Kimagure Orange Road"The Two in a Snowy Night"Volume 6, Story 4WB Volume 3, Story 15Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Thomas Wyatt Jerry Lee Jordan Lampe Matthew KlippensteinLast revision : 04-11-95Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.eduNOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 311 (73) are only in the WB's!---------------------------------------------------p 311 (73)--TITLE PAGE[Half-portrait of Madoka. She stands in a dress, pulling her tresses back behind her.]MAIN TITLE (at top) The Two in a Snowy Night YUKI-YO no futari snowy-night 's 2-peopleSUB-TITLE (at bottom) _____________ ______ With a Poker Face, You po--ka--feisu de ku--ru ni kimete Look Cool--You Want to Try with-poker-face cool (IO) resolving and Slip Closer. sotto SEKKIN shite-mitai secretly/quietly want-to-try-to-get-near---------------------------------------------------p 312 (74)1Madoka: [pressing up close] I want to be alone with kono mama zutto... you... just-as-this-is all-the-time2[Kyousuke blushes.]crows-in-background FX: kaa3Madoka: ...like this, forever. futari kkiri de itai with-only-2-people want-to-be-there4[View pans back to show them seated close together in the gondola.]Kyousuke: AYUKAWA!! AYUKAWA!!Kyousuke FX: shikka---------------------------------------------------p 313 (75)1[Back to reality... Kyousuke slams his face against the side of the gondola.]Kyousuke FX: ______ gochinMadoka: [holding a phone] What are you doing? nani shite n no what doing2Kyousuke: [rubbing his nose] Wh-what are *you* doing? na nani shite n no3Madoka: [sternly] We should ask why we stopped. do--shite tomatta no ka why stopped (?) ki--te-minakya (kiite-minakereba-) must-ask-and-see4Kyousuke: They'll find out we got MUDAN de NOtta no ga on without permission. w/out-permission got-on (nom) (S) ____ barechau yo (barete-shimau) be-brought-to-light-(finality/regret)Madoka: This is no time to be sonna koto itte-ru saying that. that-kind-of-thing be-saying BA-AI ja nai desho occasion is-not poss-be5[Overhead view looking down on the stalled gondola. The ski lodge buildings are below.]narration: _________ It was nice to get on the AYUKAWA to futari de YORU no ro--puuei ni ropeway at night alone with alone-with-Ayukawa night 's ropeway (IO) Ayukawa, but... NOtta na ii kedo rode nice but We've been stuck here for tomatte-shimatte mou almost an hour now. stopping-(finality/regret) now KO- ICHI JIKAN wa sugita darou nearly one hour (T) poss-passed---------------------------------------------------p 314 (76)1[Isolated shot of the wall phone in the control room.]sign over phone: Emergency HIJOUphone FX: #RRR#sign: [left] ______ Village Lift Operations SON-EI rifuto Control Room operated-by-the-village lift SAGYOU KANRI SHITSU operation control room2Madoka: No answer. denai waKyousuke: Eh?! e?!3Kyousuke: I wonder if that man has moo KAEtchatta no ka na already gone home? already (= KAEtte-shimatta) I-wonder went-home-(finality/regret) ______ ano ojisan that-mister4Madoka: See? This is all because hora ne KATTE ni NOru kara da yo we got on without permission. look without-leave get-on it's-becauseKyousuke: Guilty as charged... maitta na...... yield/give-in5Madoka contemplation FX: ji--_6Madoka: Ohhh! This is surprising. hoo--_ IGAI NA ne ! surprising/unexpected You're keeping pretty cool. kekkou OchiTSUite-ru ja nai quite are-calm/keeping-coolKyousuke: [with a pleased look] Eh...? R-really? e... so soo?7[He sits relaxed, looking a bit smug, while Madoka takes a more tense posture.]narration: ___ Of course... If worse comes TASHIka ni---- iza to narya ore ni wa worst, I have the Power in certainly if-compelled in-me (T) me. _chikara_ NOURYOKU ga aru n da shi Power (S) have (explan) consider No sweat, no sweat! yoyu-- yoyu--! time-to-spare/composure---------------------------------------------------p 315 (77)1Kyousuke: [grinning] Now, now. There's no point maa maa asette-mitatte in worrying about it--it even-tho-try-and-worry-oneself can't be helped. shikata ga nai ja nai can't-be-helped is-not __ __ __ __ wa ha ha hanarration: After all, it's not often nantatte futari kkiri that it's just the two of after-all only-2-people us alone on a night like this! konna YORU wa chotto this-kind-of-night (T) for-a-bit nai mon na--! not-there reason2gondola FX: _____ yura_[The two hit the floor.]3Kyousuke: [looking panicky] Wh-what was that...? na nani IMA no wa...... what now (nom)Madoka: [looking out the window] This isn't just a laughing mou WARAtte bakari mo matter any more. no-more smiling/laughing just too irarenakunatte-kita wa yo came-to-not-be-having4Madoka: It looks like... do--yara......5[Exterior shot of the gondola. A fierce wind blows the falling snow horizontally.]Madoka: [off] ...a blizzard's started. fubuite-kita mitai started-to-snowstorm appears---------------------------------------------------p 316 (78)1Madoka: All we can do is wait until ASA ni naru made MAtsu shika nai wa ne morning. become-morning until wait only-have Then, the people in charge so-- sureba KAKARI no HITO mo will notice and rescue us. if-do-like-that person-in-charge too KIzuite TASUkete-kureru wa becoming-aware-(and) rescue-(us)2[Kyousuke facial portrait--he thinks that over.]3Kyousuke: Th-that would be terrible!! so sore wa TAIHEN!! that-(one) (T) terribleMadoka: What now...? nani o imasara...4[He visualizes a shocked Yuusaku and an angry Hikaru.]narration: B-because. Returning after da datte ASAGAEri an overnight stay... How because returning-after-overnight-stay will I explain that to Hikaru-chan...? tte koto wa---- hikaru-chan ni the-case-that to-Hikaru nante i--wake surya i-- n da how! excuse if-do okay (explan)Hikaru: Whaaaaat?! The two of you... e----_ futari de ICHIYA o... ! with-2-people one-night (O)Yuusaku: ...spent the night together?! akashita?! spent-a-night5[His pov of Hikaru shouting in his face.]Hikaru: _____ Sempai, you PERVERT!! sempai no etchi!! 's 6Hikaru: [running off] ______ Keeping it a secret from atashi ni naisho de madoka-san to me--doing "OO" and "XX" and from-me in-secret with-madoka such with Madoka-san... #OO# shite #XX# nante doing-OO XX etc.Kyousuke: Ah, it wasn't like that! a chigau n da yo----_! mistaken (explan)Hikaru: ______ Jerk! Die!! baka-- SHInjimae----_!! (SHInde-shimae) go-and-die-(finality)[Overlaid on this panel is a wincing Kyousuke.]narration: Whatever happens, we must ZETTAI ni ASA made ni wa return before morning! absolutely before-morning (contrast) KAEranakya! (KAEranakereba-) = must-return---------------------------------------------------p 317 (79)1[He sits down.]narration: Fine. If it's come to this, yo--shi ko-- nattara I'll use the Power directly if-become-like-this to try and move the ropeway. _chikara_ CHOKUSETSU NOURYOKU o TSUKAtte directly using-the-Power _________ ro--puuei o UGOkashite-miyou ropeway (O) shall-try-and-move2[Exterior shot of the raging snowstorm.]narration: But, I wonder if it's da kedo sonna daisoreta koto possible for me to do such but that-kind-of outrageous-thing an outrageous thing with ___ _chikara_ my Power...! ore no NOURYOKU de dekiru no ka na----_ with-my-Power can-do I-wonder !wind FX: _______ byuuuuu3Kyousuke: [flashing with the Power] (But... If I don't, we won't (shikashi... yaranakya KAErenai) get home.) but (yaranakereba) not-able- if-not-do to-return4[Another exterior shot of the raging snowstorm.]thunder FX: ________ gooooooo---------------------------------------------------p 318 (80)1 and 2[Exterior shots of the gondola. It's not moving.]3[A diagram of the ropeway. Two towers connected by the cable, from which hangs their gondola.]narration: I-it wouldn't just move, u UGOku hazu nai yo na would it. move not-likely _______ This gondola doesn't have kono gondora ni DENSHA mitai na a motor attached to it, on-this-gondola like-an-electric-train like a train does... ________ mo--ta-- tsunde-ru wake de wa nai motor is-joining it's-not-the-case shi... consider/and-besides Because it moves entirely UE to SHITA de along with the cable on the top/upper and bottom/lower at top and the bottom. ______ ro--pu goto UGOkashite-ru together-with-rope is-setting-in-motion wake da kara is-the-case that's-whydiagram: ________ _________ ________ Motor. Ropeway. Motor. mo--ta-- / ro--puuei / mo--ta--4[He flashes with the Power.]Kyousuke: ______ (I've got to move it along (ro--pu goto with the cable!!) together-with-rope UGOkasanakya!!) (UGOkasanakereba-) must-move5Madoka: __________ What are you muttering to nani hitori de butsubutsu itte n no yourself? what with-1-person muttering (?)Kyousuke: ___ Ah! ha_6Kyousuke: [forced smile] Oh, just a little prayer to a chotto KAMISAMA ni o-INOri nado God. a-little to-God prayer or-suchMadoka: What! akireta! amazed/"good-grief!"7[A window starts to crack.]glass FX: ______ mishi_8[Kyousuke and Madoka look around them in surprise.]glass FX: ______ mishi_---------------------------------------------------p 319 (81)1[A window explodes and they turn away, shielding their faces.]glass FX: _____ barin2[Both end up on the floor.]narration: Wh-whaaat?! na nan daa~~_?!3[The fierce wind blows into the gondola.]wind FX: ________ byuuuuuu4Madoka: How the heck did that happen? ittai... do-- shita tte yu-- no? in-the-world what-happened thatnarration: Looks like things have gone yoke-- masuku natta mitai from bad to worse. excessive became-bad appears---------------------------------------------------p 320 (82)1[Isolated shot of the wind blasting through the shattered window.]wind FX: ________ byoooooo2[Tight shot of the thermometer inside the gondola. It reads -5 degrees Celsius. Or 23 degrees Fahrenheit for the metrically-challenged. ^_^]3[Madoka pulls up her knees and huddles on the seat.]Madoka: About what time is it now? IMA...... nan-JI goro darou now what-time about poss-be I bet everyone's worried. minna SHIMPAI shite-ru darou na everyone poss-be-worrying4[Kyousuke watches as Madoka shivers.]narration: It's cold! samui! If it stays like this, we'll kono mama ja SHInjau yo die. if-this-keeps-up (SHInde-shimau) die-(finality/regret)Madoka FX: _____ buru_5[He spies an open compartment.]6Kyousuke: Ah, there was a blanket! a MOUFU ga atta! blanket (S) there-was7narration: But there's only one... demo ICHI-MAI shika nai kara---- but one only-have that's-whyKyousuke: [presenting it to her] Here. Use this. hai kore---------------------------------------------------p 321 (83)1Madoka: That's no good. dame yo ____ You'll catch a cold. KASUGA-kun ga kaze hi--chau yo (S) (= kaze hiite-shimau) catch-cold-(finality)Kyousuke: [wide grin] ___ Don't worry! I'm a man... DAIJOUBU! ore wa OTOKO... I (T) man2Kyousuke: ___ Ah! ha_3Kyousuke: ________ AH-CHOO! hakushon4[She sits him down next to her and wraps the blanket around the both of them.]Madoka: It'll be okay like this. ko-- sureba i-- no yo if-doing-like-this okay5Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____ doki_6Kyousuke: (N-no! What am I doing at a (i ikenai! konna TAIHEN na TOKI ni time like this, thinking in-terrible-situation-like-this indecent...) nani o FUKINSHIN na...) what (O) indecent7narration: Damn...! If only someone kuso----_ dare-ka SHITA de down there would flip the damn/shit! somebody at-bottom ropeway's switch... _________ _______ ro--puuei no suitchi sae Irete-kuretara ropeway 's switch if-only-set-for-me naa---------------------------------------------------p 322 (84)1Kyousuke: (Th-that's it! Kazuya!! (so so--da! KAZUYA da!! KAZUYA ga Kazuya's here.) is (S) ita n da) was-here (explan)2narration: ___ ___________ I'm not telepathic, but ore terepashi-- wa TSUKAenai kedo maybe if I mentally call I telepathy (T) can't-use but out, he'll notice me. KOKORO no NAKA YObikaketereba in-inside-of-mind if-call-to KIzuite-kureru kamoshirenai notice-(favor-to-me) it-is-possibleKyousuke: [flash thought] (PLEASE HELP ME, KAZUYA!!) (tanomu TASUkete-kure KAZUYA_!!) beg help-me3[Exterior shot of the ski lodge.]4[Kazuya lies asleep in bed.]5Kyousuke: (Shit...! There's no (kuso--_ nan no HANNOU mo nai... response at all... shit ! not-at-all have-no-effect Of all the times, at a time konna TOKI ni KAGItte like this--is he pretending this-kind-of-time of-all-times not to know...?!) shiran puri ka yo----_) not-know pretend (?)6Kyousuke: [fiercely] (Hey! Kazuya! If I die, I'm (kora_ KAZUYA SHIndara coming back to haunt you!!) hey ! if-die bakete dete-yaru zo--_) emerge-in-the-form-of-(favor-to-you) !!7Kazuya sit-up FX: ____ gaba---------------------------------------------------p 323 (85)1[Kazuya looks over at a sleeping Yuusaku.]Kazuya: (Ahh, that surprised me. A (a-- bikkuri shita YUME ka... dream, huh... surprised-me dream (musing) Kyou-niichan sure looked KYOU-ni--chan ttara erai awfully terrifying.) Kyousuke-oniichan (I-tell-you) awful kenmaku datta naa) terrifying was2Kazuya: What? Kyou-niichan isn't nan da mada KAEtte-nai no ka back yet? what yet not-be-returning (?) KYOU-ni--chan Where the heck is he ittai doko o hottsukiARUite wandering about? where-in-the-world (O) gadding-about n da (explan)3Kazuya: [lying back down] Well, never mind. maa ii kaKazuya FX: fua4[He sits up again.]Kazuya: I need to pee... o-shikko ikitai... pee want-to-goKazuya FX: _____ gaba_5Kazuya: [lying back down] Ah, well. It's so cold-- maa ii ka SAMUi shi I can hold it. cold consider gaman shiyotto shall-endure/put-up-with-it6[Back in the gondola, Madoka and Kyousuke sit huddled under the blanket, with bleak expressions.]---------------------------------------------------p 324 (86)1[Kyousuke turns to look at Madoka.]narration: Once again, it's my fault konna koto ni natta no that it's turned out this turned-into-this-kind-of-thing (nom) way! mo moto wa to ieba too the-cause/basis speaking-of ___ ore no se-- da! my-fault it-is2Kyousuke: [dropping his gaze] I'm sorry, Ayukawa... gomen AYUKAWA...3[She looks at him, letting out a puff of air.]4[Then smiles and rests her head against his. Kyousuke is surprised.]Madoka: There's nothing to apologize ayamaru koto nai yo for. apologize thing not-have5Madoka: [eyes closed, gently smiling] In fact, you're pretty warm, sore yori KASUGA-kun tte Kasuga-kun. than-that-(one) (T) kekkou attakai no ne quite/pretty warm _______ You seem to be better than uchi no kotatsu yori i-- mitai my kotatsu .Kyousuke: [looking miffed] ___ I'm a heating appliance? ore wa DAMBOU KIGU ka? I (T) heating fixture/apparatus (?)6[His pov of Madoka--her eyes are closed.]7narration: _chikara_ That's it! The Power! sou da NOURYOKU da! that's-it Power is _chikara_ __________ I can save us by teleporting NOURYOKU de terepo--to sureba TASUkaru! with the Power! with-Power if-teleport save But, I can't do that in front shikashi AYUKAWA no MAE de sore wa of Ayukawa... but in-front-of-Ayukawa that-(one) (T) dekinai... can't-do---------------------------------------------------p 325 (87)1Madoka: su--_Kyousuke: Ayu... ayu...2Kyousuke: [shaking her] Ayukawa, Ayukawa...?! AYUKAWA AYUKAWA...?! You mustn't fall asleep, necha dame da yo AYUKAWA Ayukawa. (= nete wa dame) be mustn't-sleep3[Her eyes open a bit...]4[...but soon close again.]Madoka: Don't let go... hanasanai de...5[Tight shot of Kyousuke's fierce eyes.]---------------------------------------------------p 326 (88)1Kyousuke: [off] __________ (Well, at this stage, there's (maa ko-- nattara terepo--to no choice but to teleport!) well if-become-like-this teleport shika nai!) only-have2[His pov of the sleeping Madoka.]Kyousuke: [off] (Even if I'm discovered and (tatoe barete we have to move...) even-if be-discovered-(and) HIkKOshi ni naro-- to) to-move if-shall-become3Kyousuke: (That's no substitute for (AYUKAWA no INOCHI ni wa Ayukawa's life!) 's life (IO/contrast) kaerarenai!) not-be-substituted4[He wraps his arms tightly around Madoka. The view has panned back to show some snow starting to gather inside the gondola.]narration: Concentrating my mind, and SEISHIN o SHUUCHUU shite holding Ayukawa tight so mind/soul (O) concentrating that we don't separate... hanarenai you ni not-separate-from so-that AYUKAWA o dakishimete holding-on-to-Ayukawa/embracing/hugging5narration: Holding her... dakishimete-------------------------------------------------------p 327 (89)1[He loses consciousness.]2[Kyousuke awakens to find he's lying down.]Kyousuke: Huh? n3Kazuya: You've recovered? KI ga tsuita?Kyousuke sit-up FX: _____ gaba_4[Both Kyousuke and Kazuya look over at Madoka, who lies asleep on a couch.]Kazuya: That was close. A little abunakatta ne mo-- chotto de while longer and the two of was-dangerous in-a-little-while-more you would have froze to death. futari tomo TOUSHI datta yo both-people dead-from-cold were5Kyousuke: Y-you. How...? o omae doushite...... you how[Kazuya just yawns and walks out. From this view we finally figure out that they're all in the lift control room.]Kazuya: ___ See ya. I'm going back to ja ne ore kore de KAEtte sleep now. see-ya I with-this/now going-back neru wa to-sleepsign: Restricted Area--Authorized AIDA KAKARI MONO Persons Only. space people-in-charge/operator IGAI NI TACHI-IRU KINSHI w/the-exception-of enter prohibition---------------------------------------------------p 328 (90)1Madoka: [slowly sitting up] Hm? n?[Kyousuke turns around to look at her.]2Madoka: Huh? Where... Are we...? are? koko... atashi-tachi......? here wesign: Tool Locker KOUGU OKIBA tool/implement storage-place3[Kyousuke facial portrait--he smiles.]Kyousuke FX: _____ kokun4Madoka: But, who on earth... demo ittai DARE ga..... but who-in-the-world (S) Rescued us? TASUkete-kureta no? saved-(us) (?)5[Kyousuke facial portrait--a smile.]6Kyousuke: Must've been God. kitto KAMISAMA ga undoubtedly god (S) TASUkete-kureta n ja nai saved-(us) (explan/neg)[Madoka eyes grow wide.]7[Then she smiles, too.]---------------------------------------------------p 329 (91)1[Their eyes lock.]Madoka: So we meet again. mata Aeta ne again were-able-to-meet2[Exterior shot of the ski lodge.]3[In the hall, Kyousuke pauses while opening his door...]Kyousuke: See ya. ja neMadoka: Good night. oyasumi4[Shot of the door plaque to Room 11.]Kyousuke: [off] Heyyy! Kazuyaaaa! kora--_ KAZUYA--_!5[Lifting up the damp sheets.Kyousuke: Can't you get up to do Okite-kita no wa this sort of thing...? began-to-awake/get-up ko-- yu-- koto ka... this-kind-of-thing (?) _______ You bedwetting brat! kono o-nesho KOZOU! this bedwetter brat/kid[Kazuya blushes.]6[Exterior shot of the ski lodge.]narration: Getting back to the point, sashiatatte no MONDAI wa the question is--how am I for-the-time-being 's question (T) going to deal with Hikaru-chan tomorrow?! ashita hikaru-chan ni do-- tomorrow (IO) how TAISHO su-beki ka da! should/deal-with (?) isKazuya: [off] Okay, oniichan? oni--chan ii? It's in both our best o-tagai no tame KON'YA no koto wa interests to keep tonight's mutual 's benefit about-tonight (T) happenings a secret. ______ naisho da yo secret iscaption under sweating face in speech bubble: Kazuya. kazuya---------------------------------------------------p 330 (92)1[Shot of an approaching train.]train: Noto noto2[Inside the train, a stern Hikaru leans her face at a surprised and flinching Madoka.]Hikaru: Madoka-san, about last madoka-san yuube wa... night...Madoka heartbeat FX: _____ doki_Madoka: Huh?! e_?!3[View pans back to show the five seated, facing each other. Hikaru and Kyousuke in one seat, Kazuya, Madoka and Yuusaku in the other.]Hikaru: [smiling] Did I toss about in my atashi nezo-- waruku sleep? I toss-about-in-one's-sleep arimasen deshita? not-have wasMadoka FX: ___ ho_Madoka: N-not really... be BETSU ni...4[Kyousuke's pov of a stern Hikaru, who turns his gaze on him.]Hikaru FX: ___ ki_5Kyousuke FX: _____ goku_6[Again, his pov as she leans closer, her face melting into one of sadness.]Hikaru: Sempai, you were awful last SEMPAI kinou no YORU wa hidoi ja nai night!! last-night (T) awful desu ka!! arenarration: H-here it comes!! ki kita----_!!7Hikaru: [looking mad] Although I waited and atashi zutto MAtte-ta waited... I all-the-time was-waiting no ni...... even-though---------------------------------------------------p 331 (93)1Hikaru: [looking slightly sad] Y-you never came, so in se SEMPAI anmari konai the end I... -so-much not-come mon da kara person are that's-why atashi tsui...... I = in-the-end Went with Yuusaku... YUUSAKU to..... with-Yuusaku2Kyousuke: Eh? e3[She gloms onto him around his neck, despair written on her face. Kyousuke winces and Madoka looks stunned.]Hikaru: ...and drank sake ! o-SAKE nonjatta n desu! liquor (= nonde-shimatta) (explan) drank-(finality/regret) I'm sorry! gomennasai4[She pulls back slightly to gaze lovingly into his eyes. Kyousuke winces.]Hikaru: I won't be unfaithful any mo-- UWAKI wa shimasen!! more!! no-more not-be-unfaithfulnarration: So this is what it was all KEKKYOKU kore da mon na----_! about...! after-all this-(one) is reason5[Shot of the rear of the train as it speeds away. In triple-insets we see a relieved Madoka, a joyous Hikaru still wrapped around a sweating Kyousuke's neck, and a despondent Yuusaku next to a watching Kazuya.]narration: A ski trip where all we got HIyaASE bakari no were the cold sweats. be-in-a-cold-sweat only 's ______ ______ suki-- tsua-- ski group-tour/package-tour ______ Last night's affair is a yuube no koto wa mi--nna naisho! secret from ev-e-ryone! last-night's affair (T) everyone secret---------------------------------------------------