Kimagure Orange Road"A Premonition Dream, One More Time!"Volume 5, Story 4WB Volume 3, Story 6Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation by : Albert Nakano (proofed by Hitoshi Doi)Additional translation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose                                 Craig Nishida                                 Spencer Hastings                                 Matthew Klippenstein                                 Leo Hourvitz                                 Ramon Galindo                                 Jordan LampeLast revision : 02-07-95Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.eduNOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga, so there may be a few      extras to those of you not having them.      Example: The subtitles on page 115 (71) are only in the WBs!---------------------------------------------------p 115 (71)--TITLE PAGE[Hikaru smiles in full-portrait.  She stands, one leg crossed over in front of the other, in shirt, tie, slacks and suspenders.  Holding it by the cuffs, she drapes a jacket behind her.]                                               ________MAIN TITLE (at top)                           _dori--mu_  A Premonition Dream,            mou ichido   YOCHI-MU!  One More Time!                  once-more    premonition-dream<Commentary (CN):  The "one more time" refers, of course, to the fact that Kyousuke had his first premonition dream four chapters earlier (4.8) in "A Premonition Dream in the Starry Sky".>SUB-TITLE (at bottom)             _________  Being with Friends Is Boring.   tomodachi  nan-ka   ja                                  friend     somehow  with-(T)                                  tsumaranai                                  uninteresting/trivial/commonplace  Just Hanging Out Will Make      kawashite           bakari  ja  Me Go Bad.                      exchanging/dodging  just                                  ____                                  gurechau          zo                                  (= gurete-shimau)                                     go-astray/bad/start-acting-up-(finality)  Take Me as I Am...!             SUGAO                 no watashi o                                  a-face-without-makeup 's me     (O)                                  Uketomete...!                                  taking/accepting/stopping/catching/parrying---------------------------------------------------p 116 (72)[Pages 116-117 are black-bordered, denoting a dream.]1[Kyousuke, wide-eyed, is kissed on his cheek by Hikaru.]2[Closeup of Kyousuke, in anguish.]Kyousuke:  DON'T DI-I-IE!  HIKARU-CHAN!!   SHInu na----_  hikaru-chan_!!3[Overhead shot of the two sitting on a spot-lit park bench.  Kyousuke embraces Hikaru.]Kyousuke:                         ___  I've finally realized.          ore  yatto         KI ga tsuita     n da                                  I    at-long-last  became-aware-of  (explan)---------------------------------------------------p 117 (73)1Kyousuke:  Hikaru-chan, I can't go on      hikaru-chan ga   inai to  living without you!                         (S)  if-not-here                                  ___                                  ore  Ikite   ikenai        yo!                                  I    living  be-of-no-use2Hikaru:  S-Sempai, I can't go on...      se SEMPAI  atashi  moo      dame......                                             I       already  no-good3Hikaru:  Sayonara, Sempai.  It was       sayonara  sempai  TANOshikatta...  fun...                          farewell          was-fun[Hikaru faints in his arms.]Hikaru FX:                        _____  <go-limp!>                      gawa_4Kyousuke: [shaking her]  H-hikaru-chan!  Hikaru-chan!    hi hikaru-chan  hikaru-chan---------------------------------------------------p 118 (74)1[Kyousuke springs upright in bed.]Kyousuke:  Hikaru-chan!                    hikaru-chanKyousuke sitting-up FX:           _____  <SPROING!>                      gaba_Kyousuke:  Hika...                         hika...2[He sits there in bed.]3Kyousuke FX:                      _____  <peek>                          chira4[He spies his sisters in their pajamas, pillows in hand.  They are not amused...]Manami & Kurumi FX:               _____  <irritated silence!>            musu_5[Kyousuke is leveled by the pair of down-filled projectiles.]Kurumi: [off]                     _________  IDIOT!                          baka----_  What time do you think it       nanJI      da   to OMOtte      n no yo--_!  is?!                            what-time  is   thinking-thatManami: [off]  Shut up!                        urusai!narration:  Once again...                   mata----pillows FX:                       ___  ____  <WHAM>  <WHACK>                 ban  boka---------------------------------------------------p 119 (75)1[Daylight, and Kyousuke walks to school.]narration:  ...a precognitive dream!        YOCHI-MU           da!                                  premonition-dream  it-isKyousuke: (This time it's Hikaru-chan...)  (KONDO     wa   hikaru-chan ka...)                                   this-time (T)              (musing)2[He visualizes pieces of his dream in panels 2-4.]Kyousuke: [off] (But, this one had a lot of      (demo  KONDO     no wa   mata  scenes...                        but   this-time 's (T)  moreover                                  iroiro to     mita  mon    da  kedo                                  with-several  saw   thing  is  but  What does it mean?)             do-- yu-- koto       darou)                                  what-kind-of-matter  poss-benarration:  First, I was kissed on the      mazu            hikaru-chan ni  cheek by Hikaru-chan...         first-(of-all)  by-Hikaru                                  ___       ____                                  hoo ni    kisu sarete----                                  on-cheek  being-kissed3Kyousuke: (Hold on.  After that...         (MAte yo  sono ATO......                                   wait     that-remainder/following                                  ___  I was saying something.)        ore ga   nani-ka    itte-ta      na)                                  I   (S)  something  was-saying4Kyousuke: (Then finally...)                (soshite  SAIGO ni......)                                   then     lastly/at-the-endHikaru: [dream]  Sayonara, Sempai.  It was       sayonara  sempai  TANOshikatta...  fun...                          farewell          was-funHikaru FX:                        _____  <go-limp!>                      gawa_5[Kyousuke portrait--wide-eyed contemplation.]6[View down the street.]narration:  What if...                      masaka------  Something bad has happened      hikaru-chan no  MI ni  to Hikaru-chan, like a                      's  to-oneself/body/person  terminal illness, or an  accident, or something...       nani-ka    WARUi koto  demo                                  something  bad-thing   or-something                                  FUCHI     no YAMAi   ka                                  incurable 's illness                                  soretomo  JIKO     ka                                  or        accident7[He visualizes an effervescent Hikaru-chan.]narration:  B-but that couldn't happen...   de demo  ano GENKI        o   E        ni  Not to someone who is the          but   that-spirit/pep (O)  picture (IO)  picture of health...                                  kaita    you na     KO   ga                                  painted  resembles  girl (S)                                  sonna         hazu wa----                                  that-kind-of  likelihood---------------------------------------------------p 120 (76)1[Kyousuke walks down the hallway outside classroom 1-B.]narration:  Still, I couldn't help but      to itte mo        sasuga ni  SHIMPAI ni nari  worry, and casually passed      even-saying-that  truly      became-worried  by her classroom...                                        ______                                  sarigenaku  hikaru-chan no kurasu no MAE o                                  casually    in-front-of-Hikaru's-class  (O)                                  TOUtte-mitari shita    kedo                                  try-and-pass-by-(and)  but2narration:  But Hikaru-chan was not to      hikaru-chan no SUGATA wa   nakatta----  be seen.                                    's form   (T)  was-not-there3[Seated at his desk, he watches Madoka walk by.]Madoka FX:                        ___ ___  <step! step!>                   ko_ ko_4[Turning to watch her head for the classroom door, he gets up to follow.]Kyousuke: (I can't tell Ayukawa about      (masaka...  kesa         no YUME  this morning's dream, but        can't-be   this-morning 's dream  for now, I could just ask  her.)                           AYUKAWA ni  nan-te   HANAsenai     kedo                                  to-Ayukawa  somehow  not-speak-of  but                                  ichio--          kiku  dake                                  for-the-present  ask   just                                  kiite-miyou        ka na)                                  shall-try-and-ask  I-wonderKyousuke FX:                      _____  <clatter!>                      gata_5Kyousuke:  Ayu...                          ayu...---------------------------------------------------p 121 (77)1Madoka:  Oh, Yuu-kun.                    ara  YUU-kun2[Kyousuke executes an about-face.]Kyousuke FX:  <zip!>                          sasa_Yuusaku: [blushing]  Madoka-san, could I bother      madoka-san  chotto  i--   desu  ka?  you for a minute?                           a-bit   okay  is    (?)3[Kyousuke kneels to the side and holds a wastebasket partly over his head.]narration:                        ___  I don't like him!               ore  NIGATE                 nan da                                  I    one-hard-to-deal-with  that-is                                  yo na--  aitsu!                                           that-guy4Yuusaku:  Today, Hikaru-chan...           hikaru-chan  KYOU wa[In the overhead view we see that Komatsu is about to toss a ball across the classroom.]class FX:                         ___ ___  ______  ________  <clamor>  <ha ha ha>            wai wai  hahaha  batabata  <noisily>5Kyousuke: (How noisy.  I can't hear.)      (usse-- na    kikoe ya shinai)                                  (urusai)      hear     not-do[Komatsu and Hatta spot Kyousuke under the wastebasket.]Hatta:  Hey, Kasuga is doing            o--i  KASUGA ga   HEN na koto  something weird.                hey          (S)  strange-thing                                  yatte-ru  zo--                                  is-doingclass FX:                         ___ ___  <clamor>                        wai wai6[Kyousuke flashes with the Power.]narration:                                   _chikara_  Okay, I'll use the Power...     yoshi      NOURYOKU o tsukatte...                                  all-right  using-Power---------------------------------------------------p 122 (78)1Kyousuke: [focusing with the Power]  !                               !2Madoka:  Hikaru is absent and resting    hikaru nara      KYOU  wa   GAKKOU  at home today.                         if-it-is  today (T)  school                                  YASUnde       IE de    nete-ru    yo                                  being-absent  at-home  is-restingYuusaku:  Is something wrong?             doko-ka    WARUi  n desu    ka?                                  something  bad    (explan)  (?)3Komatsu: [grinning]  What are you doing?             nani  yatte  n da      omae                                  what  doing  (explan)  you                                        _____  Playing hide and seek at        ii    toshi  koite         kakurenbo?  your age?                       okay  age    going-in-for  play-hide-&-seekKyousuke:  Shhh!  Shhh!                    sh----_  shi----_4Madoka: [shrugging]  It's the usual.                 itsu-mo no koto  da    yo                                  about-the-usual  it-is                                           ____  It's not a bad cold but if      taishita kaze  ja nai  kedo  she came today, she might       serious-cold   is-not  but  be called on to demonstrate  her homework and...             KYOU   DEte-kuru to        SHUKUDAI                                  today  if-come-and-attend  homework                                  Aterare         sou de...                                  be-called-upon  looking-as-if5[Kyousuke, having been interrupted, missed hearing what Madoka said in panel 4.  Here, he refocuses his Power.]6Madoka:  ...that might be dangerous.     abunai     so-- da      kara                                  dangerous  looks-as-if  that's-why7[Kyousuke's pov of the class, teacher and blackboard.]8narration:  Resting at home?!               IE de    nete-ru?!                                  at-home  is-resting  Dangerous?!                     abunai?!  Then, that really was...        yappari      are        wa----                                  sure-enough  that-(one) (T)---------------------------------------------------p 123 (79)1[Wild-eyed, he leaps to his feet...]Kyousuke FX:                      _____  <JOLT>                          gatannarration:  ...a precognitive dream!        YOCHI-MU            datta  n da!                                  precognitive-dream  was    (explan)2[...and races out the door.  The entire class turns to watch with surprise.]Kyousuke FX:                      ____ ____ ____  <step step step>                dota dota dota3[Madoka turns and watches in shock.]4[Yuusaku looks out his classroom window to see Kyousuke running across the schoolyard.]Kyousuke FX:                      __  <run>                           da5narration:  What's he doing?                nan da----   aitsu                                  what's-that  that-guy6[View of a sidewalk and pedestrian overpass.]---------------------------------------------------p 124 (80)1[Exterior shot of the Hiyama residence.]2[Hikaru lies sprawled on her bedroom floor reading manga and eating cookies. Her stereo plays.]Hikaru: [merrily]                                 _______ (Now if only Darling would       (kore de        da--rin  demo  come visit me, it would be       with-this/now           also  awesome!)                                  MIMAi ni kite-kuretara          moo                                  if-come-to-visit-(favor-to-me)  more                                  SAIKOU         nan da   kedo  na----_)                                  awesome/super  that-be  but         !Hikaru FX:                        ____ ____  <crunch>                        pori poristereo speaker FX:                ___ ___  ___ ___  <boom>  <buzz>                  bon bon  bun bunbook 1:                                           _______     ______  Chopin Pocket Guide             itsu-mo         poketto ni  shopan                                  always/usually  in-pocket   Chopinbook 2:  <something>                     I                                  Italy/that-one                                  <undeciphered-kanji> kabe MARU                                                            <ship-name>manga:                                            ____________  <something> Margaret            <undeciphered>  ma--gare--to3door FX:                          ___ ___  <knock knock>                   kon kon4Mrs. Hiyama: [entering]  Did you have a fever?           NETSU  atta?                                  fever  hadHikaru: [suddenly lying in bed]  Well, k-kind of...              e...  ma maa nedoor FX:                          _____  <bang>                          batan5Mrs. Hiyama:                                 ____  Is it really a cold?            HONTOU ni  kaze  na  no                                  really     cold  Make sure you go see the        chanto       o-ISHA        ni  itte-kinasai  doctor!                         duly/surely  (hon)-doctor (IO) go-(command)Hikaru: [drinking a pill]  Y-yes, I'll do that.            u un  so--       suru                                        like-that  to-do6[Outside, Hikaru walks off, pretending to go see the doctor.]Hikaru:                           ____  Damn!  She's pretty sharp.      che_   kekko-- surudoi na--                                     !   pretty-sharp  Well, that's okay.  I'll go     maa   ii  ya  ASObi ni itchao  play.                           well  okay             (= itte-shimao)                                                shall-go-play-(finality)---------------------------------------------------p 125 (81)1[On the street, Kyousuke looks about.]narration:  I came flying out in a rush,    asette            DEte-kita      wa  but I don't really know         being-in-a-hurry  came-to-emerge (T)  where Hikaru-chan's house is.                                  i--   kedo                                  okay  but                                  ___                                  ore  hikaru-chan no IE  doko ni  aru ka                                  I    Hikaru's-house     where    is  (muse)                                  SHIranai  n da                                  not-know  (explan)2[The arcade game's pov of an intense Hikaru staring down at it.]arcade game FX:                   ________  <CRAAASH>                       zugyu--nHikaru:  Okaaay.  It's mine, it's        yo--shi    itadaki itadaki!  mine!3[Kyousuke watches her, wide-eyed.]arcade game FX:                   _________  <WHAAAM>                        doka----nHikaru:                                ______  Aiigghh, you idiot...           a--  baka--4Kyousuke: [off]  Hikaru-chan!                    hikaru-chan![Hikaru turns with a smile.]5Hikaru: [delighted]  S-Sempai...!                    se SEMPAI...!sign:                             ______ ________  Medal Corner                    medaru ko--na--6[Her smile disappears as she hears...]arcade game FX:                   _______  <CRAAASH>                       zuga--n7Hikaru: [angrily, to the machine]  You bastard!                    konnyaro!Hikaru kick FX:                   _____  <whump!>                        doka_---------------------------------------------------p 126 (82)1[View of a train station.]Hikaru: [off]  I'm so happy!                   u_reshii na!2Kyousuke:  Umm, why are you here?          nee  do--shite  konna TOKORO ni?                                  say  why        at-this-kind-of-placeHikaru: [blushing]  Err, coming home from the       a  o-isha       no kaeri...    he he  doctor's...  Eh-heh.               (hon)-doctor 's come-home3Hikaru: [beaming]  Shouldn't you still be in       SEMPAI koso    mada   GAKKOU  JUGYOU ja...  class, Sempai?                         indeed  still  school  in-classHikaru FX:                        _____  <smile!>                        niko_4[Kyousuke looks bewildered.  Why is she so happy coming home from the doctor's?]5Kyousuke: [getting teary-eyed] (Maybe Hikaru-chan doesn't       (hikaru-chan HONNIN  wa   SHIranai  no ka  know herself, or else she                    herself (T)  not-know     (?)  knows and is trying to act  as cheerful as possible.)       soretomo  SHItte-te   se--ippai                                  or-else   is-knowing  with-all-her-might                                  AKAruku     furumatte-iru  no darou      ka)                                  cheerfully  is-acting      (poss-explan) (?)signs: [partial]                     ____     ____  ...rozu  ...rada                ...rozu  ...radaKyousuke contemplation FX:  <stare>                         ji~~nHikaru: [puzzled, finger to pursed lips]  ?                               ?6narration:                        ____  Idiot!  Why are you crying,     baka!    nani  naite   n da    yo  KYOUSUKE  Kyousuke?                                what  crying  (explan)7Kyousuke:  S-say, do you want to go        so so-- da  doko-ka  ikitai      tokoro  somewhere?                                  some     want-to-go  place                                  aru?                                  to-be-there  I'll go anywhere with you       KYOU  wa   doko demo  tsukiau       yo  today.                          today (T)  wherever   go-about-withHikaru: [jubilant]  Hooray!                         yatta!---------------------------------------------------p 127 (83)1[Their pov of the aquarium.  Glass walls of the tanks run floor-to-ceiling.]sign:  Tropical Fish                   NETTAIGYO2[A fish's pov of Hikaru, hands pressed to the glass and smiling in wonder. Kyousuke stands near and studies her.]3[Inside a toy store, the two laugh at a pair of ducklings.]signs: [right]                    _______     ______  <several names of action        sanda--...  re--na...   <???>no...  figures>                        _____                                  kingu...                                  Kingsign: [right]                     ______  Models                          moderusign: [left]  <...rumi>                       ...rumi4[Outside, Kyousuke treats her to food from a cart-vendor.]sign:                             ________  Crepes                          kure--pu5[Hikaru cheerfully blows on her crepes as Kyousuke smiles.]Hikaru FX:                        ____ ____  <puff puff>                     hafu hafu6[View pans back to show them sitting on a park bench.]Kyousuke:  Taste good?                     oishii?Hikaru:  Yup!                            un!---------------------------------------------------p 128 (84)1[Kyousuke grows pensive and weepy.]narration:                        ___  Maybe I've been acting too      ore tte  hikaru-chan ni   KYOU made  coldly towards Hikaru-chan      I   (T)             (IO)  up-to-today  up until today.                                  TSUMEta-suginakatta-ro-- ka?                                  poss-wasn't-too-cold     (?)Kyousuke contemplation FX:  <hmmmm>                         ji~~n2Kyousuke FX:                      ____  <sniff>                         gusuHikaru: [concerned]               ____  A cold?                         kaze?3Kyousuke: [laughing it off]  M-maybe.                        so... so-- ka mo nenarration:  D-don't cry, Kyousuke!          na naku na KYOUSUKE!4[Tenderly, Hikaru removes her scarf and places it around Kyousuke's neck.]Hikaru scarf FX:                  _____  <flutter!>                      pasa_5Kyousuke: [looking at the scarf]  Hikaru-chan...                  hikaru-chan...6[His pov of her.]Hikaru:  Your health...  Is              karada......    TAISETSU ni shite  ne  important.                      health          being-important---------------------------------------------------p 129 (85)1[Kyousuke is overcome.]narration:  Such a nice girl...             konna ni   ii KO      na no ni...                                  so-(much)  nice-girl     even-though  To think she might die...       SHInjau            nan-te                                  (= SHInde-shimau)  the-likes-of                                     die-(finality/regret)2narration:  Now that it's come to this,     iza                 ko-- natte-miru to  I can understand                at-the-last-moment  if-try-and-become-  Hikaru-chan's existence...                                     like-this                                  wakaru      hikaru-chan no SONZAI----                                  understand              's existence3narration:                        ___  I should have taken better      ore  motto  hikaru-chan no koto  care of Hikaru-chan.            I    more   about-Hikaru                                  TAISETSU ni suru-beki  datta  n da                                  should-be-important    was   (explan)Kyousuke pooling tears FX:  <gradually...>                  jiwa...4[Hikaru collapses against his shoulder.]Hikaru FX:                        _____  <faint!>                        fura_5Hikaru:                                                 ____ (<sigh> It's not a serious       (maitta na   taishita kaze  demo nai  cold but since Mom made me       be-annoyed  serious-cold   not  take some medicine...  I'm                                ______  sleepy.)                        no ni          o-KAA-san  kusuri   nan-ka                                  even-though    mother     medicine somesuch                                  nomaseru       n da mon......    nemui)                                  to-make-drink  (is-the-reason)   sleepy6Kyousuke: [horrified]  H-Hikaru-chan!                  hi hikaru-chan_!---------------------------------------------------p 130 (86)1Hikaru:  S-Sempai, I can't go on...      se SEMPAI  atashi  moo      dame......                                             I       already  no-good2[Kyousuke looks at her with realization.]3Hikaru:  Sayonara, Sempai.  It was       sayonara  sempai  TANOshikatta...  fun...                          farewell          was-fun[She faints.]Hikaru FX:                        _____  <go-limp!>                      gawa_4Kyousuke: [shaking her]  H-Hikaru-chan!  Hikaru-chan!!   hi hikaru-chan  hikaru-chan_!!5Kyousuke:  DON'T DI-I-IE!  HIKARU-CHAN!!   SHInu na----_    hikaru-chan_!!                                  don't-die   !6[Hikaru opens her eyes, a bit dazed, to find that Kyousuke is embracing her.]Hikaru:  Hmm?                            n---------------------------------------------------p 131 (87)1Kyousuke:                         ___  I've finally realized.          ore  yatto         KI ga tsuita     n da                                  I    at-long-last  became-aware-of  (explan)2Kyousuke: [shouting]  Hikaru-chan, I can't go on      hikaru-chan ga   inai to  living without you!!                        (S)  if-not-here                                  ___                                  ore  Ikite   ikenai        yo!!                                  I    living  be-of-no-use3[From this pov we see Hikaru's eyes widen.]4[She pulls back slightly to look into his eyes.]Hikaru:  Me too!                         atashi mo   desu!                                  me     too  it-is5[They embrace once more.]Hikaru:  Sempai...                       SEMPAI...---------------------------------------------------p 132 (88)1Hikaru stomach FX: [off]  <growl>                         guu~~2Hikaru: [blushing, hand to mouth]  Oh my.                          ara3Hikaru: [embarrassed]                                __________ (This won't do.  Having only     (dame da      wa   kure--pu--  MAI  one crepe is too harsh on a      it's-no-good      crepe       (counter)  growing girl like me.)                                  tabeta kurai   de wa                                  ate    extent  in (contrast)                                  sodachi zakari no atashi ni  wa                                  growth-time    's me    (IO) (contrast)                                  KOKU        tte  mon     da wa)                                  hard/severe (T)  reason  isHikaru:  I haven't eaten since           ASA      tabeta kkiri  nan desu  morning.                        morning  ate    only   that-is4[Kyousuke watches wide-eyed as Hikaru races off toward the crepes cart.]Hikaru:                           ________  Another 2 or 3 crepes!          kure--pu  mo--     2~3  MAI!                                  crepes    another       <counter>Hikaru FX:                        ___  <run!>                          da_writing at bottom margin:  Like a vendor of okonomiyaki.   okonomiyaki  -YA-san        mitai....                                                seller-(hon)  a-sort-of5Kyousuke: [bug-eyed]  Eh?                             e6[Shot of a train racing by.]train FX:                         _______  <RUMBLE!>                       go----_7[Inside the train, Kyousuke and Hikaru lean back against the closed door.]Kyousuke: (Wh-what's this?  What's         (na nan da         kore       wa  going on?                           what's-this    this-(one) (T)                                  do-- yu--     wake    da?                                  what-kind-of  reason  be  She's pretty lively.)           kekko--  GENKI     ja nai ka)                                  quite    spiritedHikaru:                                                  _____  And...  Hmm...!  Eh-heh-heh.    sore de    ne----_     ufufu                                  and        (rhet)8[Exiting the train station, Hikaru stretches her arms.]Hikaru:                                                      _______  Today was the luckiest!         KYOU  wa   SAIKOU    ni    rakki--                                  today (T)  greatest (IO)   luckysign 1:  Towards Town.                   MACHI  HOUMENsign 2:  South Exit.                     MINAMI  DEGUCHI                                  south   exitsign 3:  Renovated Gate.                 ARATA-MARU                      GUCHI                                  be-renovated/modified/improved  gate---------------------------------------------------p 133 (89)1Hikaru: [stretching her arms]  I was in danger of getting      SHUKUDAI  Aterare      sou de  called on for homework but      homework  called-upon  looking-as-if  conveniently caught a cold  so I didn't have to go to       abunakatta     tokoro    ni   tsugo--  school.                         was-in-danger  occasion (IO)  convenience                                          ____                                  yoku    kaze de    GAKKOU  YASUmete                                  nicely  with-cold  school  can-be-absent2Hikaru:                                           _______     ______  On top of that, I was even      omake ni        da--rin to  de--to made  able to go on a date with       in-addition-to  w/Darling   as-far-as-date  you, Darling.                                  dekita       n desu mono                                  was-able-to  (is-the-reason)3Kyousuke:  Eh?!                            e?!4Hikaru: [in glee]  And, oh yes.                    a  so-- so--5[Arms behind her back, she approaches Kyousuke slowly, but with a definite goal in mind.  Kyousuke backs away in nervousness...]Hikaru:                                                    _______  Say.  What you said a           nee  sakki               da--rin ga  little while ago, Darling.      say  a-little-while-ago          (S)                                  itte-kureta         koto                                  said-(favor-to-me)  thingHikaru FX:                        ___ ___  <approach closely>              tsu tsu...Kyousuke FX:                      _____  <urkk!>                         giku_6[Closeup view of her face.  It is a sultry look, rich in meaning.]Hikaru:  It's okay if I believe it,      atashi  SHINjite   i--   n desu  isn't it.                       I       believing  okay  (explan)narration:  Th-that means I really...       ko kore       wa   yappari...                                     this-(one) (T)  sure-enough7[She rests her arms around his neck.  Kyousuke goes wide-eyed and sweats.]narration:  ...saw the dream in             mita  YUME  no JUMBAN ga   GYAKU     datta  reverse...                      saw   dream 's order  (S)  opposite  was                                  n de    wa----                                  'cause<Explanation of the scene order--DREAM 1. Hikaru kisses Kyousuke 2. Kyousuke's confession 3. Hikaru's fainting; REALITY 1. Hikaru's fainting 2. Kyousuke's confession 3. Hikaru kisses Kyousuke.>diagram: [top]  Dream                           YUME[top middle] Kyousuke:  Hikaru-chan, I can't go on      hikaru-chan ga   inai to  living without you!!                        (S)  if-not-here                                  ___                                  ore  Ikite   ikenai        yo!!                                  I    living  be-of-no-use[top right] Hikaru FX:            _____  <go-limp!>                      gawa_[top right] Hikaru:  Sayonara, Sempai.               sayonara  sempaidiagram: [bottom]  Reality                         GENJITSU[bottom left] Hikaru FX:          _____  <go-limp!>                      gawa_[bottom left] Hikaru:  Sayonara, Sempai.               sayonara  sempai[bottom middle] Kyousuke:  Hikaru-chan, I can't go on      hikaru-chan ga   inai to  living without you!!                        (S)  if-not-here                                  ___                                  ore  Ikite   ikenai        yo!!                                  I    living  be-of-no-use---------------------------------------------------p 134 (90)1[He visualizes the moment in his dream when Hikaru kisses him on the cheek.]narration:  That means, all that            to yu-- koto wa   NOKOru    wa----  remains is...                   that-means   (T)  to-remain (T)                                  ____  Getting kissed is great but...  kisu sareru  no wa  ureshii  kedo...                                  being-kissed        happy    but  Sure enough, this kind of       ko-- yu--    no wa  yappari...  thing...                        this-kind-of        sure-enough2[Meanwhile, Yuusaku and Madoka walk home from school.]Yuusaku:  Oh yeah, did you happen to      a so-- so--  mimashita?  see?                                         saw                                            ______  That Kasuga, suddenly           KASUGA no yaro--  ikinari   GAKKOU  running out of school like      that-Kasuga       suddenly  school  that...                                  TObiDAshite...                                  rushing-outsign:  Dentistry.                      SHIKA3[Down the street, Kyousuke spies Yuusaku and Madoka approaching.]sign:                             ________  Altair 4                        arutairu 4Yuusaku:                              ______  I can't figure out what that    ano yaro--  nani  KANGAete  n no ka  guy's thinking at all!          that-guy    what  thinking       (?)                                  sappari  wakarimasen     ne--_                                  at-all   not-understand      !narration:  ...<shouldn't> be seen in       HITOMAE de wa   mirareta...  public...                       in-public  (T)  <see-note-below>4[In horror, Kyousuke looks off-panel.]Hikaru: [puckering up]                      _______  I LOVE YOU, DARLING!            DAISUki!  da--rinnarration:  ..........  <stutter>           ta..........  ta ta ta ta ta ta ta ta                                  ta ta ta ta<Translation note (AN):  In Japanese, a negative modifier goes on as a suffix to the verb.  Kyousuke was going to say <miraretakunai> which means "don't want to be seen."  Before he could complete the word, he stops at <mirareta> which means "was seen" and stutters the last syllable.>---------------------------------------------------p 135 (91)1[Both Yuusaku and Madoka stop short, eyes wide in shock.]2Hikaru kiss FX:  <SMACK!>                        #CHU#![Kyousuke looks extremely ill.]narration:  I-I've been seen!               mi mirarechatta!                                     (= mirarete-shimatta)3[His pov of an angry Yuusaku and an angry Madoka.]4Kyousuke: [smiling, wearing Hikaru around his neck]  H-hi...                         ya yaa...Yuusaku approach FX:  <dash-dash>                     tsukatsukaMadoka depart FX:  <stride-stride>                 suta sutanarration:  You can't avoid what you saw    yappari      YOCHI-MU           wa  in a precognitive dream!        sure-enough  precognitive-dream (T)                                  sakerarenai!                                  not-be-avoided---------------------------------------------------