Kimagure Orange Road"The Island of Forbidden Love"Volume 3, Story 5WB Volume 2, Story 6Written and illustrated by Izumi MatsumotoTranslation by Craig H. NishidaCompilation by Spencer C. HastingsEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Andrew Wilson Station ZebraLast revision : 8-08-94NOTE: [WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()]NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga. So there may be a fewextra's to those of you not having them.Example: (The subtitles on page 115 (93) are only in the WB'S!)---------------------------------------------------p 114 (92)Title at top margin: The Island of Forbidden Love KINjirareta KOI no SHIMA was-forbidden love 's island1[panoramic view of a deserted and idyllic beach]Kyousuke: [off] Ouch! achi_! hot !!2[Kyousuke, lying on the sand, shades his eyes from the sun.]3Kyousuke: [sitting up] And it's so hot. sore ni shite mo ATSUI but/still/for-all-that hotnarration: How long has it been? are kara NAN JIKAN tatta-rou---? since-then how-many-hours have-elapsed4[Pov pulls way back and we see Madoka from behind, standing in shallow water, adjusting her bikini bottom--yi yi!]Madoka: Hey, are you only going nee NEte bakkari inai de... to nap...? say only-napping not-be---------------------------------------------------p 115 (93)--TITLE PAGE1[Full-panel full-portrait of Madoka standing in shallow water in bikini.]Madoka: Let's swim! oyogo_!MAIN TITLE (at top) The Island of Forbidden Love KINjirareta KOI no SHIMASUB-TITLE (at bottom) ________ The Key to the Heart Is giragira NATSU no TAIYOU ni Stolen in the Dazzle of dazzle/glare in-the-summer's-sun the Summer Sun. KOKORO no KAGI o heart/feelings 's key (O) NUSUmarete being-stolen My Feelings Almost Laid KIMOchi mo HADAKA ni Bare... feeling/mood too naked-body (IO) sare -sou de... be-removed looking-as-if---------------------------------------------------p 116 (94)1Kyousuke: [blushing] _____ Ha ha! Okay! haha_ so-- da ne!2[Madoka sits next to him on the sand.]narration: Definitely... TASHIka ni--- surely/definitely3[Madoka stares off into the sea.]narration: ...if I came this far, koko made kurya OYOgu shika there's nothing else to to-here (= kureba) to-swim only do but swim... if-come yaru koto nai yo na--- not-give-thing-(to-someone)Kyousuke: fua_4[aerial view of the island]narration ...here on this _KOKO_ (kanji = MUJIN) TOU ja--- uninhabited island... here uninhabited-island---------------------------------------------------p 117 (95)[This and the following 2 pages are black-bordered, denoting a flashback.]1[We get Hikaru's pov as Madoka, Kyousuke and Yuusaku stare back at us...]narration: Hikaru-chan was the one i--dashippe wa hikaru-chan datta! to suggest it! suggesting (T) wasMadoka/Kyousuke/Yuusaku: A race?! kyousou_?!2Hikaru: [smiling] Yeah! sou! like-that3[A view across the waves with Hikaru's arm pointing.]Hikaru: Let's split into 2 groups ano OKI no MUJINTOU and row over to that that-offshore's-uninhabited-island uninhabited island. made #2# -GUMI ni wakarete as-far-as dividing-into-2-groups ______ bo--to de Itte mimasen ka in-boats going visit (?)4Yuusaku: (Good time to show off in (hikaru-chan ni i-- toko miserareru front of Hikaru-chan.) (IO) good occasion be-showing ka mo shirenai na) it-may-be-so/it-is-possibleKyousuke: (What if the boat flips (do-- shou over...) how be-known-as ______ bo--to hikkurikaettara....) if-boat-is-overturnedMadoka: Sounds interesting. omoshiro so-- ne interesting seem-like5Hikaru: [grabbing onto Kyousuke's arm] _______ It's settled! Then I'll KImatta! ja atashi wa da--rin to team up with Darling. settled then I (T) w/Darling KUMUnde joining-with6[Kyousuke looks over at Madoka and Yuusaku ]Kyousuke: ___ Ah! ha_7Kyousuke: S-say. Why don't we draw ne nee sore kujibiki de lots? that by-drawing-lots KImenai? not-decide[Hikaru frowns.]---------------------------------------------------p 118 (96)1[Aerial view looking down on 2 rowboats in the open sea...]narration: The outcome of that was... kujibiki no KEKKA---- drawing-lots 's outcome2[A closeup of one boat...]narration: ...Ayukawa with me... ore wa AYUKAWA to---- I (T) w/AyukawaMadoka: [holding up a sack as Kyousuke mans the oars] What's this bag? naani? kono FUKURO? what this-bag/sack3Madoka: Emergency kit?! kyu--me--yo--gu?!Kyousuke: ___ 'Cause I can't swim... datte ore OYOgenai kara... the-reason-is I not-swim that's-why4[...and a closeup of the other boat.]narration: ...and Yuusaku paired with soshite hikaru-chan wa YUUSAKU to Hikaru-chan. and (T) w/Yuusaku ___ pea ni nari pairHikaru: [shouting, with stern look] Hey! C'mon, go faster! hora motto hayaku koi de! look! faster come! If you get water on me, MIZU kaketara sho--chi shinai I won't forgive you! if-sprinkle-water won't-forgive-you kara ne! that's-why (confirm.)Yuusaku: [shouting] R-right! ha hai_!5Yuusaku: [glancing to his right] (Just watch! I'm going to (mitero! hikaru-chan no MAE de make him look real bad in watch! in-Hikaru's-presence front of Hikaru-chan.) ____ aitsu ni OUINI hazu that-guy (IO) greatly should kakesete-yaru) causing-to-fail(-strong-will)Yuusaku FX: _____ <(sinister) smile!> niko_6Kyousuke: [glancing to his left] (No way am I losing to a (nanno! ICHINENSEI nanka ni first-year student!) not-at-all! by-a-1st-year-student MAkete -tamaru ka) being-defeated-(receiving) (?)Kyousuke FX: _____ <(sinister) smile!> niko_7Kyousuke & Yuusaku: Arg...! uo---_!rowing FX: ____ ____ zabu zabu---------------------------------------------------p 119 (97)1[Facial portrait of Madoka looking off to the side.]narration: ______ Out there, our boat fell tokoro ga ore to AYUKAWA no bo--to wa into the grip of a powerful place (S) I-and-Ayukawa's-boat (T) current. HAYAi SHIO no NAGAre ni fast tide 's flow in notte -shimai falling-into-(a-trap) completedMadoka: We're rapidly heading out dondon OKI ni NAGAsarete-ru wa to sea. rapidly to-the-open-sea be-carried-away2[Kyousuke & Madoka look across the waters at a shrinking Yuusaku & Hikaru.]narration: Our two boats became hikaru-chan-tachi to wa KAIJOU de separated... from-them (T) overseas hanarebanare ni natchatte--- separated (natte-shimatte) completely-becomingHikaru: [waving arms] Sempaaai! Madoka-saaan! sempa--i madoka-sa--n3Madoka: [leaning and pointing] Oh well, let's head for toriaezu ano SHIMA e! that island! immediately to-that-island!4Kyousuke: [paddling like crazy] N-no good. The current da dame da NAGAre ga hayaku tte is too strong! be-no-good flow (S) fast (T) ______ The boat won't do what I bo--to ga yu-- koto kikanai ya! tell it to do! boat (S) disobedient/unyieldingrowing FX: ______ zabua_5[Kyousuke's body flashes with the Power...]narration: Shit! The secret isn't kuso--_ INOCHI ni wa kaerarenai_!! worth the cost of our shit ! living (T) not-be-returning lives!!6[...which energizes his arms.]7Madoka: [falling back as the boat accelerates] Kya! kya_!boat/rowing FX: _____ ______

guton zazaza---------------------------------------------------p 120 (98)1[End of flashback. Madoka and Kyousuke sit on the beach.]narration: And that's why I'm all to yu-- wake de kono SHIMA de alone with Ayukawa on for-that-reason on-this-island this island! AYUKAWA to futari kkiri! w/Ayukawa just-2-peopleMadoka: But I'm worried about them... shikashi hikaru-tachi SHIMPAI da na-- but them worry be2Kyousuke: They'll be all right. daijo--bu da yo all-right be Surely by now they've kitto IMA-goro HAMA ni returned to the beach!! surely about-now to-beach hikikaeshite-ru sa be-returning-to-where-started (strong-emph)Kyousuke FX: _____ niko_3Madoka: ...I suppose. .... soo ne4Kyousuke: [getting up] Well, let's go swimming. saate OYOgo-- ka na well let's-swim I-wondernarration: ______ Well... Besides, we also maa bo--to mo aru koto da shi have the boat, and the sun well boat also have thing be besides is still high... HI mo mada TAKAi shi-- sun too yet high and besides...5Madoka: [standing] Hey, aren't you afraid of ara MIZU kowai n ja nakatta no? the water? hey water afraid there-wasn't6[Madoka gives Kyousuke a faceful.]water FX: _____ basha7Madoka: [running off] C'mon! I'll give you irasshai OYOgi OSHIetageru swimming lessons! come! swim (= OSHIete-ageru) give-lessons-to-you kara_ that's-whyMadoka FX: _____ bashaKyousuke: [chasing after her] Sure! yattara!---------------------------------------------------p 121 (99)1[A tilted view of the beach.]narration: No one else on this white DARE-mo -inai matsu sand and blue water... there's-nobody to-wait-for SHIROna KAIGAN to AOi UMI--- white-beach and blue-sea2-3[Split panel of Madoka and Kyousuke at play.]narration: ___ There's only Ayukawa and iru no wa ore to AYUKAWA dake me. existing (T) me-and-Ayukawa only4[They splash in the water.]narration: The two of us alone on futari kkiri no an island paradise. just-2-people's _________ _paradaisu_ (kanji = MUJINTOU) paradise uninhabited-islandnarration: Somehow, this seems just nan-da-ka -IZEN EIGA da like the movie... somehow earlier movie be mitai to aru na---- be-like with there-is (confirm.)5[Full-profile of Madoka in bikini.]narration: ...where a boy and a girl MUJINTOU de ko-- yatte lived alone together on on-deserted-island like-this doing a deserted island just like this! WAKAi DANJO ga futari kkiri de young man-&-woman (S) w/just-2-people Ikite-yuku HANASHI! go-on-living story---------------------------------------------------p 122 (100)1[Picturesque view of the calm sea, fluffy clouds and setting sun.]narration: Well, if we don't return sate sorosoro KAEra-nakya---- soon... well soon (= KAEra-nakereba) if-not-returningKyousuke: [off] Huh?! are_?!2Madoka: What is it? naani?3Kyousuke: ______ The boat is... Gone. bo--to ga ...nai boat (S) not-thereMadoka: What! e_4Kyousuke: [standing near water's edge] T-that's strange. I'm sure o okashi--na tashika ni kono HEN ni it was right here. strange if-I-remember-correctly at-this-place5Kyousuke: AH! a6Kyousuke: ___ ______ I forgot to tie up the boat. ano TOKI ore bo--to tsunagu no that-time I boat tethering WASUreta n da forgot (explan)narration: ______ Because I used up too much bo--to kogu noni CHIKARA o Power to move the boat, I in-order-to-row-the-boat Power (O) was barely conscious when we arrived here... TSUKAi-sugite SHIMA ni using-too-much to-island tsuita TOKI wa ISHIKI ga when-arrived (T) consciousness (S) mo--ro-- to shite-ta kara na-- with-dim/hazy was-doing that's-why7Madoka: You didn't... ...... akireta exasperated---------------------------------------------------p 123 (101)1[Shot of waves lapping at the sand.]Madoka: [off] What are we going to do? do--sun no yo KAErenai ja nai! We can't go back! what-do not-returning2Kyousuke: (An island like this (konna SHIMA ja MIZU ya KUiMONO probably doesn't have this-kind-of-island water-and-food food or water. nante nai daro-- na) etc. not possibly-be (confirm.) _________ Oh god, this is turning (korya HONTOU no sebaibaru ni into one of those survival goodness! really into-survival-(test) tests!!) natte-kita zo) began-turning-into !!3[Madoka stands silent.]4Kyousuke: [slightly worried] Uh, well, by tomorrow a demo... maa ashita ni nareba ship or something might but... well if-by-tomorrow pass nearby... CHIKAku ni FUNE demo tooru nearby ship-or-something pass-by daro-- shi possibly-be and-besides5Madoka: [exploding] Get real! Are you saying jo--dan ja nai wa ja KON'YA wa it'll be okay to spend the it's-not-a-joke tonight (T) night here?! ii de akasu tte no okay spend-a-night (confirm.) Hikaru and Yuusaku would hikaru-tachi datte SHIMPAI suru yo be worried! they even be-worried6[Kyousuke stands perplexed at her outburst.]7Madoka: [sternly] Anyway... tonikaku..... at-any-rate8Madoka: We have to get back nan-toka KAEra-nakya somehow. managing-somehow-or-other if-not-return- home[Madoka spins about and heads off down the beach.] I'll start looking over atashi MUkou no HOU mite-kuru! this way! I opposite-direction begin-looking---------------------------------------------------p 124 (102)1Kyousuke: Oh! That way's rocky-- a sotchi wa IWA BA de abuna... it's dange... ah! that-way (T) on-rock-place dange...2[He watches her retreating backside.]3narration: Ayukawa... AYUKAWA----Kyousuke: ___ (It's _my_ responsibility...!) (ore no sekinin da .....!) my responsibility be4[Kyousuke looks off across the waters.]5narration: All right, it's do-or-die yoshi! ichikabachika HAMA-made time. If I can just make all-right sink-or-swim as-far-as-beach it to the beach... tadoritsukereba-- if-find-one's-way-to-(beach)-at-lastKyousuke teleport FX: ____ shu_6[A spectacular splash.]re-entry FX: _______ dobu~~n7Kyousuke: Phew. puusurfacing FX: ______ zabua_narration: ______ I-it's hopeless... I used da dame da---- bo--to o koi da up an awful lot of my is-useless boat (O) come Power getting here on the boat. I can't teleport as TOKI ni KANZEN ni CHIKARA o far as the beach! in-time thoroughly Power (O) SHOUMOU shite-ite totemo being-used-up awfully asoko-made tobenai as-far-as-that-place not-leap/fly---------------------------------------------------p 125 (103)1[Someone walks on the sand.]footstep FX: ___ za_2[It's Kyousuke. On the sand he spies the sack Madoka held up on the boat.]3Kyousuke: [flash thoughts!] T-that's right. This! so so-- da kore da_! that's-right this-is We have this!! kore ga atta n da!! this (S) existed (explan)4[Meanwhile, Madoka climbs a vertical rockface over the pounding surf.]wave FX: ______ zabua_5Madoka: (Perhaps there's a house on (moshi-ka-shitara SHIMA no mukou gawa ni the other side of the perhaps on-island's-opp-backside island. Maybe we could borrow their boat...) JINKA ga aru ka mo shirenai house (S) exist it's-possible ______ soshi-tara bo--to ga karireru...) if-accomplish-my-purpose boat (S) be-borrowed6[The rock on which her right foot rests breaks off...]rock FX: _____ gara_7[...and she falls...]Madoka: AH!! a---------------------------------------------------p 126 (104)1[Kyousuke, gathering firewood, turns at the sound of her scream.]Madoka: [off] Kyaa! kya--_2Madoka grasp FX: ___ ga_3[Madoka clings to the cliff by her left hand.]rocks FX: _______ _______ dobu--n dobu--n4Kyousuke: [dropping the wood and running] ! !5Madoka: [eyes closed; a flash thought!] K-Kasuga-kun...!! ka KASUGA-kun...!!6breaking rock FX: _____ boko_7[Madoka plunges past a climbing Kyousuke.]Madoka: Kya! kya_Kyousuke: Ayukawa!! AYUKAWA_!!---------------------------------------------------p 127 (105)1[With a burst of Power, Kyousuke dives off the cliff face after her...]Kyosuke FX: ___ da_2[...catching her in mid-plunge. They plummet head-first.]3[Kyousuke sees that their heads are about to become intimate with Mr. Jutting Rock.]narration: W-we're going to hit!! bu butsukaru_!! strike-(person)-on-head4narration: Please, even if it's only tanomu! a little bit, let there be to-ask-to-take-care-of some Power left!! hon-no SUKOshi demo ii only-a-little-something even okay CHIKARA yo NOKOtte-te -kure_!! Power is-remaining favor-to-self5exploding rock FX: _____ bako_6Kyousuke/Madoka FX: _______ _______ dobu--n dobu--n---------------------------------------------------p 128 (106)1[Later, they lie exhausted on the beach.]gentle wave FX: ___ za_2[Madoka kneels beside him as he lies back on the sand.]Madoka & Kyousuke: ha_ ha_Kyousuke: That was dangerous! abunakatta na! was-dangerous (confirm.)3Madoka: W-why did you do such a na nan-de anna mucha na koto crazy thing! why that-kind-of absurd thing shita no yo! did (confirm./emph.)4Madoka: What if you were killed too! anata made SHIndara dou suru no! you even if-die what to-do5Kyousuke: _____ niko_6Kyousuke: [glowing, looking heroic] ___ But I'm the man! datte ore OTOKO da mon! but I man (is-the-reason)narration: ___ Over here, if I don't koko de ore ga AYUKAWA no koto protect you... at-here I (S) you MAMOn-nakya------- (= MAMOn-nakereba) if-not-protect7[Madoka is momentarily speechless.]8Madoka: [humbly] ...thank you. ...... arigatounarration: ...who else will?! ittai DARE ga MAMOru n da! in-the-world who (S) protect (explan)[The stars twinkle in the sky.]---------------------------------------------------p 129 (107)1[Madoka looks down the beach and sees the fire that Kyousuke had been working on previously.]2[They walk over to it.]Madoka: Oh! A fire... are kono HI... this fire3Kyousuke: [tossing her the sack] See this?! kore sa this-one (you-see!)4Madoka: [looking inside] ______ It's the emergency kit I kore... bo--to de mita KYUUMEIYOUGU!! saw in the boat!! this-one saw-in-boat emergency-kit _______ _______ There's medicine, a lighter, KUSURI / raita-- / kanzume and even some canned food! medicine lighter canned-food made aru! even there-is5Kyousuke: If we keep the fire going ko-- yatte HI o we can keep warm, and doing-like-this fire (O) besides... tayasa-nakereba DAN mo if-not-let-fire-go-out warmth-too toreru shi be-getting and-besides ...it's only for a while. toori ga kari no FUNE ga A passing ship might see as/like (S) temporary ship (S) us and come to help! KIzuite TASUke ni kite kureru noticing come-to-help ka-mo-shirenai! it-may-be-thatfire FX: _____ _____ pachi pachi6[Madoka portrait.]7[Pov from down the beach--they sit side-by-side next to their blazing fire]---------------------------------------------------p 130 (108)1Madoka: It's so quiet! shizuka ne!Kyousuke FX: ____ doki2Kyousuke FX: ________ dokidokiKyousuke: [gazing at her, but Madoka doesn't meet his look] (T-true. This is a deserted (so so-- datta koko wa MUJINTOU island, and it's night... true was this (T) deserted-island Just the two of us...!) nan da shikamo YORU... what-be furthermore night futari kkiri...! only-2-people...!3fire FX: ______ pachi_4Madoka: [flinching away from the flying ember] Ouch! atsui_! hot !!5[She falls against him, her hand on his chest.]6[Romantic moment looms...]---------------------------------------------------p 131 (109)1Madoka: [tenderly] At this moment... kono mama...... just-as-this-is2[Kyousuke is silent.]3Madoka: [clinging close] ...not being rescued zutto TASUkannai no mo wouldn't be too bad. all-through not-be-saved also WARUku nai wa ne not-bad (mild emph/confirm.)4Madoka: [gazing into his averted face] If that should happen... soshitara if-to-happen5[They lock eyes.]6Kyousuke: "If that should happen..."? soshitara...?7Madoka: ...I'd probably... atashi tabun... I most-likely---------------------------------------------------p 132 (110)1[The young would-be lovers stop at the sound of...]Hikaru: [off] Yuusaku, come on... yu--saku kite mina yo-- coming all2[Hikaru and Yuusaku appear by the fire.]Hikaru: See? I told you someone's hora yappari HITO ga iru here. see as-expected people (S) present3Kyousuke: [freaked] H-Hikaru-chan?! hi hikaru-chan?!4Hikaru: [ecstatic] Oh!! are_!!5Hikaru: [executing a flying tackle] Sempaaai!! sempa--i!!Hikaru FX: _____ gaba_6Hikaru: Sure enough, you're alive! yappari Ikite-ta n desu ne! sure-enough were-living (explan)7[Hikaru hugs him tightly about the neck.]narration: W-what's this? What in the na nan da do-- natte n da world's happening?! what's-this what becoming (explan) ittai?! in-the-world---------------------------------------------------p 133 (111)1Hikaru: [stepping back to explain] We drifted ashore on the atashi-tachi kono SHIMA no URA gawa ni other side of this island! we on-this-island's-backside NAGAre-tsuita n desu! drifted-to/was-washed-ashore2[Madoka stands behind Kyousuke, who sits; both are wide-eyed.]3Hikaru: [sadly] ______ We saw your boat drift SEMPAI-tachi no bo--to ga NAGArete kita by, and I thought the your-boat (S) began-drifting two of you fell into the ocean... n de ICHIJI wa atashi futari-tomo temporarily (T) I both-of-you UMI ni OCHI-kkochita no ka to.... in-the-ocean fall-in/sank and4Hikaru: [hugging Kyousuke] But it's so good to see demo yokatta Ikite-ta n desu ne-- you alive. I'm so happy! but was-good was-alive (explan) ureshii happy/glad5[Kyousuke, sweating and in a daze, glances over at Madoka.]Kyousuke FX: ______ chira_6Madoka: [tossing her hair back] Well... I think it's time satte to ...... KAEro-- ka na we went home. After all, well return! I-wonder we found the boat... ______ bo--to mo mitsukatta koto da shi boat also was-found matter be besides7[Madoka storms off as Hikaru hugs Kyousuke. Kyousuke watches wide-eyed as Madoka walks away. Yuusaku sits grimly by the fire.]Hikaru: Ooohh, a campfire is so uwa~~~~ taki BI da nante romantic, don't you think? woodfire be or-such ___________ romanchikku desu ne~~~ romantic is (right?) Since we're here, let's tsuide da kara mo-- #2~3# -KA stay another 2 or 3 days, since-we're-at-it another-2-or-3-days okay, Darling? _______ imasho-- yo nee da--rin let's-stay (emph)Yuusaku: Shit! I thought for sure kuso~~_ aitsu tekkiri he'd croaked. shit ! that-person feel-quite-certain- that SHInda to OMOtta noni died thought-that although7 (inset)Kyousuke: [grimacing/sweating, with Hikaru wrapped around his neck] Ah... Whatever you like! moo katte ni shite kure! already as-you-please doing-(for-me)---------------------------------------------------