Kimagure Orange Road"The Parallel Trip!"Volume 8, Story 3WB Volume 5, Story 1Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose                                 Craig Nishida                                 Spencer Hastings                                 Thomas Wyatt                                 Michael Chin                                 Jerry LeeLast revision : 07-17-95Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.eduNOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few      extras to those of you not having them.      Example: The subtitles on page 7 (53) are only in the WBs!---------------------------------------------------p 7 (53)--TITLE PAGE[Hikaru, in shirt and shorts, jumps in the air, kicks up both heels, and throws out her arms in a cheer.]MAIN TITLE (at top)               ________   _______  The Parallel Trip!              parareru - torippu!SUB-TITLE (at bottom)             _______  Bursting with Cuteness, the     kyu--to ni   hajikete  Eternal Summer Girl!            cute   (IO)  bursting-open/popping/                                               springing-off                                  TOKONATSU       MUSUME!                                  eternal-summer  girl-------------------------------------------------p 8 (54)<Commentary:  Well, they've made the spring switch to light-colored uniforms. This chapter appeared sometime in mid-June 1985.>1[Exterior shot of a school building.]school bell FX:                   ___ ___ ___ _____  <cling clong clang clonnng>     kin kon kan ko--nHikaru: [off]  Sempa-a-ai!                     sempa--i!2[Kyousuke's pov--with a brilliant smile, Hikaru presents a 3-level stack of boxed lunches.]Hikaru:  It's lunchtime...               o-hiru     desu  yo                                  lunchtime  isdramatic FX:  <WHUMP>                         do~~~~n3[Kyousuke recoils in shock, and his classmates look on in nervousness (guys) or merriment (a girl).]class:                            ______  <Ohhhhh!>                       o~~~~_4[Komatsu and Hatta peer in for a look.]Komatsu:                                                _______  Whoahh.  Today's menu is        o~~~~tto  HONJITSU no menyu-- wa  calf pie on Black Sea                     today    's menu    (T)  caviar, and foie gras...!                    ______                  ___                                  KOKKAI    no kyabia  ni   KO-USHI no pai                                  Black-Sea 's caviar (IO)  calf    's pie                                            _______                                  soshite   foagura    daa~~_                                  and/then  foie-gras  isnarration:  Even though I've moved to       hikaru-chan to no NAKA         wa  the high school section, my     with-Hikaru    's relationship (T)  relationship with Hikaru-chan  has become anything but         KOUTOU-BU ni       kite-mo  more distant...                 to-higher-section  even-tho-coming                                  TOUzakaru            dokoro-ka                                  become-more-distant  anything-but/far-from5[Running, she drags Kyousuke off.  A female classmate smiles and waves a hankie in farewell.]Hikaru:  Well, the weather's nice        saa  KYOU  wa   o-TENKI  mo  today, so let's go out to            today (T)  weather  as-well  the playground!                                  i--   koto   da  shi                                  nice  thing  is  and-besides                                  KOUTEI ni      demo          DEmasho_!                                  to-playground  or-something  shall-go-outnarration:                        ___________  Things just keep on             esukare--to suru  IPPOU        desu  escalating.                     escalate          simply/only  is---------------------------------------------------p 9 (55)1[Madoka leans back against a tree, reading a book.]2Hikaru: [off]  Madoka-sa-a-an!!                madoka-sa----n!![She looks up.]book:  City of Vanity                  KYOEI            no SHI       --Kobayashi <something>    vanity/vainglory 's city/town                                  KOBAYASHI <2-kanji>                                  (a-name)3[Hikaru and Kyousuke approach her, on the run.]Hikaru:  Why don't you eat this box      ISSHO ni  o-bento--_  TAbemasen  ka--_!!  lunch with us?!!                together  box-lunch!  not-eat    (?)  I made an extremely delicious   KYOU  wa   tobikkiri   oishi--    no  one today.                      today (T)  super-fine  delicious (nom)                                  tsukutta  n desu                                  made      (explan)4[Madoka portrait--eyes grow large.]5[Kyousuke and Hikaru portraits--Kyousuke sweats and blushes as Hikaru smiles sweetly over his shoulder.]6[With all three seated on the grass, Hikaru throws up her arms and smiles. Madoka watches her, still wide-eyed.]Hikaru:  Go on, eat!                     saa meshiagare_narration:  The three of us together...     3-NIN     sorotte            nante......                                  3-people  meeting/gathering  the-likes-of  Somehow, it was strange.        nanka    HEN na   no                                  somehow  strange  is---------------------------------------------------p 10 (56)1[Kyousuke watches Madoka as the two girls merrily smile.]narration:  But just once, I'd also         demo  ICHIDO de  i--   kara  like to try eating a box        but   on-once    okay  that's-why  lunch made for me by  Ayukawa.                        AYUKAWA no  tsukutte-kureta  o-bento-- tte                                          's  made-for-me      box-lunch (T)                                  no      mo    TAbete-mitai                                  (nom.)  also  want-to-try-and-eat2dream Madoka:  I made an extremely delicious   KYOU  wa   tobikkiri   oishi--    no  one today.                      today (T)  super-fine  delicious (nom)                                  tsukutta  no                                  made  Just for you, Kasuga-kun...!    KASUGA-kun  no tame ni...!                                              for-the-sake-of3dream Madoka: [smiling and feeding him]  Say, "ahh".                     a--ndream Kyousuke:  Ahh.                            a--nnarration:  Having this sort of thing       tama ni      wa   ko-- yu-- koto     mo  happen once in a while          occasionally (T)  this-kind-of-thing too  would be okay, wouldn't  it?                             atte    i--   no    de wa nai  daro--  ka                                  having  okay  (nom) is-not     poss-be (?)4Hikaru: [wide-eyed smile]  Oh yeah.  Just once, I'd        so-- da  atashi ICHIDO de   i--   kara  like to try eating a box                 I      at-the-same-time  that's-why  lunch made by Madoka-san.                                   okay                                  madoka-san no  tsukutta  o-bento--                                             's  made      box-lunch                                  TAbete-mitai         na                                  want-to-try-and-eatMadoka:  What?                           e[Kyousuke clutches his chest.]Kyousuke:                         ___  Ah!                             ha_5Hikaru: [turning to him]  I'm sure it would taste         kitto   oishi--  darou   naa  good.                           surely  tasty    poss-be  Right, Sempai?!                 ne--  SEMPAI!Kyousuke: [nervously]  W-well...                       so so da ne6Hikaru: [hands clasped together]  Please, Madoka-san!!            onegai shimasu madoka-san!!---------------------------------------------------p 11 (57)1Madoka: [nervously]  S-sure.  Okay...                u un  ii kedo...2[A view of the sky and a nearby school building.]Hikaru: [off]  Then, it's a promise!           ja    atashi    YAKUSOKU  desu   yo!                                  then  me        promise   it-is3[Kyousuke portrait--he smiles.]narration:  This is wonderful!              kore       wa   TANOshimi!                                  this-(one) (T)  a-pleasure/delight4[Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]Kurumi: [off]  Hooray-y-y!!  Thanks, Dad!      yatta--_!!    oto--san  arigatou                                                father    thanks5[Isolated shot of a cake in an opened box.  A hefty slice has been cut out of it.]Kurumi: [off]                     ______      ______  A cake!  It's a cake!           ke--ki da!  ke--ki da!Kyousuke: [off]  If you eat that much you        sonna ni   TAberu to  YUU gohan  won't have room for dinner!     that-much  if-eat     evening-meal                                  hairanaku naru     zo                                  not-be-containing  !!6Kurumi: [winking, with a fork in her mouth]  That's okay.                    i-- no  Then I won't need dinner.       ja    atashi  YUU gohan     iranai    mon                                  then  I       evening-meal  not-need  reasonKurumi FX:                        ____ ____ ____  <chomp chomp chomp>             paku paku paku7Kurumi: [smiling]                                                 ______  Unless it's my favorite         tadashi  DAIKOUBUTSU         no kare--  curry rice.  Then it's a        but-for  one's-favorite-dish 's curry  whole different story!                                  dattara  HANASHI wa   BETSU         da                                  if-is    story   (T)  a-difference  is                                        __                                  kedo  ne!                                  butManami: [off]  I'm home...                     tadaima----8[Manami prances in, beaming a smile.]Manami:                                                        ______  Ta-dah!  Kurumi, tonight        ja--n   kurumi  KON'YA  wa   kare-- da  yo  it's curry!                                     tonight (T)  curry  it's[Kyousuke breaks out in laughter as Kurumi pauses in eating and starts sweating.]---------------------------------------------------p 12 (58)1[The four sit at the table, eating dinner.]Manami:  What's the matter, Kurumi?      do-- shita no kurumi  Aren't you going to eat?        TAbenai no                                  ______  You like curry, don't you?      kare--  SUki na n desho                                  curry   liking  (poss-explan)Kurumi:  I'm full.                       o-naka   ippai                                  insides  full2Kyousuke: [stifling a chuckle]    ______  If *I'd* eaten four slices      ke--ki  4 -KO     mo   kutterya  of cake...                      cake    4-pieces  too  if-eatKurumi: [indignant]  It was THREE slices!            3 -KO     da  mon!                                  3-pieces  is  reason3Takashi: [smiling]  Well, it seems to be the        maa  amida          kuji     mitai na  luck of the draw.                    working-out/   lottery  seems                                       thinking-out/devising                                  mono   da na                                  reason isManami:  Luck of the draw?               amida kuji?4[Takashi portrait.]narration:                        ______  If she hadn't eaten cake,       ke--ki o TAbenakattara  she would have eaten the        if-did-not-eat-cake  curry, but...                   ______                                  kare-- o TAbereta hazu da  ga                                  should-have-ate-curry      but  Telling Kurumi not to eat       kurumi ni  ME no MAE ni      aru  cake set before her eyes        to-Kurumi  in-front-of-eyes  exists  is a more difficult thing       ______  to do than having an            ke--ki o TAberu na  to yuu-- no  wa  out-of-shape manga artist       don't-eat-cake!     telling-that (T)  pin down Andre the Giant.                           _____                                  UNDOUBUSOKU      no manga-KA ni                                  lack-of-exercise 's by-manga-artist                                  ______   __   _______     ___ ______                                  andore - za - jaianto o   pin fo--ru shiro                                  Andre-the-Giant      (O)  pin fall   poss-do                                  to yu--   IJOU ni    KONNAN na  koto                                  say-that  more-than  difficult  thing                                  da  kara        na                                  is  that's-why  But the problem is this.        shikashi  MONDAI  wa   koko ni  If Manami had arrived home      but       problem (T)  at-this-place  just a step sooner and  Kurumi had known that we        aru   moshi  manami ga   mou   HITOASHI  were having curry for dinner    have  if            (S)  more  a-step  before eating the cake...                                  HAYAku      KAEtte                                  soon/early  returning-home                                  ______                                  ke--ki o TAberu MAE ni  KON'YA  wa                                  before-eat-cake         tonight (T)                                  ______                                  kare-- da    to       wakatte-ireba...                                  curry  it-is (quote)  if-is-knowing5[A diagram shows the 2 forks diverging from the decision point.]diagram: [left fork]              ______             ______  Eat cake ===> Can't eat curry   ke--ki TAberu ===> kare-- TAberenai  ===> This ended up a big        eat-cake           can't-eat-curry  mistake                                  ===> kore       wa  shimatta  DAI-SHIPPAI                                       this-(one) (T) ended-up  great-blunderdiagram: [right fork]             ______              ______  Don't eat cake ===> Able to     ke--ki TAbenai ===> kare-- TAbereru  eat curry ===> Joy, joy         not-eat-cake        able-to-eat-curry                                  ===> medetashi medetashi                                       happy     joyous6Manami:  I see.                          naruhodo  Sorry, Kurumi.                  gomen ne-- kurumi7Manami:  If I'd only known the first     SEN no                 koto  ga  part!                           former/previous/first  thing (S)                                  wakaru to      i--   no ni     na                                  if-understand  okay  even-thoughTakashi:  But you didn't know, and        demo  wakaranai          kara  while returning home, you       but   not-understanding  that's-why  came across something nice  by accident.                    kaette          omoi ga kezu                                  returning-home  unforeseen/unexpected                                  i-- koto    ni   DEau         koto ga aru                                  good-thing (IO)  come-across  thing-exists                                  n da     yo                                  (explan)---------------------------------------------------p 13 (59)1Takashi:  When you stop and think         KANGAete-miru to  about it, it's a strange        when-try-and-think-about-it  thing.                                  FUSHIGI na      mon    ja nai ka                                  marvelous/      thing                                  mysterious/strange  If Kurumi's Power hadn't        moshi  MAE no MACHI de  been discovered in the          if     at-previous-town  last town, we might not                  _chikara_  have moved into *this*          kurumi no NOURYOKU ga   barete-inakattara  town...                                's Power    (S)  if-wasn't-discovered                                  washira  IKKA         datte                                  we       family/home  even/also                                  kono MACHI ni wa                                  to-this-town (contrast)                                  HIkKOshite-nakattaro--  shi...                                  poss-were-not-moving    and-besides2[Kyousuke stops and stares at his glass.]narration:  Then it follows that I          to--zen     AYUKAWA ya hikaru-chan tomo  wouldn't have met either        naturally/  both-Ayukawa-and-Hikaru  Ayukawa or Hikaru-chan.         as-a-matter-of-course                                  Atte-nakatta  koto ni  naru                                  have-not-met  matter   becomeKyousuke: (That means, for me, moving      (ore ni totte wa   HIkKOshite  yokatta  was good...)                     for-me       (T)  moving      was-good                                  to yu-- koto ka)                                  in-that-case (musing)3Manami:  If we hadn't moved then...      ano TOKI   HIkKOshite-nakattara...                                  that-time  if-were-not-moving  I wonder how we would have      atashi-tachi  do-- natte-ta  turned out.                     we            how  were-turning-out                                  no ka naa                                     I-wonder4Takashi:  Well, the only way to know      saate  sore        o   SHIru ni wa  that would be to go to "the            that-(one) (O)  to-know  (contrast)  universe in which we didn't  move."                          "ano TOKI   HIkKOshite-nai  SEKAI"                                   that-time  not-moving      universe/world                                  ni    demo          iku    shika nai  na                                  (IO)  or-something  to-go  only-haveManami:                                                  ________ ________  Oh, isn't that called a         a  so-- yu--     no    parareru wa--rudo  parallel world?                    that-kind-of (nom)  parallel-world                                  tte yu--         n desho                                  called/say-that  (poss-explan)5Kyousuke: [smiling]  I think I'd like to go once     ICHIDO itte   nozoite-mitai  to take a peek.                 once   going  want-to-try-and-peep-in                                  KI mo suru       ne                                  think/mind/care/worryTakashi:  Saying that's fine, but         itta wa   i--   kedo    NIDO to  you won't ever be able to       said (T)  okay  but     with-2-times/again  come back again!!                                  modotte-korenaku          naru    zo----_                                  not-being-able-to-return  become  !!    !6[Exterior night shot of the Kasuga apartment building.  A tiny portrait of a whining Kurumi appears on her speech bubble.  Kyousuke yells back on his speech bubble.]Kurumi:                                       ______  I wanna go to the world         atashi wa   kare-- ga   TAberareru  where I can eat curry!          I      (T)  curry  (S)  be-eating                                  SEKAI ni  ikitai      yo--_                                  to-world  want-to-go      !everyone else:                    __________  <Wah-ha-ha-ha-ha!>              wahahahahaKyousuke:  Don't be silly.                 ama--i                                  unrealistic/silly/simple/<lit.,"sweet">---------------------------------------------------p 14 (60)1[Smiling, Kyousuke walks to school alone.]narration:  The next day...                 YOKUJITSU----Kyousuke: (Today, Ayukawa is going to      (KYOU  wa   AYUKAWA ga   obento--   o  bring a box lunch.)              today (T)          (S)  box-lunch (O)                                  tsukutte-kite-kureru)                                  coming-to-make-for-mesigns:  Safety First                    ANZEN   JUU?   DAI-ICHI                                  safety  (ten)  firststore sign:  Vegetable Store                 YAOYA*                                  <*the 3rd kanji is normally a different YA                                   --don't know what to make of this>2[He looks up to visualize dream Madoka feeding him.]narration:  Hikaru-chan makes 3 people      hikaru-chan to  3-NIN     de  --and that's not bad either,    with-Hikaru     3-people  being  but if at all...                                  to yu-- no  mo   WARUkunai kedo                                  saying-that too  not-bad   but                                  do--se nara...                                  if-at-alldream Madoka:  Say, "ahh".                     a--ndream Kyousuke:  Ahh.                            a--n3narration:  Just for today, maybe           KYOU dake  wa   hikaru-chan  Hikaru-chan will catch          just-today (T)  a cold and be absent.           ____                                  kaze demo hi--te                                  catching-a-cold-or-something-(and)                                  YASUnde-kurenai              ka naa                                  not-be-absent-(favor-to-me)  I-wonder4[Too wrapped up in his dreams, he does the "Godai" and walks face-first into a utility pole.]Kyousuke face FX:                 ______  <CRASH>                         gochinpost sign:  <something> room                <a-kanji>  YOU/KATACHI       SHITSU                                             form/looks/shape  room5[Rubbing his forehead, he looks off-panel.]Kyousuke:  <Ow ow ow...>  Huh?!            tetete...  n?!6[Pov shifts to show him staring at a strange misty vortex which blocks the street before him.]sign on utility pole:  Air-conditioning                REIBOU---------------------------------------------------p 15 (61)1[He walks towards the fog...]Kyousuke:  What's this?                    nan da kore?2[...sticking his head in it...]Kyousuke:  Huh?!  Huh?!                    n_?  n_?3[...and coming out the other side.]Kyousuke FX:                      __________  ___  <scan>  <swish!>                kyorokyoro  su_4Kyousuke: [running]  Oh no, I'm late.                ikene  CHIKOKU daschool bell FX:                   ___ ___ ___ ___  <cling clong clang clong>       kin kon kan kon5[His pov as he comes upon a strolling Madoka in the hallway.]6Kyousuke: [smiling]  Good morning!!                  ohayo----_!!---------------------------------------------------p 16 (62)1[Madoka gives him a stern glare...]2[...and turns abruptly away.]Madoka FX:                        ____  <fwip!>                         pui_3Kyousuke:  ?                               ?4[Exterior shot of a school building.]5Kyousuke: [looking at his watch] (Soon now, as always,            (mo--     sorosoro  itsu-mo no you ni  Hikaru-chan should be            already  soon      like-always  coming...                                  hikaru-chan ga   yatte-kuru hazu                                              (S)  should-turn-up  3...  2...  1...)               3 - 2 - 1)6[He looks up towards the door, but...]FX:  <silence>                       shi~~nKyousuke:  ?                               ?7[Standing at the window, he looks across towards Hikaru's classroom.  He doesn't see her.]Kyousuke:  She isn't coming...?            konai na......?8Komatsu:  Hey, Kasuga.  What are you      oi KASUGA  nani  boketto shite-ru  n da  yo  looking so spaced-out at?                  what  becoming-senile   (explan)Hatta:                                    ___  C'mon, they'll be sold out      oraora  pan    UriKIrechimau  zo  of bread!                               bread  be-sold-out-(finality/regret)---------------------------------------------------p 17 (63)1[Kyousuke laughs in embarrassment.]Kyousuke:                               ___  But, Hikaru-chan's coming       demo  ore  hikaru-chan ga   kuru  kara...  for me...                       but   me               (S)  come  that's-whyKomatsu: [wide-eyed]  What?  Who's "Hikaru-chan?"     nan da yo    sono  hikaru-chan tte?                                  what's-that  that              (quote)2[Komatsu drags Kyousuke away by the scruff of his neck.]Kyousuke:  So there's the box lunch...     da kara     o-bento--  o...                                  that's-why  box-lunch (O)Komatsu FX:  <yank>                          guiKomatsu:  What are you babbling about     nani  neboketa        koto  itte   n da!  in your sleep?!                 what  was-half-asleep thing saying (explan)  We're going!!                   iku zo--_!!3[A view of the school grounds.]Hatta and Komatsu FX:             __ __ __ __ __ __  <Wah ha ha ha ha ha!>           wa ha ha ha ha ha4[Hatta breaks out in laughter.  Komatsu eats his sandwich and studies Kyousuke.  The three stand outside.]Komatsu:  Then, you're saying that        sore de      itsu-mo  this so-called Hikaru girl      and-so/then  always  always brought you box  lunches?                        sono hikaru tte     KO   ga   omae ni                                  that        (quote) girl (S)  for-you                                  o-bento--  mottekite-kureta  tte yu-- no ka?                                  box-lunch  brought-for-you   saying-that (?)Komatsu FX:                       ________  <munch munch>                   mogumogu5[Kyousuke does a top-notch dewy-eyed Hikaru impression.  Kawaii!]Kyousuke:                                     ________  She has short, silky hair,      da kara     sarasara                  no  and huge eyes, like this.       that's-why  FX-for-feel-of-silky-hair 's                                  _______ _____                                  sho--to katto   de   ME   ga  konna ni                                  short-cut-(hair)     eyes (S) like-this                                  okkikute                                  <oukikute> = hugeKyousuke as Hikaru:  Sempai!                         sempai!Komatsu:  Have you got a fever or         omae  NETSU demo         aru  n ja nai  no  something?                      you   fever or-something have (explan/neg)6Hatta: [pointing a finger at Kyousuke's nose]  Besides, there's no reason      daitai        omae ga  you'd be popular with a         on-the-whole  you  (S)  cute girl like that.                                  sonna kawaii KO ni           moteru                                  with-that-kind-of-cute-girl  be-popular                                  wake    ne--         daro                                  reason  <nai> = not  poss-beKomatsu: [gaze downcast]  How sad.  'Cause he's so        kawaiso-- ni  anmari motenai  n de  unpopular with girls, he's      pitiful       so-unpopular    ('cause)  gone crazy.                                  KASUGA no yatsu  okashiku                                  that-Kasuga      laughable/comical/strange                                  natta   n ja nai    no  ka                                  became  (explan/neg)    (?)7narration:  Have these guys completely      koitsura    hikaru-chan o   KANZEN ni  forgotten about                 these-guys             (O)  thoroughly  Hikaru-chan...?!                                  WASUrete-ru...?!                                  be-forgetting                                  ___  I wonder if I'm dreaming        ore  YUME   demo          mite  n no ka na  or something.                   I    dream  or-something  seeing     I-wonderKyousuke: [smiling, pointing at his face]  Hey, pinch me.                  chotto tsunette-kureru8[A hand extends from off-panel to do just that.]Kyousuke:  Ow-ow-ow-ouch!                  itetetetecheek FX:  <pinch!>                        gyu_narration:  I-it's not a dream!!            yu YUME   ja nai_!!                                     dream  is-not---------------------------------------------------p 18 (64)1[Turning, Kyousuke spies Madoka walking.]narration:  That's it, the box lunch!!      so-- da  o-bento--!!2Kyousuke: [running]  Ayukawa!                        AYUKAWA![Horror fills the faces of Komatsu and Hatta.]Komatsu:                          ____  Idiot!  Get back here!          baka  yose!         dare ni  KOE kakete  Who do you think you're               bring-nearer  to-who   calling-out  yelling at?!                                  n da    yo                                  (explan)3Komatsu:  Have you forgotten who she      omae  aitsu       ga   dare-ka  WASUreta  is?                             you   that-person (S)  somebody forgotten                                  wake ja nai daro--   na                                  is-possibly-the-caseKyousuke: [smiling]  That's Ayukawa.                 AYUKAWA daro  Uhh, what's the matter?         sore ga  do-- shita no?4[Komatsu and Hatta nervously watch what goes on off-panel.]Kyousuke: [off]  Hey-y-y, Ayukawa.               o--i  AYUKAWAKomatsu:  There's something wrong with    KASUGA no yatsu  yappari    KYOU  wa  Kasuga today after all!         that-Kasuga      after-all  today (T)                                  do--ka shite-ru    ze                                  is-something-wrong !Hatta:  What amazing courage...         sugoi    DOKYOU        da  na--                                  amazing  courage/guts  is5[He runs up to her, and she looks back.  This is definitely a more <furyou> Madoka...]Kyousuke:  Say!  Did you make a box        nee!  o-bento--  tsukutte-kite-kureta?  lunch for me?                         box-lunch  come-and-made-for-me6Madoka:  Box lunch?                      o-bento--?---------------------------------------------------p 19 (65)1Madoka:  Why must I make something       nande  atashi ga   anta ni  sonna mono  like that for you?              why    I      (S)  for-you  thing-like-that                                  tsukuranakya ikenai  no yo                                  must-make2Kyousuke: [taken aback]  Eh?                             e3narration:  Did I do something that         nani-ka    OKOraseru   yo-- na  might have made her mad?        something  make-angry  it-looks-like                                  koto  demo         shita  kke                                  thing or-something done   (?)Kyousuke: [embarrassed]  Oh, that's right.  Have you     a  so-- da  hikaru-chan SHIranai?  heard from Hikaru-chan?                                 not-find-out  She's nowhere to be found.      doko ni mo  inai         n da                                  at-nowhere  <not>-there  (explan)Madoka:  Hikaru?                         hikaru?4Madoka: [sternly]  Who the hell is that?           ittai         DARE no koto?  hikaru tte  "Hikaru."                       in-the-world  about-who            (quote)5Kyousuke:  Ah?!                            ha?!narration:  Even Ayukawa...                 AYUKAWA made...  What on earth is wrong with     minna     ittai         do-- shita n darou  everyone?                       everyone  in-the-world  what's-the-matter6[Madoka steps closer to stare him in the eye.]Madoka:  What the heck are you trying    daitai        anta  ittai  to pull?                        on-the-whole  you   in-the-world                                  do-- yu-- tsumori                                  what-kind-of-intention  All this time, calling out      sakki kara     narenareshiku  to me with undue familiarity,   for-some-time  with-familiarity  and complaining about some  box lunch!                      KOE o kakete-kite         o-bento-- ga                                  coming-to-call-out-(and)  box-lunch (S)                                  do--noko--no tte!                                  complaining-aboutMadoka approach FX:               ___  <ZIP>                           zui---------------------------------------------------p 20 (66)1[She steps back, and pulls out something from her skirt pocket.]Madoka:  What does it matter...          do-- demo i--          kedo...                                  not-matter-either-way  but2[She puts a cigarette in her mouth and lights up.]cigarette FX:                     ______  <puff!>                         shubo_3[Kyousuke portrait--she exhales on him.  He winces.]Madoka exhale FX: [off]           ___  <phoo!>                         fu_4Madoka:  I don't know you well at        atashi  anta no koto  yoku SHIranai  shi  all, nor have I ever met        I       about-you     not-know-well  and  this "Hikaru" girl.                                  sono  hikaru tte     KO   datte                                  that         (quote) girl also                                  Atta koto mo nai                                  I-have-not-met5Madoka:  I don't have any friends in     kono GAKKOU ni wa...  TOMODACHI nante  this school.                    in-this-school (T)    friends   or-such                                  inai     yo                                  not-have6[He does a slow burn.]7Madoka: [walking away]  Sorry.  I thought I knew        WARUi ne    HITOchigai da yo  you.                            bad         thought-I-knew-youKyousuke:                                  ____  Y-you idiot!!                   so sonna baka na_!!---------------------------------------------------p 21 (67)1[He grabs her shoulder from behind and spins her about.]narration:  What in the world is the        AYUKAWA ittai         do-- shita  n da  matter with Ayukawa?                    in-the-world  what's-the-matterKyousuke:  W-wait!!                        ma mate yo!!2[With his free hand he takes and flings aside her cigarette.  Oh, I think we know where this is leading to...  ^_^]3Kyousuke:  I'm sure I'm having a bad       kitto  dream.                          surely                                  WARUi YUME  demo          mite-ru   n da                                  bad-dream   or-something  be-seeing (explan)4Madoka: [glaring at his hand on her shoulder]  Well, then let me wake you      so-- ne    ja    atashi ga  up!                                        then  I      (S)                                  samasasete-ageru   yo                                  make-you-awake5[She connects to his cheek.]Madoka:  Don't touch me so freely!       kiyasuku             sawaranai  de!                                  be-easily-of-access  not-touch  beingMadoka hand FX:                   ___  <WHAM>                          pan---------------------------------------------------p 22 (68)1[She walks away.  Kyousuke holds his injured cheek.]Madoka:                           ____  If you don't wanna get          kega shitakunakattara    ne...  hurt...                         if-not-wanted-to-get-hurt2narration:  AYUKAWA!!                       AYUKAWA!!3narration:  I feel as though I've           itsu-ka   doko-ka de  met an Ayukawa like this        sometime  at-somewhere  sometime, somewhere...                                  ko-- yu-- AYUKAWA     ni   Atta                                  this-kind-of-Ayukawa (IO)  met/seen                                  yo-- na     KI ga suru...                                  looks-like  think/feel  Oh yeah!                        so-- da!  When I first met her at         HAJImete  GAKKOU de  Atta  TOKI...  school...                       first     at-school  met   time4[Komatsu and Hatta approach him.]narration:  But there's only one thing      demo  ano TOKI to     hitotsu dake  that's different...             but   from-that-time  only-one                                  chigau           tokoro  wa                                  different/wrong  feature (T)  Hikaru-chan isn't here...!      hikaru-chan ga   inai        koto  da...!                                              (S)  isn't-here  thing isKomatsu:  Hey, I told you.                hora na--    da kara     itta ro                                  hey          that's-why  poss-saidHatta:  I'm glad you got off so         kore gurai de    sunde       yokatta  na--  lightly...                      with-this-much   being-over  was-good5[Shot of a building in town.]narration:  But...                          shikashi...  That means that this is--       kore       wa   ZANNEN na koto     ni  regrettably--not a dream...     this-(one) (T)  regrettable-thing (IO)                                  YUME   ja nai  to yu-- koto wa...                                  dream  is-not  that-means6Manami: [flashback]                                      ________ ________  Oh, isn't that called a         a  so-- yu--     no    parareru wa--rudo  parallel world?                    that-kind-of (nom)  parallel-world                                  tte yu--         n desho                                  called/say-that  (poss-explan)narration:                                     ________ ________  Does this happen to be a        hyottoshite  parareru wa--rudo  parallel world in which         happen-to    parallel-world  Hikaru-chan doesn't exist?!                                  hikaru-chan no  inai        SEKAI?!                                              (S) isn't-here  world/universe7[Walking home with Komatsu and Hatta, he suddenly stops and searches about.]Kyousuke: [flash} (Come to think of it, I          (so-- ieba            kesa  passed through a strange         come-to-think-of-it  this-morning  fog this morning, and  things ended up this way.)      hen na   moya          no NAKA    o                                  strange  haze/mist/fog 's within (O)                                  to--rinukete     kara                                  passing-through  that's-why                                  ko-- yu-- koto ni natchatta    n da)                                  became-this-kind-of-thing-     (explan)                                  (finality/regret)Kyousuke FX:                      __________  <scan>                          kyorokyoroKyousuke: (If that's the case, then        (da to sureba        ano moya  o...)  that fog...)                     if-that's-the-case  that-fog (O)Komatsu:  What's he doing?                nani  yatte  n da                                  what  doing  (explan)Hatta:  He's certainly acting           aitsu     yappa        okashi--  zo  strangely!                      that-guy  sure-enough  strange   !!---------------------------------------------------p 23 (69)1[Pov from further down the street.  The three guys walk towards us.  In the foreground is an open manhole cover and a caution sign.]narration:  But...                          shikashi...  That fog was nowhere...         ano moya wa   mou  doko ni mo                                  that-fog (T)  now  at-nowherehazard sign:  Under Construction              KOUJICHUU2[Kyousuke walks with eyes downcast.]narration:  ...to be found.                 mitsukeru     koto  wa   dekinakatta                                  come-across/  thing (T)  was-not-able-to                                  find/catch-sight-ofTakashi: [flashback]  Saying that's fine, but         itta wa   i--   kedo    NIDO to  you won't ever be able to       said (T)  okay  but     with-2-times/again  come back again!!                                  modotte-korenaku          naru    zo----_                                  not-being-able-to-return  become  !!    !3[He looks up at the sky.]narration:  But...                          shikashi...  It's only Hikaru-chan who's     hikaru-chan ga  inai       dake       de  gone, yet things are so                     (S) isn't-here only/alone being  much different...                                  konna ni   KAwatte-shimau  nante...                                  like-this  be-different-   the-likes-of                                             (finality/regret)Kyousuke: (Now...  There's no other        (mou...    kono SEKAI de  Ikite-yuku  choice but to live in this                 in-this-world  living/existing  world.)                                  shika nai  no ka)                                  only-have     (?)4[Greatly discouraged, he again turns his gaze down to the ground.]narration:  I'm ashamed of myself for       honno ISSHUN demo    hikaru-chan ga  having thought--even for        even-for-an-instant              (S)  an instant--that it would  be nice if Hikaru-chan          inakereba      i--   nante  wasn't around...                if-isn't-here  okay  the-likes-of                                  omotta   JIBUN ga   hazukashii...                                  thought  self  (S)  ashamed/embarrassKyousuke:  I'm sorry, Hikaru-chan.         gomen ne hikaru-chanKomatsu:  Still saying that.              mada   itte-ra                                  still  be-saying5[With a wide grin, Komatsu slaps Kyousuke on the back, sending him flying forward.]Komatsu:  Enough.  Cheer up!!             i--kagen    GENKI DAse yo!!                                  moderate    cheer-upKomatsu back slap FX:             ___  <thud>                          don6Kyousuke: [staggering towards the open manhole]  Whoops!                         ottotto_Kyousuke hopping FX:              ___ ___  <thump thump>                   ton ton7[Falling towards the hole, the fog makes a sudden reappearance.]Kyousuke:  WAH!                            wa---------------------------------------------------p 24 (70)1[Kyousuke crashes through a tree to the ground.  Madoka, standing nearby, spins around at the sound.  They are on school grounds.]Kyousuke FX:                      ____  <THUD>                          dosaleaves FX:                        __ __ __  <rustle>                        za za za2Kyousuke: [clutching his head]  Ow, that hurts!                 tetetete_Madoka: [horrified]  Kasuga-kun!!                    KASUGA-kun_!!3[She leans over the stunned Kyousuke.]Madoka:  Just when I thought you         mattaku  mo--       inai  weren't around at all...        at-all   no-longer  <not>-be-here                                  inai         to omottara                                  not-be-here  when-thought-that  What were you doing here?       nani  yatte-ta   no yo                                  what  were-doing                                  konna tokoro de                                  at-this-kind-of-placeKyousuke: [dazed]  Nnnn.                           u~~n4[He comes to.  His eyes bug out and he flinches away from her.]Kyousuke:  <yikes!>                        biku_5[He watches as she sticks her hand in her skirt pocket.]Kyousuke FX:  <tremble in fear>               bikunreaction FX:                      ___ ___  <clong clong>                   gon gon6[His face is pure horror.]narration:                                 __ ______  Not again...  C-cigarettes?!    mata...  ta tabako?!7[She gently wipes his face with her handkerchief.  He stares up at her, wide-eyed.]Madoka:  Here...  Show me your face.     hora...  KAODA shite                                  look     visiting/putting-in-an-appearancehandkerchief FX:  <wipe wipe>                     fuki fukinarration:  Eh?  Th-then!!                  e?  ji jaa!!---------------------------------------------------p 25 (71)1[His pov of a smiling, happy-to-see-her-Darling, Hikaru.  She waves.]Hikaru:  Sempa-a-ai!                     sempa--i2narration:  I-it's Hikaru-chan!             hi hikaru-chan da!3Hikaru: [running up]  Where were you...?!             doko ni   ita   n desu    ka----_?!                                  at-where  were  (explan)  (?)narration:  Great!!                         yokatta!!  I've come back to the           MOTO no SEKAI ni      modoreta  n da  original universe.              to-original-universe  returned  (explan)4[The three sit on the grass.  Madoka begins to unwrap her box lunch.]Hikaru: [smiling]  C'mon, Madoka-san!  Hurry,      sa--_    madoka-san  HAYAku  HAYAku!!  hurry!!narration:  Now, I can say with             ima  dattara  hakkiri to ieru  certainty--THIS PLACE is        now  when-is  can-certainly-say  the best!                                  *koko*       ga   ICHIBAN!                                  "this-place" (S)  best4(inset)[Both girls stare at Kyousuke.  Hikaru points to her own cheek.  Kyousuke trembles with nervousness.]Hikaru:  Oh, there's a handprint on      are  hoppe no TEGATA  your cheek.                          cheek 's promissory-note/bill/draft  What happened?                  do-- shita n desu kaMadoka: (It wasn't me today.)            (KYOU  wa   atashi  ja nai  yo ne)                                   today (T)  I       am-not---------------------------------------------------