Kimagure Orange Road"The Panic Kid!"Volume 5, Story 6WB Volume 3, Story 8Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation by : Albert Nakano (proofed by Hitoshi Doi)Additional translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Jerry Lee Matthew Klippenstein Jordan LampeLast revision : 02-07-95Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.eduNOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having them. Example: The subtitles on page 159 (115) are only in the WBs!---------------------------------------------------p 159 (115)--TITLE PAGE[Head-and-shoulders shot of a bare-shouldered Madoka, who reclines on her side on sheets.]MAIN TITLE (at top) _____ The Panic Kid! panikku kiddo!SUB-TITLE (at bottom) Her Skin--Like Sad, Dark KOI no BINETSU ni HIKAru Glass--Shines with a Slight love's a-slight-fever (IO) shine/sparkle Fever of Love. _kana_ ______ HADA AWA(RE) shii kurai garasu IRO skin sad/woeful dark glass color Sorry. I'd Like to Be gomen ne IMA wa NAZOmekitai no... Mysterious Now... sorry now (T) want-to-be-mysterious---------------------------------------------------p 160 (116)1[Kyousuke enters an exhibition hall, flanked by his pretty girlfriends.]narration: _____ Dad's photography exhibit KYOU kara oyaji no opens today. starting-today dad's SHASHIN TEN ga HAJImarimasu photo-exhibition (S) begins/opens2[Their pov of Takashi, who smiles at them.]narration: Ayukawa and Hikaru-chan were AYUKAWA-tachi wa invited because they modeled (and-assoc) (T) for him. ______ moderu ni natte-moratta EN de modeled-(favor-for-us) in-connection GO-SHOUTAI to iu wake (hon)-invitation that-reason3Takashi: [in suit and tie] Hi, I'm glad you came. yaa yoku kita ne hi I-am-glad-you-came4Hikaru: [ecstatically] Otoosama!! Hikaru FX: ___ da_5Hikaru: It's a pleasure to see you o-hisashiburi desu again. Thank you very much for the kono tabi wa o-maneki invitation. this-journey (T) (hon)-invitation TAIHEN arigato-- gozaimasu wonderful thanks-very-muchTakashi: [embarrassed] U-uh... Likewise. i iya kochira koso... this-way indeed---------------------------------------------------p 161 (117)1[Hikaru fixes his tie, and a crowd gathers in the background.]Hikaru: _______ Oh, otoosama. Your a oto--sama nekutai ga...... necktie...Takashi: [sweating] Th-thank you. do do--mowoman: Did you hear her say, oto--sama datte "otoosama"?man 1: I thought I heard his son was musuko-san mada CHUUGAKUSEI da still in junior high... son still jr-high-student is to ki--ta kedo... heard-that butcrowd FX: ________ hisohiso2man 2: [beaming] Sensei, this too must give kore de SENSEI mo ANSHIN you peace of mind. with-this sir too peace-of-mind desu na are At this rate, you'll be ko-- natte-kuru to ato wa able to enjoy the faces when-start-to-become-like-this the-rest (T) of your grandchildren. o-MAGO-san no KAO ga (hon)-grandchildren-(hon) 's faces (S) TANOshimi deshou pleasure/delight poss-beKyousuke: EH?! e_3Kyousuke: [enraged] Th-that's not it...! chi chigau n desu----_ mistaken (explan) !man 2: [patting Takashi on the back] Yahhh... Ha ha ha. iya-- hahahaHikaru: [tickled] ____ Eh-heh! ufu_4Kyousuke FX: _____ chira5[His pov of Madoka, who stands alone, studying a large portrait of herself.]6Kyousuke: [smiling] Ah, this picture is... a kono SHASHIN wa saa...... this-picture (T)7Madoka: [miffed] I can recognize my own JIBUN no SHASHIN gurai wakaru wa yo! picture! self 's picture extent know8[She marches off.]Madoka primness FX: ________ tsu----n (tsunto = assuming a prim attitude)narration: Looks like it's a little do--mo 3-NIN ISSHO ni impossible for all three somehow 3-people together of us to do something together... KOUDOU suru no wa action/operations doing (T) MURI ga aru mitai---- be-strained/be-impossible seem---------------------------------------------------p 162 (118)1[Isolated shot of two landscape/country portraits hanging on the wall.]Takashi: [off] By the way, Kyousuke, your tokoro de KYOUSUKE aunt also came by-the-way by a little while ago. sakki obasan-tachi mo a-little-while-ago aunt-(&-assoc) also kite-te naa be-coming2Takashi: The cousin that we took hora kono MAE azukatta care of last time... listen this-before took-charge-of itoko no... cousin 's3[Kazuya comes up behind Madoka and grabs her on the waist.]Kazuya: BOO! wa_Madoka: KYA! kya_4Kazuya: [smiling] Oneechan. one--chan5[She recognizes the dear little boy.]Madoka: Oh! ara!6Takashi: [to Kyousuke] He seems to have taken a ano KO omae no koto fancy to you and says he that-boy about-you wants to play with all of you again, so we've taken KI ni itte-ru mitai de na charge of him... be-taking-a-fancy-to seeming mata oni--chan-tachi to again with-oniichan-&-the-others ASObitai tte yu-- mon da kara want-to-play say-that thing that's-why azukatta n de........ taken-care/took-charge-of 'cause7Takashi: [patting Kyousuke's shoulder] Well, he's all yours... ato wa yoroshiku... the-rest (T) regardsTakashi hand FX: ___ ponKyousuke: [bug-eyed] Wha?! na_---------------------------------------------------p 163 (119)1[Kazuya, smiling, races across the room to Kyousuke.]Kazuya: Kyousuke-niichaaan. KYOUSUKE-ni--cha--n2Kyousuke: [gripping his forehead] (My head hurts...) (..........ATAMA ite) head ache[Hikaru watches the approaching Kazuya with eyes wide...]3[...and her jaw drops.]4[Tears well in her eyes.]Hikaru tears FX: jiwa~~_Kyousuke: ? ?5Hikaru: [turning her back on Kyousuke] I-it can't be...! so sonna A-although I had faith a atashi SEMPAI no koto SHINjite-ta in you, Sempai... I about-Sempai did-trust no ni---- even-though6Hikaru: ...y-you had a child like ko konna KODOMO ga ita this! this-kind-of-child (S) had nan-te----_ the-likes-ofHikaru FX: __ da7Kyousuke: [horrified] AAAA! a~~---------------------------------------------------p 164 (120)1Hikaru: [off] Ohhhh!! naa~~n da_!!2Hikaru: [embarrassed] So he's your cousin. itoko datta n desu ka cousin was (explan) (musing) The two of you look so much amari ni sokkuri datta n de alike that... so-much (IO) just-like were 'cause tsui...... a-pair I thought he was your son... SEMPAI no KODOMO ka to...... 's child thought/worried-thatKyousuke: ___ Y-you dummy. n na aho na dummy/stupid/foolish3Hikaru: But... demo... You really do look alike... HONTOU ni sokkuri nan desu ne-- really just-like it-is4[She clasps Kazuya by his arms.]Hikaru: ______ You're like Sempai! Cute! SEMPAI mitai! kawaii appear-like cute5[Kazuya gives her a hug.]Kazuya: ______ Oneechan, you're cute too, one--chan mo kawaii kara suki_! so I like you! too cute since like![Kyousuke watches with eyes wide.]narration: ______ In the end, to say that KEKKYOKU dotchi mo kawaii nan-te they're both cute, is in-the-end both cute somehow entirely... marude---- entirely6narration: ___ ...like me. ore sonomono---- me selfsame-thing I can't stand myself! JIKO KEN'O! self-abhorrence7[Kazuya looks back-and-forth between Madoka and Hikaru.]---------------------------------------------------p 165 (121)1Kazuya: Hey, hey, oniichan. Which ne-- ne-- dotchi ga one's your girlfriend? which (S) oni--chan no KOIBITO na no? 's girlfriendKyousuke heartbeat FX: ____ doki2[Madoka portrait--wide-eyed.]3Kyousuke: [aghast] Wha? so..........4[Hikaru portrait--mild surprise.]5Hikaru: [blushing] Oh no! maa ya-- nee That's so embarrassing! hazukashii!Kyousuke: [patting Kazuya on the head] O-oh yeah. so so-- da Aren't you hungry? omae onaka suite-nai ka you not-be-hungry (?) How would you like it if oni--chan ga oishi-- mono oniichan got you something (S) tasty-things good to eat? tabesasete-ageyo-- ka shall-be-able-to-eat-(favor-to-you) (?)6[Exterior shot of a coffee shop.]---------------------------------------------------p 166 (122)1[Isolated shot of an empty table.]2[View of the four seated at a table. Kyousuke and Hikaru face Madoka and Kazuya. Kazuya works on a plate of noodles as the rest sip at their drinks.]Madoka: Taste good? oishii?3Kazuya: [to Madoka & Kyousuke] Oneechan, oniichan. Thanks one--chan oni--chan kono MAE wa for playing with me last this-previous (T) time! ASOnde-kurete arigatou! playing-(favor-to-me) thanks4Kazuya: You two are awfully good oni--chan-tachi tottemo friends, aren't you? (ie,-Kyousuke-&-Madoka) awfully/immensely NAKA i-- n da ne good-friends/friendly (explan) (rhet)[Madoka, drinking through a straw, turns a bright red... Well, if this were a color manga, that is... Kyousuke sweats and stares.]Kyousuke/Madoka heartbeat FX: _____ dokin5[Hikaru looks at Kazuya in apparent shock, eyes wide.]6[Madoka portrait--she looks over at Hikaru, eyes wide.]7[Kyousuke portrait--he sits frozen with eyes wide.]8Hikaru: [looking a bit unhappy] Wha... na......---------------------------------------------------p 167 (123)1Hikaru: [smiling] Whaaat? Say what? nani----? nani nani __________ The speaker next to my seat's kono SEKI tonari no supi--ka-- ga noisy! this-seat in-vicinity's-speaker (S) urusakutte! being-noisy/bothersome[Both Madoka and Kyousuke look relieved.]Kyousuke: ___ Whew! ho_speaker FX: ___ ___ ____ ____ ____ ____ bun bun bomu bomu bimu bimu 2FX: [off] ______ gachan3[Kazuya has spilled his drink on his shirt.]Kazuya: Oh, I spilled... a koboshichatta... (= koboshite-shimatta)4Madoka: [rising] I-I'll wash it for you! a atashi ga ARAtte-ageru oide! Come with me! I (S) wash-(favor-to-you) come5[Madoka tows him away, and as he passes, Kazuya gives Kyousuke a wink.]6[Kyousuke's pov of Madoka and Kazuya.]7Hikaru: [looking pensive and melancholy] How nice... ii naa......---------------------------------------------------p 168 (124)1Hikaru: I'm an only child, so... atashi... hitorikKO da kara...... I only-child that's-why I bet it'd be fun to have a ano kurai no oto--to ga itara brother about that age... brother-of-that-extent (S) if-have kitto TANOshii darou naa... surely fun/pleasant poss-be2Hikaru: [looking at Kyousuke] You and Madoka-san have SEMPAI ya madoka-san te and sisters... imo--to-san ya one--san ga younger-sisters and older-sisters (S) iru desho poss-haveKyousuke: Hikaru-chan... hikaru-chan......3[Her pov of a surprised Kyousuke.]Hikaru: [off] To tell you the truth, I get atashi HONTOU wa sugoi sabishi gari lonely easily. I really (T) get-awfully-lonely -YA nan desu shop/dealer that-is Maybe the reason I'm so atashi ga HITO-ICHIBAI unusually cheerful is I (S) unusual/more-than-all-others because I'm turning my loneliness inside-out. nigiyaka na no wa sabishisa no cheerful/animated loneliness URAgaeshi na no ka na turning-inside-out I-wonder4[His pov of Hikaru, who looks straight ahead, slightly sad.]narration: Hikaru-chan, how sweet... hikaru-chan ijirashii... sweet/touching5[Isolated shot of his hand as he reaches out to take hers.]6[Hikaru breaks out of her reverie to look at him in surprise.]Kyousuke: ___ I... ore ga......narration: ___ I'm here! ore ga iru ja nai ka! I (S) am-here---------------------------------------------------p 169 (125)1Kazuya: [off] We're back! tadaima----_![Kyousuke uses his free hand to pull back the betraying one. Hikaru blushes and smiles with emotion.]Kyousuke FX: _____ sasa_Hikaru FX: ______ uttori2[Madoka and Kazuya stand there looking in puzzlement.]Madoka: ? ?Kyousuke: [off] __ Th-that was quick. ha hayakatta ne3[At a train station, Kazuya, Hikaru and Kyousuke prepare to enter a train. Madoka trails behind, standing and looking distracted.]4[Kazuya pulls Hikaru aboard.]Kazuya: Oneechan, hurry, hurry! one--chan HAYAku HAYAku!5[Kazuya uses the Power.]6[The doors close, leaving Kyousuke and Madoka on the platform. Madoka has gotten the elbow of her blouse caught on the edge of a post-mounted ashbin.]Madoka: ! !door FX: ______ pisha_Madoka blouse FX: gui_sign on post: Put cigarette ashes in SUigara wa kuzukago e wastecan. tobacco-ashes (T) into-wastepaper-basket---------------------------------------------------p 170 (126)1Madoka: [tugging at her sleeve] Wait a sec! chotto MAtte!Kyousuke: [looking at the departing train] Oh! a_train FX: _______ go----_2[Kyousuke's pov of Kazuya at the window.]Kazuya FX: ______ pachi_3Kyousuke: Huh? e4narration: I have a feeling he winked aitsu TASHIka sakki mo last time, too... that-guy certain a-little-while-ago-too _____ uinku shita you na---- winked likelihoodtrain FX: _____ go--_train sign: Express Train 02A KYUUKOU #02A#narration: ___ Is he trying to tell me ore ni nani-ka something? me (IO) something AIZU demo shite-ru no ka na? be-signalling-or-something I-wonder5[Having boarded the next train, Kyousuke and Madoka find themselves squished together by the press of the crowd.]sign: ___ Beware of Door!! doa ni CHUUI!! door (IO) attention/warningheadband: White Tiger BYAKKO---------------------------------------------------p 171 (127)1train FX: _____ gatan[Madoka lurches into Kyousuke.]2[She clings close to him. Both blush.]3[Isolated shot of their closely pressed torsos.]Kyousuke/Madoka FX: gyu_narration: It's warm... attakakutte---- ...and soft... yawarakakutte----4[Closeup of Kyousuke's face.]crows-in-background FX: ____ kaa_narration: ...and it's driving me crazy! moo RISEI ga futtobiso-----! now reason (S) be-blown-offheartbeat FX: ____ ____ ____ doki doki doki5[Behind Madoka, a guy presses his back up against her back. He sorta leers at her over his shoulder.]Madoka/guy FX: gyu_---------------------------------------------------p 172 (128)1[Kyousuke hugs her tightly, taking Madoka by surprise.]Kyousuke/Madoka FX: gui_2Madoka heartbeat FX: _____ doki_3[He turns, placing her back against the closed door, and shielding her from the others with his body.]narration: I don't want to let any AYUKAWA o hoka no OTOKO nan-ka ni other guy touch her! (O) some-other-man (IO) sawarasetakunai! not-want-to-let-touch[A woman looks at him in annoyance and Kyousuke looks back in apology.]Kyousuke: Ah, excuse me! a suimasen!Madoka FX: ___ ton4[Isolated shot of Madoka as she smiles.]5[He places his hands against the door, and stares into her eyes.]Madoka: You're forceful... GOUIN NI ne...... forcibly/by-main-forcenarration: ___ I want her in my arms only! ore no UDE no NAKA dake ni my arms within only (IO) ite hoshii! want-to-be-there---------------------------------------------------p 173 (129)1Madoka: Well, where shall we get de doko de oriru no? off? at-where get-off2narration: I want to stay like this zutto kono mama de itai! forever! all-the-time at-this-moment want-to-exist3[Exterior night shot of a rail crossing.]narration: Somehow, I don't feel like nan-da-ka oritakunai KIBUN------ getting off... somehow not-want-to-get-off feeling4[Night shot of a train as it goes by.]narration: I know. Maybe we should go sou da HONTOU ni AYUKAWA to somewhere, just the two of really with-Ayukawa us. futari kkiri de dokka with-just-2-people (doko-ka) = somewhere itchao-- ka naa (= itte-shimaoo) I-wonder poss-go-(finality)5Kyousuke: Say, let's... nee kore kara... say starting-now6Kyousuke: ...go... doko-ka ni... to-somewhere---------------------------------------------------p 174 (130)1[The door opens next to the entranced pair and Hikaru stands there, looking in.]door opening FX: _______ pushu--2[Kyousuke leaps back. Madoka blushes and studies an intriguing spot on the train's ceiling.]Kyousuke FX: _____ sasa_Hikaru: [finally seeing Kyousuke] Sempai! sempai!3Hikaru: Great! yokattaa Kazuya-kun told me we should KAZUYA-kun ga TSUGI no EKI de wait at the next station! (S) at-next-station MAtte-iyou to itte-kureta shall-be-waiting told-that-(favor-to-me) n desu yo--_! (explan)Kyousuke: [forced smile] W-well, that's good! so soo... yokatta ne!4[Kyousuke glares at Kazuya.]Kazuya FX: _____ niko_5Kyousuke: (Always interfering at a (i-- tokoro de itsu-mo good moment... at-good-occasion always ____ jama bakkari shi-yagatte...... only-interfering-(contempt) ___ Does he have a grudge koitsu ore ni urami demo against me?) this-guy me (IO) grudge or-something aru no ka---_) having (?)Kazuya: [indignant] Nothing like that! sonna mon nai yo! that-kind-of-thing not-have6[Realizing that Kazuya just replied to a thought of his, Kyousuke flashes with insight.]Kyousuke: ! !7[His pov of an innocent-looking Kazuya.]narration: M-maybe he... ko koitsu moshi-ka-shite---- this-guy maybe I get it! so-- ka! That time at the park with AYUKAWA to ISSHO no KOUEN no koto to ii Ayukawa, and today... together-w/Ayukawa 's about-park whether KYOU no koto to ii or-whether-about-today It's all his doing... subete koitsu ga---- all this-guy (S)---------------------------------------------------p 175 (131)1[On the street...]Kazuya: Thank you very much, one--chan-tachi KYOU wa oneechans! (plural) today (T) do--mo arigato! thanks-very-much2[Hikaru pats Kazuya on the head and Kazuya smiles with joy.]Kazuya: Kyousuke-niichan's KYOUSUKE-niichan tte tayorinai kedo unreliable, but since he's (T) unreliable/ but a nice oniichan, please be uncertain friends with him. i-- oni--chan da kara nice is that's-why kore kara mo starting-now also naka yoku shite-agete ne being-on-good-terms-(favor-to-him)Hikaru: Wow, you really are Sempai's o_ sasuga SEMPAI no itoko da ne! cousin! ! truly 's cousin are[Kyousuke winces.]3Kazuya: But, oneechans... demo one--chan-tachi...........4Kazuya: ...is it really okay like kono mama de i-- no? this? at-this-moment okay[All three freeze with surprise.]billboard: [only extreme left side showing] West... NISHI... ... TORI... Delicious! UMAi!---------------------------------------------------p 176 (132)1Hikaru: [perplexed] What? "Like this"? nani? kono mama tte what this-moment (quote)2[Kyousuke portrait--he flashes with shock.]3[Madoka portrait--Kazuya has hit a chord.]4Kyousuke: [racing off, Kazuya in tow] I-it's nothing! G'bye! na nan demo nai yo! sainara---_Kyousuke FX: ___ da_narration: What's he talking about ikinari nan-te koto all of a sudden?! all-of-a-sudden what! thing i--dasu n da koitsu! broach-a-subject (explan) this-guy5[Madoka stands unsmiling, deep in thought.]6Madoka: Is it okay like this...? kono mama de i-- no... ka Hmm... at-this-moment okay (talk-to-self)[Hikaru looks at Madoka's back, uncomprehendingly.]---------------------------------------------------p 177 (133)1Hikaru: [beaming] What are you saying? nani itte n desu ka what-saying (explan) (?) Of course it's not okay like kono mama de i-- wake nai this! at-this-moment okay isn't-the-case ja nai desu ka! Let's go and play somewhere! dokka ASObi ni ikimasho-- yo! (doko-ka) play (IO) shall-go somewhere2[Her pov of Madoka's back. Madoka stands silent.]3Madoka: [still with back to Hikaru] Hikaru... hikaru......Hikaru FX: ________ nikoniko4Hikaru: [brightly] Yes? hai?5Madoka: [turning, with a smile] Then you're paying today! ja KYOU wa anta mochida yo! then today (T) you carry-out/ bring-up-(a-matter)6[They walk off down the sidewalk, toward the bright city lights.]Madoka: You started it! i--dashippe nan da kara ne! "fart-broacher" that's-why one-who-starts-something-by-mentioning- it-first-* <*originally, from the idea that the farter is the first to know that a breach has been committed; thus, the first person to remark upon the odor is likely the one who generated it; 'course, it no longer carries this literal meaning.>Hikaru: No problem! makasete-kudasai! leave-it-to-me-(please)---------------------------------------------------p 178 (134)1[Meanwhile Kazuya and Kyousuke walk home. Kyousuke is steamed.]Kyousuke: ________ You're a telepath! omae ga terepasu datta no ka! you (S) telepath were How dare you read people's sanzan HITO no KOKORO o feelings! ruthlessly/terribly people's-feelings (O) YOmi-yagatte! reading-(contempt)2Kazuya: [exploding] Oniichan, it's because you oni--chan ga hakkiri shinai kara da yo! can't decide! (S) not-be-clear since be3Kyousuke: [taken aback] Wha? he4Kazuya: [smiling] But... I understand now! demo... kore de wakatta yo! but now/with-this understood Your true feelings... oni--chan no HONSHIN ga... 's true-sentiment (S)5Kazuya: I made all those ano futari ni TAIshite oni--chan ga opportunities so that you those-2-people (IO) for (S) could clearly show your feelings for those two... do-- OMOtte-ru no ka like-what be-thinking hakkiri saseyou to if-shall-be-able-to-be-clear ______ iroiro chansu o tsukutte-mita several-chances (O) tried-and-create n da kedo... (explan) butKyousuke: ! !6Kazuya: [clenching his teeth] ...but it was useless! yaru dake MUDA datta mitai! to-the-extent-done useless was seem ______ You lech! kono sukebe!Kyousuke pratfall FX: _____ zuru_7Kazuya: [pointing] You're a guy, aren't you?! moo mattaku OTOKO daro--_ grr really guy poss-be You indecisive person! kono YUUJUUFUDAN NINGEN! this indecisive person/human-beingKyousuke: [sweating] B-but... da...datte---------------------------------------------------p 179 (135)1Kazuya: [confronting him] But, niichan... demo ni--chan2[Panels 2-4 show, from right-to-left, Hikaru, Kyousuke and Madoka, each in their own panel, and each as they stand at that moment. Of the three, only Hikaru is smiling.]narration: ...is it really... HONTOU ni really3narration: ...okay like this? kono mama de i-- no? in-this-moment okay---------------------------------------------------