sempai  awfully-cute  symbol>.                                      __________  ...but Kumagorou-chan can't     ...mo         kumagoro--chan wa  eat.                            <demo> = but                 (T)                                  ...gohan ga   taberenai  no                                     meal  (S)  can't-eat  It's so sad... <teardrop>       kawaisou... <teardrop>[A crying Kumagorou-chan is drawn at the bottom of the page.]5[Kyousuke blushes to find his sisters leaning over his shoulder and reading with relish.]Manami:  Wah!  It's an exchange          wa--  KOUKAN   NIKKI  da!!  diary!!                               exchange diary  isKyousuke:  WAH!!                           wa_!!---------------------------------------------------p 70 (70)1[View pans back to show the three at the kitchen table.  Kurumi stands; the other two are seated.]Manami:  Hikaru-san's handwriting is     hikaru-san no JI          tte  so cute, isn't it.                         's handwriting (T)                                  kawai--  no ne--                                  cute        (rhet)2Kyousuke: [merrily]  In some way, this is like       nan-to-naku  SHOUGAKUSEI  a grade school picture          in-some-way  elementary-school-student  diary, or...                                  no E        NIKKI  FUU   tte yu--  ka...                                  's picture  diary  style called    or  Something like                  hikaru-chan rashii na  Hikaru-chan...  Kinda child-like...             KODOMO ppoku tte...                                  child-like3[Kurumi stares at him in thought.]Kurumi:  Hmm...                          fu--n...4Kurumi:  An exchange diary is            KOUKAN NIKKI   tte  KODOMO ppoi  no?  childish?                       exchange-diary (T)  child-like   (?)Kyousuke: [wincing]  Ehh...?  No.  I didn't say      e... iya  ja naku tte  that.                                no   is-not  (quote)  It's the *contents* of the      NIKKI no NAIYOU   ga  diary...                        diary 's contents (S)5[Kurumi puts her hands on her hips and announces with glee...]Kurumi:                           _____  <AHEM>                          e_hen  So, since I'm not doing         ja  atashi  KOUKAN NIKKI    yatte-nai  an exchange diary, I'm an       so  I       exchange-diary  not-doing  adult!                                  kara        OTONA  da  ne!                                  that's-why  adult  be6Kyousuke and Manami:  ..........                      ..........---------------------------------------------------p 71 (71)1[Exterior shot of a school building.]narration:  The next day...                 YOKUJITSU2[Kurumi's pov.  Hikaru turns.]Hikaru:  Eh?!  I'm childish?!            e_  atashi ga   KODOMO ppoi?!                                   !  I      (S)  child-like3Kurumi: [matter-of-factly]  Yup.  Oniichan said an          un  oni--chan ga   KOUKAN NIKKI   nante  exchange diary is something                   (S)  exchange-diary or-such  a child does.                                  KODOMO no  yaru  koto   da  tte                                  child  (S) does  thing  is  (quote)4[Hikaru's eyes go glassy in shock.]5Hikaru:  I see...                        .....soo6Kurumi: [hands on hips, smiling]  I'm not doing an exchange       atashi  KOUKAN NIKKI    shite-nai  diary, so I'm an adult!         I       exchange-diary  not-doing                                  da kara  OTONA!                                  and-so   adult                                  _____  <ahem>                          e_hen7[Exterior shot of school grounds.  Students leave for home.]school bell FX:                   ___ ___ ___ ___  <cling clong clang clong>       kin kon kan kon---------------------------------------------------p 72 (72)1[Hikaru full-length portrait--depressed, she walks home alone.]2[She exits the front gate.]Hikaru: (In the end, I just couldn't     (to--to--    KYOU  wa   o-bento--  deliver the box lunch            in-the-end  today (T)  box-lunch  today...)                                  watasenakatta           naa.....)                                  could-not-deliver/give3[Against the backdrop of the sky, she visualizes Kurumi.]narration: [flashback]  Oniichan said an exchange       oni--chan ga   KOUKAN NIKKI   nante  diary is something a child                (S)  exchange-diary or-such  does.                                  KODOMO no  yaru  koto   da  tte                                  child  (S) does  thing  is  (quote)4[She looks off to the side, unhappily.]narration:  I...                            atashi tte......  I wonder if the things I        atashi no  yaru koto   tte  do are so childish?             I      (S) do   things (T)                                  sonna ni  KODOMO ppoi  no ka na--                                  so-much   child-like      I-wonder---------------------------------------------------p 73 (73)1[Elsewhere, Komatsu and Kyousuke walk home.]Komatsu:                                 ______  Oh, that zit!                   a sono nikibi!2[Kyousuke is preoccupied with his thoughts.]Kyousuke: (What could be the matter?       (do-- shita n daro  In the end, Hikaru-chan         hikaru-chan  KYOU  wa   to--to--  didn't come by today...                      today (T)  finally/in-the-end                                  konakatta    na--                                  didn't-come  (rhet)  Because when Hikaru-chan        nanse    hikaru-chan ga   konai  doesn't come, something's       because              (S)  not-come  happened...)                                  TOKI tte nani-ka    aru    n da  yo ne--)                                  time (T) something  happen (explan) (rhet)3[Komatsu points to his left cheek.  Kyousuke touches his own.]Komatsu:                                                       ______  Hey, isn't that an "I was       omae  sore       furare      nikibi jan  rejected" zit?                  you   that-(one) be-rejected pimple is-notKyousuke:  Eh?!                            e?!4Kyousuke:  What do you mean by that?       nan  da  yo  sore                                  what is      that-(one)Komatsu:  You don't know?  Everyone       SHIrane-- no ka   yoku     yu--  jan  says it.                        not-know     (?)  commonly say   is-not5[A diagram of Kyousuke's face.  Four pimples dot his skin.  Lines and descriptions radiate from each pimple.]diagram:  [forehead]  Desire.             OMOi  [right cheek]  Reject.          furi  [chin]  Be desired.             OMOware  [left cheek]  Be rejected.      furare6Komatsu:  To put it simply, a pimple      yo--suru ni  HIDARI no hoo ni  on the left cheek is called     in-short     on-left-cheek  an "I was rejected" pimple.                             ______                                  dekiru to               furare nikibi                                  if-come-into-existence  be-jilted-pimple                                  tte koto da                                  it's-called7[View of the sky over a playground.]Komatsu: [off]  Be careful about this,          kore       wa   abunai    zo!  KASUGA...  Kasuga!                         this-(one) (T)  dangerous !!Kyousuke: [off]  Ca...                           so...8Kyousuke:                               ____  Can't be.                       sonna baka nanarration:                                ______  It's only a pimple...           takaga  nikibi...                                  merely  pimple---------------------------------------------------p 74 (74)1[Exterior shot of ABCB.]Kyousuke: [off]                                 ______ (But, an "I was rejected"        (demo  furare nikibi      tte koto wa...)  pimple means...)                 but   was-jilted-pimple  that-means2[He sits at the counter, fingering his zit.]Kyousuke: (As for who does the             (furu -KATA      wa   MIGI no hoppe ni  rejecting, they say the          jilt  direction (T)  on-right-cheek  "reject" pimple appears on           ______  the right cheek...)             furi nikibi ga   dekiru                                  jilt-pimple (S)  come-into-existence                                  tte koto da  yo na...)                                  it's-said3Kyousuke FX:                      ______  <peek!>                         chira_4[His view of the backside of Madoka, who's busy with the shelves behind the counter.]5[She turns, flawless face smiling.]Madoka:  Hmm?  Did you say               e  nani-ka    itta?!  something?!                        something  said6Kyousuke: [smiling]  Ah!                             a_7Kyousuke:                         ___  <whew!>                         ho_Madoka:  ?                               ?narration:  Nothing there...                nai...  I'm glad!                       yokatta!---------------------------------------------------p 75 (75)1[Exterior shot of the Hiyama residence.]sign:  Hiyama                          HIYAMA2[A split panel shows the stuffed animals and toys in her room.  Note the alternate-reality ^_^ US map on her wall, as well as Kumagorou-kun and yet another kappa.]3[Sitting on the floor, she clenches her eyes shut and presses her hands to her temples.]Hikaru: [flash thoughts]  (Childish.) (Childish.)         (KODOMO ppoi)  (KODOMO ppoi)  (KODOMO ppoi)  (Childish.) (Childish.)  (Childish.)                     (KODOMO ppoi)  (KODOMO ppoi)4[She opens her eyes and looks off-panel.]5[She dials a number.]touchtone phone FX:               ___ ___  <peep! peep!>                   pi_ pa_6Hikaru:  Hello...  Ah, Yuusaku?          moshimoshi...  a  YUUSAKU?7Hikaru:  I need...                       ..........anta ni  ...to see you.                  YOU ga aru no---------------------------------------------------p 76 (76)1[Kyousuke walks down the street.]2[He looks off to the side, surprised at what he sees.]3[He hides around the corner of a building...]Kyousuke FX:                      ___  <zip!>                          sa_4[...and sneaks a peek.  It is Hikaru and Yuusaku, talking at the corner. Hikaru smiles.]Kyousuke: (H-Hikaru-chan.                  (hi...hikaru-chan  She's with Yuusaku.             YUUSAKU to    issho    da                                  with-Yuusaku  together is  What's she doing...?)           nani shite n daro...)5narration:  And she didn't come at          o-HIRU ni     konakatta     koto    to ii  lunchtime either.               at-lunchtime  did-not-come  matter  either  Just as I thought,              yappari            KYOU no hikaru-chan wa  Hikaru-chan is acting kinda     just-as-I-thought  today's             (T)  strange today!                                  nanka     HEN da  zo!                                  somewhat  strange !!6[Hikaru closeup--she has what appears to be a small pimple on her right cheek.]7narration:                                ______  Th-the "reject" pimple?         fu furi nikibi?8[Yuusaku has one on his chin.]---------------------------------------------------p 77 (77)1[Kyousuke is incredulous.]narration:                                ______  The "I am desired" pimple?!     OMOware nikibi?!2[Cupping a hand to one ear, he flashes with the Power.]narration:  What the heck are they          ittai         nani  HANAshite  n da?!  talking about?!                 in-the-world  what  talking    (explan)Kyousuke: (It's a little sneaky,           (chotto  zurui       kedo...)  but...)                          a-bit   sly/unfair  but3Yuusaku:  Eh?  You're saying              e  WAKAreru                   tte?!  farewell?!                         part-company/bid-farewell  (quote)Hikaru:  Yeah.  I've decided!            un  atashi  KImeta   n da!                                      I       decided  (explan)4Kyousuke: [grimacing] (Man, she's saying this is       (moo  kore kkiri       ni suru  tte...)  it...)                                once-and-for-all/   do    (quote)                                        this-is-all5[View of a pedestrian overpass.]Hikaru: [off]  And so, if you want...          da kara          anata  yokattara...                                  and-so/and-then  you    if-okay  Come with me.                   tsuite-kite                                  coming-along-with-(me)6[Kyousuke looks blank.]---------------------------------------------------p 78 (78)1[In a daze, he continues on his way.]Kyousuke:                          _   ___ (A-am I having a bad dream       (o...ore  AKUMU      demo  or something?)                       I    bad-dream  or-something                                  mite-ru             n daro--       ka)                                  be-seeing-(having)  (poss-explan)  (?)Kyousuke FX:                      ______  <aimlessly>                     furari2narration:  S-somehow, I've gotten          na nan-da-ka  confused.                          somehow-(or-other)                                  ATAMA no NAKA ga kongarakatte                                  am-confusedKyousuke FX:                      _____  <stagger!>                      fura_3[A view of a river, as it passes under a bridge.]Hikaru: [off]  Sayo-o-nara. <farewell>         sayo--nara4[Tearfully, Hikaru kneels and says her goodbyes.  Here, she holds her faithful teddy bear.]Hikaru:                                    __________  Farewell, Kumagorou-chan.       sayonara kumagoro--chan  Farewell, everyone.             sayonara minna5[View pans back.  She rises.  In front of her is a sack filled with toys and stuffed animals.  Yuusaku stands nearby with another sack slung over his shoulder.]Hikaru:  Saying goodbye makes me         WAKAreru no      wa   sabishi--   kedo...  feel sad...                     bidding-farewell (T)  lonely/sad  but  But as of today, I'm going      KYOU KAGIri de  atashi  KODOMO pposa kara  to bid farewell to my           up-till-today   I       to-childishness  childishness.                                  sayonara shitai      no                                  want-to-bid-farewell6[Tight shot of the sack on the ground.]Hikaru: [off]                     ________  Thank you, Yuusaku.             sankyu--  YUUSAKU  I wasn't able to carry it       hitori ja      mochikirenakatta  by myself!                      by-myself-(T)  couldn't-carry-it-solely                                  toko      datta  no!                                  occasion  was7[Frowning, she points to his chin.]Hikaru:  Oh!  You've got a grain of      ara  anta  konna tokoro ni  rice stuck here--how sloppy!         you   to-this-kind-of-place                                  _____                                  gohantsubu            tsukete                                  grain-of-boiled-rice  sticking-to                                  darashinai!                                  untidyYuusaku: [nervously]  H-Hikaru-chan, so do you!       hi hikaru-chan koso!8[She blushes and glares, pointing at her pimple.]Hikaru:  How rude!!                      SHITSUREI ne!!                                                  ______  This is a pimple!!              kore       wa   nikibi  yo!!                                  this-(one) (T)  pimple  I ate a few too many sweets     kino--     chotto  o-KASHI o  yesterday!!                     yesterday  a-bit   sweets (O)                                  TAbesugichatta  no!!                                  overate---------------------------------------------------p 79 (79)1[Kyousuke sits at the counter, cheek in hand, looking blank and morose.]Kyousuke FX:                      ________  <vacantly...!>                  boke~~~_2[Madoka leans in from the other side of the counter and studies him closely. He doesn't notice.]3[He talks to himself.  Madoka listens silently.]Kyousuke:  Why...  Yuusaku of all          nande...  yori ni yotte  people...                       why       of-all-(people)                                  YUUSAKU  nanka         to......                                           the-likes-of  (quote)4Kyousuke stand-up FX:             _____  <jolt>                          gatan5[And he exits without a word.  Madoka, coffee cup in hand, watches him leave in surprise.]door FX:                          _____  <rattle>                        karanMadoka:                                                 ______  .....  Kasuga-kun.  Your        ..........KASUGA-kun  ko--hi...  coffee...6[View of a store-lined alleyway.]7Kyousuke/Hikaru/Yuusaku FX:       _______  <RUN ACROSS UNEXPECTEDLY>       battariHikaru:  Ah!                             a---------------------------------------------------p 80 (80)1[Hikaru executes a gleeful Flying Neck Tackle (tm).]Hikaru:  SEMPA-A-AI!!                    sempa--i!!2[She steps back and gazes down fiercely at the pavement.  She clears her throat.]Hikaru: (Mustn't be like that.           (to natcha ikenai  This is where I act mature!)    koko       wa   OTONA ppoku!)                                  this-place (T)  adult-likeHikaru FX:                        _____  <ahem>                          gohon3[Beaming a smile, she bends slightly at the waist in greeting.]Hikaru:  Hello, Kasuga-san!              konnichi wa  KASUGA-san! (Now Sempai will no longer       (kore de        SEMPAI  mo--  call me childish...)             with-this/now          no-more                                  atashi no koto  KODOMO da  nante                                  about-me        childish   the-likes-of                                  iwanai hazu...)                                  ought-not-say4[Kyousuke looks at her wide-eyed and sweating.]Kyousuke FX:                      ______  <peek!>                         chira_5[Pov shifts--Kyousuke sees a smiling Hikaru standing next to Yuusaku.]narration:  Maybe Hikaru-chan prefers       yappari   hikaru-chan  Yuusaku, after all...           after-all                                  YUUSAKU  no ho-- ga i--  no ka...                                           better            <ka na>6[Without a word, Kyousuke angrily turns away and races off.]narration:                        ___  She hates me already!           ore wa   mo--     KIRAwareta   n da!                                  I   (T)  already  was-disliked (explan)Kyousuke FX:                      ___  <RUN!>                          da_---------------------------------------------------p 81 (81)1[She extends a hand out, and looks bewildered.]Hikaru:  Oh...  Sempai!                  a...SEMPAI!2Hikaru:  Sempai...  Why?                 SEMPAI...  do--shite (Even though I especially        (sekkaku             mo--     KODOMO ppoku  decided not to do childish       taking-the-trouble  any-more child-like  things any more.)                                  shinai  tte  KImeta   no ni)                                  not-do  (T)  decided  even-tho3[Exterior shot of ABCB.]4[Madoka turns to watch Hikaru enter.]Madoka:  Welco...                        irassha...door FX:                          _____  <rattle>                        karan5[Hikaru sits at the counter, gaze downcast and sad.]Madoka:  What's the matter?              do-- shita no  You look dejected...            shombori shichatte...6Hikaru:  ..........                      ..........  Even though I took the          sekkaku             OTONA ppoku  trouble to try to act like      taking-the-trouble  adult-like  an adult...                                  naro-- to shita  no ni...                                  tried-to-become  even-tho7Madoka: [wide-eyed]  You bid farewell to your        KODOMO pposa kara  sayonara suru  tte?!  childhood?!                     childhood    from  bid-farewell   (quote)---------------------------------------------------p 82 (82)1[Hikaru rests her chin on the edge of the counter and stares wide-eyed at her hands before her.]Hikaru:  And even though Yuusaku         de      YUUSAKU ni  TEtsudatte-moratte  helped me go and bid farewell   and-so  by-Yuusaku  helping-me  to Kumagorou-chan and the       __________  others, Sempai...               kumagoro--chan-tachi to                                  with-Kumagorou-chan-and-associates                                  sayonara shite-kita   n desu  na no ni                                  went-to-bid-farewell  (explan)   even-tho                                  SEMPAI  ttara...                                          (I-tell-you)2[Madoka reflects...]3[...then looks up at the ceiling, face expressionless.]4Madoka: [serving a drink]  Kasuga-kun really said that?    HONTOU ni  KASUGA-kun ga   itta no?                                  really                (S)  said (?)  That you're childish?           KODOMO ppoi  tte                                  childish     (quote)glass-on-counter FX:              ___  <tap>                           kon5[Hikaru has sunk even lower in her seat.  Now, only her head is visible, chin resting on the counter.  She closes her eyes in misery.]Hikaru:  No...  Kurumi-chan said         ie...  kurumi-chan ga  SEMPAI ga  that Sempai said that...        no                 (S)        (S)                                  so-- itte-ta     tte                                  was-saying-that  (quote)6Madoka:  I wonder if Kasuga-kun is       KASUGA-kun tte  HONKI de   sonna koto  the kind of person that                    (T)  seriously  that-kind-of-thing  would seriously say such  a thing?                        yu--  HITO    ka naa                                  say   person  I-wonder7[Sitting up, Hikaru suddenly visualizes Kurumi.]Hikaru:  Ah!  Come to think of it!!      ha_  so-- ieba!!Kurumi: [flashback]  I'm not doing an exchange       atashi  KOUKAN NIKKI    shite-nai  diary, so I'm an adult!         I       exchange-diary  not-doing                                  da kara  OTONA!                                  and-so   adult---------------------------------------------------p 83 (83)1Hikaru: [looking down]  But I'm doing box lunches       demo  atashi tte  o-bento-- ya  and exchange diaries, which     but   I      (T)  box-lunch and  is so much like playing  house...                        KOUKAN NIKKI    da  nante                                  exchange-diary  is  the-likes-of                                  o-mamagoto mitai na  koto  yattari shite...                                  like-play-house      thing do-(and)Madoka: [merrily]                 __________  Shouldn't a girl of the         sutore--to de  KOUDOU  HA          no  School of Direct Action         (in)-straight  action -school/sect 's  be showing more spirit?!                        ______                                  ONNA no KO tte  ikiiki shite-te                                  girl       (T)  being-lively                                  i--   ja nai?!                                  good  is-not2Hikaru:  I'm so simpleminded that I      TANJUN da      kara  believe anything a person       simple-minded  that's-why  says.                                  HITO   no     yu-- koto   nan demo                                  person (nom)  say  (nom)  anything                                  ma ni ukechau  shi                                  believe        considerMadoka: [smiling, arms crossed]  You're an innocent and          MUJAKI de       SUNAO na  ONNA no KO tte  sweet girl who brings           being-innocent  gentle    girl       (T)  cheer to this place!                                  kotchi made  AKAruku sasete-kureru                                  to-this-way  making-cheerful/bright                                  wa yo!3[Madoka facial portrait--gentle smile.]Madoka:  That's the sort of Hikaru       atashi wa   sonna        hikaru ga  I love!                         I      (T)  that-kind-of        (S)                                  DAISUki            yo!                                  is-greatly-liked4Hikaru: [perking up]  R-really?                       so so-- desu kaa5[Blushing, Hikaru reflects.]narration:  It's true.                      so-- yo ne  Moping around and pouting       kuyokuyo    uji uji  isn't like me.                  mope/brood  sulk/pout-(FX-word)                                  NAYAnde-ru            nante                                  being-afflicted-with  the-likes-of                                  atashi  ja nai  wa                                  I       is-not6[The two converse cheerfully.]narration:  Thank you, Madoka-san!          arigatou madoka-san!---------------------------------------------------p 84 (84)1[Exterior shot of the entrance to a school building.]narration:  The next day...                 YOKUJITSU...2[Kyousuke nervously approaches Hikaru, who stands with back towards him.]narration:                        ___  She said she wants to talk      ore ni  HANASHI tte...  to me...                        by-me   talk    (quote)  H-Hikaru-chan is finally...     hi hikaru-chan tsui ni...3[She turns towards him with a glare.  Kyousuke cringes.]Hikaru:  Sempai!                         SEMPAI!  Let's stop doing the            moo      KOUKAN NIKKI   wa   yamemashou!  exchange diary already!         already  exchange-diary (T)  shall-stop4Kyousuke:  J-just as I thought.            ya...  yappari  YUUSAKU ga...  Yuusaku is...Hikaru:  Huh?!  What's this about        e?!  nani  YUUSAKU  tte?!  "Yuusaku?!"                          what           (quote)5[He looks up with a slightly hopeful smile.]Kyousuke:  Eh?!                            e?!6[Beaming, she holds out a pair of necklaces--one is a heart pierced by an arrow, the other is Cupid with an arrow cocked.]Hikaru:  Say, Sempai.                    ne--  SEMPAI  Don't you think this is         KOUKAN NIKKI yori    kotchi no HOU ga ii  better than the exchange        than-exchange-diary  this-way  better  diary?                                  to OMOimasen?                                  not-think-thatKyousuke:  Huh?!                           ha?!---------------------------------------------------p 85 (85)1[She takes him by an arm and gives him a wink.  Kyousuke now holds the Cupid necklace.]Hikaru:                                                       _______  This is much more adult!        kotchi    no ho-- ga gutto  adaruto!                                  this-way  much-more         adult  Now we have a mature            kore de        atashi-tachi  relationship!                   with-this/now  we                                  OTONA no o-tsukiai   ne!                                  adult 's association2[He blushes and stares at the pendant that he holds up to his eye.]Kyousuke: (How on earth did it come to     (ittai         do--  natte    n no?!)  this?!)                          in-the-world  how   becoming3[View shifts.  Madoka watches the two.  Hikaru happily hangs on to Kyousuke's arm.]4[With a toss of her hair, Madoka walks away.]narration:  That girl is...                 ONNA no KO tte...  Whimsical after all!            yappari    kimagure   na  n desu   ne!                                  after-all  whimsical  is  (explan)---------------------------------------------------