Kimagure Orange Road"The Puzzling Accident!"Volume 4, Story 3WB Volume 2, Story 13Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation by Craig H. NishidaCompilation by Spencer C. HastingsEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose                                 Craig Nishida                                 Spencer Hastings                                 Andrew Wilson                                 Tony Schrick                                 Peter NorbyLast revision : 9-19-94NOTE: [WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()]NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga. So there may be a fewextra's to those of you not having them.Example: (The subtitles on page 267 (51) are only in the WB'S!)---------------------------------------------------p 267 (51)--TITLE PAGE[An odd title page pic...  ...of Madoka, though she looks more like Oda Kumiko.  Or maybe a grown-up Manami...  She stands in shirt and tie, baggy pants and suspenders, 3 books held under her arm.  With her free hand she adjusts her glasses...  In the background is what looks to be a 2-story country inn.]MAIN TITLE (at top)                           ___________  The Puzzling Accident!          tomadoi     akushidento!                                  be-puzzled  accident                                  be-at-a-loss-(what-to-do)SUB-TITLE (at bottom)              ______  Suddenly, Opportunity           _CHANSU_        wa  TOTSUZEN  Knocks...                       (kanji = KIKAI (T)  all-of-a-sudden                                           opportunity/chance                                  yatte-kuru...                                  to-come-here  Are the Love Exam               REN'AI  SHIKEN  no  JUMBI       wa  #OK# ?  Preparations Okay?              love/emotion    's  preparation (T)                                          exam/experiment---------------------------------------------------p 268 (52)1[Long view down a sidewalk.  Madoka walks towards us, and a small, ~6-year-old child wearing a school-backpack races past her dribbling a soccer ball.]2ball FX:                          ___ ___ ___   _____  <bounce bounce bounce>          ta_ ta_ ta_   po--n  <plop>3[Oops, the ball rolls out onto the street...]ball FX:                          ________  <roll>                          korokoroKid:  Ah!  There it goes!             a_  ike ne!4[The boy hops the guardrail and runs after it.  Madoka watches as she continues walking.]Kid FX:                           ___  <step!>                         da_5van FX:                           ________  <screech>                       kikikiki---------------------------------------------------p 269 (53)1[Madoka starts back in horror.]2[As the van bears down on the kid, he stands frozen.]van FX:                           ________  <screech>                       kikikiki3[Madoka throws herself across the path of the van and tackles the boy out of the way.]4[They land heavily on the asphalt.]van driver: [leaning out window]  ___________  Idiots!                         bakkyaro--_!                                  (= baka yarou)                                     stupid-jerksvan FX:                           ______  <whoosh!>                       buo--_5Madoka:  You aren't...  hurt?            kega...  shinakatta?                                  wound    not-doneKid:  N-no!  Thank you, oneechan.     u un!    arigato one--chan6Madoka: [grabbing her arm]  OW                              tsupain FX:                          _____  <throb!>                        zuki_<i.e., FX of smarting, throbbing pain>---------------------------------------------------p 270 (54)1[Shot of the sign outside classroom 3A.]2[The students turn to look at something out-of-frame.]classmates FX:                    ___ ___  <turn> <twist>                  hin hin                                  <hineru = turning/twisting-body-to-look>3[Shot of Kyousuke and Komatsu as their attention is also caught.]4Komatsu: [looking off to the side of the panel]  Man, knowing her, I bet she     na--  aitsu no koto         da kara  got into a fight again.               that-person's-affair  that's-why                                         _____                                  mata   kenka  demo                                  again  fight  or-something                                  shita n ja     nai no                                  did   (explan) not  Such a punk girl!  That's       ya   da  ne--_     ano FURYOU-SHOUJO   wa!  bad!                            bad  be  (right?)  that-delinquent-girl5Kyousuke:  No way...  But...               masaka..........    demo...  sonna...  Can't be...6[Shot of Madoka sitting at her desk, her left arm in a sling.  She stares off, deep in thought.]---------------------------------------------------p 271 (55)1[Exterior shot of the bicycle rack on the school grounds.]Madoka: [off]  J-just a minute.  What...!      chi chotto    nani yo--_  How far are you meaning         doko made  TSUrete-ku  KI?  to take me?                     to-where   to-take     intention2[Kyousuke holds her free hand and pulls Madoka along behind him.]Madoka:  Kasuga-kun!                     KASUGA-kun!3Madoka: [slapping his hand away]  It hurts already!  Let go!      moo      ITAi_   teba     _!                                  already  sore!   part-with!4Kyousuke:                              ____  That arm...  What happened?     sono kega...    nani ga  atta no?                                  that-wound      what (S) happened5Kyousuke:                         ______  Those in class are saying       kurasu no yatsura      wa   kenka shita  you got into a fight and...     class  's those-people (T)  did-fight                                  n da      toka......                                  (explan)  and  ...they talk as much as         i--tai -ho--dai           itte-ru   kedo...  they like, but...               talk-as-much-as-they-like be-saying but6[Madoka stares at him.]7[Shot of the bicycle rack and Madoka's body below the waist.]Madoka: [off]  Do you also believe that?       KASUGA-kun mo    sou        OMOu?                                             also  like-that  believe---------------------------------------------------p 272 (56)1[Madoka gives him a slightly injured look.]2[Kyousuke facial portrait--expressionless.]3Kyousuke:  No, I don't believe that!       iya  OMOtte nai!                                       not-be-thinkingKyousuke FX:                      _____  <smile!>                        niko_4Madoka: [looking somewhat shyly at the ground]  In that case, don't worry.      dattara     i--   ja nai  atashi......  It...                           if-that-be  okay          I  ...doesn't bother me!           KI ni shite                 nai  kara!                                  mind/care/be-nervous-about  not  that's-why5Madoka: [beaming at him over her shoulder]  It was only a bit of a          chotto    koronda    dake  da yo  tumble.                         a-little  fell-down  only  be6Kyousuke: [forcing a grin]  How clumsy of you!              otchokochoi    da na--_!                                  clumsy-person  benarration:  Saying that she fell            koronda    to yu-- no    mo  sounds a bit bogus, but         fell-down  telling-that  even  Ayukawa isn't a girl                    ___  who'd get into fights           chotto  uso-ppoi  kedo  for no reason.                  little  lie-like  however                                                             _____                                  AYUKAWA tte  WAKE mo naku  kenka  nan-ka                                          (T)  no-reason     fight  somewhat                                  suru   KO    ja nai  yo na                                  to-do  girl  is-not7[Madoka portrait--she looks back at us over her shoulder, smiling.]---------------------------------------------------p 273 (57)1[Exterior shot of the faucets/sinks outside school.]Kyousuke: [off]                                          _______  So this week, while Master      da kedo     KONSHUU    abakabu wa  is on a trip, ABCB is           be however  this-week  ABCB    (T)  being left solely in your       ________  care.                           masuta-- ga   RYOKOU de                                  Master   (S)  on-trip                                  AYUKAWA  hitori    ni   makasarete                                           1-person (IO)  be-entrusting                                  n desho                                  (poss-explan)  With that arm, isn't that       sono UDE ja        chotto    MURI  a little impossible?            with-that-arm (T)  a-little  impossible                                  ja nai?                                  isn't2Madoka:  It's not so bad!                HEIKI  yo   kono  kurai!                                  okay        this  amountKyousuke: [raising his arm, smiling]       _____  Sensei <teacher>, over          hai  i-- aidea ga   arimasu  sense!  here!  I have a great idea!          fine-idea (S)  have     (= sensei)Kyousuke:  Just joking.                    nan chitte3Madoka:  What?                           nani yoMadoka FX:  <giggle!>                       kusu_4Kyousuke:                         ___  If I'm suitable, I'll help      ore de  yokattara  sono TE  ga  out until your arm gets         in-me   if-okay    that-arm (S)  better!                                  naoru    made   TETSUDAu      yo!                                  recover  until  to-lend-a-helping-hand  Just watch and tell me          AYUKAWA wa  MIte-te      SHIJI shite  what to do, and that will              (T)  be-watching  directing  be enough!                                  kureru         dake  de     i-- kara!                                  (favor-to-me)  only  being  that's-fine5[Madoka portrait--she thinks about it...]6[The two of them walk off together.]Madoka:                           ______  Thank you!                      sankyu!Madoka:  I'm very sorry for always       itsu-mo  do--mo sumimasen ne--  imposing on you...              always   I'm-very-sorrynarration:  It's because I want to          AYUKAWA to  futari    ni  be alone with her.              w/Ayukawa   2-people (IO)                                  nareru       n da mon                                  to-be(with)  is-the-reason  Who would let an opportunity    konna _CHANSU_       DARE ga   like this slip away?            this-kind-of-chance  who  (S)                                  nogasu           mono   ka----                                  to-let-get-away  thing (?)Kyousuke: [hands clasped behind his head]  No, no.  No trouble at all.     ie ie  do-- itashimashite                                         no-trouble-at-all/you're-welcome---------------------------------------------------p 274 (58)1[Exterior shot of the entrance to ABCB.  The menu is posted outside.]narration:  But...                          tokoro gaHikaru: [off]                                                   ____  Madoka-san was seriously        madoka-san OU                -kega shita  injured...?!                               seriously/severe   injured                                  n desu    tte~~~_?!                                  (explan)menu: [partially blocked by speech bubble]                                  eihire           TEISHOKU                                                   complete-meal  Miso Fried Fish                 sabamisoni       TEISHOKU                                  tekatoshi suupu  TEISHOKU                                    ??<this "ka" could be a "wa" I guess>                                  nasushimiyaa     TEISHOKU                                         ??  ? <the "mi" and "a" could be                                                something else--it's blurry>                                  kanasuya         TEISHOKU  Fried Tofu                      ageDAshi doufu   TEISHOKU  Cucumber Sushi Roll             kappamaki        TEISHOKU2[Madoka sits at the counter as Hikaru stands in concern next to her.]Hikaru:  Oh, that must hurt!             ma--  ITA      so--!  Because of this you can't       oh    painful  like-that  work for a little while,  right?!                         kore ja                                  on-account-of-this-(one) (T)                                  chotto    HATARAkemasen ne----   _!                                  a-little  not-working   (right?) !Madoka: [smiling nervously]  Oh, but this kind of...         a  demo sonna......  ...thing isn't serious.         taishita  koto   nai  no yo                                  serious   thing  not3Hikaru: [beaming]  Don't say that--please          sonna koto          iwazu ni  take time off!                  that-kind-of-thing  unspoken/understood                                  YASUnde-te         kudasai!                                  be-taking-day-off  please  Leave this place to Sempai      koko        wa  atashi to SEMPAI ni  and me!                         this-place (T)  Sempai-and-me   (IO)                                  makasete_!                                  leaving-it-to-(someone)4[Hikaru grabs her Darling in a hug from behind.  Kyousuke blushes and stares up at the ceiling.]Hikaru:                           ___  Right, Sempai?!!                ne_ SEMPAI!!Hikaru FX:  <hug>                           shikka5Kyousuke FX:                      ______  <peek!>                         chira_6[Madoka looks back, defeated.]7[Closeup of Kyousuke with Hikaru's arm grabbing him in a headlock.  He smiles helplessly, closes his eyes and sweats.]narration:  Wh-why does it always turn      na nan-de  itsu-mo  ko--       naru  out like this...?                  why     always   like-this  to-become                                  n darou na----                                  (poss-explan)  Sheesh!                         mattaku_!                                  really/quite---------------------------------------------------p 275 (59)1Hikaru: [facing the other way, both fists raised]  In an emergency, let's do       suwaa te  gambarou  our best!                       <*>       let's-stand-firm/do-our-best<*Translation note (TS):  "suwaa" is an exclamation meaning "oh, goodness", but here it's drawn out and part of an idiomatic phrase meaning "an emergency".>Kyousuke: [to Madoka, who turns her back on him]  U-uh...                         a ano......2Kyousuke: [embarrassed]  I-I ran into her on the         ko koko ni kuru  tochuu de  way here, so...                    to-come-here  on-the-way                                  Atchatte           sore de...                                  (= Atte-shimatte)  and-so                                     meeting-(finality/regret)Madoka:                               ______       ______  Here's your apron!  You         hai eporon!  #T# shatsu wa  MUkou de  can change into your                apron     T-shirt  (T)  in-opp.-dir.  T-shirt over there.                                  KIgaete                                  be-changing-clothes3[2 guys enter.]Madoka:  Look, customers!  Quit          hora   o-KYAKU-san yo        boyaboya  daydreaming!  Water!            look!  (hon)-customer-(hon)  be-careless  Take an order!!                                  shinai de   o-MIZU       CHUUMON!!                                  do-not-be   (hon)-water  take-orderKyousuke: [hopping into action, still holding his apron]  Y-yes!                          ha_ hai!door FX:                          _____  <rattle>                        karan4[Exterior shot of ABCB.  What's odd is that the menu items have changed from panel 274-1, though it's still the same day.  And it is the same day because the guys who enter ABCB in the previous panel are the same guys in the following panel...]Hikaru: [off]  Please come in!                 irasshai mase--_!menu:  <top> Today's Menu              HONJITSU no #MENU#                                  ro--ekuguin        TEISHOKU                                                     complete-meal  Hell Mountain                   jigoku yama         TEISHOKU                                  hell   mountain                                  <?> <?> shi        TEISHOKU                                  <real messy kanji here>                                  ____  Lum-chan                        ramu-chan          TEISHOKU                                  e <?> sen                                                  ? <the last "n" could be "shi">                                  _______________                                  shubarusshiruto    TEISHOKU                                  ______  Brown <something>               buraun <?> <?>     TEISHOKU                                         <real messy kanji>                                  ______  Godzilla <something>            gojira no  <?> <?>  TEISHOKU                                  Godzilla   <real messy kanji>                                  <lots of messy hiragana> su--pu  TEISHOKU                                                           soup                                  ha--to-- <1-unidentified-hiragana> banaito                                  TEISHOKU                                                     _______  <bottom> ABCB Pub &             #PUB & RESTAURANT# abakabu  Restaurant<Damn.  I suspect this list is peppered with homages to other manga/anime that predate 1984.  Too bad I can't make out a bunch of it...>---------------------------------------------------p 276 (60)1[Hikaru beams and brings the 2 guys their water.]guy #1:                                ____  Oh, are you the waitress        are  kimi  koko no TEN'IN-san?  here?                                you   here 's clerk-(hon)Hikaru:                                                            __  Beginning today, the            KYOU kara        desu  yoroshiku ne!  pleasure is mine!               beginning-today  is    be-pleased2guy #2:                                       ____  The usual stuck-up girl         itsu-mo no  tsun to shita  KO    mo  is pretty, but you're           usually 's  being-prim     girl  also  rather cute, too.                                  BIJIN de  i--   kedo                                  w/beauty  nice  but                                  ____                                  kimi mo  nakanaka  kawaii ne                                  you-too  very      cuteguy #1:                                                         _____  Won't you go out on a date      doo  KONDO           ore to   deeto shinai?  with me next time?              how  next-time/soon  with-me  not-date3Hikaru: [absolutely glowing with the praise]  I'm sorry!                      za--nnen     deshita--_!                                  regrettable  was      !4[She grabs Kyousuke and smiles.]Hikaru:                           _____  Ta-dah!  I have a perfectly     ja--n    atashi ni wa   cha--nto  wonderful boyfriend!            ta-da    for-me    (T)  perfectly                                  ______                                  suteki na KARE      ga   iru  n da mo--n!                                  wonderful-boyfriend (S)  have (is-reason)Kyousuke: [blushing]  J-just a minute,                chi chotto hikaru-chan!  Hikaru-chan!5Kyousuke: [glancing at Madoka, who is behind the counter]  U-uh...  So, what is your       a ano...    de  go-CHUUMON   wa   nanni....  order?                                          (hon)-order (T)   whatKyousuke FX:                      ______  <peek!>                         chira_6[Madoka theatrically whips her head away.]Madoka FX:                        ______  <hmphf>                         tsu--n<i.e.,  FX of primness>7Kyousuke: [gnawing on the serving tray he holds]  Wah...!                         uha~~~~_---------------------------------------------------p 277 (61)1[Exterior shot of the school.]narration:  So...  On the following day.    de----  YOKUJITSU2[Kyousuke enters the classroom.]door FX:                          _____  <rattle!>                       gara_3[Horror paints his face.]Kyousuke FX:                      ____  <shock!>                        gyo_4[We get a view of the chalkboard, upon which facial-caricatures of Hikaru and Kyousuke are drawn under the open "umbrella of love"--standard schoolkid "A loves B" graffiti in Japan...]chalkboard Kyousuke:  I love you!                     AIshite-ru   yo!                                  to-be-lovingchalkboard Hikaru:                                    _______  Oh, I'm so happy, Darling.      maa ureshii     wa  da--rin                                      happy/glad (T)caption:  We.  Happily Married Couple.    boku-tachi     nakayoshi      FUUFU                                  I-(and-group)  bosom-friends  married-coupletwo female classmates: [standing next to the chalkboard]  Tee-hee.                        kusukusu5[Kyousuke jumps when Komatsu puts his hand on his shoulder.  Hatta stands on the other side of Kyousuke.]Komatsu: [enviously]                                                ______  That's sooo nice.  Two          i-- na--    futari    NAKAyoku    runrun  people working in bliss and                 2-people  in-harmony  <*>  harmony.                        _____                                  baito                                  work<Translation note: Komatsu uses the slang term "runrun", from "runrun suru" (verb) = be-on-cloud-9/high/tickled-pink/happy-as-a-lark/in-7th-heaven. "Runrun" = nonsense syllables derived from a TV anime, "Hana no Ko Runrun", circa 1982.>Hatta:  All of a sudden it blows up     tachimachi  hirogaru      kono TE no  into that kind of rumor.        at-once     expand/widen  that-kind-of                                  _____                                  uwasa                                  a-rumor/gossip6Kyousuke: [grabbing Komatsu by the shirt]  Wh-who put that kind of         da dare ga  so-- yu-- koto      o......  thing...                           who (S)  that-kind-of-thing (O)Komatsu:  Hikaru herself!                 hikaru HONNIN!7Kyousuke: [looking very ill]  ..........                      ..........Komatsu: [grinning]                   ____  Oh, you're embarrassed.         o_  tere         yagatte                                  o!  embarrassed  showing-aversion-toHatta: [grinning evilly]  Though you're really            so-- so--    ureshi--         kuse-ni!  <secretly> delighted!                        delighted/happy  even-though8Komatsu: [holding a mock microphone up to Kyousuke's face]  As a husband fresh from a       SHINKON       hoyahoya            no  new marriage, working with      new-marriage  fresh-from-the-oven 's  your wife will no doubt         _____  grant you joy, right?           danna-san to shite wa   okusan to                                  as-one's-husband   (T)  w/married-lady                                  HATARAkete  sazo      kashi       TANOshii                                  working     no-doubt  grant/give  joyful                                  koto    mo   aru    deshou   ne--    _                                  things  too  exist  poss-be  (right?)!Kyousuke: [embarrassed]  W-well, that...                 ma maa sorya...---------------------------------------------------p 278 (62)1[Madoka enters to find Komatsu still sticking the mock microphone into Kyousuke's face.]door FX:                          _____  <rattle!>                       gara_2[Kyousuke erases the board and thinks black thoughts.  Madoka walks past him and ignores him.]Madoka FX:                        ______  <FX of steady steps>            ko_ko_3[Exterior shot of ABCB.]4Kyousuke: [pulling on his shirt]  ___  My modest wish was to have      ore wa  AYUKAWA to  futari dake de  some quiet time alone with      I  (T)  w/Ayukawa   just-2-people  Ayukawa, but this...                                  hissori to    tsutsumashiku  yatte-ku                                  w/quiet       modestly       doing                                  tsumori       datta  noni      kore ja....                                  an-intention  was    although  this(one)5narration:  I'd better apologize to         AYUKAWA ni   ayamaranakya         na!  Ayukawa!                               (IO)  (= ayamaranakereba)                                                  if-not-apologize-to6[Madoka enters the changing room as he's pulling on his T-shirt.]door FX:                          _____  <clatter>                       bara_<FX of opening an accordion-door>---------------------------------------------------p 279 (63)1[She goes to her locker...]narration:  All right, say it!!             yoshi      yu--    zo!                                  all-right  to-say  (strong-emph)2[...and starts removing her cloth-bandage sling.]sling FX:                         ____  <shhhh>                         shu_<FX of cloth pulled against cloth>3[Kyousuke's pov as Madoka turns to give him an angry glare.]4Madoka:  What?  You want to watch?       nani?  mitai       no  <i.e., watch her undress>       what   want-to-seeKyousuke:  WHA                             na5Kyousuke: [sweating]                                       ___  Y-you're mistaken...  I...      chi chigau yo..........  ore......narration:  Apologize, Kyousuke!            ayamaru n da KYOUSUKE!6[View of Madoka as she looks on.]Kyousuke: [off]  I let this sort of thing        konna koto          ni   narou     to...  become...                       this-kind-of-thing (IO)  let-become7Kyousuke: [jumping in surprise]  WAH                             waHikaru: [off]  WELCOME, EVERYONE!              DANTAI-SAMA  irassha~~i                                  group-(hon)---------------------------------------------------p 280 (64)1[A group of guys--Kyousuke's/Madoka's classmates--enters.  Hikaru greets them with a radiant smile.  The guys check the place out.]Komatsu:                                                 ____  My, isn't this a pretty         he---_   nakanaka      naui  MISE  jan  cool place.                     indeed!  quite/pretty "now"  shop  isn't-it                                                         old-US-slang-(cool)mob of guys FX:  <troop troop>                   zorozoro                                  in-succession/one-after-anotherHikaru:  Please come in!                 rasshai mase---_2Kyousuke:  Komatsu...  You guys...         KOMATSU...  omaera..........Komatsu:  Yes, we've come!                hai irashai mashita!3Komatsu:  What?!  To thank us for         e_!   ASObi ni kite-kureta  dropping by today you're              came-for-a-visit-(favor-to-self)  going to pick up the tab?!                                  o-REI          ni   KYOU  wa                                  (hon)-thanks  (IO)  today (T)                                  KASUGA ga  ogoru     tte?!                                  you   (S)  to-treatKyousuke: [livid]  Not!                            ittemasen!  <lit., "I didn't say that!">narration:  You're the worst!               SAIAKU!4Hikaru: [smiling winningly, and offering a menu]  Your order?                     go-CHUUMON        wa?                                  (hon)-take-orderHikaru FX:                        _____  <smile!>                        niko_5[The guys look back, wide-eyed.]Hatta:                               _  ___  __________  Oh, I-I <something>             a  o  ore  shimbi--no                                        I    ??????????<"shimbi" is "aesthetic", but I don't know if it has anything to do with this...  It's gotta be something free.  Table centerpiece?>Komatsu:  ...Six glasses of your          ..........ROKKOU         no  oishii MIZU  best tasty water.                         6-first-class  's  tasty-water6Hikaru:  Very well, sir!                 kashikomari mashita!                                  _______  __________  Darling, <something> and        da--rin  shimbi--no  ni   ROKKOU        no  six glasses of our best                  ?????????? (IO)  6-first-class 's  tasty water...!                                  oishii MIZU  ni..........!                                  tasty-water (IO)Kyousuke: [turning]  Y-yes!                          ha hai_!---------------------------------------------------p 281 (65)1Komatsu: [reaching out to snag Kyousuke by the hair]  J-just a minute, Kasuga.        chi chotto KASUGA  That girl is really Hikaru?!    ano KO     HONTOU ni  hikaru  ka yo!                                  that-girl  really            (?)Kyousuke:  Y-yeah!                         u un_!grab FX:  <yank!>                         gui_2[Hatta grabs Kyousuke in a headlock.]Komatsu: [looking off to the side]  Such a...uh, she's quite        nan-ka...   un  kekko-- kawaii n da na  cute.                           somewhat    uh  quite-cute     (explan)Hatta:                            ___  I thought she was more of       ore mo   motto  FURYOU-ppoi      KO  a delinquent girl, too.         I   too  more   delinquent-like  girl  But anyhow, you orange-         ka to OMOtte-ta    kedo    kono--  colored detestable guy!         was-thinking-that  but     anyhow?                                  ______                                  orenji IRO no   nikui   yatsu!                                  orange-colored  detestable/abominable                                                          guy/fellow<Commentary (SH): Orange used in this context connotes the fact that while Kyousuke can look like one thing (very presentable) he is actually the boyfriend of someone with a delinquent reputation.>3[Sideview of Madoka who still stands back in the changing room, peering out at the action.]Hatta: [off]  She's so very different         AYUKAWA to   wa   DAI-chigai  da na~~~_  from Ayukawa...!                from-Ayukawa (T)  great-difference                                                                be4[Madoka's eyes drop.]5Komatsu: [elbowing Kyousuke, who tumbles back into Hikaru]  You jerk!  How far have         koitsu!    okusan to      wa  you gone with your wife...?!    this-jerk  w/married-lady (T)                                  doko made        itta  n da~~~~_?!                                  as-far-as-where  went  (explan)!Komatsu:  WAH HA HA!                      wa_ ha haKyousuke: [blushing furiously]  H-hold on.                      chi chottoHikaru: [in glee]                 ______  Kyaa!                           kya--_  Wife, even!                     okusan datte!---------------------------------------------------p 282 (66)1[A stark shot from behind of Madoka leaving via the front door.]door FX:                          _____  <rattle>                        karan2Komatsu: [looking past Kyousuke's shoulder]  Huh, wasn't that Ayukawa        are   ima  DEte itta no  AYUKAWA ja nai  who just left?                        now  was-emerging          isn't3[Kyousuke looks at the door.]Hatta: [off]  What are you saying?!           nani itte    n da yo                                  what saying  (explan/emph)  Why would she be in this        nan-de  aitsu       ga  sort of place?                  why     that-person (S)                                  konna tokoro ni        iru    n da yo                                  in-this-kind-of-place  be-locatedKomatsu: [off]  Yeah, that's true.              sore mo         so-- da na                                  that(one)-also  be-like-that4[Kyousuke runs to the door.]Kyousuke FX:                      ___  <step!>                         da_Komatsu: [shouting, grinning]  Hey, Kyousuke!  "Where y'all    are_ KYOUSUKE  doko  sa  iku    da~~_!!  goin'...?!!"                                   where     to-go  beHikaru: [chiming in]  ..."Dear"...!                   a  na  ta~~~!<Translation note: Komatsu calls out to Kyousuke in a country-bumpkin dialect, perhaps to evoke the image of toiling husband-and-wife peasants.  I dunno. In any case, it is clearly designed to cause Kyousuke some embarrassment.>5[Kyousuke bursts out the front door...]narration:  Ayukawa...                      AYUKAWA----door FX:                          _____  <rattle>                        karan6[...and pitches over.]Kyousuke:  OOPS!                           to_                                  (short for "ottotto")---------------------------------------------------p 283 (67)1Kyousuke: [practicing for his future leaps off much taller stairs...]  Ouch!                           are_!impact FX:                        ___  <thud!>                         do_2Kyousuke:  Wha...                          na...3[View of a strip of cloth tied from post to post across the front entrance.]4Kyousuke:  Bandage...                      HOUTAI...5Madoka: [standing leisurely next to the entrance]  My goodness!  Where are you     oya   dochira  made?  headed?                               where    as-far-as[Kyousuke is still on his knees.]6Kyousuke:  Is your arm okay?               UDE  naotta no                                  arm  cured7Madoka: [...but not looking thankful]  Thanks to you!                  okage-sama de ne!                                  thanks-to-(someone)---------------------------------------------------p 284 (68)1[Madoka portrait--irritation]2Madoka:[turning away in a hissy-fit]  So, you have some kind of       sore de  nani-ka       YOU  errand or something?            and-so   some-kind-of  errand/business                                  demo?                                  or-something3narration:  In this situation, whatever     kono BA        wa   tonikaku  happens, be careful...          this-situation (T)  at-any-rate                                  OMBIN ni----                                  carefully/privatelyKyousuke: [forcing a smile]  What's going on?  Some kind     nan da yo--    konna         itazura  of practical joke?                             this-kind-of  practical-joke                                  nan-ka    shite                                  somewhat  doing4[Madoka gets set to rip into him verbally.  Kyousuke imitates a deer caught in the headlights...]Madoka:  Look who's talking!  To         yoku  yu-- yo!      daitai  begin with, Kasuga-kun...       look-who's-talking  to-begin-with                                  KASUGA-kun ga...5[Shot of Madoka as she stops at the voice of...]Kid: [off]                                                          ____  AHA!  This is her, mama!        a--_   kono one--chan     da yo-- mama!                                     !   this "big-sister"  be6Mother:  My son told me about the        MUSUKO ga  KURUMA ni   hikare  time you saved him from         son   (S)  van   (IO)  <hikaeru>keep-  that van.                                              (someone)-from-doing                                  sou ni       natta   tokoro    o                                  I-hear-that  became  occasion (O)                                  TASUkete-itadaita                                  helped-(receive-favor)  Because of that I want to       sou de        doumo arigatou gozaimashita  thank you so much.              because-of-thatMadoka:  Oh, no!  That...                a     ie  sonna...                                  oh!   no  that-kind-of7[Madoka pats the boy on his head.  The boy reacts like any male would in that situation--smiling like a happy puppy.  Kyousuke and the mother look on, both smiling as well.]---------------------------------------------------p 285 (69)1[Kyousuke facial portrait--in thought]narration:  Oh, so that's how she           nan da       UDE no kega  tte  injured her arm.                what's-that  arm's-injury (T)                                  so-- yu-- koto      datta no ka                                  that-kind-of-thing  was2[Kyousuke watches the 3 in conversation.  The little boy's attention is on Kyousuke, however.]narration:  Ayukawa...!                     AYUKAWA----!3Kid:  Say, oneechan.  You and         nee  one--chan-tachi           tte  he are...                       say           (-and-associate) (T)4Kid:  ...sweethearts, right?          KOIBITO-DOUSHI             nan   desho                                  sweethearts-of-each-other  what  poss-be[Kyousuke and Madoka both blush.]5Kid: [waving as he leaves with mom]  You're a perfect match...!      nakanaka  oniai                da yo--_                                  very      love/kindness-&-affection                                                                 be     !Mother:  Oh!  What this kid will         maa  kono KO     ttara  say.                            oh!  this-child  (= ittara)                                                      when-say6[Kyousuke and Madoka wave good-bye.]---------------------------------------------------p 286 (70)1Madoka: [bending to untie the bandage booby-trap]  Well, that was a surprise.      saa   TSUKANU KOTO      shiyo--   yo                                  well  something-sudden  shall-do2[She fixes the "open" sign attached by suction-cup to the door.  Kyousuke stands behind her and watches.]sign FX:                          ___  <squeak!>                       gi_3[Madoka facial portrait--sweet sadness, pensive...]4[Kyousuke facial portrait--pensive too, but also a bit resolute...]5[He grabs Madoka by her left wrist and pulls hard.]Madoka:  Ah!  Ow!                        a itai!grab FX:  <yank>                          gui6Madoka: [mad, holding her wrist]  Wh-what did you suddenly        na nani  sun no yo ikinari!  do that for?!                      what            all-of-a-sudden7Kyousuke: [small smile]  If it still hurts, then         itai tte  koto   wa  KYOU   ippai wa  for the rest of the day         sore      thing (T)  today  the-whole  you're still on the disabled           ____  list.                           mada   kega HITO       da ne                                  still  injured-person  beMadoka: [flinching away]          ___  Don't lie.  It's fully          uso   chanto  naotte-ru   wa yo_!  healed!                         lie   fully   be-healing  Anyone gripped that strongly    DARE datte  sonna         ni   TSUYOku  would hurt...                   who  even   that-kind-of (IO)  strongly                                  nigirarereba   itai ni......                                  if-be-gripped  sore---------------------------------------------------p 287 (71)1Kyousuke: [turning his back on her]  Once in a while, it's           tama ni            wa  i--   daro  okay to do stuff like           on-rare-occasions (T)  okay  poss-be  this, too.                                  ko-- yu--     no mo                                  this-kind-of     too[He flips the "open" sign to "closed"]sign FX:                          _____  <bang>                          patanMadoka:  H-hold on, Kasuga-kun!          chi chotto KASUGA-kun!2Kyousuke: [removing his ABCB apron]  Now...                          sate to                                  now/wellKyousuke:  I think that getting            CHIRYOU            ni wa  you medical treatment is        medical-treatment (IO)(T)  the best thing to do!                                  kore       ga   ICHIBAN  da  to OMOimasu!                                  this-(one) (S)  best/#1  be  think-that<Translation note: His lines are split into 2 speech bubbles, but combined here in this script--i.e., you aren't missing a translated line...>3[He takes her by the left wrist again, and makes to walk off.  Madoka is pleasantly surprised.]4[Tight shot of their hands clasped together.]Kyousuke: [off]                   ________  ESCAPE!                         esukeipu!sign on door:  Closed in Preparation           JUMBI        -CHUU       #CLOSED#                                  preparations  thruout4 (inset)[Hikaru entertains the boys in conversation.]Komatsu:                                 ___  Wow, now I have a better        iya--  ore  hikaru-chan no koto  opinion of you.                        I    of-you                                  minaoshita               yo                                  had-a-better-opinion-of  (mild-emph)Hikaru:                                  _____  Is that so...  A-ha-ha!         soo--  ahaha---------------------------------------------------