Kimagure Orange Road"The Lip Secret"Volume 1, Story 3WB Volume 1, Story 3Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiThis script is based on the existent script by Enrique Conty and MarvinNakajima.Translation by unknown (pencil annotations found in KOR Volume 1)Original typesetting by : Enrique ContyAdditional translation by : Marvin Nakajima, Craig NishidaFull-script typesetting by : Craig NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose                                 Craig Nishida                                 Spencer Hastings                                 Scott Henry                                 Peter NorbyLast revision : 11-11-94NOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()NOTE: Translation is done from BOTH the WB and normal manga. So depending on      which one you have there may be a few extra items.      Examples: The subtitles on page 61 (59) are only in the WB'S!                The one-page "Character Profiles" at the ends of the first                six chapters are omitted in the WB's!Comments on the revision (CN):  Besides inserting the romaji, a few missing lines and the wideban subtitles were translated, as well as many missing FXs, stutters, exclamations and honorifics.  During editing, other lines were modified by the members of the translation team.  For the purposes of translating, visual cues were also inserted to allow those without the manga to also contribute to the translation effort.  [This script is not intended to be a substitute for the manga; you'd only be cheating yourself...]---------------------------------------------------p 61 (59)--TITLE PAGE[What appears to be a poster adorns this title page.  Madoka and Kyousuke, dressed in evening wear, come perilously close to kissing.]MAIN TITLE (at top)                          ____________  The Lip Secret                  kuchibiru  shi--kuretto                                  lip        secretSUB-TITLE (at bottom)             ______  Bare Lips, Alluring...          nu--do     no kuchibiru  NAYAmashii...                                  nude/bare  's lips       alluring/teasing                                                           ______ ___  Lesson One of a Great Love!     SUTEKI na       KOI  no  ressun-wan!                                  great/splendid  love 's  lesson one---------------------------------------------------p 62 (60)1actress (Hori Chiemi): [teary-eyed]  Teacher!                        KYOUKAN!                                  teacher/instructor                                  ____                    ______ (He's feeble-minded and          guzu de                 noroma de  stupid as Gamera but...)        a-feeble-minded-person  stupid-fellow/dull                                  a-laggard               a-simpleton                                  ______                                  gamera  da  kedo                                  Gamera  be  but  I love you!                     AIshite masu!<Cultural note (EC/MN): Gamera is a giant flying turtle in the same genre as Godzilla.><Cultural note (CN): the actress who plays the "Elevator Girl" is later identified as Hori Chiemi, a pop star of the time...>2actor:                            _________  Machumoto!                      machumoto!3[They embrace...]hug FX:  <cling!>                        hishi_4[...and kiss.]5[Cut to the 4 pairs of eyes that belong to the Kasuga clan...  They goggle.]6background reaction-to-TV-show FX:  <jingle jangle jingle jangle>   cha~~  charara~~  rarara~~  rarararara                                  (charachara = jingle/jangle/rattle/clatter)Kurumi FX:  <blink>                         pachikuri---------------------------------------------------p 63 (61)1TV announcer:                     ___________     ______  Following "Elevator Girl        erebe--ta--  -  ga--ru  MONOGATARI  wa  Story" at this time...          Elevator-Girl           story/tale (T)                                  KONKAI     o   mochimashite...                                  this-time (O)  followingTV screen:  End                             KAN2Kurumi:                                              ____     _____  Hey.  Why do they say that      ne-- ne--  nan-de  kisu tte remon no AJI ga  kisses taste like lemons?!                 why     kiss     lemon's taste                                  suru  tte yu--  no~~~_?!                                  do    say-thatKasuga family heartbeat FX:  <WHUMP!>                        do_ki----n3Manami:  Ah...                           aTakashi:  Oh...                           o4Manami: [getting up]  Oh, I still have to clear       so-- da       atashi  DAIDOKORO no  away the kitchen...!            that's-right  I       kitchen                                  ATOkatazuke                     ga                                  clear-away/put-things-in-order (S)                                  NOKOtte-ta     n da----_                                  was-remaining  (explan)!Takashi: [hiding behind his paper]  Hmm...  Choushuu vs.            nani nani    CHOUSHUU #vs# FUJINAMI  Fujinami <i.e., a sumo                       <name>        <name>  match>, a no-contest                     ____   _________  again.                          mata mo  no-- - kontesuto                                  again    "no-contest"5Kyousuke:                                        ___  Err...  Ah...  I...  Uh...      e......  a...  ore wa... to6[Kurumi stares intently at her brother.]Kurumi contemplation FX:  <hmm...>                        ji----                                  (jikkuri = think-carefully)Kyousuke: [embarrassed]  Hahaha...                       hahaha7Kurumi: [getting up and walking off towards the kitchen]  No matter how I look at it,     do-- MIte mo  it seems unlikely you have      in-every-respect/to-all-appearance  the experience, oniichan,  so even if I ask you, you       KEIKEN     no  nasaso-- na    oNIIchan ni  wouldn't know.                  experience 's  seem-unlikely          (IO)                                  kiite   mo    wakannai  yo ne                                  asking  even  not-know  Right, Manami-chaaan?           ne--  manami-cha--nKyousuke: [thinking dark thoughts]  ..........                      ..........---------------------------------------------------p 64 (62)1[Exterior shot looking up at a school building.]2Hatta: [bawling]  Endurance will endure the       minna de  TAe ga taki o TAeSHINObi  falls, memories will bear       everyone  the divergences, everyone.                                  ga taki o SHINObi......<Translation note (CN):  I didn't change anything here, because I don't know what the heck is going on.  The symmetry of the Japanese suggests a poem?  TAegatai = intolerable/unbearable/insufferable; taki = waterfall/falls; TAeSHINObi = endure-patiently; TAeru = 1)-bear/endure, 2)-be-fit-for>guys: [all bawling]  Hey!  Hey!                      o--i_  o--i_Komatsu: [bawling]  My friends, we must endure,     shokun     ga   mon   da  we can do nothing else but      my-friends (S)  thing be  endure!                                  koko wa   ga mon    shika nai!                                  here (T)     thing  only-have<Didn't change anything here, either...>3Kyousuke: [curious]  Something happened?             nani-ka    atta no?                                  something  happenedHatta: [still bawling]  Shit!  With my Chiemi...        kuso~~_    ore no chiemi to~~                                        !    my            withKomatsu: [also bawling]  Crying is so disgraceful,       NAku na  migurushii             zo  HATTA!  Hatta!                          crying   unbecoming/dishonorable4Komatsu: [angrily]  Didn't you see the "Elevator    omae  MInakatta no ka   kinou no  Girl Story" kiss scene          you   not-seen    (?)   yesterday's  yesterday?!                     ___________   ______                                  erube--ta-- - ga--ru  MONOGATARI no                                  Elevator-Girl         story      's                                  ____ ______                                  kisu shi--n!                                  kiss-sceneKyousuke:  I saw it...                     MIta  kedo......                                  saw   but  Was there something wrong       sore       ga   do--ka shita no?  with it?                        that-(one) (S)  was-something-wrong5Hatta: [grabbing Kyousuke by the lapels] "Was there something wrong       sore       ga   do-- ka shita  with it?"                       that-(one) (S) "is-something-wrong"                                  ka  da to                                  (?) if-that-is  You bastaaaard!  You            kono yaro~~~~_!   kono HIKOKUMIN!!  traitor!!                       this                   unpatriotic-person6Komatsu:                                                 ___ ______  To our Hori Chiemi Fan Club,    wareware  HORI CHIEMI  fan kurabu  ni  that kiss scene was just        our       <name>       fan-club   (IO)  about as serious as an                             ____ ______  A-bomb falling on us!!          totte wa  kinou no kisu shi--n   wa                                  for/to    yesterday's-kiss-scene (T)                                  GENBAKU   ga   Ochita  no to  ONAji kurai                                  atom-bomb (S)  fell       if  about-same                                  DAIJIKEN          nan da!!                                  serious-incident  that-isKyousuke:                         _____  Such overreacting...            o--ba na...                                  "over"7Kyousuke:  ...but isn't that acting?       demo  are        wa   ENGI    darou?                                  but   that-(one) (T)  acting  poss-beKomatsu: [enraged]  The fact is that it was         shita no wa   JIJITSU     da!!  done!!                          done     (T)  fact/truth  is---------------------------------------------------p 65 (63)1[The guys turn their backs and walk off.]Komatsu:  As for that bastard             ja yo--   KAZAMA no yaro--  o  Kazama...                                 <name>           (O)Kyousuke: [miffed] (I'm not going to talk to        (KYOU  wa   HANAshi-kaken  no yame yo tto)  them today.)                     today (T)  not-speak-to      stop2[He turns to watch Madoka, who stands alone at the open window, gazing out.]class jabber FX:                  ________  ______  <noise>  <clamor>               gayagaya  waiwai                                  noisily   clamourously3[View from behind of Madoka at the window...]student 1: [off]  Ha ha ha.                       hahahastudent 2: [off]  That can't be true...           uso daro--   sore       wa  nai  yo--                                  lie poss-be  that (one) (T) not-bestudent 3: [off]  You don't believe me?           yadaa~~  It's true I tell you.           HONTO-- yo--4[Pov shifts so we can see her face.  She is deep in thought.]5narration:  Come to think of it...          so-- ieba6narration:                                    ____________  I've never seen Ayukawa         AYUKAWA ga  karasume--to to  HANAshite-ru  talking with other                     (S)  with/classmates  be-speaking  classmates...                                  no mada       MIta koto       nai na----                                     <not>-yet  something-seen  not---------------------------------------------------p 66 (64)1narration:  I wonder if the reason no       tsuppatte-ru           kara  one approaches her is           be-rebellious-<slang>  because  because she is rebellious  and everyone is scared of       kowakutte        dare-mo   CHIKAzukanai no  her, or because she is a        being-scared-of  everyone  not-approach  classroom nuisance...                                    ______                                  ka na----    sore to mo  kurasu no                                  I-wonder     or/or-else  class's                                  ___________                                  hanatsumami                MONO na no ka---                                  black-sheep/odious-person  person2narration:  At times like these Ayukawa     konna TOKI     no  AYUKAWA tte  nan-da-ka  seems so lonely.                time-like-this 's          (T)  somehow                                  sabishi -sou da na                                  lonely   seems3[View from outside the window looking down at Madoka.  She rests her chin in her hands and continues to gaze outside.]---------------------------------------------------p 67 (65)[This page is bordered in black...]1[Kyousuke rests his hand on Madoka's shoulder.  She turns around in surprise.]Kyousuke: [in a serious manner]  You seem depressed...           shizunde-ru   you da     kedo                                  be-depressed  seem-like  but  If you like you can let me      yokattara  wake               o  listen to your problems,        if-okay    the-circumstances (O)  Ayukawa...                                  kikasete-kurenai               ka                                  not-let-me-hear-(favor-to-me)  (?)                                  AYUKAWA...Kyousuke hand-on-shoulder FX:     ___  <pat>                           pon2Madoka:  Well...  To tell the truth,     ee...  JITSU wa             atashi.....  I...                                   as-a-matter-of-fact  I3Madoka:  ...from the first time          ano KAIDAN de   HAJImete  o   KAishita  we met at those steps...        at-those-steps  1st-time (O)  met                                  TOKI  kara.....                                  time  from4Madoka: [rushing into his arms]  ...I fell in love with          anata no koto  AIshite-shimatta    no yo~~~_  you...!                         with-you       fell-in-love-(finality)Kyousuke: [clasping her tightly]  So that's how it was...!        so--       datta  no ka----_!                                  like-that  was5[They gaze into each other's eyes...]Kyousuke:  M-Madoka!                       ma madoka_!Madoka:  Kyousuke-san!                   KYOUSUKE-san!6[...and kiss.]---------------------------------------------------p 68 (66)1[End of daydream!]kiss FX:                          ____  <smack!>                        chu_2[Kyousuke and Komatsu gaze into each other's eyes--from about 5-cm apart...]3Kyousuke and Komatsu: [leaping apart]  Yeaargh!!                       uwa----_!!4Komatsu: [pointing a finger]  Kasuga!  Y-you had those        KASUGA!    o...omae  tendencies?!                                   you                                  sono KE ga         atta  no ka--_                                  that sign/symptom  had     (?)Kyousuke: [agitated]  C-can't be.                     ma...masaka5[Both touch hands to lips and stare at each other calculatingly.]Kyousuke:  Komatsu, what did you have      KOMATSU  moshi-ka-shite  HIRU no bento-- no  for lunch...?!                           possibly        noon 's lunch   's                                  okazu......?!                                  a-dish-(eaten-w/rice)Komatsu:                          ____   ____             _______  It was fried liver with         nira   reba itame  to   gyo--za  da yo!  leeks, and gyouza!              leeks  fried-liver and           be<Note (EC/MN): Gyouza is a type of japanese meat dumpling eaten with vinegar and soy sauce.  <CN>: Yeah--a "pot-sticker"!>6[Both turn aside and look close to heaving.]Kyousuke and Komatsu:  Bleaugh!!                       oe~~~_!!7Kyousuke and Komatsu:                                  ________ ____ (Th-that was my first            ko...kore       ga   fa--suto kisu  kiss...!!)                           this-(one) (S)  first-kiss                                  datta  noni......!!                                  was    althoughKyousuke:                                   _____ (Who says it tastes like         nani ga   remon no AJI   da  ba--ro--  lemons?  Idiot!)                what (S)  lemon's-taste  be  (baka yarou?)---------------------------------------------------p 69 (67)1[Both race out of the classroom, clamping hands to their mouths.]Komatsu:  YAAAH!                          ataKyousuke:  PHOOEY!                         futaKyousuke and Komatsu:  I-I've got to wash out my       u...ugai  mouth!                              rinse-(out)-one's-mouth                                  shinakya!                                  (= shinakereba-<ikenai>)                                     must-do2Kyousuke: [pausing to think] (I'm sure there was a            (tashika                  ano ROUKA     o  water fountain around the        if-I-remember-correctly  that-hallway (O)  corner.)                                  magatta  tokoro ni  SUIDOU      ga                                  turned   in-place   water-pipes (S)                                  atta       na)                                  there-were3[He swivels his head to look.]Kyousuke FX:                      __________  <scan>                          kyorokyoronarration:  What the hell, I'm going!!      e----i   mendokuse-- ya  Itchae!!                                           troublesome     (= Itte-shimae)                                                              go!4Kyousuke:  Nobody's looking.               dare-mo  MItenai  na                                  nobody   <not>-see[He dematerializes...]Kyousuke teleport FX:             ____  <swish!>                        shu_5[...and rematerializes about 35 feet down the hall, near a corner.]Kyousuke teleport FX:             ___  <click!>                        pa_6[He runs down the hall.  From our vantage we see Hikaru walking just around the corner.]Kyousuke running FX:              ___  <step!>                         da_Hikaru walking FX:                ___ ___  <tap! tap!>                     ko_ ko_7[No art, just a lot of shooting stars...]collision FX:  <CRAAASH>                       doshi--n---------------------------------------------------p 70 (68)1[More stars grace this panel...]narration:  Wha...  What's this...?!          What was that soft thing        ima  ISSHUN    kuchibiru ni   fureta  that touched by lips just       now  a-moment  lips     (IO)  touched  now for a moment?!                                  kono yawaraka na KANSHOKU wa......?!                                  this-soft        feeling  (T)Hikaru: [off]  Ouch.                           itete2[Our vision returns.  Hikaru lies on her back with Kyousuke plastered on top of her.  Kyousuke turns to look at her, from about 5-cm away.]Hikaru:                           ____ ________  Hey bozo!  Watch where          baka yaro----_    doko   MIte  you're going!!                  stupid-jerk  !    where  watching                                  ARUite   n da     yo----_!!                                  walking  (explan)Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            _____  <thump!>                        doki_Kyousuke:  ..........                      ..........3[She fastens her angry yet beautiful glare on him.]Hikaru:  How long do you plan to be      itsu-made  nokkatte  n..........  on top of me?                   how-long   being-on-top-of4Kyousuke: [getting up on hands-and-knees]  Ah!  S-sorry!!                  a_  go...gomen_!!narration:  I-it's the same feeling I       sa...sakki              no  KOMATSU to no  had when I kissed Komatsu!           a-little-while-ago 's  w/Komatsu  's                                  ____                                  kisu  to      ONAji KANSHOKU!                                  kiss  when    same-feeling  No, it seemed to feel better.   iya  motto      kimochi  yokatta                                       much/more  feel     was-good                                  you na                                  seem-like5[Both pause in sudden thought.]Kyousuke and Hikaru:  AH!                             ha_---------------------------------------------------p 71 (69)1[Hikaru visualizes the guy in the gym who tossed that miraculous one-armed shot.  She blushes.]narration:  Th-this is the guy who made     ko...kono MAE       TAI-IKUKAN de  that amazing shot in the             this-previous  in-gymnasium  gym...!!                                 ____________                                  sugoi    rongushu--to  o   KImeta                                  amazing  long-shot    (O)  settled                                  HITO    da...!!                                  person  becrows-in-background FX:           ____  <Kaa!>                          kaa_<Translation note (CN):  BTW, these "kaa!" FX's are crows cawing in the background--a common sound FX heard in anime, and is associated with "caught-between-the-devil-and-the-deep-blue-sea"-type situations that are usually embarrassing as well...  A portent of doom.>2[Kyousuke visualizes the girl who was with Madoka that fateful day when he got slapped merely for pointing out the scientific link between cigarette smoke and fetal abnormalities.]Hikaru flashback:                                              _____  Eh?  Whaaat?  Ayukawa-san, is   e--  nani---  AYUKAWA-san no dachi?  he your friend?                      what                 's friendnarration:  I'm certain this is the         kono KO    TASHIka  girl that was with Ayukawa      this-girl  if-I-remember-correctly  the day I transferred  here...!!                       TENKOU shite-kita       HI ni                                  began-changing-schools  on-the-day                                  AYUKAWA to ISSHO    ni   ita                                   together-w/Ayukawa (IO)  there-was                                  KO    da...!!                                  girl  be3Kyousuke: [flash thought]                               ___ (I-is it possible that I just    (mo...moshi-ka-shite  ore  IMA  kissed this girl?)                    possibly        I    just-now                                                  ____                                  kono KO to      kisu shite-shimatta                                  with-this-girl  kissed-(finality)                                  n de wa...)Hikaru: [flash thought] (Wh-why am I blushing?)          (na...nan de  atashi ga   AKAku naru                                        why     I      (S)  become-red                                  no yo)4[Still perched over Hikaru, Kyousuke forces a smile...]Kyousuke and Hikaru:  U-uhh...                        a...ano...5[From behind, a hand reaches out to touch Kyousuke on his shoulder.]hand FX:  <tap tap>                       ton ton---------------------------------------------------p 72 (70)1Kyousuke and Hikaru: [looking up and back]  AHH!                            a[It's a teacher...]2[Pov from behind Hikaru and Kyousuke, looking over their heads at what they see.  Namely, Ootsuka-sensei, the PE teacher, who stands with arms crossed.]Ootsuka-sensei:  What are you two doing?!!       nani  o   shite-ru  n da      omaera!!                                  what (O)  be-doing  (explan)  you-(plural)Kyousuke: [sitting back next to Hikaru]  N-no...  That is...             i iya--  sono....Hikaru: [sitting up] (Arg!  Ootsuka the P.E.          (ge_!    TAI-IKU    no  OOTSUKA!!)  teacher!!)                               phys.-ed.  's3Kyousuke: (Th-that's right.  This is a     (so...so--       datta    koko  school hallway!!)                     like-that  was      this-place                                  GAKKOU no  ro--ka   da  kke!!)                                  school's   hallway  beHikaru: [fearful] (Caught by the wrong guy.)       (yana              yaro--  ni                                   wrong/unpleasant  fellow (IO)                                  MIrare chimatta         na)                                  (= MIrarete-shimatta)                                     were-seen-(finality/regret)4Hikaru: [getting up and racing off]                  _______  See ya, Darling!                n ja matta ne--_   da--rin!Kyousuke: [yelling]  Heyyy!                          o--i_5Kyousuke: [embarrassed]  Uh...  Ha ha ha ha.             iya--- hahahahaOotsuka-sensei: [in Kyousuke's face]  Da...  Darrrling?!              da...  daa~~rin?!Ootsuka-sensei FX:                _____  <stare!>                        jiro_---------------------------------------------------p 73 (71)1[Exterior shot of a school building.]narration:  After school...                 HOUKAGO---2sign:  Faculty Room                    SHOKUIN SHITSU3Matsuoka-sensei: [seated, smiling]  Ah, so it was just a            sou ka    yappari    GOKAI        ka---  misunderstanding, hmm...        I-see     after-all  misunderstandingKyousuke: [standing, embarrassed]  I'm very sorry.                 domo suimasen4Matsuoka-sensei:                               ____  You know, I had heard           nani-shiro   kimi ga  ONNA no KO to  from Ootsuka-sensei that        at-any-rate  you (S)  w/girl  you were molesting a girl  in a hallway in broad           mappiruma no ROUKA de  daylight, so...                 in-hallway-in-broad-daylight                                  FUJUN        ISEI          KOUYUU         o                                  impure/foul  opposite-sex  companionship (O)                                  shite-ru  nan-te   OOTSUKA-sensei  kara                                  be-doing  or-such  <name>          from                                  kiita  mon     de...                                  heard  personKyousuke:  Molesting...?  Don't be         FUJUN ISEI KOUYUU......?    messo-- mo nai  absurd.5Kyousuke:  Even I was surprised, too.      sasuga no  watashi  mo   bikkuri shita  yo                                  even       I        too  was-surprised  I-I have no reason to do a      bo boku ga  sonna koto          suru  thing like that.                   I   (S)  that-kind-of-thing  to-do                                  wake nai   ja nai desu ka--                                  no-reason         issign:  School motto:  Pureness         KOUKUN             KIYOku  Is Undoubtedly the Way to       school-motto/rule  pure/innocent/noble  Employment.                                  MASAshiku        o-SHIGOTO                                  surely/no-doubt    employment/work                                  shiyou                                  a-way/shall-do6[Madoka is seated in front of another teacher, but hidden from Kyousuke's view behind a blackboard partition.  She registers surprise at hearing...]Matsuoka-sensei: [off]  Kasuga-kun, you wouldn't        KASUGA-kun ni   sonna koto  be able to do a thing like                (IO)  that-kind-of-thing  that!                                  dekiru      wake    nai  yo na--_!                                  able-to-do  reason  notMadoka: (I wonder what's meant by        (do-- yu--     IMI      ka na?)  that?)                           what-kind-of  meaning  I-wonder---------------------------------------------------p 74 (72)1Madoka: (Kasuga...)                      (KASUGA...)2Madoka: [turning to the left, towards the sound of voices]  ..........                      ..........teacher in front of Madoka:  What are you looking at,        AYUKAWA-kun  doko   muite-ru  Ayukawa-kun?                                 where  be-turning/looking3Ootsuka-sensei: [entering]  But, Kasuga.  You shouldn't     shikashi  KASUGA yo    ano ONNA no KO ni wa  get involved with that girl!!   but                    that-girl     (IO)                                  kakawaran            HOU ga ii  zo                                  not-have-to-do-with  better     !!4Kyousuke: [surprised]  Eh?!                            e_5Kyousuke:  Why is that?                    do--shite  desu     ka                                  why        is-that  (?)Ootsuka-sensei:  That girl is Hiyama Hikaru.     ano KO     wa  HIYAMA hikaru  tte itte  na                                  that-girl (T)                 called6Madoka: [flash-thought] (HIKARU?!)                       hikaru?!7Ootsuka-sensei: [off]  I haven't heard very many       ano KO     ni  tsuite wa  anmari  good things about her.          that-girl (IO) about (T)  <not>-so-much                                       _____                                  ii   uwasa  ga   kikoete-konai                                  fine rumors (S)  <not>-begin-to-hear[Madoka gives a displeased expression.]8Ootsuka-sensei: [forcefully]  From what I've heard about      kiku     tokoro         ni   yoru to  her language, clothing,         to-hear  occasion/time (IO)  if-be-based-on  hair...                                  KOTOBA    zukai ya                                  language  illustration                                  FUKUSOU - KAMIGATA   nado......                                  clothes   hairstyle  and-such  She seems to be rebellious,     FURYOU-ppoi      furumai          ga  ari  and the average student         delinquent-like  behavior/conduct (S) has  appears to be afraid of  getting close to her!           IPPAN NO SEITO  ga   kowa-gatte                                  average-student (S)  appearing-to-be-scared                                  CHIKAzukanai            so-- ja nai ka!                                  not-associate/approach  seem-like---------------------------------------------------p 75 (73)1[Kyousuke takes this all in...]Ootsuka-sensei: [off]             ______     _________  Discos and arcades, etc,        disuko de  ge--musen  nantara kantara  etc...                          at-discos  arcades    = nandakanda                                                          this-and-that2Kyousuke:  Well..........                  ..........jaa3Kyousuke:  That girl only _seems_like_     FURYOU-ppoi      to yu--   dake  de  a delinquent, but she isn't     delinquent-like  say-that  only  being-(and)  _actually_ one, right?!                                  FURYOU      ja nai  n desu ne  ano KO!                                  delinquent  is-not  (explan)   that-girlOotsuka-sensei:  Eh?!                            e4Ootsuka-sensei: [taken aback]  But...  That is...  Uh...       shikashi   nan daa    sono......                                  but        that-is    that                                                  _____  Someone with those kinds of     so-- yu--       uwasa   o   TAterareru  rumors floating around them     those-kinds-of  rumors (O)  be-circulated  can't be a straight person.                                  yatsu   nan-te   majime na                                  fellow  or-such  serious/earnest/honest                                  NINGEN       to wa  OMOe     n darou                                  human-being         thought  (poss-explan)5Kyousuke: [sternly]  ......                          ......  Did she definitely do           GUTAITEKI ni        nan-ka  something bad?                  in-a-concrete-form  somehow                                  WARUi koto shita   n desu   ka?                                  did-something-bad  (explan) (?)Matsuoka-sensei: [gently holding Kyousuke by the shoulder]  K-Kasuga-kun...                 ka  KASUGA-kun....Kyousuke:  Definitely!                     kippari!                                  clear/distinct/definiteOotsuka-sensei:  No-o-o, not yet...              iyaa   sore      wa   mada......                                         that(one) (T)  <not>-yet/still6Kyousuke: [slamming his palms onto the desk]  THEN THERE'S NO NEED TO         dattara     ano KO no koto  CALL HER A DELINQUENT!!         if-that-is  that-girl                                  FURYOU yobawari suru                                  call-(a-person)-a-delinquent                                  koto nai ja nai desu ka!!                                  is-not-a-thingKyousuke table-pounding FX:       ___  <WHAM>                          ban7Matsuoka- and Ootsuka-sensei: [cringing]  Yow!                            biku_                                  (bikutto = be-startled)                                  (bikubiku = tremble-in-fear)---------------------------------------------------p 76 (74)1[Matsuoka- and Ootsuka-sensei blush and sweat.  Other teachers watch from the wings.]Matsuoka-sensei:  Kasuga-kun...                   KASUGA-kun...other teachers FX:  <mutter>                        zawa2[Madoka sits behind the partition and listens, eyes wide.]Kyousuke: [off]  But, isn't that so?             datte   so--       desho                                  but     like-that  poss-be3Kyousuke: [hopping mad]  Listen closely.                 i-- desu ka  You too, Matsuoka-sensei!       MATSUOKA-sensei mo   yoku  kiite-kudasai!                                                  too  well  listen-(please)  That girl really hasn't         ano KO    wa   BETSU ni  done anything that              that-girl (T)  not-particularly  definitely leads to  delinquency!                    kore to itta  HIKOU        ni                                  definite      wrong-doing (IO)                                  HASHItte-ru         wake de mo nai!                                  be-running-towards  for-no-reasonKyousuke jumping FX:              ___  <thud>                          donMatsuoka-sensei: [placatingly]  Oh!  We got it!  We got it,     o_  kikoeta! kikoeta zo KASUGA!  da kara  Kasuga!  So...                      heard                        that's-why4Kyousuke: [forcefully]  Is it okay for teachers         HITO    o   SHIDOU suru  who are in a position to        people (O)  to-guide/lead  guide people, to judge a                                      _____  person solely on the            TACHIBA      no SENSEI   ga   uwasa dake de  basis of rumors?!!              position/POV 's teachers (S)  on-only-rumors                                  HITO    o   HANDAN shite  i--  n desu  ka!!                                  people (O)  judging       okay (explan)(?)5[Madoka facial portrait--stunned.]Kyousuke: [off]  In that case...                 sore       jaa   amari ni                                  that-(one) then  remainder6Kyousuke:  ...I feel sorry for her!!       ano KO    ga   kawaiso-- da!!                                  that-girl (S)  seems-unfortunate/pitiable[Madoka smiles and tosses back her hair.]Madoka:                           ___  Heh!                            fu_---------------------------------------------------p 77 (75)1[Behind Kyousuke, Madoka is shown to the door by the teacher she was with.]door FX:                          ____  <rattle...>                     kara...teacher:  That's all for today,           KYOU  wa   mou      ii    zo  AYUKAWA  Ayukawa.                        today (T)  already  okay (IP)[Kyousuke pauses in mid-lecture...]2[...and turns around.]narration:  Ayukawa...  Eh...?!             AYUKAWA......  e---_?!3[Madoka looks back at him before she exits.]4[Kyousuke stands perplexed.]narration:  Wh-why was Ayukawa in the       na...nan de  AYUKAWA ga  SHOKUIN SHITSU ni  faculty office?!                     why            (S)  in-faculty-room                                  iru  n da?!                                  be   (explan)5Madoka: [exiting]  Excuse me!                      SHITSUREI shimasu!6[He watches her leave...]narration:  Why in the world was she        ittai         aitsu       wa  called in here...?              in-the-world  that-person (T)                                  nan no YOU de     yobidasarete-ta                                  on-what-business  was-called                                  n darou...?                                  (poss-explan)7Kyousuke: [turning back to the now-chastened teachers]  Ah, sensei, where was I?        saa  SENSEI  doko made  HANAshimashita  kke                                               how-far    talked/explainedMatsuoka- and Ootsuka-sensei: [sitting huddled together at a desk]  Come on...  We got the          maa--_   wakatta   tte~~~~  point...                             !   understood8Kyousuke: [exiting]  Excuse me...!                   ..........SHITSUREI shimasu!door FX:  <rattle!>                       gara_---------------------------------------------------p 78 (76)1[In the hall, he lets out a sigh.]Kyousuke:  Phew.                           fuu2[In reflection, he blushes and sweats...]narration:  I did something pretty          nan-ka    DAIsoreta             koto  outrageous...                   somewhat  outrageous/audacious  thing                                  shichatta na......                                  (= shite-shimatta)                                     did-(finality/regret)                                  ___                  ___  I slipped up and lost my        ore tte  tsui        katto natchau  cool again!!                    I   (T)  by-mistake        (= natte-shimau)                                                       lose-one's-head-<slang>                                  n da      yo na--_!!                                  (explan)door FX:  <bang>                          pisha                                  (pishari = bang-shut-the-door)3Ootsuka-sensei: [embarrassed]  Wah ha ha!  Oh boy, we were     wa_ ha_ ha    yareyare  SEKKYOU suru  going to lecture him but                      oh-boy    lecture  I feel as if we got it  instead, huh, Matsuoka-         tsumori            ga   sareta  sensei?!                        intention/purpose  but  were-(doing)                                  tte KANji    deshita na  MATSUOKA-SENSEI!                                      feeling  wasMatsuoka-sensei: [looking exhausted]  Ahh...                          haa...4upper banner [partial]:  Summoned Today...               HONJITSU no YO(BU)...                                  today    's call/summonlower banner [partial]:  <four surnames listed>          ...MATSU   ISHIHAMA   HAYASHI-<something>                                  SAKAMOTO[Something off-panel catches Kyousuke's eye.]Madoka: [off]  Professor Kasuga, thank you     KASUGA  KYOUJUU    DAI-ENZETSU  for your great lecture!                 professor  great-lecture                                  gokuro-- -sama!                                  thanks-for-your-trouble5[His pov of Madoka as she leans back against the wall, holding 2 book bags. She doesn't meet his eye.]6[Kyousuke facial portrait--no expression, slight blush.]7[Madoka turns to look at him.]8Madoka: [holding out his bag to him]       _____  Your bag is pretty light.       anta no  kaban  tte  kekko--  KARUi  no ne                                  your     bag    (T)  quite    lightKyousuke:  ..........                      ..........---------------------------------------------------p 79 (77)1Madoka: [beaming]  I'll walk you to the gate!      KOUMON       made...       tsukiau yo!                                  school-gate  as-far-as     go-(with)Madoka FX:  <smile!>                        niko_2Kyousuke: [wide-eyed]  You took the trouble...         wazawaza......                                  take-the-trouble-to  To wait here for me?            koko de        MAtte-te-kureta      no                                  at-this-place  waited-(favor-to-me)3[Isolated shot of their feet as they walk down the hall.]Madoka:                           _____  If you leave your bag in        kaban  KYOUSHITSU ni  the classroom...                bag    in-the-classroom                                  hoppottoku to                                  (= hottoku = houtte-oku <colloq.>)                                  if-throw-aside-&-leave-(for-future-purpose)  It might get stolen!            NUSUmareru   ka-mo-shirenai  ja nai!                                  be-stealing  it-may-be-that4[Pov from behind as they walk down the hall.]Madoka:  A great, distinguished          erai   erai  SENSEI  ga   osshatte-ta  teacher made the fine           great        teacher (S)  was-a-fine-  remark that there seem                                    remark-I-must-say  to be delinquents in  this school.                    desho!     kono GAKKOU ni wa   FURYOU ga                                  poss-be    in-this-school (T)  delinquents                                  iru   sou da   da kara                                  have  seem-to  that's-whyKyousuke:  Ha ha ha.                       hahaha---------------------------------------------------p 80 (78)1[Exterior shot of the school grounds, the open school gate, buildings in the distance, and the dusk sky.]narration:  Ayukawa...  Is a nice girl      AYUKAWA tte...  yappari    ii KO  after all.                              (T)     after-all  nice-girl                                  nan da  naa                                  that-isnarration:  But even though it was          shikashi...   HAKUCHUU-MU no NAKA de  only in a daydream, having      but           in-a-daydream  the girl I kissed be next  to me somehow makes me          to wa ie  feel self-conscious!            (= to wa iu <mono no>) though/for-all-that                                  ____                                  kisu shichatta      AITE      ga                                  (= shite-shimatta)  companion (S)                                     kissed-(finality)                                  tonari ni iru to  nan-da-ka  tereru na--_!                                  when-be-beside    somehow    feel-self-                                                                   conscious2[They head to the gate, still on school ground.]Madoka:  You've got courage,             KASUGA-kun tte  YUUKI          aru  no ne!  Kasuga-kun!                                (T)  courage/nerve  have  I was amazed...                 ODOroita---Kyousuke: [hand behind head]  Aww...  I'm embarrassed.        iya----  o-hazukashii                                           (hon)-be-abashed/ashamed3Madoka: [looking meaningfully at him]  By the way...                   tokoro-de4Madoka: [bending at the waist to peer up at him]        ____  Kasuga-kun, have you ever       KASUGA-kun  honto ni  kisu shita  koto  really kissed someone?                      really    kissed                                  aru   no?                                  have[Kyousuke stops and stares straight ahead.]Kyousuke heartbeat FX:            _____  <THUMP!>                        doki_5[He looks off into the distance, in thought...]narration:                        ____  Kiss, hmm...                    kisu nee----6[...and visualizes facial portraits of Hikaru and Komatsu.  Komatsu looks ill, sticking out his tongue and saying something...]narration:                                     ___  I think I've kissed 3 times     tabun......  ore  KYOU   3-KAI    mo  today!                          probably     I    today    times                                  ____                                  kisu shite-ru  na~~_                                  be-kissing                                                              ________ ____  My first kiss was with          mazu            KOMATSU to  fa--suto kisu  Komatsu...                      first-(of-all)  w/Komatsu   first-kiss  The second one was with         ...de    shita ka  do--ka  that girl Hikaru, even                   did       in-any-case  though I don't know for  sure if I really kissed         yoku wakan nakatta           kedo  her...                          not-known-fully/for-certain  but                                  hikaru tte KO to...                                  w/that-girl-Hikaru  And lastly, Ayukawa!!           soshite   AYUKAWA......   ka!!                                  and/thenKomatsu:                          ___  Bleah!                          oe_---------------------------------------------------p 81 (79)1Kyousuke: [looking up at the sky]  Ahh...  Have I or haven't       saa... aru   yo-- na    nai       yo-- na  I...                                   have  seem-like  not-have  seem-likeMadoka:  Hmmph.                          fu--n2Kyousuke:                                               ____  But I distinctly remember       demo  YUME no NAKA no kisu   nara  the one in my dream!            but   kiss-inside-the-dream  if-it-was                                  hakkiri             oboete-ru!                                  distinctly/clearly  be-remembering[Madoka stops in surprise.]narration:                                                           ___  Wah!  What am I saying?!        wa_   nani  Itte    n daro         ore!                                    !   what  saying  (poss-explan)  I3Madoka: [smiling gently]  Hmm...  Shall I try and         he---   AITE      ga   DARE-ka  guess?                                  companion (S)  somebody                                  Atete-miyo--          ka                                  shall-try-and-guess <I bet> it's a singer or         KASHU   ka  nan-ka    desho  something like that.            singer  or  somewhat  poss-be4Madoka: [beaming]  Hori Chiemi!                    HORI CHIEMI!narration:                                       ____  If I said it was you...         AITE      wa   kimi  da  yotte                                  companion (T)  you   be  consequently                                  Ittara...                                  if-saidKyousuke: [pointing to Madoka]  Ah!  You're right!              a_  A_tari~~_                                   !  a-hit/success5narration:  ...would I be slapped again?!   mata   hippatakareru  ka na----?!                                  again  be-slapped     I-wonderKyousuke:  You saw it yesterday?           mita?  kino-- no                                  saw    yesterday'sMadoka:  Yup.                            un6[Dreamy facial portrait of Madoka, eyes closed, head tilted slightly down...]narration:                                            ____  If I dare to reach out my       ME no MAE       no  kimi no  hand it seems I could touch     before-the-eyes 's  your  your red lips which rest  before my eyes...               AKAi kuchibiru ni   OMOikitte                                  red-lips      (IO)  boldly/daringly                                  TE o nobaseba    todoki -sou na...                                  if-stretch-hand  seems-like-reach  It's the dusk that makes        sonna         KI ga suru  YUUGUre  me think like that!             that-kind-of  think/feel  dusk/twilight                                  desu!                                  is---------------------------------------------------p ** (80)<**This page does not appear in the wideban version.>[Hikaru stands in coveralls and a man's shirt and tie.]Title:                            ___________  Character Profile               kyarakuta--  SHOUKAI                                  character    presentation/introductionHikaru:  Hiyama Hikaru                   HIYAMA hikaru  Kouryou Junior High School,     KOURYOU GAKUEN CHUUTOU   -BU       1-NEN  1st year.                               secondary-school  section    year  Madoka-san and I are            madoka-san to wa osananajimi  childhood friends.              w/Madoka     (T) friend-from-early-childhood  I'm a single child so           atashi  hitori kKO    da kara  Madoka-san is like a big        I       single-child  that's-why  sister to me and I rely  on her.                         madoka-san  one--san    mitai de                                              big-sister  being-like                                  tayori ni shite-ru   n da                                  be-relying/trusting  (explan)  I might be a bit rebellious     choppiri           FURYOU shite-ru  kedo  but deep down I'm a well-       a-bit/tad/smidgen  be-rebellious    but  mannered girl.                                  atashi  NE           wa  kekko--                                  I       root/origin (T)  good/nice                                          foundation                                   _______                                  -burikko       dattari shite                                  -manner-girl   be-(alternative-case)  What do I like?                 SUki na  mono?                                  liking   things/persons  Of coouuuuuurse!                mo~~ chi~~ ro~~n!  Kyousuke-sempai!!               KYOUSUKE-sempai!!---------------------------------------------------