Kimagure Orange Road"The Angel's Temptation"Volume 7, Story 1WB Volume 4, Story 5Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation by : Hitoshi Doi (19 Jan 1992)Additional translation by : Scott HenryFull-script typesetting by : Craig NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose                                 Scott Henry                                 Craig Nishida                                 Spencer Hastings                                 Andrew Wilson                                 Thomas Wyatt                                 Jordan Lampe                                 Matthew KlippensteinLast revision : 06-29-95Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.eduNOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few      extras to those of you not having them.      Example: The subtitles on page 93 (7) are only in the WBs!---------------------------------------------------p 93 (7)--TITLE PAGE[Against the cloud-fleeced sky, Madoka stands in school uniform, facing our left.  From behind her, a stiff breeze blows her hair and skirt, and she closes her eyes.  Her right arm is behind her back, the hand clasping the elbow of her left arm.]MAIN TITLE  The Angel's Temptation          TENSHI no YUUWAKU                                  angel  's temptationSUB-TITLE (at bottom)  If You Experience the Gentle    YUME  ga   tanabiku               AOZORA o  Feeling of a Dream Trailing     dream (S)  trailing/hanging-over  blue-sky  Across a Blue Sky, Then  Tomorrow, You'll Surely         SUNAO na              KOKORO de  Become the Wind...              obedient/meek/gentle  in-feeling/heart                                  KANjitara                                  if-feeling/experiencing                                  ASHITA   wa   kitto   KAZE ni nare.....                                  tomorrow (T)  surely  become-the-wind---------------------------------------------------p 94 (8)1[Madoka stands in full-length portrait, dressed in shorts and tight T-shirt. This is splashed over the right sides of panels 2-4.]2[Kyousuke sits up in bed.]3[Overhead view looking down at the bedroom scene.  Madoka stands with her back to the closed door.]narration:  A-Ayukawa!  What do you mean    hi...hitori de   neru no  wa  "I-it's lonely sleeping by           by-oneself  sleeping (T)  myself"?                                  sabishii    no  tte      a...AYUKAWA!                                  loneliness      (quote)4[Kyousuke portrait--blushing, wide-eyed.]Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            ____ ____ ____  <thump thump thump>             doki doki dokiKyousuke: (But this isn't a dream...       (da kedo   kore       wa   YUME   ja naku...                                      but    this-(one) (T)  dream  is-not  This is real!)                  GENJITSU  nan  da!)                                  reality   what is---------------------------------------------------p 95 (9)1[Madoka facial portrait.]Madoka FX:                        _____  <smile!>                        niko_2[Kyousuke facial portrait.]Kyousuke FX:                      _____  <gulp!>                         goku_3[Tight shot of her bare feet as she approaches his bed.]4[She kneels so that their eyes are on the same level, and she leans in close.  Kyousuke sits and stares.]narration:  A-Ayukawa...!                   a AYUKAWA...!---------------------------------------------------p 96 (10)1[Isolated shot of a bottle of scotch.  The label reads "Grand Gold Parr Aged 12 years DeLuxe Scotch Whisky."]2[She smiles and offers the bottle to Kyousuke.]Madoka:                                     _ya_  Why don't we drink together?    ISSHO ni  NO(MU) ranai?                                  together  not-drink3[She stands and looks back at him over her right shoulder.]Madoka:  I ended up bringing this        IE kara    mochidashite-kichatta  from home.                      from-home  (mochidashite-kite-shimatta)                                              came-to-carry-out-(finality)Kyousuke: [forced smile, sweating]  S-sure.                         ha haa4Kyousuke: [nervous & embarrassed]  O-ohh...                        na nan da........Madoka: [mystified]  Huh?                            e?5[Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment.]Kyousuke: [off]  No.  Ha ha ha.                  iya-- ha ha ha  N-never mind.  It's nothing.    i iya  nan demo nai                                         it's-nothingMadoka: [off]  Kampa-a-ai!  <Cheers!>          kampa--i!                                  cheers/bottoms-up!narration:  For a moment, I was rather      ICHIJI          wa   do--  naru    koto  worried about what might        once/for-a-time (T)  what  become  matter  happen!                                  ka to OMOtta          yo!                                  thought/worried-that---------------------------------------------------p 97 (11)1[Madoka sits on his bed, knees pulled up, with a drink in her hand.]2[Kyousuke sips at his glass, watching her.]3Madoka:  Say.                            nee4Madoka: [looking around at her surroundings]  This is improper behavior,      kore ja        DARE ga   mite-mo  no matter how you look at       with-this (T)  who  (S)  even-though-see  it!                                  FUJUN   ISEI          KOUYUU                                  impure  opposite-sex  companionship                                  ne~~~~~~_!Kyousuke FX:                      _____  <snort!>                        buho_[It looks like his drink came out through his nose.]5[Face flushed, Madoka thrusts out the empty bottle at Kyousuke's face.]Madoka:  Oh, there's none left.          ara   mo--  nakunatchatta                                        now   (nakunatte-shimatta)                                               was-used-up-(finality/regret)  Get another!                    o-kawari!                                  secondsKyousuke:  Y-yes!                          ha hai!---------------------------------------------------p 98 (12)1[Kyousuke goes into the liquor cabinet.]cabinet door FX:                  _____  <clack>                         kacha2Kyousuke: [carrying a bottle] (Considering the way she is      (ano FUN ja          so--to--  now, it seems like she's         at-this-moment (T)  considerably/rather  quite drunk...)                                  yopparatte-ru     mitai da  na  AYUKAWA...)                                  is-getting-drunk  seems (But is it all right for a       (shikashi  CHUUGAKUSEI     no  junior high school girl to       but       jr-high-student 's  drink so much?)                                  ONNA no KO ga   konna ni   nonde                                  girl       (S)  so-(much)  drinking                                                                    i--   mono   daro--   ka)                                  okay  thing  poss-is  (?)3[Kyousuke re-enters his bedroom...]door FX:                          _____  <clack>                         gacha4[...and looks around at an apparently empty room.]Kyousuke:  Huh?                            are?5Kyousuke: [searching]  Ayukawa.  Ayukawa?              AYUKAWA  AYUKAWA?6[From under the bedcovers a hand emerges, and reaches for Kyousuke's.]sheet FX:                         ___  <swish!>                        su_7FX:  <YANK!>                         gui_---------------------------------------------------p 99 (13)1[View pans back to show a playful Madoka, pulling Kyousuke down onto the bed.]Kyousuke:  Wah!                            wa_Madoka FX:  <YANK!>                         gui_Madoka:                           _ __ __  Ah-ha-ha!                       a ha ha2Madoka: [coquettishly, face flushed]  Over here, over here.           kotchi    kotchi                                  this-way3Madoka: [looking into his eyes]  Let's go to sleep!              nemasho_!                                  shall-sleep/shall-go-to-bed4[Madoka lies back smiling with her eyes closed.  Kyousuke remains perched over her, staring down at her with face flushed and eyes wide.]Kyousuke:  What!  What!!  Now...           e--_! e--_!  IMA... tashika ni  She certainly...                             now    certainly---------------------------------------------------p 100 (14)1[The telephone rings.]2[Kyousuke looks up.]narration:  Who in the world could it be    ittai         DARE  daro     imagoro...  at this hour...?                in-the-world  who   poss-be  at-this-time3[He lifts up the receiver.]Hikaru: [off]  Sempai, it's me!                SEMPAI  atashi  desu!                                          me      isKyousuke FX:  <urkk!>                         giku_narration:  H-Hikaru-chan?!                 hi hikaru-chan?!4Hikaru:  I'm sorry for calling so        YORU osoku     suimasen  late at night.                  late-at-night  sorry  Were you in bed?                nete-irasshaimashita?                                  were-sleeping/had-gone-to-bednarration:  ...i-in bed?                    ne nete...?                                     sleeping/going-to-bed5Kyousuke: [shouting and blushing]  N-no.                           i iya  No way was I in bed yet!        sonna         mada  nete-masen                                  that-kind-of  yet   not-be-sleeping                                  DANjite!                                  by no means!Hikaru: [off]  Huh?                            haa?6[Looking around behind him, Kyousuke notices that Madoka is up and about.]Hikaru: [off]  Oh, oh yeah, Sempai!  Did       a so-- so--  SEMPAI  KYOU   madoka-san  you happen to see Madoka-san      oh-yeah!           today  today?!                                  mikakemasen deshita?                                  not-see     wasKyousuke heartbeat FX:            _____  <THUMP!>                        doki_---------------------------------------------------p 101 (15)1Kyousuke: [looking directly at Madoka]  N-no...                         i iya..............Madoka FX:  <wobble>                        fura2Hikaru:  Is that so...                   ....sou desu ka  I wonder where the heck         ittai         doko   itchatta  she went?                       in-the-world  where  (itte-shimatta)                                                        went-(finality/regret)                                  no  kashira                                      I-wonder3[He still eyes Madoka, who now has her attention on him.]Kyousuke:  ..........                      ..........narration:  I wonder if something's the     AYUKAWA ga   do--ka shita    no ka na  matter with Ayukawa?                    (S)  anything-wrong     I-wonder4[Tight shot of an open bottle of liquor, an empty glass on its side, and a partly-filled glass.]---------------------------------------------------p 102 (16)1Kyousuke:  She...  Is something wrong?     KANOJO ga...  do--ka shita  no                                  she    (S)    anything-wrong2Hikaru:  No, it's nothing.               ie    nan demo arimasen  Then, good ni...                ja    oyasuminasa.....                                  then  good nigh<t>...3[Someone puts a finger on the receiver button.]phone FX:                         ____  <ding>                          chin4[View pans back to show Madoka standing with finger on the receiver button, staring bleary-eyed at Kyousuke.  He stares back, wide-eyed.]5Hikaru: [staring at the phone]  Oh?  We were cut off.           are?  KIrechatta                                        (Kirete-shimatta)                                         disconnected-(finality/regret)6Hikaru:  Oh well!  Never mind.           maa  ii ya!  sore yori         e--to  Umm...                          well okay    rather-than-that  let's-see  Madoka-san's number...          madokasan  CHI   wa  to                                             house (T)rotary phone FX:                  ________  ________  <dial dial>                     ji~~koro  ji~~koro---------------------------------------------------p 103 (17)1Hikaru:  Hello, otoosama <revered        moshimoshi  oto--sama  desu ka  father>?                        hello       father     is   (?)  Madoka-san...  She's nowhere    madoka-san.....  yappari    doko ni mo  <to be found> after all...                       after-all  at-anywhereHikaru:  Yes.  I wonder where on         haa  ittai doko ni          iru  earth she is?                   yes  to-where-in-the-world  is-there                                  n deshou       ne                                  (poss-explan)2[An angry Madoka tosses her hair back.]3[He looks back, speechless with surprise.]4[Madoka leans back against the wall, arms crossed, glaring at him.  Her face is flushed.  He flinches back at her outburst...]Madoka: [this is one peeved girl!]  LONG PHONE CALL, KYOUSUKE!      DENWA  NAGAi  zo     KYOUSUKE!                                  phone  long   !!---------------------------------------------------p 104 (18)1[She sits on the floor, one knee up, the other foot pulled in.  She rests an elbow on her knee and her cheek in that hand.  She glares back at us.]Madoka:  You don't care about me,        atashi no koto  nante  do-- demo i--  do you!                         about-me        what!  not-matter                                  n desho!                                  (poss-explan)2Kyousuke:  Wh-what are you saying...       so sonna....3narration:  Even though Ayukawa is drunk    KON'YA no  AYUKAWA  yotte-ru  to wa ie  tonight, still, there's         tonight's           is-drunk  but  something a bit strange  about her.                      chotto  HEN      da  na                                  a-bit   strange  is                                             ____  Somehow, she looks like         nan-da-ka  yake ni natte-ru  she's become desperate...       somehow    has-become-desperate                                  yo-- ni   mo  mieru  shi...                                  look-like     see    consider4[Kyousuke visualizes Hikaru, worried, on the phone.]Hikaru: [in flashback]  I wonder where the heck         ittai         doko   itchatta  she went?                       in-the-world  where  (itte-shimatta)                                                        went-(finality/regret)                                  no  kashira                                      I-wondernarration:  It also seems that              hikaru-chan mo    sagashite-ru  Hikaru-chan is looking                      also  is-looking-for  for her...                                  yo-- da     shi...                                  looks-like  and-besides5[He looks at Madoka's two bags which sit on the sofa.]narration:                                      _____  And those bags...               sore ni   ano kaban...                                  moreover  those-bags6[Kyousuke kneels on the floor in front of her.]Kyousuke:  Err, what did you say when      nee  IE ni    nante itte    DEte-kita  no  you left home?                  say  at-home  what  saying  began-to-leaveKyousuke FX:                      _____  <flop onto floor>               petan---------------------------------------------------p 105 (19)1[She waves a hand in dismissal.]Madoka:                           ______  Good-bye!                       gu_bai!2[Kyousuke stares back.]narration:                        ______  "Good-bye..."                   gu_bai  tte----3Kyousuke: (Can't be.  She ran away?!)      (masaka   IEDE?!)4narration:  Ah, speaking of runaways...     a  IEDE     to ieba...                                     runaway  speaking-of5[Flashback view of Komatsu and Kyousuke eavesdropping in on Mr. and Mrs. Ayukawa's conversation.]narration:  When I was in the coffee        KYOU no YUUGATA    KOMATSU to  shop with Komatsu this          this-evening/dusk  with-Komatsu  afternoon...                     _____                                  _saten_                                  CHA MISE ni        haitta     TOKI                                  at-store/teahouse  went-into  when6[Flashback view of Mr. Ayukawa.]Mr. Ayukawa:  I can't believe that she        masaka  ano KO    ga   IEDE suru  nante  would run away from home.       no-way  that-girl (S)  run-away   or-suchnarration:  That man was the world-famous   ano HITO     SHIMBUN de    mita  YUMEI na  musician that I saw in the      that-person  in-newspaper  saw   famous  newspaper...                                  SEKAITEKI   ONGAKUKA----                                  world-wide  musician7[Flashback view of the newspaper article from chapter 3.7, "I Like Japan!"]narration:  Ayukawa's father!               AYUKAWA no oto--san!                                          's father.newspaper: [partial view*]                   ____ ________  WORLD-RENOWNED VIO<LINISTS>     SEKAITEKI  baio<rinisuto>                                  world-wide vio<linists>  MR. AND MRS. AYUKAWA'S          AYUKAWA FUSAI     TOTSU<ZEN no KIKOKU!!>  SUD<DEN HOMECOMING!!>           Mr-&-Mrs-Ayukawa  suddenly  's homecoming                                  _______  <ARE THEY PREPARING TO>         amerika  EIJUU              <no JUMBI ka?!>  EMIGRATE TO AMERICA?!           America  permanent-residence 's preparation<*Translation note (CN):  The missing parts are denoted by <> and were taken from the more complete view of the newspaper in chapter 3.7, p 138, panel 5.>---------------------------------------------------p 106 (20)1narration:  Then she...                     jaa   yappari...                                  then  after-all2[His pov of Madoka.]narration:  Ran away from home after        AYUKAWA wa   IEDE shita  n da!  all!                                    (T)  ran-away    (explan)3Kyousuke: [in realization] (But wait.)                      (mate yo)narration: [flashback to an overheard line]  I won't say anything more--     moo   nani-mo   iwanai   kara  I just want her back home.      more  anything  not-say  that's-why                                  KAEtte-kite          hoshii                                  beginning-to-return  wantnarration:  That's right!  Ayukawa still    so--da!  AYUKAWA wa  mada   SHIranai  doesn't know that her father                     (T) still  not-know  gave up on that...                                  n da      oto--san ga   akirameta  koto o...                                  (explan)  father   (S)  resigned   thing (O)4[He closes his eyes, having come to a decision.]narration:  Okay.  Here's a great chance    yoshi      koko wa   hitotsu  for me to be a man and act      all-right  here (T)  one  cool!                                            _____                                  OTOKO to shite   kakko yoku!                                  as-a-man         cool5[They are still sitting and facing each other.]Kyousuke: [sternly]  Ayukawa...  Tonight...          AYUKAWA...  KON'YA  wa...  kore de  You're going home now!                      tonight (T)    with-this/now                                  IE ni    KAEru   n da!                                  to-home  return  (explanation)[Madoka looks back in surprise.]---------------------------------------------------p 107 (21)1Kyousuke:  It's not good to run away       yappari    yokunai  yo  IEDE     nante  from home...                    after-all  not-good     runaway  or-such2[She looks back with a hurt look...]3[...and averts her face in disdain.]Madoka:  Is that so!                     soo!4Madoka: [getting up to leave]  If I'm too much trouble,        MEIWAKU  dattara   atashi...  I'll...                         trouble  if-it-is  I  ...go somewhere else!           doko-ka    hoka ni...!                                  somewhere  besides/another5Kyousuke: [grabbing her wrist]  Wait!!                          mate yo!!6Kyousuke: [holding her as she tries to leave]  Don't lose hope.                sutebachi  ni natcha dame  da  yo                                  desperate  shouldn't-be    be  I'm sure your folks are         kitto   IE no HITO    wa  worried about you.              surely  home's-people (T)                                  SHIMPAI shite-ru  yo                                  are-worriedMadoka:  Thanks for everything!          osewa ni narimashita!                                  "thank you for your kind help"---------------------------------------------------p 108 (22)1Kyousuke:  Anyway, listen!                 tonikaku   kike             yo_!                                  anyway     listen-(command)2[She glares back at him.]Kyousuke: [off]                   ___  I know what you're...           ore wa   AYUKAWA no koto..........                                  I   (T)  about-you3[Angrily, she turns to leave, but he still has her by the wrist.]Madoka:  Leave me alone!                 hottoite     yo!                                  (hotte-oite)                                   leaving-alone-(for-future-sake)4[He pulls back on her, sending her flying back at him.]Kyousuke FX:  <YANK!>                         gui_Kyousuke:  I can't leave you alone!!       hottokeru      ka!!                                  (hotte-okeru)                                   can-leave-alone-(for-future-sake)5[She slams into his chest.]---------------------------------------------------p 109 (23)1Kyousuke and Madoka FX:  <clinggg!>                      beta~~_2[His pov, peering down at Madoka's cleavage.]3Kyousuke heartbeat FX:  <thump thump thump thump>       doki doki doki dokicrows-in-the-background FX:  <kaaaaa!>                       kaa---_4[The two cling very close.  Kyousuke blushes and stares...  Down.  Madoka calmly looks back.]Kyousuke:                                                    ___  S-so...  Um...  I...            da da kara        sono...  ore to shite wa                                        that's-why  that     as-I         (T)Madoka:  What are you staring at         doko   MIte           itte    n no yo  while talking?                  where  looking-(and)  saying5Kyousuke:  S-sorry!                        su suimasen!                                     sorry[They leap apart.  Madoka puts her arms across her chest.]Kyousuke FX:  <leap!>                         suzaza_6Kyousuke: [embarrassed]  So...  What was I saying?       sono--  nan   da  kke                                  that    what  is  (?)Madoka:                           ___  <tee!>                          pu_7Madoka:  <giggle>                        kusu kusu kusu---------------------------------------------------p 110 (24)1Kyousuke:  IT'S ALL RIGHT!                 DAIJOUBU!2Kyousuke:  I don't know what sort of       do--yu--      JIJOU   ga   atta  reasons you had...              what-kind-of  reasons (S)  there-were                                  no ka wa    SHIranai  kedo...                                              not-know  but  But if you go home, all         IE ni   KAEreba...  MONDAI  wa   subete  your problems will have         to-home if-return   problem (T)  all  been solved!                                  KAIKETSU shite-ru  yo!                                  be-solved3[Overhead view looking down as Madoka looks away and thinks it over.]4[His pov as she turns back toward him.]Madoka:  Okay.  I understand!            un  wakatta!5Madoka: [smiling]  If you absolutely say so,       KASUGA-kun ga   do--shite mo  Kasuga-kun...                              (S)  by-all-means                                  tte yu-- nara.......                                  if-say-that6[Her pov of him.  He looks back at her with a soft smile.]---------------------------------------------------p 111 (25)1Madoka: [a little defensively]  Besides...  If I stay           sore ni...    zutto        iru to  overnight, I don't know         besides       all-the-way  if-be-here  what you'd do...                                  nani  sareru   ka   wakannai  shi                                  what  be-doing (?)  not-know  consider[Kyousuke blushes...]2[Isolated shot of a chair at the kitchen table.]Madoka: [off]  Oh, let me use the phone        a chotto  DENWA  kashite...  for a sec...                      a-bit   phone  lending3[Kyousuke winces and watches as she makes a call.]Madoka:  Oh, hello.  It's me.            a moshimoshi  atashi                                    hello       I  I'm coming home now.            korekara  KAEru  wa                                  from-now  returnKyousuke:                          ___ (Am I such an untrustworthy      (ore wa   sonna ni   SHIN'YO no  nai  guy...?)                         I   (T)  so-(much)  trust   (S) not-have                                  OTOKO  daro--   ka)                                  man    poss-be  (?)4[Exterior night shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]Kyousuke: [off]  Ah, shall I walk you home?      a  okutte-iko--              ka?                                     shall-go-and-escort-home  (?)5[Standing in a playground, Madoka smiles and silently shakes her head.]6Madoka:  Good night.                     oyasumi7Kyousuke:  Good night.                     oyasumi---------------------------------------------------p 112 (26)1[He watches as she walks away, down the street.]car FX:                           _____  <vroom!>                        buo--2[Kyousuke returns to the apartment, and stands at the entryway.]narration:  But I feel like I missed out    demo  chotto    oshi-- koto  on something good...            but   a-little  regretted-thing                                  shita  yo-- na...                                  made   likedoor FX:                          _____  <slam>                          batan3door/lock FX:                     _____ _____  <clack clack>                   kacha kachanarration:  Eh?!                            e?!4[His sisters come in.]Manami:  We're home!                     tadaima----_!door FX:                          _____  <clack>                         gachaKurumi:  Oh, you're still awake?         are--  oni--chan  okite-ta   no?                                  huh?   brother    was-awake  (?)5Takashi:  Our plans changed, and we       YOTEI    ga   KAwatte  ne  arrived one day early.          schedule (S)  changing                                  ICHINICHI  HAYAku  tsuichatta                                  one-day    early   (tsuite-shimatta)                                                      arrived-(finality)narration:  Th-that was close!              a abunakatta----!                                    was-dangerous6[Exterior night shot of the Ayukawa residence.]7[Madoka looks into her room, her eyes widening in surprise.]---------------------------------------------------p 113 (27)1[On her mirror is another message in rouge.]message:  Welcome home.  I concede!       o-kaeri       watashi no MAke  da!  CHICHI                 --Father         welcome-back  my-defeat        is   father2Madoka:                            ________ (Thank you, Father.)             (sankyu--   oto--san)                                   thank you  father3[Looking out her window, Madoka thinks of Kyousuke, his portrait overlaid on the starry sky.]Madoka: (And...)                         (soshite...)                                   and/then/now3 [inset][Kyousuke winces as his sisters yell at him.]Manami:                                                _____  Oniichan, you slept in my       oni--chan  atashi no beddo de  bed!                                       in-my-bed                                  nete-ta        desho!                                  were-sleeping  poss-beKurumi:                                     _________  Using my bath towel!            atashi no basutaoru  tsukatte!  henta--i  You perver-r-rt.                my-bath-towel        using      pervertTakashi: [off]  Hey-y-y!  Kyousuke, my          kora--  KYOUSUKE  washi no SAKE o!  whisky!                         hey!              my-liquor    (O)---------------------------------------------------p ** (28)<**This is not present in the wideban, though this drawing is a part of the chapter, so wideban readers can see it anyway...>kimagure photograph               kimagure fotogurafu[Same picture as page 104 (18), panel 1.  Madoka sits on the floor with a kind of a peeved look, her left leg folded flat, with her left hand resting on her left ankle.  Her head is resting on her right hand and her right elbow is supported by her raised right knee.]---------------------------------------------------