Kimagure Orange Road"Jealousy with a Beat!"Volume 4, Story 1WB Volume 2, Story 11Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation by Craig H. NishidaCompilation by Spencer C. HastingsEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Mitch McGlothlin Peter Norby Andrew Wilson Tony Schrick Gary KacmarcikLast revision : 9-19-94NOTE: [WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()]NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga. So there may be a fewextra's to those of you not having them.Example: (The subtitles on page 223 (7) are only in the WB'S!)---------------------------------------------------p 223 (7)[Madoka sits at drums, decked out in a minidress.]MAIN-TITLE (at top) ______ Jealousy with a Beat! bi--to de SHITTO! with-a-beat jealousy/envySUB-TITLE (at bottom) If You Are the Drumbeat WATASHI no MUNE ni of Love Echoing in My my-mind/heart/feelings/chest (IO) Heart, Then My Heart Wants to Be Rocked! NAri-hibiku reverberate/echo/resound ______ KOI no doramu ga anata nara love's-drum (S) if-you-are ______ _____ ha--to o rokku saretai no! heart (O) want-to-be-rocked---------------------------------------------------p 224 (8)1[Interior shot of the "Mersey Beat" nightclub sign.]narration: _____ _______ I came with Hikaru-chan to hikaru-chan to raibu - supotto ni this "live spot"* and was w/Hikaru to-live-spot (IO) surprised! _______ kite bikkuri! coming surprised/amazed There, performing onstage soko ni SHUTSUEN with the band... in-there one's-appearance-onstage _____ shite-ru bando ni---- be-doing in-band<*i.e., nightclub/theatre featuring live music.> rock FX: ________ gyuiiiin2[View from behind of Madoka at keyboards. Splashed down the right side of panels 2-5 is a sideview of Madoka standing at keyboards.]3[Kyousuke & Hikaru watch from the back of the audience.]narration: ...is AYUKAWA...! nan-to AYUKAWA ga iru nan-te---- how! (S) be-there etc.4[Closer view of a dumbfounded Kyousuke.]narration: ________ And beside her onstage is shikamo sute--ji de that man...! furthermore on-stage AYUKAWA no WAKI ni iru no wa ano OTOKO----! at-her-side be that-man5[Shuu plays the guitar.]---------------------------------------------------p 225 (9)1[Panels 1-3 show various views of Madoka performing onstage.]narration: But almost making me demo sonna koto o forget even that... but that-kind-of-thing (O) WASUrete-shimau kurai ni forget-(finality/regret) about2narration: ...is the way Ayukawa looks KON'YA no AYUKAWA wa---- tonight... tonight's-Ayukawa (T)3[Closer view of Madoka.]4[Kyousuke's attention is diverted by the sight of vocalist Yukari.]5[Yukari sings.]6[Kyousuke's pov of Yukari as she seemingly winks at us.]narration: ________ That female vocalist is ano bo--kari no one--san mo also quite... that vocalist 's lady/sister also nakanaka---- rather/quite Ah! Was that wink just a IMA no uinku moshi-ka-shite ore ni?! now aimed at me?! oh now 's wink is-it-being at-me---------------------------------------------------p 226 (10)1[Hikaru stares at a flustered Kyousuke as he sneaks a peek back at her.]Kyousuke FX: ha_ ji2[Kyousuke thumps himself on the head. Hikaru puts finger to pursed lips in wonder.]narration: What am I thinking at a konna TOKI ni nani o time like this?! at-a-time-like-this what (O) ___ KANGAete-ru n da ore wa be-imagining (explan) I (T)Kyousuke FX: ______ (thump!> gotsu_ thump-a-head3[Onstage, Shuu leans in close to Madoka, and they exchange looks.]4narration: On top of it all, that sore ni shite mo aitsu---- guy...! but/still/for-all-that that-guy5[Exterior shot of the "Mersey Beat" nightclub.]Hikaru: [off] Say, Sempai. nee SEMPAI6[Hikaru and Kyousuke stand on the sidewalk.]Hikaru: ______ That man with the glasses ano megane no HITO ENSOU-CHUU zutto was only looking at that-man-of-glasses during-entire- Madoka-san during the performance entire performance, right? madoka-san no ho-- bakkari Madoka's-direction only mite-mashita nee was-looking (right?)Kyousuke FX: _____ giku_[Kyousuke stands with his back to Hikaru; his eyes are bugged out.]7Hikaru: And Madoka-san doesn't seem madoka-san mo manzara ja entirely unlikely... too be-not-entirely nasaso-- datta shi seemed-unlikely and-besidesKyousuke FX: _____ giku_---------------------------------------------------p 227 (11)1Hikaru: Gee! Perhaps those two korya hyotto-shite futari wa are... by-some-chance 2-people (T)2narration: All right! First things yoshi! koko no tokoro wa hitomazu---- first... here 's occasion (T) for-the- present3Kyousuke FX: __________ kyorokyoronarration: A clock... Nope, none! TOKEI wa---- nai na! clock (T)4Kyousuke: Shall we go home soon? sorosoro KAEro-- ka soon let's-go-home (?)sign: Aloeswood Perfumery kyaraHikaru: Eh?! e?!5Hikaru: [looking at her watch] So soon...? sorosoro tte mada...... soon (T) yet6[Kyousuke flashes with the Power.]7[View of Hikaru's watch--it reads 7:30.]8watch FX: ___ pa_[Now it reads 9:00.]9Hikaru: What?! Oh no! Look at the are--_ ikenai mo-- konna JIKAN da!! time!! bad already this-kind-of-time beKyousuke: [hands behind head and smiling] Yup! ne_---------------------------------------------------p 228 (12)1Hikaru: That's strange. Just a okashi-- na sakki mita TOKI wa while ago I checked and strange a-little-while-ago (T) it was just past 7. saw time mada #7# -JI sugi datta noni just-past-7 was althoughKyousuke: Time flies when you're TANOshii TOKI wa HAYAku tatsu mon sa! having fun!! pleasant-time (T) quickly-elapse reason!!2[Kyousuke waves goodbye to Hikaru, who stands stunned, waving back...]narration: So, with that, I somehow to yu-- wake de nan toka managed to send Hikaru-chan for-that-reason manage-somehow home... hikaru-chan o KAEshite---- sending-Hikaru-back-homeHikaru: (..........) (..........)Kyousuke: (I'm sorry, Hikaru-chan.) (gomen ne hikaru-chan)3[View of Kyousuke's foot.]4[Same panel art as 226-3; overlaid on it are 3 flash speech bubbles.]Flash #1: ______ That man with the glasses ano megane no HITO ENSOU-CHUU zutto was only looking at that-man-of-glasses during-entire- Madoka-san during the performance entire performance, right? madoka-san no ho-- bakkari Madoka's-direction only mite-mashita nee was-looking (right?)Flash #2: And Madoka-san doesn't seem madoka-san mo manzara ja entirely unlikely... too be-not-entirely nasaso-- datta shi seemed-unlikely and-besidesFlash #3: Gee! Perhaps those two korya hyotto-shite futari wa are... by-some-chance 2-people (T)5[Tight shot of Kyousuke's fist.]fist FX: gu_6[He runs off.]narration: _____ _______ I'll try going to that mo-- ichido raibu - supotto ni "live spot" one more time! once-again to-live-spot itte-miyou! shall-try-going7Mrs. Hiyama: [at sink, back to us] My, you're back early this are KON'YA wa HAYAi no ne evening. this-evening (T) early beHikaru: [looking from wall clock--which reads 7:45--to wristwatch] Eh? What! e? are_---------------------------------------------------p 229 (13)1[Exterior shot of sidewalk outside nightclub. The bass player and drummer leave.]bass player: What a tiring day. o-tsukare-sa--n fatigue-(hon)drummer : Weeellll, after that, how sa--te _YA_tta ato wa about a drink? now/well <*>performed time-after (T) ippai YAru ka one-cup to-do (?)<*kanji = ENSOU = musical-performance, though the furigana makes it out to be YAtta = did>2bass player: [thumping Mitsuru on the head] Hey Mitsuru, you blew it mitsuru omae tochittaro at the end you (= tochite-itta ro) performance>! had-made-a-blunder/miss- a-line-(on-stage/also- refer-to-lyrics/music) SAIGO! the-conclusionMitsuru: Ah, I did...?! a wakatta~~~~?!3Yukari: [looking off to the side] What? ara?4[It's Kyousuke.]5Yukari: [pointing at him] Aren't you the kid who anata TASHIka was watching from the you if-remember-correctly back? ushiro no HOU de from-direction-of-area-behind mite-ta KO desho was-watching child poss.-beKyousuke: _____ (I wonder if that wink (yappari sakki no uinku awhile ago was aimed at after-all wink-of-a-little-while-ago me after all?) ___ ore ni datta no ka na?) at-me was I-wonder6Kyousuke: Uh... Ayukawa... I mean... ano-- AYUKAWA...iya AYUKAWA-kun wa? Where's Ayukawa-kun?7[His pov as Yukari looks at him.]---------------------------------------------------p 230 (14)1[Kyousuke looks back at her.]2Yukari: If you're referring to that ano KO nara girl... that-girl if-it-is3Yukari: ...she's still with Shuuichi mada SHUUICHI to o-MISE no ho-- inside. still with-Shuu store's-direction da kedo be howevernarration: Shuuichi...?! SHUUICHI----?!4[Kyousuke visualizes Shuu.]narration: That guy...?! aitsu no koto ka----?!5Yukari: I wonder what they're doing? nani yatte n no kashira nee what doing I-wonder (hmm?) Surely they're doing kitto futari de ENSOU yori something more fun than surely 2-people than-musical-perf. playing music. mo TANOshii koto shite-ru n ja nai? too cheerful-things be-doing be-not6Kyousuke: [horrified] (More fun than playing (ENSOU yori mo TANOshii koto?!) music?!)Kyousuke FX: _____ giku_7Kyousuke: [walking into the club] Th-thanks! do do--mo!---------------------------------------------------p 231 (15)1[View of Yukari.]2[Kyousuke races down the stairs.]Kyousuke FX: ___ ka_3Kyousuke: (C-can't be... The two of (ma masaka...... futari ga them are in that sort of impossible 2-people (S) relationship?!) sonna NAKA da nan-te!) be-that-kind-of-relationship etc.4Kyousuke FX: ___ ka_5[Kyousuke comes to a full stop in the hallway as he hears...]Shuu: [off] ____ Kissing fine? kisu shite ii?Madoka: [off] But... It's still much demo... mada HAYA-sugiru wa too quick. but still overly-quickKyousuke FX: _____ giku_6narration: Their voices...?! AYUKAWA-tachi no KOE---?! (+ group) 's voices7[He sneaks a peek around the corner.]narration: Wh-what? na nani o---------------------------------------------------p 232 (16)1[They sit on opposite sides of a table. Shuu has a guitar in hand.]Shuu: ____ "I want to hold you to my kimi o omoikkiri heart's content!" you (O) to-one's-heart's-content/ resolution/decision/resignation DAkishimetai_! want-to-embrace/hold About like this? kono kurai? this aboutMadoka: _____ Right! That tempo seems so-- so-- sono tempo ga cho--do just fine. that-tempo (S) exactly/just i-- mitai fine/good seem-like[Kyousuke does a pratfall.]Kyousuke FX: ____ zuru2Kyousuke: [letting out a puff of air] (Wh-what's this? They're (na na--n da KYOKU no UchiAwase kaa) working on a song?) what's-this music's-consultation (?)Kyousuke FX: ___ ho_3[Shuu blinks in surprise.]4Shuu: Who are you? DARE?5Madoka: Kasuga-kun?! KASUGA-kun?!poster: 6Kyousuke: [embarrassed] ...good evening. ......komban wa---------------------------------------------------p 233 (17)1[They all gather outside on the sidewalk.]Madoka: ____________ Oh! This is my classmate, a_ kochira kurasume--to no Kasuga-kun. oh! this-person classmate KASUGA-kun2Shuu: [beaming] ___ Pleased to meet you. I'm yoroshiku ore SAWADA SHUUICHI! Shuuichi Sawada! favorably I3Kyousuke: [glaring] .......... ..........4Kyousuke: [giving him the evil eye] ...pleased to meet you! ..........yoroshiku!hand clasp FX: ____ gyu_[Shuu sweats and stares at their handclasp.]5Yukari: [hand on Kyousuke's shoulder] I know... so-- da We're finished here, but atashi-tachi kore kara if you want, why don't we since-this(one) you come with us? Uchiage da kedo finished-(performance) but yokattara anata mo issho ni konai? if-okay you-too together not-come6Shuu: ______ Yukari, are you inviting a yukari MISEINEN o o-SAKE ni minor to go drinking? minor (O) liquor (IO) sasou no ka? inviting (?)Yukari: Why, it's the same thing ara dattara AYUKAWA-san datte for Ayukawa-san, isn't it? if-be even ONNAji ja nai? same is-not7Shuu: Well, yeah, but... sorya so-- da kedo... that-(one) be-true butShuu FX: kusu_---------------------------------------------------p 234 (18)1Shuu: ____ But you sure don't look demo kimi totemo AYUKAWA-kun to to be the same age as but you very w/Ayukawa Ayukawa-kun. ONAJiDOSHI ni wa mienai ne of-same-age (T) not-appear-to-beKyousuke FX: ______ kachin!2Kyousuke: (S-so irritating!) (ni NIKUtarashi-- ya_!) provokingly3Yukari: [grabbing Kyousuke by the arm] Well, let's go! sa ikimasho!Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____ doki_4[Kyousuke sneaks a look back at Madoka, who walks beside Shuu.]Kyousuke FX: ______ chira_5[His pov of Madoka and Shuu.]6[Overhead view of the sidewalk as the 6 walk along.]narration: Somehow, things have gotten nan-da-ka HEN na koto ni strange... somehow strange thing (IO) natchatta naa--- (= natte-shimatta) became-(finality)---------------------------------------------------p 235 (19)1[Exterior shot of the "Weekend Shuffle" bar.]2[Interior shot of patrons sitting at a table.]3[View of Madoka sitting next to Shuu.]4[View of Kyousuke.]5Yukari: [off] Hmm... So you're he-- KYOUSUKE-kun tte yu-- no? Kyousuke-kun, eh? say-that6[Kyousuke turns and we see he's sitting next to Yukari, who sips at her drink.]---------------------------------------------------p 236 (20)1Yukari: A fine name. i-- NAMAE ne fine name2Yukari: Do you have a girlfriend? KANOJO iru no? girlfriend to-have/there-is3Kyousuke: Eh! e_[In the background, we see that Madoka's attention has sharply shifted over to Yukari and Kyousuke's conversation.]4[Kyousuke glances tentatively at Madoka.]Kyousuke FX: ______ chira_5[His pov of Madoka--she gives him a slightly unhappy look...]6[...and turns back to her conversation with Shuu.]Kyousuke: N-no. i ie7Yukari: I wonder if I'm a little atashi ja chotto one--san too old for you? I a-little lady/big-sister sugiru ka na? too-old I-wonderKyousuke: Eh?! e?!8Yukari: [playfully coming close and touching a fingertip to his nose] That's because you seem datte KYOUSUKE-kun tte oto--to like a younger brother and the-reason-is (T) younger-brother that's cute. ______ mitai de kawaii n da mon seems-like cute (the-reason-is)Kyousuke: [blushing fiercely] __ ______ C-cute?! ka kawaii?!9[Madoka sips at her drink and looks on with some distress.]---------------------------------------------------p 237 (21)1Shuu: [off] ...not join? ..........ranai?Madoka: [turning back to face him] What? e2Shuu: [leaning close and putting his hand on Madoka's shoulder] So--as I was saying--why dakara sa omae kono sai don't you just officially (slight-exasperation) you at-this-time join the band already? _____ _______ bando ni SEISHIKI memba-- band (IO) official-member to shite hairanai? in-the-capacity-of not-join3[Kyousuke's pov and closeup of Shuu's hand on Madoka's "infinitely sweet and soft" shoulder...]4[Kyousuke is livid.]narration: Th-that jerk! a ano yarou!Kyousuke: _ ___ (E-even I haven't held o ore datte mada KATA her shoulder yet!) I even yet shoulder nan-ka daita koto nai zo!) somewhat embraced thing not !!5Shuu: ___ If you join, I'm sure we omae ga haireba kitto ore-tachi could turn professional! you (S) if-join surely we ____ puro ni nare-ru ze "pro" (IO) could-become !6[Kyousuke stands.]Kyousuke FX: _____ gatannarration: No more ! mo-- yurusan_! any-more not-forgive7[View of the bass player and drummer, looking on at something in amazement.]Voice: [off] ___ Take that!! upu_!! FX: [off] ___ ___ pa_ ya_---------------------------------------------------p 238 (22)1[Yukari stands, having just emptied her drink in Shuu's face. Kyousuke and Madoka look on in amazement.]2[Kyousuke facial portrait--astonishment.]3[Madoka facial portrait--astonishment.]4[Yukari turns and leaves.]Shuu: ______ Yukari!! yukari!!Yukari FX: ___ ___ ka_ ka_5[Yukari stops to talk to the bar's "Master".]Yukari: ________ Master, that guy looks like masuta-- kono HITO nomi-ppuri i-- he's drinking pretty well, Master this-person drinking-well so toss him another one. mitai da kara okawari seems-like that's-why 2nd-helping ageto ite ne being-given6Yukari: Farewell, Shuu-chan! sayonara SHUU-chan!Kyousuke: ______ Yukari-san?! yukari-san?!7[Shuu bursts past Kyousuke, in pursuit of Yukari.]Kyousuke: ?! ?!FX: ___ donShuu: ______ Wait, Yukari!! MAte yo yukari!!---------------------------------------------------p 239 (23)1-2[Shuu chases and catches Yukari by the wrist outside on the sidewalk.]3[They stand and exchange words.]sign #1: ____ Pub pabusign #2: __ Dilemma jiremma4[Kyousuke stands just outside the bar, and makes to walk toward the arguing pair.]narration: What in the world is nan da ittai do-- natte n da happening? what-in-the-world-is what becomingKyousuke: U-uh, excuse me. a ano chotto5[Closeup of someone grabbing Kyousuke by the wrist.]6Kyousuke: Ayukawa...! AYUKAWA......!7[Madoka shakes her head.]8Kyousuke: B-but... de demo......Madoka: Leave them alone. hottoki nasai yo (= houtte-oku) (command) leave-(them)-alone-(for-future-purpose) It's because they're ano futari KOIBITO DOUSHI sweethearts. those-two sweetheart-companions nan da kara that's-why---------------------------------------------------p 240 (24)1Kyousuke: Eh?! e_?!2Madoka: It's just that they've been tada SAIKIN chotto kenka fighting recently, and merely most-recent little-quarrel things aren't going so well. CHUU de umaku-itte nai dake yo average not-going-as-well (emph)3[This makes Kyousuke angry.]4[Shot of the bar's door.]Kyousuke: [off] But that guy was staring demo aitsu AYUKAWA no koto at you during the musical but that-person performance, and just a little while ago... ENSOU-CHUU mo during-musical-performance too jitto mitsumete-ta shi was-staring-at and-besides sakki datte.......... a-little-while-ago too5[Kyousuke facial portrait--slight embarrassment.]6[Madoka facial portrait--wide-eyed.]7Madoka: Shuu-chan and me?! atashi to SHUU-chan ga?!---------------------------------------------------p 241 (25)1Madoka: _______ That's the funniest thing sono JOUDAN saiko-- ne~~~_ I ever heard! that joke supremeMadoka: A-ha-ha!2Madoka: [regaining her composure] He frequently looked my way ENSOU-CHUU ni yoku kotchi o during the performance during-musical-performance often-this-way because I haven't learned the music by heart yet, MUite-ta no wa atashi ga so he was signaling me with being-turned-towards (T) I (S) his eyes. mada yoku KYOKU o yet fully music (O) oboete nai kara not-learning-by-heart that's-why ME de AIZU shite kurete-ta no yo with-eyes signaling was-giving3Madoka: First of all, Shuu-chan is daiichi atashi to SHUU-chan wa my first cousin. the-first w/me (T) itoko DOUSHI na no yo 1st-cousin-companion It's not _that_ kind of sonna NAKA ja nai wa yo! relationship! that-kind-of-relationship be-not4[Kyousuke's eyes bug out.]5Kyousuke: First cousin?! i - to - ko ?!6Kyousuke: [relieved] (O-oohhh... So that's why! (na naan da so-- datta no ka! No wonder they were what-is that-way was addressing each other so informally!) DOURI de SHITAshige na reason according-to familiarly KUCHI kiite-ta wake da!) was-hearing-from-mouth is-reason7Kyousuke: [turning to look at Shuu and Yukari] Huh! are_---------------------------------------------------p 242 (26)1[Their pov of Shuu and Yukari, hugging.]2Yukari: I'm sorry for wanting to gomen nasai I slap you... I'm-sorry intention/thought/desire/heart hatte... slappingShuu: ___ _____ I have indeed had my entire ore koso bando no koto de mind on the band... I indeed on-the-band ATAMA ippai de... head/mind the-whole in/at ...and not spent much amari kamatte yarenakute gomen na attention on you. I'm so-much not-have-done sorry. taking-notice-of I'm-sorry3[View of Madoka and Kyousuke looking on.]Kyousuke FX: ____ gowa.... (gowagowa = be-stiff/starchy)4Madoka: Look! They say that even hora ne FUUFU genka wa a dog will turn up its nose look! quarrel-betw.-husband-&-wife at a quarrel between a husband and wife. INU mo kuwanai even-a-dog not-eat/feed-on tte yu-- desho to-say-that poss.-be5[Madoka puts her hands on hips, and looks at him out of the corner of her eye.]Madoka: ______ But just now, you didn't demo sakki wa yukari-san ni seem altogether unhappy but a-little-while-ago (IO) being chased by Yukari-san. semararete manzara demo nakatta being-chased was-not-altogether-bad mitai ne seeming-likeKyousuke FX: _____ zuki_ zukizuki = smart-w/pain6Kyousuke: [calmly slinging back mud] Yeah? Well, you seemed so-- yu-- AYUKAWA datte like you were having a that-kind-of even-if-it-is pretty good time talking with that guy. aitsu to shabette-ru TOKI w/that-person be-talking time kekko-- TANOshi sou datta yo quite-cheerful/merry was-like-that---------------------------------------------------p 243 (27)1[Madoka facial portrait--GLARE!]Madoka FX: ______ kachin!! (i.e., FX of getting ticked off)2Kyousuke: College women are seductive JOSHI DAI SEI tte IROppoku tte and very nice. women college-students (T) seductively nakanaka i-- mon da naa very/quite fine/nice persons beMadoka: But such a woman wouldn't demo sonna HITO wa HONKI de seriously want a little boy but that-kind-of-person in-seriousness for a companion. ______ bo--ya nan-ka AITE ni little-boy somewhat companion (IO) shinai wa yo not-do3[They square off and give each other evil eyes.]glare FX: _____ muka_ irritated/vexed4bass player: [looking on] We were a bit concerned aitsura sakki kara about what those people those-people a-little-while-ago from were doing, and now look at them... HOKA de nani yatte-ru ka to OMOeba outside what-are-doing if-at-same-timeMitsuru: Oh boy! oya maa5[View over the shoulders of the bass player and drummer. Shuu and Yukari continue to hug. Kyousuke and Madoka yell at each other. In insets, we see closeups of Kyousuke and Madoka, in their screaming rage.]Bass player/Mitsuru: What's going on? do-- natte n no? what becoming---------------------------------------------------