Kimagure Orange Road"The Devious Criminal of Love"Volume 7, Story 9WB Volume 4, Story 13Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose                                 Craig Nishida                                 Spencer Hastings                                 Matthew Klippenstein                                 Jerry Lee                                 Thomas Wyatt                                 Jordan LampeLast revision : 07-03-95Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.eduNOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few      extras to those of you not having them.      Example: The subtitles on page 263 (177) are only in the WBs!---------------------------------------------------p 263 (177)-TITLE PAGE[Madoka sits in a chair, having tea at a table.  She's dressed stylishly in knee-length pants, shirt, open vest, and hoop earrings; her hair pulled back by a wide bow.  Behind her, on a wall, are posted various bilingual bank signs.]MAIN TITLE (at top)  The Devious Criminal of Love    KOI  no CHINOUHAN                                  love 's an-intellectual-criminal/crimeSUB-TITLE (at bottom)             _____  The Modern Lady and the         modan na  SHUKUJO               to  Moonlight...                    modern    lady/well-bred-woman  and                                  TSUKIakari                                  the-moonlight  Memories of a Dream,            YUME no KIOKU               wa  They Know No National           dream's recollection/memory (T)  Boundaries...!                                  MU-KOKUSEKI...!                                  a-person-of-no-nationality/an-expatriate---------------------------------------------------p 264 (178)1[The morning sun peeks past the side of the Kasuga apartment building.]2[Kyousuke, still in bed, opens his eyes and looks at us.]Kyousuke:  Hmm...                          u~~~~n......birds FX: [off]                   ____ ____  <twitter>                       chun chun3[His pov of what he's gazing at.  Hikaru lies in bed beside him, looking back at him.  Her shoulders are bare.]birds FX: [off]                   ___ ___  <chirp chirp...>                chi chi...4[Overhead view shows them facing and lying beside each other.  Hikaru smiles warmly.]Hikaru:  Good morning <heart-symbol>.    ohayou <heart-symbol>Kyousuke: [smiling back]  Ah!  Good mor...                a  oha...---------------------------------------------------p 265 (179)1[Kyousuke's eyes bug out.]2[He pulls back, in shock.]Kyousuke:  EHHH!?!                         ee--_?!Kyousuke sit-up FX:               _____  <SPROING>                       gabaa3[As he chews on his nails, Hikaru sits up, pulling the sheet with her to cover up.  She turns aside, and with a hand tries to stifle her laughter.]narration:  Wh-what the heck?!              ko kore       wa   ittai_?!                                     this-(one) (T)  in-the-worldHikaru:  <stifled giggles>               ku_ ku_ ku_Kyousuke:  Ah!                             ha_4[With a sparkle, Hikaru's form is replaced by Akane's.]Kyousuke: [livid]  AKANE!!                         akane_!!Akane:                            _ __ __ __ __ __  Ah ha ha ha ha ha!              a ha ha ha ha haAkane transformation FX:          ___  <phoot!>                        fu_5Kyousuke:  Jeez!                           mattaku!  What a nasty trick!!            tachi no WARUi  itazura         o!!                                  nasty/wicked    practical-joke (O)Akane: [merrily]  Just joking, just joking.       jo--dan yo   jo--dan6[They sit on the edge of his bed.]Kyousuke: [calmed]  But...                          shikashi...  What's with you today?          KYOU  wa   nan  da?                                  today (T)  what is-this  So early in the morning.        ASAppara karaAkane: [smiling out at a sunny day]  It's an eagerly-awaited         sekkaku      no NICHIYOUBI  o-TENKI  Sunday and the weather's        long-awaited 's Sunday      weather  so nice...                                  mo    i--   shi                                  also  fine  and-besides---------------------------------------------------p 266 (180)1[Akane takes the guise of an ultra-cute Hikaru.]@Hikaru: [begging]                ______  Let's go on a date!             de--to shimasho!                                  shall-dateKyousuke: [wincing]  Quit turning into Hikaru-chan   ichiichi  every single time!              one-by-one/everything/each                                  hikaru-chan ni  BAkeru na!                                  into-Hikaru     don't-transform-(command)<Translation note:  Another reminder.  Since Akane takes on the form of other characters, this will be denoted in the script with a "@" symbol. That is, Akane disguised as Hikaru will be denoted by "@Hikaru".>2Akane:  But it makes you so happy.      ureshi--           kuse ni                                  delightful/joyful  although  You thought she was really      HONTOU ni semararete-ru             mitai de  pressuring you so your heart    really    pressing-(a-person-to-do) seeming  was pounding, wasn't it.        ________                                  dokidoki shita               n desho                                  went-pitapat/heart-throbbed  (poss-explan)Kyousuke: [hopping mad]  It's not like that, I tell      sonna      n ja nai      ttara!  you!                            like-that  (not-explan)  (I-tell-you)3Akane:  Really, if you only say         mattaku  so-- yatte  negative things like that       truly    doing-like-that  she'll get disgusted with  you.                            SHOUKYOKU-TEKI na koto  bakkari  itte-ru to                                  negative-thing          just     if-be-saying                                  ano KO ni     AISO tsukasarechau        yo                                  by-that-girl  be-disgusted-(finality/regret)4Akane: [in his face]  This might be the first and     KYOUSUKE ga   ONNA no KO ni  SUkareru  last time you'll be liked                (S)  by-girl        to-be-liked  by a girl.                                  nan-te  SAISHO     de        SAIGO                                  what!   the-first  be-(and)  the-last                                  kamoshirenai    n da     kara                                  it-is-possible (explan)  that's-whyAkane FX:                         ____  <zip!>                          zui_Kyousuke: [sweating]  ..........                      ..........5[Kyousuke stands and looks at his clock.  It reads 10:02 AM.]narration:  Anyway...                       sonna koto          yori                                  that-kind-of-thing  rather-than6[With wide-eyed anticipation, he visualizes Madoka in tiny tennis whites. She holds ball and racquet and is ready to serve.]narration:  Today, it's tennis with         nanto  HONJITSU wa   AYUKAWA to issho ni  Ayukawa!                        how!   today    (T)  together-with-Ayukawa                                  ______                                  tenisu  na  n desu!                                  tennis  is  (explan)---------------------------------------------------p 267 (181)1Kyousuke: [with racquet]  Well...  I'm off!               saa~~tte  itte-kima~~su!Akane: [smiling]                  ___  There you are!                  hoi                      kita!                                  without-any-trouble/now  came2[Kyousuke portrait--he smiles...]3[...but then looks at Akane with a blank expression.]Kyousuke:  What...?!                       nani ga......?!Akane:  Ohh!  How cruel!                a--_  hidoi naa4[Akane gets in his face with an irritated look.]Akane:  The other day, you promised     kono MACHI o   ANNAI shite-kureru tte  to show me around this town.    this-town (O)  show-me-around     (T)                                  kono aida      YAKUSOKU shita  daro                                  the-other-day  promised        poss-beKyousuke: [embarrassed]  Oh no!                          ikene_!5Kyousuke:  So, Kurumi, could you...        ja    kurumi  omae  akane to...                                  then          you   with-AkaneKurumi: [hoofing it]  I made a promise to my          atashi  KYOU   TOMOdachi to  YAKUSOKU ga  friends today.                  I       today  with-friends  promise  (S)                                  aru  no                                  have6Kyousuke:  Then, Manami!                   ja manami!Manami:  Sorry-y-y.  I made a promise,   gome--n  atashi mo   EIGA  no  too--to see a movie.            sorry    I      too  movie (S)                                  YAKUSOKU shite-ru  no                                  is-promising7Akane:  How about you, Kyousuke?        KYOUSUKE wa   do--      na no                                           (T)  how/what  You have some business to       nanka  YOUJI            aru  no?  take care of?                   some   business/errand  haveKyousuke: [smiling]                                 ______  Yeah.  Tennis with Ayukawa...   un  AYUKAWA to    tenisu  o...                                      with-Ayukawa  tennis (O)8Akane: [glaring]  "Ayukawa"?!                     AYUKAWA tte?!Kyousuke: [sweating]              ___  Ah!                             ha_---------------------------------------------------p 268 (182)1Akane: [in his face]  WHO'S THAT?                     dare  sono HITO?                                  who   that-personAkane FX:                         ___  <ZIP>                           zuinarration:  O-oh no!                        i ikene_!2Akane: [sitting]  Could it be a girl?             moshi-ka-shite  ONNA no KO?                                  possibly/maybe  girlKyousuke:  Oh, come to think of it,        a  so-- ieba            so--     ka na  I guess she is.                    come-to-think-of-it  like-so  I-wonder                                  __ __ __  <ha ha ha!>                     ha ha hanarration:  This is Akane.                  akane no koto  da                                  about-Akane    is  If I tell her the truth,        SHOUJIKI ni HANAseba  wakatte-kureru darou  she'll understand.              if-speak-the-truth    poss-understand-me3[Akane, cheek in hand, ponders...]Akane:                                               ____________  Hmm.  She's a classmate of      fu--n  KYOUSUKE no kurasume--to  de  yours, and Hikaru-chan adores   hmm    your-classmate            being-(and)  her like a big sister.  Her  sempai, huh?                    hikaru-chan ga   ANE no you ni                                              (S)  like-a-big-sister                                  SHITAtte-ru    SEMPAI kaa                                  is-adoring            (musing)4[Akane turns to fix a stare at Kyousuke, who stands and looks back at her blankly.]Akane:  But...                          demo...  Why are just you and that       nande  KYOUSUKE ga   sono AYUKAWA-san to  Ayukawa-san playing tennis?     why             (S)  with-that-Ayukawa                                                    ______                                  futari de         tenisu suru   wake?                                  between-2-people  doing-tennis  reason5[Identical tableau to previous panel.  They simply stare at each other.]---------------------------------------------------p 269 (183)1Akane:  I see...                        so-- ka...Akane FX:                         _____  <smile!>                        niko_2Akane: [viciously]  YOU DEVIOUS CROOK!!             kono  CHINOUHAN!!                                  this  intellectual-criminalKyousuke FX:                      _____  <URKK!>                         giku_3Akane: [smiling]  If you get chummy with this     ANE         DOUZEN no HITO to  "just-like-a-big-sister,"       big-sister  with-similar-kind-of-person  she can smoothly act as  the go-between in your          NAKAyoku shitokeba  relationship <with                      <shite-okeba)  Hikaru-chan>!                   if-get-on-good-terms-(with)-(for-future-sake)                                  futari no NAKA           o   umaku                                  2-people's-relationship (O)  successfully/                                                               skillfully                                  torimotte-moraeru             mon    na!                                  acting-as-go-between-for-you  person[Kyousuke does a pratfall.]4[He gets up, wiping his brow.  Akane studies him.]Akane: (But, still, I'm worried...      (shikashi  sore ni shite mo    SHIMPAI da...                                   but       still/for-all-that  worry   is  He's had an indecisive          koitsu    MUKASHI kara  personality from the very       this-guy  from-the-beginning/since-old-times  beginning, so even at the  best of times he sucks at       hakkiri shinai        SEIKAKU  communicating his feelings      indefinite/unsettled  character/personality  to others.)                                  da kara                                  that's-why                                  HITO ni    JIBUN no KIMOchi o                                  to-people  self's-feelings (O)                                  TSUTAeru no   wa   hetakuso      mo                                  communicating (T)  awful/sucks/  even                                                     good-for-nothing                                  i--   toko  da  mon     na)                                  good  time  is  reason5[She closes her eyes and thinks deeply.]Akane: (What's more, this Ayukawa       (sore ni  AYUKAWA tte     HITO    datte  person is also a girl...         moreover         (quote) person  also                                  ONNA  da  shi                                  girl  is  and-besides  And it would be terrible        myou na  kanchigai sarecha  if there were some strange      strange           <sarete-wa>  misunderstanding...)                     be-misunderstood                                  TAIHEN   da...)                                  terrible isAkane FX:                         __________  <mutter>                        butsubutsuKyousuke:  ?                               ?6Akane: (I know.  While I'm at it...)    (sou da  isso               no koto)                                           rather/preferably  (about)7Akane: (If I transform myself into      (atashi ga   AYUKAWA-san no MAE de  Hikaru-chan, and totally         I      (S)  in-front-of-Ayukawa  flirt with Kyousuke in front  of Ayukawa-san, then the        hikaru-chan ni BAkete     TETTEI-TEKI ni  two will happily become an      transforming-into-Hikaru  thoroughly  officially recognized  couple!)                        ichatsukeba      futari   wa                                  if-flirt-with    2-people (T)                                  medetaku          osumitsuki                                  happily/joyously  a-paper-bearing-(a-                                                    person's)-signature                                     _______                                  no kappuru  da!)                                  's couple   is---------------------------------------------------p 270 (184)1Akane: [smiling at Kyousuke] (Kyousuke's face will light      (KYOUSUKE no yorokobu  KAO  ga   mieru)  up with joy.)                             's delighted face (S)  be-seen                                  __ __ ___  <heh heh heh!>                  fu fu fu_Kyousuke:  ?                               ?2[On a street at a railroad crossing, Akane urges along a reluctant Kyousuke.]Kyousuke:  U-uhh.                          a anoAkane:  Come on, come on.               i-- kara i-- karagate sign:  Don't Pass                      kuguru nasign: [right]  Off Limits to <something>       <blurry-characters> TACHIIRI KINSHIsign: [upper left]  Chamber of Commerce <?>         HYOUTENKAI3[As they walk, Kyousuke casts a nervous look at his beaming cousin.]narration:  Oh no.  She came along.         komatta na    tsuite-kichatta                                  was-troubled  came-along-(finality/regret)4Kyousuke: (Still, I don't have any         (kore        to itte      KOTOWAru  reason to refuse her...)         this-(one)  saying-that  to-decline/excuse                                  RIYUU   mo    nai        kedo...)                                  reason  even  not-there  but5narration:  But this is Akane we're         akane no koto  da  talking about.                  about-Akane    is  If she meets Ayukawa, she's     AYUKAWA ni Aeba  kitto   mata   tonde-mo-nai  sure to meddle outrageously     if-meet-Ayukawa  surely  again  outrageous  again!                                  osekkai   o   suru  ni   kimatte-ru!                                  meddling (O)  do   (IO)  be-bound-to-doKyousuke: [looking at her] (If possible, it would be        (dekireba     Awasenai      ho-- ga...)  better if I keep them from       if-possible  not-let-meet  better  meeting...)Akane:  Hmm?                            n?banner:  Traffic Safety...               KOUTSUU ANZEN...pole sign:  Fresh Fish Store                SENGYO-TEN6Kyousuke: [forced smile]  N-nothing.                      i iya---------------------------------------------------p 271 (185)1Komatsu: [exiting a record store]  Huh?                            are?window sign: [middle]  This month's new music--        KONGETSU no   SHIN   FU  on the Keyboard Corner          this-month's  new    music/score/album                                  #ON THE KEYBOARD CORNER#window sign: [left]  Buddhist Altar Equipment        BUTSUGUsidewalk sign:                    ________  ________  _____  RECORDS  Music  Tapes           reko--do  myujikku  te-pu2Akane:  A friend?                       TOMOdachi?Kyousuke:  Uh-huh.                         un3Akane: [sparkling with the Power] (Good.  Here's one.)             (yoshi  koko wa   hitotsu)                                          here (T)  once/oneAkane transformation FX:          ___  <phoot!>                        fu_<Commentary:  In the following sequence, recall that Akane's Power of Illusion can only be directed at one person at a time.>4Komatsu:  Hey, Kasuga!                    yoo KASUGA!5[Akane clings to Kyousuke's arm.  Kyousuke looks at her in wide-eyed surprise.]Akane FX:                         ___  <whish!>                        su_Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            _____  <thump!>                        doki_6[Pov from near Komatsu.]@Hikaru: [waving and beaming]  Hello-o-o!!                     konnichi wa----_!!sidewalk sign:  Beauty Parlor...                RIYOU <GYOU>[Kyousuke swivels his head from Komatsu to who he perceives to be Akane.]narration:  Wh-what?!                       na nan da!7[Nervously and with a forced smile, Kyousuke points at the girl on his arm. Komatsu grins.]narration  I think she's acting            HEN na FUU ni          OMOwareru  strangely!!                     in-strange-way/manner  be-thinking                                  ja nai ka!!Kyousuke:                                         ___  Oh, she's my...                 a  koitsu       ore no...                                     this-person  my8Komatsu: [walking past and smiling]  Hot love, as usual!             aikawarazu          o-atsui  koto    de!                                  as-usual/as-before  hot      affair  beingKyousuke: [eyes bugged out]  ?                               ?---------------------------------------------------p 272 (186)1[Kyousuke looks stunned as he watches the waving Komatsu walk away.]sign:                                            _______  <pegimin H> Beauty Parlor       BIYOUSHITSU    pegimin #H#                                  beauty-parlor  ???????2Akane: [merrily] (Even one at a time, it's        (ko-- yatte       hitori    demo  important to let a lot of        doing-like-this  1-person  even-if  people recognize this  couple's relationship.)         OUku no HITO ni  futari no  NAKA          o                                  to-many-people/  2-people's relationship (O)                                  MITOmesaseru   koto  mo   TAISETSU                                  let-recognize  thing too  important                                  da mon    ne)                                  is reasonKyousuke:  ?                               ?3bike FX: [off]                    __________  <SCREEEECH>                     kikiki----4[Overhead pov shows Yuusaku on a bike stopped just behind Kyousuke.]Yuusaku:  Idiot!  Why don't you watch     baka yaro--_   abune--  out?!                           stupid-fellow  <abunai> = watch-out                                  ja ne--  ka   yo                                  is-not   (?)Kyousuke:  Ah, I'm sor...                  a suimase...5Kyousuke and Yuusaku:  AH!!                            a_!!6Yuusaku:  Kasuga, y-you jerk!             ki kisama  KASUGA!Kyousuke:  Y-you're that...                so so-- yu--  omae wa...                                     like-that  you  (T)---------------------------------------------------p 273 (187)1Kyousuke:  Who are you?                    dare da     kke?                                  who  is-it  (?)slapstick FX:                     ___ ____  <ba-dump> <rattle>              don garaYuusaku pratfall FX:              __________  <craaaaash>                     gasha~~~~n2[Leaping to his feet, an irate Yuusaku grabs Kyousuke by the shirt.]Yuusaku:  I won't let you say you've      WASUreta   to wa    iwasen       zo_!!  forgotten me!!                  forgotten (define)  not-let-say  !!                                                   _______  Your fateful rival, Hino        kono SHUKUMEI no raibaru  Yuusaku-sama!!                  this-fate     's rival                                  HINO YUUSAKU-sama o_!!Yuusaku FX:                       _____  <sproing!>                      gaba_Kyousuke: [nervously smiling]  J-just joking!!                 jo JOUDAN  da  tteba!!                                     joke    is  I-tell-you3[Akane thrusts herself between the two and glares at Yuusaku.]Akane:  Hold it, you!!                  chotto kimi_!!4Akane:  Busting in on us like that      ikinari           SHITSUREI na HITO  ne!  --how rude!                     without-warning/  rude-person                                  abruptly  What are you doing to my        atashi no  TAISETSU na HITO           ni  special guy?!!                  my         precious/important-person (IO)                                  nani  sun no  yo!!                                  what  doing5[Pov looking over Yuusaku's shoulder.  He sees an angry Hikaru before him.]6Kyousuke: [eyes grown large] (Sp-special guy...?!)            (ta...TAISETSU na HITO...?!)---------------------------------------------------p 274 (188)1[Kyousuke looks on as Yuusaku silently picks up his fallen bicycle.]sign:                             ______ ______  Color TVs                       kara-- terebiYuusaku bike FX:                  ______  <clack!>                        gacha_2[With head hung low, Yuusaku walks away with his bike.]Yuusaku FX:                       _______  ________  <lose heart>  <trudge trudge>   gakkuri  tobotoboYuusaku: (Sp-special guy.)                (ta...TAISETSU na HITO)3Kyousuke: [blushing] (D-did she say, "special         (ta TAISETSU na HITO    tte...?!)  guy..."?!)                          special     person  (quote)Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            ____ ____  <thump thump>                   doki doki4[His pov of Akane, as she watches Yuusaku walk away.]narration:  Perhaps I'm the one that        akane no yatsu  moshi-ka-shite  Akane...                        that-Akane      perhaps                                  ore no koto...                                  about-me5narration:  But that's impossible.          demo  masaka                                  but   impossible                                  ___  Akane and I are cousins.        ore to   akane wa   itoko DOUSHI                                  with-me        (T)  fellow-cousins                                  na   n da      shi                                  are  (explan)  consider  Can't be...                     sonna...                                  can't-be6narration:  But if you look carefully,      da kedo    yoku miru to  she's also quite cute.             but     if-look-at-carefully                                  koitsu      mo   kekkou kawaii  yo na                                  this-person too  quite-cute[He looks quite carefully, and Akane turns to stare back at him.]Kyousuke:  Akane, don't you...             akane omae...---------------------------------------------------p 275 (189)1Kyousuke:                         __ ____________  ...h-have a boyfriend?          bo bo--ifurendo nanka   wa  inai     no?                                     boyfriend    or-such (T) not-have2[His pov of Akane as she looks back.]3Akane: [smiling and stretching]  I don't have much interest      OTOKO ni wa         anmari  in guys.                        in-men  (contrast)  <not>-very                                  KYOUMI nai        naa                                  not-have-interestKyousuke pratfall FX:             _____  <SLIP!>                         zuru_4Akane:  But...  Hmm.  Maybe it's        demo...  so-- ne    atashi JIBUN ga  'cause I'm so tomboyish,        but                 I      self  (S)  but I like feminine girls.                                  OTOKO ppoi   se--   ka                                  man   -like  gender (musing)                                  ONNA  ppoi   ONNA no KO ni  akogarechau na                                  woman -like  girls     (IO) admire-(finality)5narration:  Wh-whaat?!                      na naan da!Kyousuke: [forced smile]  R-really?!                      so soo?!6[Flashback pic--Akane clings to Kyousuke's arm.]Akane FX: [flashback]             ___  <whish!>                        su_narration:  Th-then, what on earth was      ji jaa   sakki     no   wa   ittai...?  that back there...?                then  a-little-while-ago  in-the-world                                                     one  (T)Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            ____  <thump>                         doki7[More flashback pics--of Komatsu grinning and walking away; of Akane yelling at Yuusaku.]flashbacks:  Hot love!                       o-atsui koto de!  What are you doing to my        atashi no  TAISETSU na HITO           ni  special guy?!                   my         precious/important-person (IO)                                  nani  sun no  yo!                                  what  doingnarration:  In a way, just like             are jaa           marude     hikaru-chan  Hikaru-chan...                  after-a-fashion/  just-like                                  in-one's-own-way                                  de wa......---------------------------------------------------p 276 (190)1Kyousuke: [fierce expression] (Hikaru-chan?!)                  (hikaru-chan?!)2Kyousuke: (That Akane--was she             (akane no yatsu  aitsura no MAE de  transforming into Hikaru-chan    that-Akane      in-front-of-those-people  in front of those people?!)                                  hikaru-chan ni BAkete-ita   no  de wa?!)                                  was-transformed-into-Hikaru     being3Kyousuke: (This is terrible!  Then,        (ikan!         sore ja  naosara  all the more, I can't very       how-terrible  then     all-the-more  well let her meet Ayukawa!!)                                  AYUKAWA ni Awaseru  wake ni wa ikanai_!!)                                  let-meet-Ayukawa    can't-very-well4Kyousuke: [laughing, hand to back of head]  Huhhh?!  That's too bad.        are--_    komatta na                                  ______ ______  I've forgotten where the        tenisu ko--to no BASHO  WASUrechatta  zo  tennis court is!                tennis-court  's place  forgotten-    !!                                                          (finality/regret)  So I guess there's no going     kore ja        ikiyou   ga  nai       naa  on from here.                   as-things-are  shall-go (S) not-there                                  _ __ __  <ah ha ha!>                     a ha ha5[Smiling, she turns to point to the courts about 10 meters away.  He does a pratfall.]Akane:                            ______ ______  The tennis court?  Isn't        tenisu ko--to nara      koko  ja nai  this the place?                 tennis-court  if-it-is  here  is-not6[He chases after Akane, who walks on ahead.]Kyousuke:  Ah!  Wait, Aka...!!             a  matta!!  aka...Akane FX:                         ________  <stride stride>                 sutasuta7narration:  Arrggh.  If I can't stop        e--i    akane o  TOmerarenai no    nara  Akane then I'd better                        (O) not-be-stopping/  if-it-is  try Ayukawa!                                     not-be-holding-back                                  AYUKAWA no ho-- da!                                          's way  it-isKyousuke teleport FX:             ____  <swish!>                        shu_---------------------------------------------------p 277 (191)1[Shot of the entrance to the ladies dressing room.]sign:  Dressing Room                   KOUISHITSU2[He rematerializes inside.  In the extreme foreground is a view of a girl's pair of bare legs.  She's removing her nylons.]Kyousuke teleport FX:             ____  <swish!>                        shu_3[View pans back to show Madoka, in undershirt and panties.  Kyousuke hides himself behind a curtain.]Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            _____  <THUMP>                         dokin4[He blushes brightly.]narration:  H-hold on.  This...             chi chotto  korya......crows-in-background FX:  <kaa!>                          kaa_---------------------------------------------------p 278 (192)1[Looking to the side he spies a folded stack of tennis clothes.  At the top of the stack are a pair of frilly panties.]Kyousuke:                         ___  AH!                             ha_2[He takes the panties in hand.]narration:  Th-that's it.  It'll be         so so--da  AYUKAWA ni wa   WARUi  kedo...  bad for Ayukawa, but...                    to-Ayukawa (T)  bad    butcrows-in-background FX:  <kaa!>                          kaa_Kyousuke:  I have to hide this.            kore        o   kakushichaeba      i--                                  this-(one) (O)  if-hide-(finality) okay                                  n da                                  (explan)3Kyousuke: (But where...?!)                 (shikashi  doko ni...?!)                                   but       to-whereKyousuke FX:                      __________  <scan>                          kyorokyoro4[Madoka, down to bra and panties, turns to enter the curtained-off section.]Madoka:  And now...                      sate to......Kyousuke FX:  <yikes!>                        gyo_5Kyousuke: (O-oh no!  She's gonna come      (ya yabai      DEte-kita!)  out!)                               in-for-it  began-to-come-outKyousuke FX:                      ______  <in a dither>                   orooro6[Tight shot of his pants pocket as he shoves the panties into it.]Kyousuke FX:                      ____  <squish!>                       gyu_7[Madoka enters.]curtain FX:                       ___  <fwip!>                         sa_---------------------------------------------------p 279 (193)1[He rematerializes back outside.  Akane sees him.]narration:                                         ______  Safe by a hair!                 KIKI    IPPATSU  se--fu!                                  crisis  a-hair   safeKyousuke teleport FX:             ____  <swish!>                        shu_2narration:  Now, she shouldn't be           kore de        TOUBUN  coming out of the locker        now/with-this  for-some-time/for-a-while  room for some time...           _______ _ru--mu_                                  rokka--  SHITSU  kara                                  from-locker-room                                  DEte-korenai hazu...                                  ought-not-begin-to-come-outKyousuke:                         ___  <whew!>                         ho_Akane: [smiling]  Where did you go?  C'mon,       doko   itte-ta no  saa  HAYAku iko_!  let's hurry!                    where  was-going        hurry  shall-go3Akane:  To Ayukawa-san's place!!        AYUKAWA-san no toko  e!!                                              's place to4Kyousuke: [embarrassed]  Uhh, it seems she won't be      sore ga   KYOU  wa   chotto  coming today...                 uhh       today (T)  a-bit                                  kite-nai       mitai de......                                  not-be-coming  seemingAkane: [outraged]  Whaaat!?!                       e~~_?!5[Full-length portrait running down the entire page shows Madoka in tiny tennis whites, holding a ball and a racquet.  She smiles a bright welcome.]Madoka:  Kasuga-kuuun!                   KASUGA-ku~~n!---------------------------------------------------p 280 (194)1[Kyousuke is aghast.  Akane is wide-eyed.]narration:  H-how?!                         do dooshite?!2Akane: [smiling wide-eyed]  That's Ayukawa-san?!            AYUKAWA-san tte      ano HITO?!                                              (quote)  that-person[Kyousuke turns away and slaps a hand to his face.]narration:  N...                            mo.....3[He visualizes a @Hikaru leaping all over him as a simmering Madoka watches.]Kyousuke: (NOW I'M DONE FOR!!)             (mou  dame     da!!)                                   now  no-good  it-is@Hikaru FX:  <public affection>              ichaicha ichaicha4[Kyousuke portrait--he dares to sneak a peek.]5[Akane blushes and looks off-panel.]Akane FX:                         _______  <eyes grow wide!>               po~~~~_Kyousuke:  Huh?                            n?6Akane: [clasping Madoka by the hand]  You're...  My ideal...!!        atashi no...    RISOU no HITO  da  wa....!!                                  my              ideal-person   isAkane FX:  <cling>                         shikka[Madoka's skirt twirls to show that, yes, she *is* wearing panties.]---------------------------------------------------p 281 (195)1Akane:  H-how do you do?!               ha hajimemashite!  I'm Kyousuke's cousin,          atashi  KYOUSUKE no itoko   de  Akane.                          I                's cousin  being                                  akane tte i--masu                                        (called)Kyousuke FX:                      _________  <look blank>                    poka~~~~nMadoka: [wide-eyed, nervous]  Y-yes...?!                      ha haa......?!2Akane:                                      _______  Wow!  Nice figure.              uwa--_    sutairu             i--   no ne                                       !    style/one's-figure  nice  Your name?!                     NAMAE wa?!  Madoka, such a nice,            madoka  ONNA ppokute  i--   NAMAE  ne~~  feminine name.                          woman-ish     nice  namenarration:  Wh-what's with her?!            na nan da aitsu?!3Kyousuke:  Ah!  Th-that's it!              a_  so so-- ka!Akane: [flashback]  I admire feminine girls.        ONNA  ppoi   ONNA no KO ni  akogarechau na                                  women -like  girls     (IO) admire-(finality)4[Madoka, ready to play tennis, has her attention distracted to the sidelines.]Akane: [off]  Madoka-chaaan, do your          madoka-cha--n gambatte--_!!  best!!5[Pov shifts to show Akane on the sidelines, cheering through a bullhorn. Both Madoka and Kyousuke smile nervously.]Akane:  Lose, Kyousuke!                 KYOUSUKE makechimae--_                                           (makete-shimae) = lose-(finality)narration:  It looks like Akane is          akane wa    do--yara  completely taken with                 (T)   it-looks-as-if  Ayukawa?!                                  AYUKAWA no koto  *tottemo*                                  about-Ayukawa     utterly/absolutely/quite                                  KI ni ITchatta               mitai desu?!                                  was-pleased-with-(finality)  seems5 (inset)[In an inset, an old woman in tennis dress, short skirt, talks to two nervous girls, one of whom shakes her head.]old lady:                         _____     ______________  Have you seen my                washi no  anda--suko--to  underskirt?                     my        under-skirt                                  shirane--                     ka?                                  not-know/not-familiar-with/   (?)                                  not-be-aware-of---------------------------------------------------