Kimagure Orange Road"The Incoherent Feeling!"Volume 2, Story 5WB Volume 1, Story 13Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Matthew Klippenstein Ramon GalindoLast revision : 02-07-95Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.eduNOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()NOTE: Translation is done from both the normal and WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having one or the other. Example: The subtitles on page 281 (95) are only in the WB's!---------------------------------------------------p 281 (95)--TITLE PAGE[A view through a camera viewfinder at Madoka who stands outside, resting her elbow on the counter of a concession stand. A burger sits at her elbow, a soft drink in her hand.]MAIN TITLE (at top) _________ The Incoherent Feeling! chiguhagu fi--ringu! incoherent/odd feelingSUB-TITLE (at bottom) A Gentle Breeze Through MIDORI no sayoKAZE the Green Growth Feels green/verdure 's gentle-breeze/light-wind Wonderful... SUTEKI na KIMOchi... wonderful feeling _______ A Shot of Her in HIzashi shafu-- de a Shaft of Sunlight! in-a-shaft-of-sunlight ______ ano KO o shotto! that-girl (O) shot---------------------------------------------------p 282 (96)1[Exterior shot of a school building.]2[Kyousuke peers into the classroom through a crack in the partly-opened door.]door FX: _____ gara_3[His eye scans the classroom.]4Matsuoka-sensei: [off] KASUGA-KUN. KASUGA-kunKyousuke FX: _____ biku_Kyousuke: Y-YES! ha hai_5Matsuoka-sensei: [standing in the hall] What are you doing nani yatte n no konna so early in the morning? what doing this-kind-of ASAppara kara? so-early-in-the-morning beginning/fromKyousuke: [blushing] Ah, no, it's nothing... a iya nan demo nai desu... no nothing is6[He enters the class, behind Matsuoka-sensei.]Kyousuke FX: kiri--_7[He sweats and peers about the room...]narration: But... shikashi-------------------------------------------------------p 283 (97)1[...and visualizes the slap he got the night he was drunk.]narration: How unpleasant! KI mazui na--_ unpleasant/awkward-(silence) Considering what happened kinou no koto KANGAeru to AYUKAWA ni yesterday, I don't have the about-yesterday when-consider (IO) guts to face Ayukawa... awaseru KAO ga nai yo------ made-to-meet face/honor (S) not-there2Kyousuke FX: ______ chira_3[Madoka is glaring at him.]Madoka contemplation FX: ji----4[Kyousuke cringes.]Kyousuke FX: giku_5[He puts on a nervous smile and waves to her.]Kyousuke: G-good morning. o ohayo6Madoka avert-gaze FX: _____ tsun_ (tsunto = assuming-a-prim-attitude)7[He looks down, in defeat.]narration: Aaaah! a----a!Kyousuke FX: _______ gakkuriKyousuke: (If I could, I'd rather be (dekireba... KYOU wa kitaku home today!) if-possible today (T) go-home/be-home nakatta!) was-not-here---------------------------------------------------p 284 (98)1narration: But... I have to do shikashi---- kore wa nan toka something about this! but this-(one) (T) somehow shinakerya! (= shinakereba) if-not-do2[His pov of Madoka, who sits at her desk and pointedly ignores him.]3[Exterior shot from ground level, looking up at the roof of a school building.]schoolbell FX: ___ ___ ___ ___ kin kon kan kon4[Madoka walks down the hall with her schoolbag.]Kyousuke: [off] AYUKAWA! AYUKAWA!5Kyousuke: [nervously] U-uh... About yesterday... a ano-- kinou no koto da kedo... about-yesterday it-is but6[She turns to look at him...]Kyousuke: [embarrassed] ___ A-at the time, I... a ano TOKI wa ore... that-time (T) I7[...then turns her back on him.]Madoka FX: ____ pui_ (puito = go-off-abruptly)8Kyousuke: (She won't even listen to (KUCHI mo kiite-kurenai ya anything I say... mouth even not-listen-(favor-to-me) It's not going to be easy korya chotto ya sotto ja......) to solve this...) this a-bit/wait/ and quietly/gently/ somewhat stealthily/secretlyMadoka FX: ____ ____ suta suta---------------------------------------------------p 285 (99)1[Exterior shot of ABCB.]Hikaru: [off] Huh? are?2Hikaru: I'm sure... atashi TASHIka.......... I surely/certainly3Hikaru: [lifting a steaming mug] ____ ____ I ordered ice tea. aisu ti-- deshita yo ne ice-tea wasMadoka: Ah... a...4Madoka: Oh, that's right... a so-- da kke that's-right (?) Sorry, I'll make it again, gomen IMA sugu tsukurinaosu yo right away. sorry right-away re-makeHikaru: Oh, don't worry. a kamaimasen yo5Hikaru: [musing] But... That's so strange. shikashi... mezurashi-- desu ne but strange/unusual is (rhet)Madoka: Huh? e6Hikaru: Oh, I mean, for you to e iya madoka-san ga ukkari make an absent-minded (S) absent-mindedly mistake... machigatta koto suru nan-te...... mistaken thing to-do somesuch7[Madoka stops, wide-eyed...]8Hikaru: Did something happen? NANI-ka atta n desu ka? something happened (explan) (?)[Madoka's back is towards Hikaru, but we see the look of great surprise on her face.]---------------------------------------------------p 286 (100)1Madoka: E-everything's fine! da daijo--bu yo_! It was only an unsuccessful MISUI datta n da kara_!! pass!! attempted/ was (explan) that's-why unaccomplished2Hikaru: WHAT? e3Madoka: OH! a4Hikaru: "Unsuccessful pass"...? MISUI tte......? What are you talking about? nan no koto desu kaa? what-kind-of-thing is (?)5[Madoka grows pensive, and visualizes Kyousuke the night he got drunk and tried to kiss her.]narration: Even though he said he FURYOU ga KIRAi da tte Itta hates delinquents, to then delinquent (S) hate be said-that turn around and try something like that! kuse ni TOTSUZEN anna koto though suddenly that-kind-of-thing shiyou to suru nan-te! should-do the-likes-ofKyousuke: [flashback] You're different from them! AYUKAWA wa aitsura to wa chigau yo! (T) vs-those-people different6narration: What the heck was he trying aitsu ittai do-- yu-- to pull? that-guy in-the-world what-kind-of tsumori datta n darou? motive was (poss-explan) At that moment, I might ano TOKI atashi moshi-ka-shitara have... that-occasion I perhaps ano mama------ that-moment7Master: Speaking of strange, he mezurashi-- to ieba... KYOU wa hasn't come today, hmm? strange speaking-of today (T) Kasuga-kun... konai ne KASUGA-kun...... not-come (rhet)---------------------------------------------------p 287 (101)1Madoka: [blushing, gaze downcast] ____ ____ Here, Hikaru. Ice tea! hai hikaru aisu ti--! here ice-teaice-tea FX: ___ ton2Hikaru: ? ?3[Master's pov of an obviously-flustered Madoka.]4[Madoka's pov of a concerned Master.]5[Exterior evening shot of ABCB.]---------------------------------------------------p 288 (102)1[Madoka stops at the door as she leaves ABCB.]Madoka: So then... ja kore de... then with-this/now/here2Master: Ayukawa-kun. AYUKAWA-kun3[A view of a wall. A poster of a girl in sailor suit, saluting, is partly in view.]Master: [off] In the end, he never did to--to-- KYOU wa show his face here. at-last/in-the-end/after-all today (T) KAO o MIsenakatta ne KASUGA-kun didn't-show-face (rhet)4[Madoka facial portrait.]5Madoka: [sternly] That has nothing to do with atashi ni wa KANKEI arimasen me. me (IO) (T) connection/concern not-have6Master: [smiling] ...... In that case, ...... sore nara then it's okay, but... if-so/in-that-case betsu ni i-- n da kedo ne -particularly okay (explan) but (rhet) I mean, it's really nice to iya WAKAi tte koto wa honto ni be young, hmm?! young (T) thing (T) really i-- koto da ne! nice-thing be7Master: Since youths are frequently CHI no KE mo OUi kara hot-headed and have too hot-blooded/rash/ too frequent/much since much energy, they get quick-tempered sidetracked... GENKI amatte spirits/energy/pep remaining/being-too-much DASSEN suru koto mo be-derailed/wander-(from) thing too aru kedo ne happen but---------------------------------------------------p 289 (103)1Master: But, as for him, there should demo HONNIN to shite wa also be times that call for but person-himself in-capacity-of (T) seriousness! kekkou SHINKEN na BA-AI datte quite serious occasions even/also aru hazu da yo! there-are should be2[Madoka blushes slightly as she takes in his words.]3Master: [with a wink] Well, he's a regular maa JOUREN no o-KYAKU-sama customer and we should regular-companions 's customers take good care of those! da shi be and-besides TAISETSU ni suru yo-- ni! value/take-good-care-of as-though/so-as-to4[Madoka's features relax.]5[Exterior shot of ABCB.]Madoka: [off] I put you through an o-tsukare-sama deshita exhausting time.* fatigue was<*Cultural note and commentary: A common phrase that doesn't translate well into English--something said in courtesy after a long day of work. It implies an apology for having put the other through such an ordeal.>door FX: _____ batansign: ABCB abakabu6[Madoka stands just outside the door, in thought.]7Madoka: [smiling] 'kay! un!8[She walks off.]---------------------------------------------------p 290 (104)1[Shot of the sign outside classroom 3-A.]2[Kyousuke, at his desk, isn't aware of the approach of a female classmate...]Madoka: Excuse me... chotto..........3Kyousuke: [looking up in surprise] EH?! e4Madoka: [smiling] It's about yesterday... kinou no koto da kedo about-yesterday it-is but5Kyousuke: [leaping to attention] Y-yes!! ha hai_!!Kyousuke FX: shakiKyousuke: Wh-what is it? na nan deshou what poss-is-it6[Komatsu hooks Kyousuke by the arm.]Komatsu: [grinning] ___ Kasuga, let's go buy some KASUGA pan KAi ni iko-- ze_!! bread!! bread let's-go-buy7[View of Madoka, who stands, a bit unhappy.]Kyousuke: [off] Ah. Eh?! But... a e_ demo...8Komatsu: [racing off with Kyousuke in tow] If we don't go early, we HAYAku Ikanai to MABOROSHI no won't have the pleasure early/soon if-not-go illusive/illusory of meeting the illusive __________ katsu-sand today. katsusando ni KYOU mo katsu-sandwich (IO) today too o-ME ni kakarenakunatchimau zo (= kakarenakunatte-shimau) not-meet/see/have-pleasure-of meeting- (finality/regret)---------------------------------------------------p 291 (105)1Komatsu: Wait for me, my little matte-ro yo-- katsu-saaand. be-waiting-(command) ___ __________ ore no katsusando-cha--n my little-katsu-sand2[Madoka lets out a little puff of air.]3Madoka: [spinning about] (I'll eat lunch with Hikaru (hikaru to o-HIRU demo then.) w/Hikaru noon/lunch TAbeyo-- tto) shall-eat4[A view of the usual mob outside the lunch concession. Kyousuke has emerged holding two items.]crowd FX: ________ gayagayasign: nomie raseKyousuke: __________ (Got 'em. Katsu-sand.) (yatta ne katsusando) did-it (rhet)5Kyousuke: (I wonder what on earth (shikashi sakki no AYUKAWA Ayukawa wanted just then. but a-little-while-ago 's ittai nan no YOU datta in-the-world what-kind-of-business was n darou (poss-explan) Maybe she was going to hyottoshite yurushite-kureyo-- forgive me...) maybe/possibly shall-forgive-(favor-to-me) to shite-ta n ja...) as was-there ('cause)sign: Concession KOU BAI FU buy selling section/departmentcrowd FX: ___ Got some bread. pan cho--dai bread receive/have/eat Wahhh, ouch! wa-- itete![From off to the side, Hikaru spots him, her face lighting up.]6[She executes another neck-tackle of Kyousuke... He goes bug-eyed, as do many of the students around them.]crowd FX: OHHH! o~~~~_Hikaru: Kasuga-sempaaai!! KASUGA-sempa--i!!7narration: As usual, Hikaru-chan's itsu-mo nagara hikaru-chan no kono DAITAN boldness overwhelms me... as-usual 's this-boldness sa ni wa atto-- sareru na------ is-overwhelming/irresistablecrowd FX: zawaKyousuke: J-just a minute, Hikaru-chan. chi chotto hikaru-chan---------------------------------------------------p 292 (106)1Hikaru: [looking him in the eye] HUH? are?2Hikaru: ___ Do you usually have bread SEMPAI itsu-mo pan nan desu kaa , Sempai? usually bread is (?)Kyousuke: W-well... ma maa ne3Hikaru: [holding and glaring at a katsu-sand] That's no good!! ikemasen yo!! During your growth years, SODAchi zakari ni konna mono you shouldn't only be eating growth peak/prime (IO) this-kind-of-thing this sort of stuff! bakkari TAbetecha! just/only (= Tabete-te wa ) shouldn't-be-eating4Hikaru: [brightly] I know! I'll share my so-- da! atashi no o-bento-- box lunch with you and my-box-lunch we'll eat it together on the rooftop! wakete-ageru kara divide/split-(favor-to-you) that's-why OKUJOU de ISSHO ni TAbemasho_ on-rooftop together shall-eat!5[She gazes tenderly into his eyes.]Hikaru: __ _______ RIGHT?! Darling. ne! da--rinKyousuke: [sweating, blushing] Y-yeah! u un!6[She practically slings him over her back and drags him off down the hall.]Hikaru: That's good, that's good! i-- kara i-- kara!Kyousuke foot-dragging FX: ____ ____ zuru zuru7Komatsu: [merrily eating] Kasugaaa. Go for it... KASUGA~~~~ gambatte-koi yo~~~~ come-try-your-best-(command)---------------------------------------------------p 293 (107)1[Ground view looking up towards the roof of a school building.]Kyousuke: [off] Ayukawa strange? AYUKAWA ga hen? (S) strange2[They stand at the rail.]Hikaru: That's right. so-- nan desu yo Madoka-san doesn't seem her itsu-mo no madoka-san rashikunaku usual self and is acting usual not-like/seem absent-minded. _______ bo--tto shite-ru n desu yo nee is-being-absent-minded (explan)3Hikaru: [suddenly turning to look at him] Still... I wonder if yappari... nani-ka atta no kashira? something happened? still something happened I-wonderKyousuke heartbeat FX: _____ doki_[The skies darken...]4Hikaru: [glaring at him] She's not talking about it, atashi ni sae itte-kurenai nan-te even to me. even-to-me not-saying-(favor-to-me) I'm sure something big must kitto yohodo no koto ga have happened! surely considerable-thing (S) atta ni chigainai wa! must-have-happenedKyousuke heartbeat FX: _____ doki_[The day turns pitch-black around him...]5[The sunlight returns...]Kyousuke: [nervously] (S-something big, huh...?) (yo yohodo no koto nee...)6Kyousuke: [closing his eyes in resolve] (Liquor is so frightening.) (o-SAKE tte kowai na) liquor (T) frightful/horrible---------------------------------------------------p 294 (108)1[Shot of the sign outside classroom 1-B.]2[A girl talks to Madoka.]Hikaru's classmate: Hikaru? Oh, if you mean hikaru? aa HIYAMA-san nara... Hiyama-san... if-it-is3Hikaru's classmate: It looked as if she was nan-ka OKUJOU no ho-- ni going to the rooftop. somewhat direction-of-rooftop (IO) itta mitai desu yo-- went seemsMadoka: Rooftop? OKUJOU?4[Hikaru smiles merrily as she lifts up a shrimp tempura with her chopsticks.]Hikaru: Here! Say "ahh". hai! a--n5Kyousuke: [opening wide] Ahh. a~~n6Kyousuke FX: _____ paku_7Hikaru: Taste good? oishii?Kyousuke: Y-yeah... u un...8[View pulls back to show them kneeling and facing one another.]Hikaru: I wonder if I'll make a watashi tte i-- okusan ni nareru good wife? I (T) good wife (IO) can-become kashira? I-wonderKyousuke: [nervously looking up at the sky] W-well. I suppose. so so-- ne ma-- ne (But, is it okay for me to (shikashi kono HIJOUJI ni be doing something like but this-crisis (IO) this right now...) konna koto yatte-te i-- no this-kind-of-thing be-doing okay ___ darou ka ore........) poss-be (?) I---------------------------------------------------p 295 (109)1[Looking over Hikaru's shoulder, Kyousuke sees something off-panel.]Kyousuke: HUH? n?2[His pov of Madoka, who stands at the entrance to the rooftop.]3[He blushes.]narration: Ayukawa...!! AYUKAWA...!!4[She blushes.]5[Madoka spins around to leave. Hikaru smiles, not having noticed anything.]narration: O-oh no! Even though things shi shimatta! tada de sae IMA were bad enough, with this good-god even-over-nothing now I'm history!! kojirete-ru no ni kono mama ja is-going-wrong even-though at-this-moment HAMETSU da------!! ruin/destruction be---------------------------------------------------p 296 (110)1Kyousuke: [yelling and pointing up at the sky] Look!! yaya_!! ___ What's that? It's a nan desu ka man da! ! what is (?) ??? is2[Hikaru turns to look up, shading her eyes from the sun.]Kyousuke FX: ___ da_Hikaru: Huh? Where, where? e doko doko?3[In the stairwell, Kyousuke calls out to Madoka, who is headed down, one flight below him.]Kyousuke: W-wait, Ayukawa! ma mate yo AYUKAWA!4[He looks back out the door to the rooftop...]Kyousuke: (I'm sorry, Hikaru-chan!) (gomen ne hikaru-chan!)5[...and flashes with the Power.]narration: Now. I can't very well IMA koko de AYUKAWA to no koto let her know about Ayukawa! now in-this-place about-Ayukawa shirareru wake ni ikanai n da! be-finding-out/ can't-very-well (explan) learning6door FX: ______ pishan7[Out on the rooftop, Hikaru stands and looks around.]Hikaru: That's strange. He's not okashi-- na-- doko ni mo here. strange nowhere inai desu yoo -there isHikaru: _______ Huh? Darling? are da--rin?---------------------------------------------------p 297 (111)1[Shot of Kyousuke's feet as he heads down the stairs.]Kyousuke FX: ___ ___ ton ton2[He de-materializes in mid-stride.]Kyousuke teleport FX: ____ shu_narration: Arrrgh. I'll teleport on e--i SAKImawari shite-yare! ahead of her! going-on-ahead-(favor-to-her)3[Madoka resolutely heads on down the stairs.]Madoka FX: ___ ___ ton ton4Madoka: (What?! That guy! (NANI yo aitsu! what that-guy I was finally going to let sekkaku yurushite-yaro-- him off the hook.) taking-the-trouble shall-forgive-(favor- to-him) to OMOtte-ta no ni) was-thinking-that even-though (If he wants to get friendly (hikaru to NAKA yoku yatterya with Hikaru, then fine!) w/Hikaru (= yattereba) if-getting-friendly i-- no yo!) fine5[Madoka pulls up in great surprise...]6[Kyousuke stands at the foot of the stairs, arms crossed.]Madoka FX: ___ ton---------------------------------------------------p 298 (112)1Kyousuke: Anyway, listen to what I tonikaku HANASHI o ki--te-kure yo! have to say! anyhow speak (O) listen-(favor-to-me)2Madoka: What is it? donna HANASHI? what-kind-of-conversation If it can make me laugh, WARAeru HANASHI da to then fine... can-laugh/smile conversation be if ii kedo ne okay but3[She continues on down the stairs toward him.]Madoka FX: ___ ton4Kyousuke: [emphatically] Truly, it wasn't my HONTOU wa anna koto suru intention to do that sort true/real (T) that-kind-of-thing to-do of thing. tsumori nan-ka nakatta n da intention somehow did-not-have (explan) Everything I did and said ano TOKI yatta koto ya itta koto wa then was because of the that-time did thing and said thing (T) alcohol! zembu o-SAKE no sei nan da! all/entire liquor's-fault it-is5Madoka: Such an irresponsible i--kagen na HITO ne! person! irresponsible person6[Kyousuke pauses in shock.]7Madoka: [frowning] Kasuga-kun, just by getting KASUGA-kun tte tannaru YOtta drunk you're liable to do (T) mere/simple got-drunk that sort of thing? hazumi de a-- yu-- koto dekiru no? by-chance/ that-kind-of-thing can-do on-impulse8[Wide-eyed, he slaps a hand to his mouth.]Kyousuke: ___ AH! ha_---------------------------------------------------p 299 (113)1Madoka: [walking past him down the stairs] I misjudged you, misokonatte-ta wa KASUGA-kun o... Kasuga-kun... did-misjudge (O)2[Her pov of Kyousuke--he stands, looking down.]3[His pov of Madoka--she keeps her gaze forward as she passes him.]4[View of her foot on the stairs.]Madoka FX: ___ ton5Madoka: Sayonara. sayonaraMadoka FX: ___ ___ ton ton6[View shows Madoka's face, as she stops in surprise at hearing...]Kyousuke: I was drunk then, and don't ano TOKI YOtte-te yoku oboete-nai really remember... that-time am-drunk fully don't-remember kedo... but But this much I'm sure of! demo kore dake wa machigai nai! but this-much (T) certainly/surely---------------------------------------------------p 300 (114)1Kyousuke: ___ If it wasn't you, I wouldn't ore AYUKAWA ja nakya have done such a thing! I w/Ayukawa (= nakereba) if-wasn't-there anna koto shinai yo! that-kind-of-thing not-do2[She continues on down the stairs.]3Madoka: [facing away] Really? HONTOU?4Kyousuke: ___ I'm not lying! uso ja nai!5Madoka FX: ___ ___ ton ton6Madoka: [turning to face him] That's right! I still so-- da! atashi o-HIRU mada haven't eaten lunch. I lunchtime still TAbete-nai n da have-not-eaten (explan)7Madoka: [soft smile] I'm pretty hungry. zuibun o-naka hetta na-- quite hungry---------------------------------------------------p 301 (115)1[Kyousuke is quite surprised by the sudden shift in mood.]2Madoka FX: _____ niko_3Kyousuke: [reaching into his pocket] Oh, yeah. Wait a minute! a so-- da chotto matte!Kyousuke realization FX: ___ gon4Kyousuke: [beaming] Then would you like to yokattara TAberu? have this? if-good eatnarration: It looks as though Ayukawa's do--yara AYUKAWA no KIGEN mo mood is cured... it-looks-as-if 's mood too naotta mitai de---- cured/set-to-rights seeming5Madoka: Isn't that the illusive...? sore ga REI no that-(one) (S) the-one-in-question MABOROSHI no...? illusive/illusory6Kyousuke: [tossing it] __________ Katsu-sand! katsusando!Madoka: ________ Thank you. sankyu--[She catches it in her left hand.]narration: _________ _________ For the time being... toriaezu wa------ medetashi medetashi! Joy joy! for-the-time-being joy/luck/happiness6 (inset)Hikaru: [sitting, smiling and eating] Huh? This is really ara honto ni oishi delicious. really delicious---------------------------------------------------