Kimagure Orange Road"The Unfortunate Unrequited Love!"Volume 2, Story 8WB Volume 2, Story 1Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation by Craig H. NishidaCompilation by Spencer C. HastingsEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Andrew Wilson Ed Korthof George Robbert Jerry Lee Jay Harvey Station ZebraLast revision : 8-08-94NOTE: [WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()]NOTE: Translation is done from the WB manga. So there may be a fewextra's to those of you not having them.Example: (The subtitles on page 161 are only in the WB'S!)---------------------------------------------------p 7 (161)--TITLE PAGE[Full-page panel of Madoka in tennis outfit posing near the net, racket over her shoulder.]MAIN TITLE (at top) The Unfortunate Unrequited ainiku KATA-OMOi ! Love! unfortunately unrequited-loveSUB-TITLE (at bottom) The Mysterious Eye Is NAZOmeku HITOMI wa Emerald Green; mysterious eye-(lit.,-pupil) (T) _________ emerarudo emerald ________ Temptation Smashed; YUUWAKU sumasshu temptation smash-(as-in-tennis,-etc.) Winning Move for the Heart; KOKORO ni KImete heart/mind/feeling (IO) winning-move/ deciding-factor Love's Maneuvering; KOI no kakehiki love 's maneuvering/ advancing-&-retreating ____ _____ Love Game rabu geemu love game---------------------------------------------------p 8 (162)[The story opens with a flashback.]1[Young Madoka and young Hikaru race towards a tree in the park.]Hikaru: YUU-chaaan!! YUU-cha--n !!2Hikaru: YUU-chaan, hurry up! YUU-cha--n HAYAku oide yo-- _ ! (name) hurry come (emph) (!)3Yuusaku: [lagging far behind] Hikaru-chaan, Madoka-saan, hikaru-cha--n madoka-sa--n MAtte yo-- wait! wait4Madoka: Hikaru: _______ _______ Kya-ha-ha A-ha-ha-ha kyahaha ahahaha5Madoka: [at tree] I'm first. atashi ichiba--n I number-16Hikaru: I'm second. atashi niba--n I number-27Hikaru: Yuu-chan's last! YUU-chan ga biri--_ ! (subj) last (!)---------------------------------------------------p 9 (163)1[At school, Yuusaku gets pummelled by a boy who sits on Yuusaku and punches away.]Yuusaku: wa--_ Waah!Boy 1: [watching] Oh boy. yareyareBoy 2: [watching] That's it. soko da-- that-place is2[Yuusaku takes a blow to the face.]3Hikaru: [running up] Heyy! kora--_4[Boys flee as Hikaru chases]Boy 3: Ah! Look out! It's Hikaru! a ike ne hikaru da Can't beat her! Ah! watch-out is aitsu ni wa kana wa ne-- ya that-person (IO)(T) no-match-forBoy: Run! nigero--_Hikaru: Stop picking on Yuusaku!! YUUSAKU o ijimeru na--_ !! (obj) to-bully/pick-on5Yuusaku FX: __ __ Boo-hoo! u_ u_6Hikaru: [slapping Yuusaku] Boys don't cry, Yuusaku! OTOKO no kuse-ni naku na yo YUUSAKU ! boy(s) even-though (confirm.) to-cry (emph)7[Yuusaku wipes away tears as Hikaru stands wide-eyed.]Yuusaku: ____ But they were making fun datte aitsura boku no koto of me because I play with but those-people of-me you so much. They said I'll turn into a girl. OTOKO no kuse-ni boys even-though hikaru-chan-tachi to bakkari only-with-Hikaru-(&-associates) ASOnde-ru OTOKO onna tte am-playing tomboy (quote/hearsay) ____ baka ni suru n da mon make-a-fool (explanation)---------------------------------------------------p 10 (164)1[Hikaru is silent with eyes wide.]2Hikaru: [wiping Yuusaku's face] Be brave. hara KAO doro ke There's mud on your face. courage face mud3Yuusaku: [blush] FX: arigato... kaa_ Thanks... 4Yuusaku: ____ But I still don't like the demo boku yori hikaru-chan no KATA ga fact that you're stronger but me than (name) 's person than me, Hikaru-chan. TSUYOi nan-te ya da na strong how/what (= iya da) (confirm.) is-unpleasant5Hikaru FX: _____ niko_6Hikaru: If you get stronger, I'll YUU-chan ga motto motto TSUYOkunattara marry you. (S) more if-strong hikaru YUU-chan no o-yome-san ni 's bride (IO) nattageru (= natte-ageru) becoming-(favor-to-you)7Yuusaku: Really?! honto~~_?!Hikaru: Yeah! Promise. un! YAKUSOKU ne promise---------------------------------------------------p 11 (165)1[Yuusaku in martial arts training]narration: ___ And ever since that day, soshite ore wa sono HI kara tada I've tried my hardest to after-that I (T) since-that-day however become stronger! hitasura TSUYOku naru tame ni earnestly strong become in-order-to ________ ganbatta ! strived2[Apparently, we return to the present. On the street, the boys avoidYuusaku in obvious fear.]narration: Now those bullies don't make itsu shika ijime-kKO mo ore no koto fun of me anymore. when only also of-me children-who-bully-others ____ o sore te baka ni shinai that-one not-make-a-fool you ni natta came-about-that3Yuusaku: [sees Hikaru sitting] ___ Hikaru-chan, I'm stronger hikaru-chan ore TSUYOkunatta yo !! now!! I became-strong (emph)4Yuusaku: [notices she's sitting real close to a guy] Agh! Who's that? are sono HITO dare ? (interjection) that-person whoHikaru: [looks back to face Yuusaku] I'm... atashi nee... I (colloq.)5Hikaru: ...going to be his bride!! kono HITO no o-yome-san ni naru no--!! this man 's bride becoming[Kyousuke turns to beam a smile at Yuusaku as Hikaru clings to his arm.Yuusaku turns red.]6Yuusaku: Y- ki...7Yuusaku: [grabbing the smiling Kyousuke by the shirt] Y-you bastard! K-Kasuga!! ki kisama ka KASUGA--_!! you (!) (crude)---------------------------------------------------p 12 (166)[Oops. It was all a Yuusaku daydream.]1Yuusaku: [grabbing teacher by the shirt] Y- ki...2Teacher: What the hell's wrong with nani ga kisama da? HINO... you? Hino... what you is (name) (crude)Girl classmate: Tee hee. kusukusu giggle/titter-soundYuusaku: Ah!! a_!!Classmate: He's growing senile again, aitsu mata ne bokete ya n no huh? that-person again becoming-senile3Yuusaku: Shit! kuso--_4Yuusaku: [standing in the hall] Did it again! mata yatchimatta... again (= yatte-shimatta) did-(finality/regret)5Yuusaku: Hikaru-chan... hikaru-chan...6Yuusaku: [dreaming of Kyousuke and Hikaru again] This too, Kasuga Kyousuke... kore to yuu no mo KASUGA KYOUSUKE... even-this also The things that I go through subete wa minna ano YAROU no sei da!! are all because of you!! everything all that-guy 's fault be---------------------------------------------------p 13 (167)1Kyousuke: Ah-choo! hekushon!2Kyousuke: Something just now sent nani-ka IMA SENAKA ni OKAN ga... chills up my back... something now on-back chilly (S) (i.e., body part)3[Yuusaku walks down the hall.]4[Yuusaku sees someone ahead.]Yuusaku heartbeat FX: _____ doki_5[Hikaru walks down the hall.]6[She stops and her eyes open wide.]7Hikaru: Hey! ara_!Hikaru FX: _____ niko_8Yuusaku: [raises hand in greeting] H-hi! ya yaa_Yuusaku FX: ___ po_---------------------------------------------------p 14 (168)1Hikaru: [overjoyed] SEMPAAAI! SEMpa~~i2[Kyousuke is standing behind Yuusaku; Yuusaku realizes this.]Kyousuke: _____ giku_ Oh! ara!3Hikaru: [pushing a stacked lunch smack into Kyousuke's face] Please look at the lunch I MIte kudasai KYOU no o-bento--_!! made today!! looking please today's-lunch !!!4[a crowd starts to gather]Hikaru: It has 5 stacks! GO DAN maku no UCHI! 5 stacks partition withincrowd FX: Ahh! a~~_5[now surrounded by many students]Kyousuke: Although this happens all MAIDO no koto nagara tereru na-- the time, it's still while-a-common-occurrence get- kinda embarrassing. embarrassed6Classmates (right): They're at it again--and aitsura mappiruma kara yoku yaru it's only early afternoon! they often-engage-in from-morning/early-afternoon yo na (slight-disbelief)Classmates (left): What a show-off! misetsuke yagatte displaying coming-to-be-distasteful7[Hikaru blushes and clings to his arm.]Kyousuke: I-it's not that I'm showing da DARE-mo MIsetsuke yo-- to shite-ru off... everyone be-trying-to-show-off wake ja nai n da kedo na not-the-case-(that) (explan) but It's embarrassing. hazukashii na embarrassed8Kyousuke: [seeing Yuusaku enraged] Ah. a---------------------------------------------------p 15 (169)1Yuusaku FX: ________ buruburu boiling-mad2Kyousuke: That's the guy from aitsu... kinou no yesterday... that-person yesterday (confirm.)3[Yuusaku turns and walks away, staring back at Kyousuke over his shoulder.]4Kyousuke: (Oh boy! What's with him?) (yareyare! dooshita mo oh boy what-is-matter also n daro ittai?) (poss-explan) in-the-world5[An empty school courtyard.]---------------------------------------------------p 16 (170)1[Exterior shot of school.]School bell FX: ___ ___ ___ ___ Ding-dong ding-dong kin kun kan kun2[Kyousuke walks out through the school gate alone.]3[Yuusaku tails him.]4Yuusaku: There's no way Hikaru-chan hikaru-chan ga anna YAROU ni could love a guy like that. (S) with-that-kind-of-guy/rogue Surely I can spare a little horeru hazu wa nai time! fall-in-love no-reason-to-think-that kitto da ma kirete-ru dake nan da! surely time-to-spare it-is be can-cut a-little5Yuusaku: Just wait and see! I'm MItero aitsu no HONSHOU o going to expose his true look! that-person's-real-character character. tsukitome te yaru get-to-the-bottom-of6[Kyousuke looks to the side with a start.]---------------------------------------------------p 17 (171)1[It's just his sisters... Kyousuke stops to chat.]2Yuusaku: _____ Huh! mumu_3-4[Kyousuke cheerfully parts company with his sisters. They wave good-bye.]5Yuusaku: Oh! Aren't those the cute a_ are wa #C# KUMI de twins from Class C?! Ah! those (T) from-C-class ______ kawaii to hyo--ban no futago ja nai ka! twins-of-the-cute-reputation are not (?)! ____ So, at last he shows his yaro-- toutou HONSHOU o true colors. guy/rogue at-last real-character (O) arawashita na-- showed/expressed (confirm.)6Yuusaku: How could he have eyes hikaru-chan-IGAI no ONNA no ko -tomo for anyone other than other-than all Hikaru-chan?! girls (i.e., all girls other than Hikaru) anna ni narenareshiku shagatte to-that-kind-of (displeasure) familiar/too-free __________ He's just interested in shikamo muchakucha kawaii ja nai ka them because they're so besides incredibly-cute are-not (?) incredibly cute! He's just a playboy! aitsu ONNA-ttarashi da na! that-person ladykiller/playboy is7[Exterior shot of a bookstore.]Store name: [partially out-of-frame] --kawa Bookstore ?-KAWA SHOTENBanner at entrance: _____ Shounen Jump SHOUNEN jampu ---------------------------------------------------p 18 (172)1[Inside the bookstore, Kyousuke stands reading a men's magazine; yup, just reading the stories... Ahem.]2[Yuusaku watches, pretending to read a book.]Yuusaku FX: ______ chira_3[Kyousuke puts down the magazine and leaves.]magazine pages FX: _____ pasa_4[Yuusaku rushes over to find out what Kyousuke was reading.]5Yuusaku: (Geez, he must be really (u_ konna ni iyarashi-- HON o... perverted to read a dirty (exclam.) (IO) indecent/lewd (O) magazine like that.) this-kind-of book ______ aitsu so-- to-- sukebe da na) that-person etc. perverted in-that-way is6[Yuusaku's eyes bug out as he flips through the pages of the magazine.]Yuusaku: FX: _____ OH!! oo_!! para_7Yuusaku: _____ (But--this is amazing!!) (shikashi... kore wa sugoi!!) but... this amazingYuusaku FX: Ah... ji--Woman observer: [to companion] Goodness, that little boy-- ya-- ne ano KO KODOMO no kuse-ni what's he reading?! that-child even-though-a-child unpleasant nani mite n no! what-looking (explan)!8Yuusaku: (I'd better buy it...) (kekkyoku KAUtchatta.......) after all (= KAUtte-shimatta) buy-(finality/regret)Cashier: That will be 180 yen. 180 yen ni narimasu consists-(semi-formal)---------------------------------------------------p 19 (173)1[Exterior shot of ABCB.]2[Inside, Kyousuke sits at the counter; Madoka works behind it.]Kyousuke: [drink in hand] Who was that boy who came ano HITOTOSE no OTOKO no KO some time ago? that some-time-ago boy nan-te itta kke how/what went/came3Madoka: Oh, that's Yuu-kun. a-- YUU-kun ne4Kyousuke: ___ Today, I was startled by that aitsu KYOU datte ore no koto guy when he glared at me. that-person even at-me today sugoi KAO shite niramu n da mon na startling to-glare-at face/expression (the-reason-is) coming-to-have4Madoka: Aren't you just getting what JIGOU-JITOKU ja nai ? you deserve? reaping-what-one-sows are-not?5Kyousuke: EH?! eMadoka: But that's probably not the demo manzara demo nai n desho entire reason. but not-wholly being-not (probable- explan)6Madoka: It's because boys like datte hikaru no koto SUki na Hikaru, but she only has the-reason-is liking eyes for a special someone. of-Hikaru OTOKO no KO gaite mo hikaru wa boys coming-to-show-signs-of also Hikaru (T) DARE-ka -san dake o MIteru n da kara someone-(hon.) only see that's-why7Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____ doki_---------------------------------------------------p 20 (174)1Madoka: If you're really a man, then kono hen de OTOKO nara hakkiri act like one! from-area-near-here clearly if-are-a-man sasetara doo!? if-make-do how/what Decide whether you really HONTOU ni hikaru no koto like Hikaru or... really of-Hikaru SUki na no ka sore-tomo liking/fond-of (?) or2Kyousuke: [eyes widen] EH! e3[Madoka's eyes grow wide and she blushes.]4Madoka: [turning her back to Kyousuke] Oh! Not that! I feel sorry a dakara YUU-kun ga kawaiso-- for Yuu-kun because he cares oh! for-that-reason (S) pitiable so much for Hikaru... ja nai anna ni hikaru no koto is-not that-much about-Hikaru OMOtte n noni... thinking although5[Kyousuke sweats and stares wide-eyed at Madoka's back.]narration: Or...?! sore-tomo...?! What in the world was she sono ato no KOTOBA--- going to say after that? that time-after 's words ittai AYUKAWA wa nani o in-the-world (T) what (O) io-- to shita n darou? shall-say did (probable-reason)---------------------------------------------------p 21 (175)1Kyousuke: [mischievous smile] Ayukawa... AYUKAWA...2[Madoka turns and looks at him askance.]3Kyousuke: [with some merriment] Is it only for Yuu-kun's sake hakkiri saseru no wa YUU-kun no tame that I have to decide? clearly to-make-do (T) 's sake dake? onlyMadoka: EH! e4Madoka: Oh! What other reason is ara hoka ni nani ga aru wake? there? oh! besides what unspecified-reason5Kyousuke: Joke, joke. jo--dan jo--dan You're getting pretty good tokoro de chikagoro AYUKAWA at making coffee, aren't you? at-place lately you ________ ko--hi-- Ireru no of-making-coffee umaku natta n ja nai? became-skillful (rhetorical)6Madoka: Oh? Thanks. soo? arigato7Madoka: [with a smile] ____ ____ But flattery will get you demo... goma suttatte roha ni wa nowhere! but even-if-flattering (T) gratis/for-free nara nai kara ne--_! if-are-not that's-why (confirm.-&- friendliness)Kyousuke: Oh, rats! Just another a--a! mo-- chotto datta noni naa--_! moment longer! Oh! another was (boy!) moment in-order-to---------------------------------------------------p 22 (176)1[Yuusaku peers in through ABCB's window to see the two in good cheer.]2Yuusaku: W-what?! That guy's so na nan daa ano YAROU madoka-san friendly with Madoka-san, what's-this that-guy/rogue too! tomo anna ni SHITAshiku shi yagatte! friend that-much friendly (unpleasant)Yusaku FX: ji~~3Yuusaku: Just as I thought. yappari hikaru-chan wa ano Hikaru-chan is being just-as-I-thought (T) that deceived by that playboy. ONNA-tarashi ni damasareteta n da playboy/flirt (IO) deceived-by (explan) All right, just wait and yo--shi mitero!! see!! all-right watch!!4Yuusaku: [walking away from ABCB] But... I thought Madoka-san shikashi... madoka-san motto kowai was meaner than that... but more scary Ika to OMOtte-ta kedo... had-thought-that however5Yuusaku: I've never seen her with such anna ni yasashii KAOtte a nice expression before. to-that-extent easy/nice expression HAJImete MIta na for-the-1st-time saw (confirm.)6Yuusaku: When Madoka-san was a child, kodomo no koro no madoka-san tte she never smiled cheerfully when-a-child 's Madoka (T) like that! anna TANOshi-so-- na EGAO tte that-kind-of-seemingly-cheerful (T) smiling-face sou wa MIse-nakatta yo na like-that not-shown (emph.)---------------------------------------------------p 23 (177)1[The next day...]Kyousuke: [off] What do you want... nan no YO da yo what 's business be (!)2[Kyousuke and Yuusaku stand in what appears to be the school courtyard,near a drinking fountain.]Kyousuke: ...at a place like this? konna TOKORO ni yobiDEshitari shite at-this-kind-of-place summoning-over-(altern.)3Yuusaku: ___ I saw it. ore... MIchimatta n da I (= mite-shimatta) (explan) saw4Kyousuke: Eh? e5Yuusaku: I'm talking about yesterday, o-mae ga kinou madoka-san to when you and Madoka-san were you (S) yesterday with-Madoka enjoying yourselves at ABCB. _______ abakabu tte TOKORO de ABCB (T) when futari de TANOshi-so-- ni with-2-people seemingly-cheerful HANAshite-ru tokoro o na be-talking-right-now (confirm.)6Kyousuke: Oh! a7narration: Why did it have to be this yori ni yotte ya na yatsu ni guy! than by-means-of unpleasant by-jerk ni MIrare-chimatta na---- _ was-seen (confirm.) !---------------------------------------------------p 24 (178)1Yuusaku: You were cheating on Hikaru, yappari o-mae hikaru-chan no koto weren't you?! just-as-I-thought you on-Hikaru taburaka-shite-ita n da na were-cheating (explan) (confirm.)2Kyousuke: T-that's not true! so sore wa chigau yo that-is to-differ (emph.)Yuusaku: What do you mean, not true?! nani ga chigau _?! what to-differ !3Yuusaku: [rubbing his fists together] No more . I can't mo-- yurusan handle this anymore... any-longer not-forgive dekireba TSUKAi-taku wa nakatta ga... if-able to-not-handleYuusaku knuckles FX: _____ _____ boki_ biki_4Kyousuke FX: _____ gowa_5[Kyousuke looks around and sees a cute girl.]Kyousuke FX: _____ chira_narration: H-he's beyond my strength to ko korya _CHIKARA_ nuki defeat without using the this Power defeat Power. (kanji = NOURYOKU) ability/faculty de wa totemo MURI da na---- in-that-case is very beyond-one's-strength6Yuusaku FX: [rushing to attack] Arrggg! uo-------------------------------------------------------p 25 (179)1Kyousuke: [pointing to the side, at the girl] H-hey! Look at that! o oi are o MIro! hey that look!Yuusaku: [stopping in mid-punch] Huh?! e_?!2narration: I don't know who you are, DARE da ka SHIranai poor girl! But I'm sorry-- who is haven't-come-to-know I need a little help! _____ _____ kedo gomen! kawai KO-chan but sorry unfortunate-girl chotto TASUkete ne _! a-little help (confirm.) (!)3 _____Girl: skirt FX: kya_ basa_ Kya! 4Yuusaku: Oh, wow!! o wa--_!!Kyousuke: Now's my chance to... IMA no uchi ni... now 's time toKyousuke sneak-away FX: sorosoro5Kyousuke: [turning to face Hikaru] AH! a_6Hikaru: What are you doing, Sempai?! nani shite-ru n desu ka SEMPAI?! what be-doing (explan) (?)7Hikaru: [smiling as she sees Yuusaku] Oh! You. are_ antaYuusaku heartbeat FX: ______ dokin_!---------------------------------------------------p 26 (180)1Kyousuke: [watching Hikaru talk to Yuusaku] (D-damn, I'm done for...) (ma mazui kono mama ja...) embarrassing this moment beingHikaru: It's Yuusaku! YUUSAKU ja nai![Yuusaku is blushing furiously.]2Kyousuke: [covering face with hands] _______ He's going to blab about kinou no abakabu no koto yesterday at ABCB! yesterday's ABCB-matter shaberare-chau! (= shaberarete-shimau) spread-gossip-(finality/regret)3Kyousuke: [looking up] Huh? re?4Yuusaku: [still blushing/fidgeting] Ah... Um... aiya sono... oh thatYuusaku FX: ________ mojimoji5Yuusaku: [turns and runs off] G'bye! seinara--_![Kyousuke collapses, stunned.]Kyousuke pratfall FX: da_Hikaru: kusukusu6Kyousuke: [still floored] Wha! What the hell?! na_ nan da aitsu?! ! what that-person-(crude)---------------------------------------------------p 27 (181)1Kyousuke: [back on his feet] W-what in the world? na nan na no ittai? aitsu wa... That guy... what in-the-world that-personHikaru: Yuusaku has been like that YUUSAKU tte MUKASHI kara a-- nan desu yoo since we were little! (T) from-long-ago that-is like-that (emph)2Kyousuke: Since you were little...?! MUKASHI kara a--...?!3[Cut to...]Yuusaku: [running] I-it's hopeless. I get da dame da hikaru-chan no MAEda so nervous in front of is-futile in-front-of Hikaru-chan. to agatchatte (= agatte-shimatte) getting/being-nervous-(regret) I become speechless... nan ni mo ienaku natte-shimau... I'm so shy! what also not-saying have-become ___ ____ ore tte shai! I (T) shyYuusaku FX: kaa~~4[Kyousuke sweats as Hikaru beams and gets close...]narration: At least he didn't reveal toriaezu wa barenakutte anything (for now). for-the-present not-revealing yokatta yokatta! was-goodHikaru FX: _____ _____ niko_ niko_5[Hikaru gazes meaningfully into his eyes.]Hikaru: _______ Darling... da--rin... moshi-ka-shite atashi no koto Are you jealous perhaps? perhaps of-me yaite kurete-ru n desu ka ? be-making-jealous (explan) (?)<"yaite kurete-ru" is literally "be doing the favor of burning">Kyousuke: Yah...?! ya_...?!6Hikaru: [jumping, arms around his neck] Don't worry. I would never DAIJOUBU atashi ZETTAI NO cheat on you!! okay I absolute UWAKI shinai kara _!! faithless-love not-do that's-why !narration: That was not the least bit shikashi---- aitsu surprising to me! but that-person IGAINA to sho-- mo surprising if poss-be? and nai yatsu da na---_ not guy/gal-(crude) be (!)---------------------------------------------------