Kimagure Orange Road"The Red Straw Hat"Volume 1, Story 1WB Volume 1, Story 1Written and illustrated by Matsumoto IzumiThis script is based on the existent script by Enrique Conty and TonghyunKim.Translation by unknown (pencil annotations found in KOR Volume 1)Original typesetting by : Enrique ContyAdditional translation by : Tonghyun Kim, Craig NishidaFull-script typesetting by : Craig NishidaEditing and Additional help by : Paul Hirose Craig Nishida Spencer Hastings Andrew Wilson Gary Kacmarcik Scott Henry Peter NorbyLast revision : 11-11-94Questions? Comments? Corrections? Send e-mail to: kor-trans@gnu.ai.mit.eduNOTE: WBp#'s are printed first, Normal manga pages in parenthesis()NOTE: Translation is done from BOTH the WB and normal manga. So depending on which one you have there may be a few extra items. Examples: The subtitles on page 7 (5) are only in the WB'S! The one-page "Character Profiles" at the ends of the first six chapters are omitted in the WB's!Comments on the revision (CN): Besides inserting the romaji, a few missing lines and the wideban subtitles were translated, as well as many missing FXs, stutters, exclamations and honorifics. During editing, other lines were modified by the members of the translation team. For the purposes of translating, visual cues were also inserted to allow those without the manga to also contribute to the translation effort. [This script is not intended to be a substitute for the manga; you'd only be cheating yourself...]---------------------------------------------------p 3 (*)<*This page does not appear in the normal version.> The Red Straw Hat makKA na MUGIwara BOUSHI deep-red/crimson straw hat---------------------------------------------------p 4 (*)<*This page does not appear in the normal version.> To tell you the truth, this hakkiri Itte kono MACHI..... town... speaking-plainly this-town ___ ...I've gotten to like it! KI ni Itte-shimatta yo ore! took-my-fancy-(finality) I---------------------------------------------------p 7 (5)--TITLE PAGE[A large poster of Madoka is splashed on a brick wall. Kyousuke leans back against the wall, dressed in formal shirt, bowtie, pants and suspenders, and holds a bouquet of flowers. Small signs are taped above and below the Madoka poster.]MAIN TITLE (at top) The Red Straw Hat makKA na MUGIwara BOUSHI deep-red/crimson straw hatSUB-TITLE (at bottom) ___________ A Beautiful Girl--Whimsical BISHOUJO - kimagure - misuteriasu and Mysterious. beautiful-girl whimsical mysterious ________ A Boy--Bewildered and SHOUNEN tokimeki His Heart Throbbing. boy/lad throbbing-of-(one's)-heart tomadou bakari be-bewildered/puzzled ready-to/about-tosign at top: [in romaji] Look! #mite ne#sign at bottom*: [in romaji] The beginning, the beginning! #HAGIMARI HAGIMARI!# (hajimari = the-beginning/start/origin/ opening)<*This bottom sign appears in the wideban only--in the normal volume this sign reads "MADOKA".>---------------------------------------------------p 8 (6)1[A shot of the sky, tree branches at the side.]Kyousuke: [off] ....ty-one ......juu ichi2[View from far behind, we see Kyousuke climbing, nearing the top of the stairs.]Kyousuke: Eighty-two. Eighty-three. hachi juu ni hachi juu san3[Tight shot of his feet in tennis shoes.]Kyousuke footstep FX: ___ ton4Kyousuke: [wiping his brow] Phew! It's hot! fuu ATSUi---------------------------------------------------p 9 (7)1[Kyousuke facial portrait--he looks back down the stairs.]2Kyousuke: About...a hundred steps! zatto... 100-DAN wa aru na! approximately steps (T) exist3[A sudden breeze hits, and Kyousuke closes his eyes.]wind FX: ____ byu_ (byuubyuu = whistle)Kyousuke hair FX: ________ zawazawaKyousuke: Ohh... That feels good. o-- kimochi i-- feeling good4[Kyousuke portrait--he goes wide-eyed at the sight of something...]5[Pov from behind him shows what he sees--an unidentified object in the sky.]narration: UFO?! It can't be... #UFO# ?! masaka...---------------------------------------------------p 10 (8)1[A closer shot reveals that it is a straw hat.]2narration: A hat? A straw hat...? BOUSHI? MUGIwara BOUSHI ka.......... hat straw-hat3narration: "Come here!" "koi!"hat FX: ku_4[Kyousuke prepares to grab it...]narration: Come down here! kotchi ni Ochite koi! this-way coming-down come!5[Leaping, he snares it.]Kyousuke: ARG! yo6[View from behind a nice pair of legs at the top of the steps shows Kyousuke, standing a few steps down from the top, with the hat upon his head.]Madoka: _____ _______ Nice catch! naisu kyatchi---------------------------------------------------p 11 (9)1[Madoka full-portrait--she stands pretty much as seen in the anime... in shorts and shirt, over which is a floral-print shirt knotted at bottom. The wind has mussed up her hair some...]2[Kyousuke facial portrait--wide-eyed.]3Madoka: The wind just took it away. IMA no KAZE de TObashichatta no in-today's-wind (= TObashite-shimatta) blown-away-(regret)4Kyousuke: __ S-such a cute girl! ka...kawaii ko! cute girlKyousuke heartbeat FX: _____ doki_5Madoka: I'm glad. I thought it had yokatta zutto SHIMO made gone all the way to the was-good directly as-far-as-bottom bottom. Okkochite-itchatta (= itte-shimatta) fell-down-(process-of/finality/regret) to OMOtta kara thought-that that's-why---------------------------------------------------p 12 (10)1[Madoka descends the stairs a bit to talk to him.]Madoka: It would've been a real taihen na no yo ne hassle since this stairway terribly-difficult is so long... kono KAIDAN NAGAi kara... these-stairs long that's-whyKyousuke: Y-yeah... It really is. u...un... NAGAi ne2Madoka: After all, it's got 99 nantatte 99-DAN mo aru n da kara steps. after-all steps even exist (reason)Kyousuke: [resuming his ascent] Really...? 98, 99... hee-- 98 99...[Madoka ascends with him.]3Kyousuke: 100! 100!4[They look at each other.]5Madoka: You're kidding! There uso~~~ 99-DAN shika nai hazu yo! should only be 99! lie steps should-only-beKyousuke: But, I counted exactly demo... chanto SHIMO kara kazoeta yo from the bottom. but exactly from-bottom countedMadoka: That can't be right! sonna hazu nai wa! that-kind-of not-likely---------------------------------------------------p 13 (11)1Madoka: When I counted there were atashi ga kazoeta TOKI wa 99-DAN only 99 steps! I (S) counted occasion (T) steps shika nakatta wa only-were2Kyousuke: [smiling] Maybe you counted wrong? kazoemachigaeta n ja nai no? miscountedMadoka: Speak for yourself! ara yoku YUu wa ne! oh! well to-speak3Madoka: Isn't it you who miscounted? anata koso machigaeta n ja nai? you indeed mistaken (not-explan)4Kyousuke: [sure of himself] O-o-oh no. There were i----e chanto 100 arimashita exactly 100. no-o-o-o exactly there-wereMadoka: It's 99! 99 yo!5Kyousuke: [yelling] 100! 100 da!Madoka: [yelling] 99!! 99!!6Kyousuke: Th-then how about this! ji...jaa ko-- shiyou! then like-this shall-do/make7[Madoka stares back.]Kyousuke: [off] Take the average and make aida o totte 99.5-DAN! it 99.5 steps! between (O) taking steps8[View of a walkway in the park.]Madoka and Kyousuke: [off] AH-HA-HA! a ha ha---------------------------------------------------p 14 (12)1Madoka: [smiling] What does it matter, konna koto...... do--demo anyway. this-kind-of-thing anyway i-- koto na noni ne okay matter althoughKyousuke: [smiling] I guess so. sore-mo so-- da you're-right-(in-a-way) (conjecture)2Madoka: You're not from this town! anata... kono MACHI no HITO ja nai desho! you this-town 's person poss-beKyousuke: Eh?! e_3Kyousuke: Why... How do you know? nan-de... wakaru? why to-be-known4Madoka: You have an accent! datte namatte-ru because be-speaking-w/provincial-accent mono! personKyousuke: Eh... Is that so? e... so-- ka na? like-that I-wonder5Madoka: [starting to head down the stairs] I gotta go now. mou sorosoro Ikanakucha now soon (= Ikanakute wa ) must-go6Madoka: [off] See ya! ja ne!Kyousuke: ___ Bye! bai![Kyousuke clasps his hands behind his head.]7narration: ___ I'm Kasuga Kyousuke. ore KASUGA KYOUSUKEKyousuke: [realizing he's wearing her hat] Oh! a---------------------------------------------------p 15 (13)1Kyousuke: [waving it] Hey! Your hat! o--i BOUSHI![Madoka looks back up.]narration: There's a reason for my aru RIYUU de KYOU kono MACHI ni moving into this town there-is a-reason today to-this-town today... HIkKOshite-kita n da kedo...... began-moving (explan) but2Madoka: [small smile] It's yours! ageru wa! to-give3Kyousuke: Eh? e?4Madoka: You look good in it. nakanaka niatte-ru yo sore very be-suiting that-(one)5[Kyousuke stands there, blushing, clasping the hat to his chest.]6[He puts the hat back on and watches Madoka walk down the stairs.]narration: To tell you the truth, this hakkiri Itte kono MACHI..... town... speaking-plainly this-townnarration: ___ ...I've gotten to like it! KI ni Itte-shimatta yo ore! took-my-fancy-(finality) I---------------------------------------------------p 16 (14)1[Exterior shot of the sky, trees and the Kasuga's apartment building.]2sign: [left side is out-of-frame] Kasuga Takashi KASUGA TAKASHI Kyousuke KYOUSUKE Manami manami3Kyousuke: [walking in] I'm home... tadaima--4Kurumi: [off] WATCH OUT, ONIICHAN! abunai oni--chanKyousuke: EH?! e5[A dresser comes flying directly at him.]dresser FX: ____ bua_Kyousuke: [horrified] ! !---------------------------------------------------p 17 (15)1collision FXs: _____ baki_ don guwara gasha~~n (bakuon = explosion)Kyousuke: [off and warbly] Gyaaa! gya~~~_2[Overhead view looking down on the carnage.]Manami: Oh no... yatta~~~ didnarration: Because that was so sudden TOTSUZEN de you were probably surprised, because-it-was-all-of-a-sudden but... odorokareta deshou ga... were-surprised poss-be but3[Kyousuke lies under the dresser, girls underwear draped over him.]narration: ...to be honest, my JITSU wa uchi..... family... in-fact/really family4[He lifts up a bra and stares at it skeptically...]narration: ...though I'm embarrassed hazukashi nagara..... to admit it... be-ashamed-of though/while5[...and slaps a palm to his forehead and pounds a fist to the floor.]Kurumi: [to Manami] He's alive, he's alive. Ikite-ru Ikite-ru be-livingnarration: ...is a family of ESPers!! CHOU-NOURYOKU IKKA nan desu!! super-ability a-family areKyousuke pounded fist FX: don---------------------------------------------------p 18 (16)1Manami: Hey, Kurumi! It's your chotto-- kurumi! anata no sei yo fault! your faultKurumi: _____ Buuuut, I can't move the dattee-- tansu dresser if I don't use the buuuuut bureau/chest-of-drawers Pooower. _chikara_ nan-te NOURYOKU TSUKAwanai to the-likes-of if-not-use-the-Power HAKObenai n da mo--n not-transport (is-the-reason)2[Kyousuke leaps to his feet. His sisters turn their attention back to him.]narration: "That's cool!", you say?! "sore wa urayamashii" desu tte?! that-(one) (T) enviable is NO WAY! tondemonai! far-from-it/don't-you-believe-itKyousuke FX: suku_3Kyousuke: [livid and in Kurumi's face] AAAHH! I can't stand a----_ mo-- iya da living like this any more!! ! already be-unpleasant konna SEIKATSU wa!! this-kind-of-life/existence KURUMI! kurumi4Kyousuke: Listen! ii ka! We moved this time because KONDO no TENKOU datte in P.E. class you ran this-time's changing-schools because the 100-meter dash in 3 seconds! omae ga MAE no GAKKOU no you (S) previous-school's TAI-IKU no JIKAN ni #100m# o P.E.-class (IO) 100-meter (O) 3-BYOU de HASHItte-shimatta in-3-seconds ran-(finality/regret) kara nan da zo--_ that's-why that-is !!!!! ____ ___ Humans aren't motorcycles, nana-han ja nai n da zo you know!! seven-and-a-half<*> are-not (explan) !! NINGEN wa_!! humans !!! <*referring, I guess, to engine- displacement in 100-cc's?>[In the left part of the panel is a flashback where Kurumi exultantly crosses a finish line. A teacher holding a stopwatch flips in amazement.]Kurumi race FX: dogyu~~nnarration: I want to be a normal boy!! futsu-- no OTOKO no KO ni naritai!! normal boy (IO) want-to-become5Takashi: [off] Exactly. sono toori---------------------------------------------------p 19 (17)1Takashi: [sitting and holding a newspaper] Just as Kyousuke says, the KYOUSUKE no yu-- toori washira IKKA no Power that this family as-saying we a-family possesses must never be used in public!! MOtte-iru _CHIKARA_ wa HITOMAE de wa be-possessing Power (T) in-public (T) ZETTAI TSUKAtcha ikenai !! absolute (= TSUKAtte wa ikenai) must-not-use2Takashi: Let's not have to move mata KIJIN-HENJIN again because people are again odd/eccentric/queer-fish calling us weird! yobawari sarete HIkKOsu koto no being-called to-move matter nai you ni na! not-havenewspaper FX: _____ pasa_3Manami: [indignant] You keep saying that, to i-- tsutsu oTOOsan mo Dad--even though this (= to iu nagara) father even (clearly) isn't the time though-you-say-that to be just sitting around ______ in your pajamas reading the pajama kite SHIMBUN nan-ka newspaper. wearing-pajamas newspaper and-such YOnde-ru TOKI ja nai desho be-reading is-not-the-time[Takashi scrunches down behind his newspaper and looks embarrassed.]Takashi FX: _____ gohon4narration: Let me formally introduce aratamete KAZOKU o SHOUKAI shimasu... you to my family... formally family (O) introduce _____ My old man... oyaji[Shot of dad in headband, carrying boxes and books.]5narration: Twin sisters Manami... futago no IMOUTO-tachi manami twin 's younger-sisters[Manami stands with duster in hand.]6narration: ...and Kurumi! ......to kurumi![Kurumi sits and eats.]Kurumi FX: mogumogu7[Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]Manami: [off] Come on, oniichan. You saa saa oNIIchan mo TETSUDA tte ne! help, too! come-on too help You were goofing off, sabotte-ta n desho----_!! weren't you...!! were-lying-down-on-the-job (poss-explan) School begins tomorrow! ashita kara GAKKOU yo! beginning-tomorrow schoolKyousuke: [off] Yeah, yeah... I'm busted... hei hei bareta... was-discoveredTakashi: [off] Kurumi, what are you eating?!! kurumi nani TAbete-ru no!! what be-eatingnarration: _chikara_ Everyone please, please, minasan NOURYOKU no koto wa keep our ESP Power a secret. everyone about-Power (T) --Kyousuke kureguremo NAISHO ni...... KYOUSUKE earnestly secretly---------------------------------------------------p 20 (18)1[Exterior shot of the school.]Matsuoka-sensei: [off] This is Kasuga Kyousuke-kun TENKOU 7-KAI no who has changed schools changing-schools times 's seven times. KASUGA KYOUSUKE-kun da this-issign: Kouryou Secondary School KOURYOU GAKUEN CHUUTOU -BU Section school secondary-grade section2[Isolated shot of classroom 3-A's hall sign.]3Kyousuke: [smiling, hand behind head] Pleased to meet you! yoroshiku!Matsuoka-sensei: Umm... Your desk will be... etto KASUGA-kun no SEKI wa......to uh... 's seat (T)class FX: zawazawa zawazawa crowd-rustlings4Matsuoka-sensei: But it's certainly amazing shikashi sugoi ne kimi 7-KAI tte no wa... --seven times... but amazing you 7-timesclassmate 1: [off] He did what? aitsu nani yatta n da? he what did (explan)classmate 2: [off] Awesome... sun ge-- na-- super feat/stunt/trickKyousuke: Uh... haa......5Kyousuke: [reaching an empty desk] Under the circumstances, KATTE SHIttaru (= SHItte-aru) I'm a Transfer Veteran! circumstance (state-resulting-from)-knowing _______ TENKOU beteran! changing-schools veteran Oh, is this my seat? a koko desu ne SEKI wa oh this-place is seatMatsuoka-sensei: Ah! Not there. a! soko ja nai that-place not-there6Matsuoka-sensei: That's Ayukawa-kun's seat. soko wa AYUKAWA-kun no SEKI da--- that-place (T) 's seat isKyousuke: Ohh, she's absent. a-- KESSEKI absence7Matsuoka-sensei: No... She's here. iya...... kite-ru koto wa no be-coming matter She's here, but... kite-ru n da ga be-coming (explan) but---------------------------------------------------p 21 (19)1[Kyousuke portrait--puzzlement.]Kyousuke: ? ?2[Kyousuke stands up front next to the teacher again. From the middle of the class a boy stands, waves and points to an empty desk next to him.]Komatsu: Sensei, here's an open seat. SENSEI koko aite ma--su this-place companion there-is3Komatsu: [smiling and holding an open magazine] Heh heh heh heh... Welcome. hehehehe irassha--iKomatsu magazine title: Ribbon ribonKyousuke seat FX: _____ gara_4Komatsu: [smiling] Glad to meet you. I'm yoroshiku ore KOMATSU tte n da Komatsu. pleasure-to-meet I (explan)Komatsu: Oh, that's right. a sou sou5Komatsu: [flashing him the raised pinkie finger] If there's something you kotchi no hou de wakaranai koto wa don't understand about in-this-way not-understand-things (T) this, just ask, and I'll probably have the answer! kiite-kureyo tabun shall-ask-(favor-to-me) perhaps OSHIete-yare -sou da ze_! inform-(favor-to-you) (conjecture)6Kyousuke: Thanks. arigatoKyousuke FX: kusu_7Kyousuke: Uhh... The person that sits ano... sakki no SEKI no HITO wa there is Ayu--? uh just-now's-seat's-person (T) etto ayu...... uhh Ayu--Komatsu: Ohh, it's that delinquent, a---- ano FURYOU AYUKAWA madoka daro! Ayukawa Madoka! that-delinquent poss-be8Komatsu: ________ ______ She "escaped". In other esukeipu tsumari sabori! words, she's playing hooky! escape in-other-words play-hookyKyousuke: ______ Hooky?! sabori?!---------------------------------------------------p 22 (20)1[Isolated shot of the sign outside classroom 1-C.]2[The class gathers around Manami's desk. Kurumi smiles and sits on top of the desk, Manami sits with more dignity in her seat.]boy 1: [beaming] ______ Our class was lucky to get futari to mo kono kurasu tte no wa the both of you. w/2-people too this-class _______ rakki-- datta yo na--- lucky wasboy 2: [in seat behind Manami] ___ Starting tomorrow, I'll ore nan-ka ashita kara feel it's worth coming I somehow beginning-tomorrow to school... GAKKOU kun no ni school though Ikigai KANjichau yo-- (= Ikigai KANjite-shimau yo--) be-finding-my-life-worth-living-(finality)girl 1: Oh, listen to the guys... ma-- DANSHI ttara oh! boys (I-tell-you!)3girl 1: But why did you have to demo anata-tachi doushite 7-KAI mo transfer seven times? but you-(plural) why 7-times even TENKOU shita wake changing-schools did reason?girl 2: Yeah. aa sou ne4Kurumi: [brightly] _______ Ta-dah! In the last school ja----n! nyanto JITSU wa I ran a hundred meters in (= nan-to) in-fact 3 seconds... MAE no GAKKOU de atashi at-previous-school I #100m# o 3-BYOU de...... 100-meter (O) in-3-secondsManami: Kurumi!! kurumi!!5[Manami stands and claps a hand over Kurumi's chattering mouth. Their classmates look on in surprise.]Manami: Wh-what are you talking na...nani Itte n no yo about? what saying That's not it! That's chigau desho chigau desho horaa! not it! Listen! wrong poss-be look/listen!Kurumi squirm FX: ____ moga (mogaku = struggle/writhe/wriggle/squirm)Manami seat FX: _____ gatan6[View from the back of the class shows the crowd of boys gathered around the twins.]Manami: [hidden from view] Moving is our hobby. SHUMI nan desu atashi-tachi HIkKOsu no a-hobby that-is we movingreaction FX: ___ do_boys: Wah ha ha! wa ha ha---------------------------------------------------p 23 (21)1[Exterior shot of a school building.]school bell FX: ___ ___ ___ ___ kin kon kan kon2[It's lunchtime and a mob is assaulting the cafeteria counter that sells bread, sandwiches and other items... It is complete mayhem.]student 1: ___ _____ ___ ______ ___ M-melon bread and a potato me_ meron pan ni imo sarada pan kudasa--i salad bread, pleeease. melon-bread potato-salad-bread pleasestudent 2: Where are you touching!? doko sawatte n no yo where touchingstudent 3: QUIT SHOVING! osu na_ not-push/shove-(neg-command)student 4: WAHHHH wa---student 5: _______ ___ Croquette bread for me! atashi korokke pan! I -croquette-bread3[Komatsu emerges from the pack, clutching a sandwich. Kyousuke stands back, a bit perturbed.]Komatsu: Yes! Today, I'm in luck!! yata--! KYOU wa tsuite-ru zo today (T) be-in-luck !! _____ _____ I got my hands on the MABOROSHI no katsu-sando ga illusive katsu-sand ... TEni Iru nan-te fall-into-my-hands or-such/etc.crowd: Dummy. aho UGH! ugya-- Ouch. itete4[They walk out of the cafeteria.]Komatsu: ___ Aren't you going to buy KIMI wa pan kawanai no bread? you (T) bread not-buyKyousuke: No. I brought a bento . yeah lunch brought5[They descend the stairs.]Kyousuke: This is a lively school. nigiyaka na GAKKOU da ne lively/noisy/cheerful school beKomatsu: Isn't it? so-- daro like-that poss-be It's because this place has koko wa CHUUGAKU junior high, senior high, this-place (T) jr-high-school and college all in one. KOUKOU DAIGAKU minna sr-high-school university all aru kara na there-are that's-why And there are a lot of sore ni kekko-- ONNA no KO girls... what's-more quite/very girls OUi n da ze~~ many/much (explan)---------------------------------------------------p 24 (22)1Komatsu: [talking with a katsu-sand stuffed in his mouth] That's why all the students da kara maa koko no SEITO wa here are goody-goodys! that's-why this-place's-students (T) hotondo ONSHITSU SODAchi no very-nearly hothouse-growth 's person-brought-up-in-prosperity botchan jo--chan tte toko ka na! boys girls occasion I-wonder2Kyousuke: [smiling at Komatsu] Goody-goodys, huh? .....ONSHITSU SODAchi nee...?Komatsu: [flashing with indignation] Oh, don't I look like one? are..... yappa MIenai? sure-enough not-look-like3Komatsu: [stops and turns to look at something] OH! o4Komatsu: [looking into classroom 1-C] J-just a sec. Hey, take a chi chotto are MIro yo KASUGA-kun! look, Kasuga-kun! just-a-sec hey look!5Kyousuke: Eh? eKomatsu: [wide-eyed] There! There! asoko asoko!6[A shot of Kurumi, standing inside and smiling at someone off-panel.]Komatsu: [off] Look! The little girl with hora KAMI no NAGAi chitchai KO the long hair. look! hair 's long teeny-weeny girl That girl! ano KO! ___ My kind of girl! ore gonomi! I (konomi = a-liking/fancy/choice) Cuuuute!! ka_ waii---!!---------------------------------------------------p 25 (23)1Kyousuke: [hands in pockets] Oh, that's just Kurumi. nan da kurumi ja nai ka what's-thisKomatsu: [turning in surprise] Eh?! H-how do you know e_ na...nan de SHItte n no? that? ! what knowing2Komatsu: [elbowing Kyousuke in the chest] Kasuga-kun, you're KASUGA-kun tte INAI NA to surprisingly quick...! (T) surprisingly TEeBAYAi n da na---_ quick/nimble/agile (explan) You pervert. kono-- sukebe this perverted3Kyousuke: She's my sister! IMOUTO da yo! (younger)-sister be[Komatsu, taken by surprise, misses with his elbow.]Komatsu elbow FX: ____ zuru4Manami: [standing behind Komatsu and carrying a stack of books] Oniichan! oNIIchan!Kyousuke: Hey, Manami. yoo manami5Kyousuke: Is everything okay with kurumi no yatsu DAIJOUBU ka? Kurumi? 's affair all-right (?) She better not be using it. TSUKAtte-nai darou naa not-be-using poss-beKomatsu: [leaning behind Kyousuke, bug-eyed and staring at Manami] Oniichan? oNIIchan?6[Manami facial portrait.]Manami: It's all right! DAIJOUBU! I'm watching her closely. atashi ga chanto MIte-ru I (S) fully/perfectly be-watching mon (reason) Just leave it to me. makasetoite leave-it-to-mebook titles: Mathematics SUUGAKU Japanese KOKUGO Physical Education TAI-IKU English EIGO7Manami: [entering the classroom] Kurumi, I got the books... kurumi--- KYOUKASHO moratte-kita yo~~ textbooks got---------------------------------------------------p 26 (24)1[Komatsu facial portrait--heart-symbols in his eyes.]2Komatsu: [grabbing Kyousuke by the lapels] O... Oni... Oni... o...oni...oni...3Komatsu: [enthusiastically hugging Kyousuke around the neck] ONIIIIII-SAN!! oni~~san!!Kyousuke: WAH!! uotto--_!!Komatsu FX: __ gaba_4Komatsu: [arm around Kyousuke's shoulder, other hand clasping Kyousuke's] I mean, I'm delighted! iya-- boku wa ureshii! I (T) delighted/glad To have made friends with oNIIsan no yo-- na HITO to someone like you, oniisan... resembles-oniisan w/person TOMOdachi ni nareru nan-te to-have-made-friends-with etc. ______ I mean... Ha ha ha. iya--- hahaha Somehow, I don't feel like a nan-ka TANIN no you na stranger... somehow stranger resembles KI ga shinai na--- not-feel _____ _____ Would you like to have katsu-sando TAbemasu? my katsu-sand? cutlet-sandwich eat/take/have Well, let's be like brothers ma_ kore kara wa KYOUDAI no yo-- ni and be on good terms from well from-now-on (T) like-brothers now on. NAKA yoku yarimasho-- ne on-good-terms shall-do[Kyousuke is stunned speechless.]5narration: Who's a brother? Who?!! dare ga KYOUDAI da dare ga!! who (S) brother beKomatsu: Right, oniisan? ne oni--san[The twins come out in the hall to watch.]Kurumi: Ah, there's oniichan. a oni--chan da6Komatsu: [beaming] Oh, how do you do! a HAJIme mashite!7Komatsu: [whipping out a notebook and licking the tip of a pen] I--I mean, "I" --I'm Komatsu KOMATSU SEIJI doue--su Seiji of class 3-A. small-pine arranging-official (= desu) What are your names? kimi-tachi NAMAE wa? you-(plural) names What kind of food do you SUki na TAbeMONO wa? like? liking food ______ ______ _____ Your bust, waist and hip _basuto_ - _uesuto_ - _hippu_ wa? measurements? bust waist hips What do you usually wear itsu-mo nani KIte nete n no? when you go to bed? usually what wearing sleeping[The twins cringe back, wide-eyed.]Kyousuke: [glaring, irritated] This guy... ko yatsu---------------------------------------------------p 27 (25)1[Exterior shot of the school. Three guys lounge about.]Manami: [off] See ya... jaa ne--2Komatsu: [waving] G'bye, Manami-chan! manami-chan sainara--_ Don't forget Komatsu Seiji. KOMATSU SEIJI o o-WASUre naku ne (O) (hon)-not-forgetting[Manami stands with Kyousuke.]3Kyousuke: The first day at our new TENKOU 1 HI -ME wa school is over without any changing-schools 1st-day (T) trouble. BUJI SHUURYOU peace/uneventful come-to-an-end Well, let's go home. saa KAErou shall-return-home4Kyousuke: [swiveling his head] Ku... ku......5Kyousuke: What happened to Kurumi? kurumi wa do-- shita (T) what-happenedManami: [smiling nervously] Well... do-- shita mo ko-- shita mo what-happened and this-happened6Manami: ______ She wants to join a club, nan-ka kurabu HAIritai kara so she went to look around. somehow club want-to-join that's-why MIte-kuru tte begin-lookingKyousuke: [aghast] EHHH?! A-alone?! e~~_ hi...hitori de ka?! ! 1-person being---------------------------------------------------p 28 (26)1Manami: Yeah. She said she'd be un sugu KAEru back soon... soon/immediately to-return-home tte Itta kara...... said-that that's-why But that's the last I demo sore kkiri! heard of her! but that-(one) only2Kyousuke: [exasperated] T-to leave her unattended ga...GAKKOU de aitsu o hitori ni suru at school is like having at-school her (O) 1-person to-make the duck that carries ____ onions on its back fly nan-te negi shotta away on an ICBM! etc. carried-onions-on-the-back ____ kamo ga #ICBM# de TOnde-itta duck (S) on-an-ICBM flew-(away) yo-- na mon ja nai ka! resembles thing[In the background, the imagined duck with onions on its back is tied to a missile that's blasting off...]rocket FX: ________ dodododo3Kyousuke: [racing off] Let's find her! When left sagasou! aitsu o hitori ni alone she always causes let's-look-for her (O) 1-person problems! shitoku to MONDAI okosu ni (= shite-oku to) a-problem give-rise-to when-do-(for-future's-sake) KImatta-ru! definitely/absolutelyManami: (You're assuming the worst!) (kekko-- KImekkete-ru na--_) quite be-assuming/taking-for-granted4[View looking up at the face of a school building.]Hikaru: [off] Sweet! umai! nice/tasty5[View pans down. We see Hikaru standing near a corner, talking to someone off-panel. Around that corner, Kurumi walks and hums to herself, and looks about.]Hikaru: ____ But what if the teach comes? SENko-- konai desu ka ne--? teacher not-come is girl: [off] Don't worry. DAIJOUBU da yo6[Strolling past the corner, Kurumi glances to her left and spots the 2 girls.]Kurumi: ! !---------------------------------------------------p 29 (27)1Kurumi: [off] Kyaa! kya--[Kyousuke and Manami stop in surprise...]2[...and race in the direction of the scream.]Kyousuke: That's Kurumi's voice!! kurumi no KOE da--_!! 's voice be3Kurumi: [standing, both hands to her mouth, horrified and screaming] Y-you're smoking ta_ tabako sutte-ru----_! cigarettes...! cigarettes be-smoking[Hikaru clutches at her chest...]Hikaru: ____ ____ geho geho4Hikaru: [turning to give Kurumi a glare] Ohhh, you gave me a heart a-- bikkuri shita attack. surprised/had-a-heart-attack-Hikaru: You shouted so loudly. dekke-- KOE DAshi yagatte (= dekkai?) voice put-out humongous-5Hikaru: What do you want?! Scram! nan da yo omae wa_! atchi ike! what-is-it you go-away SHOO! SHOO! shi_ shi_6Kurumi: J-junior high students chu chu--gakuse-- wa tabako shouldn't smoke cigarettes. jr-high-students (T) cigarettes sutcha dame nan da kara--- (= sutte wa dame) that's-why should-not-smoke7Hikaru: I haven't seen you around. omae MIkakenai KAO da na-- you not-see face be You're a student here? koko no SEITO ka? this-place 's student8Kurumi: I started here today! atashi KYOU TENKOU shite-kita no! I today started-at-new-schoolHikaru: [sinister look] ........... .......... So you're a new student. sou ka SHINNYUU ri ka like-that incoming/new---------------------------------------------------p 30 (28)1Kurumi: [in sing-song voice] Yooou're being naughty, i--kenai n da ikenai n da you're being naughty. bad/naughty (explan)[Hikaru takes a pratfall.]Hikaru FX: _____ gawa_2Hikaru: [back on her feet and yelling] Stop singing! UTAu na--_! Are you an elementary school SHOUGAKUSEI ka oMAE wa--_! kid?! elementary-pupil (?) you3[Kurumi's pov as Hikaru gets in her face.]Hikaru: If you're new here, I'll TENKOUSEI nara teach you something. transfer-student if-you-are OSHIete-yaru yo teach/inform-(favor-to-you) If you mess with us... atashi-tachi ni kakawaru to... us (IO) to-have-to-do-with if4[Hikaru backs Kurumi up against the wall and rests the palm of her hand on Kurumi's cheek. Kurumi sweats and stares wide-eyed at Hikaru's "angel-of- death" expression.]Hikaru: [black speech bubble] ...you'll be in for a kowa~~~i ME ni autte koto o ne~~~ frightening experience. scary experiencing matter (O)5Kyousuke: [running around the corner] Kuru... kuru...6[Hikaru's/Kurumi's pov of both Kyousuke and Manami as they stop and stare.]Kyousuke: mi... mi...7[Kyousuke facial portrait--he sees something surprising.]---------------------------------------------------p 31 (29)1[It's Madoka, with eyes closed, leaning back against the wall, puffing on a cigarette.]Madoka: Hikaru, we have more guests. hikaru~~ mata o-KYAKU-san da yo-- again (hon)-guest-(hon) beKurumi: [smiling in relief at Kyousuke] Oh! a2Kyousuke: Wh-what...?! a...aree~~~~?!3[Madoka opens her eyes wide and drops her cigarette as she realizes who it is.]4Kyousuke: Y-you're the one who gave ki...kimi wa tashika kinou no... me... you (T) certainly yesterday'sKurumi: [racing to Kyousuke with arms outflung] Oniichaaan! oNIIcha--n5[Kyousuke profile--he visualizes Madoka back in panel 12-5.]Madoka flashback: You're kidding! There uso-- 99-DAN shika nai hazu yo! should only be 99! lie steps should-only-beKyousuke: ...the hat yesterday. BOUSHI o kureta...... hat (O) gave---------------------------------------------------p 32 (30)1[Madoka facial portrait--shock...]2[...and she drops her gaze with a stern look...]3[When she looks up her features are composed.]Madoka: So... You come to this ......soo anta kono GAKKOU ni school... like-that/so you to-this-school kita no... came4Hikaru: [walking up to them] _____ Eh? Whaaat? Ayukawa-san, is e-- nani--- AYUKAWA-san no dachi? he your friend? what 's friend5Madoka: No... iya......6[Panels 6 and 7 are a pair--Madoka on the right, Kyousuke on the left. They face each other.]Madoka: [sternly] I wouldn't know a guy like shiranai yo... konna yatsu! this! not-come-to-know this-kind-of-guy7Kyousuke: ! !narration: ...Ayukawa?! .....AYUKAWA?!---------------------------------------------------p 33 (31)1[Kyousuke stands in shock, and visualizes 2 more flashbacks.]Matsuoka-sensei flashback: That's Ayukawa-kun's seat. soko wa AYUKAWA-kun no SEKI da--- that-place (T) 's seat benarration: Ayukawa... Oh yeah! AYUKAWA......a sou ka!narration: Ayukawa Madoka. That seat AYUKAWA madoka ano SEKI ka no was hers!! that-seat 's ONNA no datta no ka!! girl 's wasKomatsu flashback: Ohh, it's that delinquent, a---- ano FURYOU AYUKAWA madoka daro Ayukawa Madoka. that-delinquent poss-be2[Madoka facial portrait--aloof.]3[She raises a pack to her lips to pull out a cigarette.]Madoka cigarette FX: ___ su_[Kyousuke is surprised.]Kyousuke heartbeat FX: _____ doki_4[Kyousuke shows his irritation.]Madoka cigarette FX: [off] _____ shubonarration: I'm not that serious a ore tte sonna ni majime guy... I (T) that-kind-of (IO) seriousness/ earnestness SHOUNEN ja nai kedo... boy/juvenile being-not but5Madoka smoking FX: ___ fu_narration: ...but I don't like this ko-- yu-- notte kind of stuff at all!! this-kind-of feeling-like-doing _____ yappari kirai da!! after-all hated/an-abhorrence be6[Kyousuke flashes with the Power.]---------------------------------------------------p 34 (32)1[Madoka stares wide-eyed at the tip of her cigarette as it goes out.]Madoka cigarette FX: _____ poro_2[She holds it between her fingers and examines it. Kyousuke whistles innocently.]3[She re-lights it.]Madoka cigarette FX: _____ shubo4[Kyousuke flashes again...]5[...and her lighter flame goes out.]Madoka lighter FX: ______ shu--_Hikaru: [wide-eyed] Huh! It went out again. are! mata KIeta huh again went-out/be-extinguished6[Kyousuke looks over at Manami, who looks on in surprise.]Kyousuke FX: ni_7Manami: O-oniichan, you shouldn't o...oNIIchan dame yo konna tokoro de use it in a place like this! no-good in-this-kind-of-place TSUKAtcha! (= TSUKAtte-wa "dame") shouldn't-be-usingKyousuke: [finger to lips] Shhh! shi---_8[Kyousuke turns his attention back to Madoka...]9[...and assumes a lecturing stance.]Kyousuke: ______ If you smoke cigarettes at IMA kara tabako nan-ka your age, you won't give from-now cigarettes somehow birth to healthy babies!! sutte-ru to JOUBU na AKA-chan if-be-smoking healthy babies Umenaku naru ze_!! result-in-not-giving-birth-to---------------------------------------------------p 35 (33)1[Madoka stands stunned and blushes.]2Hikaru: [livid] What? You jerk. Allll an da to-- kono yaro-- yo--shi right. you-jerk all-right Watch me have one! Unde yaro-- ja nai ka shall-give-birth-to-(favor-to-you) (?)3[Kyousuke closes his eyes, a satisfied smirk on his face...]narration: That should settle it! KImatta na!Kyousuke FX: ji---n FX-of-satisfactionbackground text: [repeated] I did it. yatta ne4[...that is soon wiped away with a...]Madoka hand FX: ______ batsu_5[Manami closes her eyes and cringes. Kurumi looks on in wide-eyed surprise.]6Madoka: [turning to leave] ____ That's not something you SHOTAIMEN no redi ni should be saying to a lady the-1st-meeting 's lady (IO) that you just met, kid! MUKA tte yu-- KOTOBA saying-face-to-face-with speech/remarks ______ ja nai ne bo--ya! boy/kid---------------------------------------------------p 36 (34)1[Overhead view looking down. Madoka walks off. Hikaru races to catch up. Kyousuke holds hand to injured cheek.]Hikaru: Oh, wait, Madoka-saaan! a matte yo madoka-sa---n oh wait2Kyousuke: K-kid?! bo bo~~ya?!Kurumi: [to Manami] Oniichan was a kid? oNIIchan te bo--ya datta no? "kid" wasManami: [nervous smile] Well, that girl... saa ne ojo--chan3[Kyousuke facial portrait--hand still to cheek, he looks into the distance. Presumably, still at Madoka as she walks off.]narration: Wha... na......4Kyousuke: (What kind of a girl is she?!) (nan chu-- KO da ittai?!) (= nan to yuu) girl be in-the-world how-to-put-it5 and 6[Exterior shot of the Kasuga apartment building.]---------------------------------------------------p 37 (35)1[Kyousuke in profile against a backdrop of the dusk sky. He wears the red straw hat.]2[View pans back to show him reclined on the floor, back against a pillow that rests against the wall. He looks out through the sliding glass door, past the balcony...]narration: The girl that gave me this kono BOUSHI o kureta no wa...... hat... this-hat (O) gave-me3[Various flashback pics of Madoka--At the 99.5 steps, smoking, slapping him.]4[Tight shot of Kyousuke shows the imprint of a hand on his cheek. He gazes up at the ceiling in unhappy thought.]narration: It was her... Wasn't it?! ano KO...... da yo na yappari...?! that-girl be after-allKyousuke cheek FX: ________ hirihiri---------------------------------------------------p ** (36)<**This page does not appear in the wideban version.>[Rather crudely drawn pic of Kyousuke. He sits almost cross-legged, except that his feet are together in front of him.]Title: ___________ Character Profile kyarakuta-- SHOUKAI character presentation/introductionKyousuke: Kasuga Kyousuke KASUGA KYOUSUKE Kouryou Junior High School, KOURYOU GAKUEN CHUUTOU -BU 3-NEN 3rd year. secondary-school section year I'm the eldest son in the HIkKOsu, TENKOU -REKI 7-KAI ESPer<*> Kasuga family, to-move change-school history-of times and hold the funny, yet sad experience of moving to yu-- okashiku mo and transferring schools say-that strange/ridiculous and 7 times. kawaiso-- na KEIKEN o motsu unfortunate experience (O) to-have/hold _i--esupi--_<*> IKKA (kanji = CHOU- NOURYOKU) a-family ESP super- ability KASUGA KE no CHOUNAN family 's eldest-son Physical ability? UNDOUSHINKEI? athletic-ability I guess I'm rather slow... kekko-- nibui hou ka mo... rather slow way it-might-be-that Personality? SEIKAKU, NINGENSEI? personality human-nature Well, I guess a little shy, maa nami no GE kurai but indecisive... well the-average 's low-class about ka na demo YUUJUUFUDAN na tokoro-ga I-wonder but indecisive but/while aru n da yo na~~~~ to-have (explan) Ayukawa Madoka? Hiyama AYUKAWA madoka? HIYAMA hikaru? Hikaru? You promised not to ask sore wa kikanai about that! that-(one) (T) not-ask YAKUSOKU desho--! promise poss-beFootnote at bottom of page: *Abbreviation for Extra- #Extra Sensory Perception# no RYAKU Sensory Perception 's abbreviation---------------------------------------------------