Kimagure Orange Road"All Is Ruined!"Volume 9, Story 9WB Volume 5, Story 16Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation by : Daisuke Suzuki (under contract to Vancouver Animation)Additional translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Jun Watatani Craig Nishida Thomas Wyatt Jerry LeeLast revision : 08-16-95Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.eduNOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 321 (173) are only in the WBs!---------------------------------------------------p 321 (173)--TITLE PAGE[Hikaru half-portrait--in "Benchwarmers" sweatshirt and "Person's Team" cap. A shoulder-strap bag hangs from her right armpit and is elevated above her head (blown by the wind?). She smiles and winks at us, and holds down her cap to keep it from flying off.]MAIN TITLE (at top) All Is Ruined! HAMETSU ga ippai! destruction/ruin (S) full/whole/allSUB-TITLE (at bottom) ________ I Want to Shine with itsu demo kirakira KAGAYAkitai no Brilliance Forever-- always brilliantly wanting-to-shine Like a Small Bird Soaring KOTORI ga AOZORA Through the Blue Sky, small-bird (S) blue-sky _to_ KA(KERU) bu you ni = = to-soar/fly so-that/as Like a Cool Breeze Breathing NOYAMA ni SUZUKAZE in the Hills and Fields... in-hills-and-fields cool/refreshing-breeze FUku you ni... to-breathe so-that---------------------------------------------------p 322 (174)1[Exterior shot of the Hiyama residence.]sign: Hiyama HIYAMA2[Smiling, Hikaru presents a cake.]Hikaru: My folks aren't around KYOU wa uchi no HITO today. today (T) household's-people dare-mo inai n desu nobody-is-here (explan)3[Madoka and Kyousuke sit on the floor, both in school uniforms.]Kyousuke: [nervous smile] I-I hope it's okay. o o-jama shimasu4[View pans back to show them seated at a low table, Kyousuke facing Madoka, with Hikaru sitting at the end. They are in Hikaru's bedroom. Kumagorou- kun sits and looks at us sleepily from his spot on the floor.]narration: Today, Hikaru-chan exercised KYOU wa hikaru-chan ga her well-known skill and today (T) (S) baked a cake, so... JIMAN no UDE o well-known-skill (O) ______ furutte ke--ki o tsukutta brandish/exercise-(and) baked-a-cake to yu-- no de saying-that soHikaru: [to Kyousuke] ______ Madoka-san is way better ke--ki ZUKUri madoka-san no ho-- ga at making cakes... cake making more zutto umai n da kedo by-far skillful (explan) but5narration: For some reason... naze-ka... Ayukawa and I are both AYUKAWA to futari here at Hikaru-chan's place. with-Ayukawa 2-people hikaru-chan no IE ni kite-imasu to-Hikaru's-place are-coming[With a smile, Hikaru presents the first piece to Madoka.]Hikaru: But you hardly ever bake metta ni tsukutte-kurenai n desu yo ne~~ for me, do you. rarely not-make-(for-me) (explan) (rhet)---------------------------------------------------p 323 (175)1[Hikaru looks dreamily up at the ceiling.]Hikaru: ______ "I'll only bake homemade TEzukuri no ke--ki wa MIRAI no cakes for my future handmade/homemade 's cake (T) future 's husband..." danna-SAMA ni shika tsukuranai tte... to-husband only-make (quote) ...is what I suppose jitsu wa madoka-san KOKORO ni Madoka-san has truly actually in-heart decided in her heart... KImete-tari shite is-deciding-(or)2Hikaru: [merrily] What on earth will your MIRAI no danna-SAMA tte ITTAI future husband be like, future 's husband (T) in-the-world hm? donna HITO desho-- ne? what-kind-of-person poss-be (rhet)[Madoka starts to blush.]3Hikaru: Oops. Oh no. ara ya da ________ Would you like tea or o-CHA ni shimasu ka soretomo ko--hi--? coffee? tea do (?) or coffee ______ Oolong tea? u--ron CHA?Madoka: ________ Coffee. ko--hi--[Kyousuke blushes even more deeply.]Kyousuke: ______ Oolong tea. u--ron CHA4Kyousuke: Let's see. Where's the etto o-sato-- wa... to sugar? let's-see sugar (T)5[He spots the sugar bowl in front of Madoka.]6[They nervously and politely address one another. Hikaru watches them without expression.]Madoka: ..... Here you go. .......... do--zoKyousuke: Ah... Thanks! a... do--mo!---------------------------------------------------p 324 (176)1[Kyousuke and Madoka take sips--both pointedly ignoring the other. Hikaru continues to quietly watch them both.]Hikaru contemplation FX: ji----Kyousuke: _____ gohon2doorbell FX: ___ _____ pin po--nHikaru: Yes? hai?3Hikaru: [getting up in irritation] I'm sure it's a newspaper kitto SHIMBUN no KAN'YUUIN ne solicitor. surely newspaper 's canvasser Grr! moo_!4[The two watch her leave, off-panel.]door FX: [off] _____ batan5[Madoka looks at the sugar bowl as Kyousuke drinks.]Kyousuke FX: __ zu...6Madoka: [merrily] ____ How silly. baka neeKyousuke: [perplexed] Eh? e?7Madoka: ______ You don't usually put sugar futsuu u--ron CHA ni wa in Oolong tea. usually in-Oolong-tea (contrast) o-sato-- nante Irenai no yo sugar the-likes-of not-put-inKyousuke: [surprised] Eh? Is that true?! e sore HONTOU?! that-(one) true---------------------------------------------------p 325 (177)1Kyousuke: _uchi_ Kurumi is always putting IE ja kurumi ga itsu-mo in a lot at home... at-home-(T) (S) always tappuri Irete-ru kedo... amply/copiously is-putting-in butMadoka: ___ pu_2Madoka: [cheerily] Just like her, hmm... ano KO rashi-- ne that-girl like (rhet)3[The two share a laugh.]4[He knocks the cake off his plate and onto his tie.]Kyousuke: Oh! a_!cake FX: _____ poro_5Madoka: ____ You klutz! doji! bungle/blunder6Madoka: [rising] Hey. Come over here! hora kotchi ni kinasai yo look! to-this-way come! I'll wipe it off for you. fuite-ageru kara wiping-(for-you) that's-whyKyousuke: [rising] Th-thanks. do do--mo7[He pitches forward, high through the air, over the table, and right at Madoka. She can only stare helplessly upward.]Kyousuke: M-my legs are numb...! a ashi ga shibire...! legs (S) numbness---------------------------------------------------p 326 (178)1[He lands on top of her; she falls on her back.]Kyousuke and Madoka FX: ___ do_Kyousuke: AH! a2[Trying to push him off her by shoving at his chin.]Madoka: [angrily] __ ____ I-idiot! Hey! ba baka chotto!Kyousuke: S-sorr... go gome3[Tight shot of the doorknob as it jiggles.]door FX: _____ gacha4[Kyousuke and Madoka look up wide-eyed from the floor. He's still perched over her.]5[Hikaru enters, smiling, her arms laden with several boxes of detergent.]Hikaru: I subscribed to another matamata SHIMBUN totchatta newspaper. again newspaper subscribed-(finality) Look how much soap I got! MIte-kudasai ko--nna ni sekken look-(please) so-much soap moratchatta received-(finality)detergent box 1: ______ ________ dirt--FALL yogore ochi--ru dirt/filth falldetergent box 2: Mighty ! KYOURYOKU <2-kanji>! power/might---------------------------------------------------p 327 (179)1[Kyousuke propels himself backwards, up off of Madoka, who sits up, turns aside, and crosses her arms over her chest.]Kyousuke FX: _______ suza---2[View pans back. Hikaru stands at the door in puzzlement. Kyousuke is on the far side of the room, reading a paper on the edge of a bed. Madoka sips from a cup at the table. Hmm... He couldn't have *teleported* any faster than this!]Hikaru: Hm?! n?!3[Madoka sips from a cup. If you're really sharp, you *might* notice it's not the same cup she was drinking from 2 pages before.]Madoka FX: __ zu...4[Kyousuke, sweating nervously, reads out some apparent gibberish from the paper. He's holding it upside-down, so it comes out backwards.]Kyousuke: _______ __________ _____ ydorB no dednal kcen eht ni iderobu ga rigiizun'e no kinoi kito noso ot kcik s'ikonI tnemom taht... _____ sono toki inoki no that-time 's _________ ______ enzuigiri ga burodi ni = kick-to-neck (S) on-Brodyadvertisement: [upside-down, on right] Look, look! Become miru miru takumashiku naru! manly! look look robust/sturdy become 3 times a day! 1-NICHI 3-KAI <2-kanji> o 1-day 3-times (O) KIN o-dake! respect only Immediate testing to become sugu o-TAMEshi KASHI ri_!! an officer!! at-once a-trial/test noncommissioned- officer Three ! 3-KA ! 3-daysclassified header: Your Advertisements anata no KOUKOKU your advertisementspersonals 1: Sale Uritashi = want-to-sell _____________ Garage Kits. Every gare--jikitto MAI- . garage-kit every/each/apiece YOU ze ne sheep ____ Pro, many parts. puro BUN- TASUU pro detached/ large-number/multitude branchedpersonals 2: Mitsuru. Not angry any MITSURU mou okotte-nai more. Come home at once. more am-not-angry Father. ____ _____ sugu kaere CHICHI immediate return fatherpersonals 3: ________ ______ Masahiro. masahiro <2-kanji> herase Economize. Father & Mother. economize CHICHIHAHApersonals 4: ____ Osamu. Found a bride. Come OSAMU yome o mitsuketa home immediately. Mom. bride (O) found ____ _____ sugu kaere HAHA immediate return mother5[Isolated shot of the coffee pot, Madoka's coffee cup and the cake with a slice cut out of it.]---------------------------------------------------p 328 (180)1[Hikaru portrait--silent and expressionless.]2[From her position, Hikaru tries to get a look at Kyousuke, who has his back to everyone. Sipping from his cup--notice that it's not his teacup--he tries to sneak a glance over his shoulder. Madoka drinks from a cup.]narration: _____ _____ Oh no, oh no. o-- yabai yabai3Hikaru: ________ Sempai, that's Madoka-san's SEMPAI sono ko--hi-- madoka-san no desu yo coffee. that-coffeeKyousuke FX: __ ___ bu fu_[At the same time, Madoka notices she's been drinking from Kyousuke's highly saccharine teacup. Her eyes grow wide.]4[He staggers back in horror, spilling the coffee on his shirt. The background turns pitch-dark.]Kyousuke: (C-could it be...) (mo moshikashite...)Kyousuke: Ow-ow-ow!! achachacha!!5narration: She saw us just now? IMA no MIrareta no de wa now 's was-seen (nom) No, no. But, maybe... iya iya demo masaka... But, those eyes... shikashi ano ME...Hikaru: [smiling] Ohh, I'll wipe the spill mo-- koboshichatte fuite-agemasu off. spilling- wipe-(for-you) (finality)-(and)6[Taking his tie, she wipes it with a hankie.]narration: For some reason, Hikaru-chan nan-da-ka SAIKIN hikaru-chan is getting mighty suspicious somehow of-late these days... utaguri -BUKAku natte-kita naa suspicious deeply started-becoming---------------------------------------------------p 329 (181)1[A view of the rooftop of a school building.]narration: And the next day, as soshite YOKUJITSU yappari expected, my hunch came... and/then next-day just-as-I-thought True?! YOKAN wa TEKICHUU...shita?! a-foreboding (T) came-true2Kyousuke: [smiling, walking up the stairs] (What in the world could (ittai nan daro? this be about? in-the-world what poss-be Hikaru-chan formally hikaru-chan ga aratamatte requesting a talk.) (S) formally HANASHI tte) talk (quote)Kyousuke FX: ___ ___ ko_ ko_Kyousuke: __ Maybe we'll be eating a box o-bento-- OKUJOU de taberu no ka na lunch on the roof. box-lunch on-roof eating I-wonder3[He spots her over by the railing, facing away.]Kyousuke: Hi. Sorry to keep... yaa o-mata...4[View over his shoulder at the silent, unmoving Hikaru.]5Kyousuke: [smiling] You asked to talk... What HANASHI tte... nani? is it? talk (quote) what6[His pov--still, she remains motionless.]---------------------------------------------------p 330 (182)1[Without turning around, she says...]Hikaru: It's about Madoka-san. madoka-san no koto desu about-Madoka is[He recoils in horror.]Kyousuke FX: _____ gikuu2[Finally turning around, Hikaru looks at him, face in anguish.]Hikaru: I think that's too much!! atashi anmari da to OMOimasu!! I too-much is think-that3Hikaru: _uchi_ Even yesterday, when you kinou datte IE ni kita came to my place! yesterday even came-to-my-place TOKI SEMPAI ttara time (I-tell-you)4narration: J-just as I thought... ya yappari...Kyousuke: Ahh... Ah wah wah. a...... a wa waKyousuke FX: fura_5Hikaru: [running down the stairs] I won't speak to you, SEMPAI ga KANGAe naosu Sempai, until you mend (S) opinion/view change/correct your ways! made atashi SEMPAI to wa until I with-Sempai (T) KUCHI kikimasen not-speak-toKyousuke: Ah! W-wait!! a ma_ matte!!---------------------------------------------------p 331 (183)1Kyousuke: [stunned] H-Hika... hi hika...2[Tilted view of Kyousuke, as his world starts turning upside-down.]Kyousuke: Hikaru-chan... hikaru-chan...3[His pov of a store-lined alleyway.]narration: I-in the end, the time that tsu tsui ni kuru-beki TOKI ga had to come, came... in-the-end must-come time (S) kite-shimatta... came-(finality/regret)sign 1: [partial] ...Shop ...YAsign 2: Haruki Store HARUKI -YA4Kyousuke: [unhappily] (N-now, Hikaru-chan and...) (mo moo hikaru-chan to wa...)5[He stops and looks at a store.]sign: Cakes/Confections YOUGASHI6[He looks at the cakes in the window display.]---------------------------------------------------p 332 (184)1[Flashback panel--Hikaru looks up at the ceiling.]narration: ______ "I'll only bake homemade TEzukuri no ke--ki wa MIRAI no cakes for my future handmade/homemade 's cake (T) future 's husband..." danna-SAMA ni shika tsukuranai tte... to-husband only-make (quote) ...is what I suppose jitsu wa madoka-san KOKORO ni Madoka-san has truly actually in-heart decided in her heart... KImete-tari shite is-deciding-(or)2[Kyousuke reflects.]3Kyousuke: Ayukawa... AYUKAWA...4[His face brightens.]narration: ___ I still have Ayukawa!! ore ni wa AYUKAWA ga iru!! by-me (contrast) (S) is-there5[Tight shot of his lower leg.]narration: If this is how it's gonna ko-- nattara be, I'm going to Ayukawa's like-this if-become place... AYUKAWA no TOKORO ni itte... to-Ayukawa's-place going6[Racing off, he brushes against a stocky guy.]Kyousuke: (If it doesn't work out with (AYUKAWA mo dame nara Ayukawa as well, then I'll too no-good if-it-is have nothing left!!) ___ ore ni wa mou nani-mo nai!!) by-me (contrast) any-more nothing-is-thereKyousuke FX: ____ don_Kyousuke: Ah, sorry! a suimasen!---------------------------------------------------p 333 (185)1[Exterior shot of ABCB.]2[Madoka turns at the sound of...]door FX: _____ karan3[Her pov of Kyousuke at the door.]4[A closer view. This is a decisive Kyousuke.]5[Overhead view of Madoka wiping dishes behind the counter, and Kyousuke, who approaches the counter.]Madoka: Welco... irassha...Kyousuke: ______ Cake... ke--ki o6Madoka: Huh? eKyousuke: ______ I want you to bake a cake. ke--ki o tsukutte hoshii cake (O) making (desire/want)---------------------------------------------------p 334 (186)1[Her pov of him. He has a no-argument, slightly-crazed look.]Kyousuke: ______ I want to eat a cake that AYUKAWA no tsukutta ke--ki ga you've made!! 's made cake (S) TAbetai n da!! want-to-eat (explan)2[Master and Madoka look back in surprise.]3Madoka: I... so...4Madoka: [nervously] I can't do something like sonna that out of the blue... that-kind-of KYUU ni iwarete-mo... suddenly/without-notice even-tho-are-saying5Master: [merrily] Ayukawa-kun, why don't you? AYUKAWA-kun tsukutte-agetara? if-make-(for-him)6Master: ______ ______ A cake in need is a cake takaga ke--ki saredo ke--ki indeed...* only cake nevertheless To him, it might be his KARE ni shite-mirya ISSEI-ICHIDAI greatest, once-in-a-lifetime to-him if-try-to-do once-in-a-lifetime problem. no DAI-MONDAI na no ka mo shiren 's great-problem is (nom) it-may-be---------------------------------------------------p 335 (187)1[Madoka stares at Master...]2[...then turns to look back at Kyousuke.]Madoka: Well, okay... i-- kedo...3Madoka: Then, wait just a sec! ja chotto matte-te! then a-bit be-waiting4[Isolated shot of the ingredients and mixing bowl.]narration: Ayukawa's cake, that she metta ni tsukutte-kurenai hardly ever bakes... rarely not-make-(for-me) ______ AYUKAWA no ke--ki... 's cake ___ But, she's... demo ore ni wa... but by-me (contrast)5[Kyousuke sits, wide-eyed and blushing, cheek in hand, at the counter.]narration: ...making one for me...! tsukutte-kureru n da...! is-making (explan)Kyousuke heartbeat FX: ____ ____ ____ ____ doki doki doki doki6[Outside, a view from behind as Hikaru approaches ABCB, both hands clenched into fists.]---------------------------------------------------p 336 (188)1[Tight shot of the cake, a cup of coffee, forks, napkin and plate.]Madoka: [off] Here you go! doozo!2[She lifts up a piece on a fork.]narration: ______ Ayukawa's cake... AYUKAWA no ke--ki... Eating this means... kore o TAberu to yu-- koto wa... this-(one) (O) eat that-meansMadoka: ____ Say, "ahh." a--n3Kyousuke: ____ Ahh. a--n4[Hikaru enters and takes in the scene with surprise. Madoka is hand-feeding Kyousuke, and has the fork held to his mouth. She has her back to the door, and is blocking Kyousuke's view of Hikaru.]door FX: _____ karan---------------------------------------------------p 337 (189)1[Kyousuke chews.]2Kyousuke: [happily] Delicious! oishii!Madoka: Really? soo?3[Hikaru facial portrait--surprise.]4[Kyousuke lowers his gaze.]Kyousuke FX: _____ gokun5[Hikaru's expression darkens.]Hikaru FX: ___ da_6Hikaru: SEMPAI!! sempai!![Madoka and Kyousuke turn to look in surprise.]---------------------------------------------------p 338 (190)1Hikaru: [wide grin] That's good! sore i-- n desu that-(one) okay (explan) You finally understood my atashi no KIMOchi yatto wakatte-kureta feelings, didn't you!! my-feelings at-last understood n desu ne!! (explan) (rhet)[She takes him by the wrists. He has a contorted look on his face.]Hikaru FX: shikka2Kyousuke: EH? e3Hikaru: I was convinced that you atashi tekkiri SEMPAI ga didn't like Madoka-san. I <*> (S) madoka-san no koto o kiratte-ru no about-Madoka (O) disliking ka to OMOikonjatte (ka to OMOikonde-shimatte) being-under-the-impression-that/ being-convinced-that-(finality/regret) <*tekkiri...to OMOu> = feel-quite-certain>4Hikaru: [happily] Madoka-san means more to atashi ni totte madoka-san wa me than a big sister!! to-me (T) one--san IJOU no HITO!! big-sister person-more-than And so I wanted you to get da kara ko-- yu-- FUU ni along well with her like and-so in-this-way this!! madoka-san to SEMPAI ni mo with-Madoka by-Sempai too nakayoku shite-moraitakatta n desu!! wanted-to-have-good-relationship (explan)5[Kyousuke portrait--wide-eyed nervousness.]narration: Which means... ......to yu-- koto wa6[He looks over at Madoka, who looks back in puzzlement.]Madoka: ?! ?!---------------------------------------------------p 339 (191)1[He looks down at a slice of cake which he holds.]2Kyousuke: O-ohh!! na naan daa!!narration: It wasn't that she saw us ano TOKI MIrareta wake ja nakatta then!! that-time was-seen reason was-not n da!! (explan)3Madoka FX: ______ kyoton4narration: That Hikaru-chan is getting hikaru-chan no koto SAIKIN mighty suspicious these about-Hikaru of-late days... utaguri -BUKAku tte suspicious deeply (quote) How terrible to think ya da naa to OMOttari shite... that... is-unpleasant (rhet) thinking-that-(or) _____ __ I'm sorry, Hikaru-chan! gomen ne hikaru-chan!5[The three sit at the counter, Kyousuke in the middle. He and Madoka watch Hikaru eating a cake in ecstasy.]Hikaru: ______ Sure enough, Madoka-san's yappari madoka-san no ke--ki oishi--! cake is delicious! sure-enough 's cake tastynarration: The one who's the pits... SAITEI na no wa.......... lowest is (nom) (T) ___ Is me! kono ore desu! this me am----------------------------------At bottom: [wideban only] ______ ______ Kimagure Orange Road 5 (End) kimagure orenji - ro--do 5 (KAN)---------------------------------------------------