Kimagure Orange Road"Parallel Night!"Volume 10, Story 2WB Volume 6, Story 2Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Thomas Wyatt Jerry LeeLast revision : 08-16-95Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.eduNOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 27 (27) are only in the WBs!---------------------------------------------------p 27 (27)--TITLE PAGE[Parallel-Madoka stands with back towards us, facing a motorcycle. She is decked in a tight 2-color jumpsuit and boots, a helmet held in her left arm. She looks back at us over her left shoulder.]MAIN TITLE (at top) ________ _____ Parallel Night! parareru - naito!SUB-TITLE (at bottom) Wanting to Turn into a kirameku KAZE ni naritakute Sparkling Wind-- sparkling wind (IO) wanting-to-become ______ _________ A Silver Machine and Helmet. GIN no mashin to herumetto silver(y) machine and helmet---------------------------------------------------p 28 (28)1[Portrait of the gang lieutenant--a pretty and slender blonde. She points a finger back. This is Madoka's pov.]gang lieutenant: You... anta kai? You're the one called KOURYOU GAKUEN MOTO - ONNA SOU-BANCHOU Ayukawa Madoka--the former school ex- girl (total)-gang- leader of Kouryou's girl leader gang? AYUKAWA madoka ttee no wa (quote) (nom) (T)2[The gang lieutenant's pov. Madoka stares back. Kyousuke looks on wide-eyed.]3[View pans way back. The motorcycle gang confronts the two, who stand just outside of ABCB.]motorcycles FX: ___ ___ ___ ___ ___ ___ do_ do_ do_ do_ do_ do_4Madoka: ____ If you don't go soon HAYAku ikanai to kega suru yo you're gonna get hurt. soon if-not-go get-hurtKyousuke: S-sure. But... u un demo...5[His pov of the beefy punk types riding the motorcycles.]narration: If I don't hurry and go to HAYAku YUUENCHI ni itte the amusement park, and ride soon to-amusement-park go-(and) on the roller coaster, I __________ won't be getting back to my ko--suta-- ni noranakya world! on-coaster if-not-ride MOTO no SEKAI ni KAErenaku natte-shimau! to-original-world not-be-returning- (finality/regret) But... What the heck do shikashi... koitsura ittai these guys want with but these-guys in-the-world Ayukawa?! AYUKAWA ni nan no YOU da?! by-Ayukawa what-kind-of-business is---------------------------------------------------p 29 (29)1Madoka: [sternly] Go now!! sassato iki na!! at-once goKyousuke: Y-yes! ha hai![He starts to run off.]2gang lieutenant: GO!! yare_!![Several guys rush in on Madoka all at once.]3[One takes a corner of the Ace of Diamonds in his forehead.]punk 1: Gah! gua_4[She holds the Ace of Spades up high, between fore- and middle-fingers. The other punks circle her, but do not approach.]Madoka: ____ If you come any closer... CHIKAzuku to... kega suru yo! You're gonna get hurt! if-come-near get-hurt5gang lieutenant: [off] Hold it right there! machi na!---------------------------------------------------p 30 (30)1[The gang lieutenant holds a large knife at the throat of Kyousuke.]Kyousuke: Ah... Ayukawa... a... AYUKAWA...2[Madoka portrait.]3Madoka: He has nothing to do with soitsu wa nan no KANKEI mo nai! this! that-person (T) no-relation too not-have Let him go! hanase!gang lieutenant: Then come with us!! dattara atashi-tachi to kina_!! if-it-is with-us come4Madoka: [look of resignation] I understand... ..........wakatta yo5[The gang lieutenant extends her knife at Madoka's throat.]gang lieutenant: The game... Is over! SHOUBU... atta ne!6[Wrists tied behind her, Madoka is set on the back of a motorcycle. She'll ride side-saddle.]gang lieutenant: The gang leader wants to BANCHOU ga anta ni HANASHI ga aru have a talk with you. gang-leader (S) by-you have-a-talk sou da it-looks-as-if Come with us. tsukiatte-morao-- kamotorcycles FX: ___ ___ ___ do_ do_ do_---------------------------------------------------p 31 (31)1[The gang motors off and Kyousuke runs after Madoka.]gang lieuteneant: Let's roll! hikiageru zo!Kyousuke: Ayukawa!! AYUKAWA!!2Madoka: [tiny smile] Don't worry... SHIMPAI nai yo... You'd better hurry and go, anta mo HAYAku iki na too. you too soon go _____ The cops are chasing you, mappo ni owarete n daro aren't they. ????? being-chased (poss-explan)3[Madoka looks back wistfully.]4[Kyousuke stares after her, wide-eyed and worried.]5motorcycles FX: ___ ___ ___ ___ ___ ___ do_ do_ do_ do_ do_ do_narration: Ayukawa... AYUKAWA...6[Shot of the entrance to the amusement park. Parked outside is a motor scooter.]Hikaru: [off] They're late, aren't they. osoi desu ne-- aitsura late are (rhet) those-guyssign: Toshima En TOSHIMA EN---------------------------------------------------p 32 (32)1[Hikaru sits on a bench, still dressed in her white jumpsuit. The twins, in school uniforms, stand nearby. Manami is armed with a stick.]Hikaru: How strange... okashi-- naa __ Hey, that challenge really oi HONTOU ni KETTOUJOU wa was sent out, right? hey really a-(written)-challenge (T) DAshita n daro-- na sent-out (poss-explan)Kurumi: Were they so scared of us atashi-tachi ga kowaku tte that they turned tail and we (S) fearfully (T) ran? shippo o maite nigeDAshita n ja nai desu ka? turning-one's-tail-and- (explan) is (?) running/hightailing-ittrashcan sign: Trash Container kuzu Ire trash contain/hold2[Hikaru crosses her arms, closes her eyes and grins at the ground. Behind her, Kyousuke approaches, but is looking off to the side.]Hikaru: ___ ___ ___ fu_ fu_ fu_ I see. Those wimps. so-- ka YOWAMUSHI-me coward (derogatory-suffix)3Hikaru and Kurumi: Ah! You're...?! a_ omae wa?!Kyousuke: AH! a_4Hikaru: [angrily pointing] ______ You jerk! You're the kisama_ HIRUMA no chikan! pervert from earlier today! you-(abusive) in-the-daytime 's molesterKyousuke: Y-you're wrong! chi chigau yo!5Kyousuke: Th-that's right. Ayukawa so so-- da AYUKAWA ga......! is...! that's-right (S)Hikaru: Huh?! What about e_ madoka-san ga do-- shita tte?! Madoka-san?! ! (S) what's-the-matter (quote)6[A view of some of the rides.]Hikaru: [off] Wha-a-at!?! nani----_?! ________ Madoka-san was taken off madoka-san ga BANCHOU guru--pu ni by the gang leader's group?! (S) by-gang-leader-group tsuretekareta~~?! was-taken-awaysign: [partial view] Empty Cans... akiKAN wa... empty-can (T)---------------------------------------------------p 33 (33)1Kyousuke: [to Hikaru] The rest is up to you. ato wa kimi-tachi dake ga the-rest (T) you-(and-assoc) only (S) tayori da yo dependence/help is I'm putting her fate in AYUKAWA no koto tanonda yo your hands. about-Ayukawa asked/entrusted/reliednarration: ___ __________ Anyway, I have to get to the ore tonikaku ko--suta-- de roller coaster and return to I anyway in-coaster my own world. MOTO no SEKAI ni KAEranakutcha to-original-world must-return2[Turning, Kyousuke looks off-panel and stops short.]3[View shifts to show what he sees. The indoor roller coaster building is already partially dismantled.]Kyousuke: __ __________ Ahhhh!!! Th-the roller a~~~~~~_!! ko ko--suta-- ga?! coaster is...?!scaffold signs: Safety First ANZEN DAI ICHI Hatta Construction HATTA KENSETSU constructionbuilding sign: __________ Coaster ko--suta--4[He drops to his hands and knees in horror.]narration: Wh-what's this? na nan to yu-- koto da what it-is-said-that W-with this... ko kore ja...5Kyousuke: [flash thought] (Now... I can't return to (moo... MOTO no SEKAI ni wa my home world!!) now to-original-world (contrast) modorenai!!) can't-return6[Outside a school building, several motorcycle punks sit and wait.]motorcycles FX: ________ dodododohelmet: [right] ______ Fool ---> I love you ba--ka AI shite-ru helmet: [left] ...hyaho-----------------------------------------------------p 34 (34)1[The gang leader makes her entrance. Another pretty and slender girl wearing reflective goggles, leather pants and vest over a T-shirt. She has metal- studded leather bands on her forearms, and casually raises her helmet to her adoring gang. She's accompanied by bodyguards.]2[Their view as they open a door. Madoka sits on the floor in her school uniform, arms tied behind her back. She wears a look of defiance.]door FX: [off] _____ gacha---------------------------------------------------p 35 (35)1gang leader: So you're the one... The anta kai uwasa ni TAKAi reputed former chief gang you (?) by-rumor exalted leader, Ayukawa Madoka? MOTO SOU BANCHOU ex- (total) gang-leader AYUKAWA madoka tte no wa (quote) (T)2[Madoka facial portrait--if looks could kill...]3[View shifts. Madoka glares up at the gang leader and her two hefty male bodyguards.]4gang leader: We've almost taken over wareware no GAKUEN SEIATSU wa complete control of the our control-of-school (T) school... hobo KANRYOU shita... almost completed But... shikashi... There are still some stupid imada ni goku SHOUSUU daga ones--though it's just a still/yet extremely few though few--who are not submitting ____ to us. wareware ni SHITAGAwanai baka na to-us not-obey/submit stupid RENCHUU mo iru company/set too there-is5[She lifts up Madoka's chin and leans down to look into her eyes. Madoka continues to glare.]gang leader: I hear they're waiting for yatsura wa anta ga you to stand up against those-fellows (T) you (S) us... TAchiagaru no o matte-ru to yu-- rising-up (O) are-waiting say-that ja nai ka... So then... How about this? soko de...da do-- dai? so/then is how is Why not cooperate with me? atashi to TE o KUmanai ka? with-me hand (O) not-cooperate (?)---------------------------------------------------p 36 (36)1gang leader: If only you were working anta sae atashi no TESHITA ni for me, then no one would if-only-you my-subordinate/follower oppose me. natte-kurerya-- if-become atashi ni hamukaou to-me shall-resist/oppose nante yatsu wa inaku naru such-a-person (T) not-exist turn-intoMadoka: I refuse!! kotowaru!!2[Madoka's pov. The two bodyguards look back with surprise. The gang leader's face--behind those reflective goggles--is unreadable.]3gang leader: I see... so-- kai... Then, it can't be helped. ja shikata ga nai4[She raises a hand. One of her bodyguards hands her a bullwhip.]gang leader: No. But before long you'll iya demo sono uchi #YES# to yu-- come around to say "yes"... no but before-long say-"yes" yo-- ni naru sa... reach-the-point-where If you won't listen to what KUCHI de itte kikanakya... I have to say... by-mouth saying if-not-obey/listen5bullwhip FX: ______ bishangang leader: [off] ...then I'll make you kikaseru made da_!! listen!! make-listen until is6gang leader: Through your body. sono KARADA ni ne on-that-body---------------------------------------------------p 37 (37)1[Overhead view looking down on the four at the park.]Hikaru: Wh-what'll we do? do do-- shiyou To think Madoka-san was madoka-san ga tsukamatchau nante... caught... (S) was-caught-(finality) the-likes-ofManami: I bet they're trying to win kitto MIKATA ni hikiireyo-- to shite-ru her over to their side. surely are-trying-to-win-over-(to-their- side) n da wa (explan)2Kyousuke: [twiddling thumbs] ___ I-I'm sorry. I'm go gomen ore no SEKININ da! responsible! sorry my-responsibility/duty is3[Hikaru grabs him by the shirt and--fangs bared--yells in his face.]Hikaru: THAT'S RIGHT! so-- da IT'S YOUR FAULT!! ome-- ga WARUi!! you (S) be-in-fault4Hikaru: It's them we're talking aitsura no koto da about. about-them is If this continues, I don't kono mama ja madoka-san know what they might do to if-continues-like-this Madoka-san! nani sareru ka wakannai yo! what be-doing (?) not-knowKyousuke: EHHH?!! ee_?!5[Shot of a roller coaster ride.]Hikaru: [off] Because they're a cruel nanse MOKUTEKI no tame nara bunch who'll stop at nothing because for-the-aim/end if-it-is to reach their goals. SHUDAN o erabanai fair-means-or-foul/stop-at-nothing hidoi RENCHUU da terrible/cruel company/set is If you don't listen to what yu-- koto kikanakya kiku made they say, then they'll be what-say if-not-listen until-listen sure to torture you until you do. go--mon ni kakeru ni KImatte-ru to-torture be-bound-to6Kyousuke: [aghast] T-TORTURE?! go go--mon?!Hikaru: [glaring] Sure. so-- yo That's the way they do sore ga aitsura no yariKATA things... that-(one) (S) their how-to-do nan da kara... what is that's-why7[Hikaru blushes, hands to cheeks.]Hikaru: _____ Strike you with a whip... muchi de hippataitari... by-whip beat-(and) And do perverted things... #H# na koto shitari shite... 'H'-things doing-(and)---------------------------------------------------p 38 (38)1[Kyousuke sweats, blushes and looks up in worry at the sky.]Kyousuke: __ _____ W-with a whip. mu muchi de Perverted things...?! #H# na koto tte...?!2[He visualizes a nude Madoka flinching in anguish from the blows of a whip.]bullwhip FX: bishi_Madoka: AAAAAH! a------_3Hikaru: [blushing furiously] What are you making me nani iwasen da yo!! say?!! what make-say are[She grants him Parallel Slap #5. Though this one's more of a straight-arm punch. Same cheek, though. Kyousuke reels.]4[He holds a hand to his injured cheek.]Kyousuke: Th-that's awful!! so sore wa TAIHEN!! that-(one) (T) seriousnarration: ___ It all started because of MOTO wa to ieba ore no se-- me...! origin (T) speaking-of my-fault da mon...! is reason5[He raises an arm and starts running off. He looks back at the others with a decisive look.]Kyousuke: We have to go rescue her ikkoku mo HAYAku at once! at-once/as-soon-as-possible tasuke ni ikanakucha to-rescue must-goHikaru: [smiling] Oh! So you do have a good o_ omae i-- toko aru jan side. you good features exist/have is-not6[Rockets and shooting stars adorn this panel.]FX: _____ zubo_All: KYAAAAAA! kya~~~~~~_7[A shot of an open pit in the ground. It had once been covered by a small tarp anchored by wood and bricks. Voices emanate from the hole.]Kyousuke: [off] Ow-ow-ouch. iteteteteKurumi: [off] H-hey-y-y. What's this?! chi chotto-- nani yo kore?! what this-(one)tarp: Construction KENSETSU8[Kyousuke lies crushed under the combined mass of Kurumi, Manami and a gleefully smiling Hikaru.]Hikaru: During the day, I set this o-HIRU ni atashi ga aitsura up, thinking I'd have those at-midday I (S) those-fellows guys fall in. otoso-- to OMOtte shall-drop/let-fall thinking-that shikaketoita n da (shikakete-oita) (explan) set-up-(for-future-sake)Kurumi: ____ Hikaru-san, you bozo!! hikaru-san no doji!!---------------------------------------------------p 39 (39)1[Madoka, wrists tied in front of her with her arms wrapped around a pole, has her back flogged.]bullwhip FX: ______ ______ bishii bashii2gang leader: [sweating] How was that...? do-- dai... Do you feel like listening? yu-- koto kiku KI ni natta kai thing-said hear felt-inclined-to (?) haa haa3[Madoka turns her head to spit in the gang leader's face. It lands smack in the middle of the reflective goggles.]Madoka FX: ___ pe_gang leader: Oo! u_4gang leader: Sh-shit! ku kuso--_ _ __ H-hey! Take her away! o oi koitsu o tsurete-yuke! hey this-person (O) take-(person)-off5[The gang leader smiles back over her shoulder at her 2 bodyguards.]gang leader: Since it's come to this... kaku naru UE wa You guys may do your best omaera seizei kawaigatte-yari na! to treat her with love! you-(plural) do-your- love/pet-(her)/treat- best (her)-with-affectionmusclehead 1 FX: ______ niyarimusclehead 2: ___ Hey! hei!---------------------------------------------------p 40 (40)1[Madoka portrait--she hugs the pole in wide-eyed fear.]2[View of a door in a graffiti-riddled school hallway.]sign: Health Room HOKEN SHITSUoverlaid on sign: ______ Hotel hoteru3[Madoka, tossed onto the bed with wrists tied behind her, lies still as the two guys take off their jackets.]musclehead 1: ___ ___ ___ ku_ ku_ ku_ Well, let's get friendly! saa naka yoku shiyo-- ze on-good-terms shall-do ! Till morning, huh. ASA made namusclehead 2: ___ ___ ___ ___ he_ he_ he_ he_4musclehead 1: [reaching out to her] I wonder if it's okay... i-- no ka na-- okay I-wonder To have a beautiful girl konna BIJIN o itadaichatte... like this... this-kind-of-beauty (O) having/taking- (finality)5Madoka: Pl... ya...---------------------------------------------------p 41 (41)1[View of the sign outside the health room.]Madoka: [off] PLEASE STOP! yamete----_2[Tight shot of a wheel of a motor scooter in motion.]scooter FX: ______ biiiin3[Kyousuke opens his eyes wide in surprise. View has panned back to show him riding double behind Hikaru, arms around her waist.]Kyousuke: (Ayukawa!!) (AYUKAWA!!)4[He fixes a stare to the side.]narration: Just now, for an instant, IMA ISSHUN AYUKAWA no it seemed like I heard now an-instant 's Ayukawa scream. sakebi KOE ga kikoeta yo-- na screaming-voice (S) heard seemsKyousuke: ___ ________ (Even though I don't have (ore... terepasu NOURYOKU nanka any telepathic ability...) I telepath ability or-such nai no ni...) not-have even-though5Kyousuke: (D-did something happen to (mo moshiya AYUKAWA no KARADA ni her?!) by-any-chance to-Ayukawa's-body nani-ka?!) something (Damn! (kuso--_ __________ I can't teleport in front minna no MAE ja terepo--to mo of everyone...) in-front-of-everyone-(T) teleport too dekinai shi...) can't consider6[View shifts to show the twins riding double on a second scooter.]Kyousuke: [to Hikaru] Hurry! Ayukawa's in danger! isoide-kure AYUKAWA ga abunai! hurry (S) dangerHikaru: Huh?! e?!---------------------------------------------------p 42 (42)1[Kyousuke throws his head back and lets out a mighty roar. Hikaru winces. Manami looks on in surprise.]Kyousuke: AYUKAWA!! AYUKAWA!!2[Madoka stops short, eyes wide.]3[As musclehead 1 approaches, she looks off to one side.]narration: Wh-what was that voice just na nani IMA no KOE? ano KOE wa... now? That voice was... what now 's voice that-voice (T)4[She visualizes Kyousuke.]Madoka: [off] (Him?!) aitsu?!5[Musclehead 1 grasps her by her upper arms. She is still distracted by her thoughts...]narration: How could that be? doushite darou why poss-be Even though I only just met sakki HAJImete him a little while ago... a-little-while-ago for-the-first-time atta bakari na no ni... met only is even-though It feels as though he's aitsu ga kitto kite-kureru definitely coming here... that-guy (S) surely coming-(for-me) yo-- na KI ga suru... it-looks-like feel---------------------------------------------------p 43 (43)1[Hikaru nearly runs over a startled Komatsu.]Komatsu: [diving out of the way] WAH! wa_Hikaru: [without a glance] Sorry! gomen yo--FX: _______ ga----n2[Komatsu sits on the pavement and raises a fist in the air.]Komatsu: Hey hey! kora kora What are you kids doing this konna YORU fuke ni nan da late at night?!! late-at-night-like-this what is omaera!!scooter FX: ____ viin3[Komatsu stares in surprise.]4[Kyousuke stares back over his shoulder.]5Komatsu: Y-you're...!! o omae wa!!6Kyousuke: ___ ARG! ge_7[Komatsu hops onto a bicycle.]Komatsu: Y-you jerk, h-hold it!! ki kisama ma mate----_!!---------------------------------------------------p 44 (44)1[The two scooters are followed closely by Komatsu and Hatta doubled up on the bicycle.]Hikaru: _____ Oh no! It's the cops!! yabe--_ mappo da~~~~_!! in-for-it ????? isKomatsu: Finally found ya, kid!! tsui ni mitsuketa zo bo--zu!! finally found !! boy/kid It's illegal to ride futari nori wa IHAN da zo_!! double!! riding-double (T) violation is !!2[Hikaru glares back at Kyousuke over her shoulder.]Hikaru: What did you do?! omae nani shita n da yo! you what done (explan)Kyousuke: [wincing] _chikara_ Th-they saw a little of my chi...chotto NOURYOKU o mirarechatte Power. a-bit Power (O) was-seeing- (finality)3Hikaru: _chikara_ Power?! NOURYOKU?! _chikara_ What's that? "Power"? nan da yo NOURYOKU tte? what is Power (quote)narration: O-oh well, it doesn't ma maa ii ka... matter... ________ ________ This is only a parallel koko wa parareru - wa--rudo da world... this-place (T) parallel-world is shi consider4[Tight shot looking down at the scooter's front wheels.]narration: I have to use it to rescue AYUKAWA o SUKUidasu ni wa Ayukawa... (O) to-save/rescue (contrast) TSUKAwanakutcha ikenai shi... must-use and-besides I'm going to be seen do--se mirarechau n da! anyway! anyhow be-seen-(finality) (explan)Kyousuke: [off] ___ To tell you the truth, I... jitsu wa ore... actually I5Kyousuke: [off] Have ESPer powers! CHOU- NOURYOKU TSUKAeru n da! super- ability/faculty can-use (explan)6Kyousuke: [hand over his mouth] (I finally... (tsui ni... Said it!!) itchatta!!)---------------------------------------------------p 45 (45)1Hikaru: [glaring back over her shoulder] You're slightly strange omae yappari dokka after all, aren't you. you after-all somewhere okashi-- n ja nai no strange/funny (explan) (?)Kyousuke: [wincing] I-it's the truth, I'm ho...HONTOU da tteba!! telling you!! truth is (I'm-telling-you)Komatsu: Stop-p-p! mate----_2[Musclehead 1 begins removing Madoka's blouse.]Madoka: __ ________ B-bastard!! ke kedamono!! beast/brute3[Exterior shot of the school grounds. Around a burning 55-gallon drum sit many punk bikers.]musclehead 1: [off] God knows, even if you nanto demo ienai te-mo scream... even-tho-one-can't-say-(at-all)/God-knows wameite-mo... even-tho-scream This place is a fortress of koko wa omawari sae mo hell that even cops aren't this-place (T) even-cop too allowed to come near!! CHIKAzukene-- not-allowed-to-come-near JIGOKU no YOUSAI da!! hell 's fortress is---------------------------------------------------