Kimagure Orange Road"The Thrilling Amusement Park!"Volume 3, Story 8WB Volume 2, Story 9Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation by Craig H. NishidaCompilation by Spencer C. HastingsEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose                                 Craig Nishida                                 Spencer Hastings                                 Peter NorbyLast revision : 9-19-94NOTE: [WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()]NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga. So there may be a fewextra's to those of you not having them.Example: (The subtitles on page 179 (157) are only in the WB'S!)---------------------------------------------------p 179 (157)--TITLE PAGE[Full-panel pic of Madoka sitting on the ground in warmup outfit & shorts.]MAIN TITLE (at top)               ________  The Thrilling Amusement Park!   dokidoki          YUUENCHI!                                  beating-of-heart  amusement-park                                  (thrilling)SUB-TITLE (at bottom)  Stopped by the Stitching        HIKARI to        KAGE    ni  of Light and Shadow.            light  and/with  shadow  in/at/by                                  nui                tomerarete                                  sewing/embroidery  being-able-to-stop  A Summer's Day on Which         utsumaki kagen no  NATSU no HI  wa  You Hang Your Head,             <*>                summer's-day (T)  Deliberately Behaving  with Cheerfulness.              waza-to     YOUKI ni         furumau no                                  on-purpose  in-cheerfulness  to-behave<Translation note:  i.e., "hang your head" not in shame, but due to exhaustion.><* utsumaku = to lie face-down, upside-down, prone, hang your head...      kagen = mood, atmosphere, environment>---------------------------------------------------p 180 (158)1[Exterior shot of ABCB.]Master: [off]  A lunchstand at the             YUUENCHI ni        DEMISE        o?!  amusement park?!                at-amusement-park  branch-store (O)2Master:  Hmm...                          soo3[Shot of Kyousuke, looking on wide-eyed.]Master: [off]                     ___________  There's been talk of running    hamba--ga-- nan-ka    no  a hamburger-type fast-food      hamburger   somewhat  's  stand inside the amusement      _________   ______  park.                           fua--suto + fu--do o   Uru MISE     o                                  fast-food         (O)  booth/stand (O)                                  YUUENCHI-NAI de         yaranai ka tte                                  w/in-an-amusement-park  doing                                  HANASHI  ga  atte    ne                                  story   (S)  existing  It turns out that I'll          #1# HI dake  AYUKAWA-kun ni   itte morau  need to send you, but           1-day-only              (IO)  go-(favor)  just for a day.                                  koto ni natta   n da                                  became-decided  (explan)4[Shot of Madoka sitting at the counter in ABCB apron, likewise looking on wide-eyed.]Master: [off]  But...                          tokoro-ga5[Kyousuke sits at the counter about 2 stools away from Madoka.  Master is behind the counter.]Master: [leaning and stage-whispering to Kyousuke]  ...she's complaining that       KYOUSUKE-kun to ISSHO ja nakya  she won't go without you,       if-not-be-together-with-Kyousuke  Kyousuke-kun.                                       ____                                  iya datte           dada o konete-ru                                  even-if-unpleasant  be-throwing-a-tantrumKyousuke: [turning head to look wide-eyed at Madoka]  Eh?!                            e?![Madoka is likewise surprised.]6Madoka:                           ________  Master!!  I said no such        masuta--_!!   atashi  sonna koto  thing!                          Master  !     I       that-kind-of-thing                                  ittemasen  yo_                                  not-say      !narration:  These days continue to be       TANOshii           MAINICHI  ga  cheerful ones...                pleasant/cheerful  every-day (S)                                  tsuzuite imasu----                                  are-continuing---------------------------------------------------p 181 (159)1Master: [smiling]  Anyway, joking aside...         ma--  sore wa    jo--dan to shite......                                  oh    that(one)  jokingKyousuke: [blushing] (It's a joke?)                   (nan da jo--dan ka)2Madoka:  ...And we've had you work       KASUGA-kun dattara  here before...                             when-be                                          _____                                  koko de baito yatte-moratta                                  did-work-here                                  koto  mo   aru       shi......                                  thing too  there-is  and-besides3Madoka:  ...and as for me...             atashi to shite  mo...                                  as-for-me        too4[Kyousuke facial portrait--the idea appeals to him...]5Kyousuke: [standing]  Okay, I'll help!                ii yo    TETSUDAu           yo_!                                  OK       help/take-part-in    !6[Kyousuke walks away, looking back at Madoka.]Madoka:  Then, I'll see you              ja    ashita    YUUENCHI de        ne!  tomorrow at the amusement       well  tomorrow  at-amusement-park  park!narration:  I've got to admit, a summer     nante  ttatte  vacation with Ayukawa is        what!  even-though-saying  just the thing!                                  AYUKAWA to ISSHO   no NATSUYASUmi                                  together-w/Ayukawa 's summer-vacation                                  da mon!                                  be thing7[Madoka smiles and gazes at Kyousuke as he leaves.]door FX:                          _____  <rattle>                        karan---------------------------------------------------p 182 (160)1[Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment complex.]2[Kyousuke starts to enter his apartment, but Hikaru comes up from the side.]Hikaru:  Sempai...                       SEMPAI......3[Full-portrait of Hikaru standing in the hall.]4Kyousuke:  Hikaru-chan!                    hikaru-chan!5Hikaru: [looking quiet and a bit sad]  Sempai, there's something       atashi SEMPAI ni  kiki-tai  I wanted to ask you about...    I            (IO) want-to-ask                                  koto ga aru          n desu...                                  there-is-something  (explan)6Kyousuke:  Eh?!                            e?!narration:  Somehow, this was a             nan-da-ka  different Hikaru-chan...        somehow                                  itsu-mo-no hikaru-chan to chigau  na----                                  different-from-the-usual-Hikaru---------------------------------------------------p 183 (161)1Hikaru: [glaring]  Is there someone new that       DARE-ka hoka ni  SUki na  HITO  you like?                       someone-else     fond-of  person                                  demo          dekita                                  or-something  was-capable-of-doing                                  n desu   ka?                                  (explan) (query)2[Kyousuke goes into cardiac arrest.]Kyousuke FX:                      _______  <crash!>                        zuga--n3Kyousuke:  Wha...  Wha...!  Wha...!!       na...... na......! na......!!Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            ____ ____ ____ ____  <thump thump thump thump>       doki doki doki doki4Kyousuke: [sweating]  What are you talking about!!    nani  o   yu--    n dai!!                                  what (O)  to-say  (explan)Hikaru:  Because...!                     dattee~~~~5Hikaru: [leaping into him, arms about his neck]  We haven't seen each other      koko FUTSUKA       ICHIDO  in the past two days, and       these-past-2-days  on-one-occasion/once  still, you haven't even  phoned me.                      mo   Attenai   noni      SEMPAI DENWA mo                                  too  not-meet  although         phone-too                                  kurenai   shi                                  not-give  and-besides  And on top of that, _three_     MIKKA mae ni      Atta  TOKI mo  _days_ ago, I only got to       on-3-days-before  met   occasion-even  spend a single hour with  you!                            tatta no  #1# JIKAN  ja nai desu   ka !!                                  a-mere     1-hour    be-not        (?)!!Kyousuke:  EH?!                            e?!---------------------------------------------------p 184 (162)1Kyousuke:  O-oh, is thaaat all?!           na naa--n da  sonna koto ka!  Again, I was with Ayu...           what   be  that-kind-of-thing                                  ___                                  ore wa mata   AYU...                                  I  (T) againHikaru:  ?!                              ?!2Kyousuke:  Uh, nothing...                  a iya...<Translation note:  Again, Kyousuke deftly covers up his slip of the tongue. Here, he substitutes "a iya" for "Ayu...">3Kyousuke:  Th-that's right.  Next          so so-- da       KONDO      doko-ka  time, let's go somewhere           that's-right  next-time  somewhere  and have fun!                                  ASObi ni            iko--     yo!                                  at-play/recreation  let's-go  (emph)4Hikaru:  HUH?                            eKyousuke:  Where shall we go?              doko   iko--   ka?                                  where  shall-go  Let's spend a full day          #1# HI tappuri JIKAN o   kakete  together!                       1-full-day          (O)  spending                                  tsukiau        yo!                                  to-do-together                                                         ___  If I'm with you, anywhere       hikaru-chan to dattara ore  doko  is fun!!                        if-I-am-with-Hikaru         where                                  ittatte            TANOshii  kara!!                                  even-though-going  fun       that's-why5[Hikaru lets that sink in.]6Hikaru FX:                        _____  <smile!>                        niko_Hikaru:  Well, let's see then...!        e--to           ja    ne--_                                  well/let's-see  then7Hikaru:  Let's go to the amusement       ashita    YUUENCHI ni        ikimashou!!  park tomorrow!!                 tomorrow  to-amusement-park  let's-go !!Kyousuke:  Yeah, fine!                     un  ii yo_!!8narration:  Amusement park...?!             YUUENCHI----?!Madoka: [flashback]  Then, I'll see you tomorrow     ja ashita YUUENCHI de ne!  at the amusement park!Kyousuke:  Ah!                             ha_---------------------------------------------------p 185 (163)1Kyousuke:  T-tomorrow...                   a ashita wa......  And there...                    shikamo      soko wa...                                  furthermore  there  Wait now...                     chotto mazu...2Hikaru:  I'm so happy.  Actually,        ureshi-- na--  I've been wanting to go  to an amusement park            jitsu wa  zu--tto         mae kara  for a long time now.            actually  the-whole-time  since-before                                  YUUENCHI ikitai                                  want-to-go-to-amusement-park                                  tte OMOtte-ta      n desu!                                  was-thinking-that  (explan)3[Hikaru clings to his arm in happiness.]narration:  ...On one hand, she's so        ---- konna ni        yorokonde kurete-ru  happy, I can't tell her              to-this-extent  am-becoming-glad-about  no, but on the other hand,                ____  it's already too late to        noni      dame da nan-te      ienai    shi  take back my promise to         although  be-no-good-or-such  not-say  and  Ayukawa!                                  ka to itte             AYUKAWA to no                                  but-on-the-other-hand  w/Ayukawa  's                                  YAKUSOKU mo   IMAsara                                  promise  too  at-this-late-hour                                  KOTOWArenai!                                  not-declining/not-giving-notice4narration:  Well, all right, then.          ma  ii ka                                  ___  I have the Power in me!!        ore ni wa  _CHIKARA_           ga                                  in-me (T)  (kanji = NOURYOKU)  (S)                                              Power   ability                                  aru          n da!!                                  have/exists  (explan)Kyousuke: (And besides, an amusement       (YUUENCHI        to ittatte  park is such a large place,      amusement-park  even-though-saying-that  that they won't cross  paths.)                         HIROi toko da        shi                                  is-a-spacious-place  and-besides                                  Au       koto mo      nai darou)                                  to-meet  matter-even  not-be-possible5[Shot of the entrance to the amusement park.]Big sign:  Toshima En                      TOSHIMA             EN                                  mature-woman/       garden/yard/farm                                  middle-aged-woman<I dunno.  Sorta like a "Mother Goose's Garden"?!?  BTW, this amusement park really does exist.>sign at left:  Ticket Office                   NYUUKOKU            -BA       1000 yen                   entering-a-country   place/spot        500 yen                                  1000 -EN    500 -EN<2nd sign at left is unreadable by me>sign at gate:  Entrance                        IRIKUCHI  <????>                          <2 unreadable kanji> KUCHI<Translation note:  You'd assume it was "Exit" but it doesn't resemble any of the possible listings for "Exit" in my E-J Dictionary...>message sign at right:  You visited the entire place    NYUUKOKU to  subete       no  MAIta   ga.  with admission, but how often   w/admission  total/entire 's  visited <*>  does it take to get used to  visiting?                       nan KAI                   demo                                  how-often/how-many-times  or-such                                  o-MAIri       ni   naremasu                                  visit-shrine (IO)  get-used-to/skilled-at<*Could be a "ka" with a smudge...  And there is a period after it...>---------------------------------------------------p 186 (164)1[Shot of several of the rides at the amusement park.]narration:  While secretly dating           kakushite          hikaru-chan to  Hikaru-chan, I'm also...        hiding/concealing  w/Hikaru                                  ______                                  de--to shinagara  DOUJI ni----                                  while-dating      coincident-withnarration:  ...selling hamburgers           ONNAji YUUENCHI-NAI de         AYUKAWA to  with Ayukawa in the same        same   w/in-an-amusement-park  w/Ayukawa  amusement park.                 ___________                                  hamba--ga-- o   Uru   to yu--                                  hamburgers (O)  sell  to-say-that                                  ______ __________  In other words, I began         ha--do sukeju--ru  ga  hajimatta!  a tough schedule!               hard   schedule   (S)  began2[Exterior shot of the deserted concession stand.]3[Madoka is inside the stand, working the grill.  Kyousuke takes orders outside.]Kyousuke:                         ___________             ______  Two hamburgers, two cokes.      hamba--ga-- futatsu ni  ko--ra futatsu                                  2-hamburgers            2-colasMadoka: [smiling]  Hey, you're pretty good.        umai  ja nai   sono  CHOUSHI yo!  Way to go!                      good  isn't    that  way-of-doing/                                                       spirit/rhythm4[Kyousuke nervously glances at the clock.]narration:  It's almost time!               sorosoro  JIKAN          da!                                  soon      point-in-time  beKyousuke FX:                      ______  <peek!>                         chira_5Madoka:  Why are you so nervous?         nani  sowasowa shite             n no?                                  what  becoming-nervous/restlessKyousuke:                                     _____  O-one moment.  I need to        chi chotto  toire  use the restroom.                           toilet6Kyousuke FX: [searching]  <goggle>                        kyorokyoro                                  goggle-one's-eyes---------------------------------------------------p 187 (165)1[He sees the Ferris wheel.]narration:  That'll do fine!                are       ga   i-- ya!                                  that(one) (S)  fine2Kyousuke: [running towards the Ferris wheel car]  Wait!  Let me on, please!       chotto  NOsete!                                          letting-one-take-part-inTicket attendant:                                           _____  Uh, sir.  Your ticket?          a   o-KYAKU-san           kippu                                  oh  (hon-)customer(-hon)  ticket3[Kyousuke returns to the ticket booth, embarrassed.]Kyousuke:  One junior high student.        CHUUGAKUSEI           hitori                                  jr-high-school-pupil  one  Oh, do you sell books of        a   KAISUUKEN    arimasu  ka?  tickets?                        oh  ticket-book  have    (query)Ticket attendant:  What?!                          he_?!4[Long-range view of the Ferris wheel.  Kyousuke is at the top.]narration:  All right.  Right about         yo--shi    kono hen de...!  now...!                         all-right  in-this-vicinity5Kyousuke teleport FX:             ____  <swish!>                        shu_6[Hikaru waits at the amusement park entrance.]sign:                             ___            ______  Entrance...                     iru...         pu--ru...  Pool...                         go-in/come-in  pool7[Kyousuke walks up.]sign:                             ______  Free...                         furi--Hikaru:  Sempaaai!                       sempa--i_---------------------------------------------------p 188 (166)1[Tilted view of Hikaru and Kyousuke walking inside the park.  Kyousuke points to the roller coaster.]2[They ride in the front car of the roller coaster.  Hikaru clenches her eyes shut.]roller coaster FX:                _____  <rumble!>                       go--_3Kyousuke FX:                      ______  <peek!>                         chira_4narration:  Now's the time...               IMA no uchi ni----                                  now 's time to5narration:  ...to go to Ayukawa!            AYUKAWA no tokoro e!                                  to-Ayukawa's-placeKyousuke: (I'll be right back,             (sugu modotte kuru kara   ne hikaru-chan!)  Hikaru-chan!)                    right-away-returning6Kyousuke FX:                      ____  <swish!>                        shu_---------------------------------------------------p 189 (167)1[Kyousuke reappears in the Ferris wheel car.]Kyousuke FX:                      ____  <swish!>                        shu_2[He steps off the Ferris wheel.]Kyousuke FX:                      ___  <thud>                          ton3Kyousuke:  I feel sick!                    a-- KImochi  warukatta!                                  oh  feeling  was-bad                                  ___ _____   __________  I'm no good with roller         ore jetto + ko--suta--  nigate  coasters...!                    I   roller-coaster      bad-at                                  nan da   yo na----_                                  what-be  (confirm)!4Ticket attendant:                  _____   ___________ (Roller coasters...?!)           (jetto + ko--suta---_?!)5[Exterior shot of the concession stand.]Madoka: [off]  That's not right!               hetta              kuso  da  na--_!                                  no-good/unskilled  shit  be6Kyousuke: [working the grill]  Eh?!                            e?!grilling FX:                      _____  <sizzle!>                       ju--_7Madoka:  That hand technique is for      sono TEtsuki            ja  preparing crepes!               that-way-of-using-hand  being (T)  <actually, "okonomiyaki">                                  oKONOmiYAki      tte kanji ne!                                  crepe-type-dish      impression                                             ___________     ___________  These are hamburgers.           kore  wa   hamba--ga-- yo  hamba--ga--!!  Hamburgers!!                    these (T)  hamburgers      hamburgersKyousuke:  ...oh.                          ......haa---------------------------------------------------p 190 (168)1[She grasps his hand...]Madoka:  Okay...  Do it this way.        ii......  ko--      yaru  no yo                                  fine      this-way  to-do2[...and comes oh-so-close-up behind him...]3[Tight shot of their upper torsos as she presses up against his back.]4[Kyousuke looks back and catches an eyeful of her cleavage.]Kyousuke FX:                      _____  <thump!>                        doki_5[He blushes a deep, well, grey...  When are they gonna colorize these things, anyway! ^_^]narration:  O-oh no!!  I have to be         i ikenai!!      mo--  ikanakutcha!  going soon!                       unacceptable  soon  (= ikanakutte wa)                                                           not-goingMadoka:  See, hold it more firmly!       hora   motto shikkari motte!                                  look!  more  firmly   holdingcrows-in-background FX:           ______  <Kaa!>                          kaa--_6Kyousuke: [jumping away from her]                  ______  Th-that's right.  There's       so so-- da       so--su ga   TArinakatta  not enough sauce, right?           that's-right  sauce  (S)  wasn't-enough                                  n da      kke!                                  (explan)7Kyousuke: [leaving, looking back over his shoulder]  One moment.  I'll see if        chotto   CHIKAku no o-MISE        de  the next stand will let                  nearby  's (hon.-)stand  at  us have some.                                  wakete-moratte-kuru            yo                                  begin-sharing-(receive-favor)Madoka:  Ah, Kasuga-kun!                 a KASUGA-kun!8[Madoka lets out a sad sigh.]---------------------------------------------------p 191 (169)1[Kyousuke teleports onto the roller coaster tracks.]Kyousuke teleport FX:             ____  <swish!>                        shu_2[Kyousuke portrait--his life flashes before him...]3[The roller coaster approaches him at high speed.]Kyousuke:  Wah!!                           wa--_!!4roller coaster FX:                _____  <rumble!>                       go--_5[Kyousuke lands in his seat.]narration:                                ________  Timing was a bit off!           chotto  taimingu  zure chimatta!                                  moment  timing    shifted-in-space/timeKyousuke teleport FX:             ____  <swish!>                        shu_6Hikaru:  Oh!  I was scared!              a--  kowakatta!safety bar FX:                    ____  <swish!>                        shu_safety bar FX:                    _____  <klong>                         goton7[They stand after exiting the ride.]Hikaru:  I had my eyes closed the        atashi zutto  whole time.                     I      the-whole-time                                  ME tsubutte mashitaa                                  had-eyes-closednarration:  Just in time!                   KIKI-IPPATSU!                                  critical-moment---------------------------------------------------p 192 (170)1[Hikaru leaps into Kyousuke's arms.  They stand next to a really funky- looking graveyard.  Must be "Obake-Land".  ^_^]<Translation note:  The writing on the gravestone and 2 wooden grave markers are names of the dead.>2[In the concession stand, Madoka reaches past Kyousuke for a bowl.  Kyousuke blushes at one of the benefits of working with a beautiful girl in tight quarters...]3[Kyousuke zips off the Ferris wheel, past the watching ticket attendant.]4[He rushes back onto the Ferris wheel, again past the attendant.]5[Shot of a soft-drink vending machine.]Hikaru: [off]  I'm getting hungry!             onaka                hetta      naa~~_!                                  the-insides/stomach  decreased6Kyousuke: [pointing]  W-well...  Shall we go to       ji ja...   ano SHOKUDOU ni demo  iko-- ka  that lunch counter?                well    to-that-dining-place  let's-go                                                             or-something---------------------------------------------------p 193 (171)1Hikaru:  Someone was saying a            sore yori      sakki  little while back that          than-that-one  a-little-while-ago  there's a stand that                   ___________  serves tasty burgers!           oishii hamba--ga-- -YA -san   ga                                  tasty-hamburger-seller (hon.) (S)                                  DEte-ru                 tte                                  is-being-served(meals)  (hearsay)                                  DARE-ka   itte-mashita  ne!                                  somebody  was-saying[Kyousuke is horror-struck.]2Hikaru:  Let's try there!                itte-mimashou               yo!                                  let's-try-and-see-by-going  (emph)3narration:  A-anything but that...!         so sore       dake wa   mazui----!                                     that(one)  only (T)  embarrassing/                                                                awkward4[He sees the ventilation fan to the nearby concession stand.]5[He flashes with the Power.]narration:  That's it!!                     so-- da_!!6[The fan starts blowing hard.]fan FX:                           ______  <whirr>                         buo~~n7Hikaru:  Ah!  Smells good!               a_   ii    nioi!                                  oh!  good  smellKyousuke:  Doesn't it?                     deshou?  I'm sure that lunchstand        ano   SHOKUKOU      no HOU ga oishi--  is better!                      that  dining-place  more-tasty                                  yo kitto!                                     surely---------------------------------------------------p 194 (172)1Hikaru:  Is that so?                     so-- desu neeKyousuke:  Right!                          ne_2fan FX:                           _____  ___________  <whirr...ka-lunk-clunk-         buo~~  kyururururu  clunk...>3explosion FX:                     ____  <boom!>                         bon_4[Kyousuke and Hikaru stare at the smoke billowing out from where the spinning fan once was.]smoke FX:                         ________  <FX of smoke rising/billowing>  mokumoku5Hikaru: [walking off]                       ___________  Let's get some burgers,         yappari   hamba--ga-- ni shimasho  after all.                      after-all                let's-doKyousuke:  ..........                      ..........6Hikaru:  O-oh, that stand there!         a  ano MISE da![Kyousuke slaps a hand to his face and thinks dark thoughts.]---------------------------------------------------p 195 (173)1[Long-distance shot of the ABCB concession stand.  Many customers surround it.]2Hikaru:  It's pretty crowded.            kekkou _KO_ndemasu ne                                  quite  (*kanji = KON)                                                   confound/confuse<*odd use of this kanji.  "kondemasu" (using another kanji not used here) means "is-crowded"  Is the phrase "It's pretty confused." a standard phrase?  Or is there a double-meaning here, that it's both pretty crowded AND confused...>Kyousuke: [pointing off]  Hey!  Since it is, how          ne_!  dakara           MUko-- no o-MISE e...  about that stand over                 for-that-reason  to-opp.-dir.-booth  there...3Hikaru: [heading for the ABCB stand]  But everyone knows that         demo oishi-- MISE     hodo  longer lines mean better        but  delicious-booth  to-that-extent  food.                                  RETSU      ga   dekiru   tte yu--  shi                                  queue/line (S)  be-done  say-that  andKyousuke:  Ah, H-Hikaru-chan.              a hi hikaru-chan4Kyousuke: [retrieving and depositing Hikaru into a seat]  W-well, you sit and wait        ji ja    koko ni suwatte     MAtte-te  here while I go buy them!          well  taking-a-seat-here  be-waiting                                  ___                                  ore  KAtte-kuru    kara!                                  I    begin-buying  that's-whyHikaru FX:                        ___  <plop>                          ton5[He runs off to the lunchstand.]narration:  S-somehow I've got to do        na nan toka  futari    o   Awasenai  something to stop them             somehow   2-people (O)  cannot-meet  from meeting!                                  yo--ni   shinakerya!                                  so-that  (= shinakereba)                                              if-not-do6[Inside the stand, Kyousuke searches...  Madoka turns to look.]Kyousuke:                                            ___________ ___________ (Well, let's see...              (e--_to            hamba--ga-- hamba--ga--  Hamburgers, hamburgers.)         well-let's-see... hamburgers7Madoka: [off]  KASUGA-KUN!                     KASUGA-kun!Kyousuke:  Y-yes!                          ha hai!---------------------------------------------------p 196 (174)1Madoka:  Where were you!  The            doko   itte   tanoyo--_  customers have formed a         where  going  shall-ask-for  line and are waiting,  you know!                       o-KYAKU-san            RETSU tsukutte                                  (hon)-customers-(hon)  line-growing                                  MAtte-ru     no yo!                                  be-waitingKyousuke:  R-right!  "I'm back!"           ha hai_   tadaima!<Cultural note:  Japanese etiquette requires this announcement upon one's return home.>2Kyousuke: [working the grill] (What in the world am I          (ittai nani         o   yatte  doing...)                        what-in-the-world (O)  doing                                                  ___                                  n daro          ore......)                                  (poss.-reason)  Igrill FX:                         ____  <sizzle>                        ju--3Hikaru: (Sempai's so late.)              (SEMPAI OSOi naa)                                          late4Hikaru: [approaching the stand] (I wonder if he's still in       (mada   KAenai   no  ka na)  line.)                           still  not-buying   I-wonder5grilling FX:                      ______  <hiss!>                         shu--_6[Surprise registers on Kyousuke's face.]7[He ducks out of view below the counter.  Hikaru is outside looking about.]narration:  Oh no!                          mazui_!---------------------------------------------------p 197 (175)1Madoka:  What are you doing,             nani  yatte n no?  KASUGA-kun  Kasuga-kun?                     what  doing[Hikaru is right up to the counter, but not looking inside, or she'd see Madoka's back.]2[Close shot of Hikaru.]3[Tight shot of Kyousuke grabbing Madoka by the wrist.]4[He yanks her to the floor on top of him.]5[Closeup as she lands on him.]6[He flashes with the Power.]7[Shot of the gas used for the grill.  In inset we see the valve being turned telekinetically.]valve FX:                         ____  <creak!>                        kyu_tank:                                   _______ ____  L. P. G. Propane Gas            #LPG# puropan gasu---------------------------------------------------p 198 (176)1Kyousuke: [pointing under the grill]  Look at this.  The flame        hora   HI   ka  KIete-ru yo  went out.                       look!  flame    be-extinguishedMadoka:  Ah, it's true!                  a HONTOU da!2Madoka: [examining it closely]  Strange, huh...                 hen nee......[Kyousuke slips away.]3[Someone taps Hikaru on her shoulder.]hand FX:                          ___ ___  <tap tap>                       ton ton4Kyousuke: [with burgers]  Okay.  Here you go!             hai  omachidoo!                                       long-in-coming  Let's eat in the shade          MUkou no KOkage de       tabeyou   ka  over there.                     in-opp.-dir.-tree-shade  let's-eat (?)5narration:  And so, somehow, somehow...     to yu-- wake de  nan toka                                  for-that-reason  somehow                                  nan toka                                  somehownarration:                                 ______  ...this date ended without      BUJI ni  de--to mo   owari----  incident...                     safely   date   too  end6[Hikaru waves good-bye as she leaves.  Kyousuke beams a smile.]narration:  And it also looks as if         do--yara        hikaru-chan no KIGEN mo  Hikaru-chan's mood is           it-looks-as-if  Hikaru's-mood/humor  too  cured!                                  naotta               yo-- da!                                  set-to-rights/cured  likelihood7Kyousuke: [sweating]  Oh no!  Ayukawa...              atto ikenai!   AYUKAWA...                                  oh   bad---------------------------------------------------p 199 (177)1[Shot of Madoka, standing quiet and subdued inside the concession stand. There are no customers about.]2Kyousuke:  S-sorry.                        do do--monarration:  I wonder if she happened        hyotto shite  hikaru-chan no koto  to notice Hikaru-chan?!         happen-to-do                                  KI ga tsuita  no ka na----?!                                  was-aware-of     I-wonder3Madoka: [unemotionally]  It's obvious why the flame      HI    ga  tsukanai no  mo   atarimae yo  won't light.  The gas           flame (S) not-using    too  obvious  valve is shut.                  ____                                  gasu sen   shimatte  n da mon                                  gas  plug  closing   (reason-be)  Thanks to that I had a          okage de          o-KYAKU-san  ni  terrible time because I         thanks-to-(that)    customers (IO)  couldn't serve any              ___________  hamburgers to the               hamba--ga--  DEsenakutte  customers.                      hamburgers   could-not-be-served                                  TAIHEN             datta no yo                                  difficult/serious  was4Madoka: [with a glint of irritation]  And besides, what were you      sore ni shite mo  NANDO mo  nukedashite  doing, sneaking out so          for-all-that      often     slipping-out-of  often?  Where in the world were         ittai doko          itte-ta    no yo!  you going?!                     where-in-the-world  were-going5Madoka: [turning aside in displeasure]  Well, I realize we're at        maa   YUUENCHI        da kara  an amusement park, and you      well  amusement-park  that's-why  may want to play...                                  ASObi-tai no     mo   wakaru                                  wanting-to-play  too  to-realize                                  kedo     sa--                                  however  !!                                              ______  You're such a little boy!       mattaku     bo--ya      nan da kara_!                                  absolutely  a-boy/baby  that's-why                                              unsophisticated-youth[Kyousuke clenches his eyes shut and sweats.]narration:  S-saved!                        ta TASUkatta!6Madoka: [setting down a stack of dishes]  Here!  These had better all     hai!  kore ZEMBU  ARAttoku        koto  be washed [by the time I get          all-these   (= ARAtte-oku)  matter  back], since it's my turn                            will-wash-(for-future-  to play now!                                                         result)                                  KONDO     wa   atashi ga  ASObi ni                                  this-time (T)  I     (S)  at-play                                  itte kuru    kara    ne                                  begin-going  sincestack of dishes FX:               ___  <thud>                          don7[Exterior shot of concession stand.  Madoka walks away, tossing her hair back.  Back at the concession, Kyousuke stands alone, chin in hands, elbows on the counter, watching her walk away.]narration:  Looks like I made her           choppiri  okorasechatta  a bit angry, but [all in        a-little  (= okorasete-shimatta)  all] it looks like it's                      displeased/made-angry-(regret)  all right!                                  mitai       da kedo--                                  seems-like  be however                                  maa   yokatta   yokatta!                                  well  was-good---------------------------------------------------