Kimagure Orange Road"A Premonition Dream in the Starry Sky"Volume 4, Story 8WB Volume 3, Story 2Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation and full-script typesetting by : Craig H. NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Gary Kacmarcik Peter NorbyLast revision : 11-11-94NOTE: [WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()]NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga. So there may be a fewextra's to those of you not having them.Example: (The subtitles on page 29 (161) are only in the WB'S!)---------------------------------------------------p 29 (161)--TITLE PAGE[Against the backdrop of a spiral galaxy, Kyousuke and Madoka sit together. Kyousuke looks up at the sky. Madoka looks down at her knee or foot.]MAIN TITLE (at top) ________ A Premonition Dream in the HOSHI-ZORA ni _DORI--MU_ Starry Sky starry-sky (IO) dream (kanji = YOCHI-MU) premonition-dreamSUB-TITLE (at bottom) I Concentrated on a Wish NEGAi o kometa and It Seemed Like I'd wish/desire (O) concentrated-on Be Able to See a Dream- Tinged Future in the HOSHI-ZORA ni YUME IRO Starry Sky... starry-sky (IO) dream color/tinge MIRAI ga mie sou de future (S) be-able-to-see look-as-if---------------------------------------------------p 30 (162)1[Madoka facial portrait.]Madoka: Kasuga-kun... KASUGA-kun...2[Kyousuke blushes and looks back at her.]Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____ doki_3Madoka: [leaning close, her hands behind her back] I'll give you something ii mono a - ge - ru... ni-i-ice... nice-thing to-give---------------------------------------------------p 31 (163)1[Madoka leans in for a kiss, eyes closed. Kyousuke stands frozen and wide-eyed.]Kyousuke: Ah! Ayukawa... a_ AYUKAWA......Kyousuke heartbeat FX: ____ ____ doki doki2[A fractured view of the night sky.]Kyousuke: [off] Ah! a3[Cut to the Kasuga residence. Kurumi and Manami peer around the corner of a door.]Kyousuke: [off] Oh, no. Can't be... dame sonna... no-good More! motto! more/much-more/longer4[Closeup. Kyousuke comes wide awake with a start.]5[View pans back to show Kyousuke kneeling in bed, tightly hugging his pillow to his chest. His sisters stand and stare.]Kyousuke: .......... ..........6Kurumi: More...? More whaaat...? motto...? motto naani--?Kyousuke: [deeply blushing] A-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha ahahahahahahahahahanarration: A dr-dream...? yu YUME ka-------------------------------------------------------p 32 (164)1[Kyousuke stands on the sidewalk outside a bowling alley.]narration: ________ I'm going bowling with KYOU wa hikaru-chan to bouringu! Hikaru-chan today! today (T) w/Hikaru bowling2[He visualizes the almost-climactic moment from his dream.]Kyousuke: [blushing] But this morning's dream, shikashi... kesa no YUME for a dream, felt strangely but/however this-morning's-dream real... YUME ni shite wa considering-it-was-a-dream _____ myo-- ni riaru datta na... strangely-real was ________ My heart's still beating imada ni dokidoki shite-ru... wildly... still/yet be-thrilling/heart-throbbing3Kyousuke: Wait. Is it due to the mate yo _CHIKARA_ no sei ka Power? wait Power 's fault (?) I had a dream that felt YOUCHIEN no TOKI ni mo like this back in at-kindergarten's-time too kindergarten, too. konna KANji no YUME this-kind-of-feeling 's dream mita koto atta zo saw that had That time, for some reason, ano TOKI wa naze-ka SENSEI ni I dreamt I was scolded by that-time (T) w/o-knowing-why by-teacher the teacher, and when I went to school... shikarareru YUME o mite to-be-scolded dream (O) seeing GAKKOU iku to... school to-go when[Young Kyousuke stands in a puddle. His classmates gather 'round and stare.]little Kyousuke FX: jo~~_little girl: Sensei... Kyousuke-kun...!! sense-- kyo--suke-kun ga----_!!4Kyousuke: If that's the case, that da to sureba are wa was a..."premonition w/that if-to-do that(one) (T) dream"?! "YOCHI-MU"?! "premonition-dream"Kyousuke FX: _____ goku_5[View down an open mall.]Kyousuke: [off] But, it can't be! demo masaka! I'll be with Hikaru-chan KYOU wa hikaru-chan to issho da shi today, and Ayukawa is today (T) together-w/Hikaru be and unlikely to do that sort of thing. daiichi AYUKAWA ga anna koto the-first (S) that-kind-of-thing suru hazu nai yo na to-do not-likely6Madoka: [off] Kasuga-kun! KASUGA-kun!---------------------------------------------------p 33 (165)1[Not really a panel. A full-length view of Madoka, standing in jersey top and jeans, is splashed down the right half of the page, overlaying panels 2, 3 and 6.]2[Kyousuke stares.]3[Overhead view of the two in conversation.]Madoka: _______ Why are you standing nani o boke--tto tsutTAtte-ru no around in a daze? what (O) (from 'bokeru') be-standing-up becoming-senileKyousuke: Eh?! Today, Hi... e_ KYOU wa hi... ! today (T)4[Kyousuke stops short, smile frozen on his face.]5narration: Danger, danger! abunai abunai!Kyousuke: ...because I have time to hima na mon de spare, and I'm idly... leisurely person on-account-of ________ burabura to... idly/lazily and" as "hima na" = idly/leisurely.>6[Kyousuke visualizes his dream again.]7[Madoka sun-splashed portrait.]narration: Ayukawa's clothes... AYUKAWA no FUKU---- 's clothesnarration: ...are the same as in the YUME no NAKA to ONAji da! dream! inside-of-dream same-as be---------------------------------------------------p 34 (166)1narration: Th-then that dream... ji ja ano YUME wa.......... then that-dream (T)narration: ...is something that will GENJITSU ni KYOU okoru actually happen today? as-a-matter-of-fact today happen koto na no ka thing (?)2Madoka: _____________ Say, why don't we go to nee puranetariumu ikanai? the planetarium? say planetarium not-go3Kyousuke: _____________ Planetarium? puranetariumu?4[View pans back to show a building that's next to the bowling alley.]Madoka: ____ Look! It's in this hora koko no biru de yatte-ru no yo building. in-building-here be-doing ______ It just opened recently. kono aida o--pun shita bakari nan da tte recently opened just it be5Kyousuke: [pondering] (Huh? Ayukawa's inviting me. (hee-- AYUKAWA ga sasotte-kureru How unusual.) (S) inviting-(favor-to-me) nan-te mezurashii) how unusual/novel6Kyousuke: (B-but Hikaru-chan is coming (de demo mo-- sugu hikaru-chan ga soon. but soon/before-long (S) kuru to-come I can't very well stand suppokasu wake ni wa ikanai...) her up...) stand-up can't-very-well7Kyousuke: [flash thought] (But if that dream was a (shikashi ano YUME ga premonition dream, then, but that-dream (S) as usual, my only choice will be to use the Power YOCHI-MU nara to cheat on them.) if-it-was-a-premonition-dream kono BA wa yahari itsu-mo no this-situation (T) as usual _CHIKARA_ o TSUKAtta kakemochi used-the-Power in-2-or-more-places* <*connotes-cheating-on-girlfriend/wife) shika nai) only-beKyousuke fist FX: ___ gu_---------------------------------------------------p 35 (167)1[Hikaru shows excellent form as she releases her bowling ball.]narration: So, as usual, I'm going to yu-- wake de REI ni yotte back and forth between it-is-for-this-reason as-is-usual Ayukawa and Hikaru-chan, but... hikaru-chan to AYUKAWA no Hikaru and Ayukawa 's aida o ittarikitari shite-ru between (O) be-going-to-and-fro wake da kedo---- reason be but2[Her ball levels the pins.]3[Hikaru leaps and grabs Kyousuke by the neck.]narration: ...somehow, sneaking around KONKAI no kakemochi wa this time leaves me with this-time 's in-2-or-more-places (T) more leeway! naze-ka YOYUU desu! somehow leeway/time-(to-spare) isHikaru: _________ I did it! A strike! yatta sutoraiku! did strike4[Overhead view of Kyousuke as he addresses the pins. He awkwardly holds the ball.]Kyousuke: (I wonder if it's this way? (ko-- ka na iya ko-- ka...) No. Like this...?) like-this I-wonder no like-this (?)5[Hikaru watches him. Kyousuke continues to address the pins, though his attention is more on the ball he holds up in his hands.]Hikaru: [blushing] (Wow. He must be checking (sugoi wa kitto TAMA o over the ball. amazing (T) surely ball (O) ERAnde-ru n da wa be-choosing (explan) I guess when one is as SEMPAI hodo no HITO ni good as Sempai, one has greater-extent 's person (IO) to worry about a ball's good and bad points, too.) naru to TAMA no YOshi Ashi become when ball's good-&-bad-points mo KI ni suru mono na no ne) too care/be-nervous-about thingKyousuke: (How do you hold this ball? (kono TAMA do-- yatte motsu this-ball how doing to-hold n daro? (poss-explan) ________ It's because I haven't nani se bouringu hajimete bowled before.) because bowling for-the-1st-time da kara na) be that's-why6[Hikaru races past and behind him, thumping him on his back as she passes by.]Hikaru: Sempai, I'll bring you SEMPAI atashi betsu no TAMA o another ball. I different ball (O) mottekite-agemasu bring/fetch-(favor-to-you)Hikaru FX: ___ ____ zun don_[Kyousuke drops the ball on his foot.]7[Hikaru runs for the ball rack.]Kyousuke: [hopping about] (Good!! Now's my chance!) (yoshi!! ima no uchi ni!) now 's time toball FX: ________ pyonpyon hop/skip/romp---------------------------------------------------p 36 (168)1[Kyousuke materializes just outside the planetarium entrance.]Kyousuke teleport FX: ____ shu_sign (top/partial): _________ ...netarium ...netariumusign (door): ________ _____________ Sunshine Planetarium sanshain puranetariumusign (post): _____________ Planetarium Entrance puranetariumu IRIGUCHI #Planetarium Entrance#2[He looks both ways...]3[...brushes off his hands...]4[...and clears his throat.]narration: ______ I'll straighten up here... koko wa hitotsu bishitto this-place (T) one-(place/time) sharply KImete... to setting if/andKyousuke FX: _____ kohon5Kyousuke: [entering, waving] Hi. Wait long?! yaa omatase! hi keep-waiting[Madoka sits waiting and turns at his voice.]6Madoka: It's just starting now. choudo ima kara yo just/right beginning-nowMadoka FX: _____ niko_7[Kyousuke gives a small smile back.]narration: That smile tickles me with kono KITAI anticipation! this anticipation/expectation saseru hohoemi! make-do/have-do a-smileKyousuke heartbeat FX: ________ dokidokisign (partial): ...International... ...KOKUSAI...---------------------------------------------------p 37 (169)1[They walk into the darkened planetarium theatre. Madoka leads the way.]Madoka: Watch out for that step... KI o tsukete being-careful/be-on-the-lookout soko DAN ni... that-place step (IO)2[Kyousuke trips on that very step...]Kyousuke FX: _____ gawa_3[...and pitches forward...]Kyousuke: AH! a_4[...crashing into the back of Madoka. She goes wide-eyed with surprise.]5[Closeup of Kyousuke's face pressed into Madoka's hair.]Kyousuke FX: fusaa (fusafusa = abundant-hair/in-tufts)6[Closeup of the surprised look on Madoka's face.]---------------------------------------------------p 38 (170)1Kyousuke: [leaping away] Ah! S-sorry! ha_ go gomen!Kyousuke FX: suza_2[Madoka takes him in tow, walking to their seats. Kyousuke blushes.]Madoka: That's why I said look, hora itte-ru soba kara you klutz. look be-saying near/beside that's-why otchokochoi rash-fellowMadoka FX: gui_3[Kyousuke facial portrait.]narration: ________ The smell of shampoo from AYUKAWA no KAMI shampu-- no kaori ga Ayukawa's hair, and an 's hair shampoo's-smell (S) indescribable warmth from the nape of her neck... shite KUBIsuji kara wa doing from-nape-of-the-neck (T) nan-to mo ienai nukumori ga... one-can't-tell/God-knows slight-warmth4[Madoka facial portrait.]5[Madoka still has Kyousuke in tow, grasping him by his wrist. In the background is Kyousuke's dream, as dream-Madoka leans in for a kiss.]narration: That dream... ano YUME...---------------------------------------------------p 39 (171)1[View of the star-projector which projects the images of the stars on the black ceiling.]2[Madoka and Kyousuke sit in aisle seats. They look up.]sign: Danger KIKEN3Kyousuke FX: ______ chira_4[Kyousuke's pov of Madoka looking up at the ceiling.]5narration: Soon, I have to follow up sorosoro hikaru-chan no HOU mo on Hikaru-chan, too. soon Hikaru's-direction too _______ fuoro-- shinai to na not-follow-up-6[Kyousuke claps a hand to his mouth and peeks over at Madoka.]narration: I'd better hold my breath barenai you ni IKI o or I'm gonna be busted... not-disclose as/"purpose" breath (O) koroshite---- killing7Kyousuke teleport FX: ____ shu_---------------------------------------------------p 40 (172)1[Kyousuke releases the ball. His form needs a little work.]2[The ball heads straight for the gutter.]ball FX: ________ gorogoro3[Kyousuke flashes with the Power...]narration: Oops! otto!4[...and the ball veers away from the gutter, taking a classic "hook" trajectory...]ball FX: kui5[...right into the 1-3 pocket for a strike.]ball FX: _______ doko--n6[He dusts off his hands.]narration: This sort of thing is so _CHIKARA_ o TSUKAeba konna mon easy if I use the Power! if-use-the-Power this-kind-of-thing karui karui! simple/easyHikaru: [hugging him about the neck] Amaaazing, Sempai!! sugo--i sempai!!observer: OHHH o---7[Kyousuke bowls. Splashed over the panel is a closeup of his smiling face.]narration: For some reason, I'm KYOU wa naze-ka TANOshii KIBUN having such a good time today (T) w/o-knowing-why pleasant-mood today, that I keep using the Power unintentionally! OMOwazu _CHIKARA_ o TSUKAtte-shimau! unintentionally use-the-Power-(regret)8[View of the crowd that gathers.]crowd: ________ zawazawa be-astir/noisy/rustlenarration: Is even this because of kore to yu-- no mo ano YUME no sei---?! that dream...?! even-this that-dream 's fault---------------------------------------------------p 41 (173)1[Kyousuke releases another ball. Hikaru watches from the scorer's desk.]narration: Well, soon I have to return sa--te sorosoro AYUKAWA no tokoro ni to Ayukawa. soon to-Ayukawa's-place modoranakutte wa must-returnball FX: ___ don2[He flashes with the Power.]narration: Now! hoi!3ball teleport FX: ____ shu_4Hikaru: [goggle-eyed] Huh? n?[Kyousuke looks back at the empty lane with dismay. He blushes, sweats.]narration: Yikes! arya5narration: ______ Oh no! I meant to nudge shimatta! bo--ru o MAgeru tsumori ga the ball, but I finished ball (O) bend/curve intention accidentally made it disappear . making-a-mistake in-a-rush tobashichatta (= tobashite-shimatta) hurried-(finality/regret)Hikaru: [still goggle-eyed] ? ?Kyousuke: [forcing a smile] Well, that's okay. ma ii ka6[View of the bowling alley.]---------------------------------------------------p 42 (174)1[View of the planetarium entrance.]sign on wall: ________ _____________ Sunshine Planetarium sanshain puranetariumu Constellation Show TEI -ZA exhibit constellation _________ All-New Time-Lapse orijinaru TEI-ZA HAYA-ASHI Constellation Show original quick-pace2Madoka: [reaching over to touch Kyousuke's shoulder] Hey, Kasuga-kun. nee KASUGA-kun That star... ano HOSHI..........3[Her hand falls to rest atop a... Bowling ball?!]4[Madoka goes goggle-eyed...]5[...and she turns to look.]6Madoka: [holding the ball] Wh-what's this...!! na nani yo kore----_!! what this-(one)7Madoka: [looking around] Huh? Kasuga-kun. are? KASUGA-kun---------------------------------------------------p 43 (175)1[Out on the street, Hikaru waves good-bye as she runs off.]Hikaru: Bye, Sempai. ja ne-- SEMPAInarration: Now... Back to Ayukawa... sate... AYUKAWA no HOU wa... to now 's direction and/when2Kyousuke teleport FX: ____ shu_3[He materializes in the lap of a woman.]Kyousuke: Huh? n4Kyousuke: [swiveling his head around] Eh?! Eh?! e ewoman with Kyousuke in her lap: KYAAAA kya~~~~5Kyousuke: [running out of the theatre room] Wh-what's this? The audience na nan da moo tsugi no KYAKU for the next show is already what's-this already next 's visitors here? to irekaete-ta no ka was-replaced-with (?)6Kyousuke: ___ Ah! ha_Kyousuke: In that case, Ayukawa...!! to yu-- koto wa AYUKAWA......!! it's-said-that7Madoka: [standing behind him] Where did you go? doko itte-ta no? to-where were-goingKyousuke FX: _____ giku_---------------------------------------------------p 44 (176)1[Kyousuke is horror-struck.]narration: D-damn!! ma mazui!!2[Not meeting her eye, he blushes...]Kyousuke: ____ Being discovered here, koko de barecha sekkaku the special dream I had at-here (= barete wa) special-trouble disappears like bubbles discovering/be-disclosed on water... mita YUME ga MIZU no awani... saw dream (S) water's-bubbles/foam -come-to-Kyousuke FX: __________ butsubutsu mutter3Madoka: What dream? Water? nani YUME? MIZU ga what-dream water (S) Is something wrong? do--ka shita no?[Realizing he spoke out loud, Kyousuke belatedly slaps a hand over his mouth.]Kyousuke: ___ Ah! ha_4Kyousuke: [embarrassed] Water... Like, I went past MIZU... sou SUIBUN some water a moment ago, in water like water the restroom... _____ torisugichatte chotto toire ni... (= tourisugite-shimatte) a-moment passing-by/going-beyond in-restroomnarration: Liar, liar! gomakashi gomakashi! deception/trickery5[She considers his words...]Madoka contemplation FX: ji--_6[He looks back and sweats.]7Madoka: [turning to go outside] Oh, well. maa ii kaKyousuke: ___ Phew! ho_---------------------------------------------------p 45 (177)1[View of the street.]Madoka: [off] Hey, then what about the nee ja YUME tte nani? dream? say then dream (quote) what2Kyousuke: Huh? n?3[He gazes seriously into the distance.]Kyousuke: This morning... I saw you kesa...... AYUKAWA no YUME o mita n da in a dream. this-morning 's dream (O) saw (explan)crows-in-background FX: kaa4[Madoka looks at him askance, wide-eyed and with a small smile.]5Kyousuke: [blushing, looking up at the sky] And so... sore de...narration: A-and so, I can't simply be so sore de tte masaka HONNIN ni saying that to her face... and-so (T) can't-be to-person-herself ieru wakenai yo---- be-saying simple/easy6[Smiling, she tosses back her hair.]Madoka: What kind of a dream? do-- yu-- YUME? what-kind-of dreamKyousuke: [horror-struck, blushing deeply] Wha... do...7Kyousuke heartbeat FX: ____ ____ ____ doki doki doki8[Madoka facial portrait--she smiles sweetly.]---------------------------------------------------p 46 (178)1[She clings to his arm and rests her head against his shoulder.]Madoka: It's chilly... samui... cold/chilly[Kyousuke's eyes bug out.]2[His pov of her face resting against his shoulder.]3Kyousuke heartbeat FX: ____ ____ ____ ____ doki doki doki doki4[Kyousuke blushes deeply as he thinks.]narration: It was a premonition dream yappari are wa YOCHI-MU?! after all?! after-all that(one) (T) premonition-dream5[He turns to her and she looks up.]narration: Today, by now, Hikaru-chan KYOU wa moo hikaru-chan mo has returned home...! today (T) by-this-time too KAEtta koto da shi...! returned-home that be and/considerKyousuke: Ayukawa... AYUKAWA......---------------------------------------------------p 47 (179)1[From behind, two guys walking down the street recognize Kyousuke.]guy: Hi...! yoo--_ _________ Aren't you the guy who was sakki sutoraiku REMPATSU shite ni just now rolling strike a-little- firing-strikes-in-rapid- (IO) after strike? while-ago succession oni--chan ja nai ka brother/guy (aren't-you?) You were still there. mada ita no still/yet there-was2guy: ________ Your bowling skill is anta no bouringu no UDE impressive. I mean...! your bowling 's skill/ability taishita mon da nee iya---_ great thing be no It's truly awesome. JITSU ni subarashii truly/really magnificentKyousuke: [sweating and swiveling his head from Madoka to the guy] Wah! Hold on...! wa chotto...!Madoka: [surprised] ________ Bowling?! bouringu?!3guy FX: jirojiro stare/look-overguy: Huh...? he--?4guy: [holding up his pinkie finger*] Just a while ago you were sakki anta to ISSHO datta with a nice short-haired a-little-while-ago together-w/you was girl, and now you're with ___________ this beautiful girl. sho-tokatto no GENKI na KO to ii short-cut-(hair) 's fine girl with kono BIJIN no one--san to ii this-beauty's big-sister/girl with You're pretty good at this kotchi no HOU mo nakanaka taishita sort of thing, too. even-in-this-way quite great mon ja nai thing<*A secret sign known only to members of the Royal Order of Girl-Chasers...>Kyousuke: [motioning for silence] Shh! Shh! shi-- shi--5[Madoka facial-portrait--wide-eyed.]6[The two guys turn to wave as they walk away.]guy: Bye...! ja ne~~~_!sign: Oota Commercial Affairs OOTA SHOUJI (indecipherable-kanji) narration: Good-for-nothing bums...!! rokudenashi----_!! good-for-nothing/scoundrel---------------------------------------------------p 48 (180)1Madoka: Kasuga-kun. KASUGA-kun2Kyousuke: [in obvious fright] Y-yes...! ha hai...!Kyousuke FX: ____ biku (bikubiku = be-nervous/jumpy)3[But she smiles sweetly.]Madoka: _____ niko_4Madoka: [leaning in close, her hands behind her back] I'll give you something ii mono ageru... nice... nice thing to-give5Madoka: [still smiling, presenting the bowling ball] Something you left behind! WASUreMONO! a-thing-left-behindKyousuke: [smiling] HUH?! he?!---------------------------------------------------p 49 (181)1Madoka: [feigning clumsiness] Oops. Sorry. atto gomenball FX: _____ poro_narration: And in the end... KEKKYOKU----2[The ball lands on his foot. He grabs it in pain. Madoka walks off.]narration: ... the dream kesa mita YUME ga I had this morning was this-morning saw dream (S) going to be like this... ko-- yu-- koto datta nan-te this-kind-of-thing was or-such/etc. What's more, it was too amari to ieba anmari na! good to be true! the-rest speaking-of too-much/too-hard3[He watches her walk away.]narration: ___ ______ But if I hadn't had demo ore ga HEN na sukebe strange, lecherous thoughts, but I (S) strange amorous/lecherous or been sneaking around... KOKORO DAshite thoughts putting-out/exposing kakemochi nan-ka in-2-or-more-places somewhat shinakattara if-not-do4[Overhead view.]narration: Perhaps... arui wa----5[Pov shifts to show Madoka's expression as she walks away. She looks hurt.]narration: Perhaps she might have...?! moshi-ka-shite ka mo----?! perhaps it-might-be-that---------------------------------------------------