Kimagure Orange Road"Parallel Hero!"Volume 10, Story 3WB Volume 6, Story 3Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Thomas Wyatt Ka-Ping Yee Jerry LeeLast revision : 08-17-95Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.eduNOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 47 (47) are only in the WBs!---------------------------------------------------p 47 (47)--TITLE PAGE[Parallel-Madoka lies on her back on the bed, arms tied behind her, knees up and arching her back in a vain attempt to escape the clutches of musclehead 1.]MAIN TITLE (at top) ________ ________ Parallel Hero! parareru - hi--ro--!Madoka: NO-O-O!! iya--_!!SUB-TITLE (at bottom) Oh No! TAIHEN da! Madoka-san Is in Really Big madoka-san ga HONTOU ni yabai!! Trouble!! (S) really in-for-it---------------------------------------------------p 48 (48)1[Kyousuke lets out another desperate roar.]Kyousuke: AYUKAWA!! AYUKAWA_!!2[View pans back to show him riding double behind Hikaru, on a motor scooter.]scooter FX: ______ biiiin3[Hikaru's pov as they race down the street.]narration: I-I heard it again-- ma mata kikoeta AYUKAWA no sakebi KOE da!! Ayukawa's scream!! again heard 's screaming is voiceKyousuke: [off] I see it! The school!! mietaa GAKKOU da!! saw school is4[Hikaru spins the scooter sideways to brake. Kyousuke pitches off his seat.]braking FX: _____ kiki_Kyousuke: Wahhh! waa_5Kyousuke: [clutching his head] Ow-ow-ouch. You're so atete RAMBOU da naa rough... reckless/violence is (rhet)motorcycles FX: [off] ___ ___ ___ do_ do_ do_Hikaru: Look... .........miro yo---------------------------------------------------p 49 (49)1[Their view of the motorcycle punks encamped around the school.]2[The twins join them. All three Kasugas look on in trepidation.]Hikaru: Jeez... korya... It's not going to be easy chotto ya sotto ja getting in there! a-bit and quietly/secretly in mogurikome so-- mo nee ze slip/creep/get-into it-looks too not-have3[The twins laugh nervously.]Kurumi: I-I've gotten sorta a atashi nan da ka nemuku natchatta ka sleepy... I somewhat became-sleepy Maybe I'll go home. KAEro-- ka naa shall-go-home I-wonderManami: Oh, that's right. I still a so-- da atashi mo mada haven't done my homework. that's-right I too still SHUKUDAI yatte-nai n da homework not-done (explan)4Komatsu: [approaching on his bicycle] WAIT! mate--_Hikaru: [looking back angrily] You can't keep on saying to ittatte TOmatte-ru that even when we've even-tho-say-that be-stopping stopped. wake ni mo ikanai can't-very-well-also5Hikaru: ANYWAY, CHA-A-ARGE! tonikaku tsukkome------_ anyway charge---------------------------------------------------p 50 (50)1[Hikaru turns to find a hefty punk resting his meaty paw on her head. Her face loses its expression of defiance.]punk 1: Charge what? nani o tsukkomu tte? what (O) charge (quote)2[View pans way back to show the four surrounded. Hikaru is on her scooter. The twins on theirs. Kyousuke stands nearby.]punk 1: _____ Cute babes out for a walk kawaiKO-chan-tachi this late at night? cute-little-girl-(and-assoc) konna YORU fuke ni o-sampo kai this-late-at-night a-walk (?) ___ ___ ___ he_ he_ he_punk 2: __ __ __ __ What did you come here to nani shi ni kita no ke ke ke ke do? what to-do came (?)3punk 1: _________ Maybe you came here to yarashi-- koto shitaku tte fool around. want-to-do-indecent-things ASObi ni kita no ka na came-to-play I-wonderpunk 2: ___ __ __ __ If we'll do, then... ore-tachi de yokattara ke ke ke by-us if-okay4[Hands reach out towards the terrified Manami and Kurumi.]punk 2: ...we'll be your partners! AITE ni naru zeeManami and Kurumi: Kyaaa! kya--_5[All three girls cling tight to, and cower against, Kyousuke. They bury their faces in his chest and back.]Kurumi: This is frightening, yappari kowai yo----_!! after all!! sure-enough frightfulHikaru/Kurumi/Manami FX: ________ pyu~~~~_---------------------------------------------------p 51 (51)1[Flashing with the Power, he holds Hikaru and glares off-panel.]Kyousuke: ___ Hang on tight to me, minna shikkari ore ni tsukamatte!! everyone!! everyone tightly to-me grasping2punk 1: Trash the guy, grab the OTOKO wa buttobase girls!! men (T) pound-someone-senseless ONNA wa hippegase!! women (T) grab3[The punks rush the four, only to find nothing there.]punks: WAHHH! wa----_4punk 3: __________ Dumbshit! Whaddaya think bakayaro-- doko tsukande n da yo! you're grabbing?! where holding (explan)punk 4: Hey, dey's gone!! oi ine-- zo hey = aren't-here !!5punk 5: Disappeared... KIeta...punk 6: They dug a hole or ANA demo hotta n ja nai no kaa something? hole or-something dug (explan) (?)punk 7: ______ Idiot. ba--ka6[The four reappear inside the school amidst a crackling of sparks. The three girls still hide their faces against Kyousuke's body as he takes a heroic stance.]rematerialization FX: ____ shu_---------------------------------------------------p 52 (52)1Kyousuke: [wiping his brow] Phew... That was close! fuu... KAN'IPPATSU! by-a-hair/narrowlyHikaru: H-huh? Where are we? a are koko wa?2Hikaru: [wide-eyed] Why... How did we get here? nande... do--shite koko ni? why why to-hereKyousuke: Like I said. da kara itta desho as/because-of said poss-be3Kyousuke: [thumbs up] ___ I have ESPer powers. ore CHOU-NOURYOKU ga TSUKAeru tte I super-ability (S) can-use (quote)4[Kurumi, Manami and Hikaru look back in wide-eyed disbelief.]5[Tight shot of a fire alarm.]Hikaru/Manami/Kurumi: [off] Y-you're kidding!! u uso--_!!6[Shot of a sign outside a room.]sign: Health Room HOKEN SHITSUoverlaid on sign: ______ Hotel hoteru7[Musclehead 2 rests a paw on the shoulder of musclehead 1. Madoka appears to have fainted.]musclehead 2: Hold it! chotto mate yo!---------------------------------------------------p 53 (53)1musclehead 2: How come you're first? nande omae ga SAKI na n da yo why you (S) first are (explan)musclehead 1: ___ Shut up! Anyway, I'm urusai tonikaku ore ga SAKI da!! first!! anyway I (S) first is2musclehead 2: You jerk! What a ripoff!! kono yaro-- kitane-- zo this-jerk stingy/unfair !!shove FX: ___ don3musclehead 1: [fist cocked] Why ya... anda yo-- ____ Whatcha doin', ya idiot!! yaru kaa kono tako!! do (?) this-octopus-4Hikaru: But where the heck in this demo ittai madoka-san school is Madoka-san? but in-the-world kono GAKKOU no doko ni iru n da yo in-what-part-of-this-school exist (explan)Kurumi: That's right. so-- yo ne Sure it's the school, but GAKKOU te ttatte HIROi it's still a pretty big school even-tho-say-that extensive place... n da shi (explan) and-besides ______ And how do we rescue her TEKI ga ujauja iru NAKA from here, when it's enemy (S) swarm inside swarming with enemies? do-- yatte tasukedasu no yo how doing rescue-(one)-from-(place)5[Kyousuke is busy concentrating, eyes closed.]Kyousuke: (Ayukawa! Ayukawa!! (AYUKAWA! AYUKAWA!! Where the heck are you?!) ittai doko ni iru n da?!) in-the-world in-what-place are (explan)narration: I could hear Ayukawa's AYUKAWA no KOE ga kikoeta voice, so maybe that 's voice (S) heard means... tte koto wa... that-means In this world, I can use... kono SEKAI dattara TSUKAeru this-world if-it-is can-use ka mo shirenai... it-is-possible6[Thoughts intrude upon the unconscious Madoka...]Kyousuke: [off] (...kawa. Ayukawa.) (...KAWA AYUKAWA)7[...and she opens her eyes.]---------------------------------------------------p 54 (54)1Madoka: (That voice--from back (sono KOE wa sakki no... then... that-voice (T) a-little-while-ago 's But how can I hear your demo do--shite atashi ni anta no KOE ga voice?!) but why to-me your-voice (S) kikoeru no?!) hearing2Kyousuke: [still concentrating, eyes closed] (That explanation can wait!! (sono SETSUMEI wa ato da_!! that-explanation (T) afterward is Where are you right now?!) IMA doko ni iru?!) now at-what-place are3[Hikaru stares at the back of Kyousuke.]Hikaru: What's the matter? do-- shita?Kyousuke: All right. I gotcha! yoshi wakatta!4Hikaru: Huh?! e?![Kyousuke turns to address the others.]Kyousuke: I've discovered her AYUKAWA no IBASHO ga wakatta n da whereabouts. 's whereabouts (S) known (explan)5[He turns and stalks down the hall. This is Kyousuke like you've never seen before!]Kyousuke: Let's go. It's the Health ikou HOKEN-SHITSU da! Room! shall-go health-room is6[Exterior shot of a school building. Faces are drawn in the appropriate speech bubbles.]Kurumi: B-but, there's a Health de demo HOKEN-SHITSU tte doko ni Room where? but health-room (T) at-what-place aru n desu kaa exist (explan) (?)Hikaru: How would I--a junior high nna mon student--know something = that-sort-of thing like that?!! ___ CHUUTOU-BU no ore ni ki--tatte jr-high-section (nom) by-me even-tho-hear wakaru ka_!! know (?)Kyousuke: It's this way! kotchi da!!---------------------------------------------------p 55 (55)1Manami: [racing after Kyousuke] How do you know? do--shite SHItte n no how-come knowing (?) You aren't even a student anta kono GAKKOU no SEITO demo here! you this-school's-student even nai no ni not-be even-though Is that also a part of your sore mo CHOU-NOURYOKU tte yu-- ESPer powers? that-(one) too super-ability called yatsu? thing2Hikaru: Hmm... fu--n......3Hikaru: [winking] You're pretty reliable. omae kekko-- tayori ni naru jan you quite reliable-(person) are-notHikaru backslap FX: ___ don[Kyousuke is sent flying.]4[One punk rockets through the window and into the hallway.]musclehead 1 FX: ______ gachan5musclehead 2: haa_ haa_ Serves you right... zamaa miro...---------------------------------------------------p 56 (56)1[He turns to look at Madoka, who lies on her back on the bed, wrists tied behind her.]musclehead 2: ___ I'm first!! ore ga SAKI da_!! I (S) first-priority is2[He grasps her by the blouse...]Madoka school uniform FX: __ ___ bi bi_3[...and tears it open. Madoka is out cold again.]4[Profile facial portrait of the musclehead.]musclehead 2: ___ ___ ___ ___ he_ he_ he_ he_5[Tight shot of his eye as he stops short in mid-laugh.]musclehead 2: ___ he_6[View pans back to show that he's levitating. He sweats, goggle-eyed.]musclehead 2: Huh?! he?!---------------------------------------------------p 57 (57)1[He floats out the open window...]musclehead 2: Oo! u_2[...and plummets...]musclehead 2: Wahhh!! wa------_!!3[...into a swimming pool.]musclehead 2 FX: _______ dobu--n4[Kyousuke stands at the doorway, ready for war.]5[He lifts Madoka up by her shoulders. She's still out cold.]Kyousuke: Are you all right, BUJI ka AYUKAWA_!! Ayukawa?!! safe (?)---------------------------------------------------p 58 (58)1Madoka: [opening her eyes] Ah... a...2[He wraps his jacket around her. She pulls it tight.]Kyousuke jacket FX: _____ pasa_Kyousuke: I came for you. mukae ni kita yo3[She looks back with kind eyes...]4[...and hugs him.]---------------------------------------------------p 59 (59)1[He looks off-panel.]Kyousuke: Huh? are2[His view of the open door to the hallway.]gang leader: [off] So late, Hikaru-chan... osoi na hikaru-chan-tachi late (and-assoc)3Hikaru: [off] HELP-P-P!! tasukete--_!!4[Madoka and Kyousuke go into the hallway, to find the gang leader holding a knife to Hikaru. The twins have their hands tied behind them.]gang leader: You're causing me a lot of sanzan TEkozurasete-kureru ja nai trouble. terribly give-me-much-trouble is-notMadoka: HIKARU! hikaru!5gang leader: But, unfortunately, no one daga ainiku atashi kara has ever escaped from me. and-yet unfortunately from-me nogarerareta yatsu wa inai was-escaping fellow (T) not-be-there n de ne ('cause) And that includes you, too, anta mo so-- da yo Ayukawa Madoka. you too looks-as-if AYUKAWA madoka6[The gang leader raises her goggles and points her knife. Yup, she's Akane.]Akane (gang leader): I won't let my followers BUKA ni wa interfere! by-subordinate (contrast) TE o DAsasenai! not-let-meddle-with ______ I was careless; this is taiman de SHOUBU da!! my battle!! for-neglect/ victory-or-defeat is carelessness---------------------------------------------------p 60 (60)1[Akane raises her knife high, poised in a downward swing.]2Kyousuke: [wide-eyed] (Akane?!) (akane?!)3[With a forced smile Kyousuke walks up to Akane and fingers the studs on her leather wristband. He seems unconcerned about the knife.]Kyousuke: What are you doing? nani shite n da what doing (explan) Even you... omae made... Waving around a dangerous sonna abunai mon furikazashite thing like that. that-kind-of-dangerous-thing flourishing- (a-sword)Kyousuke FX: tsukatsukanarration: What's Akane doing in a nande konna TOKORO ni akane ga iru place like this? why in-this-place (S) exists n da? (explan)4Akane: [lunging at him with the knife] What's that? You jerk!! nan da kisama wa_!! what are you-(abusive)Kyousuke: [dodging] W-wait! ma mate yo! ___ It's me! ore da yo5[Crackling with the Power he telekinetically removes the knife from Akane's hand.]6[Akane finds her wrists being raised together above her head. The knife is embedded through her leather wristbands and into the wall. Without piercing her wrists, yet...]blade FX: ___ ka_---------------------------------------------------p 61 (61)1Hikaru/Kurumi/Manami/Madoka: AH! a2[Kyousuke lectures a wide-eyed Akane.]Kyousuke: We have to run away before kowai BANCHOU ga kuru MAE ni the fearsome gang leader frightening gang-leader (S) come before comes! nigenakya ikenai no ni must-run-away even-though ____ I don't have time to play omae to asonde-ru hima wa nai with you, Akane-e-e! with-you be-playing not-have-free-time n da ze akane~~~~! (explan) !Hikaru: [nervously] ..... She *is* the gang ......soitsu ga BANCHOU da yo leader. that-person (S) gang-leader is3Kyousuke: [wide-eyed, nervous] Eh? e4Akane: [sweating, wide-eyed] S-such power! tsu...TSUYOi!5[Outside now, Akane addresses Kyousuke.]Akane: You win... MAketa yo anta ni wa... lose to-you (contrast) But I've never met a guy shikashi anta mitai na as powerful as you before... but like-you TSUYOi OTOKO wa HAJImete da... powerful-man (T) for-the-1st-time be6Akane: __ Hey, everyone! oi minna! From now on, this guy is KYOU kara kono HITO ga BANCHOU da!! gang leader!! from-today this-guy (S) gang-leader isgang: OHHH! o----_7Kyousuke: [winking] Hmm... It doesn't sound too fumu... WARUku wa nai ga bad, but I'll defer! hmm bad (T) not-be but ENRYO shitoku yo! hesitate-(for-future-sake)---------------------------------------------------p 62 (62)1[As he begins to walk away, he aims a wink at Akane...]Kyousuke: ______ A girl is best, when she's ONNA no KO wa kawaii no ga cute! girl (T) cute-one (S) ICHIBAN da ze! the-best is !2[...and strides out the school gates. He raises a thumbs-up and looks back over his shoulder. Akane and Hikaru can only watch speechlessly.]Kyousuke: See ya! ja na! Be nice to each other from kore kara wa nakayoku now on!! from-now-on (T) good-relations yan na yo!! do3[Behind him, the newly-formed Kyousuke Fan Club gushes...]Hikaru and Kurumi: _____ __ Kyaa! So cool! kya-- kakko ii!Manami: How wonderful. sutteki ne--motorcycle FX: [off] ___ ___ ___ do_ do_ do_4[On the street outside the school gate waits Madoka, on a huge motorcycle. She's changed into tight pants, shirt, jacket and boots.]motorcycle FX: [off] ___ ___ ___ do_ do_ do_5Madoka: [soft smile] Hop on... nori na yo... You had somewhere to go, doko-ka iku tokoro ga atta n daro didn't you? somewhere go place (S) had (poss-expl) I'll take you there. okutte-iku yo go-escorting6Kyousuke: .......... Thank you. ..........arigatonarration: But... I no longer have demo... mou doko ni mo iku anyplace to go... but -more to-anywhere to-go toko nai n da kedo... place not-have (explan) but---------------------------------------------------p 63 (63)1[He doubles up behind her as they zoom off.]motorcycle FX: ________ dorururu2Kyousuke: Huh?! Did you say e?! nani-ka itta? something? something saidnarration: Well... This world isn't so maa... kono SEKAI mo waruku wa nai sa! bad either! this-world too not-be-bad3Madoka: I'm glad... I got to meet anata ni Aete...... yokatta you. able-to-meet-you was-good4[Kyousuke portrait--wide-eyed.]5Madoka: Maybe I should start being kore kara atashi kawaiku narou cuter... from-now-on I shall-become-cute/ attractive/sweet ka na...... I-wonder6Madoka: For the sake of a certain DARE-ka-san no tame ni... someone... Mr.-Somebody for-the-sake-ofKyousuke heartbeat FX: ____ doki---------------------------------------------------p 64 (64)1[He loses his grip and falls backward off the bike.]Kyousuke FX: ____ zuruKyousuke: AH! a2[Still falling backward, he watches as Madoka zooms away.]3[Fractured panel. His terrified face is replaced by the crackling of the Power.]Kyousuke: I-I'M GONNA DI-I-IE! shi SHInu~~~~_4[He hugs Hikaru tightly. This Hikaru is wearing the sweater and skirt of the Hikaru which opened chapter 10.1. She blushes in surprise.]Kyousuke: I-I'm gonna di-i-ie! shi...SHInu~~_5[He pulls back to stare goggle-eyed at the beaming Hikaru.]Kyousuke: Di... shi...narration: Huh... C-could this be... are... ko koko wa hyottoshite huh this-place (T) maybeHikaru: [happily] Oh no! Really, Sempai! ya da--_ SEMPAI ttara!6[Wide view of several of the rides at the park. This is a clean, bright and cheerier park. And yup, there's the 7-foot-tall kappa mascot!]narration: I've returned to my world!! MOTO no SEKAI ni modoreta n da!! to-original-universe was-able- (explan) to-return---------------------------------------------------p 65 (65)1[Kyousuke enters ABCB, followed closely by Hikaru. They appear to have come directly from the amusement park.]door FX: _____ karan2[Madoka works behind the counter, at which is seated Hatta, Komatsu, Kurumi, Manami and Akane. This is his pov as all turn to look at him.]narration: And thus, my one night kou shite trip is over... doing-like-this ___ ___ _____ _______ ore no wan naito - torippu wa Owatta... my-one-night-trip (T) endedMadoka: [smiling] Welcome. irasshai3Madoka: What's your order? go-CHUUMON wa? order (T)4[He grins down at the counter. Displaying an unusual level of decisiveness he says...]Kyousuke: ________ _______ Coffee, black!! ko--hi-- o burakku de!! coffee (O) black being5[Akane and Komatsu stifle laughter. Madoka and Kyousuke's sisters stare back in wide-eyed shock.]Komatsu: ___ pu_6[Exterior night shot of ABCB.]Akane: [off] _____ What are you showing off naani kakko tsukete n no yo! for?! what able-to-look-betterKomatsu: [off] ome-- ga yatte-mo KImannai You can try, but it doesn't you (S) even-tho-doing not-be-decided/ work! not-be-natural tte...no![A tiny, embarrassed Kyousuke adorns this narration panel.]narration: Somehow, it looks like nan da ka SUKOshi oshi-- koto I've done something a bit somehow a-little regrettable-thing regrettable... shita yo-- na... done it-looks-like ________ Still, the feeling of being imada hi--ro-- KIBUN a hero hasn't faded away. still/yet hero feeling/atmosphere ___ sameyaranu ore desu not-cool-down/not-fade-away I am---------------------------------------------------