Kimagure Orange Road"Don't Fade, Darling!"Volume 8, Story 7WB Volume 5, Story 5Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Thomas Wyatt Jerry LeeLast revision : 07-17-95Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.eduNOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 93 (139) are only in the WBs!---------------------------------------------------p 93 (139)--TITLE PAGE[A head-and-shoulders shot of a very sun-bronzed and buff Hikaru, apparently topless off-panel, with her bikini top tan-lines showing. She looks off to her left, with sunny, partly cloudy skies behind her.]MAIN TITLE (at top) _o_ _______ Don't Fade, Darling! DA(SURU) chinai de da--rin! = not-fall/decline = descend-to/degenerate/lapse-intoSUB-TITLE (at bottom) Sunsets Seem to Make Me yaketa SUHADA no Dizzy with the Temptation sunburnt/was-jealous bare-skin 's of Suntanned Flesh! YUUWAKU ni temptation/seduction (IO) ________ MEmai ga shi -sou na sansetto! be-(feel)-dizzy/ look-as-if sunset giddy/one's-head-swims---------------------------------------------------p 94 (140)1[Hikaru smiles back at us in this portrait of her.]narration: I'm Hiyama Hikaru, 13 years atashi HIYAMA hikaru 13 -SAI of age--a Scorpio and a I 13-years-old student in junior high. sasori-ZA CHUUGAKUSEI o yatte-masu Scorpio jr-high-student (O) am-doing2[She hangs onto the arm of Kyousuke.]narration: _______ Right now I'm so happy! IMA tottemo happi--! now utterly happy3narration: Because always, at my datte watashi no soba ni wa itsu-mo... side... because at-my-side (T) always4[View pans back to show them walking in the park.]narration: ______ ...is someone this konna ni suteki na HITO ga wonderful!! so-much wonderful-person (S) ite-kureru n da mon!! being-there-(favor-to-me) (is-the-reason)5narration: ______ What's so wonderful about doko ga suteki na no ka tte? him, you ask? what-part (S) wonderful (nom) (?) (quote)---------------------------------------------------p 95 (141)1[She visualizes Kyousuke with a basketball. At the bottom of the panel, Kyousuke helps out Hikaru with her homework.]narration: _________ He's smart and an all-around ATAMA ga yoku tte supo--tsu BANNOU! athlete! head (S) skillful sports all-around He's always tutoring me. itsu-mo BENKYOU o oshiete-kuremasu always study (O) explain-to-meKyousuke: So, this is... de koko ga...2[With gigantic waves crashing behind and around him, Kyousuke stands firm and defiant. A veritable Rock of Gibraltar...]narration: Regardless of what happens, nani ga okorou to DOUjinai he's unconcerned--displaying what (S) when-happens not-be-perturbed a calm, steady presence! ochitsuite shikkari shita SEIKAKU! calmly/coolly steady/firm/ character/ reliable personalitygiant wave FX: do_pa~~n3[A heroic portrait of Kyousuke, complete with sparkling teeth. The corner of this panel has peeled up to reveal Matsumoto Izumi (as a kappa) drawing on a sheet of paper. With him in the tiny room are two of his assistant artists.]narration: _______ ______ With looks in the style of rukkusu wa KIKKAWA ko--ji that great man, Kikkawa "looks" (T) Kouji!! bari no i-- OTOKO!! in-the-style-of fine-manKyousuke teeth FX: _____ kira_Matsumoto Izumi: [as kappa artist] ______ Who? Kikkawa Kouji? dare? KIKKAWA ko--ji tte who (quote)an assistant: Got me... ......saa4[Blushing, Hikaru studies Kyousuke. He notices the attention.]narration: And above all, so very soshite nani yori tottemo yasashi-- sweet. and/then above-all utterly kind/gentle n desu (explan)Kyousuke FX: ____ po~~5Kyousuke: [smiling] Eh? What? e? naniHikaru: ! !crows-in-background FX: kaa_6Hikaru: No-o-o. It's nothing! i--e nan demo arimasen!narration: Anyway, I love Sempai the tonikaku atashi wa sempai ga most! anyway I (T) (S) ____ ichiban suki! number-1 liking---------------------------------------------------p 96 (142)1[Wide view of Hikaru's classroom during study hall. The students are doing anything but study.]2[Hikaru sits at her desk, reading a manga magazine.]Hikaru: ___ pu_3Hikaru FX: _____ pera_4Hikaru: What's this? It's this nani nani KONSHUU no HOSHI URANAi week's horoscope. this-week 's horoscopeposter: anata ki YAMA... you ?? SEISHUN o ya... springtime-(of-life) (O)shoujo manga title: _______ garet ...garetto5[Hikaru portrait--she reads.]6horoscope: [banner] This week--SCORPIO KONSHUU no sasori-ZA this-week 's Scorpio Birthdate 10/24 to 11/22 10/24 ~ 11/22 Umarehoroscope: [text] The fate of your romance is REN'AI UN ga TAIHEN yo! in serious trouble! love destiny/fate/luck (S) serious/ troublesome This week, with just a KONSHUU wa chotto shita hitoKOTO de trivial word, you'll no this-week (T) slight/trivial/ by-a-single- longer be able to trust trifling word your boyfriend. ____ kare no koto SHINRAI about-boyfriend trust-(in)/rely-(on) dekinaku nari sou. become-unable-to looks-as-if If this keeps up, you two kono mama de wa futari wa will break up!! if-continue-like-this 2-people (T) WAKAreru koto ni natchau wa!! become-something-divided/separated- (finality/regret)7horoscope: [text] ____ You need to do something to kare no MIRYOKU o SAIKAKUNIN suru reaffirm the charm you see boyfriend 's charm (O) reaffirm in him! koto ga HITSUYOU yo! case (S) need/want ____ Invite him to your home anata kara kare o JITAKU ni and please him with your from-you boyfriend (O) to-one's-home specialty dish!! SHOUTAI shite TOKUI RYOURI de inviting/asking in-one's-specialty-dish- of-food motenashichaou!! shall-entertain/treat-(finality)---------------------------------------------------p 97 (143)1[Hikaru stares at the magazine, wide-eyed and sweating.]narration: Break up... WAKAreru koto ni...Hikaru: (C-could it be...?!) (ma masaka...?!)2[Hikaru smiles to herself. Behind her, three girls start a conversation.]Hikaru: (This sort of thing wouldn't (atashi to SEMPAI ni kagitte strike Sempai and me, of all Sempai-and-me (IO) of-all-(people) people!!) ataru hazu nai wa yo konna mono!!) shouldn't-hit this-kind-of-thingblonde girl: _______ I'm discouraged... atashi gakkari shichatta na-- I am-discouraged/lost-heart- (finality/regret)3[Hikaru's attention has been caught.]blonde girl: ____ ______ My boyfriend never thinks kare ttara de--to no TOKI much of my ideas when we boyfriend (I-tell-you) date 's time date. atashi no IKEN zenzen my-opinion/idea/suggestion totally SONCHOU shite-kurenai no not-respect-(me)/think-highly-of-(me) Last time, we had a fight konaida mo EIGA nani miru ka de over what movie to see, and too because-of-seeing-some- I got really angry! the-other-day movie _____ kenka shite ATAMA ni kichatta! fighting got-on-one's-nerves-(finality)brunette girl: ___ ____ Non! Maybe you're idealizing non ttara kare o your boyfriend too much. non (I-tell-you) boyfriend (O) (ie, without?/not?/"no"?/a-name?) RISOU -SHI shi -sugita n ja nai an-ideal looked-upon/ to-excess (explan) regarded-as4brunette girl: Really. Wonderful guys like maa GENJITSU ni wa that just don't exist in real indeed in-reality (contrast) life. ______ sonna suteki na OTOKO no KO that-kind-of-wonderful guy nante so-- inai no yo the-likes-of like-that not-existblonde and redhead girls: Isn't that the truth...! honto ne~~~~_5[Hikaru glares.]Hikaru FX: gu_ = simmer/boil6Hikaru: [sticking out her tongue] (Oh, but they do exist!) (tokoro-ga dokkoi iru n da mon!) but ah/oh there-is (is-the-reason) be----_7Kurumi: [rushing up to Hikaru] ___________ Wow! That's this week's waa! KONSHUU no ma--garetto da!! "Margaret!!" this-week's Margaret is Lemme see, lemme see! misete misete!Kurumi FX: ta_ ta_ ta_narration: I'm in the same class as SEMPAI no IMOUTO kurumi-chan to wa Sempai's sister, Kurumi-chan. 's younger-sister (define) ______ ONAji kurasu desu same-class isposter 1: Notice from the Student SEITO KAI yori o-SHIrase Assembly student/pupil assembly from notice Originator Student Assembly HONKE SEITO KAI #vs# vs. originator/ student assembly Founder Student Assembly main-family GANSO SEITO KAI originator/ student assembly founderposter 2: EI/HA/UTSU reflecting/shine/match KEN/TO grind/scour/hone/polish SHINNYUU FU/MAKERU new/incoming/entering negative/ be-defeated BOSHUU!! recruiting/invitation/solicitation ..."hi SUI/DERU/DASU no MONO" emerge/go-out 's personposter 3: anata no JINSEI SOU/AI your human-life aspect/together/ mutually ?? O/NI <2-kanji> SHITSU in room Until 6:00 PM #PM# 6:00 MADE until---------------------------------------------------p 98 (144)1[Kurumi looks up from the open magazine to give Hikaru a disbelieving look. Hikaru does a pratfall.]Kurumi: What's this? This week's nani nani KONSHUU no uranai? *uranai* ? ___ Liars definitely have a usotsuki chanto ura aru hidden side! a-liar thoroughly/ reverse have precisely ja nai--_!! is-notHikaru pratfall FX: _____ zuru_ and . is the negation of = "to have". So could mean either "fortunes" or = "not have a hidden side".>2Hikaru: It's *uranai* ! URANAi desho! fortune poss-becrows-in-background FX: kaa_Kurumi: I'm joking!! jo--dan yo!!3Kurumi: Come to think of it, you so-- ieba hikaru-chan and oniichan have the same come-to-think-of-it birthday, don't you! oni--chan to TANJOUBI ONAji with-Oniichan birthday same na no yo ne~~~~~~_!Hikaru: [blushing, hands to cheeks] Oh! ara_Hikaru FX: ___ po_4[Kurumi takes a seat on top of a desk and pulls her knees up to her chest. She seems unconcerned that all of her legs and part of her panties are uncovered.]Kurumi: But I'm always thoroughly demo atashi tsukuzuku mystified... but I thoroughly/carefully FUSHIGI na n da kedo wonder/mystery am (explan) butHikaru: I-I *see*... mi miete-ru yo...5Kurumi: ___ What on earth do you see hikaru-chan ittai ano aho no in that dummy? in-the-world that-dummy's doko ga KI ni Itte-ru wake? what-part (S) are-pleased-with reason6Hikaru: [blushing] "What do I..." doko tte......---------------------------------------------------p 99 (145)1[With finger to pursed lips, Hikaru looks up in thought.]Hikaru: He's smart so he's always ATAMA ga yoku tte helping me with my lessons... head (S) skillful/well itsu-mo BENKYOU mite-kureru shi... always help-me-with-studies considerKurumi: Of course he understands CHUUGAKUSEI no MONDAI kurai problems as easy as junior jr-high-student 's problems extent high stuff. wakatte TOUZEN yo understanding naturally ___ Stupid or not, he is a high aho demo KOUKOUSEI school student. dummy even-tho high-school-student na n da mon is (is-the-reason)2Hikaru: _________ He's an all-around athlete! supo--tsu BANNOU!Kurumi: He's slow of foot, he can't ASHI wa OSOi shi OYOgenai shi... swim, and... slow-of-foot and not-able-to-swim and _chikara_ (Well, after using the Power, (maa NOURYOKU o tsukatte-yatto maybe you could call him if-use-Power ordinary...) FUTSUU tte toko ne...) ordinary (quote) case3Hikaru: [getting irritated] Regardless of what happens, nani ga okoro-- to DOUjinai he's unconcerned--displaying what (S) when-happens not-be-perturbed a calm presence! ochitsuita SEIKAKU! calmly/coolly characterKurumi: He's just being indecisive! YUUJUUFUDAN na dake yo! indecisive just4Hikaru: [shouting] ______ A great guy, in the manner KIKKAWA ko--ji bari no ii OTOKO!! of Kikkawa Kouji!! in-the-style-of fine-manKurumi: [shouting] What part?!! doko ga!!5Hikaru FX: ____ musu6Hikaru: And, above all, he's sweet... soshite nani yori yasashii... and/then above-all kind/gentleKurumi: He's mean. ijiwaru yo ill-natured/cross He's always teasing me. itsu-mo atashi no koto ijimeru mon always about-me torment/tease/bully Hikaru-chan, you don't know hikaru-chan HONTOU no oni--chan the real oniichan. truly SHIranai no yo not-know7[Hikaru crosses her arms and glares at Kurumi, who stares up at the ceiling, oblivious.]Hikaru: u~~mu---------------------------------------------------p 100 (146)1[Kyousuke and Hikaru walk home from school, down the sidewalk towards us.]2Hikaru contemplation FX: ji~~~~3Hikaru: Say, Sempai... nee SEMPAI... A movie I've just got to KONDO zehi mitai see next time is here. next-time by-all-means want-to-see EIGA ga kuru n desu movie (S) come (explan)4Hikaru: _______ It's a wonderful love WAKAi kappuru no suteki na story about a young couple. young-couple 's wonderful ____ __________ rabu - suto--ri-- na n desu love-story is (explan) I was thinking that it's marude atashi to SEMPAI mitai da just like you and me...! just-like me-and-Sempai seems na--_ to omotte...... ! thinking-that5Hikaru: I've thought this from MAE kara miru nara ZETTAI before--that if I'm going from-before watch if absoluteness to see it, I simply must see it with you... SEMPAI to ISSHO ni tte... together-with-Sempai (T)Kyousuke: [brightly] Oh, speaking of movies, a EIGA tte ieba IMA Jackie Chen's amazing one movie speaking-of now is here now! _______ ____ jakki-- - chen no sugoi no ga Jackie-Chen 's amazing one (S) kite-ru n da! is-coming (explan)6Kyousuke: If we're going at all, why do--se iku nara sotchi no HOU ni shinai? not see that one? if-go-at-all in-that-way not-do _______ After all, the action... nantatte akushon ga...... after-all action (S)---------------------------------------------------p 101 (147)1[Hikaru freezes in the act of pushing her hair back behind one ear. Her look is pure uncertainty.]2Kurumi: [flashback] Hikaru-chan, you don't know hikaru-chan HONTOU no oni--chan the real oniichan. truly SHIranai no yo not-know3Hikaru: (The real Sempai...?! (HONTOU no SEMPAI...?!)4[Hikaru closes her eyes, clenches her teeth, and drops her head down.]Hikaru: (For some reason, I feel (nan-da-ka SEMPAI no koto like I might lose confidence somehow about-Sempai in Sempai!) SHINRAI dekinaku natchaisou da wa!) unable-to-trust/ looks-as-if-become- rely-on (finality/regret)5narration: [flashback] __ You need to do something to kashi no MIRYOKU o SAIKAKUNIN suru reaffirm the charm you see boyfriend 's charm (O) reaffirm in him! koto ga HITSUYOU yo! case (S) need/want ____ Invite him to your home anata kara kare o JITAKU ni and please him with your from-you boyfriend (O) to-one's-home specialty dish! SHOUTAI shite TOKUI RYOURI de inviting/asking in-one's-specialty-dish- of-food motenashichaou! shall-entertain/treat-(finality)6[She opens her eyes...]Hikaru: (Th-that's it!!) (so so-- da wa!!)7[...and clasps his hands.]Hikaru: Sempai! Please come to my SEMPAI! ashita no NICHIYOUBI place tomorrow--Sunday! tomorrow 's Sunday atashi no IE ni kite-kudasai! to-my-place come-(please)Kyousuke: Eh?! e?!sign 1: "Water Demon War" SUI MA SENKI water demon record-of-war ______ yo--da <2-kanji>!! ??????sign 2: _______ Nebula Award Books #Books# nevyura -SHOU nebula? award---------------------------------------------------p 102 (148)1Hikaru: There's something I want to gochiso-- shitai mono ga aru n desu!! treat you to!! want-to-treat-(you)/ thing-exists (explan) want-to-entertain-(you)2[With the poise of a runway model, she rotates on toe-point, sending her skirt twirling.]Hikaru FX: ___ da_Hikaru: You HAVE TO come!! ZETTAI ni desu yo_!! unconditionally is3Hikaru: [running off] (I'm not deciding to do (URANAi de subete o KImetari suru this only because of the in-fortune wholly (O) decide horoscope...) wake ja nai kedo...) is-not-the-reason but4Hikaru: [eyes closed] ____ (But if this doesn't work out, (kore de dame dattara I have a bad feeling that with-this no-good if-it-is Sempai and I will be history...) atashi to SEMPAI to wa mou I and (define) already Owari no YOKAN ga...) last/final premonition (S)5[Kyousuke smiles and watches her run off.]Kyousuke: Smething she wants to treat gochiso-- shitai mono? me to? want-to-treat thing What could that be? nan daro?---------------------------------------------------p 103 (149)1[Exterior night shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]2[Flat on his back, Kyousuke sleeps with mouth wide open.]Kyousuke FX: gua~~3[View pans back to show his two sisters kneeling nearby. Kyousuke is lying on the living room floor.]Kurumi: _____ __ Hey, do you think this guy nee kono HITO kakko ii to omou? is cool? say this-person cool think-thatManami: [forced smile] I think not! omowanai!Kyousuke FX: gua------_4[Kyousuke dreams of the events on the previous page.]Kyousuke FX: __________ munyamunya ________ poriporiHikaru: [flashback] There's something I want to gochiso-- shitai mono ga aru n desu!! treat you to!! want-to-treat-(you)/ thing-exists (explan) want-to-entertain-(you)5[Exterior night view down from the Kasuga apartment to the homes below.]---------------------------------------------------p 104 (150)1[Exterior night shot of the Hiyama residence.]sign: Hiyama HIYAMA2[Hikaru lies back on her bed, dressed in oversized T-shirt.]narration: Now, the problem is what sate MONDAI wa nani o to treat him to... now problem (T) what (O) gochiso-- suru ka da kedo... treat-to (?) is but3[She visualizes Kyousuke.]Kyousuke: [flashback] If we're going at all, why do--se iku nara sotchi no ho-- ni shinai? not see that one? if-go-at-all in-that-way not-do _______ After all, the action... nantatte akushon ga... after-all action (S)narration: I thought I knew Sempai's SEMPAI no KONOmi tte SHItte-ru tastes, but I guess I 's taste/liking (T) be-knowing didn't... yo-- de SHIranakatta shi... looking-like not-known and-besides4[She sits up with a decisive look on her face.]narration: No! This's already settled!! iya! mo-- KImechatta koto na n da!! already settled-(finality) (explan) thing is All I have to do tomorrow ashita wa atashi no ICHIBAN is do my very best to make tomorrow (T) my number-one my number one specialty! TOKUI na mono o one's-specialty/forte thing (O) se--ippai tsukureba with-all-one's-might/ if-able-to-prepare to-the-best-of-one's-abilities ii n da! fine (explan)Hikaru sit-up FX: _____ gaba_5[Exterior shot looking up the front of the Kasuga apartment building. Sunlight sparkles down.]Kyousuke: [off] Then, I'm off. de wa itte-kima--sunarration: And then, Sunday! soshite NICHIYOUBI!6[Kyousuke waves back to Manami, who has stuck her head out the front door.]Manami: Oniichan, what about oni--chan ASA gohan wa? breakfast? morning meal (T)Kyousuke: Oh, it's okay, it's okay. a i-- no i-- no I won't need it today. KYOU wa iranai yo today (T) not-neednarration: Hikaru-chan is treating hikaru-chan ga gochiso-- shite-kureru me to some food. (S) treating-me n da mon is-the-reason I'll really starve myself me ippai onaka sukashite-iku n da! and go there! greatly going-(to-there)-hungry (explan)---------------------------------------------------p 105 (151)1[Passing ABCB, he turns to look...]2[...and decides to go in.]Kyousuke: ________ (Just some coffee should be (ko--hi-- gurai wa i-- darou okay. coffee extent (T) okay poss-be And I still have time...) mada JIKAN mo aru shi...) still time too have and-besidesdoor FX: _____ karan3[His pov of a cup of coffee and a platter of cookies.]4[His face flushes.]Kyousuke FX: giku_5[Madoka sits at the counter next to the cookies, lovely legs crossed, and smiles back at us.]Madoka: I thought I'd offer these KONDO o-MISE de DAso-- in the store next time, next-time in-shop shall-put-out and made some. to omotte tsukutte-mita no thinking-that-(and) tried-to-make Would you like to try SHISHOKU shite-miru? them? try-and-taste/sample6[He sits on the stool beside her, but sweats and stares nervously at the cookies.]Kyousuke: __ _________ C-cookies...?! ku kukki~~~~?!Madoka: It looks as if your stomach do--yara onaka wa hoshigatte-ru wants some... it-looks-as-if insides (T) be-longing-for mitai da kedo... seems but But your face seems to say KAO wa KEIEN shite-ru you want no part of it. face (T) are-keeping-at-a-distance mitai ne seems---------------------------------------------------p 106 (152)1Kyousuke: [forced smile] Oh... It isn't that I don't a... AMAi mono wa kirai ja nai like sweet things... sweet-thing (T) dislike is-not n da kedo... (explan) but _______ But cookies are the only YUIITSU kukki-- dake wa TAberarenai ones I don't eat. only/sole cookies only (T) not-be-eating n da (explan)Madoka: An unbalanced diet's no HENSHOKU wa yokunai zo! good!! unbalanced-diet (T) not-good !!2[With a frightful look, he sweats and scratches at his arms.]Kyousuke: _______ I remember an encounter CHIIsai TOKI kukki-- o between me and my sisters small/little time/occasion cookies (O) over cookies when we were _kyoudai_ small--we had a nasty, meguri KEIMAI KAN de huge struggle... encounter older-brother-and- between younger-sister because omoidasu no mo imawashii recall (nom) too disgusting/detestable so-- zetsu na toriai ga atte... very-big struggle-existing _______ So I've never eaten cookies, da kara kukki-- tte and just seeing them makes and-so cookie (T) me break out in hives... tabeta koto nai shi eaten thing not-have and-besides _________ mita dake de jinmashin ga seen only being hives/rashKyousuke FX: ________ poriporiMadoka: Hmm. What a tragic fu~~~~n HISAN na YOUJI experience you had as a tragic/wretched baby/infant baby... TAIKEN ne...... personal-experience3[Exterior shot of the wall in front of the Hiyama residence.]sign: Hiyama HIYAMA4[In the kitchen, Hikaru is in a frenzy.]Hikaru FX: ________ dotabataHikaru: ______ ______ Let's see! Butter, butter... e--tto! bata-- bata--5[She reaches for the jar of sugar, but grabs the jar of salt instead.]Hikaru: And now, sugar... atto o-sato-- wa tto sugar (T)Hikaru FX: ___ sa_bilingual labels: Salt #Salt# SHIO shio Sugar #Sug...# SA(TOU) sato...6[She spoons out the salt into the mixing bowl.]Hikaru FX: _____ _____ bara_ bara_ = be-thinly-scattered-or- disorganizedHikaru: Hmm, now it's fine!! fuu kore de yoshi!! with-this good!/okay!---------------------------------------------------p 107 (153)1[Hikaru facial portrait--look of determination.]narration: Okay, now I'm done... kore de yoshi... to with-this (quote) All that's left is to wait ato wa SEMPAI o matsu dake for Sempai! remainder (T) (O) wait only da wa! be2[At ABCB...]Kyousuke: [exiting] See ya. ja ne3[On the front steps of ABCB, he stumbles.]Kyousuke foot FX: _____ dote_Kyousuke: Ah! a4Kyousuke: [kneeling on the sidewalk] I-I feel dizzy. me memai ga (I haven't eaten anything (kino-- no YORU kara nani-mo since last night, have I.) since-last-night anything KUtte-nai mon na--) not-be-eating thing5narration: Hikaru-chan is taking the sekkaku hikaru-chan ga trouble to prepare food with-much-trouble (S) for me!! gochiso-- shite-kureru n da mon!! treating-me is-the-reason So endure it, Kyousuke! TAeru n da zo KYOUSUKE! endure/bear (explan) !!Kyousuke: (I'm sure she must be (kitto SOUZOU o ZESsuru preparing quantities of surely be-beyond-imagination food beyond imagination!!) RYOU no gochiso-- o YOUI shite-ru quantity 's treat (O) is-preparing ni chigainai!!) must/am-sureKyousuke stomach FX: guu6[He looks about, then teleports.]Kyousuke FX: __________ ____ kyorokyoro shu_---------------------------------------------------p 108 (154)1doorbell FX: ___ _____ pin po--nHikaru: [smiling] Oh, it's Sempai!! a SEMPAI da!!2[Coming in through the door, he again stumbles.]Kyousuke FX: _____ fura_Hikaru: Sempai! SEMPAI!3Hikaru: Wh-what's the matter? do do-- shita n desu ka Are you all right?! DAIJOUBU desu ka?!Kyousuke: [half-conscious] Hel... ko...4Kyousuke: Hello... konnichi wa......Kyousuke FX: geso~~narration: __________ Teleporting on an empty sukippara de terepo--to shita stomach drained me of all on-an-empty-stomach teleported my energy... _________ mon de enerugi-- o reason on-account-of energy (O) tsukaihatashite-shimatta...... exhausted/consumed-(finality/regret)5[With a fabulous smile she presents a large platter of her treats... Cookies of various types!]Hikaru: Here you go!! Eat! doozo!! meshiagaredramatic FX: do~~~~n---------------------------------------------------p 109 (155)1[Kyousuke recoils in horror.]Kyousuke: ___ ___ ___ ___ pu_ pu_ pu_ pu_2narration: __ _______ C-cookies! ku kukki--! This was the treat she gochiso-- tte kore no koto...?! prepared...?! treat (T) about-this3Hikaru FX: ________ nikonikoKyousuke FX: ______ chira_4narration: S-so many... ko konna ni takusan... so-much much/plenty-of I bet she put all her kitto isshokenmei heart into making it... surely with-all-(her)-strength/heart tsukutta n darou naa made (poss-explan)Kyousuke: (I-I can't very well not (ta TAbenai wake ni wa ikanai yo naa eat it. not-eat can't-very-well After all...) yappari...)5[View pans back to show them seated on the living room floor, at a low table. The cookies sit on the platter between them.]Hikaru: Help yourself, Sempai!! doozo sempai!!Kyousuke: Y-yes...!! ha hai...!!6[Tight shot of his hand reaching out.]narration: If this is the case, then ko-- nattara no matter what happens to like-this if-become my body...! tatoe kono KARADA ga even-if this-body (S) do-- narou tomo......! what shall-become even-if/no-matter7Kyousuke FX: pakunarration: _ ______ A-amen!! a a--men!!---------------------------------------------------p 110 (156)1[Kyousuke pauses as Hikaru clasps her hands before her and watches expectantly.]2[A closer view of Hikaru.]3[He looks like he's grimacing.]Kyousuke: __ u_4Kyousuke FX: _____ goku_Kyousuke: DE... o5Kyousuke: [surprised smile] DELICIOUS! oishi------_Hikaru: [throwing up her hands in joy] HOORAY! yatta--_6narration: _______ Cookies were something this kukki-- tte konna ni oishi-- MONO tasty?! cookies (T) like-this tasty things datta no ka?! were (?) I thought they'd be far too motto AMAttaruku tte mazui mono sweet and taste bad, but... much-more too-sweet (T) not-tasty things ka to omotte-ta n da kedo... was-thinking-that (explan) butKyousuke: They're salty... shoppaku tte...Hikaru: [nervously] What?! Salty?! e_ shoppai?!7[She grabs one and tosses it in her mouth.]Hikaru: Th-that can't be... so sonna hazu wa like-that should _______ Cookies salty...? kukki-- ga shoppai nante... cookies (S) salty the-likes-ofHikaru FX: paku paku---------------------------------------------------p 111 (157)1[She grimaces and claps a hand over her mouth.]Hikaru: __ u_ T-taste's awful... ma mazui...2Hikaru: [looking embarrassed] I-I carelessly mistook the a atashi ukkari o-SATOU to o-SHIO salt for the sugar!! I carelessly sugar and salt machigaechatta n da!! mistook-(finality/regret) (explan)Kyousuke: [still eating] But... demo3Kyousuke: _______ These cookies really taste HONTOU ni oishii yo!! kono kukki-- great!! really tasty these-cookies4[She looks at him with tenderness...]Hikaru: Sempai... sempai......narration: _______ Telling such a kind-hearted SHIPPAI shita kukki-- o oishi-- lie--that the cookies I failed/went-wrong cookies (O) tasty ruined are delicious--and ___ eating them for me... nante yasashii uso tsuite the-likes-of telling-a-kindhearted-lie TAbete-kureru nante...... eat-for-me the-likes-of5[...and executes another Hikaru Flying Tackle.]Hikaru: I LOVE YOU AFTER ALL!! yappari DAISUki_!!narration: I'll never doubt again-- mou MAYOttari shinai my Darling is the best no-more not-be-led-astray/not-hesitate-(and) darling in the whole world! _______ atashi no da--rin wa SEKAI ICHI! my-Darling (T) best-in-the-world---------------------------------------------------