Kimagure Orange Road"I Like Japan!"Volume 3, Story 7WB Volume 2, Story 8Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation by Hitoshi DoiAdditional translation/revision by Craig NishidaCompilation by Spencer C. HastingsEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Andrew Wilson Peter Norby Tony SchrickLast revision : 9-03-94NOTE: [WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()]NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga. So there may be a fewextra's to those of you not having them.Example: (The subtitles on page 157 (135) are only in the WB'S!)COMMENT ON THE REVISION (CN)--Changes were minor. Added the honorifics, Kyousuke-stutters (many!), FX's,the subtitles on the title page, about 4-5 untranslated lines, additionalnewspaper text, the title of a book that Kurumi is reading (major chucklehere), missing ! and ? from the Japanese text, parentheses for thecharacter's thoughts, that sort of stuff... During the discussion phaseof the script preparation, some lines were re-worded, as well.---------------------------------------------------p 157 (135)--TITLE PAGE[Back view of a tanned Madoka, standing in bikini, T-shirt and hat at the beach. Palm trees flank her as she looks out to sea.]MAIN TITLE (at top) __ _____ _____ I Like Japan! ai raiku japan!SUB-TITLE (at bottom) _____ To the South the Weather SUHADA ni karitto MINAMI Clears, Crisp Against My on-bare-skin (= karatto?) the-south Skin. weather-clearing/ weather-dry Listening to the Stirring YASHI no zawameki SE de of the Palm Trees Behind stirring-of-palm-trees in-back Me, My Secret Self Looks Back at the Summer! kiite HIMITSU no WATASHI ga listening-to secret me (S) furimuku NATSU yo! to-look-back-at summer---------------------------------------------------p 158 (136)1[Kyousuke and Hikaru walk down a residential street.]narration: ___ It hit me like a bolt from sore wa ore ni totte the blue... that(one) (T) me (IO) getting SEITEN no hekireki datta---- a-bolt-from-the-blue was2[Kyousuke looks wide-eyed at Hikaru.]3Kyousuke: Uh, Hikaru-chan. Say that ano hikaru-chan mo-- ichido itte kurenai again? uh one-more-time sayingHikaru: Like I said...! da kara----_ for-that-reason4Hikaru: _______ ...Madoka-san is going to madoka-san amerika ni itchau n desu tte America. to-America (=itte-shimau) go-(finality/regret)5[Kyousuke is stunned.]6Kyousuke: [smiling brightly] Oh, that's nice. Is she i-- naa RYOKOU demo iku no? going on vacation? good travel/trip or-something going---------------------------------------------------p 159 (137)1Hikaru: No. She's going to live chigaimasu yo-- SUmu n desu yo--! there! differ reside (explan) The whole family is going OYAKO tomodomo EIJUU to move!! parent-&-child-together perm.-residence shichau n desu yo--!! (= shite-shimau) (explan/emph) do-(finality/regret)2[Kyousuke stunned look #3...]3Kyousuke: N-no way... ma masaka...4Hikaru: Well, it's true! Her sou! sono masaka nan desu parents are... like-that that-"no-way" that is nan demo go-RYOUSHIN ga whatever-it-is (hon-)both-parents (S)5Kyousuke: [sweating] W-wait a second. Come to chi chotto matte so-- ieba think of it, Ayukawa's wait-a-moment come-to-think-of-it parents... AYUKAWA no RYOUSHIN tte...... Madoka's-parents (T)6[Shot looking up at the September sky. Sunlight sparkles through breaks in the overhanging trees branches.]Kyousuke: [off] ...what do they do?! nani yatte n no?! what doing---------------------------------------------------p 160 (138)1[Kyousuke arrives home. He looks frantic.]door FX: _____ batan2[He races past his sisters. Manami stands and watches him go by. Kurumi looks up from the book she is reading.]Kyousuke running FX: ________ dotadota footsteps on the wooden floorBook title: [open book in Kurumi's hands] "Origin of Species" SEIMEI no SHU -KA(SU) --C. Darwin life 's evolution-of-species _______ to KIGEN #C.# da--uin and origin C. Darwin3[Kyousuke dives into a stack of newspapers. Kurumi peers from the side to watch.]newspaper FX: ________ parapara4Kyousuke: Found it!! atta!!5[An angled view of the newspaper article...]Page header: ...Newspaper 13 August 1984 SHIMBUN #1984# #8# GETSU newspaper month #13# JITSU (GETSU) day/dateHeadlines: _______ _______________ CHICAGO PHILHARMONI... shikago fuiruha--mo--ni... ____________ WORLD-RENOWNED VIOLINISTS SEKAITEKI baiorinisuto world-wide violinist MR. AND MRS. AYUKAWA'S AYUKAWA FUSAI TOTSUZEN no KIKOKU!! SUDDEN HOMECOMING!! Mr.-&-Mrs. suddenly 's homecoming _______ ARE THEY PREPARING TO amerika EIJUU no JUMBI ka!? EMIGRATE TO AMERICA?!? perm.-res. 's preparationStory text: [some lines cut off at edges] Both gifted violinists... TOMO ni TENSAI-TEKI both prodigy-(adj.-ending) ____________ baiorinisuto to shite... violinists w/respect-to-being Presently, the world- ima ya SEKAITEKI ni YUUMEI na renowned Ayukawas... now as-soon-as world-famous AYUKAWA FU... _____ ...arrived early this KESA HAYAku KI... ameri... morning from Ameri... early-this-morning (KIKOKU?) homecoming6[Tighter shot of the headlines in panel 5]narration: I can't believe it. masaka AYUKAWA no RYOUSHIN ga Ayukawa's parents were 's parents (S) world-famous musicians... SEKAITEKI na ONGAKUKA datta nante---- world-wide musicians werenarration: Come to think of it, I so-- ieba AYUKAWA no KATEI no koto didn't know anything about if-that's-so about-Ayukawa's-family Ayukawa's family. nante zenzen shiranakatta na not-at-all not-came-to-know7Kyousuke: [reading on] Still more... mashite ya---- increasing---------------------------------------------------p 161 (139)[This page is bordered in black, denoting a flashback...]1[Kyousuke and Hikaru continue the conversation which opened this chapter.]Hikaru: Because of work, Madoka's madoka-san no go-RYOUSHIN tte parents are often away 's (hon-)parents (T) [i.e., more often than they are present in Japan]. SHIGOTO de NIHON ni inai because-of-work not-be-in-Japan TOKI no HOU ga OOi shi all-the-time and-besides She can't just travel ISSHO ni tsuite mawattachi around with them or it if-she-traveled-around-w/them would mess up her studies. GAKU ni mo ikenai study too bad to yu-- WAKE_ de (kanji = RIYUU = reason) for-that-reason2[Kyousuke stunned look #4...]Hikaru: [off] So ever since she was madoka-san chiisai koro kara zutto little, she's been left since-when-small all-along in the care of her grandfather. ojiisan _CHI_ ni grandfather (kanji = UCHI) at-home azukerarete-ita n desu was-being-left-(in-someone's-care)3Kyousuke: But they've been separated da kedo zutto hanarebanare de for a long time. Why take but the-whole-time separated-from- Ayukawa to America at this each-other late date...? nan-de imasara why at-this-(belated)-point _______ AYUKAWA o amerika ni...? (O) (IO)4[Shot of the sky.]Hikaru: [off] At first, they planned to nan demo hajime wa izure wa return to Japan, but they whatever-it-is at-first sometime-soon received great recognition abroad... NIHON ni KAEtte kuru YOTEI datta to-Japan begin-returning plan was rashii kedo KAIGAI de I-hear-that however abroad HYOUKA sarete... are-being-appraised/evaluatedHikaru: [off] _______ And they bought a house UCHI mo amerika ni motta in America, and her house too in-America came-to-own sister got married, so Madoka is all by herself shi one--san mo now... and-besides older-sister also KEKKON shite madoka-san hitorikiri ni getting-married 1-person-alone natchau kara... (= natte-shimau) because become-(finality)5Hikaru: [brightly] There is a wonderful madoka-san ni wa mukou de no life waiting for her over (IO)(T) at-over-there 's there. subarashii SEIKATSU ga wonderful life (S) MAtte-iru n desu yo be-waiting (explan/emph)6[End of flashback. In the present, Kyousuke still stares wide-eyed at the open newspaper.]Kyousuke: A wonderful life, huh...? subarashii SEIKATSU....ka---------------------------------------------------p 162 (140)1Kyousuke: (But it might be some kind of (demo moshi-ka-shitara nani ka no mistake. It's not like she but perhaps something 's told me herself...!) machigai ka mo shirenai mistake even not-coming-to-know shi mada and-besides (not)yet HONNIN no KUCHI kara iku to ki--ta from-her-mouth to-go heard-that wake de wa nai...!) reason being not2[Cut to Madoka, standing at a railing on a walkway (at the park?). She looks out over the city.]narration: _______ America... amerika kaa---3[A young couple and their small daughter walk by. The father carries the girl on his shoulders.]4[Madoka turns to watch the girl as the girl laughs.]5[The girl smiles and pulls on her father's hair. Mom laughs at the look on Dad's face.]6[Madoka looks on, deep in thought.]---------------------------------------------------p 163 (141)[This page is bordered in black, denoting a flashback...]1[Present-day Madoka visualizes her young (approx.) 4-year-old self...]Madoka: I want to go to America too!! madoka mo amerika iku_!! too go !2Father: We'll come back right away. naani sugu KAEtte-kuru sa what right-away begin-returning (emph)Madoka: No, I wanna go with! yada ISSHO ni iku no!! is-unpleasant to-go-together-with3Mother: Madoka, you listen to what madoka obaachan-tachi no grandma says and be polite. grandma(&-others) 's iu koto yoku kiite otonashiku things-said hearing-well well-behaved shite-ru n desu yo be-coming-to-have (explan/emph)4[Madoka chases after her departing parents. Someone--her sister?--stands and watches.]Madoka: ____ ____ Papa, Mama! papa mama5[She stands next to her sister, watching her parents leave.]5(inset)[Closeup of Madoka as she weeps.]---------------------------------------------------p 164 (142)1[Exterior shot of ABCB.]2[Madoka looks in through the window.]3[She sees Hikaru and Kyousuke, sitting at the counter, chatting with Master.]4[Shot of Hikaru clinging in happiness to the arm of her Darling. Kyousuke sorta finds an interesting spot on the ceiling to look at.]5[Madoka facial portrait--sadness.]6[Madoka enters, eyes downcast.]door FX: _____ karan7Hikaru: [brightly] Hey! a_![Kyousuke has a stricken look.]---------------------------------------------------p 165 (143)1[Madoka facial portrait--she gives Kyousuke a look of trepidation.]2[Kyousuke facial portrait--there is some anxiety on his face as well.]3Madoka: [smiling to Hikaru] Oh, I didn't know you were ara kite-ta no hikaru here. oh were-comingHikaru: [smiling back] We're here to get in the o-jama MUSHI! way! (hon-)obstruction vermin/bad-company4[Madoka walks past Kyousuke. Kyousuke watches her go by.]Madoka: Work, work. sa--te SHIGOTO SHIGOTO well work work5narration: Ayukawa... AYUKAWA----narration: _______ Are you really going to HONTOU ni amerika ni itchau no ka?! America?! really to-America (= itte-shimau) go-(regret)6[Kyousuke watches as Madoka puts on her ABCB apron.]---------------------------------------------------p 166 (144)1Hikaru: Madoka-san, when are you madoka-san SHUPPATSU wa itsu nan desu ka leaving? departure (T) when is (?) Is the date fixed? mo-- KImatte n desu ka? being-decided (explan) (?)Kyousuke FX: _____ doki_[Kyousuke looks to be near cardiac arrest; Madoka spins around in surprise.]2[Kyousuke and Madoka exchange a glance.]3Madoka: [looking away] ......yeah. ......un4[Kyousuke stares at the counter in front of him.]Madoka: [off] The day after tomorrow. asatte5Hikaru: Wow, you're in a hurry. zuibun KYUU desu nee a-lot haste is (rhet.-inquiry)Madoka: Well, I have busy parents. nan se go-TABOU na (hon-)pressure-of-work RYOUSHIN dakara ne parents that's-why (confirm.)6narration: _______ She's going to America. amerika iku tte ya yappari S-so the story was true, go-to-America (T) after-all after all! A-and the day after tomorrow?! HONTOU datta no ka! shi shikamo S-so soon... true was furthermore asatte?! so sonna ni hayaku---- day-after-tomorrow to-that-extent fast/quick7Hikaru: _______ I wish I could go to i-- na-- amerika kaa America, too! good atashi mo itte mitai na--_ I too going appear-to-be !---------------------------------------------------p 167 (145)1Hikaru: _______ She's so lucky to get to amerika de SEIKATSU dekiru live in America! in-America life to-be-able-to-do nan-te ura yamashi-- desu yo ne-- or-such jealous-of am2Kyousuke: ___ I... I like this city better! ore... kono MACHI no HOU ga ii I this-town 's compares-better3[Kyousuke gazes at Madoka...]4[...who looks back at him in some surprise.]5Hikaru: [whacking Kyousuke on the back] What are you saying, Sempai?! na--ni itte n desu ka SEMPAI! what saying (reason/query) _______ Everyone knows America is amerika no ho-- ga i-- ni better! America-better (IO) KImatte-ru ja nai desu ka be-deciding _______ amerika_!Hikaru whack-on-the-back FX: ___ don[Kyousuke pitches forward against the counter.]6[Exterior shot of ABCB.]Hikaru: [off] Madoka-san, we'll go see madoka-san KUUKOU ni wa MI-OKUri ni you off at the airport!! at-airport (T) to-see-off/bid- Right, Sempai? farewell ikimasu kara ne!! ne-- SEMPAI? go since (inqu.)Kyousuke: [off] Y-yeah. u un---------------------------------------------------p 168 (146)1[Later...]Madoka: I'm home! tadaima!door FX: _____ gatan2Mother: Did you decide, Madoka-san? doo madoka-san KESSHIN tsuita? what determination3Madoka: Mother... ...... oka--san4[Madoka pauses in thought.]5Madoka: You always have it your KATTE na mon ne! way! selfishness person (confirm.)6Madoka: You left me alone for so NANNEN mo atashi o many years. Then you how-many-years even me (O) suddenly say you want me to go to America... hotta chikashinishi toite left-alone ????????????? urging-to-do _______ ikinari amerika ni koi da nan-te... suddenly come-to-America! be etc...7Mother: But from now on we can live demo kore kara wa anata to ISSHO ni together. but this from (T) together-w/you KUraseru yo-- ni naru no yo be-living to-come-about-that (conf/emph) Wasn't that your dream? anata mo sore ga YUME datta n ja nai? you too that (S) dream was not-reason---------------------------------------------------p 169 (147)1Madoka: You're right... sou ne...2[Madoka watches her mother as she walks away.]Mother: [off] Well! Don't be so lazy. sa--_ nombiri shitenai de well! feel-easy/carefree not-be-engaging-in Did you finish packing? JUMBI wa sunda no? preparations (T) became-finished Oh yeah... a so-- so--3Mother: I have to go talk to your anata no GAKKOU no SENSEI gata ni mo teachers tomorrow, too! your school 's teachers too ashita o-HANAshi ni tomorrow speak/explain (IO) ikanakutcha ne! (= ikanakutte wa) not-goingMother: Ah! Busy, busy. a-- isogashi isogashi4[Exterior shot of the Ayukawa home.]5[Madoka lies back in bed, wide awake.]6[She visualizes Kyousuke.]Kyousuke: [flashback!] ___ I...like this city better! ore...... kono MACHI no HOU ga ii! I this-town compare-better---------------------------------------------------p 170 (148)1[Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]2[Tight shot of a clock--it's 4:00 AM.]3[Kyousuke lies back in bed, wide awake.]4[He visualizes Madoka in her ABCB apron.]narration: The day after tomorrow... asatte5narration: _______ ...Ayukawa will go to AYUKAWA ga amerika e itchau!! America!! (S) to-America (= itte-shimau) go-(regret)6[He sits up.]narration: It wasn't just a story, ya yappari jo--dan ja nai zou! after all!! after-all joke not-be (str-exclam)Kyousuke FX: ____ gaba7[He stands.]narration: Shit! There's nothing I can kuso---_ demo KONDO bakari wa do this time! ! but this-time only (T) do-- shou mo nai ja nai ka! what undertake nothing8[Tight shot of his feet as he walks out his apartment building.]---------------------------------------------------p 171 (149)1[Madoka stands on the sidewalk.]2Kyousuke: Ayukawa! AYUKAWA!3Kyousuke: Wh-what are you doing at do do-- shita no konna JIKAN ni...... this hour... what-is-the-matter at-this-kind-of-time4[Madoka looks back at him with a slightly sad look.]5Madoka: [gazing down, smiling] I couldn't sleep, and by nan-da-ka... NEMUrenakutte the time I noticed, I'd for-some-reason can't-be-sleeping already walked this far. KI ga tsuitara kono HEN made when-noticed until-this-vicinity ARUite kite-ta no had-begun-walking6[Kyousuke facial portrait--he watches her.]7Kyousuke: [small smile] ___ I couldn't sleep either. ore mo nan-da-ka... NEMUrenakutte I-too for-some-reason can't-be-sleeping---------------------------------------------------p 172 (150)1[Exterior shot of a building, a lit streetlamp, and the night sky.]2[Kyousuke and Madoka sit in adjacent swings at the playground.]3Kyousuke: [looking up at the sky] It's going to be light soon. moo AKAruku naru koro da ne soon become-light time be4[Madoka looks at him, wistful.]swing FX: ___ kii...Madoka: .......... ..........5Madoka: [swinging, with a smile] Say, Kasuga-kun. Why do nee KASUGA-kun wa dooshite kono MACHI you like this city? say (T) why this-town ga ii no? better6[Kyousuke blushes and gazes down.]---------------------------------------------------p 173 (151)1Madoka: There's nothing special nanno hentetsu mo nai about this city. what-kind-of just-ordinary there's-not It's the same as any other. hoka to so-- KAwannai to-others like-that not-change goku FUTSUU no MACHI yo extremely-ordinary 's town2[Against a backdrop of American icons, Madoka swings.]narration: _______ Compared to that, America sore ni kurabete amerika wa--- has New York, Chicago, comparing-to-that (T) Hollywood, Beverly Hills! ____________ _______ ________ niyu--yo--ku shikago hariuddo New-York Chicago Hollywood ______________ bibari--hirusu! Beverly-Hills3Madoka: [looking up to the sky] There are a lot of people ironna HITO-tachi ga and there are lots of fun various/diverse people (S) things waiting for me there! ite TANOshii koto ga ippai existing joyful-things (S) full-of MAtte-ru no yo ne--_! be-looking-forward-to !4Madoka: [smiling and looking down] For that, I'd first have so-- so-- sono tame ni wa to study English. And sure for-that-sake (T) then... mazu EIKAIWA o first-of-all English-conversation (O) BENKYOU shinakucha dame yo ne (=shinakute wa) having-to-study son demo tte... that however (T)5[Tight shot of Kyousuke's hand grasping one of Madoka's chains to stop her swinging.]6[He stands behind her. Madoka is wide-eyed.]Kyousuke: ___ I... ore wa ii ga... I (T) better---------------------------------------------------p 174 (152)1[Tight profile shot as he stands behind her.]2[Pov pans back.]Kyousuke: I like this place the best. ichiban KI ni itteru n da the-best being-pleased-with (explan)3[Shot of the meeting on the 99.5 steps--Kyousuke stands at the top with red hat on his head, watching Madoka walk down. Overlaid on this is a half- portrait of Madoka as she speaks her flashback line below...]Kyousuke: [off] Since the first time I came kono MACHI ni hajimete kita TOKI... here... Since I counted the to-this-town the-time-I-first-came number of steps... sou ano KAIDEN no KAZO(ERU) kazoeta like-that that-steps 's count counted TOKI kara time sinceMadoka: [flashback] It can't be... There should uso~~~ #99# DAN shika only be 99. you're-kidding (counter) only nai hazu yo not likelihood4[Eyes closed and solemn, Kyousuke flashes with the force of his words.]Kyousuke: ___ To me this is the most ore ni totte wa ichiban beautiful city!! to-me preferring best suteki na MACHI nan da!! great/wonderful town be5[Madoka gives that some thought...]6[...and lowers her gaze and smiles.]---------------------------------------------------p 175 (153)1Madoka: ___ ___ Tee-hee. ku_ ku_[Kyousuke goes bug-eyed.]2Madoka: A-HA-HA-HA a ha ha ha3Madoka: [smiling merrily] Did you really think that I HONTOU ni atashi ga amerika ni iku was going to America?! really I (S) go-to-America to OMOtte-ta no?! was-thinking-that (confirm)4Kyousuke: [blushing] WHAT?! e_5[Madoka stands up, looking sweetly at him.]swing FX: ___ gi_6Madoka: _______ From the beginning, I atashi hajime_ kara amerika nan-ka wasn't planning on going I from-the-beginning to America. iku tsumori nakatta n da to-go intention was-not (explan)7[Kyousuke stunned look #5...]---------------------------------------------------p 176 (154)1Kyousuke: Wh-what!! na nan datte!! whatever-it-is2Madoka: That's right. I was just sou minna o chotto teasing everyone! like-that everyone (O) a-moment karakatte mita dake! tried-&-teased only3Kyousuke: [raising fist in mock anger] What's that? That's mean. na nan da yo-- hidoi naa what-be cruel[Madoka laughs in glee.]4narration: _______ Anyway, Ayukawa's trip to toni mo kaku ni mo AYUKAWA no amerika iki America has been called in-any-case-too 's America-trip off! wa CHUUSHI ni natta! (T) was-called-off5narration: And... the most beautiful soshite---- itsumo toka waranu city to me is still here! and always ???? ?????? ___ ______ ore ni totte no suteki na to-me preferring wonderful MACHI ga ii ni aru! town (S) fine to-exist6[They walk off under lightening skies.]Kyousuke: _____ But, I didn't know that demo... AYUKAWA no oyaji-san ga your parents were so famous! but 's parents(-hon) (S) anna ni YUUMEIJIN da to wa na---_ that-much famous-people benarration: Ayukawa's parents apparently AYUKAWA no RYOUSHIN mo KONKAI no tokoro gave up on bringing her 's parents too at-this-time this time, but... wa TSUrete iku no o (T) taking-(a-child)-with-(them) (O) akirameta yo-- da ga gave-up-on seeming butMadoka: Were you surprised? ODOroita ka were-surprised (?)7Kyousuke: No resemblance at all. zenzen nitenai ne utterly/totally not-resemble/take-afterMadoka: Anyhow... do--senarration: ...I still have the uneasy itsu nandoki AYUKAWA no feeling that she may change when at-any-time 's her mind on a whim... KI ga kawaru ka mo shirenai change-intentions it-may-be to yu-- FUAN wa to-say-that anxiety (T) nokotte-ru wake da---- be-remaining-behind (reason)---------------------------------------------------p 177 (155)1[Kyousuke walks down the hallway to his apartment.]narration: But really... sore ni shite mo HONTOU ni---- but/still/for-all-that really2[Madoka half-portrait.]3narration: _______ I wonder if she really hajime_ kara amerika e iku had no intention of going from-the-beginning go-to-America to America from the beginning? tsumori nakatta no ka na? intention there-wasn't I-wonder Ayukawa... AYUKAWA----4[At the airport, Madoka stands next to a woman (her sister?), smiles and waves good-bye to the departing plane.]narration: But for now... demo maa mazu wa but well first-of-all5[Shot of her parents in their seats.]Mother: That Madoka. Telling us moo madoka_ tachi kinou ni natte only yesterday that she yesterday (IO) becoming won't go! KYUU ni ikanai nante..........! suddenly not-going how!Father: It's okay. The next time naani KONDO ISSHO ni we come, all three of us what next-time together can go back together. KAEreru yo to-be-returningnarration: ___ ...I'm relieved! hotto hito ANSHIN feel-relieved person peace-of-mind---------------------------------------------------