Kimagure Orange Road"The Girls' Day Temptation"Volume 6, Story 7WB Volume 4, Story 2Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Jordan Lampe Thomas WyattLast revision : 04-11-95Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.eduNOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 29 (139) are only in the WB's!---------------------------------------------------p 29 (139)--TITLE PAGE[Madoka and Hikaru make a pair of very lovely Girls' Day dolls as they sit in formal wear. In front of them, Kyousuke, in a kimono, topples over, apparently drunk. Madoka looks on in surprise. Hikaru beams.]MAIN TITLE (at top) The Girls' Day Temptation YUUWAKU hinamatsuri temptation/ Girls'-(Dolls')-Festival seductionSUB-TITLE (at bottom) The Dairi-sama* of YUUJUUFUDAN no DAIRI-sama Indecisiveness. indecisiveness 's festival-doll- representing-emperor Beware of Getting Drunk AMAZAKE YOi ni on the Sweet Sake! sweet-sake intoxication (IO) GO-YOUJIN! (hon)-care/carefulness/caution/precaution/ vigilance/prudence/thoughtfulness<*Translation note: The is the festival doll representing the emperor.>---------------------------------------------------p 30 (140)1[A view of a wrestling ring--it's ladies pro wrestling. One girl arches her back to hurl her opponent up-and-over to the mat behind her.]2[Kyousuke and Kurumi cheer the action. Kyousuke is jubilant while Kurumi is steamed.]Kyousuke: There! soko da--_ ________ _______ Atomic Gals, go-o-o!! atomikku gyaruzu ike--_!! Atomic Gals go!Kurumi: Arrrrgggggghhhh... u nu nu nu...3TV: ________ _______ Ohh! It's the Flash oottoo furasshu gyaruzu no HANGEKI daa Gals' Counterattack... Flash Gals 's counterattack ________ ______________ The Hijacking Piledriver!! haijakku - pairudoraiba--!! Hijacking PiledriverKurumi: Yaaayyy! yattaaKyousuke: [wincing] Ahh-hh-hh... a~~~~TV: ________ _______ Well, in one fell swoop, the saa furasshu gyaruzu ikki ni Flash Gals have dropped them well Flash-Gals at-a-stroke into a fall! ______ fo--ru no TAISEI da! a-fall 's a-posture is Ohh! All of a sudden, oottoo koko de TOTSUZEN the Evil Alliance has at-this-place all-of-a-sudden staged a raid here!! SHOUWARU DOUMEI no wicked/malicious alliance/union 's RANNYUU!! intrusion/raid4[Exterior night shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]TV: [off] ___ _____ ______ One. Two. Three! wan tsu-- suri--!5TV: ________ _______ The Flash Gals, while being furasshu gyaruzu SHOUWARU DOUMEI ni distracted by the Evil Flash-Gals Evil-Alliance (IO) Alliance, were caught in the Atomic Gals' Roaring- KI o torarete-iru AIDA ni Clutch Hold!! be-distracted between/amidst ________ _______ _________ ________ atomikku gyaruzu no ro--ringu - kuratchi Atomic-Gals 's roaring clutch ____________ ho--rudo----_!! hold !!!Kyousuke: [pumping a fist] Victoryyy! KAttaa!Kurumi: [up in arms] No faiirrr! zuru--i!Kurumi FX: ______ punpun6Kurumi: ________ This referee's part of a kono referi-- guru ja na--i kuyashi-- plot. I'm pissed... this-referee conspire is-not vexing[Kurumi shoves her brother aside. Kyousuke goes flying off-panel.]Kurumi shove FX: ___ don---------------------------------------------------p 31 (141)1Kyousuke: [angered] ______ It was a clean 3-count. MONKU na shi no 3 kaunto daro satisfactory/perfectly 3-count poss-be[And he slings Kurumi across the room.]Kyousuke toss-sister FX: ___ don2Kurumi: [on bullhorn, raising a fist in challenge] Th-that does it!! ya yatta wa ne--!![Kyousuke uses both hands to invite Kurumi on.]Kyousuke: Come on! kinasa--i!3[Manami pauses in her cleaning...]fight FX: [off] ________ ____ dotabata dota4Manami: [to Kyousuke, who turns] Quiet! yakamashii!5Kurumi flying-kick FX: ______ bishi_ Kurumi: An opening! suki ari! opening exists[And she connects to the back of Kyousuke's neck. He goes down like a side of beef.]6[Kurumi leaps on Kyousuke's chest, pinning him to the floor. He's in no condition to resist. Manami goes to her knees to count him out.]Manami pounding-floor FX: ___ ___ pan panManami: ___ _____ _______ One. Two. Three! wan tsu-- suri--_!7[Manami raises the jubilant Kurumi's arm in victory.]Kurumi: _______ That's it! da----_Kyousuke: [grabbing the back of his neck] Ow-ow-ow-ouch... ata ta ta ta ta ta ta ta ta ta ta---------------------------------------------------p 32 (142)1[Exterior shot of the Hiyama residence.]narration: Today dawns, the 3rd of akete HONJITSU wa 3-GATSU 3-KA March... opening/dawning today (T) March-3rdsign: Hiyama HIYAMA2[Isolated shot of a Girls' Day doll.]3[View pans back to show many such dolls on a multi-level display stand.]narration: It's Girls' Day! hinamatsuri na n desu! Girls'-Day is (explan)4Hikaru: [offering sweet sake] For you, kind Sir. do--zo o-hitotsu if-you-please (hon)-one5Kyousuke: [rubbing the back of his neck] Th-thanks. do do--mo Ow-ouch... itete...6Hikaru: Is your neck troubling you? KUBI do--ka nasatta n desu ka? neck is-there-anything-wrong-with-(you)-(?)Kyousuke: Yeah... A little... haa... chotto..., and --were spoken with a high degree of politeness, which isn't always apparent in the English translation.>7[Kyousuke aims a dark look at Kurumi.]Kyousuke: ____ Seems like a bone or muscle HONE ka suji ga is out of whack... bone or muscle (S) ____ zurechatta mitai de... (= zurete-shimatta) seeming slip-out-of-place/disconnectedKurumi stick-out-tongue FX: _____ be--_---------------------------------------------------p 33 (143)1[The 3 Kasuga sibs sit in a row in front of the display of dolls as Hikaru serves them sweet sake. The girls smile cheerfully.]narration: I was invited by Hikaru-chan, hikaru-chan ni SHOUTAI sarete and brought along my sisters by-hikaru are-invited-(and) over to her place for a Girls' Day celebration! IMOUTO-tachi o tsurete taking-younger-sisters-with-(me) hikaru-chan CHI de hinamatsuri! at-Hikaru's-place Girls'-Day2Kyousuke: [looking at the dolls] (How nice... Girls' Day, (i-- naa hinamatsuri tte with girl-like grace...) Girls'-Day (T) ONNA no KO rashikute being-just-like-a-girl o-shitoyaka de......) graceful/polite/gentle with3Kyousuke: [looking at his sisters] (Because we've done nothing (KYONEN made wa HIkKOshi bakari de but move up until last year, up-until-last-year (T) because-only-moving my sisters haven't been able to celebrate this day.) IMOUTO-tachi IWAtte-yarenakatta younger-sisters wasn't-able-to-celebrate- (favor-to-them) mon na--) reason4Kyousuke FX: __ zu...Kyousuke: [smiling] (Surrounded by girls, and (ONNA no KO ni kakomarete I can drink sweet sake, by-girls be-surrounded too... AMAZAKE mo nomeru shi sweet-sake-too able-to-drink consider This is Heaven! Heaven!) GOKURAKU GOKURAKU) paradise/bliss5Komatsu: [popping up] HI! yo_!6Kyousuke: (No matter where you are, this (doko demo dete-kuru guy comes crawling out like a in-any-place/wherever start-emerging cockroach.) _____ ________ _yatsu_ gokiburi no yo-- na OTOKO da na) like-a-cockroach guy is---------------------------------------------------p 34 (144)1[He sips from his cup, watching the three girls talk.]narration: Now if Ayukawa was here, it kore de AYUKAWA ga ireba would be perfect... with-this/now (S) if-be-here _kimari_ SAIKOU na n da kedo------ ultimate- be (explan) but (arrangement)2narration: _______ But she's got ABCB! abakabu ga aru mon na--_ ABCB (S) exists reason I wonder if she's not yappari konai no ka na? coming after all? after-all not-coming I-wonder3Manami: Oniichan, if you drink too oni--chan NOmi sugiru to much, you'll get drunk! if-drink-too-much yotchau yo (= yotte-shimau) get-drunk-(finality/regret)[He slugs down another cup.]Kyousuke FX: gubi~~4Kyousuke FX: _____ hikkuKyousuke: [face flushed] Well, I'll have another. dore mo-- ippai well-then/now another one-cup5[He tries to reach for the pot of sweet sake next to Hikaru...]Kyousuke: Oops, can't... Reach. otto to dokanai (todokanai = not-reach)narration: _chikara_ All right. With the Power... yoshi NOURYOKU de... with-Power Come! koi Come here, sweet sake! kotchi koi AMAZAKE!6[Looking up, Kyousuke realizes he can see through Hikaru's clothes... His eyes goggle.]Kyousuke hearbeat FX: _____ doki_---------------------------------------------------p 35 (145)1Kyousuke: [babbling in shock] B-bare bare. ha hada hada[The girls all turn to stare at him.]Hikaru: ? ?2narration: Str-strange... o okashi-- naa How is it I could see through nande TOUSHI nanka shichatta her clothes? why (= shite-shimatta) somehow-saw-through-(finality) n daro? (poss-explan)Kurumi: He's gotten fairly drunk. so--to-- yotte-ru na decently/moderately has-become-drunk Sheesh. korya3[Later, they play "Old Maid".]4[Kyousuke draws a card from Hikaru's hand.]5narration: Because today is Girls' KYOU wa ONNA no KO no HI na Day, this time I'll let today (T) girl 's day is Hikaru-chan win. n da mon koko wa hitotsu is-the-reason this-place (T) one hikaru-chan ni HANA o motasechae Hikaru (IO) (= motasete-shimae) let-(one)-have-the-credit- for/save-a-person's-face6narration: ___ _______ All I have to do is see ore ga torampu o TOUSHI shite through her cards and draw I (S) trump/card (O) seeing-through-(and) the Old Maid. ____ baba o hi--chaeba old-woman (O) (= hiite-shimaeba) if-draw-(finality) ii n da okay (explan)7[With Hikaru looking off to the side, Kyousuke abruptly disappears.]Kyousuke teleport FX: ____ shu_Manami: ___ Ah! ha_8Hikaru: [looking about] Huh? Sempai... are? SEMPAI wa...Manami: [wiping her brow] (That drunk...) (ano yopparai......)[Kurumi is wide-eyed. Komatsu's complete attention is on the twins.]---------------------------------------------------p 36 (146)1[View of a hallway.]2Kyousuke teleport FX: ____ shu_3[He finds himself in a bedroom.]Kyousuke: ? ?4Kyousuke: __________ Huh? I teleported! are? terepo--to shichatta! (= shite-shimatta) teleported-(finality/regret)5[View of a stereo deck.]Kyousuke: [off] Hmmm. This room...? hate kono HEYA wa......? well/let's-see this-room (T)6[Hikaru walks down the hallway...]Hikaru: (Strange... Sempai. Where (okashi-- naa SEMPAI doko itta n daro) did he go?) strange where-went (poss-expl)7[...and opens the door.]door FX: _____ gacha---------------------------------------------------p 37 (147)1Hikaru: [brightly] Sempai! sempai!2Kyousuke: [embarrassed smile] Ah! Excuse me! a o-jama shite-masu! This is... Your room? koko... hikaru-chan no HEYA? this-place 's room3Hikaru FX: ______ chira_4[With a knowing look, she shuts the door behind her.]door FX: _____ _____ batan kacha5Hikaru: Ohhh. So this is what it naan da ko-- yu-- koto datta was. what is-this this-kind-of-thing was n desu ne (explan)6Hikaru: [putting her hands around his neck] You secretly slipped away, kossori nukedashite atashi ga and waited for me to come... secretly slipping-away I (S) Great! kuru no o matte-te-kureta to-come (O) was-waiting-(favor-to-me) ______ nante... suteki! the-likes-of great/wonderfulKyousuke: HUH?! ha_?---------------------------------------------------p 38 (148)1Kyousuke: Ow-ow-ow-ouch... My neck... itetetetetete KUBI ga a~~~~ Ahhh. neck (S)Hikaru: [letting go] Oh, sorry. a suimasen2[She nestles contentedly against his shoulder.]Hikaru FX: ___ su_3[She closes her eyes, inviting a kiss.]narration: Perhaps it's because I'm yopparatte-ru sei ka drunk, but Hikaru-chan looks be-getting-drunk fault (musing) a lot cuter! hikaru-chan ga ichidan to kawaiku miechau! (S) looks-cuter-(finality)4narration: The two of us, alone in hikaru-chan no HEYA de futari kkiri her room. in-Hikaru's-room just-2-people5[She tilts her chin up as Kyousuke stares hard at her...]Kyousuke FX: _____ goku_narration: Th... This is... ko... kore wa......6Madoka: [off] Excuse me. o-jama shimasu---------------------------------------------------p 39 (149)1[Full-length portrait of Madoka in sweatshirt and long skirt.]Manami: [off] Ayukawa-sempai. AYUKAWA-SEMPAI2Madoka: Huh? Where's Hikaru? are? hikaru waManami: Uhh... sore ga.......3Madoka: Kasuga-kun vanished? KASUGA-kun ga KIeta? (S) vanished/disappeared4[Hikaru turns, smiling, at the sound of...]door FX: ___ ___ ton tonHikaru: Ye-e-es. ha--i5door opening FX: _____ batan[Madoka and Manami enter, eyes grown large at what they see.]---------------------------------------------------p 40 (150)1[Hikaru is still clinging close to Kyousuke.]Komatsu: [sticking his head in] Whooaaa. So brazen! o~~~~~~tto kore wa DAITAN na! this-(one) (T) boldly2[They return to the living room. Hikaru sits at Kyousuke's side as they all eat and chat.]Kurumi: [to Komatsu] Huh? Really-y-y? e-- honto~~~?Hikaru: [to Kyousuke] And then, it was... soide motte ne 3Komatsu: [grinning] Hot as usual. You lucky aikawarazu o-ATSUi koto de guy! as-usual hot thing being kono SHIAWAse MONO_! this fortunate personHikaru: [pouring him more sake] Go on, gulp it down. sa sa gutto4[Kyousuke portrait--he is sloshed.]Kyousuke FX: ______ chira_5[His pov of Madoka, who pointedly ignores him.]Madoka primness FX: ______ tsu--n6narration: She certainly didn't need nani-mo anna toko ni to enter that room... anything that-kind-of-place (IO) haitte-konakute-mo------ even-tho-not-come-and-enterKyousuke FX: __ zu...---------------------------------------------------p 41 (151)1[Komatsu and Hikaru are quite impressed as Kyousuke tosses another one back.]Kyousuke FX: gubi--2Komatsu: [pouring him another] What fine drinking ii NOmippuri da nee . fine drinking-technique is (rhet) Here, have another. mama hitotsu as-one-likes/pleases onepouring FX: toku toku toku toku3narration: Ahh... It doesn't matter mo-- do-- ni demo nare! now! in-any-way becomeKyousuke drinking FX: ikki ikki gubi--_4[Kyousuke falls on his back, stone drunk.]Hikaru: Sempaaai! sempa--i!Kyousuke FX: ___ do_5[Isolated shot of the display of dolls.]---------------------------------------------------p 42 (152)1[Exterior night shot of the Hiyama residence.]2[Kyousuke lies asleep, tucked into Hikaru's bed.]3Kyousuke: Hmm? n4Kyousuke: Huh... Is this Hikaru-chan's are... koko hikaru-chan no HEYA? room? this-place 's room5[Downstairs, Manami chats with Madoka as Hikaru, Kurumi and Komatsu play cards.]6Kurumi: I'm thirsty. nodo kawaichatta7Madoka: [getting up] ________ Shall I make some coffee? ko--hi-- demo ireyo-- ka coffee or-something shall-pour (?)Hikaru: [smiling, with cards in her hand] Sorry. suimasen---------------------------------------------------p 43 (153)1[Madoka walks down the hall.]2[Passing a door, she looks at the knob.]3[Inside, Kyousuke reaches for the door.]Kyousuke: ________ (Ahh. My head is still (a-- mada ATAMA ga furafura suru) spinning.) still head (S) swims4[Tight shot of Madoka's hand grasping the door knob.]5[Kyousuke yanks the door open, sending Madoka flying into the room. Both are surprised.]door FX: _____ kacha---------------------------------------------------p 44 (154)1[Kyousuke moves to catch her, and ends up grabbing a breast.]Madoka: Kya!! kya_!!2Kyousuke hand FX: munzu3[Horrified, he leaps back, yanking the offending hand back with his other hand. Madoka blushes and crosses her arms over her chest.]Kyousuke leap-away FX: ___ ba_4[As Madoka stands there silently, Kyousuke searches about. He sees the open door.]narration: __ __________ B-better run! I'll ni nigeyou te terepo--to da! t-teleport! shall-run teleport be5[Instead, the door slams shut.]door FX: _____ batan---------------------------------------------------p 45 (155)1narration: H-huh? I'm sure I tried to a are? TASHIka ni teleport... surely __________ terepo--to shiyou to shita tried-to-teleport hazu na no ni------ likelihood even-though2[Madoka's eyes grow wide with nervousness.]3Kyousuke: _ ___ I-I... Didn't mean this. o ore... konna tsumori ja I this-kind-of-intentionnarration: _chikara_ The Power is acting in a NOURYOKU ga HEN na FUU ni strange way! Power (S) strange tendency/manner hataraichau! (= hataraite-shimau) work/act-(finality/regret)4[She backs away from this madman...]Madoka FX: __ __ su za...5narration: I-if I don't somehow come na nan-to-ka ii wake shinakya up with a good excuse, I'm somehow excuse (= shinakereba) ruined! if-not-done HAMETSU da! destruction/ruin beKyousuke: I-it's a misunderstanding. go gokai da yo misunderstanding is6Kyousuke: ____ The reason I touched your AYUKAWA no mune sawatta no wa... breast is... 's breast touched (nom) (T)[His face goes all goofy.]7[Madoka doesn't like this expression at all. She continues to back away, her arms still crossed over her chest.]Kyousuke: Ah! ha_---------------------------------------------------p 46 (156)1[She backs into the bed and topples over.]Madoka: Ah! a_2Madoka fall FX: [off] _____ dosa_Kyousuke heartbeat FX: doki3[His pov of the lovely maiden. Her eyes are wide with fear, and her skirt has ridden up, showing her legs and a bit of her panty.]4Kyousuke: [racing forward] Ah! Are you all right?! a DAIJOUBU?!Kyousuke FX: ___ da_5[His knee hits the side of the bed.]---------------------------------------------------p 47 (157)1[He falls...]2[Madoka winces, prepared for the impact...]3[...as Kyousuke's chin hits the side of the bed.]Kyousuke: Yelp. gyanKyousuke chin FX: ___ ga_4[He looks up at her from the edge of the bed...]Kyousuke: .......... ..........5[...and his face crashes to the floor.]Kyousuke chin FX: zuru6Madoka: ___ ho_---------------------------------------------------p 48 (158)1[Night shot of a dimly-lit street.]2[Kyousuke, rubbing his neck, walks home with his sisters.]Kyousuke: Huh?! are_3Kyousuke: My neck, which felt out of zurete-ta KUBI ga whack, is back to normal was-slipped-out-of-place neck (S) again! moto ni modotte-ru! origin (IO) is-returning4narration: Out of... Out of whack?! zurete... zurete-ta?!Kyousuke: Oh! That's it!! a_ so-- ka!!5diagram: 1. When I tried to get the AMAZAKE o torou to shitara... sweet sake... sweet-sake (O) when-try-to-get 2. I saw through things! TOUSHI shita! _______ 3. When I tried to see torampu o TOUSHI shiyou to shitara... through the cards... cards (O) when-try-to-see-through __________ 4. I teleported! terepo--to shita! __________ 5. When I tried to terepo--to shiyou to shitara... teleport... ___ 6. The door closed! doa ga shimatta! door (S) closeddoor FX: _____ batan6[View down the dark street.]Kyousuke: [off] _chikara_ Was it because of my neck nanto NOURYOKU ga that my Power was out of what! Power (S) whack...? zurete-ta no wa was-slipping-out-of-place (T) KUBI no sei datta no ka...... neck 's fault was (?) But... shikashi... Why did it return to normal? nande moto ni modotta n daro? why to-origin returned (poss-explan)7Kyousuke: (As I recall... Getting (TASHIka... yopparatte drunk, falling asleep...) if-I-recall-correctly getting-drunk nechatte...) (= nete-shimatte) sleeping-(finality/regret)---------------------------------------------------p 49 (159)1narration: Aaahh!! Th-that-s it! a----_!! so so-- da![He visualizes grabbing Madoka's breast, her look of nervousness, his view of her as she lay back on the bed...]2narration: Th-that terrible thing did e erai koto shichatta! it! great-thing (= shite-shimatta) = did3Kyousuke: [nervously] Umm... Didn't Ayukawa say ano... AYUKAWA nani-ka anything? umm something itte-nakatta? wasn't-sayingManami: [thinking about it] Oh, now I remember. a so-- so-- now-I-remember I don't know what to make nan-da-ka shiranai kedo... of it, but... somehow not-know but[Kurumi smiles merrily.]4narration: March 3rd, Girls' Day... 3-GATSU 3-KA hinamatsuri... March-3rd Girls'-Day ____ Today was just a mess, but... KYOU wa doji bakkari today (T) just-a-bungle/blunder/mess datta kedo was but ______Manami: _saite--_ She said, "You're the pits"! "SAITEI" da tte! the-lowest be (quote)[The sisters turn and walk away. Kurumi stifles a laugh. Kyousuke has done a pratfall.]narration: It was quite pleasant being ONNA no KO ni kakomarete kekkou surrounded by girls for a surround-by-girls quite whole day... TANOshii ICHINICHI datta...... fun/pleasant one-day/whole-day was I wonder...? no ka na? I-wonder --Kyousuke KYOUSUKE---------------------------------------------------