Kimagure Orange Road"A Shake in the Camp!"Volume 9, Story 2WB Volume 5, Story 9Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose                                 Craig Nishida                                 Thomas Wyatt                                 Jerry Lee                                 Jun WatataniLast revision : 08-14-95Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.eduNOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few      extras to those of you not having them.      Example: The subtitles on page 178 (30) are only in the WBs!---------------------------------------------------p 177 (29)1narration:  August, and summer finally      8-GATSU  iyoiyo  enters the stage!               August   finally/at-last                                  NATSU  HOMBAN!                                  summer acting-before-the-audience/camera  Therefore, I, Kasuga            to yu-- wake de  yatte-kimashita  Kyousuke, have come here...!    for-that-reason  came-to-do/perform/act                                  KASUGA KYOUSUKE!                                  ____  The chirping of cicadas, the    semi   no NAkiGOE  twittering of small birds...    cicada 's a-call/song/twitter/chirp                                  KOTORI     no saezuri...                                  small-bird 's twittering  That's right!  Here...          so-- desu!  koko wa...2[At the edge of a forest stands a posted trail map.]cicada FX:                        ______ ______ ______  <jiiwa jiiwa jiiwa>             ji--wa ji--wa ji--waTitle:                            ______     ______  A Shake in the Camp!            kyampu de  sheiku!                                  in-camp    shake---------------------------------------------------p 178-179 (30-31)--TITLE PAGES[Two-page title art.  On the right side, splashed over the mountain vista, stands Madoka and Hikaru, back-to-back, in shirts, shorts and headbands. They smile at us.  On the left hand page, Kyousuke looks a bit beat as he labors under a heavy backpack.]MAIN TITLE (at top)               ______    ______  A Shake in the Camp!            kyampu de sheiku!SUB-TITLE (at right side)                                    ______  When Summer Girls Glitter       NATSU - SHOUJO  sonna ni   ku--ru ni  So Cool, You Want to Have       summer-girls    so-(much)  coolly  Naughty Dreams...                                  kirameku to   ikenai                                  when-glitter  bad/naughty                                  YUME o mitaku naru...                                  become-wanting-to-have-a-dreamKyousuke:  Hey-y-y.  Wait for me-e-e...    o~~~~i  matte-kure yo~~~~---------------------------------------------------p 180 (32)1[Full-page panel.  Their pov of a forest trail spreading out before them.]---------------------------------------------------p 181 (33)1[Hikaru and Madoka lead the way.  Slightly behind them is Kyousuke.  Yuusaku brings up the rear.]narration:                                                  ______  I'm here camping with           hikaru-chan-tachi to      kyampu ni kita  Hikaru-chan and the others!     with-Hikaru-(and-assoc.)  came-to-camp                                  n desu!                                  (explan)2[He smiles, framed by Hikaru and Madoka, who walk ahead of him.]narration:                        _____  Surrounded by two pretty        kawaiKO-chan futari ni  kakomarete  girls--this is exactly what     by-2-cute-girls         being-surrounded  it means to be doubly  blessed!                        RYOUTE ni HANA    to wa     masa ni                                  be-doubly-blessed (define)  surely/exactly                                  kono koto!                                  this-thing<Translation note:  Kyousuke again uses the idiom <ryoute ni hana> = "be-doubly-blessed"/"between-2-beauties" which literally translates to "holding flowers in both hands.">3[He looks back over his shoulder, in irritation...]Kyousuke: (I wish that was the case,       (to i--tai         tokoro  da  kedo...  but...                           want-to-say-that  case    is  but  If only HE wasn't here...)      koitsu    sae       inakya...)                                  this-guy  only/but  if-wasn't-here4[...at Yuusaku, who glares back.]Kyousuke: (I wonder where he caught        (doko de   kikitsukete-kita  no  wind of this?  Jeez!)            at-where  came-to-hear      (nom)                                  yara      mattaku!)                                  I-wonder  jeez/sheesh5Kyousuke: (But...  Hikaru-chan's pack      (shikashi...  hikaru-chan no NIMOTSU  is awfully heavy...              but                      's baggage/load                                  yake ni              omoi  na--                                  awfully/excessively  heavy  What the heck is in here?)      ittai nani         haitte      n darou)                                  what-in-the-world  containing  (poss-explan)6[He sits on a tree stump, wiping his brow.]Kyousuke:  But...  Do we still have        shikashi...  mada   ARUku no?  more to walk ?                  but          still  walkingHikaru: [to Madoka]  Come to think of it, a lot      so-- ieba            sakki  of people got off the bus       come-to-think-of-it  a-little-while-ago  with us back then--where        ____  have they gone?                 basu TEI de      ISSHO ni orita                                  on-electric-bus  got-off-together                                  takusan no HITO-tachi  doko ni                                  many-people            to-where                                  itchatta         n desho--     ne                                  went-(finality)  (poss-explan)---------------------------------------------------p 182 (34)1[She smiles at Kyousuke.]Hikaru:                                                          _____  Anyway, it's just a little      tonikaku     mo-- chotto   yo  faito!  bit more.  Fight!               in-any-case  a-little-more     fightKyousuke:  O-kay-y-y.                      he~~i2[Kyousuke exerts much effort in rising to his feet.]Kyousuke:  <urrrgggh>                      u~~nnarration:  But...  This is heavy!          shikashi...  OMOi!3[View of his rear end.  It's still on the tree stump.]4Kyousuke:  <grrrrrr!>                      gu!5[Unknown to him, a branch tears a hole in the bottom of his backpack.]backpack FX:                      ____  <rip>                           biri6Kyousuke: (Huh?  Maybe it's my             (are?  KI no se-- ka  imagination, but did                   is-it-just-my-imagination  this seem to get lighter  somehow?)                       nan-da-ka  KARUku     natta   mitai)                                  somehow    lightened  became  seems7[The four walk off.  Kyousuke unknowingly leaves behind a trail of items, including a transistor radio, combination can opener and corkscrew, and a Swiss Army knife.]---------------------------------------------------p 183 (35)1[View looking up at a sign.  The skies are bright overhead.]Hikaru: [off]  We're here!!                    too--chaku!!                                  arrival/reachedsign:                                                            ______  Horned Owl Highlands            mimizuku    KOUGEN             kyampu -JOU  Campground                      horned-owl  tableland/plateau  campground2Madoka: [looking back]  Aside from us, there's no       atashi-tachi no hoka wa   DARE-mo  one here...                     besides-us           (T)  nobody                                  kite-nai         no ne--                                  <not>-have-come     (rhet)3[Another view of the radio, left behind on the trail.]4radio:  The typhoon is approaching      SANGAKU CHITAI ni   TAIFUU  ga   CHIKAzuki  the mountain region.            to-mountain-region  typhoon (S)  approach  Sometime tonight, the           KON'YA HAN kara  typhoon, accompanied by         beginning-from-middle-of-tonight  thunderstorms, will strike  with violent force.             KAMINARI           o   tomonau                                  thunder/lightning (O)  to-be-accompanied-by                                  BOUFUU U      ga   fukiareru deshou                                  typhoon/storm (S)  poss-blow-violently/rage  Mountain climbers are           TOZAN-SHA         no HOU wa   kuregure-mo  strongly cau...                 mountain-climbers 's way (T)  repeatedly                                  CHUU...                                  <chuui?> = caution5Kyousuke:  But...  It's been bothering     shikashi...  sakki kara  me for some time now...         but          for-some-time                                  KI ni natte-ru           n da      kedo...                                  be-weighing-on-the-mind  (explan)  but  Whether it's the mountains      kono HEN      no YAMA      to ii  around here, or that river      this-vicinity 's mountain  whether...or  and bridge we crossed back  then...                         sakki               TOUtta                                  a-little-while-ago  passed-over                                  KAWA         ya  HASHI   to ii...                                  river/stream and bridge  whether...or6Kyousuke:  There's something familiar      nani-ka    MIoboe    aru  about this place...             something  familiar  there-is                                  n da      yo na--                                  (explan)[All four look around at the trees that surround the clearing.]Yuusaku:  Hmm...                          hate...---------------------------------------------------p 184 (36)[This entire page is bordered in black, denoting the flashback.]1[A view of the Kasuga apartment building.]narration:  Speaking of old, familiar       natsukashi--     to ieba      kono aida  things, for the first time      dear/longed-for  speaking-of  the-other-day  in a long while, a letter  arrived the other day from      inaka       no oba--chan kara  our obaachan <grandmother>      countryside 's           from  in the country*.                                  hisashiburi ni      TEGAMI ga   todoita  kke                                  after-a-long-while  letter (S)  arrived<*Commentary (JW):  The term <inaka> has a more specific meaning than merely "countryside".  There is a secondary meaning of one's hometown. In this case, not Kyousuke's hometown--he doesn't really have one--but his *mother's* hometown...>cicada FX: [off]                  ______  ______  <jiii jiii>                     ji~~~~  ji~~~~                                  ______ __________ ______ __________  <o-o-shi tsukutsuku o-o-shi     o--shi tsukutsuku o--shi tsukutsuku  tsukutsuku>                                  <actually, the sounds of two different                                   types of cicadas...>2[The twins look at a postcard held in Kurumi's hands.]Kurumi:  Wow, listen to this...          he--  nani nani  It's become hot, but are        ATSUku natta  kedo  GENKI    kai?  you well?                       became-hot    but   spirits  (?)  Over here...                    kotchi wa......Manami and Kurumi:  <kya kya kya>                   kya kya kya<That is, they're shrieking with laughter...>3Kyousuke:  What a pain...                  urusai na--Manami and Kurumi: [off]          ____ ____  <kya! kya!>                     kya_ kya_4Kyousuke:  As it is now, I can't           kore ja        ochitsuite  yatte-rarenai  settle down and do it.          with-this/now  calmly      can't-be-doing                                  ______  I thought I would finish        kyampu no MAE ni       SHUKUDAI  my homework before heading      at-(time)-before-camp  homework  off for camp...                                  katazukete-shimao--  to OMOtta     no ni...                                  shall-finish-        thought-that  even-tho                                  (finality/regret)5[A view of his homework, piled on his desk.]Kyousuke: [off]  If I stay at home for the       NATSU YASUmi wa   IE ni    ireba  summer break, being around      summer-break (T)  at-home  if-stay  my sisters will be a real  pain.                           IMOUTO-tachi to issho de  urusaku    tte                                  together-with-sisters     bothersome  In that case, the only          ko-- nattara         hitori ni   nareru  choice I have is to create      if-become-like-this  by-oneself  can-become  opportunities where I can       ______  be alone and do well...         chansu  o   tsukutte      umaku yaru                                  chance (O)  create-(and)  do-a-good-job-of                                  shika nai  na...                                  only-have6Kyousuke: (When I'm alone, I'll have       (hitori ni   nattara      BENKYOU suru  a chance to study.)              by-oneself  when-become  study                                  ______                                  chansu  da)                                  chance  isKyousuke FX:                      __________  <mutter>                        butsubutsu7[The twins smile and lean toward Kyousuke, who remains lost in his thoughts.]Manami and Kurumi:  Wahhh, oniichan.                wa-- oni--chan  She says, come and have         KANOJO     demo  tsurete  fun, just you and your          girlfriend even  being-accompanied-by  girlfriend.                                  futari kkiri de     ASObi ni koi  tte  sa--                                  with-just-2-people  come-to-play  (quote)Kyousuke FX:                      __________  <mutter>                        butsubutsuKyousuke:                         ______  A chance...                     chansu wa...8Kyousuke:  When I'm alone with my          KANOJO to        futari kkiri ni nattara  girlfriend, I'll have a         with-girlfriend  just-2-people   when-become  chance...                       ______                                  chansu  da...                                  chance  isKyousuke FX:                      __________  <mutter>                        butsubutsu9Kyousuke:  Huh?                            are?---------------------------------------------------p 185 (37)1[Back at the camp, Hikaru throws her arms up in joy.]Hikaru:                                              ______  Now, let's set about            saa--te   sassoku  kyampu no JUMBI ni  preparing camp right away!      now/well  at-once  to-camp's-preparation                                  torikakarimasho--!                                  shall-set-about2[Kyousuke and Madoka stand and watch as Hikaru unpacks her stuff.]Hikaru:                           ______  Flour to make the cake,         ke--ki tsukuru  panKO        to  a bowl, and the essence...      cake   prepare  bread-flour  and                                  _____      _______                                  bouru to   essensu...                                  bowl  and  essence  Here's a heater, for when       kore       ga   YORU   hiekonda    TOKI  it gets cold at night...        this-(one) (S)  night  got-colder  time                                              ________                                  no tame no  suto--bu      de...                                  because-of  stove/heater  being                                                            _____  Here's my pet stuffed           kore       ga   atashi no petto  animal, Kumagorou-kun...        this-(one) (S)  my-pet                                                  __________                                  nuigurumi    no kumagoro--kun...                                  stuffed-doll 's <name>3[Madoka watches wide-eyed; Yuusaku and Kyousuke sweat and force smiles.]Kyousuke: (No wonder it was heavy.         (OMOi   hazu        da   korya...)  Jeez...)                         heavy  likelihood  is4Hikaru: [pleasantly]                          _____  Sempai, please put up the       SEMPAI wa   tento TSUKUri o  tents.                                 (T)  put-up-tent  (O)                                  o-NEGAi  shimasu                                  please   do  Madoka-san and I will           madoka-san wa   atashi to  gohan no YOUI!  prepare dinner!                            (T)  with-me    meal  's prep'n5Hikaru: [angrily]  Yuusaku!!  Go gather            YUUSAKU!!  anta wa   maki      demo  firewood or something!                     you  (T)  firewood  or-something                                  atsumete-kite!                                  go-gather[Yuusaku flinches.]6[A view of a covered, but open-air cookhouse.  The skies begin to darken.]sign:  Community Cookhouse             KYOUDOU           SUIJIBA                                  community/common  field-kitchen/cookhousesmall sign:  ...okhouse                      ...JIBA  Always <something>!             itsu-mo  kinori ni!                                  always   interest/inclination---------------------------------------------------p 186 (38)1[While taking out cooking utensils, the two girls look up at the sky.]Madoka:  Somehow...                      nan-da-ka...  The skies are starting to       SORA MOYOU                      ga  look threatening.               the-weather/the-look-of-the-sky (S)                                  ayashiku natte-kita       wa ne                                  began-turning-threateningHikaru:  Oh no...                        ya da...  It was nice till a little       sakki made                i-- TENKI  while ago...                    up-to-a-little-while-ago  nice-weather                                  datta  no ni...                                  was    even-though2[Hikaru extends her palm out to feel the falling rain.]raindrops FX:                     ___ ___  <plop! plop!>                   po_ po_3Hikaru: [running off]                     _____  I brought a radio so we         atashi  rajio  mottekita  kara  can try to pick up a            I       radio  brought    that's-why  weather report or something!                                  TENKI YOHOU      demo          ki--te-mimasu!                                  weather-forecast or-something  try-and-hear4[Sheltered in the tent, Kyousuke kneels and smiles up at the pouring rain.]Kyousuke:  Oh...  It's like this, is       maa...  konna mon           darou  it.                                     this-kind-of-thing  poss-be5[He looks surprised to see Hikaru enter.]Hikaru:  Sempai!                         SEMPAI!6Hikaru: [looking around]  Huh?  How strange...            are okashi-- naa7Hikaru:                                      _____  Where did I pack the radio?     atashi...  rajio  doko   Irechatta  kke?                                  I          radio  where  packed-    (?)                                                           (finality)---------------------------------------------------p 187 (39)1[He reaches for a pack--in the process, getting close to Hikaru.]Kyousuke:  Let me look.                    dore dore2[She looks at him in thought.]3[She edges closer and gives him a small smile.  He returns a wide-eyed look.]Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            ____  <thump>                         dokiHikaru FX:                        ___  <swish!>                        su_4Hikaru:  It's just the two of us,        futari   kkiri ne  SEMPAI...  Sempai...                       2-people only5[Kyousuke turns his face away from her.  She stares off in front of her.]6[And when he turns to look again, his face wears a grin.]Kyousuke FX:                      _____  <change in personality!>        giro_<just guessing on this FX>7[With a diabolical look, he extends his palms out towards the unsuspecting Hikaru, and...]Kyousuke FX:                      ___  <leap!>                         da_8[Hikaru, looking into a backpack, leans forward, and Kyousuke pitches over her head.]Kyousuke FX:                            _____  <lightly>  <THUD!>              hyoi  dosa_Hikaru:                                 _____  _____  Now, radio, radio...            sate  rajio  rajio---------------------------------------------------p 188 (40)1[Outside, Madoka runs to the tent to find it collapsed on the two.]tent noises FX:                   ________ ______  <rustle rustle> <clonk          gasagasa gongon  clonk>2[The two surface from the tent wreckage, gasping for breath.]Kyousuke and Hikaru:  Pwah!                           puha_!3[The other two aren't amused.]Madoka and Yuusaku FX:            _____  <sullen silence!>               musu_4Kyousuke: [noticing the audience]  O-oh?!                          a ara_?narration:                        _ ___  Wh-what...  Was I trying        o ore...  IMA  nani  yaro-- to shita  n da?  to do just now?                   I       now  what  tried-to-do     (explan)5[Kyousuke smiles and looks relaxed.]Kyousuke:  Well anyway, all that's         sa--te    tonikaku  ato      wa  left is to open the cans        well/now  anyway    the-rest (T)  and cook dinner...                                _______                                  gohan o  taite    kanzume      akete...                                  meal (O) cooking  canned-food  opening6Hikaru: [looking in a backpack]  Huh?  It's not here.            are?  nai wa                                                                _____  But I thought I packed the      kanKIri     tashika      kono kaban ni  can opener in this bag.         can-opener  as-I-recall  in-this-bag                                  Ireta   hazu       na  no ni                                  packed  likelihood     even-though                                                       _____  Come to think of it, the        so-- ieba            rajio ya  raita-- mo...  radio and lighter, too...       come-to-think-of-it  radio and lighter too7[View through the forest.]Hikaru: [off]  Ahhh!  There's a hole!          a----_  ANA  ga   aite-ru                                       !  hole (S)  is-openingKyousuke: [off]  Ehhhh!?!                        e----_?!---------------------------------------------------p 189 (41)1[A view of Kyousuke's backpack and the huge hole at the bottom.]2[He visualizes...]Kyousuke: [flashback] (This seems lighter somehow.)    (nan-da-ka  KARUku     natta   mitai)                                   somehow    lightened  became  seemsKyousuke:  Th-then, that's when!           ji ja ano TOKI!3[He bows his head.]Kyousuke:                                   ___  S-sorry.  It's my fault.        go gomen  ore no  SEKININ         da                                     sorry  my      responsibility  isMadoka: [looking stern]  ..........                      ..........4Yuusaku:                                               _______       _____  To rip a hole in the            ichiban TAISETSU na  raita-- to ka rajio  backpack that carried all       most    important    lighter and   radio  the most important stuff--  like the lighter, radio and     kanKIri    nanka   ga   haitte-ru  can opener...                   can-opener or-such (S)  is-contained                                  ______                                  ryukku ni    ANA  akeru  nante       yo--                                  in-rucksack  hole open   the-likes-of  What's wrong with you?!         do--ka shite-ru ze!Hikaru:  Never mind that...              sore yori...  What'll we do?                  do-- shimasho5Hikaru: [looking out the tentflap]  As it stands, we won't be       kono mama ja           gohan mo  able to eat dinner...           in-this-situation-(T)  meal  as-well                                  TAberenai  shi...                                  can't-eat  and-besides  And on top of that...           sore ni...    kono TENKI!  This weather!                   moreover      this-weather6[The view outside the two tents.  The skies are pitch-black and the wind is driving the rain nearly horizontally.]wind FX:                          _______  <whoooosh>                      byuuuuu---------------------------------------------------p 190 (42)1Madoka: [rising]  I'll look around this area      atashi  sono hen       sagashite  and go borrow the stuff we      I       this-vicinity  looking-for-(and)  need.                                  HITSUYOU na mono    karite-kuru    yo                                  necessary   things  go-and-borrow2[Madoka exits the tent.]tent flap FX:                     __  <fwip>                          sawind FX:                          ____  <whoosh!>                       bua_3Kyousuke:                                  ___  Oh wait!  I'll go, too!         a matte  ore mo  iku yo!                                    wait   I   too go4[A view of the skies.]wind FX:                          ________  <whoooosh>                      byuuuu--5[Kyousuke follows Madoka, who walks resolutely onward.]narration:  Whether it's because of that    sakki              no hikaru-chan to  incident with Hikaru-chan       a-little-while-ago 's with-Hikaru  a while ago, or my mistake  with the backpack...            no koto  to ii       NIMOTSU -O(CHI)                                  about    whether...  baggage  oversight                                  to shita  koto   to ii...                                     done   thing  or...  She's mad, isn't she.           okotte-ru darou  naa                                  poss-is-angry    (rhet)6Kyousuke:  Ah, where are you going?        a  doko  iku  no     sotchi   wa...  That way is...                     where go   (?)    that-way (T)Madoka:  Of course...                    KImatte-ru desho7[She looks back at him with a glare.]Madoka:                                    ______  The only thing we can do        hoka no  kyampu JOU  made  iku  is go to another campground!    other    campground  to    go                                  shika nai  ja nai!                                  only-have  is-not---------------------------------------------------p 191 (43)1[Further along the path, the two find themselves buffeted by the wind.]wind:                             _________  <whoooosh>                      byuuuu--u2Kyousuke: (We walked a lot, didn't we.     (kekko--     ARUita  naa                                   very/quite  walked  (rhet)                                          ____  Should be another 2 or 3        moo 2~3 kiro      wa   kite-ru   hazu)  kilometers.)                    another-2-to-3-km (T)  is-coming likelihood3Kyousuke:  Hey, let's go back already!     nee  moo      modoro--       yoo!                                       already  shall-go-back  If we go any farther, we'll     kore IJOU    iku to  kono ARASHI ja  lose our way in this storm.     beyond-this  if-go   in-this-storm-(T)                                  MICHI ni  mayotchau            yo                                  on-path   go-astray-(finality)Madoka:  But...  Without a fire we       da kedo...  HI   ga   nakereba  can't keep warm, and we            but      fire (S)  if-not-have  can't eat either!                                  DAN    mo   torenai          shi                                  warmth too  not-able-to-get  and-besides                                  SHOKUJI mo   dekinai          no yo!                                  meal    too  not-be-possible4Kyousuke: [decisively]                  ___  Then I'll go on by myself.      ja    ore  hitori de  iku  kara                                  then  I    by-myself  go   that's-why  Because, Ayukawa, it's too      AYUKAWA wa   ONNA no KO ni wa  dangerous for a girl!!                  (T)  for-a-girl    (contrast)                                  KIKEN   da  yo!!                                  danger  is[She looks at him in surprise.]5Kyousuke:                          ___                   __________ (And if I'm alone, I can         (ore  hitori  da to    terepo--to mo  teleport...                      I    alone   if-am    teleport   too                                  dekiru  shi...                                  can-do  and-besides  It's just a single jump...)     hito_tobi  na  n da      kedo  na--)                                  one-jump   is  (explan)  but   (rhet)6[They come upon the rope bridge.]Madoka: [off]  Huh?  Ahead...                  n?  ano SAKI...---------------------------------------------------p 192 (44)1Madoka:  Light!  It's a house!!          akari yo!  JINKA                   da  wa!!                                  light      house/human-habitation  is2[She rushes out onto the bridge.]Kyousuke:  Ah!  W-wait!                    a ma mate yo!Kyousuke: [inset]  Ayukawa, it's better if we      AYUKAWA wa   koko de  matte-ta     ho-- ga!!  wait here!!                             (T)  at-here  was-waiting  betterMadoka: [inset]  It's fine!  It's only this!     HEIKI yo    kono kurai!                                  composed    this-extent3Madoka:  AH!                             awind FX:                          ____  <whoosh!>                       byu_4[And she's carried over the side of the bridge.]Madoka:  KYAA!                           kyaa!---------------------------------------------------p 193 (45)1Kyousuke:  AYUKAWA!                        AYUKAWA!2[He leaps after her, head-first.]narration:  I'm usually such an             YUUJUUFUDAN    no    kono ore ga  indecisive guy, but I           indecisiveness (nom) this I   (S)  didn't hesitate at all...                                  nan no      tamerai mo naku...                                  not-at-all  not-be-hesitating/faltering3[Madoka bobs to the surface of a raging torrent, unconscious.  Kyousuke hits the surface with a splash.]narration:  ...to go diving in after        AYUKAWA no ato    o   otte  Ayukawa!                                's trail (O)  pursue-(and)                                  TObikonde-ita!                                  was-leapingKyousuke FX:                      ________  <KER-SPLAAASH>                  do_bo--n---------------------------------------------------p 194 (46)1[Tight shot of Kyousuke lying at the side of the stream.]Kyousuke:  <puff puff>                     haa haa2[View pulls back to show Madoka lying beside him.  She's still unconscious.]narration:  I-it looks like we're           do do--yara       TASUkatta mitai da na...  saved...                           it-looks-as-if saved     seems3[He carries her on his back...]narration:  But Ayukawa's still             da kedo  AYUKAWA wa   KI o USHINAtta  unconscious...                     but           (T)  fainted                                  mama da...                                  as-it-is4[...to a cabin he happens upon.]narration:  Good!  For now, that            yoshi!  toriaezu            ano SHOUOKU  da!  cabin!                                  for-the-time-being  that-cabin   is---------------------------------------------------p 195 (47)1[Inside, Madoka lies on the floor, in a pool of water that drips off her wet clothes.]2[Tight view of her face.  Water drips onto her cheek.]drops FX:                         ___ ___  <plop! plop!>                   po_ po_3[View pans back to show the water dripping off the head of Kyousuke, who's leaning over her.]narration:  That's good...                  yokatta...                                                  ____  She doesn't appear to be        do--yara        kega  wa   nai  injured.                        it-looks-as-if  wound (T)  not-there                                  yo-- da                                  appears4[He shivers...]narration:  But...  How cold...             shikashi...  samui  naa...                                  but          cold   (rhet)5[...and removes his shirt.]narration:  I didn't think it could         masaka      MANATSU ni    samuku tte  get this numbingly cold         impossible  in-midsummer  cold   (T)  in the middle of summer!                                  kogoe                 -sou ni                                  become-numb-with-cold  looks-like                                  naru   to wa OMOwanakatta!                                  become wasn't-thinking-that---------------------------------------------------p 196 (48)1[He looks down.]2[His pov of the unconscious beauty.]3narration:  Speaking of being soaked        bishonure           to ieba...  to the skin...                  soaked-to-the-skin  speaking-of  Even Ayukawa...                 AYUKAWA datte...4[Kyousuke facial portrait--he blushes.]crows-in-background FX:  <kaa>                           kaa5[He reaches out a hand towards her.]Kyousuke:  I won't look!                   MInai        kara        ne!                                  not-look-at  that's-whyKyousuke hand FX:  <in fear>                       osoru osoru6[A view up at the rafters.]narration:  I never thought I'd be          masaka      AYUKAWA to    futari kkiri  alone with Ayukawa like         impossible  with-Ayukawa  just-2-people  this...                                  de       konna koto ni narou                                  because  shall-turn-into-this-kind-of-case                                  to wa...                                  however7[Kyousuke's eyes flash, and he reaches both hands out.]Kyousuke: (Just the two of us...!)         (futari kkiri...!)---------------------------------------------------p 197 (49)1[His face again takes on a slightly sinister look.]Kyousuke FX:                      _____  _____  <dazzle!>  <grin!>              gira_  niya_2[Tight shot of his hand.]3[He clasps her by the sweater collar and...]sweater FX:                       ___  <rip!>                          bi_---------------------------------------------------