Kimagure Orange Road"The Secret Part-Time Job"Volume 1, Story 8WB Volume 1, Story 8Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiThis script is based on the existent script by Enrique Conty.Translation by unknown (pencil annotations found in KOR Volume 1)Original typesetting by : Enrique ContyAdditional translation & Full-script typesetting by : Craig NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose                                 Craig Nishida                                 Spencer Hastings                                 Peter NorbyLast revision : 11-11-94NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()NOTE: Translation is done from BOTH the WB and normal manga. So depending on      which one you have there may be a few extra items.      Example: The subtitles on page 171 (169) are only in the WB'S!Comments on the revision (CN):  Besides inserting the romaji, a few missing lines and the wideban subtitles were translated, as well as many missing FXs, stutters, exclamations and honorifics.  During editing, other lines were modified by the members of the translation team.  For the purposes of translating, visual cues were also inserted to allow those without the manga to also contribute to the translation effort.  [This script is not intended to be a substitute for the manga; you'd only be cheating yourself...]---------------------------------------------------p 171 (169)--TITLE PAGE[Madoka stands in blouse and miniskirt, one hand on hip and the other hoisting a tray of food and drinks.  The "whimsical drink" referred to below is 7-Up.]MAIN TITLE (at top)                          ________  The Secret Part-Time Job        HIMITSU no arubaito                                  secret  's part-time-jobSUB-TITLE (at bottom)                        _______  How About Having a Whimsical    kimagure   dorinku  atashi to  Drink with Me...?               whimsical  drink    with-me                                  ikaga...?                                  how-about---------------------------------------------------p 172 (170)1[Exterior shot of a school building.]narration:                                                     _________  At last, Golden Week starts     iyoiyo   ashita kara         go--ruden  tomorrow!                       at-last  beginning-tomorrow  golden                                  ______                                  ui--ku  desu!                                  week    issign:  Kouryou <Secondary> School...   KOURYOU  GAKUEN...                                  <name>   schoolnarration:                        ____  And since our school has        uchi no GAKKOU  TObiISHI        no  consecutive holidays at         our-school      stepping-stones 's  midterm, it's become a                          (i.e.,-consecutive-holidays)  vacation period...                                  CHUUKAN mo  YASUmi ni naru   mon de---                                  midway      become-vacation  in-that2[Kyousuke and Hikaru walk out the building together.  Kyousuke looks glum, but Hikaru has her ever-present cheerful smile.]narration:  It's like a nice, little        chotto shita     TOKUBETSU  KYUUKA  vacation, but...                small/tolerable  special    vacation                                  tte KANji  nan da  kedo----                                  feel-that  it-is   butHikaru:  Sempai, do you have             SEMPAI wa   nani-ka    go-YOTEI  something planned?                     (T)  something  (hon)-plan                                  aru   n desu   ka?                                  have  (explan) (?)3[She looks at his expression and is perplexed.]4Hikaru:  What's wrong?                   do-- shita    n desu   ka?                                  what's-wrong  (explan) (?)  You don't look so happy.        anmari      TANOshiso-- ja nai mitai                                  <not>-very  not-appearing-happy5Kyousuke: [smiling at her]  You look happy, Hikaru-chan.    hikaru-chan wa  TANOshisou da  ne                                             (T)  look-happy6Hikaru: [beaming]  Yes, of course!!                ee   mochiron!!  I'm going to Karuizawa by       atashi  KAZOKU to ISSHO    ni   KURUMA de  car with my family!             I       together-w/family (IO)  by-car                                  KARUIZAWA made   iku  n desu!                                  down-to-<place>  go   (explan)---------------------------------------------------p 173 (171)1Kyousuke: [forcing a smile]       __ __ __  Ha ha ha.                       ha ha ha                                  ___  Technically, I was also         ore mo   ichio--    KAZOKU to  HOKKAIDOU  invited to go to Hokkaido       I   too  generally  w/family   <place>  with my family...                                  iku no  sasowareta   n da      kedo ne                                  going   was-invited  (explan)  but                                             ___  ...but instead, I refused,      sore yori  ore  RENKYUU              wa  saying I'd rather spend the     than-that  I    consecutive-holidays (T)  vacation lazing about at  home!                           IE de    nombiri shita-itte                                  at-home  doing-quiet/peaceful/carefree                                  KOTOWAtta                     n da!                                  turned-down/declined/refused  (explan)narration:                                         ____  Which is why I have the         to yu-- wake de  hima       o  feeling that I won't seem       for-that-reason  free-time (O)  to know what to do with  my spare time...                moteamashi sou na                                  look-like-not-knowing-what-to-do-with                                  YOKAN        mo    suru   kedo---                                  premonition  even  to-do  but2Hikaru: [clinging to his arm]                   _______  Then, Darling, maybe I'll       ja    atashi  da--rin  o   KARUIZAWA ni  take you along with me to       then  I       Darling (O)           (IO)  Karuizawa.                                  tsuretetcha        o--  ka naa                                  (= tsuretette-wa)  ???  I-wonder                                     have-to-bring-(you)-along-with-(me)[Kyousuke shakes a bit.]narration:  Making a mistake while going    hikaru-chan to ISSHO  ni   itte   machigai  with Hikaru-chan would also     together-with-Hikaru (IO)  going  mistake  be terrible.                                  okosu no  mo   osoroshi--      shi                                  making    too  terrible/awful  consider3Hikaru:  Hey, won't you come with me?    ne  issho ni  ikimasen  kaa?                                      together  not-go    (?)Kyousuke:  W-well...  B-but...             so so-- da ne~~~~  shi shikashi......                                     well                but4[Madoka exits the school gate, and Hikaru spots her.]Hikaru:  Ah!                             a_5Hikaru: [waving while clinging on to Kyousuke's arm]  Yoo-hoo!  Madoka-sempaaai!      ya_ho--  madoka-sempa--i!6[Madoka turns, trying not to look too unhappy.]---------------------------------------------------p 174 (172)1Hikaru: [clinging on with both arms]  You're in such a hurry.         sonna         ni   ISOide                                  that-kind-of (IO)  hurrying  What's wrong?!                  do--  shita   n desu   ka----_?!                                  what's-wrong  (explan) (?)[Kyousuke stands stiff, and sweats.]narration:  I always think...               itsu-mo  OMOu   n da      kedo----                                  always   think  (explan)  but2narration:                        ___  ...I don't want Ayukawa to      ore  konna koto          AYUKAWA ni  see me like this!!              I    this-kind-of-thing         (IO)                                  MIraretakunai             n datte!!                                  not-want-to-be-seen-(by)  (explan)[Kyousuke winces.]3[Madoka portrait--expressionless.]4Madoka: [smiling]                                __  Nothing special...  So!         ......chotto   ne!5Madoka: [looking back over her shoulder]  See you, Kasuga-kun.            ja ne  KASUGA-kun6[She walks off.]7[Kyousuke watches her receding back as Hikaru cheerfully rests her head on his shoulder.]narration:  "Nothing special"?  What in     chotto          tte---   ittai nani  the world has happened to       nuthin'-special (quote)  what-in-the-world  her?                                  ga   aru     n darou                                  (S)  happen  (poss-explan)  Ayukawa has been going          koko        SUUJITSU   no AYUKAWA  home strangely early these      this-place  a-few-days 's  past few days...                                  MYOU ni      KAEri     ga  HAYAkute----                                  strange/odd  goes-home     early  For some reason, that worries   nan-to-naku      KI ni naru     n desu!  me!                             for-some-reason  weigh-on-mind  (explan)---------------------------------------------------p 175 (173)1[Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]2[Kyousuke's pov of the TV screen.  An idol singer does a cutesy act.]3[Kyousuke sits, bored and near comatose.]4[Another view of the idol singer.  She does a little skirt-twirl...]5[He turns off the TV.]TV FX:                            ___  <blip!>                         pu_6Kyousuke:  Boring!  Too boring...          munashii!     munashi sugiru  ze......                                  empty/futile  too-empty7[He lies back on the floor, amidst a "Jump" and "Nova" magazine and stacked bowls of ramen/saimin.]Kyousuke:  A page from my dazzling         mabushii  kurai   no  SEISHUN no  youth...                        dazzling (extent) 's  youthful                                       ______                                  ICHI pe--ji                                  one-page  What am I doing in here?        IE de    konna koto          yatte-te  <lit., Is it okay to be doing   at-home  this-kind-of-thing  be-doing  this sort of thing at home?>                                  i--   no daro--     ka                                  okay  (poss-explan) (?)Kyousuke FX:                      _____  <roll!>                         goro_8[This and the next 4 panels are round-cornered, denoting a flashback.]narration:                                            _____  It's my old man's fault...      kore to yu-- no mo  oyaji     me---                                  even-this           "old-man" <derogatory>Takashi: [smiling]  I'm going to Hokkaido to        IS-SHUUKAN  bakari  SHIGOTO de  work for just a week...         one-week    just    because-of-work                                  HOKKAIDOU ni   Iku  n da      ga                                           (IO)  go   (explan)  but                                  _________ ______  But we'll be in Golden Week     go--ruden ui--ku  NAKA    da  shi  then, so why don't you come     golden-week       within  be  consider  along?                                  do-- da  omae-tachi  tsuite konai    ka?                                  what be  you-all     not-come-along  (?)9Kyousuke/Manami/Kurumi: [ecstatic]  Ehhh?!  Really?!                e--_  HONTOU?!  All right!!                     yatta!!---------------------------------------------------p 176 (174)1[The twins chatter while Kyousuke merrily checks a travel guide.]Manami:  Hey, Kurumi, what are you       ne-- kurumi  anta  nani  KIte-ku?  going to wear?                               you   what  going-to-wearKurumi:                                          ______  Since I heard they have         HOKKAIDOU tte  pengin    iru   so-- da  penguins in Hokkaido, I'd                 (T)  penguins  have  (hearsay)  better have a coat or                                     ______  something, huh?                 kara         yappari      ko--to  nan-ka                                  that's-why   sure-enough  coat    somewhat                                  iru   n ja nai no?                                  haveKyousuke's book: "Hokkaido's a Fine Place...      HOKKAIDOU  wa   ii TOKORO  Probably."--Dambe                          (T)  fine-place                                  ...rashii                  dambe                                     probably/apparently     <name?>2Takashi:  Except that...                  tadashi......[The children pause in shock.]3Takashi:  I was only able to get          KOUKUU KEN      wa   3 -NIN    BUN  tickets for three people!!      airline-tickets (T)  3-people  shares                                  shika torenakatta!!                                  only-obtained  Kyousuke, you're the oldest,    KYOUSUKE omae wa  CHOUNAN     da  shi  so give a ticket to your                 you (T)  oldest-son  be  consider  <younger> sisters!                                  koko       wa   hitotsu  IMOUTO-tachi ni                                  this-place (T)  one      to-younger-sisters                                  yuzutte-yare!                                  give-(favor-to-them/command)[Kyousuke is horror-struck.]Kyousuke reaction FX:  <CLAAAANG>                      ga~~n4[Back to the present.  Kyousuke still lies on his back on the floor.  He frowns up at the ceiling.]Kyousuke:  So cruel...                     hidoi            ja nai ka                                  cruel/outrageous  He raised my hopes, then        nukayorokobi   sase-yagatte        kuso----_  dashed them, dammit!            premature-joy  leaving-(me)-to-do  shit/damn                                  fruitless-joy       (contempt/vulgar-usage)5Kyousuke:  Aaaah!  If it's going to be     a~~~~a!  kore na     koto   nara  like this, I really should               this-(one)  thing  if-it-is  have gone with Hikaru-chan  to Karuizawa!                   HONTOU ni  hikaru-chan no KARUIZAWA                                  really                 's                                  tsuite-ikeba      yokatta na---_!                                  if-go-along-with  was-good6[Just a grey panel with overlaid FX bubble.]Kyousuke stomach FX:  <grumble!>                      gu~~~~~_7Kyousuke: [sitting up]  Oo-ooh.  I'm hungry.            u~~~~  hara hetta na--                                         gotten-hungry  I haven't eaten anything        ASA kara       roku na  decent since morning.           since-morning  <no>-decent/satisfactory                                  mon    kuttenai  n da                                  thing  not-eat   (explan)  I get hungry even when I'm      nani-mo  shinakute mo  not doing anything!             nothing  even-though-<not>-doing                                  hara wa heru!                                  get-hungry---------------------------------------------------p 177 (175)1[Kyousuke walks down the sidewalk.]sign 1:                                 ______  KK <??????>                     #KK#  komura                                        ??????sign 2:  Top Brokerage                   saya                    ue                                  brokerage/sword-sheath  topsign 3:  <name> Top Brokerage            saya ue    <undecipherable-kanji>                                             <name?>2[He spies something.]3[Wow!  It's a new restaurant!  Hmm.  Looks like "<something>BCB"...  ^_^]4Kyousuke:                                   _________      ____  Hmmm?!  "Restaurant and Pub"!   he---_    resutoran #&#  pabu!  This wasn't here the last       kono mae     TOOtta     TOKI wa  time I passed by...             before-this  passed-by  time (T)                                  konna no      nakatta       hazu......                                  this-kind-of  was-not-here  likely5Kyousuke: [entering] (This place should have          (koko nara     TAbeMONO  aru   daro-- na)  food.)                           if-it's-here  food      have  poss-be6Kyousuke: [taking a seat at a table] (Ohh, this restaurant has a      (he--  nakanaka    KANji no ii      MISE  rather nice feel to it.)               quite/very  good-impression  store                                  da  na)                                  be7[A waitress comes up.  Our pov is from behind so we only see Kyousuke looking up at her.]waitress:  What will it be?                nani  ni   nasaimasu  ka?                                  what (IO)  do         (?)Kyousuke:  Let's see, well...              e--to ano ne8[He looks up and his face falls.]---------------------------------------------------p 178 (176)1Madoka: [surprised]  Kasuga-kun...?!                 KASUGA-kun.......?!both:                             ___  AH!                             ha_2Kyousuke: [wide-eyed]  Ayukawa...                      .......AYUKAWA3[Madoka portrait.]4[A little later.  Kyousuke eats while Madoka sits across from him and keeps him company.]Kyousuke:  Really?  You're working here    he---  RENKYUU no aida  zutto  all through the holiday?               during-holiday   throughout                                                 _____                                  koko de        baito?                                  at-this-place  workMadoka:  A person I know runs this       SHIriai         ga   yatte-ru  place, so I feel at ease!       an-acquaintance (S)  be-giving/doing                                  MISE   da kara     KIRAKU           nan da!                                  store  that's-why  feeling-at-home  it-is5Madoka: [smiling gently]                                     ______  But, don't tell the school.     demo......  GAKKOU de wa   naisho  da  yo                                  but         at-school (T)  secrecy be                                  _____  Because we're not allowed       baito wa   KINSHI       sarete-ru  to work.                        work  (T)  prohibition  be-making                                  kara                                  that's-why6Madoka:  But, Kasuga-kun, I was          da kedo  KASUGA-kun  ga   kono KINJO  surprised to find you              but               (S)  this-neighborhood  around here.                                  da  towa    ODOROita na--                                  be          was-surprised-atKyousuke:  Really.                         mattaku7narration:  So this is why she was going    so-- ka    SAIKIN       KAEri    ga  home so early, huh?                        most-recent  go-home  (S)                                  HAYAi no wa  datta  no  kaa                                  early        was        (?)Kyousuke: [smiling]               ___  Whew!                           ho_---------------------------------------------------p 179 (177)1[From behind the counter, the shop proprietor calls out to Madoka.]Master:  Ayukawa-kuuun.                  AYUKAWA-ku--nMadoka:  Yes.                            ha--i2Madoka: [to Kyousuke]  Can you wait a minute?          chotto  MAtte-te   ne                                  a-bit   be-waiting3[Kyousuke watches her and smiles.]narration:  Even though it was a            GUUZEN  to wa ie  doko ni mo  coincidence, and we're          chance  although  <not>-anywhere  not going anywhere, this  is a good thing!                Ikenakute mo       i-- koto    aru                                  not-even-be-going  good-thing  happen                                  ja nai ka!4[Madoka and Master confer.  Kyousuke keeps smiling.]Kyousuke FX:                      ________  <smile>                         nikoniko5[Master approaches Kyousuke at his table.]Master: [smiling]                                      ____________  I hear that you're              kimi  AYUKAWA-kun no kurasume--to  Ayukawa-kun's classmate?        you               's classmate                                  nan da    tte?                                  that-is  (hearsay)6Master: [embarrassed and jovial]  Phew, that's good.              iya--  yokatta  I was just short-handed,        cho--do HITODE  ga   TArinakute  and I was at a loss what        just-one-worker (S)  being-not-enough  to do!                                  KOMAtte-ta     toko         datta  n da!                                  was-at-a-loss  case/moment  was    (explan)                                  _________  Wah ha ha!                      wa_ha_ha_  I'm saved!                      tasukatta  yo----_7Kyousuke:  EH?!  Wh-what are you           e   na nan no koto  desu ka--?!  talking about?!                        about-what   be   (?)8Master:  As I hear it, you live          kikeba   IE    mo   CHIKAi    to yu--  around here, too.               if-hear  home  too  close-by  say-that                                  shi                                  consider                                                         _________ ______  How about it?  At least         do--ka na    semete    go--ruden ui--ku  during just the middle of       in-any-case  at-least  golden-week  Golden Week, could I ask  you...?!                        NAKA dake    demo           tanomenai                                  only-during  even-if-it-is  not-be-asking                                  ka na~~~~~_                                  I-wonder  !                                  _____  I'll pay you <well>.            baito RYOU  hazumu                     yo                                  work-fee    treat-(you)-to-(something)Kyousuke:  Huh?!                           he_?!---------------------------------------------------p 180 (178)1Madoka: [standing next to his table]  I'd like you to help out        atashi kara mo  onegai!   KASUGA-kun  too, Kasuga-kun!                from-me-too     request2[Madoka portrait--how can you resist this face, Kyousuke...]3Kyousuke: [smiling, embarrassed]  W-well...  I wonder if I        so  soo da na--  do--  shiyou    ka na  should...                           well         what  shall-do  I-wonderMaster: [beaming]  So you'll do it?                so-- ka    yatte-kureru         ka                                             doing-(favor-to-me)  (?)  Oh, I'm saved!                  iya--  TASUkatta yo-----_                                         saved4Master: [handing him stuff]                             ___  If that's settled, then         so-- to kimareba      hai    o-MISE no  here you go!  Your employee     if-decided-like-that  here!    store's  sweatshirt, duster and tray!    __________             ________                                  tore--na--  kotchi ga  dasuta-- to                                  "trainer"   here       duster   and                                  (i.e., sweatshirt)                                  tore--!                                  trayKyousuke: [incredulous]  Ehh?  Right now?!               e--  IMA sugu   na no~~~_                                       right-away5[Later, in the employee dressing room...]Kyousuke: [removing his shirt] (I kind of feel forced into      (uyamuya no UCHI ni  TEN'IN  this job.)                       hush-up/stifle      clerk                                  sarete-shimatta)                                  was-made-(finality/regret)6Madoka: [poking her head in the room]  _____  Is the size okay?               doo  saizu wa?                                  how  size  (T)door FX:                          ______  <swish!>                        sha--_7Kyousuke: [facing locker, shirtless, back to door]  Wait a minute, now...           chotto  MAtte-te    IMA...                                  a-sec   be-waiting  now---------------------------------------------------p 181 (179)1[Madoka goes wide-eyed.]2Kyousuke: [looking back at her with a surprised smile]  ?                               ?3Madoka:                           ______  I'll leave the apron right      epuron  koko  ni   oitoku        kara  here.                           apron   here (IO)  (= oite-oku)  that's-why                                                        set-down-(for-                                                            future's-sake)  And hurry.                      ISOide    ne                                  hurrying  The place is quite full.        kekko--     haitte      n no yo                                  quite/very  containingKyousuke:                         ________  Thank you.                      sankyu--4door FX:                          _____  <slam>                          pisha[She leans back against the wall for a moment to compose herself...]5[...and lets out a sigh.]6[View of a busy restaurant.]7[Kyousuke apologizes to a customer who has just received a lapful of water. Madoka unsuccessfully tries to stifle her laughter in the background.]narration:  And so, it started out on       ko-- shite       hyon na  koto  a strange note, and that's      doing-like-this  strange  thing  how I came to be working                                   _____  here...                         kara        kono MISE de   baito suru                                  that's-why  at-this-store  work                                  koto ni nari----                                  became-this---------------------------------------------------p 182 (180)1[Kyousuke waiters...]narration:  Although this job is pretty     SHIGOTO wa   kekko--  kitsui  kedo  tough, maybe because            work    (T)  quite    hard    but  Ayukawa's here I'm not  bothered at all!                AYUKAWA  ga   iru      se--ka                                           (S)  is-here  the-result                                  ZENZEN      KU ni naranai!                                  completely  not-worry-me2[He drops a plate...]3[...but uses the Power to save it.]levitating plate FX:              _____  <stop short!>                   pita_4[Kyousuke grabs the plate.]Madoka: [looking]  ?                               ?narration:                                               _____  Nobody knows that I'm           koko de    AYUKAWA to  baito shite-ru  working with Ayukawa here.      over-here  w/Ayukawa   be-working                                  nan-te   DARE-mo SHIranai                                  or-such  nobody-knows5[He sweeps the floor before opening time.]narration:  Of course, it's a secret        mochiron   hikaru-chan  ni   mo   HIMITSU  from Hikaru-chan, too.          of-course              (IO)  too  secret6[Madoka enters.]narration:  It's just our secret!!          AYUKAWA to    futari dake   no HIMITSU                                  with-Ayukawa  just-2-people 's secret                                  nan da!!                                  it-is7Kyousuke: [cheerfully]  Good morning!                   ohayo--8Kyousuke: [at the cash register]  Thank you.                      arigato-- gozaimashitanarration:                        ___________  It's like I got a little        misuteriasu na  AYUKAWA no SHISEIKATSU   ni  closer to Ayukawa's             mysterious              's private-life (IO)  mysterious private life...                                  choppiri     CHIKAzuketa          mitai----                                  a-bit/a-tad  allowed-to-approach  seems-like---------------------------------------------------p 183 (181)1[Exterior night shot of ABCB.]narration:  And before you know it,         soshite  atto yu-- mani  5-GATSU  it's May 5th...                 and      all-too-soon    May                                  5-KA----                                  5th                                            _____  Last day of work!               KYOU de   baito mo  o-shimai no HI!                                  on-today  work      (hon)-last-day2[Inside, the three share drinks at the counter.  Master stands behind it, Madoka and Kyousuke sit side-by-side.]all:                                     ______  No-o-o...  Ha ha ha.            iya--- hahaha3Master:  Thanks, Kasuga-kun! <*>         KASUGA-kun  o-tsukare-san!                                              (hon)-weariness-(hon)  Your help saved me.             okage de     TASUkatta yo                                  due-to-help  saved  Was it hard?                    kitsukatta  desho                                  was-hard    poss-be<*Translation note:  This phrase is difficult to translate into English. Master here says "o-tsukare-san!"--said by one after a long day, and is sort of an apology plus offer of thanks to another for putting that person through such a long day.>4Kyousuke: [smiling]  Yeah, but it was a lot of       ee  demo  kekko--  TANOshiku  yaremashita  fun.                                but   quite    fun        didMaster:  Is that because Ayukwawa-kun    sore       wa   AYUKAWA-kun ga   ita  was here?                       that-(one) (T)              (S)  was-here                                  kara        kai?                                  that's-why  (?)5Kyousuke:  EH?!                            e?!6[Madoka portrait-a bit surprised, a bit contemplative.]7Madoka: [calculatingly]                      ________  But Master, is it okay to be    sore yori  masuta--  i--   n desu   ka  goofing off in a place like     but-that             okay  (explan) (?)  this?  (lit., "to be selling  oil/lard in a place like        konna TOKORO de        ABURA  this")                          in-this-kind-of-place  oil/lard/fat                                  Utte-te                                  be-selling/dealing-in                                  <ABURA o Uru = loaf-away-one's-time>  Isn't your wife waiting for     okusan  MAtte-ru    n ja nai  n desu   ka  you?                            wife    be-waiting    is-not  (explan) (?)---------------------------------------------------p 184 (182)1Master: [heading out]  Okay, okay.  I can't win        yareyare  AYUKAWA-kun ni wa   kanawan na--  with you, Ayukawa-kun.          oh-boy               (IO)(T)  not-beat  Well, I'll be going so          ja    ore  KAEru    kedo  please lock up the place,       well  I    go-home  but  okay?                                  o-MISE  no tojimari       o-negai   ne--                                    store    lock-the-doors   request (right?)2door FX:                          _____  <rattle>                        karannarration:                                  ________  But what Master said is         shikashi  masuta-- no KOTOBA wa  true...                         but                's words (T)                                  HONTOU de---                                  true   being3narration:  I took this job to be           AYUKAWA to ISSHO    da kara  together with Ayukawa.          together-w/Ayukawa  that's-why                                          _____                                  koko no baito      mo   hikiuketa  na da                                  this-place's-work  too  took       (explan)[He looks at her.  She's busy drinking.]4Madoka:  Kasuga-kun, all I've seen       KASUGA-kun  sakki kara  you drink is juice.                         since-a-little-while-ago                                                          ______                                  mite-ru to    nani yo   ju--su bakkari                                  if-be-seeing  what      only-juice                                  ja naiKyousuke:                                             ___  B-but, after all I'm still      de demo  yappari    ore  mada  in junior high.                    but   after-all  I    still                                  CHUUGAKUSEI      da  shi                                  jr-high-student  be  consider5Madoka:                                        ________  C'mon, it's okay!  It's on      ii ja nai!   masuta-- no ogori  the house.                                            's extravagance                                  nan da kara                                  that's-why6Madoka: [smiling gently]  Or are you such a serious       KASUGA-kun tte  majime SHOUNEN  na no?  boy?                                       (T)  serious-boy7Kyousuke:  I-I'm not like that!            so sonna koto          nai yo!                                     that-kind-of-thing  is-notMadoka:  Probably so.                    so--       daro--  naa                                  like-that  poss-be---------------------------------------------------p 185 (183)1Kyousuke: [stopping short]  Eh?                             e2Madoka: [focusing on her drink]                       ______  Because--although you           datte    hikaru to  de--to no  promised a date with Hikaru,    because  w/Hikaru   date   's  you stood her up and went  riding in a boat with me        YAKUSOKU shite-ta  kuse-ni   suppokashite  at the park.                    did-promise        although  standing-up                                                       ______                                  atashi to  KOUEN de  bo--to notte                                  with-me    at-park   riding-a-boat                                  n da mon                                  (reason)Kyousuke FX:                      _____  <ouch!>                         zuki_                                  (zukizuki = throb/smart with pain)3Madoka: [tossing back one]  You're disgusting!              yana yatsu         da!                                  disgusting-fellow  beKyousuke FX:                      _____  <ouch!>                         zuki_4narration:  Th-that's harsh...!             ki kitsui na----_Madoka: [turning to look at him]  Do you know what that's         so-- yu--    no  nan-te yu-- ka  called?                         that-kind-of 's  what-called (?)                                  SHItte-ru?                                  be-knowingKyousuke: [giving nervous look]  Eh?!                            e_5Madoka: [smiling gently]          ___________  A flirt.                        sukekomashi6[Madoka pours another one.]drink pouring FX:                 ____ ____  <glub glub>                     toku tokuKyousuke: (Sh-she's making strange digs    (mi myo-- ni  karamu na  at me tonight...)                   strange   pick-a-quarrel-with                                  KON'YA  wa...)                                  tonight (T)7Kyousuke:  Ayukawa, don't you think        AYUKAWA......  moo      sono kurai   ni  that's enough?                                 already  that-extent (IO)                                  shitara                                  if-do8Madoka:  Do you honestly like her?       HONTOU ni  SUki na no?  hikaru no koto  Hikaru?                         really     liking       about-Hikaru---------------------------------------------------p 186 (184)1[Kyousuke portrait--stopping short.]2Madoka: [hand over mouth]  AH!                             a3Madoka: [looking aside unhappily]  Sorry.                          gomen4Kyousuke:  But...                          demo...Madoka: [looking back]  Huh?                            e5Kyousuke: [gentle smile]  This is the first time I've     AYUKAWA ga   konna         ni   shaberu no  seen you talk as much as                (S)  this-kind-of (IO)  chattering  this.                                  HAJImete      da  ne                                  for-1st-time  beMadoka: [smile]  Is that so?                     ara  soo?6Madoka:  For some reason, I feel         KON'YA  wa   nan-da-ka        TANOshii no  good tonight.                   tonight (T)  for-some-reason  pleasant7[Kyousuke portrait--he looks over at her.]8[Shot of a painting/poster on the wall depicting three of the "Fab Four", I think.]Kyousuke: [off]  Ayukawa...  Shouldn't you be    AYUKAWA...... mada  KAEranakute     i-- no?  going home?                                   yet   not-going-home  okayMadoka: [off]  AH!                             a!---------------------------------------------------p 187 (185)1[Exterior shot of the bus stop sign.]2[Overhead view looking down.  Madoka and Kyousuke stand at the bus stop.]Madoka:  Sure enough, I'm not in time    yappari      SAISHUU     maniawanakatta....  for the last one...             sure-enough  last/final  wasn't-in-time-forKyousuke:  Too bad.  What'll we do?        KOMAtta  ne    dou   shiyou                                  troubled       what  shall-do3[Kyousuke studies the bus schedule.]Madoka:  Isn't...everyone at your        TASHIka......  KASUGA-kun toko  house gone on a trip?                                     place                                  RYOKOU de  minna     inai       no yo ne?                                  on-a-trip  everyone  not-thereKyousuke:  Yup!  But they'll be back       un!   ASU no GOGO         ni  wa  tomorrow afternoon.                   tomorrow-afternoon (IO) (T)                                  KAEtte-kuru          n da      kedo ne                                  come-to-return-home  (explan)  but4[What she's driving at registers in his mind and he suddenly turns to look at her.]5[Madoka stands there, hands behind her back.]6Madoka: [flashing with a gentle smile]  Won't you...let me stay for     KOMBAN...    tomete-kurenai?  the night?                      tonight      not-put-me-up-(favor-to-me)---------------------------------------------------p 188 (186)1[Kyousuke, wide-eyed.]2[Madoka portrait--Kyousuke's pov as she gazes directly into his eyes.]3[A view from down the street.  They stand facing each other.]Kyousuke:  Ah!...  Ayukawa...              a_......  AYUKAWA...4Madoka: [smiling playfully]  I won't tell Hikaru.            hikaru ni   wa   damatte-ru   yo                                  from-Hikaru (T)  keep-silence5[Kyousuke portrait--thinking really hard.]6[Madoka falls against him.  He catches her and holds her against his chest.]---------------------------------------------------p 189 (187)1narration:  A-Ayukawa...                    a AYUKAWA------2[Another view from down-the-street.  In silhouette, they embrace...]3Kyousuke:  Huh?                            n?4[He looks down at a dozing Madoka.]Madoka sleep FX:                  ____ ____  <light breathing>               su-- su--narration:  She's asleep...                 NEte-ru----                                  be-sleeping5[From behind a car beeps its horn.  Kyousuke looks back.]car horn FX:                      ___ ______  <toot-toooot!>                  pu_ pu---_6Hikaru: [sticking her head out the car window]  Yoo-hoooo, Sempaaai,            ya_ho----  SEMpa--i   madoka-sa----n_!!  Madoka-saaan!!7Kyousuke: [horrified]  H-Hikaru-chan!                  hi hikaru-chan!                                  ___  Arg!                            ge_narration:  Uh-oh!                          ma mazui_8Hikaru: [beaming and waving]                                   _____  Did you just finish?  With      IMA  Owatta    n desu   ka   baito  work?                           now  finished  (explan) (?)  You must be exhausted!          o-tsukare-sama  de----su!---------------------------------------------------p 190 (188)1Kyousuke: [surprised]  What?!                          he_?!2[Hikaru stands on the sidewalk near the two.  Kyousuke still holds the sleeping beauty...]Kyousuke:  Y-you knew?                     shi_  SHItte-ta no?                                        did-knowHikaru:  Yeah.  I heard from             ee  madoka-san kara  DENWA de  kiitemasu  Madoka-san over the phone           from-Madoka      on-phone  hear  that you were working with                                _____  her.                            madoka-san to SEMPAI ga   baito shite-ru                                  Sempai-and-Madoka    (S)  be-working                                      tte       koto                                  (hearsay) matter3Hikaru: [getting a closer look at Madoka]  Oh?  She got tired and fell     aree  tsukarete  asleep?                         huh   getting-tired-(and)                                  NEchatta           n desu    kaa                                  (= NEte-shimatta)  (explan)  (?)                                     slept-(finality)4Hikaru: [holding up Madoka]  I'll take her home.             atashi  OKUtte-ikimasu                                  I       go-and-escort-home5Hikaru: [in passenger seat of car]  See you later at school,        ja ne--  SEMpa--i  mata  GAKKOU de!!  Sempai!!                                                 at-school<You never get a view of the driver, but it must be Hikaru's mom or dad... Certainly Hikaru isn't driving at her age...>6car driving-away FX:              _____  <whooosh>                       buuuu[Kyousuke is left to stare at the receding car.]7narration:                                           _____  Wh-what?!  I thought the job    na nan da----?!    baito no koto  was only our secret...             what's-that     about-work                                  ___                                  ore to   futari dake   no HIMITSU                                  with-me  only-2-people 's secret                                  ja nakatta     no ka----                                  was-not-there  What in the world was I         ore wa  ittai         NANI  o  getting all happy about         I  (T)  in-the-world  what (O)  then?                           ______                                  ukiuki shite-ta     n daro--      ka------                                  was-being-cheerful  (poss-explan) (?)---------------------------------------------------p 191 (189)1/2[Panel 1--Kyousuke walks home.]narration:  But those words weigh on        da kedo   KI ni naru        no wa  my mind...                         but    weigh-on-my-mind                                  ano KOTOBA----                                  those-words2[He visualizes Madoka...]Madoka: [flashback]  Won't you...let me stay for     KOMBAN...   tomete-kurenai?  the night?2/3[Panel 3--He visualizes her falling against him.]narration:  Ayukawa...  What did she        AYUKAWA......  do-- yu--     tsumori  mean by it?!                                   what-kind-of  intention                                  datta  n darou...?!                                  was    (poss-explan)4[Pov looking up at his head and the starry sky overhead.]narration:  Is it simply because she        tannaru  o-SAKE no sei     na no ka----  was drunk?                      simply     liquor's-fault        (?)5[View of the sleeping Madoka, in the back seat of the Hiyama's car.]6[View of the car on a street.]narration:  Or...?                          sore-tomo---------------------------------------------------