Kimagure Orange Road"The Forbidden Cheek Dance"Volume 7, Story 3WB Volume 4, Story 7Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation by : Hitoshi Doi, (20 June 1992)Additional translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Matthew Klippenstein Thomas Wyatt Jordan LampeLast revision : 06-30-95Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.eduNOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parentheses()NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 136 (50) are only in the WBs!---------------------------------------------------p 136 (50)--TITLE PAGE[Madoka sits in a chair and looks at us with a half-smile. Dressed casually, she has the strap of her bag looped over the top of her head. The bag sits on the chair, behind her.]MAIN TITLE (at top) _______ The Forbidden Cheek Dance ikenai chi--ku naughty/wrong cheek- <"must-not-do">SUB-TITLE (at bottom) _____ Even a Blue Secret Stuffed oshare kaban ni tsumekonda into a Stylish Bag Becomes fancy/stylish bag (IO) stuffed Spring-Like. ______ buru-- na HIMITSU mo HARUmeite blue-secret too becoming-springlike _________ For Some Reason, I'm KYOU wa nan-da-ka bo--isshu! Boyish Today! today (T) somehow boyish---------------------------------------------------p 137 (51)1[Exterior shot of downtown.]narration: It's spring! HARU desu! spring it-is In a few days, I'll be a mou ato SUUJITSU de high school student... already later in-a-few-days KOUKOUSEI---- sr-high-student2[Kyousuke and Hikaru walk down the sidewalk together.]narration: Even the city, for some MACHI mo nan-to-naku reason, is in high spirits city/town too for-some-reason lately! Ukarete-iru KYOU be-in-high-spirits/merry today konoGORO! lately/recently3[A girl smiles and hands out coupons to passers-by. Hikaru is handed one.]girl: It's a place that just KONDO ATARAshiku KAITEN shita opened recently. recently newly opened-(a-new-shop) o-MISE desu shop is By all means, please come. zehi irashite-kudasai by-all-means come-(please)4Hikaru: [reading the coupon] ______ Wowww! A new disco? hee--_ ATARAshii disuko kaa ! new disco (?)---------------------------------------------------p 138 (52)1[View across the street at a storefront.]Hikaru: [off] ______ _____ Hey, hey. Disco Sid... nani nani disuko - shido... disco Sid _______ Couples only admissions kappuru nomi NYUU TEN KA?! policy?! couples only entry store approval2coupon: DISCOTHE SID #DISCOTHE...# #SID# Discount Coupon WARIBIKIKEN Guys: 2500 yen ---> 2000 yen DANSEI #2500 ---> 2000# Gals: 1500 yen ---> 1000 yen JOSEI #1500 ---> 1000# _______ Full of Absolutely Enjoyable kappuru ni wa tottemo TANOshii Attractions for Couples!! couples (IO) (contrast) extremely-fun ___________ atorakushon ga ippai!! attraction (S) full ______ _____ Disco Sid disuko shido3[Kyousuke has a coupon, too.]Kyousuke and Hikaru: [reading] You can become more and more KARE - KANOJO to sara ni intimate with your boyfriend/ boyfriend girlfriend with further/ girlfriend--guaranteed... more-&-more SHINMITSU ni nareru koto ukeai... intimate (IO) can-become thing guaranteed4Hikaru: ______ Ohh, wonderful!! maa suteki!!Kyousuke: "I-intimate..." shi...SHINMITSU tte... intimate (quote)5Hikaru: Let's go, Sempai. SEMPAI ikimasho shall-go[Kyousuke flinches back.]6Hikaru: [smiling] ...is what I want to say, ..........to i--tai kedo atashi but I have to go shopping want-to-say-that but I tonight with my mom. KON'YA oka--san to o-KAIMONO na no tonight with-mom shoppingKyousuke: ___ ho_[In relief, Kyousuke rests his hand *over the edge of the panel* as though it were the ledge of a window...]7Hikaru: [waving, running off] Let's be sure and go next KONDO zehi ikimasho-- ne time, 'kay? next-time by-all-means shall-go---------------------------------------------------p 139 (53)1Kyousuke: [looking distractedly up at the sky] Hmm. Intimate, huh? fu----n SHINMITSU nee intimate (rhet)2[On a disco floor, Kyousuke turns at the sound of...]Madoka: Kasuga-kun... KASUGA-kun...3Madoka: [moving in close] _____ We're adults now, right? moo atashi-tachi otona yo ne now we adult4Madoka: [leaning in real close] C'mon, let's get intimate. saa SHINMITSU ni narimasho intimate (IO) shall-becomeKyousuke: [nervous] Uh... a...5[Back to reality. Kyousuke is trying to embrace the air. Pedestrians turn their heads to look.]Kyousuke: Oh. Th-that sort of thing... a so sonna koto... that-kind-of-thing6[Behind him, some girls comment.]girls: __ ____ Oh no... That boy's a ya da-- ano KO HENTAI yo weirdo. that-boy perverted _________ What a pervert. yaratsu--Kyousuke: ___ Ah! ha_7[Looking up, he realizes he's standing outside an adult movie theater. Above the theater is a billboard and on that billboard is a topless girl, with the movie title kanji obscuring her breasts.]billboard: Must be 18 years or older. 18 SAI-MATSU MAN o-kotowari year-end fully refusal/notice THE FORBIDDEN STUFFED ANIMAL KINDAN no HAKUSEI forbidden stuffed-animalsign: [vertical] France Theater FURANSU ZA France theatersign: [horizontal] France... FURANSU...ticket office sign: Ticket Price Adults... RYOUKIN OTONA... SHOUJIN... Children... fee/fare adults children---------------------------------------------------p 140 (54)1[Exterior shot of ABCB.]2[At the counter, Kyousuke enjoys a cup of coffee and cheerful conversation with Madoka, who works behind it.]3Master: [entering] I'm back. tadaima4[Master looks at Kyousuke, who looks back.]Master: ? ?5Master: Oh, you're back already? nan da mo-- KAEtte-kita no kai what already began-returning (?)Kyousuke: I've been here for a while. sakki kara imasu kedo koko ni for-some-time am-here but at-here6Master: [looking up at the ceiling] Huh? Then the guy who went are ja sakki into the disco with your huh then a-little-while-ago sister a little while ago ______ was... IMOUTO-san to disuko ni with-younger-sister into-disco haitte-itta no wa went-and-entered (one) (T)Kyousuke: ______ DISCO?! disuko?!---------------------------------------------------p 141 (55)1Kyousuke: Ehh?! My sister went to a e--_ IMOUTO ga disco with a strange guy?! ! younger-sister (S) ______ mishiranu OTOKO to disuko ni?! with-strange-man to-disco2Master: I'm pretty sure it was that TASHIka...... ATARAshiku dekita new disco. certain/sure newly be-finished ______ disuko disco _______ You know, the one that only hora kappuru shika irenai to yu-- allows couples inside. couples only-let-in say-that3[Kyousuke thinks this over.]4Kyousuke: [reaching into a back pocket] Ah, it must be... a TASHIka... certain/sureKyousuke pocket FX: ________ gosogoso5Kyousuke: [handing Master a coupon] This one... koko ja...... at-this-placeMaster: Yeah, that's it. so-- so-- koko da this-place it-is6[Madoka looks at him out of the corner of one eye--a no-nonsense look.]Madoka: Something like that... sonna mono... that-kind-of-thing Why were you saving it nani TAISETSU so-- ni motte n no?! like it was so important?! what important looks-as-if forKyousuke: [nervously] .......... Umm. Well... .......... iya maa---------------------------------------------------p 142 (56)1Madoka: [to Master] _______ But... Only couples are demo... kappuru shika hairenai n desho allowed in, right? but couples only-enter (poss-explan)Master: [rubbing his chin] I remember seeing some guy so-- ieba... soba ni OTOKO no KO ga beside her. come-to-think-of-it beside-a-guy (S) issho datta naa together was2[Kyousuke's angrily imagines who it might be. The portraits of Komatsu and Hatta adorn this panel.]bell FX: _____ pi~~n3Kyousuke: Was it really my sister? HONTOU ni IMOUTO nan desu ka really younger-sister is (?)Master: Yeah... What's-her-name, aa... nante itta kke ano uhh, the one with the how said (?) uhh ponytail. ____________ poni--te--ru no ponytail (nom)4[Isolated shot of a table at ABCB.]Kyousuke: [off] That's Manami! manami da! Then what about Kurumi, the ja kurumi no HOU wa hora KAMI no NAGAi one with the long hair? then 's way (T) see! long-hairMaster: [off] I didn't see her... sono KO wa minakatta kedo... that-girl (T) not-seen but But maybe she went in SAKI ni haitte-itchatta earlier? earlier-than/before went-in-(finality) n ja nai? (neg/explan)5Kyousuke: [clenching a fist] Th-those jerks...! a aitsura~~~~~~_Komatsu: [entering, with Hatta] Ah, there he is. a ita ita6Komatsu: [tears in his eyes] O-oniisan. o oni--san[Kyousuke, visibly in a foul mood, whips his head around.]Kyousuke FX: ___ ki_7Kyousuke: [grabbing him by the collar] Bastar-r-rd! You have the kisama--_ nukenuke to~~~~~~_ bloody gall to... you-(derogatory) have-the-cheek-to...Kyousuke FX: tsuka tsuka tsuka---------------------------------------------------p 143 (57)1Kyousuke: ______ What...?! You saw her going e----_ mishiranu OTOKO to disuko ni into the disco with a strange ! with-strange-guy to-disco guy?! haitte-iku no o mita tte?! going-into (O) saw (quote)2Kyousuke: [smiling] O-oh, so it wasn't you. na nan da omae ja nakatta n da you was-not (explan)Komatsu: [wincing] Don't feel so relieved! ANSHIN suru na yo peace-of-mind/relief don't-feel-(command)3Komatsu: [with sadness] ___ So we tried to go inside, sore de ore-tachi mo NAKA ni too... and-so/then we too to-inside hairo-- to shita n da kedo... tried-to-enter (explan) but _______ But we were refused because kappuru-IGAI wa o-kotowari da tte of the couples-only rule. except-couples (T) refusal be (quote)4[Isolated shot of the sink of dirty dishes at ABCB.]Komatsu: [off] So... sore jaa...---------------------------------------------------p 144 (58)1[Komatsu and Hatta stand at the door, and bow politely.]Komatsu: Then we leave the rest to ja ato wa o-NEGAi shima~~su you. then the-rest (T) beg/imploreHatta: I'm hoping. I'm praying. inotte-masu ogande-masu am-praying am-worshipping/praying2[Madoka, Master and Kyousuke watch then leave.]3[Madoka makes an idle comment that pops Kyousuke's eyes wide.]Madoka: _______ So couples can go in... kappuru da to haireru no ka... if-are-couples can-enter (musing)4Madoka: ________ Master. masuta--Master: [grinning] Sure. Go ahead. hai itte-rasshai yes be-going5Madoka: [to Kyousuke] The place... Where is it? o-MISE... doko ni aru no shop at-where is (?)6Kyousuke: Th-thank you. a......arigato--7[Madoka portrait--soft smile.]Madoka FX: _____ koku_---------------------------------------------------p 145 (59)1[Full-length portraits of Madoka--in a very nice dress--and Kyousuke. They walk towards us, and are partly overlaid on panel 2.]2[Exterior night shot of Disco Sid.]3[The same female employee that handed out coupons to Hikaru stands at the counter in the entryway. Madoka and Kyousuke file past, looking about.]girl: Welcome... irasshai ma...4[She looks at Kyousuke, who looks back.]girl: Oh. ara5girl: Hmm! hee--_girl FX: jirojiroKyousuke: [embarrassed] Ah, hi. a do--mo[Madoka looks back.]6girl: [cheerfully] You have a different girl o-HIRU no ONNA no KO to wa from this afternoon, noon 's girl (define) Mr. Playboy. __________ chigau no ne pureibo--i -san different Mr-Playboy[Kyousuke, blushing and cringing, swivels his head from girl to Madoka. Madoka eyes him like she's heard this all before...]Kyousuke: Ah! Wah, wah! a wa wa---------------------------------------------------p 146 (60)1[View of the dimly-lit dance floor.]2Madoka: Oo-ooh, amazing! waa sugoi! _______ This is much bigger than mebiusu yori mo zutto HIROi no ne Moebius. than-Moebius more by-far broad/spacious3Kyousuke: If it's this big, it won't kore dake HIROkucha mitsukeru no mo be easy to find her. this-much (HIROkute-wa) finding even spacious (T) TAIHEN da naa difficult is4[Overhead view of Madoka and Kyousuke, who stand at the edge of the dance floor.]narration: That's it! This is just so-- da so-- yu-- TOKI koso the sort of time when I that's-it that-kind-of-time indeed should just see through _chikara_ things with the Power... NOURYOKU de TOUSHI sureba... with-Power if-see-thru5[Kyousuke's eyes glow with the Power, and his body crackles with light.]---------------------------------------------------p 147 (61)1[Kyousuke's eyes bulge at the sight of a nude dancing guy.]music FX: ___ ____ ___ ____ zun chan zun chan2[He quickly averts his face, covering his mouth as though he is about to puke.]Kyousuke: ____ Urrgh! oee_narration: I-I don't want to see this!! ko konna mon mitakunai yo--_!! this-kind-of-thing not-want-to-see3[View pans back to show he's now looking directly at Madoka. She stands in profile to him.]Kyousuke: Eh?! e_?4[His eyes grow huge and he jumps back. Madoka, looking around the dance floor, has now turned to present her back towards him.]Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____ dokin5[The lights over the dance floor come on. Kyousuke has his hand clasped over his nose.]lights-on FX: ___ pa_6[Blood oozes over the top of that hand.]Madoka: You're so careless. otchokochoi ne-- You bumped into someone, HITO ni demo butsukatta didn't you? into-person or-something collided n desho (poss-explan)narration: Looking through things koko de TOUSHI wa chotto MURI here would seem to be a in-here see-thru (T) a-bit impossible bit impossible for me! mitai! seemsKyousuke: Yes... No. Sorta... ha... iya soro.... hanaji ga... A nose-bleed... yes no nose-bleed (S)---------------------------------------------------p 148 (62)1[Kyousuke, Madoka and others turn at the sound of...]announcer: [off] ______ _____ Well, it's the start of saa ge--mu taimu no hajimari desu game-time. game-time 's beginning is _______ Couples wishing to SHUTSUJOU KIBOU no kappuru wa participate, please come participate hope (nom) couples (T) to the stage! ________ do--zo sute--ji ni! please to-stage2[A view of the stage. Couples engage in a 2-person race involving an apple pressed between their faces.]3[The female employee from before smiles at them.]girl: Don't just watch. mite-nai de not-be-watching Why don't you join in? DEmasen ka not-join (?) You make a nice couple. anata-tachi o-niai yo you-(plural) match-well4Kyousuke: [embarrassed] "W-we make a nice couple..." o o-niai da tte... match-well are (quote)5Madoka: Kasuga-kun. KASUGA-kun[He turns toward her.]Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____ doki_6Madoka: [smiling] We... atashi-tachi...7[Snapping out of it, she tows him by the hand across the dance floor.]Madoka: This isn't the time for that! sore dokoro ja nai n desho! that-(one) is-not-the-(time) (poss-explan)Kyousuke: Y-yes... ha hai...---------------------------------------------------p 149 (63)1[Isolated shot of the overhead lights...]2[...which go off.]3[Madoka and Kyousuke look up in surprise.]narration: What?! What?! e?! e?!4Kyousuke: (Th-this music. C-could it (ko kono ONGAKU mo moshiya...) be...) this-music by-any-chance5[His pov of the other couples, dancing together.]Kyousuke: [off] _______ _____ (Cheek dance time!!) (chi--ku taimu da!!) cheek-time is6Kyousuke: Ayukawa... AYUKAWA...[She looks at him with eyes grown large and cheeks flushed.]Madoka heartbeat FX: _____ doki_7[Staring into her eyes, he decisively pulls her towards him. She is very surprised.]Madoka FX: ___ su_---------------------------------------------------p 150 (64)1Madoka: [angrily] Hey. This is no time to chotto konna koto yatte-ru be doing this sort of...! this-kind-of-thing be-doing BA-AI ja.....! time/occasion is-not2Kyousuke: [finger to lips, with a wink] Shh...! sh----_3[Shot of their shoes as they cheek-dance.]Kyousuke: _______ If we move around we'd UGOki mawaru to hoka no kappuru ni bother the other couples. if-move-around other-couples (IO) me--waku da yo trouble/disturb be We'd attract attention... medatchau shi... (medatte-shimau) and-besides stand-out-(finality/regret) It would be easier to look ko-- shite-ta for her like this. like-this were-doing ho-- ga sagashi yasui yo easier-to-look-for4Madoka: [eyes wide] Y... so...5[Her features melt into a soft smile, and she rests her head against his shoulder.]Madoka: Yeah, I guess so. sore mo so-- ne you're-right-in-a-way like-that---------------------------------------------------p 151 (65)1[They cheek dance.]2[Flashback pic to chapter 1.4, "Cheek Sorrow"--Kyousuke's and Hikaru's cheek dance.]narration: Come to think of it, it so-- ieba ICHINEN MAE wa was a year ago, with come-to-think-of-it one-year before (T) Hikaru-chan... hikaru-chan to... with-Hikaru-chan3[Kyousuke looks down upon Madoka, who has her eyes closed.]narration: And now it's with Ayukawa... soshite IMA wa AYUKAWA to... and now (T) with-Ayukawa4[Kyousuke smiles up at the ceiling.]narration: Somehow... It's like a nan da ka... YUME mitai da dream. somehow dream seems5Kyousuke: [closing his eyes] I wish we could dance like zutto ko-- shite this forever. all-the-time doing-like-this odotte-itai na want-to-be-dancing[Madoka's eyes snap open.]---------------------------------------------------p 152 (66)1[Both have their eyes open, but there's no eye contact.]2Madoka: [closing her eyes, with a smile] We can't... dame yo.....3[Kyousuke hears something and his eyes bulge.]FX: [off] ___ fu_Kyousuke: Wha?! na?!4[He turns to look at a couple, dancing and kissing. Oh, the shock of it all! ^_^]5[He blushes.]Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____ dokin6[Overhead view looking down on Madoka and Kyousuke as they dance and look into each other's faces.]---------------------------------------------------p 153 (67)1[His pov of Madoka. She looks up at him with a gentle smile.]2[And hugs him tight.]Madoka breasts FX: ____ gyu_3[His view of her face, inviting a kiss.]narration: A... Ayukawa... a... AYUKAWA..........4[Their lips approach...]5[...as Kyousuke steps on the foot of someone.]voice: OWWWW!! ita~~i!!---------------------------------------------------p 154 (68)1[It's Kurumi, in suit, bowtie and hat, dressed to look like a guy.]Kurumi: [pissed] Th-that hurt, you jerk!! i itai ja nai ka konnyaro!! sore Kyousuke: [embarrassed] I-I'm sorry. su suimasen2[His pov of Kurumi and Manami--surprise!]3[Their view of him--shock!]4[Isolated shot of the bar.]sisters: [off] O-oniichan!! o oni--chan!!Kyousuke: [off] K-Kurumi! And Manami-i-i! ku kurumi sore ni manami----_!! moreover5[Blushing, Kyousuke and Madoka rapidly disengage and try to look nonchalant.]Manami: How did you know we were do--shite koko tte wakatta no? here? why here (T) knewKyousuke and Madoka FX: _____ sasa_6Kyousuke: [angrily] Never mind that. do-- shite mo ko-- shite mo What in the world are you omaera ittai nani doing here?!! you-(plural) in-the-world what yatte n da konna toko de!! doing (explan) in-this-kind-of-placecrows-in-background FX: kaa_7Manami: __________ Kurumi got a flyer in the kurumi ga MACHI de panfuretto city... (S) in-city pamphlet moratte-kite... coming-to-get She said she wanted to do--shite mo koko ni kitai tte yu-- come here at any cost, so by-all-means want-to-come-here say-that we pretended to be a _______ couple... kara kappuru no furishite...... that's-why couple (S) pretending[Kurumi doffs her hat, letting her tresses fall.]Kurumi: [gleefully] ______ Because you can eat yummy datte disuko tte oishi-- mono food at a disco. because disco (T) tasty-things TAbereru n da mon able-to-eat (is-the-reason)Kyousuke: [livid] N-now just a minute! a ano ne~~_narration: Sheesh. What the heck are mattaku nante kotta... they thinking... really what! = thing---------------------------------------------------p 155 (69)1Kurumi: [wide-eyed] But what are you doing here, demo oni--chan koso nani yatte-ta no oniichan? but indeed what were-doingKyousuke/Madoka heartbeat FX: _____ dokin2Kurumi: [thinking it over] If it's something that futari de ISSHO ni ite the two of you would do with-2-people being-here-together together... yaru koto to ittara...... do matter if-say-that3[Kyousuke looks back nervously at Madoka, who doesn't look all that self- assured either.]Kyousuke: Th-that is... so sore wa... that-(one) (T)4Kurumi: Oh, that's it! Just as I a so-- ka yappari oishi-- mono thought, you came to eat just-as-I-thought tasty-things the yummy food, too. TAbe ni kita no ne came-to-eatKyousuke pratfall FX: ___ zu_narration: Th-that was close... a abunakatta..........5[Exterior shot of Disco Sid. In separate insets, Madoka smiles and Kyousuke looks back at her.]Kyousuke: [off] Making me worry... SHIMPAI sase-yagatte making-worry-(contempt) Hey! Let's go home! kora_ KAEru zo ! return-home !!---------------------------------------------------