Kimagure Orange Road"The Witness Akane!"Volume 8, Story 6WB Volume 5, Story 4Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation by : Hitoshi Doi (18 Feb 1992)Additional translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose                                 Craig Nishida                                 Spencer Hastings                                 Thomas Wyatt                                 Jerry LeeLast revision : 07-17-95Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.eduNOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few      extras to those of you not having them.      Example: The subtitles on page 71 (117) are only in the WBs!NOTE: (CN)  This is a revision of the existing script by Hitoshi Doi.  The      existing script by Patrick Yip is evidently done from an unauthorized      Chinese translation.  It contains many major and minor deviations from      the Japanese and so was not used in preparation of this script.---------------------------------------------------p 71 (117)--TITLE PAGE[Four half-portraits of Akane, shoulders bare, with a hibiscus flower in her hair.  The first three portraits are identical--her eyes are closed.  In the fourth, she opens her left eye.]MAIN TITLE (at top)  The Witness Akane!              MOKUGEKISHA      -      akane!                                  a-witness/an-eyewitnessSUB-TITLE (at bottom)                                                _____  Faintly Stirring Awake--        honoka ni  mezamete     watashi no haato!  My Heart!                       dimly/     waking-up/   my-heart                                  faintly    being-awakened---------------------------------------------------p 72 (118)1[View across a white sandy beach.]narration:  A deserted beach.               dare-mo  inai           UMI                                  nobody   is-<not>-here  sea/ocean2[Akane portrait.]Akane:  Madoka-chan.                    madoka-chanwaves FX: [off]                   __ __ __  <lap lap lap...>                za za za...3[Akane's pov as Madoka turns to look.  Her hair flows in the breeze.]narration:  I wanted to confirm our         futari   no AI    o   TASHIkametaku tte  love...                         2-people 's love (O)  wanted-to-make-sure-of4[Pov shifts to show the two standing side-by-side on the beach, both in bikinis.]Akane:  You're...  The one I...         atashi...  anata no koto                                  I          about-younarration:  In the eyes of the sea and      SORA mo  UMI mo   mitsumeru  NAKA de  the sky...                      sky  and sea and  gaze-at    withinwaves FX: [off]                   __ __ __  <lap lap lap...>                za za za...5[Akane moves to embrace her.  Madoka blushes.]Akane:  Madoka-chan!                    madoka-channarration:  Because I love you.             SUki na  n da      mono                                  like     (explan)  reason---------------------------------------------------p 73 (119)1[Back to reality...  Kyousuke wakes up and blushes to find Akane embracing him.  Akane's eyes open and they stare at each other.]Akane and Kyousuke:  ..........                      ..........2Kyousuke: [blushing and sweating]           ___  A-Akane!  We're cousins!        a akane_  ore-tachi wa   itoko DOUSHI                                         !  we        (T)  fellow-cousins                                  da   zo                                  are  !!Kyousuke FX:  <leap back!>                    suza_Akane: [eyes half-open]  Oh...  It's Kyousuke...         nan da...  KYOUSUKE ka3[Akane collapses back on her bed, sound asleep.]Akane:                                           __________  Madoka-cha-a-an.  <mumble in    madoka-cha~~n  munyamunya  her sleep>Akane FX:                         _____  <toss and turn>                 goron4Kyousuke: (Ahh, what a shock.  That        (a--  bikkuri shita  ttaku   akane no yatsu  Akane...                              was-surprised  really  that-akane  Coming at me half-asleep,       AYUKAWA to    machigatte  nebokete  thinking I was Ayukawa...)      with-Ayukawa  by-mistake  being-half-asleep                                  sematte-kuru        nante...)                                  come-and-draw-near  the-likes-of5[He looks out the window at the sunny day.]Kyousuke:  Thanks to her, now I'm wide     okage de  ME ga samechatta  awake.                          due-to    became-awake-(finality/regret)6[Walking outside, he smiles and stretches.]Kyousuke:  Mmm, what a refreshing          u--mu  sugasugashii      ASA!  morning!                               refreshing/fresh  morningbirds FX:                         ___ ___ ___  <twitter>                       chi chi chi...narration:  The Okinawa that I happened     hyonna koto de kuru  wa   me ni natta  to come to unexpectedly...      come-by-unexpectedly (T)  became-pov?                                  OKINAWA mo                                          too  Today is the last day!          KYOU  wa   SAIGO no HI!                                  today (T)  last-day---------------------------------------------------p 74 (120)1[Kyousuke's pov of Madoka, in light dress and flat sandals, turning with a smile.]Madoka:  Oh, you're up early!            ara  HAYAi no ne!2[He idly flips a fruit in one hand.]Kyousuke:  G-good morning...               o ohayo...  Akane...  Woke me up.           akane ni...   okosarechatte                                  by-Akane      being-awakened-(finality)3[A view out across the beach to the ocean and horizon.]4[Overhead pov of the two, standing and talking.  In the foreground, hanging from a branch, is a paper wasp nest.]Madoka:                           ___  Tee!  Akane-san did that?!      pu_  akane-san ga?!Kyousuke: [embarrassed]  It's no laughing matter.        waraigoto ja nai yo  It seems she's taken a          aitsu      HONKI de   AYUKAWA no koto  serious liking to you.          that-girl  seriously  about-you                                  KI ni itte-ru             mitai na  n da                                  be-liking/taking-fancy-to seems     (explan)5Kyousuke: [munching on the fruit]  But you're an early-riser,      demo  AYUKAWA  koso    HAYAoki       da  ne  aren't you.                     but            indeed  early-rising  arewriting at bottom of page:  Japan Music Copyright           NIHON  ONGAKU  CHOSAKUKEN  KYOUKAI  Association (issued from)       Japan  music   copyright   association  Permit Number 9152112-101                                  (DE)     KYODAKU  BANGOU  DAI-9152112-101                                   origin  permit   number  <number>                                  -GOU                                   <number><Commentary (CN):  I'm not sure that *any* song appears in this chapter, and certainly not on *this* page--the only musical notes I see anywhere are attached to a simple line of Akane's <un un>--eight pages further down, in panel 128-7.  Not much of a song...>---------------------------------------------------p 75 (121)1Madoka:  The sound of the waves woke     NAMI no OTO    de  me up...                        wave 's sound  on-account-of                                  ME ga samechatta......                                  became-awake-(finality/regret)2[With a concerned look, she touches his cheek.]Madoka:                           ___  Ah!                             ha_3Madoka:  You're hurt?  From that         kega?   kono aida no......  time...                         wound   recentKyousuke: [pointing]  Oh, this?                       a kore?4Kyousuke:                               ___________  Yeah.  I scratched it when      un    pu--rusaido kara  okkochita TOKI ni  I fell from the side of               from-poolside     when-fell  the pool.                                  surimuichatte                                  grazing/abrading-(finality/regret)inset Kyousuke FX:                ____  <whoosh!>                       byu_5[His pov of her.  She looks at him...]6[...then turns around to gaze out across the sea, hands clasped behind her back.]Madoka:  You're a man after all,         KASUGA-kun tte yappari    OTOKO no KO  ne!  hmm, Kasuga-kun!                           (T) after-all  man---------------------------------------------------p 76 (122)1[She tosses her hair back.]2Madoka:  Back then...                    ano  TOKI......                                  that time3[Blushing and smiling softly, she turns to look at him.]Madoka:  You made me very happy.         tottemo    ureshikatta                                  immensely  was-happywaves FX: [off]                   __ __ __  <lap lap lap...>                za za za...4[Akane looks up from bed to see that Kyousuke isn't around.]Akane:  Huh?  Kyousuke.                 are KYOUSUKE5[She opens the door to go outside...]door FX:                          _____  <clack>                         gacha6[...but stops, blushing, as she sees something off-panel.]Akane:  !                               !---------------------------------------------------p 77 (123)1[She's stunned to see Madoka being held in Kyousuke's arms.]2[Back inside the room, she shuts the door.]Akane:  H-hey, what was that?!          chi chotto nani yo  IMA no!                                             what     nowAkane heartbeat FX:               ____ ____ ____  <thump thump thump>             doki doki dokidoor FX:                          _____  <slam>                          batan3[The doorknob rattles behind her...]Akane:                            ___  Ah!                             ha_door FX:                          _____ _____  <clack clack>                   kacha kacha4[...and Kyousuke enters.  Akane is lying on a bed, feigning sleep.]door FX:                          _____  <slam>                          batan---------------------------------------------------p 78 (124)1Akane: [rubbing her eyes]  Oh...  Good morning,            ara...  ohayou KYOUSUKE  Kyousuke.Kyousuke:                                      ___    _____  Why are you sleeping on my      omae  nande  ore no beddo de  nete-ru  bed?                            you   why    on-my-bed        are-sleeping                                  n da?                                  (explan)2Kyousuke:                         __________  You toss around so much in      muchakucha  your sleep.                     pell-mell/in-disorder                                  nezo-- no WARUi yatsu     da  naa                                  fellow-who-tosses-about-  are                                  in-(her)-sleepAkane: [embarrassed]  Oh, no.                         ikene3Akane: (But...                          (demo...  What were Madoka-chan and       madoka-chan to  KYOUSUKE ga   nante...  Kyousuke...?                                and          (S)  the-likes-of  I-it can't be.)                 ma masaka ne)Akane contemplation FX:  <stare!>                        ji~~_4Kyousuke:  What?!                          nan da yo![Akane finds the sky an interesting place to stare at.]Akane:  Wowww!  The weather's great!    wa----_  i--   o-TENKI!                                        !  nice  weather5[Kyousuke's pov of the fabulous babes on the beach in Okinawa.]narration:  So summer enters the stage      to yu-- wake de  OKINAWA wa   hitoASHI  a bit sooner in Okinawa!!       for-that-reason          (T)  a-step                                  HAYAi  NATSU   HOMBAN!!                                  soon   summer  acting-before-the-audiencenarration:  It's the season when the        ONNA no KO-tachi ga   mabushiku  girls look dazzling!            girls            (S)  dazzling/blinding                                                    ________                                  mieru             shi--zun  desu!                                  look/seem/appear  season    it-is---------------------------------------------------p 79 (125)1[Hikaru and Madoka stand in thigh-deep water and don snorkles, goggles and scuba tanks.]narration:  Ayukawa and Hikaru-chan are     AYUKAWA to  hikaru-chan wa  going scuba-diving!                     and             (T)                                  _________   ________                                  sukyu--ba - daibingu!                                  scuba-diving2[Akane zooms about on her board.]narration:                                 _____   _______  Akane went windsurfing!         akane wa uindo - sa--fin ni!3[A view of the blazing sun overhead.]4[Kyousuke flounders in a weak imitation of a swimmer.  His splashes annoy two cute girls standing nearby in about 2-foot-deep water.]narration:  As for me, I...                 ore wa   to ieba......                                  I   (T)  speaking-ofKyousuke FX:                      _____ _____  <splash splash>                 basha bashaKyousuke:  Can't swim after all...         yappari    oyogenai yo~~~~~~                                  after-all  not-able-to-swim---------------------------------------------------p 80 (126)1[Kyousuke, with only his head visible above the water, turns at the sound of...]girl: [off]  Hey, outta the way!  Get        chotto doite doite!  outta the way!2[He looks up in horror to see a windsurfer bearing down on him.]wind-surfing board FX:            __ __ __  <splish splish splish>          za za zaKyousuke:  OOO-WAHHH!                      uwa~~~~_3collision FX:                     ___ _____  <whump!> <bang>                 do_ pa~~n4[Kyousuke ends up on his back in about 1-foot-deep water.  The girl lands on top of him.  He finds a shapely rear end, in a polka-dot bikini bottom, hovering right in front of his nose.]Kyousuke:  Ouch.                           atetetetete5[He opens his eyes for a sudden surprise.]Kyousuke:                         _____  "DOKIN" <i.e., he says the      dokin  FX for a heart-thump>6girl:  I-I'm sorry-y-y.                go gomennasa~~inarration:  I've hit a jackpot!             kore       wa   atari -DOKU!                                  this-(one) (T)  hit    profit/benefitKyousuke: [wide smile]  N-no.  Not at all...            i ie  do-- itashimashite...---------------------------------------------------p 81 (127)1Kyousuke:  A-Akane!!                       a akane!!Akane:  Kyousuke!!                      KYOUSUKE!!2[They scream in each other's faces.]Kyousuke:  You suck!!                      hetakuso!!Akane:  It's because you're goofing     oyoge mo shinai  no ni  off around here, even though    not-swim         even-though  you can't swim!!                                      ________                                  konna tokoro de       urochoro shite-ru                                  at-a-place-like-this  are-loitering                                  kara        yo!!                                  that's-why3[Akane gets a close look at Kyousuke's neck--looks like a hickey.]Akane:                            ___  AH!                             ha_4[Full portraits--Madoka blushes to find herself being trailed by a smiling Akane.  This is not really a panel--just extra art thrown in.]---------------------------------------------------p 82 (128)1[Akane stares in surprise.]narration:                        __ ____ ______  H-hickey?!                      ki kisu ma--ku?!                                     kiss mark2[Back on shore, Akane stands and watches Kyousuke.]Akane:  I'm sure that was...            TASHIka ni  are...                                  certainly   that-(one)3Akane heartbeat FX:               ____ ____  <thump thump>                   doki dokiAkane:                             ____ ______ (A hickey!!)                     (kisu ma--ku yo ne!!)4[With a wide grin, she slaps him on the back, sending him staggering.]Akane:  So that's it.                   so-- ka  so-- ka  Good for you, Kyousuke!!        dekashita zo KYOUSUKE!!Akane backslap FX:                _______  <th-wack>                       bita--nKyousuke:  OUCH!                           ite~~!5Kyousuke:  Wh-what?!!                      na nan da yo~~!!Akane:                                                               ______  Don't play innocent, you        shirabakkurechatte            kono sukebe!!  lech!!                          feigning-ignorance-(finality) this lech6Akane: [smiling]  But...                          demo...  That means it was worth         kore de    atashi ga   KUROU shite  taking the trouble to bring     with-this  I      (S)  working-hard/worrying-  you to Okinawa.                                        about/taking-pains/                                                         suffering-troubles                                  anta o   OKINAWA ni  tsurete-kita                                  you (O)  to-Okinawa  brought-(you-with-me)                                  kai ga atta             to yu-- mono  ne                                  was-worthwhile-(doing)  means-that7[She turns and walks away.]Akane: [singing]  Yeah, yeah.                     un un <musical-note>---------------------------------------------------p 83 (129)1[Akane takes a shower.]shower FX:                        _______  <splishhh!>                     za----_2Akane: [toweling her hair] (But...                          (shikashi...  For someone who's always so     KYOUSUKE no yatsu  fudan          wa  spaced-out, he's surprisingly   that-Kyousuke      always/usually (T)  quick at those things.)         _________                                  poke--tto shite-ru          kuse ni                                  <pokan to>                  although                                  look-blank/be-absentminded                                  a-- yu-- koto ni naru to                                  when-become-that-kind-of-thing                                  IGAI NA ni             TE ga HAYAi  n da na)                                  unexpected/surprising  quick-hand   (explan)Akane FX:  <wipe wipe>                     fuki fuki3[Outside, Akane runs into Madoka and Hikaru.]Hikaru:  Oh, it's Akane-san.             ara akane-sanAkane:  Oh!                             a!4Hikaru: [beaming]                 ________  Diving is a lot of fun,         daibingu tte  kekko-- omoshiroi  isn't it.                       diving   (T)  quite   delightful/amusing                                  na  n desu    ne                                  is  (explan)  (rhet)  But now that I've been in       demo  ASA kara      zutto  the water all day since this    but   from-morning  all-the-time  morning, I've gotten all  wrinkly.                        MIZU no NAKA ni hairippa na shi de                                  gone-into-the-water             being                                  mo--  fuyakechai so--                                  now   swell-up5[Akane portrait--surprise.]narration:  All morning?!                   ASA kara zutto?!6Hikaru: [smiling]  Akane-san, were you and         akane-san  SEMPAI  GENKI ni shite-mashita?  Sempai having fun?                                 in-spirits/pep                                                              were-doingnarration:  Come to think of it...          so-- ieba...  Hikaru-chan and Madoka-chan     hikaru-chan-tachi        KYOU   ICHINICHI  weren't with Kyousuke today!                (and-assoc)  today  one-day                                  KYOUSUKE to ISSHO   ja nakatta  n da  wa!                                  together-with-Kyou  were-not   (explan)---------------------------------------------------p 84 (130)1[She thinks, furiously.]Akane:                                                     ____ ______ (That means that hickey...!!)    (to yu-- koto wa   ano   kisu ma--ku!!)                                   that-means        that  kiss-mark2[With a glare, she looks around at the multitude of young girls present.]narration:  Who on earth did Kyousuke       KYOUSUKE no yatsu  ittai         DARE to...?!  do it with...?!                 that-Kyousuke      in-the-world  with-whoAkane:                                 ______ (That lech may be a fast         (ano sukebe OTOKO  TE ga HAYAi ni mo  operator, but he's gone          that-lech  guy    by-quick-hands too  too far!!)                                  hodo ga aru!!)                                  too-far3Akane:                                                      _____ (No matter what anyone says,     (do...  ittatte       ano okute OTOKO ni  that late-blooming guy would            even-tho-say  by-that-late-crop-guy  never be able to pick up any                          <ie, late-bloomer>  girls!)                         _____                                  nampa          nante         dekiru                                  skirt-chasing  the-likes-of  able-to-do                                  KAISHOU mo nai  yo ne!)                                  also-incapable4[Akane turns to look at Madoka...]Akane:  That means...                   to yu-- koto wa...Akane contemplation FX:  <stare>                         ji----5[...and, blushing, recalls what she saw that morning.]narration:  S-so, it was that time          ji ja    yappari    ano TOKI   no?!  after all?!                              after-all  that-time6[Akane's pov of the beautiful and tanned Madoka.]---------------------------------------------------p 85 (131)1[Distraught, Akane looks down at her palms.]Akane:  I-it's a lie!!                  u uso!!  I don't want to believe it...   SHINjitakunai...Madoka: [turning to look]  Huh?                            e?2[Surprising the heck out of Madoka, Hikaru and two passing guys, Akane leaps forward to clasp the hands of Madoka.]Akane: [shaking her head]  N-no!  No, no!!                 da dame yo  dame dame!!  You're all mine, Madoka-chan!   madoka-chan wa   atashi dake  no    mono yo!                                              (T)  only-me      (nom) personAkane FX:  <cling>                         shikka[Pairs of the symbol for "female" do naughty things to each other above their heads.]3[Akane races down the path between the bungalows.]narration:  What the heck is that           KYOUSUKE no yatsu  ittai nani         o  Kyousuke thinking about?!!      that-Kyousuke      what-in-the-world (O)                                  KANGAete-iru       n da!!                                  be-thinking-about  (explan)4[Akane's pov as she runs.]narration:  But...                          demo...  It's not like I have any        SHOUKO ga  aru   wake ja nai  proof, so it'd look odd to      proof  (S) have  it's-not-the-case  ask him point-blank...                                  kara          CHOKUSETSU  TOi                                  that's-why    direct      a-question                                  tadasu no mo   okashii         shi...                                  inquiring too  odd/suspicious  and-besides5Akane: [flash thought] (If there's a chance, I hope     (dekiru koto nara  chigatte-te hoshii  I'm wrong.                       if-possible       want-to-be-wrong  I hope it's some mistake!!)     nani-ka no machigai  de atte hoshii!!)                                  some    's mistake   want-to-be---------------------------------------------------p 86 (132)1Akane: [running] (But if it's true...)            (demo  moshi  HONTOU  dattara...)                                   but   if     true    if-it-isAkane: (For Hikaru-chan's sake as       (hikaru-chan no tame ni mo   atashi  well, I won't let him get        for-Hikaru's-sake      too  I  away with it!!)                                  yurusanai!!)                                  not-allow/forgive2[A girl calls out to Kyousuke, and he turns.  We know it's Akane taking the disguise of Madoka because Akane hasn't taken the trouble to change the look of her shirt or pants.]@Madoka:  Kasuga-kun.                     KASUGA-kun3Kyousuke:  H-hi.                           ya yaa4@Madoka:  Say...  About this morning...   nee...  KESA no koto        da     kedo...                                  say     about-this-morning  it-is  but5[Kyousuke is taken aback and he blushes deeply.]6Kyousuke:  Eh?!                            e_?---------------------------------------------------p 87 (133)1@Madoka:  !                               !2[She turns away.]@Madoka:  Are you going to make a girl    ONNA no KUCHI kara  iwaseru   KI?  say it out loud?                from-girl's-mouth   make-say  intention3[Kyousuke watches her, still blushing.]4[She leans in close.]@Madoka:  Hey...  Let's pick up where     nee...  ASA     no tsuzuki      yarimasho  we left off this morning.       say     morning 's continuation shall-do5Kyousuke: "P-pick up where we..."          tsu...tsuzuki tte......Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            ____  <THUMP>                         doki---------------------------------------------------p 88 (134)1[Looking down, Kyousuke gets a good look at her bustline.]@Madoka:  Come on.                        nee2Kyousuke: [blushing] (Th-these breasts are...         (ko...kono MUNE wa  It's not Ayukawa!               AYUKAWA ja nai zo  *She's much bigger!*            motto      OUkii      mon   na--!                                  much-more  big/large  thing                                  _______  Aha, so this is Akane.          haha--n  sate    wa   akane no yatsu  da  na                                           so/well (T)  that-Akane      it-is  What the heck is she trying     ittai         do-- yu-- tsumori  to pull?)                       in-the-world  what-kind-of-intention                                  na  n da)                                  is  (explan)3[He claps a hand to the hickey on his neck.]Kyousuke:  !                               !4[Blushing, his eyes goggle.  @Madoka looks back quietly.]Kyousuke: (Maybe I'm the one that          (hyotto shite  akane no yatsu  Akane...)                        maybe         that-Akane                                  ___                                  ore no koto...)                                  about-me5[Decisively, he clasps her by a hand.  @Madoka blushes.]Kyousuke:  Okay!                           ii yo  Let's pick up where we left     tsuzuki       o   yarimashou  off.                            continuation (O)  shall-doKyousuke: (Fine!  If that's what she       (yoshi_  sore        nara  wants, I'm game!!)                       that-(one)  if-it-is                                  AITE       o   shite-yarou!!)                                  companion (O)  shall-do-(for-her)6@Madoka:  !!                              !!---------------------------------------------------p 89 (135)1[His pov of Akane as she returns to her natural form.  She points an accusing finger at him.]Akane:  Kyousuke!  So that's            KYOUSUKE!  yappari    KESA          no   wa  what you were doing this                   after-all  this-morning (nom) (T)  morning!!                                  so-- yu-- koto      na no ne!!                                  that-kind-of-thingAkane transformation FX:          ___  <phoot!>                        fu_2[Kyousuke portrait--wide-eyed surprise.]3[She grabs him by the shirt and shouts in his face.]Akane:  What the heck are you           ittai         do-- yu-- tsumori       na no?  trying to pull?                 in-the-world  what-kind-of-intention  When you have someone like      hikaru-chan  to yu--  mono   ga  Hikaru-chan!                                 that     person (S)                                  ari   nagara                                  have  thoughKyousuke: [wincing, shouting]  That was...!!                   are        wa   ne~~~~~~_!!                                  that-(one) (T)4[Quietly, he takes Akane by the shoulders...]Kyousuke:  Stand here.                     koko ni        TAtte                                  at-this-place  standing-upAkane: (Oh, this is where Kyousuke      (a  koko  TASHIka  ASA  and Madoka-chan were this           here  certain  morning  morning.)                                  KYOUSUKE-tachi       ga   ita                                           (and-assoc) (S)  were-here                                  TOKORO  da  wa)                                  place   is5[He bends down to pick up a rock.]Kyousuke:                         _______  I threw away the skin of        papaiya no TAbekasu o   NAgesuteta  a papaya...                     papaya  's rind    (O)  threw-away                                  n da      kedo                                  (explan)  but6[Looking at Akane, he tosses the rock over his shoulder.]Kyousuke:  But I had no idea there         konna mono        ga   atta     nante  was something like this         a-thing-like-this (S)  existed  the-likes-of  there.                                  KI ga tsukanakutte                                  not-becoming-aware-ofKyousuke FX:                      ___  <toss>                          poi7[Angry wasps buzz down and Akane leaps into Kyousuke's arms.  Kyousuke bears it all patiently.]wasps FX:                         ______  <BZZZ>                          bua~~nAkane:  KYAA!                           kyaa---------------------------------------------------p 90 (136)1[Akane realizes the position she's in...]Akane:  OH.                             a2[...and looks up nervously at him...]Kyousuke:  Do you understand?              wakatta?  It was like this.               ko-- yu-- koto na noAkane:  Ohhh.                           naan da3[...until she sees the hickey on his neck again.]Akane:                            ___  Ah!                             ha_4[She yells in his face.  Each points to the other.]Akane:                                         ____ ______  B-but what about this hickey?   de demo sono kisu ma--ku wa  nan  na no yo?!                                     but  that-kiss-mark   (T) what isKyousuke:  It was you!  You!!              omae da yo  omae!!5[He points at her.]Akane:  What?                           e?6Kyousuke: [glaring]  Who was the one that was        nebokete        AYUKAWA to machigatte  half-asleep and hugged me       being-half-     mistaking-for-Ayukawa-(and)  thinking I was Ayukawa?         asleep-(and)                                  DAkitsuite-kita       no    wa                                  came-and-embraced-   (nom) (contrast)                                  affectionately                                  donata  deshita kke?                                  who     was     (?)Akane: [horrified]  AH!!                            a!!7[He claps a hand to his forehead.]Kyousuke:                                     ______ (It was a pretty nice mood,      (kekkou  ii mu--do  datta  no ni  but those wasps ruined           quite   nice-mood  was    even-though  it...                               _____                                  ano hachi   no sei   de                                  those-wasps 's fault on-account-of                                  buchikowashi ni natchatte           sa--                                  becoming-spoiled/ruined-(finality/regret)  It (i.e., the mood) was         fundari        kettari        da yo  stepped on and kicked.          step-on-(and)  kick-at-(and)  is  Jeez...)                        mattaku...)---------------------------------------------------p 91 (137)1[Madoka and a cheerful Hikaru come upon Kyousuke from behind.  Kyousuke turns at the sound of...]Hikaru:  SEMPA-A-AI!                     sempa--i!2[He turns back to Akane.]Kyousuke:  Akane-kun, don't carry          akane-kun  osekkai  mo  your meddling too far!                     meddling too                                  hodohodo ni         ne_!                                  <hodohodo ni suru>                                   know-how-far-to-go                                                ____ ______  Otherwise, I'll tell            ja nakya      kisu ma--ku no koto  Hikaru-chan about the           cause-if-not  about-kiss-mark  hickey.                                         ____                                  hikaru-chan ni  barashichau            yo                                  to-Hikaru       spill-secret-(finality)Akane: [wide-eyed, blushing]  I-I understand!                 wa wakatta wa yo--_!3[Night view of a passenger jet taking off.]narration:  With that, this affair was      to yu-- wake de  IKKEN         RAKUCHAKU!  settled!                        for-that-reason  affair/matter settled  And, so long, Okinawa!!         soshite   saraba    OKINAWA!!                                  and/then  <sayonara>4[Inside, the four sit in the middle seats of the jumbo jet.  Akane on the left, then Kyousuke, Hikaru and Madoka.  Akane and Kyousuke chat, while Hikaru puts on her headphones and says something to Madoka, who holds a magazine.]narration:                              ____ ______  But if the hickey had           demo  kisu ma--ku ga   HONTOU ni  really been from Ayukawa,       but   kiss-mark   (S)  really  how <much>...*                                  AYUKAWA no     dattara  donna ni...                                          (nom)  if-was   how-much Right, everyone?                 ne-- mina-san?<*Translation note (CN):  He leaves most of the line unsaid.  Namely, "...how good/nice would it have felt?">---------------------------------------------------