Kimagure Orange Road"The Two Snapshots"Volume 2, Story 6WB Volume 1, Story 14Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose                                 Craig Nishida                                 Spencer Hastings                                 Matthew Klippenstein                                 Leo Hourvitz                                 Wes ShullLast revision : 02-07-95Comments?  Corrections?  Suggestions?  Please send them to:     kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.eduNOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()NOTE: Translation is done from both the normal and WB manga, so there may      be a few extras to those of you not having one or the other.      Example: The subtitles on page 303 (117) are only in the WB's!---------------------------------------------------p 303 (117)--TITLE PAGE[A strip of 35-mm film runs diagonally across the panel.  Each frame of the film is identical and shows the three--Hikaru winking and flashing a victory sign, Kyousuke wincing and Madoka looking on at Hikaru, uncomfortably.]MAIN TITLE (at top)                            _______  The Two Snapshots               NIMAI no     sunappu                                  two/double   snapshotsSUB-TITLE (at bottom)                       ______  Printing on the Film of         MUNE  no  firumu  ni   YAki tsukete...  My Heart...                     heart 's  film   (IO)  printing/branding                                                              __________  A Heart-Throbbing Summer-       tokimeki  -  NATSU   IRO    fotogerafu!  Tinged Photograph!              throbbing-   summer  color  photograph                                  <of-heart>---------------------------------------------------p 304 (118)1[Shot of a tree-lined, downtown thoroughfare.]man: [off]  Uh-hmm, I'm at a loss what      u--n  komarimashita    ne  to do...                              was-at-a-loss/was-at-wit's-end2[Exterior shot of "Cafe ZuBoN".]<Translation note:  "Zubon" means "pair-of-trousers/breeches"--from the French, "jupon".>Takashi: [off]  I have a policy against         watashi wa   JINBUTSU wa   toranai  taking photos of people,        I       (T)  person   (T)  not-take-(picture)  but...                                  SHUGI   nan  desu  ga...                                  policy  what is    but3[Interior shot.  Takashi sits at a table, across from a man, possibly an editor.]man: [smiling]  Could you somehow see your      soko        o   nantoka  onegai shimasu yo  way around that policy?         that-place (O)  somehow  could-you-do4[Takashi looks on, without expression.]man: [off]  By all means, this project      kono KIKAKU wa  zehi       KASUGA-SENSEI ni  needs you, Kasuga-sensei.       this-plan   (T) by-all-means            (IO)                                  onegai   shitai         n desu                                  request  want-to-make  (explan)5man:  I mean, Sensei, your pictures   iya--  SENSEI no SHASHIN     wa  are--how do you say...                        's photography (T)                                  nan chu--      ka                                  (= nan to iu)  (talk-to-self)                                     called-that  Truly marvelous.                jitsu ni         subarashii                                  truly/extremely  wonderful/splendid  Allowing yourself to take       FUUKEI     bakari  torasetoku no     wa  only landscape photos,          landscape  just    (= torasete-oku)  (T)  frankly speaking, is a loss                           letting-take-(a-photo)-  to the photography world.                              (for-future's-sake)                                  hakkiri itte      SHASHIN      KAI no                                  speaking-plainly  photography  world/circles                                  SONSHITSU  desu yo--                                  a-loss     is---------------------------------------------------p 305 (119)1man: [waving as he leaves]  Then, you'll do it?!            ja    onegai shimasu  ne!                                  then  request-to-do   (rhet)2Takashi: [still seated]  Oh well...  I've taken the      yareyare   to--to--    hikiukete-shimatta!  assignment after all!           oh-boy     after-all/  see-to-it-(finality/                                             in-the-end               regret)3Takashi: [exiting] (However...  Saying I'll do      (shikashi...  hikiuketa wa  i--   kedo...  it is all very well...           but/however  accepted      fine  but                                               ______  But what about the              kanjin no    moderu wa   dou shita  all-important model?)           essential/   model  (T)  what-happened                                  main/most-important                                  mon     darou)                                  person  poss-be4Takashi: (I can't very well use Kurumi    (kurumi ya  manami o   SHIGOTO de  and Manami for work...)                 and       (O)  for-work                                  TSUKAu  wake ni wa ikanai  shi...)                                  use     can't-very-well    considerTakashi walking FX:               ___  <whish!>                        su_[As he exits, he looks to one side.  Coming up from the other direction is that favorite collision target of all Kasuga males...  (See chapters 1.3 and 5.1, for example...)  She walks home in school uniform, schoolbag in hand, looking off across the street...]5collision FX:                     ______  <CRASH!>                        doshin!6Hikaru: [wincing]  Ouch...                         itete7[View pans back to show her sitting on the sidewalk.  Takashi still stands.]Hikaru: [yelling in anger]  Watch where you're going,       doko   MIte     n da     yo  you blockhead!!                 where  looking  (explan)                                        ___________                                  kono  to--henboku!!                                  this  blockheadTakashi:  Ah!                             a---------------------------------------------------p 306 (120)1Takashi:                                              __ ____  S-sorry about that.  A-are      su sumanakatta ne   ke kega   wa  nai  kai?  you hurt?                          was-sorry           injury (T) not-haveTakashi FX:                       ___ ___  <in-a-dither>                   oro oro2[Hikaru blesses him with an angel-of-death glare.]Hikaru FX:                        _____  <stare!>                        jiro_3[She gets up and dusts herself off.]Hikaru:                                            _________  Hmmph.  Mister, are you a       fu--n    ojisan  kameraman  na no ka--  photographer?                            mister  cameraman        (?)Hikaru dusting-off FX:            ____ ____  <brush-brush>                   pata pataTakashi heartbeat FX:             _____  <thump!>                        doki_4Takashi: [sweating, perplexed]  ..........                      ..........5Hikaru: [flashing with emotion]   _____ __  Coooool!  I know!!              kakko ii na----_    so-- da!!                                  cool           !6Hikaru: [gentle smile]  Hey, take a picture of me.      nee  atashi no koto  totte  yo                                  say  of-me           taking-(picture)7Takashi:  EH?                             e8Hikaru: [striking a pose, hand behind head]  Despite my appearance,          ko-- MIete mo              YOUCHIEN ni  there was a time in             even-tho-appear-like-this  in-kindergarten  kindergarten when I modeled  children's clothes at a         ita        TOKI  CHOUNAI                  no  local clothing goods store.     there-was  time  in-the-town/neighborhood 's                                  YOUHINTEN                                  fancy-goods-shop/foreign-goods-shop/                                  haberdasher's-shop/clothing-goods-shop                                                            ______                                  no KODOMO FUKU        no  moderu yatte                                  's children's-clothes 's  modeling                                  koto  mo   aru     n da     yo    atashi                                  thing too  happen  (explan)       ITakashi:  Clothing goods store...         YOUHINTEN......---------------------------------------------------p 307 (121)1Hikaru: [smiling and waving]  Yah, I wish...  Just joking.    na--n chatte  ne    jo--dan  da  yo                                  I-wish/not!         joke     be  See ya, mister!                 ja ne  ojisan!2[Takashi's pov of the radiantly smiling, pretty girl...]3Takashi: [considering]  Hmm.                            fumu                                  value/estimate-(something)4Takashi:                                         ____  Oh, wait a moment, you.         a  chotto      kimi                                     just-a-sec  youHikaru: [stopping]  Huh?                            e5Takashi: [smiling]                    ______  About modeling...  I wonder     ja  moderu   HONTOU ni  tanomou  if I really should ask you.         model    really     shall-ask-(you-to-do)                                            ____                                  ka na     kimi  ni                                  I-wonder  you  (IO)6Hikaru: [wide-eyed with surprise]  ?!                              ?!---------------------------------------------------p 308 (122)1[Exterior evening shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]2[Kyousuke sits at the dining-room table in NY Mets jersey, resting chin in his hands.]Kyousuke:  Next Sunday?  Help you          KONDO no NICHIYOUBI?  SHIGOTO no TETSUDAi?  with work?                      next-Sunday           work    's assistanceTakashi:  Yeah.  I won't be able to do    aa    chotto  KONKAI    wa   hitori ja  it by myself this time so I           a-bit   this-time (T)  by-myself (T)  need an assistant.                                  dekinai            n de   JOSHU     ga                                  not-be-able-to-do  since  assistant (S)                                  hitsuyo--          nan  da  yo                                  need/require/want  what is3narration:                        _____                     ______  Dad works as a freelance        oyaji no  SHOKUGYOU  wa   furi--    no  photographer!                   father's  profession (T)  freelance 's                                  _________                                  kameraman!                                  photographerKyousuke:  Yeah, I guess it's okay...      un  betsu ni          ii    kedo...                                      not-particularly  okay  but4Takashi: [smiling]  All right, then.  I'm           so-- ka  ja    tanonda      zo!  counting on you!                         then  depended-onnarration:  Because of his general          da kedo  HONNIN         no  SHUGI to  policy against taking pics      but      person-himself 's  with-policy  of people, he specializes  in landscapes...                yara de    JINBUTSU wa   torazu                                  what-with  person   (T)  not-taking-(photos)                                  FUUKEI     SENMON                                  landscape  specialty5[Two photographs--one of Manami in swimsuit; another of Kurumi in blouse with floral garland on her head.]narration:  ...although he occasionally     tama ni       kurumi ya manami o  takes pictures of Kurumi        occasionally         and      (O)  and Manami, but...                                  tottari             wa   shite-ru mitai da                                  take-pictures-(and) (T)  would-like-to                                  kedo----                                  but  ...that's strictly private      sore       wa   akumade  <i.e., not for work>.           that-(one) (T)  to-the-utmost                                  ___________                                  puraibe--to de                                  in-private6[View of a wall, upon which are tacked up photos of palm trees, a billboard and a basketball hoop.]narration:  He absolutely never takes       SHIGOTO de wa   zettai      JOSEI  o  photos of women as part of      for-work   (T)  absolutely  women (O)  his job.                                  toranai                                  not-take-(pictures)                                  _____  He seems to have a stubborn     ganko na  tokoro ga   aru   yo-- desu  streak.                         stubborn  case   (S)  have  appear/seem---------------------------------------------------p 309 (123)1[Exterior day shot of ABCB.]2Madoka:                                          ______  Photographic model?!            SHASHIN     no moderu?!                                  photography 's model3Kyousuke:  H-Hikaru-chan?!                 hi hikaru-chan ga?!4[View pans back to show Kyousuke and Hikaru seated, and Madoka standing in her ABCB apron.]Hikaru: [smiling merrily]  Yup!  While in town, quite      so_   kono aida MACHI de  gu--zen  by accident, I was stopped.       !   while-in-town       accident/chance                                  KOE kakerarete  ne                                  be-calling-out                                      _________  For that photographer to        ano kameraman      atashi ni  choose me--he must have         that-photographer  me    (IO)  pretty good taste.                                  ME o tsukeru           nante                                  watch/have-his-eye-on  the-likes-of                                  nakanaka  midokoro             aru  na--                                  very      promise/good-points  have5[Madoka and Kyousuke look at each other, wide-eyed.  A sinister aspect has occurred to them...]6Hikaru: [dreamily]  Ahhh!  What'll I do?            a~~~~_    dou   shimashou                                       !    what  shall-do  What if these photos            kore de        sono SHASHIN      ga  attract the attention of        with-this/now  those-photographs (S)  the mass media and show-biz     ________  folks...                        masukomi                       ya                                  mass-communication/mass-media  and                                  GEINOU                  KANKEI     no                                  (public)-entertainment  connection 's                                  HITO-tachi no ME ni furetari shite...                                  people     's attract-(their)-notice-(and)  Then, in a flash, I'll become   n de   motte        ichiyaku  a star.                         since  by/then/for  suddenly/with-a-leap                                  ______                                  suta-- ni natchattari shite                                  turn-into-a-star-(and)Hikaru FX:                        ______  <RAPTURE>                       uttori[In the background, Hikaru visualizes her dazzling future.]top magazine: [left]                        _______  Stunning Debut!!                SHOUGEKI  debyu--!!                                  shock     debuttop magazine: [right (partially cut off by speech bubble)]  Hiyama Hi...                    HIYAMA hibottom magazine:  The Prospect of a New           KITAI                    no OOGATA  Superstar.                      expectation/anticipation 's large-size                                  SHINJIN                                  new-starnews conference banner:                                 _______  Debut of a New Superstar!!      OUGATA      SHINJIN   debyu--!!                                  large-size  new-star  debut  Hiyama Hikaru                   HIYAMA hikaru  News Conference                 KISHA KAIKEN7Madoka:  But Hikaru, you better be       demo  hikaru  KI o tsuketa  ho-- ga ii  yo  careful.                        but           take-care     better---------------------------------------------------p 310 (124)1Madoka:                                                   _________  Was that person really a        sono HITO    HONTOU ni  kameraman  na no?  photographer?                   that-person  really     photographer  There are cases of <girls>      damasarete  being deceived and taken        being-deceived  off to some strange place...                                  hen na toko tsurete-karetari suru                                                  (= ikaretari)                                  be-taken-to-a-strange-place-(and)                                  koto   datte  aru    n da     shi                                  cases  even   exist  (explan) consider  That kind of thing can be       so-- yu--     no    tte  pretty scary.                   that-kind-of  (nom) (T)                                  kekko--  kowai  no  yo                                  quite    scary  be2Hikaru: [mouth pursed in thought]  Well...                         so-- ka na...  Come to think of it, I          so-- ieba            tashika ni  recall the guy had a sorta      come-to-think-of-it  if-I-remember-correctly  perverted, mustached face...    ______                                  sukebe     so-- na  hige     ttsura                                  perverted  seem     mustache  face                                      _____                                  no  ossan               datta  kedo...                                  's  mister/Joe/buddy    was    but                                      <corruption-of-"ojisan">3Hikaru: [hurling herself at Kyousuke]  Then, Sempai!  Please come      ja    sempai!    KONDO no NICHIYOUBI  with me next Sunday to the      then             next-Sunday  photo shoot!!                                  satsuei no TOKI     issho ni  tsuite-kite                                  photographing-time  together  coming-with-me                                  kudasai  ne_!!                                  pleaseKyousuke:  Eh!                             e_4Kyousuke FX:                      ______  <peek!>                         chira_5[Madoka looks on without expression.]6Kyousuke:                                                        ___  Oh!  B-but I'm helping my       a_    de demo  NICHIYOUBI tte  ore  father with his work on          !       but   Sunday     (T)  I  Sunday.                         _____                                  oyaji no  SHIGOTO no TETSUDAi    nan  da                                  father's  work    's assistance  what isHikaru:  How bo-o-oring.                 naan da      tsumannai     no                                  what's-that  uninteresting7Madoka: [leaning in]  Then, shall I go with you,      ja    atashi ga   tsuite-itte-ageyo--  ka!  Hikaru?!                        then  I      (S)  shall-go-with-(you)  (?)                                  hikaruHikaru:  Huh?!  You, Madoka-san?         e_  madoka-san ga?8Madoka: [off]  You'll feel safe with me,       atashi to issho   dattara  ANSHIN  desho  right?                          together-with-me  when-be  safe    poss-beHikaru: [beaming]  Yes!                            hai!---------------------------------------------------p 311 (125)1[Exterior shot of a train station.]<The sign is of poor-resolution...  "Eno-<something>" station, is my best guess.>2[Madoka and Hikaru wait near the ticket machines.]Takashi: [off]  Hi.  Sorry to keep you          yaa  omatase!  waiting!3[Their eyes grow wide with surprise.]4[As does Kyousuke's...  Oblivious to it all, Takashi merely smiles.]5Kyousuke:  Hikaru-chan...  And             hikaru-chan...  AYUKAWA mo...  Ayukawa...  Why are you here?               nande  koko ni        iru    no                                  why    at-this-place  be-hereMadoka:  Kasuga-kun?!                    KASUGA-kun?!Hikaru:  Sempai, why...                  SEMPAI  do--shite......6Takashi: [swiveling his head]  Huh...?  WHAT?!                 e...  e?7Kyousuke: [somewhat irritated]    _____  Dad...  Work means taking       oyaji...  SHIGOTO tte  landscape pictures...           dad       work    (known-as)                                  FUUKEI     toru               n ja...                                  landscape  taking-(pictures)  ('cause)Takashi:  Nobody said anything like       DARE-mo  sonna koto  that.                           nobody   that-kind-of-thing                                  Ittoran              ga                                  (= Itte   toranai)   but                                     saying <not>-take-picturesMadoka & Hikaru:                  _____ "DAD"?!                          oyaji?!---------------------------------------------------p 312 (126)1Madoka:                                 _________  Then, the photographer is...    ja    kameraman    tte      no wa...  Kasuga-kun's otoosan            then  photographer (quote)  <father>?!                                  KASUGA-kun no oto--san?!                                             's father2Takashi:  What's this, Kyousuke?          nan da       KYOUSUKE                                  what's-this  You and these girls know        omae  kono ojo--san-tachi  to wa  each other by sight?            you   these-girls          (define)                                  KAOmishiri           na no ka?                                  know-(them)-by-sight       (?)Kyousuke:  Yeah.  We go to the same        un  ONAji GAKKOU  no  school.                             same-school3[Horror-struck, Hikaru plays back a scene...]Hikaru:  Oh no!                          a ikenai!Hikaru: [flashback]                                        ___________  Watch where you're going,       doko MIte n da yo   kono to--henboku!  you blockhead!Takashi: [flashback]  Ah!                             a4Hikaru: (How awful...!  It was           (ya da----_    SEMPAI no oto--san  datta  Sempai's otoosan?)               unpleasant!          's father    was                                  no kaa)                                     (?)Kyousuke:                                ______ (So, that "model" you were       (ja    moderu  tte      hikaru-chan no koto  talking about was                then  model   (quote)  about-Hikaru  Hikaru-chan?!)                                  datta  no ka?!)                                  was       (?)5Hikaru: [brightly, to Takashi]  Well, shall we go,              saa   mairimasho-- ka  oto--sama!!  otoosama?!!                     well  shall-go     (?) revered-father<That is, Hikaru addresses Takashi as "<revered> father".>Takashi:  Eh?!                            e?!6Kyousuke: [wincing]  O-otoosama...                   o oto--sama......[Madoka looks at Kyousuke, overwhelmed by it all.  Takashi and Hikaru walk on ahead.]Hikaru:                              _____  Oh, shall I carry your bag      a  kaban o-mochi  shimasho-- ka  oto--sama  for you, otoosama?                 bag     bag    shall-do   (?)Takashi:  Ah, th-thank you.               a  do do--mo---------------------------------------------------p 313 (127)1[Hikaru poses for the camera.]camera FX:                        _____  <click!>                        pasha2[She splashes through the shallow water at the beach.  As I recall, this shot was later used in the anime episode as well...]camera FX:                        _____  <click!>                        pasha3[View down the deserted beach at a lighthouse at the far end.]4[Takashi and Kyousuke share a private conversation...]Takashi:  But...  You're so sly.          shikashi...    omae mo    sumi ni okenai na                                  but            you  even  be-witty-&-knowingKyousuke:  Eh?                             e5[Oops, not so private.  View pans back to show Madoka right there as well...]Takashi:  To think that girl's your       ano KO    ga     omae no KANOJO  girlfriend...!                  that-girl (S)    your-girlfriend                                  datta  to wa       na--_                                  was    even-though     !  She's pretty considerate,       nakanaka  KI ga kiite        i-- KO  and quite nice, isn't she?!     very      being-considerate  nice-girl                                  ja nai  ka     e_?                                  is-not  (?)    huh?Kyousuke:  WHA!                            na_---------------------------------------------------p 314 (128)1[Madoka's pov of Kyousuke.]Kyousuke FX:                      ______  <peek!>                         chira_2[His pov of an expressionless Madoka.]3Kyousuke: [blushing]  Th-that's not it!               chi chigau   yo!    hikaru-chan to wa  Hikaru-chan isn't really...         mistaken                    (define)                                  betsu ni...                                  <not>-particularly4[Shot of Takashi, who's probably starting to figure it all out by now.]5Madoka:  Then...  I guess I'll go        ja......    atashi  sorosoro  KAEro--  home now.                       then        I       now       shall-go-home                                  ka na                                  I-wonder  It looks like it'll be          ato       wa   atashi ga   inakute mo  okay if I skip out on the       remainder (T)  I      (S)  even-tho-not-here  rest...                                  DAIJOUBU   mitai da     shi...                                  all-right  seems-to-be  consider6Kyousuke:  Eh?                             e7Madoka:  See ya.                         ja ne8Kyousuke:  Ayukawa...                      AYUKAWA...[She walks off.  Both Kasugas turn to watch her leave the beach.]---------------------------------------------------p 315 (129)1Takashi:  Kyousuke!                       KYOUSUKE!2Takashi:  I wanted to ask that girl,      ano KO     ni  mo   tanomitai  too...                          that-girl (IO) too  want-to-ask                                  n da      kedo                                  (explan)  but                                                                ______  You think she'll do it?         yatte-kuresou    ka na        moderu!  Modeling?!                      look-as-if-do-   I-wonder     model                                   (favor-to-me)3Kyousuke:                         _____  Dad...                          oyaji......4Takashi:  Hey!  If you don't get going    hora!    HAYAku  Ikanai to  HONTOU ni  soon she'll really be going     look!    soon    if-not-go  really  home!!                                  KAEtte-shimau                 zo                                  going-home-(finality/regret)  !!Kyousuke:  Y-yeah!                         u un!5Kyousuke: [running off]           ________  _____  Thanks, Dad!!                   sankyu--  oyaji!!6[Takashi watches him leave.]---------------------------------------------------p 316 (130)1[Kyousuke catches up to her at a crosswalk.  Madoka waits for the signal to change.]Kyousuke:  Ayukawa!                        AYUKAWA![She turns back to look...]2Kyousuke:  Wait!                           MAtte yo----_![...and turns away from him.]3[The signal light changes...]4[...and Kyousuke flashes with the Power...]narration:  Nnnngh!!                        e--i!!5[...changing it back to "don't walk".]signal FX:                        ___  <click!>                        pa_6Madoka FX:                        _____  <stop short!>                   pita_7Kyousuke: [smiling in relief] (Just in time!)                  (maniatta!)  <huff! huff!>                   ha_ ha_Madoka: [looking up at signal, perplexed] (Huh?  But it just changed.)     (are  kawatta  bakari  na  no ni)                                        changed  just        although---------------------------------------------------p 317 (131)1Madoka:                                          ______  What?  Me?  Model?              e  atashi ga   moderu ni?                                     I      (S)  model (IO)2Madoka: [turning her back to him]              ____  I'm not the type.               atashi sonna gara         ja nai  yo                                  I      that-kind-of-type  am-not3Madoka:  Hey, Kasuga-kun.  If you        hora  KASUGA-kun  HAYAku  modonnai to  don't hurry back you won't      look!             soon    if-not-return  be able to help your father.                                  oto--san no TETSUDAi   ga   dekinai desho                                  father   's assistance (S)  probably-cannot4[Kyousuke stands speechless.]5Kyousuke: [flashing with emotion]       ___  Then I'm leaving too!!          ja    ore  mo   KAEru!!                                  then  I    too  go-home6[Madoka turns back to look at him in surprise.]7Kyousuke: [still vehement]                     ______  If you model for him I'm        AYUKAWA ga   moderu yatte-kurereba  kitto  sure he'll turn out good                (S)  if-do-modeling         surely  pictures!!                                  i--   SHASHIN     ni   naru                                  good  photograph (IO)  become/turn-into                                  to OMOu     n da!!                                  think-that  (explan)  If that isn't obvious then      sore       ga   MIrenai to  naru   to mo--  there's no point in staying     that-(one) (S)  if-not-see  become certainly  here!!                                  KAEru kkya           nai yo!!                                        (= ikkereba?)  not-here                                  if-go-home---------------------------------------------------p 318 (132)1Madoka: [wide-eyed]                      ______  But Hikaru is the model...      datte  moderu wa   hikaru  ga...                                  but    model  (T)          butKyousuke:  Hikaru-chan has nothing to      hikaru-chan wa   kono sai  do with this!                               (T)  this-juncture/now                                  kanke-- nai!                                  have-nothing-to-do-(with)2Kyousuke:  Anyhow, I want you to be        tonikaku  AYUKAWA ga  the model!!                     anyhow            (S)                                  ______                                  moderu ni natte-kurenakya         yada!!                                                  (= kurenakereba)  unpleasant                                  if-not-become-model3[Madoka portrait--she's touched.]4Madoka: [gaze downcast]  You're just like a spoiled      marude     dadakKO       ne   KASUGA-kun wa  kid, Kasuga-kun.                just-like  spoiled-child                 (T)5[Isolated shot of her hand as it grasps him by his wrist.]Madoka FX:  <yank!>                         gui_6[View pans back to show her marching back, with Kyousuke in tow.]Madoka:  Grr...  Really!                 moo  honto ni!7[Kyousuke portrait--joy!]narration:  Ayukawa...!!                    AYUKAWA----!!---------------------------------------------------p 319 (133)1[4 photos of Madoka, looking very demure.]camera FX:                        _____  <CLICK!>                        pasha2[Late afternoon shot down the beach.  In the distance, two tiny figures prance at water's edge.  Possibly Madoka and Hikaru...]---------------------------------------------------p 320 (134)1[Exterior night shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]2Kyousuke: [looking over the developed shots]  Wow!                            hee---_Takashi:  So what do you think of my      do-- da       washi no  HAJImete no  first-ever model photos?        how  is-that  my        first                                  JINBUTSU  SHASHIN wa?                                  person    photos  (T)3[A single frame of film showing Madoka.]4[Kyousuke holds it up to the light.]Takashi:  She has a mysterious charm      sono KO   wa   FUSHIGI na   miryoku ga  about her.                      that-girl (T)  mysterious/  charm/  (S)                                                 wonderful    fascination                                  aru  ne                                  have  Her facial expression           HYOUJOU           ga  changes frequently--like        facial-expression (S)  a cat's eye.                                  neko no ME  no yo-- ni  yoku        kawaru                                  cat's-eyes  like-a      frequently  change5Takashi:  By the way, I have a favor      tokoro-de   KYOUSUKE ni tanomi ga aru  to ask of you...                by-the-way  I-have-a-favor-to-ask-of-you                                  n da      ga...                                  (explan)  butKyousuke:  Eh?                             e6Takashi: [smiling]                                            ______  Next time, I'd like to take     KONDO     wa   sono KO   no nu--do ga  nude photos of her!             next-time (T)  that-girl 's nude   (S)                                  toritakunatta!                                  want-to-take-(photo)Kyousuke: [freaked out]  WHAAT?!!                        e_!!7[He visualizes a shimmery, nude Madoka.]Kyousuke: [blushing, aghast]      __ ______  N-nude...!                      nu nu--do~~~~~~_---------------------------------------------------p 321 (135)1Takashi:  Yeah!  Could I have you ask     sou!    hitotsu  omae  kara  her for me?                             one      you   from                                  tanonde-moraenai        ka?                                  not-ask-(favor-for-me)  (?)2Kyousuke: [forcefully]  Y-you're joking!!               jo jo--dan!!  A-absolutely not!!              ze ZETTAI      dame!!                                     absolutely  no-good3Takashi:  There's no way?                 do--shite mo?Kyousuke:  FORGET IT!!                     dowa                -me!!                                  (dowasure) = forget  derogatory-suffix4Takashi:  I see.                          so-- kaTakashi FX:                       _____  <smile!>                        niko_5Takashi:  I'm a little sorry to hear      chotto  ZANNEN       da  kedo  that...                         a-bit   regrettable  is  but  Well, okay.  I'm joking.        ma--  i-- ka    jo--dan  da yo                                  well  okay      joke     is  I thought for sure you'd        kitto   so-- yu--     darou    to OMOtta  yo  say that.                       surely  that-kind-of  poss-be  thought-that[Kyousuke finds a photo.]6Kyousuke: [picking it up]  Huh?  I-I didn't know about     are?    ko kore        itsu-no-mani......  this one...                                this-(one)  unawaresTakashi: [off]                                                    _______  Oh.  That snapshot is a free    aa  sore       wa   tada     no sunappu  sa  one.  It's not for the job.         that-(one) (T)  for-free 's snapshot                                  SHIGOTO no  ja nai  yo                                  work        is-not7Takashi: [off]  Somehow, looking at the two     nan-ka    omae-tachi  o   mite-ru to  of you brings to mind your      somehow   you-plural (O)  when-am-looking-at  mother and me when we were  young.                          washi to  ka--san no  WAKAi koro  o                                  me    and mother  's  when-young (O)                                  OMOi dashite             na                                  recalling/bringing-to-mind---------------------------------------------------p 322 (136)1[The picture in question.  In it, Madoka has Kyousuke by his wrist as they walk down the beachfront road.  The two look into each other's eyes.]2Kyousuke: [studying the picture]  Hmm.  Mom, huh?                 fu--n    ka--san  kaa                                  hmm      mom      (?)Takashi:  But you probably don't          mottomo  omae wa   yoku  remember her too well.          but      you  (T)  fully/for-certain                                  OBOete-nai daro--                   kedo  na                                  poss-not-have-a-clear-recollection  but<Commentary:  Kyousuke would have been less than 2 years old when she died while giving birth to the twins.>3narration:                        _____  Like Dad and Mom when they      oyaji-tachi   no WAKAi koro  mitai da tte----  were young...                   dad-(and-mom) 's when-young  seem-to-be4[A cropped view of the picture in panel 1, showing Madoka only.]narration:                                              ___  Maybe...  I wonder if I'm       moshi-ka-shite----    ore  AYUKAWA to  tied to Ayukawa by a red        maybe                 I    w/Ayukawa  string?                                  AKAi ITO de    musubarete-ru  no  ka na?                                  by-red-string  are-tied           I-wonder---------------------------------------------------p 323 (137)1Takashi: [picking up another picture, with a grin]  Oh, that's right.  Kyousuke.    o  so--so--  KYOUSUKE  Here's another one...           mo--    ICHI-MAI       aru     n da     ga                                  another one (counter)  here-is (explan) but2Takashi: [handing it to him]  This photo also seems to        kono SHASHIN mo   washi to  ka--san no  bring back memories of your     this-photo   too  me    and mother  's  mother and me when we were  young.                          WAKAi koro  mitai de  yokatta  yo                                  when-young  seeming   was-goodKyousuke:  What?!                          he?!3[A view of the picture in question.  Hikaru leaps into Kyousuke's arms.]Kyousuke:  Ehhhhh?!!                       e~~~~~_!!narration:  Somehow, with Hikaru-chan       hikaru-chan to mo      da  nan-te------  too...                                      including  be  somehow  I'm confused...!                KONRAN suru  na--_                                  be-confused4[The family surrounds Kyousuke, who sits staring at both pictures in his hands.]Takashi: [highly amused]  Life is good, huh, Kyousuke?!   i--  naa   KYOUSUKE!  You're doubly blessed           RYOUTE ni HANA    to wa    kono koto  da na  <lit., holding flowers in       be-doubly-blessed (define) this-thing be  both hands>.Manami: [smiling]  Wow.  Oniichan is               he--    oni--chan tte  igai to  surprisingly popular with                         (T)  unexpectedly  girls, hmm?                     ____                                  moteru                 no ne----                                  is-popular-with-girls     (rhet)Kurumi: [wide-eyed]               __ ____  Oh no...  How indecent...       ya da--      ya--rashi--                                              (= iyarashii)                                                 unpleasant/indecent5[Exterior night shot of the Kasuga apartment.]Kyousuke: [off]  What the heck sort of mother    ittai donna                ka--san  was she?!!                      what-in-the-world-kind-of  mother                                  nan da  yo!!                                  is-thisnarration:  But...  Which one did mom       shikashi----  ka--san  tte  HONTOU wa  really resemble?                but           mother   (T)  really                                  ittai         dotchi ni  nite-ta                                  in-the-world  in-which   did-resemble                                  n desho--      ne?                                  (poss-explan)---------------------------------------------------