Kimagure Orange Road"Be Careful of Skinship!"Volume 7, Story 8WB Volume 4, Story 12Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation by : Hitoshi Doi (9 Aug 1992)Additional translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Jordan Lampe Thomas Wyatt Jerry Lee Matthew KlippensteinLast revision : 07-03-95Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.eduNOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 243 (157) are only in the WBs!---------------------------------------------------p 243 (157)--TITLE PAGE[Madoka stands and rocks back on her heels. She's dressed in sweatshirt, shorts and running shoes.]MAIN TITLE (at top) ___________ Be Careful of Skinship! sukinshippu ni GO-YOUJIN! skinship (IO) (hon)-care/caution/discretion = "child-rearing with frequent physical contact ('skinship')." In the context of this story, more like "close physical contact.">SUB-TITLE (at bottom) Tantalized by Mysterious FUSHIGI na HITOMI ni jirasarete Eyes--a Love-Chase with a by-mysterious-eyes be-tantalized/teased Cute Demon! _______ ____ ______ kyu--to na AKUMA to rabu - cheisu! with-cute-devil/demon love chase---------------------------------------------------p 244 (158)1[Happy couples walk by, arm-in-arm.]narration: _________ ______ It's Golden Week all over the ZENKOKU-TEKI ni go--ruden ui--ku desu country... all-over-the-country Golden-Week is Everyone's happily... minna TANOshiku... everyone happily/cheerfullyguy: a_ha_ha_girl: kya_ kya_2[But through it all, Kyousuke walks alone...]narration: ...singing the praises of kono YO no HARU o OUKA shite... spring. this-world/life 's spring (O) singing-the- praises-of3[He casts a dark look at ABCB...]narration: Singing the praises... OUKA shite......Kyousuke FX: ______ chira_4[...and unhappily visualizes the events at the end of the previous chapter. Namely, that of Madoka--sans skirt--belting him into a thorny bush.]5[Kyousuke walks on, looking at the sidewalk. Ahead of him, a smiling Kazuya --accompanied by both girlfriends (remember? the ones that look like tiny versions of Madoka and Hikaru)--comes walking towards him.]narration: Ahhh, spring is already... aa HARU wa izuko ni... spring (T) to-whereKyousuke FX: ____ shun.. Kazuya and girls FX: _____ _____ ______ kyapi kyapi runrun---------------------------------------------------p 245 (159)1Kyousuke: [looking up] Oh...? are...?Kazuya: Oniichan! oni--chan!2girls: Hello-o-o! konnichi wa----_Kyousuke: [wincing] (This guy's doing pretty (.......... koitsu kekko-- umaku well...) this-guy pretty-well yatte-ru ja nai ka) is-doingKyousuke: _____ Scoundrel. shitataka na yatsu scoundrel/tough-person/an-old-hand/ person-with-plenty3Kazuya: [pointing at ABCB] Aren't you going in? hairanai no?Kyousuke: [turning away] Not really... Bye! betsu ni... ja na!Kyousuke FX: ____ ____ suta suta4[Kazuya portrait--small knowing smile.]5Kazuya: It's not that you're NOT hairanai n ja nakute going in, but that you CAN'T not-enter (neg/explan) go in, right? hairenai n ja nai? not-able-to-enter (neg/explan)Kyousuke: __ guKyousuke FX: _____ zukin6[Kyousuke recovers and continues to walk away. Kazuya pursues him.]narration: I gotta go. ikou shall-go Nothing good can come from konna TOKI ni koitsu ni having anything to do with at-time-like-this with-this-guy this guy right now! kakawaru to roku na koto nai! if-have-to-do-with there's-nothing-goodKazuya: Oh, wait! a matte!Kyousuke FX: suta suta7Kazuya: [embarrassed] ___ Oniichan, I wanted to kono mae no koto to ii ore apologize to you about the about-this-previous that I other day! o-ni--chan ni wa ayamaro-- to-oniichan (contrast) shall-apologize to OMOtte-ta n da! was-thinking-that (explan)[Kyousuke stops in surprise.]---------------------------------------------------p 246 (160)1Kazuya: [abashed] ___ I'm a man, too! ore mo OTOKO da mon! I too man am (reason) I finally understand your oni--chan no KIMOchi feelings comple-e-etely. 's feelings yo--kku wakatta n da = fully understood (explan)2[Kazuya's pov of Kyousuke as he looks back with a measuring look.]3Kazuya: [hitting his own chest] Did something happen between one--chan to nani-ka atta no? you and oneechan? with-oneechan something happened If you like, we can talk yokattara SOUDAN ni noru yo about it. if-okay give-counselKazuya FX: ___ donnarration: He's not such a bad guy koitsu mo manzara after all. this-guy too -altogether WARUi yatsu de wa nai n da na bad-fellow is-not (explan)4Kazuya: _ __ __ __ __ Ah ha ha ha ha! a ha ha ha ha _______ So that's why you can't go sore ja abakabu ni hairenai into ABCB. then into-ABCB not-able-to-enter wake da ne reason issign: [partial] ____ Bus... basu... ...Entrance ...IRIGUCHIKyousuke: Don't laugh. warau na yo5Kazuya: Then why don't you try this ja koko wa hitotsu with reverse psychology? then this-place (T) one GYAKUTEN no HASSOU de itte-mitara with-reversal's-idea if-try-to-gosign: Entrance ...EN IRIGUCHIKyousuke: Eh? e?6Kazuya: If doing 'H' things made her #H# na koto o shite dislike you, you can make doing-H-things up by doing 'H' things! <'H' = "Hentai" = perverted> KIRAwarechatta no nara was-disliked-(finality) (nom) if-it-is #H# na koto o shite doing-H-things NAKANAOri o sureba ii! if-make-it-up-with/reconcile okaysign: ____ Bus Tickets basu JOUSHAKEN bus ticket Railway Ticket Book KAISUUKEN Entrance IRIGUCHItraffic light sign: City Block 2 ...2-CHOUMEKyousuke: [livid] Excuse me-e-e?! ano ne~~_---------------------------------------------------p 247 (161)1awning sign: Books #BOOKS# HON Kazuya: [a wink and thumbs-up] Just watch! maa mite na tte! just watch2[Kazuya goes behind his 2 girlfriends, chibi-M and chibi-H (Kyouko), and emphatically flips up their skirts.]Kazuya FX: ___ ba_girls: Kyaaaaa! kya~~~~~~3[Both girls laugh and playfully poke at Kazuya.]Kyouko: ____ Oh no! Kazu-kun, you're so ya daa--_ kazu-kun no #H#! 'H'!Kazuya/girls FX: icha icha4Kazuya: [whispering to Kyousuke] Girls are pretty happy ONNA no KO wa ne when boys do something girls (T) 'H' to them. OTOKO no KO ni #H# na koto o sareru to by-guys H-things (O) if-be-doing kekko-- ureshii mono na no sa quite-happy people5Kazuya: A moderate amount of 'H' TEKIDO na #H# wa ONNA no KO ni -TAIshite is the best skinship to moderate-H (T) to-a-girl to/for use on a girl. ___________ no SAIKOU no sukinshippu na no sa (nom) the-highest skinshipKyousuke: [sweating] I-is that so...?! so sonna mon na no ka na~~?! that-kind-of-thing I-wonder6Kazuya: You should try it out hikaru-one--chan ya madoka-one--chan ni mo on Hikaru-oneechan and on-Hikaru-oneechan-and-Madoka-oneechan too Madoka-oneechan, too! TAMEshite-miru to i-- yo! should-try-and-attempt I'm sure it'll go well! kitto umaku iku yo! surely well go7[As Kyousuke waves and leaves, Kazuya exhorts him on.]Kazuya: ___________ ___________ __ Skinship, shinship, go for sukinshippu sukinshippu gambatte ne! it! skinship do-your-bestKyousuke: Y-yeah... u un...narration: Maybe there's some reasoning TASHIka ni koitsu no yu-- behind that skinship he was certainly this-person (S) say talking about... ___________ sukinshippu ICHIRI aru skinship a-principle/reason there-is ka mo... it-is-possible---------------------------------------------------p 248 (162)1narration: A drowning man will catch at oboreru mono wa wara o motsukamu! a straw! drowning-person (T) straw (O) catch-atKyousuke: (Maybe I'll give it a shot.) (tameshite-miyo-- ka naa) shall-try-and-attempt I-wonder2[Kazuya facial portrait--he is beside himself with evil joy.]Kazuya: (He fell for it!) (hikkakatta!) was-trickedKazuya FX: ______ niyari3[View pans back to show Kazuya lying on the ground, protecting his head with his arms as an enraged chibi-H and chibi-M stomp and pummel him.]Kyouko: Why did you do that in sakki wa HITOmae de public?! Grr...! a-little-while-ago (T) in-public nani sun no yo moo----_ what doingchibi Madoka-clone: _________ Lech! sukebe--_girls FX: ____ ____ boka suka4Kazuya: [grimacing] (See? Do something like that (hora ne anna koto sureba and it's bound to end up look! that-kind-of-thing if-do like this!) ko-- naru ni KImatte-ru jan!) become-like-this (IO) is-sure-to (This was payback for last (kore de kono mae no KAri wa time!!) with-this/now this-before 's debt (T) KAEshita zo!!) repaid5[Exterior shot of a coffee shop.]6[Inside, Kyousuke and Hikaru sit at the counter and enjoy their coffee.]7[Hikaru drinks and fails to notice the blushing, wide-eyed look on Kyousuke's face as he sneaks a look at her.]Kyousuke: [flashback thought] (A moderate amount of 'H' TEKIDO na #H# wa ONNA no KO ni -TAIshite is the best skinship for moderate-H (T) to-a-girl to/for a girl.) ___________ no SAIKOU no sukinshippu na no sa) (nom) the-highest skinshipKyousuke heartbeat FX: ____ ____ ____ doki doki doki---------------------------------------------------p 249 (163)1[Hikaru is dressed in blouse and miniskirt. Kyousuke slowly moves his left hand towards her rump.]Kyousuke arm FX: so~~_2[The waitress comes up from behind and...]waitress: [smiling] ________ Would you care for another ko--hi-- okawari ikaga desu ka? cup of coffee? coffee seconds how-about (?)Kyousuke FX: ___ sa_[Kyousuke yanks back his evil left hand with his right hand.]3narration: Sure enough, this sort of yappari konna koto...... thing... sure-enough this-kind-of-thing4narration: ...is a bit too daring. chotto DAITAN sugiru yo na a-bit too-daring/audacious/bold5narration: I better not. yametokou (yamete-okou) = shall-stop-(for-future-sake)[He reaches for the check...]Kyousuke: _________ _________ Let's see. Receipt, receipt. etto reshi--to reshi--to let's-see receipt6[...and being Kyousuke, knocks Hikaru's glass of water over onto her lap.]Kyousuke/glass FX: ______ kacha_7Hikaru: [flinching away] Kya!! kya_!!water FX: ______ bicha_Kyousuke: Oh, I'm sorr... a gome...Hikaru FX: _____ fura_8[Hikaru, about to topple backwards off her stool, is caught by Kyousuke's left hand... Deftly cupped to her rear.]---------------------------------------------------p 250 (164)1[They stare and blush into each other's eyes.]2[Closeup on the hand and rear.]narration: I-I touched it!! sa sawatchatta!!3[She uncoils a vicious slap to his cheek, sending him reeling. Love the 3-D perspective of the art!]Hikaru: H!! #H# !!Hikaru FX: __________ patsu~~~~n4[Kyousuke portrait--he holds his injured face, eyes closed and wincing.]5[Opening them, and peeking between his fingers, he sees a calm and blushing Hikaru.]Hikaru FX: ______ uttoriKyousuke: ? ?6[With a mischievous smile she leans close.]Hikaru FX: ___ ____ tsu tsu_Kyousuke: Huh?! e?!7Hikaru: [with a wink and cute smile] Oh no! Sempai... ya da------_ SEMPAI ttara... You're so 'H'! #H# !narration: It... It worked!! se... SEIKOU da!! success it-isHikaru FX: pittan---------------------------------------------------p 251 (165)1[Shot of a train rushing by.]train FX: ____ paan2[Inside, Kyousuke stands, a hand on the overhead strap.]sign: Kimagure Orange Road #A Whim Orange Road# The Collected Early Chapters SHOKI SETTEI Now on Sale!! early-stage establishment/creation SHIRYOU -SHUU ni HATSUBAI!! materials collection (IO) sale3narration: For the time being, I guess toriaezu hikaru-chan to wa I'll just call that a for-the-time-being with-Hikaru (T) rehearsal with Hikaru-chan. __________ riha--saru tte toko ka na rehearsal (quote) occasion I-wonder4[He smiles while watching a couple stand, arms around each other's waist.]narration: ___ Maybe I've been a little moshi-ka-shite IMA made ore tte too serious up until now. maybe up-to-now I (T) majime sugita no ka-mo-shirenai was-too-serious (nom) it-is-possibleKyousuke: (A little 'H', if it isn't (#H# na koto tte DO ga suginakya too much, might not be such H-thing (quote) if-not-to-excess a bad thing.) WARUi koto ja nai no kamo na) bad-thing is-not (nom) it-is-possible5Kyousuke: [merrily] (All right. Tomorrow, with (yo--shi ashita wa AYUKAWA to...) Ayukawa...) tomorrow (T) with-Ayukawa6Kyousuke FX: _____ po~~_public address: Nakagawa Station. Nakagawa NAKAGAWA EKI NAKAGAWA EKI Station.door FX: _________ pushu-------------------------------------------------------p 252 (166)1[Right on cue, in steps Madoka. Full-length portrait, she wears a sportscoat over a T-shirt and shorts. Arg, the socks on this perfect goddess are uneven! Say it ain't so!!]sign: [top] ...Line ...SEN ...gawa Station ...GAWA EKIsign: [bottom] Shopping... o-KAIMONO...2[Her pov of him.]narration: AYUKAWA?! AYUKAWA?!3[His pov of her as she looks back.]4[The train starts with a bump, and the crowd presses the two together, side-by-side.]guy/Madoka FX: __ do---------------------------------------------------p 253 (167)1narration: O-oh no! na nan-te kotta! what! thing is I still haven't psyched mada KOKORO no JUMBI mo myself up yet. yet mind/heart 's preparations even shite-nai to yu-- no ni isn't-doing say-that even-thoughKyousuke heartbeat FX: ____ ____ ____ doki doki doki2[Kyousuke blushes and watches her out of the corner of his eye. Madoka keeps her gaze down, and face expressionless.]Kyousuke/Madoka FX: pita~~~~narration: I can't just suddenly... ikinari kore ja... suddenly/without-notice with-this3[She looks at him...]4[...then turns to face forward again, eyes closed.]Madoka: Long time no see. o-hisashiburi ne I thought you'd died. SHInda no ka to OMOtte-ta wa died (nom) was-thinking-thatKyousuke FX: _____ zukin5[He winces.]narration: Pretty harsh. kitsui naa Just as I thought, she's yappari OKOtte-ru n da mad. just-as-I-thought is-angry (explan)6[She keeps a cold shoulder to him. He stares at her with a look of fierce determination.]narration: But... Just watch! shikashi... mite-ro! Somehow, I'll put her in a nantoka KIGEN o naoshite-miseru! better mood! somehow mood (O) fix/correctKyousuke: ___ (After all, I have...) (nantatte ore ni wa......) after-all in-me (T)---------------------------------------------------p 254 (168)1[He stares dramatically at the palm of his hand.]Kyousuke: ___________ _________ ________ (A special hold called (sukinshippu to yu-- supesharu ho--rudo ga "skinship"!) skinship (quote) special-hold (S) aru n da ze!) have (explan)2[Madoka notices that he's staring fiercely at his trembling hand.]3Madoka: Is there something wrong TE do--ka shita no?! with your hand?! hand is-there-anything-wrongKyousuke: ___ ___ ___ Just wait ha_ ha_ ha_ maa mite-te-kudasai and see! just be-seeing-(please)4Madoka: [irked] For what? nani o?Kyousuke: ___ AH! ha_5Kyousuke: ___ (Wh-what am I saying...?) (na nani itte n da ore......) what saying (explan) I (I need to take a deep (koko wa mazu breath...) here (T) first-of-all SHINKOKYUU shite...) drawing-in-a-deep-breath6Kyousuke FX: ______ chira_7[A view of Madoka's rear.]---------------------------------------------------p 255 (169)1[He cops a feel of her rear.]Madoka FX: _____ biku_Kyousuke hand FX: sawa_2[His pov of her--her ice-queen facade has melted.]Madoka: OHH. an 3Madoka: [smiling, playfully raising a fist] Oh no, Kasuga-kun! You're ya da--_ #H#! moo KASUGA-kun ttara! so 'H'!Kyousuke: ___ ___ ___ ha_ ha_ ha_4[Back to the real world...]narration: It'll be like that... naa--nte......5[Isolated shot of his hand as it begins its trek...]Kyousuke hand FX: so~~~~Kyousuke: (HERE I GO!!) (iza!!)6[All the passengers in the car turn towards a scream...]voice: [off] ______ KYAA! PERVERT!! kya--_ chikan!!---------------------------------------------------p 256 (170)1[A woman holds up the offending hand of a guy.]woman: What is this hand?!! nani yo----_ kono TE wa!! what this-hand (T)crowd FX: ____ ____ zawa zawapervert: ___ ___ It wasn't me! It wasn't me! ore ja nai ore ja nai yo! me is-not2woman: Poli-i-ice. omawari-sa--ntwo guys: ________ ______ You lech. You're not kono yaro---- sukebe sneaking away. pervert zurashagatte do-a-"split"-(contempt) Step off the train, you oriro kono HENTAI pervert. step-off-(train) this pervertboy: It's all a mistake. chigau n da yo~~~~ mistaken (explan)3[Madoka calmly watches this. Behind her, Kyousuke sweats, eyes goggling. He holds the wrist of his left hand.]sign: [partial] Original Author... GENSAKUSHA the-original-author- (of-a-translated-work) I'm also delighted... watashi mo TANOshimi... I too a-delight4Madoka: [turning to him] How terrible. ya da na-- When it turns to spring, HARU ni naru to a-- yu-- no ga guys like that get more when-become-spring that-kind-of-thing (S) common. fuete increasingKyousuke heartbeat FX: _____ doki_5[She turns back to watch a police officer hustle the pervert off the train.]Madoka: _saite--_ That's as low as a man can OTOKO to shite SAITEI ne! get! in-the-capacity-of-a-man lowest[Kyousuke looks ill.]6Madoka: [smiling] Right?! ne_!Kyousuke: [wiping his brow] __ __ __ __ Ha ha ha ha! ha ha ha ha7Kyousuke: [staring at his hands] (Maybe... There's something (yappari nani-ka... wrong with it, after all?!) after-all something machigatte-ru n ja nai daro-- ka?!) be-in-the-wrong/ (explan) poss-be be-mistaken-(about)---------------------------------------------------p 257 (171)1[Madoka stares forward at the wall again.]2[Kyousuke stands and glances over at her.]sign: [over picture] Prize Winner YOROKObi ni WAku Overflows with Delight with-joy/delight/pleasure get-hot/gush-out JUSHOUSHA prize-winner [right of picture] First SHOWA 60 NENDO JOUHANKI Half of 1985 1985 year first-half-of Akutain Prize Decision!! AKUTAIN SHOU KETTEI!! prize decision/determination [below picture] Monthly GEKKAN minna no BUNDAN Publication: The People's monthly-publication everyone 's literary- Literary Column columnbook: The People's Literary minna no BUNDAN Column A Personal Account (i.e., SHISHOUSETSU anata... a novel). You... a-personal-novel/ you a-private-(real)-life-novelnarration: ___________ Even if it's called skinship, ikura sukinshippu tte ittatte I'm not a pervert. how-much skinship even-tho-say-that ___ ______ ore wa chikan ja nai n da I (T) molester/masher am-not (explan)3narration: Apologize, Kyousuke! ayamaru n da KYOUSUKE! apologize (explan)sign 1: [left] "> SHAIN <2-kanji> member/partner/employeesign 2: [middle] Hana- Beauty HANA BIYOUIN Salon flower beauty-shop/salon __________ Let's Get a Perm! paamanento o-yarimaseu! permanent = shall-dosign 3: [right, partial] Shopping... o-KAIMONO...Kyousuke: About last time... kono mae no koto... about-this-before4[She looks at him without expression.]5[Staring at the wall in front of him, he blushes.]Kyousuke: I didn't do it on purpose! wazato ja nai n da! on-purpose is-not (explan)6[She gives a little smile.]7Kyousuke: I'm sor... gome...handle sign: Asia Development--Japan (?) KOUA NICHI Asia-development day/ref-to-Japan?---------------------------------------------------p 258 (172)1[The train lurches, sending people stumbling about.]train FX: _____ gakun2[Madoka looks up to see a man hurtling at her.]guy: Ohhh. ottottoguy FX: _______ bu~~~~n3Kyousuke: Watch out! abunai!4[He grabs her and pulls her out of the way.]5[Madoka facial portrait--she blushes.]6[Tight shot of her rear. His hand clasps it.]---------------------------------------------------p 259 (173)1[His other arm presses around her midsection.]Kyousuke arm FX: ____ gyu_2[Kyousuke freezes and blushes, wide-eyed. Although Madoka is staring at him, he can't meet her eye.]narration: I touched it! sawatchatta!3Madoka/Kyousuke heartbeat FX: ____ ____ ____ doki doki doki4[Tight shot of Kyousuke's eye.]narration: Just as I thought... yappari...5[He looks up at the ceiling in embarrassment and bliss.]Kyousuke cheeks FX: bo~~~~_narration: ___________ Skinship is so nice. sukinshippu tte i-- mon da naa skinship (T) nice-thing is---------------------------------------------------p 260 (174)1[A crowd gathers around and ogles.]guy 1 FX: ________ nitanitaguy 2: What's this, what's this? nan da nan da2[Kyousuke catches the glare on Madoka's face.]Kyousuke: ___ AH! ha_3[They walk down a sidewalk, Kyousuke trailing her by several steps.]narration: I did it again... mata yatchatta...... again did-(finality/regret)4Kyousuke: Um... ano...Madoka FX: _____ pita_5Kyousuke: [talking to her back] That, just now... sakki no wa... a-little-while-ago (nom) (T)6Madoka: [turning] ...wasn't on purpose. wazato ja nai n da... on-purpose is-not (explan)7[Kyousuke portrait--eyes wide.]---------------------------------------------------p 261 (175)1Madoka: [angry look] I'll forgive you... YURUsu kedo... forgive but2[She cranks her arm way back.]Madoka: But let me slap you one more mou ICHIDO dake hippatakasete! time! now just-once-more let-slapKyousuke FX: ____ giku3Kyousuke: [closing his eyes] (Here it comes!) (so~~ra kita_!) there! came4[Madoka gives him a gentle one on the cheek. Kyousuke opens his eyes in surprise.]Madoka hand FX: ______ pachinKyousuke: Ehh...?! e...?!narration: In any case, it seemed like tonimokaku ni mo do--yara she'd forgiven me... in-any-case/anyhow it-looks-as-if o-YURUshi ga DEta mitai... (hon)-pardon (S) issued seems ___________ Just keep the skinship under sukinshippu wa hodo hodo ni! control! skinship (T) keep-within-bounds---------------------------------------------------