Kimagure Orange Road"Jealousy Rain"Volume 2, Story 7WB Volume 1, Story 15Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Matthew Klippenstein George Robbert Jordan LampeLast revision : 02-07-95Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.eduNOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()NOTE: Translation is done from both the normal and WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having one or the other. Example: The subtitles on pages 326-327 (140-141) are only in the WB's!---------------------------------------------------p 325 (139)1[Exterior shot of ABCB.]Hikaru: [off] See ya. ja nesign: Pub & Restaurant ABCB #PUB & RESTAURANT# abakabutitle: _________ ____ Jealousy Rain jerashi-- - rein2[Hikaru and Kyousuke walk home.]Hikaru: [clinging to his arm] _______ Okay, time to go home, sa KAErimasho da--rin! Darling! let's-go-homenarration: As usual, I left ABCB with itsu-mo no you ni hikaru-chan to Hikaru-chan when... usual like with-Hikaru _______ abakabu o deta TOKI------ ABCB (O) left time3Kyousuke: H-hey, Hikaru-chan. chi chotto hikaru-chanHikaru FX: beta~~~_4[Kyousuke notices something over his shoulder.]narration: Somehow... nan-da-ka I felt someone staring SENAKA ni sasuyo-- na daggers at my back... the-back (IO) biting/sharp SHISEN o kanji---- a-look (O) a-feeling/impression5narration: When I turned my head to furiKAEte-miru to soko ni------ look... when-try-and-turn-around there (IO)6[A boy stands staring.]narration: ___ There was a guy watching ore no koto MIte-iru yatsu ga ita! me! about-me is-watching that-guy (S) there---------------------------------------------------p 326-327 (140-141)--TITLE PAGES[Pages 326-327 are a double-page title-page spread. Hikaru on the left page and Madoka on the right. Both stand with umbrellas, looking back cheerfully at us over their inside shoulders. The skies are overcast.]MAIN TITLE (at top) _________ ____ Jealousy Rain jerashi-- - reinSUB-TITLE (at bottom) They're Stopped by a Call: OKUte-iku yo to yobitomerarete "I'll Walk You Home," and go-and-escort (quote) be-calling-to-stop When They Turn, You Give an Embarrassed Laugh... SENAKA de choppiri tere at/in-the-back a-bit feel-awkward/ embarrassed WARAi... smile/laughter/laugh They Like the You Who Stands AME ni tatazumu kimi ga SUki in the Rain. rain (IO) stand/stop you (S) be-liked---------------------------------------------------p 328 (142)1Hikaru: What's wrong, Sempai...? do-- shita n desu kaa SEMPAI...2Kyousuke: That guy... aitsu..........[Hikaru also turns to look.]3Yuusaku: [zipping around a corner] Oops! otto!Yuusaku FX: ___ sa_4Kyousuke: ___ Someone was watching me. DARE-ka ore no koto MIte-ta somebody about-me was-watchingHikaru: Huh? e5[They return to the corner to look around.]Hikaru: But there's no one here! DARE-mo inai ja nai desu ka _ nobody-here is (?)!Kyousuke: Huh? That's weird... are okashii na--6[There is an open manhole just around the corner.]Yuusaku: [off] .......... ..........7Yuusaku: [sitting in water with a cute rat on his knee] He's... aitsu ga... Kasuga Kyousuke, eh? KASUGA KYOUSUKE ka (musing-to-self)---------------------------------------------------p 329 (143)1[Exterior shot of a school building. It starts to rain.]2[Kyousuke stands alone under a building, sheltered from the rain.]3Madoka: _____ Why are you standing around nani o bo--tto tsuttatte n no with a blank look on your what (O) vacantly standing face?4Madoka: Aren't you going home? KAEnnai?[Kyousuke looks up, nervously.]5Kyousuke: [forced smile] I'm not standing around betsu ni SUki de tsuttatte-ru because I *want* to... -particularly liking be-standing wake ja nai n da kedo.......... is-not-reason (explan) but6Madoka: [looking back over her shoulder] I didn't think it possible masaka kono tsuyu TOKI ni to be so lame as to forget impossible at-this-rainy-season-time to bring an umbrella during ____ the rainy season... kasa o wasureru hodo umbrella (O) be-forgetting extent TANJUN ja nai to OMOtta kedo simple-minded be-not thought-that but But it's something like doumo sono yo-- ne that, hmm? somehow like-that (rhet)7Kyousuke: [wincing] It's like that. sono yo-- desu8[Madoka smiles...]---------------------------------------------------p 330 (144)1[...and opens her umbrella.]umbrella FX: ___ ba_2Madoka: If you want, why don't we yokattara haitte-kanai? share mine? if-was-okay not-come-under3Kyousuke: [smiling] Eh?! Sure it's okay?! e_ i-- no?!4Madoka: [cheerfully] Please do. But using my doozo sono kawari umbrella will cost you. (if-you)-please that-substitute/exchange ____ atashi no kasa TAKAku tsuku wa yo my-umbrella prove-to-be-expensive ________ One cup of coffee isn't ko--hi-- IPpai ja kikanai going to be enough. coffee one-cup not-accede-to kara ne that's-why5[They walk off together.]Kyousuke: _______ Thank you! sankyu_6Hikaru: [off] SEMPAAAI! sempa~~i!7[Madoka and Kyousuke suddenly move off in opposite directions. Kyousuke ends up in the rain.]Madoka/Kyousuke FX: _____ sasa_---------------------------------------------------p 331 (145)1Hikaru: [under an umbrella] Huh? Madoka-san, are you are madoka-san mo IMA o-KAEri also going home now? too now go-home desu ka are (?)2Hikaru: What's the matter, Sempai? do-- shita n desu kaa SEMPAI Do you like the rain? AME SUki nan desu ka? rain like what is (?)Kyousuke FX: bisshori3Kyousuke: [forced laughter] ______ Th-that's it. Ha ha ha. so so-- nan da yo hahaha like-that what be ___ I have strange tastes. ore tte hen na SHUMI ga aru no I (T) strange-taste (S) haveHikaru: [sternly] That's a taste I can't anmari KANSHIN dekinai really admire. -much admiration cannot SHUMI desu ne taste/liking that-is4[Kyousuke notices something up above.]5[It's Yuusaku--watching from a 2nd-floor window of the school building.]6Kyousuke: (It's him again!) (mata aitsu da!) again that-guy it-is7Yuusaku contemplation FX: ji-------------------------------------------------------p 332 (146)1[Kyousuke's pov of his 2 lovely girlfriends. They smile and chat.]2[Kyousuke's pov of Yuusaku, staring at the 2 girls.]3narration: Huh? That guy's looking are? aitsu ga MIte-ru no wa------ at... huh that-guy (S) is-watching4narration: ...Ayukawa?! AYUKAWA------?!5Hikaru: I still have a little atashi chotto mada GAKKOU no YOUJI school business to take I a-little still school-business care of. aru kara have that's-why Sempai, please give up your SEMPAI hen na SHUMI wa yamete strange tastes and use this strange-taste (T) quit/give-up umbrella! ____ kono kasa TSUKAtte-kudasai! this-umbrella please-use[She extends it to him...]6[...and runs back into the building, waving back at them with a smile. Madoka waves back nervously.]Kyousuke: Th-thanks... a arigato..........---------------------------------------------------p 333 (147)1[Kyousuke looks back up at Yuusaku.]2narration: That guy... Still looking aitsu---- mada kotchi MIte-ru this way. that-guy still this-way be-looking3Madoka: What? What are you looking naani doko MIte n no? at? what where looking[She looks up...]4[...and sees Yuusaku.]Madoka: Th-that boy. a ano KO5Yuusaku: [wide-eyed and blushing] (Ah!) (a)6[He walks away from the window.]Yuusaku: ___ Hmmph. fun7Kyousuke: Who is he? DARE? aitsu who that-guyMadoka: It's Yuu-kun. YUU-kun yo He's Hino Yuusaku, a KINJO no KO de neighborhood boy, who I'm neighborhood 's boy in sure should be in first-year now. HINO YUUSAKU tte iu no IMA TASHIka called now surely ICHI NENSEI no hazu yo first-year likelihood---------------------------------------------------p 334 (148)1[Shot looking up at an electric pole and the heavy, overcast skies.]Kyousuke: [off] So, a childhood friend? ja osananajimi? then childhood-friend/playmate2Madoka: [cheerfully] Well, I guess it's like ma-- sonna tokoro ka na that. that-kind-of-case I-wonder When we were little, the chitchai TOKI hikaru to SANNIN de three of us, including when-teeny-weeny w/Hikaru 3-persons Hikaru, often played together... yoku ASOnda kke often played (musing)Kyousuke: Hmm. fu--n3Madoka: [merrily] I had a good relationship atashi ano KO to wa with him--just like brother I with-that-boy (T) and sister. kyo--dai mitai ni naka seeming-like-siblings relationship yokatta n da was-good (explan) Now I remember. We often so-- so-- yoku issho ni o-furo bathed together, too. often together bath nan-ka mo haittari shita na-- somewhat too joined-(and)4Kyousuke: B-BATHED?! o_ o-furo_?!5Madoka: [wide-eyed] What kinda face are you nan-te KAO shite n no yo making?! what! face/expression makingKyousuke: Eh?! e6Madoka: We were little, of course! mochiron chiisai koro yo of-course small indeedKyousuke: ______ Oh, th-that's right. a so so-- da yo ne hahaha Ha ha ha.7[They walk off in the rain.]narration: Like brother and sister, kyo--dai mitai... ka------ huh... siblings seem-like (talk-to-self)---------------------------------------------------p 335 (149)1[Exterior night shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]2[Kyousuke visualizes Yuusaku.]Kyousuke: (But he was certainly looking (demo aitsu wa tashika ni at Ayukawa!) but that-guy (T) certainly AYUKAWA no ho-- o MIte-ita!) Ayukawa's-direction (O) was-looking (That's not the sort of look (are wa oto--to ga a kid brother gives to a that-(one) (T) little-brother (S) big sister!) ane o MIru you na big-sister (O) to-look appear ME ja nakatta zo) attention/pov was-not !!3[Kyousuke sits on the floor, with his back against the side of his bed.]Kyousuke: (Besides the fact they were (sore ni osananajimi tte childhood friends, how long besides childhood-friends (T) has it been since they were together...) koto wa NANNEN mo MUKASHI kara matter (T) how-long even since-former AYUKAWA to ISSHO ni ita koto ni naru...) together-with-Ayukawa went become-thing ___ (He knows a side of Ayukawa (ore no SHIranai AYUKAWA no ICHIMEN mo that I don't know!) I (S) not-know 's one-side shitte-iru n da!) be-knowing (explan)Kyousuke's T-shirt: Harada HA RA DA crest-of- HIRO/TADA/YUKI/SATO/OU/HITO wave prince/lord/duke 4[He visualizes Madoka and Yuusaku soaking in the bath.]narration: No, not just one side, but iya ICHIMEN dokoroka------ *all* sides!! no one-side not-at-all subete da_!! wholly/all be5Kyousuke: THAT BASTARD!! ano yarou_!!6[He visualizes Yuusaku again.]narration: Maybe Ayukawa's the one he... aitsu moshi-ka-shite that-guy maybe AYUKAWA no koto o------ about-Ayukawa (O)---------------------------------------------------p 336 (150)1[View of the sign outside classroom 3-A.]Yuusaku: [off] Hey, you. chotto anta2[In the hall, Kyousuke is stopped from entering the classroom by Yuusaku.]Kyousuke: Eh? e3Yuusaku: You're in the same class anta AYUKAWA-SEMPAI to ONAji as Ayukawa-sempai, right? you with-Ayukawa same ______ kurasu daro class poss-be4narration: Ah, this guy... a koitsu----5Yuusaku: Is Ayukawa-sempai here? AYUKAWA-SEMPAI iru ka? is-here (?)Kyousuke: Eh?! Ah, I think she's e_ a iru to OMOu kedo here... ! is-here think-that but6Kyousuke: (What's this? For an (nan da koitsu KAKYUUSEI underclassman, this guy what's-this this-guy underclassman sure talks cocky...) no kuse shite namaiki na although doing impudent/presumptuous KUCHI no kikikata shi-yagatte......) hearing-from-mouth doing-(contempt)Kyousuke FX: _____ muka_7Yuusaku: Hey, tell her Hino wants to chotto HINO ga HANASHI ga aru tte speak to her. (S) speak there-is tsutaete-kure tell/convey-(favor-to-me/command)Kyousuke: ........... All right... .......... wakatta8Kyousuke/Yuusaku stare FX: _____ _____ bachi bachi curse/divine-punishment---------------------------------------------------p 337 (151)1Madoka: Huh? Yuu-kun. ara YUU-kun2Madoka: [smiling] You look as good as ever. aikawarazu GENKI so-- ne as-ever/as-usual look-like-fineYuusaku: Yes! It's been a long hai_ o-hisashiburi desu while, Madoka-san! ! 1st-time-in-long-while is madoka-san!3Madoka: It's unusual. You asking mezurashii wa ne atashi ni YOU to see me. rare/unusual (T) me (IO) business nan-te somesuch4Yuusaku: [glaring at Kyousuke] Um, there's something I want chotto madoka-san ni kikitai koto ga to ask you, Madoka-san. (IO) want-to-ask thing (S) aru n desu there-is (explan)Yuusaku FX: _____ chiraKyousuke heartbeat FX: _____ doki_5Kyousuke: (Something he wants to ask...) (kikitai koto...)6Madoka: ? ?Kyousuke/Yuusaku stare FX: _____ _____ bachi bachi7Yuusaku: Uhh, please come with me chotto mukou made tsukiatte-kudasai over there. opp-dir to go-(to-a-place)- with-me-(please)Madoka: .......... Okay. .......... i-- wa yo[The two walk off.]8narration: S-sure enough, Ayukawa's the a aitsu yappari AYUKAWA no koto---- one he... that-guy sure-enough about-Ayukawa---------------------------------------------------p 338 (152)1[View looking up at the rooftop of a school building.]2[Kyousuke's pov from the stairwell door of Madoka and Yuusaku chatting together on the rooftop.]3[Yuusaku laughs.]4[Madoka laughs.]5Kyousuke: (Shit... What the heck are (kuso-- ittai nani they talking about? shit what-in-the-world HANASHI shite n da speaking (explan) Even Ayukawa seems happy. AYUKAWA mo AYUKAWA da yo Dammit.) even is __________ tanoshisou ni chikusho--) seem-joyful damnnarration: Certainly, being an old TASHIka ni osananajimi tte childhood friend helps... certainly childhood-friend (T) toku da yo na----- advantageous Because he's known the aitsu wa NANNEN mo MUKASHI no Ayukawa from long ago, too. that-guy (T) how-long too former AYUKAWA o SHItte-ru n da kara (O) has-known (explan) that's-why6[Yuusaku suddenly becomes vehement.]7[Madoka goes wide-eyed with surprise.]8[Kyousuke blushes and sweats.]narration: Wh-what? What did he say na nan da nani itta n darou just now? what's-that what said (poss-explan) IMA---- now---------------------------------------------------p 339 (153)1[Yuusaku heads off towards the stairs, leaving Madoka behind.]2Kyousuke: _____ (Oh no! He's coming this (yabai! kotchi ni kuru) way.) done-for this-way comeKyousuke teleport FX: ____ shu_3[Yuusaku descends the stairs.]Yuusaku footstep FX: ___ ___ ko_ ko_4narration: Allll right. What say I yo--shi itcho odokashite-yaru ka! give him a scare?! "one-game" frighten-(favor-to-him) <*> (?) <*used to introduce a comment suggesting something.>[Kyousuke flashes with the Power.]5[At the top of the stairs, behind Yuusaku, some buckets begin to move.]bucket FX: _____ koro_bucket labels: For Fire Prevention BOUKA YOU fire-prevention business6[Yuusaku looks back to see the buckets falling toward him.]bucket FX: ____ ____ gara gara7Yuusaku: [tumbling down the stairs] WAHHH! wa--_[Kyousuke stands nonchalantly at the bottom of the stairs.]---------------------------------------------------p 340 (154)1Yuusaku: Ow-ow-ow. teteteKyousuke: [off] ________ Ha ha ha ha. hahahaha2[The two glare at each other.]3Yuusaku: What's so funny? nani ga okashii what (S) amusing/funnyKyousuke: Nothing. betsu ni4Yuusaku: [glaring] You're an eyesore! mezawari da na! an-eyesore be5Kyousuke: [glaring] So are you! sotchi koso! that-way indeed6Yuusaku: [smiling] ___ I'm not one who likes ore BOURYOKU wa anmari SUki ja nai excessive violence. I violence (T) too-much like am-not n da (explan) Why do you think that is? do--shite da to OMOu? why is think-that7[With his right arm he demolishes a classroom door.]Yuusaku FX: ____ baki---------------------------------------------------p 341 (155)1Yuusaku: [looking at his fist] Oops, slipped! otto ike ne! oops go Did it again. mata yatchimatta ze again (= yatte-shimatta) did-(finality/regret)2Yuusaku: [smirking ominously] ____ In this way I can usually kore de itsu-mo AITE ni DAI kega do great damage to my with-this usual companion great-wounds opponents. sasete-shimau n da yo naa make-do-(finality/regret) (explan) I'm not one who does karate namajikka KARATE nan-ka yaru half-heartedly! halfheartedly somewhat do mon ja nai nee! person am-not (rhet)Kyousuke FX: zo~~~~_3Yuusaku: ___ If possible, please don't dekireba ore ni kono MIGITE o make me use this right if-possible me (IO) this right-hand (O) hand of mine. TSUKAwasenai de hoshii mon da naa not-make-use want person be[Kyousuke is wide-eyed and aghast.]Kyousuke FX: taji_4Yuusaku: [spinning about] See ya. ja na5Yuusaku: [looking back] Oh yeah, I forgot to say... so-- da Ii WASUreta kedo...... to-say forgot butKyousuke heartbeat FX: doki_6Yuusaku: [angrily] I *will* take her back from omae kara kitto ano KO o you!! from-you surely that-girl (O) torikaeshite miseru kara na!! take-back show that's-why---------------------------------------------------p 342 (156)1[Kyousuke is surprised, but angered...]2[...and he watches Yuusaku walk away.]3narration: Th-that guy... a aitsu----4[A hand comes to rest on his shoulder.]Madoka: [off] Hi! yo_Madoka touch FX: ___ ponKyousuke: Wah!! wa_!!5Kyousuke: Ayukawa... AYUKAWA...Madoka: What kinda face are you nante KAO shite n no yo making?! what! face/expression making6Madoka: What are you gonna do, do-- suru no? KASUGA-kun Kasuga-kun? what do7Kyousuke: "Wh-what am I gonna do," she do do-- suru tte asks.8Madoka: [smiling] He told me he's in love, ano KO yappari SUki da tte itta wa after all. that-boy after-all liking said-thatKyousuke: EH!! e!!---------------------------------------------------p 343 (157)1Kyousuke: [flash thought] H-he likes... Ayukawa... su SUki tte AYUKAWA......2Madoka: From the way it looks, it's ano bun ja do--yara HONKI pretty serious. the-way-it-looks somehow serious mitai da yo seem-to-beKyousuke: EH!! e_!!3Madoka: [eyes closed, smiling] He really seems to like hikaru no koto Hikaru. about-Hikaru HONKI de SUki mitai in-seriousness seems-to-like4[Kyousuke goes wide-eyed.]5Kyousuke: Hikaru-chan?! hikaru-chan?!6Madoka: He says he's liked Hikaru ano KO MUKASHI kara hikaru no koto for a long time. that-boy from-long-ago about-Hikaru SUki datta n da tte has-liked (explan) (hearsay)---------------------------------------------------p 344 (158)1Madoka: [arms crossed] Just now, he came to ask me sakki wa atashi ni about your relationship to a-little-while-ago (T) me (IO) Hikaru... KASUGA-kun to hikaru no KANKEI and 's relation kiki ni kita n da kedo...... came-to-ask (explan) but I'm not quite sure what's atashi mo nante KOTAete ii ka going on, either. I too somewhat responding yoku wakannakatta wa fully did-not-know2Kyousuke: Th-then. ji jaa It isn't you... AYUKAWA no koto ja... about-Ayukawa 3Kyousuke: [beaming] Ohhhhh! I'm glad! naan da yokatta!4Madoka: HUH?! e5Madoka: [demure] What's to be glad about? nani ga yokatta no? what (S) was-goodKyousuke: ___ Because I was convinced that datte ore tekkiri aitsu ga you were the one he... because I felt-certain that-guy (S) AYUKAWA no koto... about-Ayukawa6[He slaps a hand over his mouth.]Kyousuke: ___ AH! ha_7[Madoka smiles a smile of contentment.]---------------------------------------------------p 345 (159)1narration: Somehow, I was greatly aitsu no nerai ga AYUKAWA ja nakatta relieved that Ayukawa that-guy's-object (S) was-not wasn't the object of his ___ affections! koto ni naze-ka hotto shita thing (IO) somehow was-with-great-relief ___ ore! deshita I was2Kyousuke: [wincing] (Well... In any case, I'm (maa nan ni se yo yokatta yokatta) glad...) no-matter-what was-good3Madoka: C'mon, it's time for class. saa JUGYOU yo mou lesson already/soon/nownarration: But... Somehow, things shikashi------ nan-da-ka yayakoshii were turning into a tangled but somehow tangled web...! koto ni natte-kita zo----_ began-turning-into-thing[They walk down the hall.]4Kyousuke: [looking off-panel] AH! a5Madoka: What? naani?6Kyousuke: Rain again... mata AME ga again rain (S)[Side-by-side, they both stop to look out the window.]narration: Does Hikaru-chan know about hikaru-chan wa aitsu no KIMOchi o that guy's feelings? (T) that-guy's feelings (O) SHItte-iru no desho-- ka? be-knowing (poss-explan) (?)---------------------------------------------------