Kimagure Orange Road"The Dangerous Beach!"Volume 8, Story 5WB Volume 5, Story 3Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose                                 Craig Nishida                                 Spencer Hastings                                 Jerry Lee                                 Thomas WyattLast revision : 07-17-95Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.eduNOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few      extras to those of you not having them.      Example: The subtitles on page 49 (95) are only in the WBs!NOTE: The existent script by Patrick Yip is evidently done from an      unauthorized Chinese translation.  It contains many major and minor      deviations from the Japanese and so was not used in preparation of      this script.---------------------------------------------------p 49 (95)--TITLE PAGE[Madoka--looking us straight in the eye--stands at the beach in roller skates, knee & elbow pads, and matching tanktop and bikini bottom.  Moving to a beat she teasingly begins to lift up her tanktop.]MAIN TITLE (at top)               _________   _______  The Dangerous Beach!            denjarasu - bi--chi!SUB-TITLE (at bottom)                                              ______  The Shining, Summer-Tinged      KAGAYAku     NATSU IRO       #C# ga--ru  "C" Girl Gives Herself Up to    shine/gleam  summer-colored   C-girl  a Naughty Rhythm.                                         ______                                  ikenai                    rizumu  ni                                  naughty/bad/"mustn't-do"  rhythm (IO)                                  KARADA o makase                                  give-oneself-(to)                                            ________  She Wants to Remove/Avoid*      KOKORO no bure--ki  hazushitai......!  the Heartbreak...!              heart  's break     want-to-avoid/miss/undo<*Translation note:  This is a pun--one that won't translate well into English.  The verb used here is <hazusu> which means either "to remove" (as in remove one's shirt) or "to avoid/evade".  So the double-meaning here is "to avoid heartbreak" and "to remove that heartbreak (i.e., her shirt).">---------------------------------------------------p 50 (96)1[Exterior night shot of the 2-room hotel bungalow.]Kyousuke: [off] ("St-stay here...")              (to tomaru    tte...)                                      stay-over (quote)2[Hikaru lies on her side on the bed, facing away from Kyousuke, who now sits on the edge of the bed, looking back over his shoulder at her.]Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            ____ ____ ____  <thump thump thump>             doki doki doki3[Pov shifts to the ceiling.]narration:  Wh-what does Hikaru-chan        do do-- yu-- tsumori       na  n da    yo  mean by that?                      what-kind-of-intention  is  (explan)                                  hikaru-chan4[Overlaid on panels 4 and 5, Kyousuke nervously ponders his choices.  In panel 4, a small, evil-looking version of himself lurks over his head.]evil conscience:                                  ______  This is your chance.            kore       wa   chansu  da                                  this-(one) (T)  chance  is  Do it!!                         yatchimae!!                                  (yatte-shimae) = do-(finality)Kyousuke: (Maybe Hikaru-chan...            (hikaru-chan  moshi-ka-shite...                                                maybe  No.  Or maybe not...)           iya    moshi-ka-shinakute mo...)                                  no     or-maybe-not5[In the adjacent panel, another version of himself pleads its case.]good conscience:                  ____  Don't do anything stupid!!      baka na koto  suru  n ja nai      zo!!                                  stupid-thing  do    (explan/neg)  !!6[Tight shot of Hikaru's hand reaching out for his.]Hikaru:  Sempai...                       SEMPAI...Hikaru hand FX:                   ___  <swish!>                        su_narration:                                          _ ___  At this rate, I-I'll...         kono mama ja      o ore...  honto ni......  Really...                       if-this-continues   I---------------------------------------------------p 51 (97)1[Night shot of the swimming pool.]Sukeda: [off]                     ________  The Rules of Diving:            daibingu  KOKOROE           sono 1  Number 1...                     diving    rules/directions  that-12[Sukeda stands behind Madoka and clasps her by the wrist.  Komayama likewise has Akane by her wrist.]Sukeda:  Don't enter the water when      YOtta         mama  you're drunk!!                  gotten-drunk  as-it-is                                  MIZU ni haitte wa ikemasen!!                                  must-not-enter-waterKomayama:  Second, you will obey what      sono 2  SENSEI  no yu-- koto   wa  your teacher tells you          that-2  teacher 's say  things (T)  without question!!                                  SUNAO ni           kikimasho--!!                                  obediently/meekly  shall-obey/listen-toAkane:  L-let go of me-e-e!!            ha hanashite yo------_!!---------------------------------------------------p 52 (98)1Akane:                            ______________  You think it's all right        insutorakuta-- ga   konna koto shite  for instructors to do stuff     instructors    (S)  doing-things-like-this  like this?!!                                  i--   to omotte      n no!!                                  okay  thinking-that2Komayama:                         ___  All we're saying is that        ore-tachi wa   tada    SHINSETSU ni  we'll give you diving           we        (T)  simply  in-kindness  lessons out of simple           ________  kindness.                       daibingu o   oshiete-ageyo--  to itte-ru                                  diving  (O)  teaching-you     be-saying-that                                  dake  jan                                  only  is-notSukeda:  Yeah, that's right.             so-- so--  But before entering the         demo  MIZU no NAKA ni hairu ni wa  water, we should do some        but   to-enter-the-water      (contrast)  warm-up exercises!!                                  mazu   yoku      JUMBI         UNDOU                                  first  properly  preparations  exercise                                  shitokanai to       ne----_!!                                  (shite-okanai to)   (rhet)                                   if-not-do-(for-future-sake)3[Angrily, Madoka slaps Sukeda's hand away.  But Sukeda catches her hand neatly in his own.]Madoka hand FX:                   ______  <whoosh!>                       bishi_4Sukeda: [leering]  See?  When you struggle you     hora hora   abareru to  get even more tipsy.                        when-struggle                                  yoke-- ni    YOi ga mawatchau      yo                                  excessively  get-tipsy-(finality)Madoka:  <puff> <puff>                   haa haa---------------------------------------------------p 53 (99)1Madoka: [angrily]                                          ______________  Are you really instructors?     anta-tachi    HONTOU ni  insutorakuta--                                  you-(plural)  really     instructors                                  na no?2[Both display nervous, wide-eyed expressions.]Sukeda and Komayama:              ___  AH!                             ha_3Akane:  Come to think of it, I was      so-- ieba            o-HIRU ni  told at the front desk at       come-to-think-of-it  at-lunchtime  lunchtime to keep a careful     _______                  _______  eye out, because there have     furonto de  SAIKIN  kono bi--chi SHUUHEN de  been numerous cases around      at-front-desk       around-this-beach  this beach of molesting                     recently  swimsuit thieves pretending     ______  to be instructors...            chikan   magai no MIZUGI DOROBOU   ga                                  masher/  false 's swimsuit-thieves (S)                                  molester                                  SHUTSUBOTSU suru   kara                                  infest-(a-place)/  that's-why                                  frequents                                  KI o tsukeru  yo-- ni to CHUUI sareta                                  look-out-for  was-taking-care-to                                  kedo...                                  but4Komayama: [to Sukeda]  H-hey...                        o oi...Akane:  Ahh, just as I thought.         a--  yappari                                                ____ ______________  You're bogus instructors,       anta-tachi    nise insutorakuta--  ne  huh.                            you-(plural)  bogus-instructors5Sukeda:  We've been found out--          bareta      mono   wa   shou ga nai!!  can't do anything about         discovered  person (T)  nothing-can-be-done/  that!!                                                  no-use-doingKomayama:  Who cares.  Do it!!             i-- kara    yatchimae!!Akane:  Stop it!!                       yamete!!6Komayama:                                    ___  Shall we show you why we        do--shite  ore-tachi ga   so-- yasuyasu to  won't be caught so easily       why        we        (S)  easily-like-that  as that?!                                  tsukamaranai   ka   oshiete-yaro--  ka!                                  not-be-caught  (?)  shall-teach-you (?)[He hurls Akane into the pool.]Komayama shove FX:                ___  <whump>                         donAkane:  KYAA!                           kyaa---------------------------------------------------p 54 (100)1[Sukeda and Madoka briefly stop struggling to watch the action in the pool.]Sukeda:  Because you can't breathe       MIZU no NAKA ja   IKI    ga   dekinai  under water she won't be        in-the-water (T)  breath (S)  not-able-to  able to shout, so she can't  cry out for help.               kara        KOE mo DAsenai                                  that's-why  also-not-be-able-to-utter-cry                                  shi          TASUke mo YObenai     no sa                                  and-besides  also-can't-cry-for-helpAkane FX: [off]                   _______  <SPLASH>                        dobo--n2[Komayama hops into the pool and walks towards the surfacing Akane.]Komayama:  And even if she cries out       shikamo   konna JIKAN ja     YOnde-mo  at this late hour, no one       moreover  at-time-like-this  even-tho-call  will care!                                  DARE-mo  ki ya shinai!                                  nobody   <ki ga shinai?> = not-worryKomayama FX:                      _______  <splash>                        dobo--nAkane surfacing FX:  <splut!>                        pua_3Akane: [flash thought] (I'm no match for a man's        (OTOKO no WANRYOKU        ni  wa  brute strength!!                 man   's brute-strength (IO) (contrast)                                  kanawanai!!                                  no-match-for  At least if I had Kyousuke's    semete       KYOUSUKE  mitai na  type of Power...)               at-least               it-seems                                  _chikara_                                  NOURYOKU ga   areba     naa)                                  Power    (S)  if-existAkane:                                        _chikara_ (But my Power...)                (atashi no  NOURYOKU  tte ittatte...)                                   my         Power     even-tho-saying-that4[Akane, back to Komayama, lights up her face.  Komayama places his hand on her shoulder...]Akane: (That's it!!)                    (so-- da!!)Komayama:  Hey!  Face this way!            so--ra  kotchi o muite!                                  there!  facing-this-way5[...and turns her around.  Akane uses her Power of illusion to appear as Komayama.]Komayama:                         ______  Pretty face...                  kawaii KAO oAkane transformation FX:          ___  <phoot!>                        fu_Akane FX:  <turn around!>                  kuru_6[Komayama staggers back, clapping a hand over his mouth as though ready to puke.  Akane takes the opportunity to climb out of the pool.]Komayama:  N-not pretty!!                  ka kawaikunee_!!Akane FX:                         _____  <splish!>                       zaba_7[Sukeda and Madoka continue to struggle.]Akane:  Madoka-chan!!                   madoka-chan!!Sukeda:  Damn...!                        kuso--_  Such a high-spirited neechan.   ise-- no ii      ne--chan  da  naa                                  spirited/lively            is  (rhet)---------------------------------------------------p 55 (101)1Akane: (That's it!                      (so-- da  Change into a police            omawari-san ni         HENSHIN shite...!)  officer...!)                    into-(Mister)-Officer  changing-(into)2[She transforms into a cute policewoman a la Nene Romanova...]Akane transformation FX:          ___  <phoot!>                        fu_3[Shaking her head in dismay, she sheds that image.]Akane:  No, no!!                        chigau chigau!!Akane transformation FX:          ___  <phoot!>                        fu_4[She stands perplexed in a Playboy bunny costume.]Akane:  Not this!                       kore demo nai!5Akane: [dumbfounded]  What does a police officer      omawari-san   tte  donna kakko--  look like?!                     (Mr.)-Officer (T)  what-kind-of-appearance                                  da  kke?!                                  is  (?)6Madoka:  Akane-san, run!!                akane-san  NIgete!!Akane:  What are you saying?            nani  itte    n no                                  what  saying  I can't leave you behind!!      madoka-chan o   oite wa ikenai   yo~~~~_!!                                             (O)  must-not-leave-behind---------------------------------------------------p 56 (102)1Madoka:  Get someone!!                   HITO o!!  Go and call for help!           TASUke o YOnde-kuru    no yo!                                  start-calling/crying-for-help2Akane:  B-but...                        de demo...3Madoka: [wailing]  I'M OKAY!  HURRY!!              atashi wa   DAIJOUBU   HAYAku!!                                  I      (T)  all-right  hurry4Akane: [racing off]  O-okay!!                        wa wakatta ne!!Komayama:  D-damn!                         shi shimatta!5Akane: [flash thought] (The only guy to ask now...      (moo  tanomi   wa   YUIITSU no   OTOKO                                   now  request/ (T)  only/single  man                                        rely/trust  Is Kyousuke!!)                  KYOUSUKE  shika inai!!)                                            there's-only6Komayama:  O-oh no!                        ya yabai ze  She's gonna call others!        HITO o YOnde-kuru      tsumori    da!                                  start-calling-someone  intention  isSukeda:  Now that it's come to           mo--     ko-- nattara  this, we can't afford to        already  if-become-like-this  play around!                                  ASOnde-ru   yoyu-- wa nai    ze                                  be-playing  cannot-afford-to !  Since we can't be sticking      do--se  mo--  koko ni        wa  around here any longer...       anyhow  more  at-this-place (contrast)                                  irarenai                                  not-be-found/not-be-staying  At least...                     semete...---------------------------------------------------p 57 (103)1                                 __________Sukeda:                          _korekushon_  We'll be taking this one for    SENRIHIN                    dake  demo  our collection.                 spoils-of-war/(collection)  only  even                                  itadaite-ikou                                  shall-go-and-take[Madoka blesses him with a deadly glare.]2Sukeda:  A beautiful girl like this      konna BIKEI                  wa  isn't found just anywhere.      this-kind-of-beautiful-woman (T)                                  zara ni                wa         inai                                  commonplace/everywhere (contrast) isn't-there  This is a bitchin' babe         SAIGO    o  kazaru ni      fusawashii  worthy of being our final       the-end (O) ornament/      become/worthy-of/  trophy!                                     adorn/exhibit  suitable-for                                  SAIKOU no KO  da  ze                                  awesome-girl  is  !                                  ___ ___ ___  <chuckle!>                      ku_ ku_ ku_3[Kyousuke blushes and stares wide-eyed at Hikaru off-panel.]Hikaru: [off]  Come close...                   soba ni kite...4[Evil conscience lands a solid right to the head of good conscience, sending it reeling.]evil conscience FX:  <WHAM>                          #DOCOON#                                  <doko--n>evil conscience nametag:  Desire                          YOKUBOUgood conscience nametag:  Reason                          RISEI5Kyousuke:  Hikaru-chan!!                   hikaru-chan!!---------------------------------------------------p 58 (104)1[Akane reaches the bungalow...]2[...and tries the door.]doorknob FX:                      _____  <rattle>                        gachaAkane:                            ____  Locked...                       kagi ga... "Do not disturb" perhaps?        o-torikomi NAKA  tte      koto   ka                                    very-busy      (quote)  thing  (?)3[Hikaru still lies on her side on the bed, though her eyes are now closed. Kyousuke stands and leans over her.]Kyousuke:  Huh?                            are?4[Bleary-eyed, he looks up to see Akane pounding on the window.]Akane pound-on-window FX:         ___ ___  <thump thump>                   don donnarration:  Huh?  It's Akane!               are?    akane da!5[Kyousuke smiles and waves.]Akane: [wincing]                      ____  That idiot.                     ano baka  He's still drunk.               mada   yopparatte-yagaru                                  still  is-drunk-(contempt)6[She transforms into Madoka.]Akane transformation FX:          ___  <phoot!>                        fu_7Kyousuke:  <yikes!>                        gyo_---------------------------------------------------p 59 (105)1[He leaps back--away from Hikaru--in horror.]Kyousuke:  Wahhh!!                         uwata----_!!Kyousuke FX:  <leap!>                         suza_Kyousuke:  I-I'm sorry!                    go gomennasai!2[Akane--back in her true form--points behind her.]3Kyousuke:  Hm?                             n?4[She transforms into Sukeda and points to her face.]Akane transformation FX:          ___  <phoot!>                        fu_5narration:  Ayukawa...                      AYUKAWA ga...  Something's wrong?!             do--ka shita no ka?!6[Night shot of a table at poolside, and the starry sky.]Madoka: [off]  AH!                             a_Madoka FX: [off]                  _____  <SPLASH>                        dobon---------------------------------------------------p 60 (106)1[Sukeda, sans shirt, walks through the water to the surfacing Madoka.]Madoka surfacing FX:  <splut!>                        pua_2[He grabs her wrist and pulls.]Sukeda:  Hey now, if you don't           hora hora  kotchi ni konai to  come over here, you'll                     if-not-come-this-way  drown.                                  oborechau               yo                                  drown-(finality/regret)Sukeda FX:  <yank!>                         gui_3[Tight shot of someone grabbing her wrist and raising it high.]Madoka arm FX:                    ___  <fwip!>                         ba_4[It's Komayama, who squats at poolside, holding up Madoka by her arms.  She appears to have passed out.]Komoyama:  Here!                           hoi!Madoka FX:                        __ __  <splish>                        za za---------------------------------------------------p 61 (107)1[Madoka portrait--unconscious.]2Komayama:  It looks like she fainted.      do--yara        KI o ushinatta  mitai da na                                  it-looks-as-if  fainted         seemsSukeda:  That's convenient...            sore       wa   KOUTSUGOU...                                  that-(one) (T)  convenient/fortunate3[Another Madoka portrait--still unconscious.]4Kyousuke:  Wha-a-at?!                      e----_  Ayukawa's with those guys       AYUKAWA ga   HIRUMA no  from this afternoon?!                   (S)  in-the-daytime 's                                  OTOKO-tachi ni?!                                  men        (IO)5Kyousuke:  Why didn't you say so           nande  sore        o   HAYAku  sooner?!                        why    that-(one) (O)  soon/early                                  iwanai   n da                                  not-say  (explan)Akane: (He sure talks...  This          (yoku   yu--  yo    kono OTOKO wa...)  guy...)                          fully  say         this man   (T)6Akane:  Anyway, hurry!!                 tonikaku  isoide!!                                  anyway    in-a-hurryKyousuke: [running off]  I know!!                        wakatta!!---------------------------------------------------p 62 (108)1[In mid-dematerialization he looks back at Akane and shouts...]Kyousuke:  I'll go on ahead!!              saki ni     iku  yo---_!!                                  beforehand  go2[Madoka's pov--if she were awake--of Sukeda reaching out both hands towards her.]Sukeda:  Rule number 3!                  KOKOROE sono 3!                                  rule    that 3  Enter the water with as         MIZU no NAKA de wa          dekiru  light clothing as possible.     in-water        (contrast)  able-to-do                                  dake  KEISOU ni                                  only  in-light-dressSukeda:  Your birthday suit is the       Umareta   manma no      SUGATA      ga  best!!                          was-born  <manmae no?>  form/figure (S)                                            just-in-front                                  ICHIBAN!!                                  best3[Sukeda takes hold of the front of her T-shirt.]Sukeda FX:  <grab!>                         gu_---------------------------------------------------p 63 (109)1[Kyousuke rematerializes a meter above Komayama's head.  Sukeda pauses to look skyward.  Komayama is oblivious.]Kyousuke FX:                      ____  <whoosh!>                       byu_2[Kyousuke crashes down on Komayama's shoulders.]Kyousuke impact FX:               ___  <whump!>                        do_Kyousuke and Komayama:  WAH!                            wa3Kyousuke: (Oh, shit!!                      (ha_  shimatta!!                                  __________  Did Ayukawa see me              terepo--to shita  toko      AYUKAWA ni  teleport?!)                     teleported        occasion  by-Ayukawa                                  mirareta?!)                                  was-seen4[Madoka portrait--still unconscious.]5Kyousuke: [relieved] (That's good...  She             (yokatta...    KI o ushinatte-raa)  fainted.)                                  ___  <whew!>                         ho_6Kyousuke: [angrily] (N-not good!                     (yo yokunai!  How dare they do this to        koitsura    yokumo  AYUKAWA o!!)  Ayukawa!!)                      these-guys  dare           (O)Sukeda:  What's this?  You.              nan da  koitsu---------------------------------------------------p 64 (110)1[Komayama topples forward, sending both Kyousuke and himself into the pool.]Kyousuke and Komayama:  Ooops!                          ottotto!2Kyousuke and Komayama:  WAHHHH!                         wa----_Kyousuke and Komayama FX:         _______  <KER-SPLASH>                    zabu--n3Komayama: [surfacing]  Wh-what the hell are you        na nani shi-yagaru  doing?                             what doing-(contempt)Sukeda:  Finish him quickly!!            HAYAi  toko       yatchimae!!                                  quick  time/case  do-(finality)4[Tight shot of a corner of the pool.  The water churns.]Komayama and Sukeda FX: [off]     _____ _____  <splash>  <splash>              basha bashaKomayama:  W-wait a sec!!                  chi chotto mate yo!!5[Isolated shot of the poolside bar and some tables.]Komayama and Sukeda FX: [off]     ________  <sploosh>                       jabujabuSukeda: [off]  Give up!                        yamero--_                                  shall-quit/stop/give-up-(imperative)6[Triumphantly, Komayama lifts something in his hand.]Komayama:  G-got it!!                      to totta------_!!                                     seized/took/gotKomayama FX:                      _______  <spl-splish>                    zaza--n---------------------------------------------------p 65 (111)1[Both hold up swimtrunks.]Komayama and Sukeda:                                              ______  Th-this is your pants!          ko...  kore       wa   omae no  pantsu!                                         this-(one) (T)  your     pants2[Blushing and grinning nervously, they point at one another.]Komayama and Sukeda:              _______  Pervert <heart-symbol>.         etchi-- <heart-symbol>Komayama and Sukeda FX:           ___  ___  <point!>                        po_  po_3[Both swimtrunks fly out of their hands.]swimtrunks FX:                    ___  <whizzz>                        bunKomayama and Sukeda:  WAHHH!                          waa4[Both turn to look up at Kyousuke, who stands heroicly and defiantly at poolside, carrying the still-unconscious Madoka in his arms.]Kyousuke:  That's as far as you'll go!     soko made  da!                                  that-far   is5[Face set in a grim mask, he crackles with the Power.]Kyousuke:                                    _chikara_ (My Power tonight is a touch     (KON'YA no NOURYOKU wa   hitoaji  different!!)                     tonight's Power    (T)  by-a-step                                  chigau    zo!!)                                  different---------------------------------------------------p 66 (112)1[Isolated view of the drain outlets for the swimming pool.  Water gushes out.]water FX:                         ___  <WHUMP!>                        do_sign:  Danger--Drainage Outlet         HAISUI    KUCHI         KIKEN                                  drainage  opening/gate  danger/hazard2[Sukeda and Komayama stand and cover their privates as the water quickly drains from the pool.]water FX:                         ________  <gurgle gurgle>                 gobogoboKomayama and Sukeda:  Wah wah!                        wawa_3Sukeda:  Th-the water's...!!             mi...MIZU ga!!Komayama:  ...going away!!                 nukete-yuku!!4[Still carrying Madoka, Kyousuke slowly walks away from the pool.  The two swimtrunks float in the air beside him.  The two punks are still in the pool, and shout at Kyousuke's retreating back.]Komayama and Sukeda:  H-hey-y-y!!                     hi hie--_!!5[Akane leads a charging mob to the pool.]Akane:  Over there!!                    asoko desu!!men running FX:                   __ __ __  <step step step>                ta ta ta6[Akane stops, wide-eyed.]Akane:  Huh?!                           n?!---------------------------------------------------p 67 (113)1[The two are found in an empty pool, covering up.  Hotel guests, workers and a police officer stand and gawk.  Akane, blushing, beats a hasty retreat.]Komayama:  Ohhhhhh!  D-don't look!!        are~~~~~~_  mi minai de~~_!!Sukeda:  Go away!  Shoo!  Shoo!          atchi     ike  shi_  shi_                                  that-way  go   shoo!crowd FX:  <mutter mutter>                 zawazawaAkane:  Hey, yuck!                      chotto  ya da~~~~2[Kyousuke leans over Madoka, as she regains consciousness.]Kyousuke:  Ayukawa!  Ayukawa!!             AYUKAWA!  AYUKAWA!!3[She reflexively scurries away.]Madoka:                           ___  AH!                             ha_Kyousuke:                         ___  It's me.                        ore da yo4[View pans back to show the two seated in a covered rest area.]Madoka:  Kasuga-kun...                   KASUGA-kun...Kyousuke:  Everything's fine now!!         mo-- DAIJOUBU!!5Madoka: [glaring]  Those guys...                   aitsura wa......6[Smiling, Kyousuke turns to watch the two led away by the officer, and followed by the crowd.]Kyousuke:  As you can see...!              goran no to--ri!crowd:                                                     ____       ___  Wha-a-at?  Those two are        e--  ano HITO-tachi ga   ya--       nee!  hoods, huh?!                         those-people   (S)  gangsters  (rhet)                                  ________  <whisper whisper>               hisohiso                                            ________  I hear they're panty thieves.   SHITAGI   dorobo--  da  tte                                  underwear thieves   are (I-hear)---------------------------------------------------p 68 (114)1[Madoka turns back to Kyousuke with a soft smile.]2[He touches her hair, which is still done up in a ponytail.]Kyousuke:  Your hair is wet.               KAMI ga   nurete-ru                                  hair (S)  is-getting-wet  The nights get cold even in     ikura    NANGOKU        demo  YORU  wa  the southern lands...           how-far  southern-lands even  night (T)                                  hieru          yo...                                  get-cold/chilly3Kyousuke: [getting up]  Well, shall we go...?           sa-- iko...4[He pauses...]5[...because a lovely girl seems to have become attached to his arm.]Madoka:  I'd like to stay here like      mo-- SUKOshi   kono mama de  this for a little while         a-little-more  at-moment-like-this  more.                                  itai           no                                  want-to-stay/be---------------------------------------------------p 69 (115)1[She closes her eyes and rests her cheek against his arm.]Kyousuke: (Tonight is...)                  (KON'YA wa......)2Kyousuke:                          ______ (...special!)                    (suteki yo!)3Akane: [bursting in]  Oh, there you are!!             a ita ita!!  Sorry, Kyousuke!                gomen ne  KYOUSUKE!  For interrupting your "Do       o-torikomi NAKA  o-jama shichatte  not disturb..."                   very-busy        intruding-(finality/                                                     regret)[The two quickly disengage with eyes grown large.]Kyousuke FX:                      ___  <urg!>                          gu_Madoka FX:                        __  <eek>                           gi4Akane:  Just a little bit longer        hikaru-chan to wa   mo-- chotto   datta  with Hikaru-chan and...         with-Hikaru    (T)  a-bit-longer  was                                  no ni...                                  even-tho                                  ____  <oof!>                          ugu_[Kyousuke clamps a hand over Akane's mouth.]Kyousuke: [wincing]  You didn't see a thing!         KIMI wa   nan ni mo  minakatta!                                  you  (T)  anything   not-saw5[A view beyond the pool--to the ocean, the horizon and the starry sky.  In triple insets, Madoka looks puzzled, Akane and Kyousuke smile at one another, and Hikaru lies asleep, hugging a pillow tightly.]Madoka:  ?                               ?narration:  Like so...                      sou...                                                             __  For this night only...          KON'YA dake         wa...  ne!  Right?!                         for-this-night-only (T)Hikaru:                           _______  Darling...                      da--rin......Hikaru FX:                        __________  <mumble in her sleep>           munyamunya---------------------------------------------------