Kimagure Orange Road"Shopping Boogie!"Volume 2, Story 2WB Volume 1, Story 10Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiTranslation & full-script typesetting by : Craig H. NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Gary Kacmarcik Wes Shull Ramon Galindo Ka-Ping YeeLast revision : 02-07-95Comments? Corrections? Suggestions? Please send them to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.eduNOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()NOTE: Translation is done from both the normal and WB manga, so there may be a few extras to those of you not having one or the other. Example: The subtitles on page 215 (29) are only in the WB's!---------------------------------------------------p 215 (29)[Madoka stands in a phonebooth, leaning back against the wall, dressed in shirt and shorts.]MAIN TITLE (at top) _________ ____ Shopping Boogie! shoppingu - bugi! shopping boogieSUB-TITLE (at bottom) ______ _______ That Cute Girl, out of a KOKORO no pe--ji ni kyu--to na ano KO! Page from My Heart! heart 's page (IO) cute that-girl A Photograph of a Dazzling mabushii SHOKA no Start of Summer... dazzling beginning-of-summer 's __________ fotogurafu... photograph---------------------------------------------------p 216 (30)1[Half-page panel of Madoka, walking down the street, in minidress.]2[1/4 rearview as she walks past our pov. Guys walking in the opposite direction find their eyes strangely attracted to her...]3[A ball flies through the air...]4[...lands and rolls to a stop near Madoka.]ball FX: ___ pon---------------------------------------------------p 217 (31)1[Madoka looks off in slight surprise...]2[It's a small kid, who smiles and waves his baseball glove, inviting her to toss it to him.]kid: Sorry! suimase--n!3[She frowns slightly.]4[The kid loses his smile.]5Madoka FX: _____ niko_6[She picks up the ball...]7[...and throws a sparkling toss, as only Madoka can. ^_^]---------------------------------------------------p 218 (32)1[The kid makes a rather unorthodox catch--well, go look at the pic!]kid: Thanks, oneechan! arigato_ one--chan2[Madoka smiles cheerfully and waves...]3[...but stops suddenly to stare at her waving hand.]4[She inspects the hand closely.]narration: I never used to do this sort IZEN dattara konna koto of thing before... before when-it-was this-kind-of-thing shinakatta---- not-done5[She wipes her brow and looks off into the distance.]narration: I've been cheerful lately! SAIKIN atashi akarui! lately I cheerful6[Isolated shot of some downtown buildings.]7[Kyousuke waits on the sidewalk, leaning back against the side of a building. He is dressed semi-formally.]---------------------------------------------------p 219 (33)1Madoka: [off] Waited long? MAtta?2Kyousuke: N-no. I just got here. i iya IMA kita tokoro no now came placenarration: Actually, I arrived HONTOU wa 30-FUN MAE ni kite-ta 30 minutes ago... really minutes before did-come n da kedo---- (explan) butMadoka: Oh. soo3[Kyousuke's pov as Madoka leans in close and inspects his attire.]Madoka FX: _____ jiro_Madoka: Hmm... fu----n4[Madoka's pov of Kyousuke tugging his coat on straight.]Kyousuke: Eh?! S-something... e?! na nani-ka...5Madoka: Pretty flashy, huh? taishita kakkou ne great/important/serious appearanceKyousuke: [nervous] I-is that so? so soo?6Madoka: But, that's okay! ma...... i-- kedo ne_! okay but (rhet)Kyousuke: (M-maybe I should have worn (ya yappari futsu-- no kakkou no my regular clothes after after-all ordinary/usual appearance all.) ho-- ga yokatta ka na) was-better I-wondernarration: Actually, yesterday... jitsu wa kinou---- in-fact yesterday---------------------------------------------------p 220 (34)1[Exterior shot of ABCB.]sign: Pub & Restaurant #PUB & RESTAURANT# abakabu "Abakabu"2[Inside, Madoka and Master lean on the counter in discussion over a list she's holding.]3Kyousuke: Hello! konchiwa![Master and Madoka turn to look at him without expression.]4[Master facial-portrait.]5Master: [smiling merrily] Kyousuke-kun, I hear that KYOUSUKE-kun ashita AYUKAWA-kun ga Ayukawa-kun wants to go tomorrow (S) on a date with you tomorrow. ____ ______ kimi to de--to shitai tte with-you want-to-date (hearsay)Kyousuke: [stunned] ___ Da--?! de_?!Madoka: [indignant] __________ Masterrrr!! masuta----_!!6Master: Just joking. to yu-- no wa jo--dan de saying-that (T) being-a-joke I'm sending Ayukawa-kun ashita AYUKAWA-kun ni MISE de shopping tomorrow to buy tomorrow (IO) in-store the little things we use here in the restaurant... tsukau KOMONO o employ small-articles (O) KAi ni itte-morau n da kedo... go-to-buy-(favor-for-me) (explan) but7Master: ________ But it seems that the depa--to ni TODOkete-morau to department store would take department-store (IO) if-deliver- a week to have the things (favor-for-me) delivered... ISSHUUKAN wa kakaru sou da shi a-week (T) require (hearsay) and-besides And I have to be here in washi wa MISE ga aru shi the restaurant. I (T) store (S) be-here consider So we were just saying dekireba DARE-ka that it would be nice to if-able-to somebody get a guy to lend a hand for this! OTOKO no TE o karitai ask-for-guy's-helping-hand to HANASHI shite-ta toko nan da yo! did-say-that occasion that-is8Master: [off] How's that sound, if I might do-- da tanomarete-kurenai ka?! ask?! how is-that not-be-asking-(favor-to-me)---------------------------------------------------p 221 (35)1Madoka: [angrily] I'll be fine by myself! atashi hitori demo DAIJOUBU yo! I 1-person even all-rightKyousuke: [ticked] ___ I'll go! ore Ikimasu_ I go !2Master: Oh, thank you! so-- ka arigatai! meriting-gratitude It's because you're a guy. nan datte OTOKO no KO da kara na guy be that's-why _____ Well, have a glass of cold maa-- ohiya demo ippai sake. cold-sake one-cupKyousuke: [embarrassed] No... Ha ha ha. iya-- hahaha3Madoka: [seriously] Let me make it clear that Ittoku kedo we won't be going for fun! (= Itte-oku) but say-(for-future's-sake) ASObi ni Iku n ja nai kara ne! play (IO) not-going that's-why4[Isolated shot of a department store building.]5[Shot of various pans in a display case.]Madoka: [off] Then, this one, and... ja kore to then this-(one) and Oh, and that, too... a sotchi no yatsu mo ne that-way toostore clerk: [off] Yes. Very well, Miss! hai kashikomarimashita! yes very-well/all-right-(sir/madam)6[Madoka points out her choices as a smiling female clerk looks on. Kyousuke watches in silence and wonder.]7narration: Ayukawa's so reliable. shikkari shite n da na AYUKAWA being-steady/reliable (explan) ___ When she's like this no one kore de ore to DOUji would ever believe we're with-this with-me simultaneous both in junior high. CHUUGAKUSEI da nan-te jr-high-student be etc. SHINjirarenai na-- not-be-believing8store clerk: [handing a stack of packages to Kyousuke] Here you go! Please take hai! kore o-negai ne this. yes this-(one) request---------------------------------------------------p 222 (36)1store clerk: [smiling] How admirable... KANSHIN ne-- admiration/wonder (rhet) Helping your big sister KYOU wa oneesan no o-TETSUDAi? today? today (T) older-sister's (hon)-assistance2[Kyousuke stops in surprise.]crows-in-background FX: ____ kaa_Madoka FX: ___ ___ ku_ ku_3Kyousuke: [exploding] _ ___ Y-you're mistaken! chi_ chigau yo--_ o ore wa...!! I-I'm...!! I (T)[The packages held in his arms jostle and fall to the floor.]packages FX: ____ ____ bara bara4Kyousuke: Ahhhhh! a~~~~_5[As Kyousuke kneels to pick up all the packages...]Madoka: [loudly] PULL YOURSELF TOGETHER, shikkari shite yo KYOUSUKE-chan! KYOUSUKE-CHAN!lady customers: ________ Tee-hee. kusukusulady customer: Heh! pu_6Kyousuke: [holding it in] (Sh-shit! If it's going to (ku kuso--_ konna koto nara be like this, I shouldn't shit ! if-it's-this-kind-of-thing have come!) konakya yokatta!) (= konakereba) was-good if-not-come7[Kyousuke watches as Madoka points out more items to a different clerk.]8[Madoka looks back at the now somber Kyousuke.]---------------------------------------------------p 223 (37)1Madoka: You're still bothered by mada KI ni shite n desho what the salesclerk said still minding (poss-explan) a while back, aren't you. sakki no TEN'IN no KOTOBA while-ago's clerk's words2Kyousuke: [meekly] .......... .......... ___ Do I look so immature? ore tte sonna ni kodomo ppoku I (T) that-kind-of childish mieru no ka na? see/appear I-wonder3Madoka: [forced smile] W-well... But on the other so soo ne demo sore ga GYAKU ni hand, isn't that your charm? well but that-(one) (S) on-the-contrary MIRYOKU nan ja nai? charm/fascination not-haveKyousuke: [quietly indignant] ___ ____ (In other words, you'd like (yo-- suru ni ore ga gaki da to say that I'm a brat...!) in-effect I (S) brat am tte i--tai n darou..........!) want-to-say-that (poss-explan)4[Madoka portrait--she gives him a gentle smile.]5Madoka: [turning and smiling back at him] Well, we're done shopping... sate KAIMONO mo sunda shi well shopping-too finished and-besides ________ Let's go drink coffee or ko--hi-- demo nomi ni something. coffee or-something drink Ikou ka shall-go (?) Today, it's my treat! KYOU wa atashi ga ogoru yo! today (T) I (S) treat6[Isolated shot of the cafe inside the department store building.]7[Two jerks spot Madoka sitting at a table.]---------------------------------------------------p 224 (38)1[They approach Madoka from behind her. Kyousuke looks on with dismay.]jerk 1: ____ You're cute... kimi kawaii ne you cutejerk 2: We're students at Nakagawa boku-tachi NAKAGAWA KOUKOU no High School... we high-school's mono da kedo sa persons be but ______ Why don't we go on a date? de--to shina--i? not-date2jerks FX: ___ ___ nya nya3Kyousuke: [standing] J-just a minute, you guys! chi chotto omaera_! you-(plural) Aren't you being rude?!! SHITSUREI ja nai ka_!! rudeness be-not (?)Kyousuke FX: _____ gatan4jerk 1: Who's this jerk?!! nan da koitsu wa yo~~~~_! what's-this this-fellow (T)jerk 2: Oh, shouldn't you be going otto SHICHIGOSAN no KAEri home for the November 15 Nov-15-Ceremony returning-home Ceremony, kid? ______ kai? bo--ya (?) kid/boyKyousuke FX: _____ muka_5jerk 1: ______ Hey, hey. Rather than ne-- ne-- konna bo--ya hanging out with a little this-kind-of-kid kid like this... AITE ni shite-nai de sa-- be-having-nothing-to-do-with ___ Come with us...! ore-tachi to sa----_ with-usjerk 2: Yes, that's right. so-- so--Kyousuke: C-can't...let you say...! ko kono... iwasete-okeba......! this if-allow-to-say- (for-future-sake)[Madoka sits quiet and stone-faced through all this...]6jerk 2: [sternly at Kyousuke] What's that? nan da yoKyousuke FX: _____ biku_7[Kyousuke sweats and glances at Madoka.]Kyousuke FX: ______ chira_---------------------------------------------------p 225 (39)1[A hand waves the check at Kyousuke's cheek from over his shoulder...]bill FX: ___ su_2[It's Madoka, who heads to the exit. Kyousuke clutches the check in his hand. ]Madoka: Thanks for the hospitality! gochisou-sama!Kyousuke: Ah, w-wait! a ma MAtte!3[The jerks frown as they watch Kyousuke chase after the departing Madoka.]jerk 1: Damn! che_4[Kyousuke, carrying the packages, walks 2 paces behind Madoka.]Kyousuke FX: ____ ____ tobo tobo5Madoka: [from inside elevator] What are you doing? nani yatte n no yo what doing ________ If you don't hurry the motamota shite-ru to shimaru wa yo! doors will shut on you! if-being-slow close/shutKyousuke: [running] R-right! ha hai6[Inside the elevator, Madoka stands with eyes closed, wearing a frown. Kyousuke studies her out of the corner of his eye.]narration: Ayukawa... She sure seems AYUKAWA---- yappari OKOtte-ru angry. sure-enough is-angry mitai da na seems-to-beKyousuke FX: ______ chira_7Kyousuke: (How pathetic! (nasakenai na--_ shameful/miserable ! If this keeps up--more konna koto ja and more, I'll be treated in-this-kind-of-thing (T) coldly like a little brother...) masumasu oto--to atsukai da....) more-and-more kid-brother treat-coldly- (like-a)---------------------------------------------------p 226 (40)1Madoka: Huh? are?2Madoka: That's odd. Don't you smell hen ne nan-da-ka kinakusaku nai? something burning? odd somehow burning-smell not-beKyousuke: N-now that you mention it... so so-- iwarete-mireba.... try-and-come-to-think-of-it3[The elevator comes to an abrupt halt and the two go flying.]elevator FX: _____ gatanKyousuke and Madoka: WAH!! wa_!!4elevator lights-off FX: ___ pa_5elevator cabling FX: ______ jijiji...elevator lights-on FX: ___ pa_6Kyousuke: [spotting smoke entering the elevator from under the door] AH! a_!---------------------------------------------------p 227 (41)1Kyousuke: F-fire!! ka_ KAJI da!!2Kyousuke: Wh-what'll we do?! do_ do-- shiyou?!Madoka: There's a telephone! DENWA ga aru wa! telephone (S) there-is3Kyousuke: [grabbing phone] Oh, yeah. Hello! sou ka moshimoshi!4Kyousuke: ___________ Hello. Right now we're moshimoshi bokura IMA erebe--ta-- no in an elevator... hello we now elevator 's NAKA ni...... inside (IO)voice: [off] Okay. Be patient a little wakarimashita mo-- sukoshi no while longer. Help is understood a-little-more 's definitely... shimbo-- desu kanarazu TASUke ni... patience is by-all-means assistance5voice: [off] Wahhhhh! Smoke over here, wa------_ kotchi ni mo kemuri ga...! too...! ! on-this-side-too smoke (S)Kyousuke: Eh? e?[Kyousuke stares at the receiver in his hand.]voice FX: ______ putsun6Madoka: [concern on her face] What is it? nan da tte?Kyousuke: It's a fire after all... KAJI da yo yappari... fire be after-all7Kyousuke: It looks as if it's out do--yara SOTO demo there as well, so they it-looks-as-if outside-as-well may not have time to rescue us... bokura o TASUkeru yoyuu rescue-us time-to-spare wa nai mitai da...... not-have seems8Madoka: [wide-eyed] Oh... soo...---------------------------------------------------p 228 (42)1[Madoka holds her handkerchief to her mouth as smoke begins to fill the elevator.]Madoka FX: _____ gohon2Kyousuke: [reaching up] Even the ceiling panel TENJOU mo akanai_! won't open! ceiling/top too not-open3[He jumps back down. ]Kyousuke FX: ___ ton4Madoka: It isn't going right, like EIGA no you ni wa the way it does in the like-a-movie (contrast) movies. umaku ikanai mitai ne seem-to-go-wrong5[Kyousuke looks at her with concern.]6narration: _chikara_ If I use the Power, both NOURYOKU tsukaeba futari tomo of us could escape with if-use-the-Power both-people ease... nukedasu gurai slip-out-of to-the-extent wake nai n da kedo---- reason not (explan) but But, if I do, then that demo so-- sureba AYUKAWA tomo would mean Ayukawa... but if-do-like-that including-Ayukawa kore de---- now/with-this7Kyousuke: [flash thought] (Shit! What should I do?!) (kuso----_ do-- sureba i-- n da_?!) shit ! how if-do okay (explan)---------------------------------------------------p 229 (43)1narration: ____ But... If she thinks of da kedo---- gaki da to OMOwarete-ru me as a brat, then... but am-brat be-thinking-that you ja seems I've no chance at a AYUKAWA to no NAKA mo relationship with her. relationship-with-Ayukawa even NOZOmi wa nai shi chance/wish (T) not-there consider2Madoka: The smoke's this bad moo kemuri ga konna ni... already... already smoke (S) like-this3Madoka FX: ____ ____ goho gohoKyousuke: A-are you all right?! da_ DAIJOUBU?!4Madoka: I wonder... atashi-tachi... SHInjau no ka na.... If we'll die... we (= SHInde-shimau) I-wonder die-(finality/regret)Kyousuke: Eh?! e_?!5Madoka: [gaze downcast] Kasuga-kun... KASUGA-kun no koto...... about-you I don't think of you as OTOUTO da nan-te OMOtte-nai yo a kid brother. younger-brother be not-be-thinking[Kyousuke goes wide-eyed.]6[Madoka looks up at the ceiling.]7narration: ___ I'll have to change schools ore mata shite mo TENKOU kaa---- again. I again even-if transfer-schoolKyousuke: Ayukawa... Don't be AYUKAWA... bikkuri shinai de surprised, but please not-be surprised listen to me! kiite-kure! listen-(favor-to-me/command) ___ I'm really... jitsu wa ore... truth I---------------------------------------------------p 230 (44)1[Kyousuke begins to flash with the Power.]2Kyousuke: (I-I hear something!! (na nani-ka OTO ga kikoeru zo_!! something sound (S) hear Someone's voice?!) HITO no KOE?!) person's-voice3Kyousuke: [flash thought] _chikara_ (That's it. If I (so-- da NOURYOKU o MIMI ni concentrate the Power Power (O) to-ear on my ears!) SHUUCHUU sureba!) if-concentrate4Madoka: What? What's the matter? nani? do-- shita noKyousuke: [concentrating] Shh! Be quiet!! shi_ DAMAtte!! ! silently5[Madoka portrait--surprised and perplexed.]6Madoka: Kasuga-kun?! KASUGA-kun......?![Kyousuke continues to concentrate with eyes closed.]7[Their pov of the elevator doors, smoke wafting in the air.]narration: No mistake about it... machigai nai---- a-mistake not-be I faintly hear...!! kasuka ni kikoete-kure zo------ faintly/dimly hear-(favor-to-me) !! Someone's voice! HITO no KOE ga! person's-voice (S)narration: ___________ It's from outside the erebe--ta-- no SOTO kara da! elevator! elevator 's outside from be---------------------------------------------------p 231 (45)1Kyousuke: [eyes popping wide] Eh?!! e!!2[Kyousuke breathes a sigh of relief.]narration: G-good...! so so-- ka------!Kyousuke: ___ Whew! ho_3Kyousuke: [brightly] It's all right! I'm sure DAIJOUBU da yo! kitto TASUkaru sa!! we'll be rescued!! all-right be surely rescue4[Madoka looks at him.]5Kyousuke: [embarrassed] I-I mean, I feel that way i iya sonna KI ga suru n da for some reason... feel-like-that (explan) nan-da-ka... for-some-reason6Kyousuke: So let's be a little more da kara mo-- chotto no shimbo-- da yo patient. that's-why a-little-more patience be Look! Even the smoke isn't hora kemuri mo mou coming in anymore. look! smoke-too already haitte-kite-nai shi not-be-coming-in consider---------------------------------------------------p 232 (46)1[Madoka studies him...]2[...then gives a small hopeful smile.]Madoka: Uh-hmm! un!3Madoka: [gaze downcast, tossing her hair back] You're a guy after all, yappari OTOKO no KO da ne hmm, Kasuga-kun? after-all guy be KASUGA-kun wa4[Kyousuke portrait--bemused smile.]narration: Now... kore de----5Kyousuke: [forced smile] Really? I'm so happy you soo? sou OMOtte-kurete think so. thinking-like-that-(favor-to-me) ureshii yo happyMadoka: You're holding that kekkou NE ni motte n no ne----_! against me, huh?! quite bearing-a-grudge-against (rhet)6Madoka: [sternly] Well, putting that aside, a sore wa sou to what were you about to that-(one) (T) if-that-way say a little while ago? sakki nani Iou to little-while-ago what when-shall-say shite-ta no? did-do (?) "Not be surprised" about nani o bikkuri shinai de tte? what? what (O) not-be-surprised being (quote)narration: I wonder if Ayukawa thinks SUKOshi wa OTOKO to shite a bit better of me now. minaoshite-kureta looked-at-it-again-(favor-to-me) ka na AYUKAWA---- I-wonderKyousuke: [placatingly] Eh?! N-no. That was... e?! i iya are wa... no that-(one) (T) Don't worry about that. KI ni shinai de yo not-mind It wasn't important... taishita koto ja nai n da kara... important-thing is-not (explan) that's-why---------------------------------------------------p 233 (47)1Madoka: [gentle smile, another toss of her hair back] Whaaat? I was quite sure naan da atashi wa tekkiri...... that... what's-that I (T) quite-sure2Kyousuke: Quite sure... What? tekkiri... nani?3Kyousuke: [leaning towards her] Hmmm?! ne_4Madoka: [small smile] Nothing. nan demo nai yoKyousuke: Ah, that's not fair! a zurui na--_ so-- yu-- no! unfair that-kind-of5[View looking down at Madoka talking to elevator repairmen/rescuers. Kyousuke exits the elevator carrying the packages. Two security guards stand nearby.]narration: And 10 minutes later... sore kara 10-FUN GO------ after-that 10-minutes later-on ___________ We were safely rescued bokura wa BUJI erebe--ta-- kara from the elevator... we (T) safety from-elevator TASUkedasareta no da kedo were-rescued-(from) (explan) butsign: Chuugoku Department Store CHUUGOKU China/Hiroshima-area/middle-of-a-country OUMONO SAN IE big-thing fortune/property house 7th Floor Romeo-20 7-KAI SAI TEI BA Restaurant 7-floors meeting restaurant place #ROMEO 20#---------------------------------------------------p 234 (48)1[Isolated shot of scorched table and chairs.]narration: The truth was... This jitsu wa... kono SOUDOU disturbance originated at the-truth this-disturbance the restaurant inside the ________ _________ department store. depa--to NAI no resutoran de Okotta in-restaurant-within-dept-store took-place ____ Smoke from a small fire got boya no kemuri ga TSUUFUUKOU o into the ventilation and small-fire 's smoke (S) vent-hole (O) entered the elevator. ___________ tootte erebe--ta-- ni haitta getting-through entered-elevator That's all it was! dake no koto datta n desu! nothing-but-that was (explan)2Madoka: Hey, Kasuga-kun... chotto KASUGA-kun......Kyousuke: Eh? e3Madoka: [with angry expression] Because of that phone call, sakki no DENWA de you knew it was no big deal, on-account-of-the-phone-call-a-while-back didn't you! taishita koto naitte SHItte-ta important-thing secretly did-know n desho! (explan)4Kyousuke: EH?! e?!5Madoka: [turning to go, looking back over shoulder] Unbelievable! Troubling akireta! HITO sawagase ni mo someone like that. There's amazed person trouble/disturb (IO) a limit to how far you can go! hodo ga aru wa! extent (S) there-is If you knew, why didn't you SHItte-ta nara nande Iwanakatta no say so? if-you-did-know why did-not-say (?) That's sneaky! hikyo-- yo!6[Madoka heads for the doors as Kyousuke chases after her, burdened by the packages.]Kyousuke: W-wait just a minute! chi chotto MAtte yo! I tell you I really didn't HONTOU ni SHIranakatta n da tteba! know! really did-not-know (explan) I-tell-younarration: Actually, I say that, but HONTOU ni to yu-- no wa mochiron of course it's a lie... really saying-that (T) of-course ___ uso de wa aru ga------ lie is but---------------------------------------------------p 235 (49)1[Outside, he stumbles and the packages go flying.]Kyousuke: Wah! wa_!2[From high overhead we see Madoka walking away, Kyousuke chasing after.]Kyousuke: Wait! Ayukawaaa! MAtte yo--_! AYUKAWA----_!sign: ...no ...NO SHOUJI Commercial Affairs commercial affairs _______ ____ ___ Happy 5F Snack & Pub sunakku & pabu run #5F# snack-and-pub runrun? = happy[But splashed over the left side of the page is a front view of Madoka. And we see that she is smiling.]---------------------------------------------------